2nd
marina :3
marina :3
Thank you, hw!Hollow Wings wrote:
Insane
am i impatient to mod this even the mapset is still unfinished? lol
- 00:26:150 (11,1,2,3) - here, 11 to 1 have a small ds while the stream 123 after has a large ds, when testing it just confused me a bit to read this pattern(sudden stop to hit nearby slider, and a sudden high-ds stream after it). personally if u wanna keep the large ds stream, i think increase the ds between 11 and 1 is a good idea, of course it's urs to choose the compose~
The thing is that I only increased the DS by 0.1x for the triple. I did that more for presentation to avoid having overlaps. I redesigned the jump pattern before though, so that there's a larger gap between 11 and 1. Hopefully that sets the pace a little better.- 02:00:800 (10) - nc here and remove the nc at 02:01:550 (1) - ? thou following the vocal is still fine
I didn't change here, but it did make me realize I forgot to change my combo pace when the time signature changes at 01:25:850 (1) - so there you go, haha.Easy
- 01:42:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in an easy diff i think map should avoid bunch of 1/2 notes(over 4 notes) patterns like this, maybe change this by some sliders insteading some of these notes
- 02:01:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
I wanted to provide a little bit of a spike in difficulty in this, and the chorus is the perfect time to do that sort of thing. These are 1/1s btw, not 1/2 q: Also using sliders would take away from the power of the rising phrase, imo. I feel it is fair- 02:10:250 (1,2) - 1's head is a bit closed to 2's track, maybe larger the distance
Made a tiny adjustment
Yes. q:
good luck!
thanks for your mod~Hollow Wings wrote:
KSHR's Normal
- 01:11:450 (5,1) - just don't think composing tiny overlap like this is a good idea, maybe overlap more or just spread them while keeping ds just like u did at 02:10:250 (3,4) - which is good to me
players can see the sliderslide clearly, so it looks like there is no problem with this overlap to be honest. I'll consider rearranging this pattern if other modders point out the same thing as well. let me keep this for now anyway.- 01:52:250 (4,5) - maybe blanket? moved (5) leftward by 1 grid (with grid lv3) for that.
- 02:00:050 (4,1) - ^ curved (1) more
- other works r really good to me
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Title:Towa yori Towa ni
TitleUnicode:永久より永遠に
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Source:少女神域∽少女天獄 -The Garden of Fifth Zoa-
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Thanks!Raiku wrote:
[Easy]
00:41:450 (2) - I personally feel that general flow can be aided in this section by adjusting the rotation of this slider slightly so the tail exits into the start of the next slider. I feel like this because it is mid-combo and there is more necessity for it to flow into a larger slider than from a note. More emphasis on the top. Here is the rotation settings (http://puu.sh/77DCe.png), also (http://puu.sh/77DTa.jpg).
00:44:150 (4) - I felt similar with this slider as you are still continuing the combo, I recommend rotating it to 35 degrees (http://puu.sh/77E1x.png), as it forms a slight visually pleasing blanket but also allows the head of the slider to flow out of the
previous one a little better ( http://puu.sh/77Ea8.jpg).
00:55:250 (1) - I suggest moving this note down a little to follow the curve of the sliders that sandwich it a little better. I do see what you were doing however, as it IS a new combo and not so important. I do feel it flows better for beginners though (http://puu.sh/77EuS.jpg).
01:14:450 (1) - How do you feel about sorting this overlap by slightly adjusting the last point in the slider to the right a little? This will also help this slider flow into the next note smoother too (http://puu.sh/77EJd.jpg).
01:18:050 (4,5,1) - I know you are going for perfect middle symmetry here, but here's my suggestion on how to bring unison to the whole combo. Simply highlight these notes, and move them down until 4 is in the center of its 2 sliders (http://puu.sh/77EUo.jpg). The flow from note 1 of the next combo into note 2 is still unaffected.
01:40:250 (6) - I felt that this note could be angled exactly in line with the exit of its previous slider for better flow. I don't think by doing this you are affecting distance problems with the timing into the next note despite it being an easy, however if you feel this is the case, you can adjust the position of slider 7, which won't affect flow or manageability in the transition from this combo into the next (http://puu.sh/77Fo4.jpg). What I have also done in this image is given a suggestion as to how to position the next slider to fit in with the distance snap whilst maintaining flow.
02:10:250 (1) - I recommend neatening this blanket so that the curve of both sliders fit in with each other neater, what I did was rotate this slider on the selection center at 11 degrees (http://puu.sh/77FDP.png). In this example I also moved 02:09:050 (4) down a touch so that its tail stacks on the tail of slider 2 like so (http://puu.sh/77FPx.jpg).
I replied in IRC, but in general I took the gist of the mods and applied them in my own way. The only one I didn't apply was at 01:40.
[Insane]
I highly recommend OD9 with this diff. While I agree a higher OD will create more accuracy dynamics in the leaderboards, I do feel that many players will feel that this is too much of a liberty. I also feel that a map with this flow will feel hindered when the average player goes to tackle these jumps and has to focus on the 100s, but then again this IS a rhythm game.
I'm considering changing to Extra, but we will see how Cilvery's Insane turns out after she posts some fixes. To me, I feel that this kind of OD should be more standardized for harder Insanes like this (even if it isn't actually that hard). With the speed and intensity of the song, I don't think people will be concentrating too hard just to get 300s. They'll come naturally.
Maybe consider naming this an Extra if you plan to keep the OD.
Uncheck letterbox during breaks because its cutting out the chick on the right in my screen and breaks are a time to enjoy the background. There aren't any breaks though D:
00:23:150 (5) - I felt by moving this note up, you are creating a better transition from sliders into jumps. You are also preventing an overlap with this note and the tail slider 1 of the next combo (http://puu.sh/77G4J.jpg).
I'm actually going for a much more curved flow with this. Maybe people won't play it like that, but it's how I interpret these higher-velocity settings. So imagine an arc instead of a straight line to the next hit object and you'll see how it forms a nice loop into the 6 7 8 curve.
00:48:950 (2) - I feel that a less acute curve at the head of this slider would provide less of an impact on the rather smooth vocal section. I would probably agree with how you curved this slider if her voice was a little more pitch-changing at this stage but its too quiet in my opinion
to impact the flow as such (http://puu.sh/77Gxo.jpg).
Yeah, I don't know what I was thinking. Probably trying to fit it with the previous kinked slider. Just changed to a normal curve.
00:52:700 (7) - Consider this placement of this note as a flow alternative out of the very linear sliders that preceded it. I feel it adds variety to the flow which I felt could have been done there (http://puu.sh/77H15.jpg).
I didn't want to jump to such a high distance snap so suddenly at that point. I kept it low to transition into the sets of 3 hit jumps to get the velocity going, then move the DS higher at 00:54:050 (1) - since the pace is thus reset.
00:54:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I felt that some anti-flow was welcome at this breakdown but seeing as it is a little conflicting, I am going to provide 2 alternatives to a pattern sequence that I felt was lacking some excitement to match the drums:
1. Anti-flow pattern where each triple bends outward from each other (http://puu.sh/77Hiy.jpg).
2. Flowy, symmetrical looking pattern that flows nicely into the next phrase (http://puu.sh/77HrO.jpg).
This section has been tricky ever since I first made it. Initially I had something like your first suggestion since it was such a powerful part, but it just ended up playing too poorly. I opted for the circular flow currently with one kick for the final piece leading into the red combo. The final curve also acts as a long arc like I described from the first modded item for this map.
01:13:175 (4,5) - Possibly an option I was pondering was to space these out like the part at the start of the map. The reason I suggest this is because the drums have a sharp abrupt feel to them which I felt those 2 notes could benefit from. Spaced at the slider to cursor speed of course: (http://puu.sh/77HH4.jpg).
Hm, alright.
Everything from kiai onwards had the perfect mix of flow and intended anti flow and I personally felt was mapped masterfully. I back this for ranking and starred.
南無Muya wrote:
[Melo's Hard]
01:31:100 (2) - (1)のsliderfollowcircleに合わせるような形にすると綺麗かもしれません http://puu.sh/78DbJ.jpg
直した
[Insane]
01:12:950 (3,4,5) - 意図的で無いのならスペーシングは統一した方がいいと思います
前のModからもう直したと思う・・・ 今はどう?
[Easy]
01:29:450 (1,3,2) - 重ならないように、最低限(1,3)の重複は直して欲しい
Fade inとFade outの時間は多分Overlapは大丈夫かも。
健闘を祈る
ありがとうよ!Satellite wrote:
Hi ~ > ω <
=^> ω <^=
[Easy]
- AR+1 ? bpmが高いので、AR3が合うと思います。
fm,AR4が早すぎる感じけど・・・他のSuggestionで変えるかも- 00:27:500 (2) - Humm..もっと、曲に合うようにしてみませんか?
変の音けど D: この時間に中々Undermapしたいだから、今はいいかも- 01:00:350 (2) - Naziです。GridSize:Tinyで1grid upするとDSとBlanketが綺麗になります。
はい~- 01:21:650 (4) - 手前からの流れを考えると c t r l + gが綺麗?
説明日本語で難しいごめん。This part was difficult for me to make simply because of the direction of the flow. I ended up with the counter flow slider as a result. I found that starting a counter flow that moves into the next combo smoothly played a lot better than having the counter flow going directly into the new combo.- 01:35:675 - 使ってない green line ? remove ?
おっけ- 01:51:050 (1) - Awesome Slider.
(^^ゞ- 02:18:950 - 02:19:025 - 02:19:475 - same as 01:35:675 - here.
Removed two - need to keep the one to turn kiai off
Avishay wrote:
[KSHR's Normal]
01:05:450 (1,4) - Stack them properly kk
Muya wrote:
[KSHR's Normal]
00:39:650 (2,3,4,5) - このような配置のほうが綺麗だと思います http://puu.sh/78ELv.jpg fixed!これに合わせてその後の00:41:450 (1,2,3,1) - のパターンもいじりました
Thanks for modding~!Satellite wrote:
[KSHR's Normal]
- 01:06:950 (4) - このスタックは少し危険(?) x404 y136あたりに持ってくるのはどうですか? ギリギリ見えそうかなーっていうのと、個人的に次の(5)でボーカルの「奥深く」に合わせて流れを下から上に持っていきたいから、一度保留で様子見をして何度も指摘を受けるようであれば・・っていう形にさせてください!
- 01:08:450 (1) - 音に合わせると後ろのほうで曲げたほうが合ってそう。 んー、01:08:600 - にも音があるし今の方が合ってると思ったからこのままで
- 01:09:950 (2) - 01:09:950 - ここにも音はあるんだけど、フォローしないほうが良さそう?・・・・ん?
- 01:48:350 (4,5) - ただの配置の提案です。おっけ~
- 02:17:450 (1,2,3,4) - Easyと同じ音取りよりHardと同じ音取りにしてバランスを整えたほうが良さそう(?) 実はこれ、Normalのが先に完成したんです・・! ていうのどうでもいいから置いておいて、fixed(ちょっと怒られそうな配置にしてみた)
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見辛いヂッフでごめんなさい。ありがとうございます。JUDYDANNY wrote:
Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue (TKSalt posted)
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is storong suggestion.
[General]
- widescreen support(ry
http://puu.sh/728Ot.png[Oni]
notes777維持とのことでしたのでadd とdeleteとそれ以外と項目別にしました。
もし見にくかったらごめんなさい><
add
- 00:27:875 - add d ギターのロングトーンを意識するならaddがしっくりくると思いました。 - たしかに
- 01:11:900 (12) – add note ? - バスの音だけでとどめたいです
delete- 00:40:700 – delete + 00:40:550 – k? やはりdkdで少しブレーキがかかってる気がします。 - ピアノの音しか聞こえないのでこのままにします。
- 00:19:250 (13) – delete? - ok
Change color&move- 01:08:600 (3) - k ?
ボーカルなら01:08:150 (1,2,3,4) –kdkd=>01:09:050 (2,3,4,5) – kdkk ….
リズムならkdkd=> 01:08:750 (1,2,3,4) - dkdk的で、どちらにもfitする気がしました。 - たしかに。でもdddから01:09:050 (311,312,313,314,315) - のギター音に入る感じが好きなのでそのままにします。- 01:34:475 – move1/2 left? kkd~~~ ddk~~ 連打で始まるパターンの統一で勢い付いていい感じ? - 1/2で左ってどこに動かせばいいんだ…
- 02:12:050 – d? かかなり迷いましたが、dでいいと思います。1/1~k k k kはここで用いるのにもかなり苦しい… - 元々dです
02:12:650 – のkと同色リンクさせている意図だと思って話を進めますが、02:10:550 (2,3,4) – kddとkからの1/2ストリームでリズムを刻ませているので既にプレイヤーには kの意識がある程度ついてると思うので、リンクに縛られるほどの必要性を感じませんでした。[Muzukashii]以上です! Editで見ていてコンボ数調整ってすごく大変そうでした;;; 頑張ってください!>w</
- 02:11:600 (6) – move => 02:11:000 (4) - …で1度目と同一のリズムでいいと思います。この緩急はあまりfitしてないように感じました、、というよりは緩急がつきすぎてしまってる気がしました。02:15:050 (27,28,29) – こちらで1/1を使っているので同一にする必要も薄いかと. - バスの音が強いのでこっちにしました02:10:700 -
- 00:30:800 (98,99,100,101) – ddd k => d kkk この辺だけ聞いたらリズムに違和感が;; - 別の綺麗な音取りに変えました。
- 01:12:950 (124) – k? - ここのスネアを強調させたいのでこのままで 01:13:100 (125,126,127) -
- 01:49:400 (285,286) – swap? とかどうでしょうか。 - ok
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through
Good Luck!
thanks for mod!qoot8123 wrote:
Hi Taiko mod :3
Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion
[General]
- 01:35:750 - ~ End you can add spinner on 01:35:750 - and use some speed change to make this map more exciting
[ Muzukashii]
- 02:04:850 (367) - remove and 02:05:225 (369) - remove , since the vocal on 02:04:850 - has a break - deleted 02:05:225 (369)
[ Oni]That's all from me
- 00:12:050 (10,203,205,207,211) - as muzu, remove? - ?
Good Luck~
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TitleUnicode:永久より永遠に
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Version:TK'S Muzukashii
Source:少女神域∽少女天獄 -The Garden of Fifth Zoa-
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Kodora wrote:
As requested
[General]
- normal-hitfinish2.mp3 is too loud & sounds too long, which was bothering me while playing. Can you please make it a bit more quiet and shorten if possible? Nooo that's the point! It's loud and awesome and stuff!
- Easy, KSHR's Normal & Melo's Hard have different combo-colours, any reasons for that? Ah whoops, I lightened the colors in Extra and forgot to apply it to the rest.
- Disable Letterboxes during breaks in all standard diffs - they doesn't looks well with this bg None of the standard diffs have breaks...
[Expert]Good map. Also, i was have no any problems with OD10 while playing - there are only few 1/4 notes and HP Drain is generous enough to allow people keep playing even if they will get several 100's. Please keep it
- 00:26:450 (1,2,3) - These spaced 1/4 notes works kinda too crues, especially with this OD - how about reduse spacing here to x0.6? This will made this part much easier to catch in first attempt I don't see it as much of an issue. I increased the spacing a little bit to reduce overlapping, but from the test plays that I have seen, people read them as 1/4 just fine.
- 00:27:500 (6,8) - Hmm, this overlap isn't looks good, maybe better keep (6) regularly curved? It's not overlapped though! I scooted it back a tiny bit anyway.
- 00:28:100 (8,1) - Being a bit nazi but please improve this slider blanket It originally was a blanket, but the flow of the outside sliders was too horrible with the one nipple on the outside so I widened things up.
- 00:30:200 (6) - NC follow pattern & follow new part in music? Nah, keeping with the 2 measures.
- 01:00:650 (4,5) - Not sure if this flows well, honestly looks a bit messy. Bleh. The sad thing is this is about how I had it before, but it was changed for a mod. I think I'll just revert back to how it was.
- 01:51:350 (4) - Eh, this slider have one big problem - it is very easy to misread beginning of this slider. Try to move slider head a bit down, this will work much more intuitive & will madfe this slider easier to catch. I tried to improve slider snape, here is screen & code:
I've tweaked this slider sooooo many times hahaha. The problem with your proposition is that it introduces some unnecessary overlap. I tried to widen it a little bit more, but it keeps screwing up the smoothness of the red anchor at 01:51:650 - . So far I haven't had any complaints beyond yours for this iteration of the slider, and I haven't seen test players screw up at all on it (as opposed to other versions where they'd mess up 90% of the time D: )- 02:11:450 (5,6) - Looks like old catmulls, maybe keep them regularly curved instead? Or you can try something like this - i know, you love such sliders
I like having the weak curves on this instead of the sharper hooked angle, sorry. The funny thing is that you missed the real catmull slider in this map. Can you find it?- 02:17:900 (3) - Looks like continuation of 1/2 jump section, what can be too evil; trap, especially in the near ending :< Adding some New Combos at 02:17:900 (3) - 02:18:350 (5) - 02:18:800 (7) - can could easily solve this problem.
I refuse to add new combos to make a pattern read better. That said, I'm not exactly sure what you mean. You're saying that the stack of two 1/2s and jumping to another stack of 1/2's feels like it's a 1/1 jump instead of a 1/2 jump? I was hoping that the jumpy symmetry sliders would convey that rhythm would be continuing while introducing something a little spicier to keep the play interesting going into the finale. Do yo uhave any suggestions beyond new combos?
Thanks!
[Easy]
*Raise AR by 1 tick for better difficulty spread & to improve readability also if you will raise AR OD +1 could work well too
I've already raised them both once. It's good where it's at.Thanks Kodora!
- 01:42:650 (2,3,4,5) - Kinda intense section for easiest diff. Would highly recommend to replace with two 1/1 sliders to make it more beginner-friendly.
- 02:01:550 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here - two 1/1 sliders should works better imo.
It's the kiai section. I want to ramp up the difficulty a bit.- 02:06:050 - Feels kinda empty, how about add note here?
There isn't really a strong beat there. I'd rather not.- 02:17:450 (1,2,3,4) - Try to replace them with two 3/2 sliders - currently this section feels a bit weird, and replacing notes with sliders here will make rhythm here easier to catch.
And as the finale, I wanted another spike in difficulty. I think this is fair with the larger spacing so it communicates that there's a different rhythm coming up.
Kodora wrote:
[Melo's Hard]
*You can silence sliderticks during calm sections as Garven did at his diff - they sounds a bit too busy currently I don't like it. :3Good job Melo-nyan <3
- 00:56:750 (2,3,4) - Quite tricky stacking, also might be too hard for regular Hard diff. I'd recommend you stack 00:57:500 (4) - with head of 00:57:650 (1) - to make it easier to catch It's no longer a regular hard due to it's speed.
- 01:44:750 (1,2,3) - Ew, really might be too cruel jump for a Hard diff - try to stack 01:44:900 (2) - with head of 01:43:850 (1) - you will still have nice jumpy pattern, just less cruel one :p Okay!
- 01:48:650 (1) - Add hitfinish to head to emphazire vocals? hmm no.
- 02:13:850 (1,2,3) - <3
Thanks! http://puu.sh/7gRff.osuSatellite wrote:
[Melo's Hard]
- 00:29:150 (2,3) - 2から曲調的には伸びているから、そのままスライダーでフォローしたほうが自然(?)かも 区切った方がかっこいいかなって思います
- 00:47:750 (6) - ここのwhistleはいらないと思います。ないとちょっと寂しい・・・
- 01:12:950 (3,4) - こんな音取りのほうが合うかもしれません、一度試してみてください。単発でドーンってした方が気持ちいいかなーと思ってこんな感じです(この難易度で連打は置いてないので)
- 01:44:900 (2) - x2.2のジャンプは大きいので1と2を調整してこんな感じにしてみませんか? ほい
- 01:50:450 (1) - remove Nc? 確かに今のままだとコンボが短くて変だったので周辺のNCも併せて調整して対応しました
- 02:19:250 (1) - 流れを考えると ctrl + hしたほうが綺麗だと思います。ほい
Where? D:Garven wrote:
The funny thing is that you missed the real catmull slider in this map. Can you find it?
thanks for modAvishay wrote:
[Clivery's Insane]
00:26:750 (2, 3) - This is barely readable at all, maybe lift 3 a bit more down? So people will be actually able to tell what is going on there fixed
00:41:150 (1,2) - The spacing here is annoying, either make it bigger, or simply stack them. (00:44:150 (3,4) - or 00:42:950 (7,1) - for example)
01:14:150 (2) - NC? fixed
01:24:050 (3) - Isn't the SV change is too extreme? It is good that it gets slower, but I think it is a bit too much
01:35:150 (1,2) - I think CTRL + G for each one of them will make a more interesting pattern, it just changes the direction but it adds so much
むうやさんモッドあり!Muya wrote:
[Cilvery's Insane]
00:29:900 (1) - 00:30:200で終わる形にして、00:30:275にサークルを置く?
01:04:250 (1,2) - この遅いスライダーは01:04:175 (4,1) - のスペーシングとの差が強すぎるので違和感があると思います。なるべく早いスライダーにしたほうがいいのかもしれません
01:14:150 (2) - 01:14:450 (1) - に重ねてしまったほうがいいと思います fixed
01:42:650 (1,1) - 01:43:250 (1) - と同じように終点をsofthitsoundに fixed
02:15:050 (1) - 始点にfinish fixed
02:17:450 - これらは全てfinishがあったほうがいいと思います fixed. 下もすべて追加しました!
02:17:600 -
02:17:900 -
02:18:050 -
02:18:350 -
02:18:500 -
02:18:800 -
02:18:950 -
02:19:850 -
02:19:250 (1) - ここは音楽が無音で歌だけの部分なのでsofthitsoundが合ってると思います fixed
ノーチェンジで。ごめんなさいSatellite wrote:
[Cilvery's Insane]
- 00:30:950 (9,10,11,1) - 少しovermapな感じがしました、以下のような音取りはどうですか?
- 00:41:150 (1,2) - スペーシングが危険に感じます。00:41:450 (2) - これを 00:41:150 (1) - この上にスタックさせませんか?
- 00:41:450 (2) - add whistle. 試してみてください。
- 02:04:850 (1) - 非常に難しいと思います。手前の連打を1つsliderに変更してこのような感じはどうですか?
thanks for modKodora wrote:
[Cilvery's Insane]
- 00:31:325 (1) - End of spinner sounds kinda too quiet. Can you please up a bit volume here? fixed
- 00:36:875 (3) - Delete this note to follow music better? Triplet sounds kinda too heavy at such calm part. fixed
- 00:37:775 (7) - Same here
- 00:46:700 (4) - - I think there are should be soft-sampleset for this slidertick, isn't it?
- 00:47:600 (6) - Remove this note to mach vocals better
- 01:25:850 (6,1) - You can silence sliderticks at these sliders like Garven did at his diff - sounds better imo.
- 01:27:650 (3) - Add whistle to emphazire vocals here?
- 01:31:100 (8) - This slowdown feels a bit confusing here, how about make it a bit more faster? Something like x0.85 should works perfectly here.
- 01:42:650 (1,2) - Silence endpoints here - sounds better imo. Also, how about add finish to head at 01:42:650 (1) - ?
- 01:53:450 (1,2,3) - Ah, this antijump looks kinda too evil here and doesn't fit the music well imo :< Try to change this to jump or stack perfectly.
- 02:04:550 (5) - NC due to spacing change? fixed
- 02:08:600 (5,6) - There are tiny stacking issue here :p
- 02:17:450 (1,2,3) - Hmm, plays kinda weird. Try to re-arrange these sliders to follow 2 guitar notes here instead to improve playability.
Kodora wrote:
[KSHR's Normal]
*Raise HP Drain by 1 tick for better difficulty spread kk
- 00:27:050 (3,4) - Might be too hard to catch for Normal diff. Try something more simple, like following only drums:
It looks like it's not hard to catch, the current rhythm is following only drums. Also I tied your rhythm once, but the current one fits with the song better imo.- 00:28:700 (1,2) - Same can be applied here (also, this could help reduse star rating a bit)
^- 00:42:950 - I was expecting note here since you followed vocals before. Or maybe replace 00:42:650 (3) - with slider and end it at 00:42:950 -
I don't wanna objects as much as possible since this's the quiet part. Also I didn't mean to follow the vocal here. (Respected the piano)- 01:06:050 (2,3,4) - Kinda weird to follow. Haw about replace this with 3/2 reverse-slider to follow vocals closely?
It sounds these notes are following the vocal enough to me.- 01:38:450 (4,1) - I would highly recommend avoid such overlaps in lowest diffs - it looks confusing and might works bad for beginners. It is readable, but confusing :<
I would avoid overlaps like this if this mad didn't have the Easy difficulty.- 01:40:850 (5) - Looks bad, try something like this for better flow:
It looks like this has the flow similar to the current one.. Well there is a drum sound at 01:41:150 - , so the red way-point should have been made there. Fixed.
Good diff :3 :3
DakeDekaane wrote:
[KSHR's Normal]
01:32:450 (3) - I think this would play better being a 1/1 slider as it'd be following better the drums. Agree. Fixed.
01:38:450 (4,1) - I'd suggest to use first the 1/1 slider and then the 3/2, this way the player hits along with the strong vocals, it'd be more natural imo. Sounds good.
01:48:650 (5) - This sounds a bit crazy due the speed of the map so feel free to burn this suggestion, but a reverse more in this slider would feel awesome for vocals. Hmmm..yea, no change lol
01:55:250 (3) - Same as the first suggestion, a 1/1 slider would play better. Same as the first suggestion.
02:10:250 (3,4,5,6) - Just a comment, no need to change anything, just pointing this part felt a bit weird due the guitar being more intense. Keep for now.
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mod arigatou gozaimasu m(_ _)mDakeDekaane wrote:
Hi~
Mod as requested by Garven.
Not much to say here, the diffs are really nice (as expected from TK-sama), just a few suggestions :3
[Muzu]
00:25:100 (67,68) - Move (68)1/2 beat forward as a don and change (67) for a kat (The result will be a kkdk dk). This way you'd emphasize better the viola-like? instrument, and the dk would fit nicely with drums. In addition, you can make 00:23:450 (58,59,60,61) a kddk pattern so the last pattern stands out more. - fixed.
00:27:650 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - Move (80) 1/2 beat forward and do something like this. The actual place of (80) feels a bit weird as the drums aren't strong in the downbeat. - sounds good.
00:32:300 - Maybe add a don here? It'd match with the next ddd in 00:33:350. - kept. i want to keep 555 combos lol
01:15:050 (131) - I think this would be better 1/2 forward, matching with the actual drums. - true. but i like a current pattern ;_;
01:50:300 (291) - Maybe move this 1/2 beat forward? I think it'd feel better with vocals. - already.
02:04:850 (368) - ^ - fixed.
[Oni]
00:25:100 (86,87) - Inverse these two notes (d k - k d), so you keep the kat on the viola-like? instrument. - nice :3c
00:51:650 (206) - Maybe use a kat here? The change in the music doesn't feel good with all these being dons imo. - try it.
01:15:050 (343) - Maybe move this 1/2 forward to follow drums? If you do, maybe add a note more in 01:15:800, it feels good to keep the drums. - uuuuuun i want to keep basic 1/1 rhythm.
Took the freedom to look at the osu! difficulties too, and I got some suggestions for them, feel free to follow or reject this part.
I hope this helps too. Good luck everyone /o/
Edit: I forgot to say to make letterboxing consistent in all diffs, in other words, remove them from osu! difficulties.
thanks for mod~DakeDekaane wrote:
[Cilvery's Insane]
00:29:900 - The rhythm here is weird, mostly due the slider ending in a blue tick when it doesn't correspond, try something like this, feels definitely better.
00:36:800 (2,3,7) - Kodora already adressed it but this part is definitely overmapped, just deleting these objects would make this part feel better. (2) may be optional to delete here if you don't want.
00:41:150 (1,2,3) - Spacing here may be a bit misleading as (2,3) is 1/2, but has near 3 times the spacing of (1,2), which is 1/1. You could try something like this or something that fits better your style if you decide to change. changed
00:58:700 (6) - This would be better as a 1/2 slider, it'd match better with the drum hit in 00:58:850.
01:18:050 (1,2,3,4) - This would feel nice if all 4 had the same length.
01:23:900 (2) - You could remove the finish here, it's a bit noisy imo. In addition, you could add a whistle in the start of 01:24:050 (3). fixed
01:31:100 (8) - This would be better ending in 01:31:400.
01:42:650 (1,2) - This ones would play better being 1/2 sliders.
01:46:250 (1) - ^
arigatou gozaimasu m(_ _)mTasha wrote:
So I came here expecting to mod something taiko related. I was pleasantly surprised and didn't have to mod anything because both the Muzukashii and Oni are both pretty much perfect, so here's a present before I leave!