1. Marathon (5,33 stars, 4929 notes)

#1 by Bonsai
#2 by jonathanlfj

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Foreverends wrote:

need collab!

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

yay

Spectator wrote:

good luck to you <.<

Stefan wrote:

You mapped the whole song by yourself? (ﾟДﾟ).............

Blue Dragon wrote:

This.

Is.

Amazing.


Good job. Call me for this map whenever you need.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Whoa, I can't promise a mod because my toaster dies with long maps, but take some support in star shape for now, the only thing I have to complain is about the usage of 3/4 sliders when they don't correspond, but overall a nice work /o/

Groumiezi wrote:

holy shit

good mapper

wow

mapping in 25+ minutes

even 2014 mapper more shitty gg

kenterz9 is not lazy

woooowww

good luck >.>

Winek wrote:

Time for mod~
Sorry i got delayed by Crual Dap ;; Also, i prefered modding this approval map. The other map is like so ready for ranking, but you ain't got a mod here, so i'll mod this one.
(Yes, I'm modding the entire thingy.) OMG Thanks \:D/

J'ai oublié de moddé en français, désolé xD
[General]
Add in source "Pokemon" at least other modder won't suck you for this. Done
Add some tags, like idk, pikachu, remix or whatever you want. Also done

[Marathon]
Le HP Drain rate devrais être entre 4-5 due à la grande longeur de la map. 5 is good =3
Quelque suggestion inutile pour toi ;>
00:14:814 - Pourquoi ne pas ajouter une note ici? Je crois bien que l'on entend quelque chose ici ~ Pourquoi ne pas la placer dessous la queue de 00:14:577 (3) ? Je l'ai mise sur la tête de (4)
00:16:787 (2,3) - Here, it's around the same suggestion as upward. We clearly here 3 sound right? The sounds are at 00:16:945 , 00:17:024 and 00:17:103 . Actually the first beat isn't covered by any notes, so what about reducing the first slider and adding a note in the middle? Done =D
00:20:419 (2,4,2) - Actually sounds kind of weird. Place something else instead, like circles then 1/2 sliders? it's actaully because they start on red ticks. Done
00:30:366 (1,2) - Hehe, nazi. They kind of overlap, nu? :3 Yay xD Done
00:57:998 - You let a pause here, so why don't you let a blank space at 01:00:208 as well? constant thingy is important you know.Wynaut =D
02:01:629 (4,5) - I have an idea since the actual sounds a bit weird. http://puu.sh/7hXV3/3325e7af9e.jpg Just add a reverse arrow to the first slider, remove the 2nd one, and add a circle wherever you'd like, maybe stacked? Excellent idea =D
02:33:366 (3) - Yes, again, this note sounds weird. Refer to my other mod about the slider sounding weird because starting on red tick. Done
02:48:524 (4) - Would sounds much better as a simple 1/2 slider. Done
02:49:471 (2) - Refer to slider starting on a red tick. Done
03:25:314 (3) - Would be more preferable as a 1/2 sliders, you know. I made the 1/2 slider and added a circle in the blue tick after this slider =p
03:39:682 (6) - Try a better placement for this note? Kinda break the flow, you know. ( I hope i didn't move it accidentaly. ) Done x3
06:06:840 (3,4,5) - This part again feels weird and kinda overmapped, reveiw it. That's what I was thinking =3
06:11:261 (6) - If it was me i'd remove the finish. Done
07:06:690 (3,4) - Try blanket those two notes to make prettier and avoid overlap? Same stuff for 07:06:690 (3,4,1,3) .Done (I think xD)
07:22:547 (4) - What about mmoving it around 1 or 2 grid up? It would avoid the overlap and makes it prettier.Good Idea =D
07:31:976 (5) - The shape is weird. What about changing it? Done
08:00:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don,t really see the use of 1/4 here, it doesn't suit well. It follows the music
08:07:547 (1,2) - Let me suggest you this: http://puu.sh/7hZQq/a81ee14df9.jpg I think it suits better. May i have the same suggestion to similar parts like 08:10:976 ?Done
08:13:547 (3,4) - Overlap isn't very pretty. What about reviewing it to make it more appealing? But there's no overlap ? O_o
08:13:654 (4,5) - It's kinda blanket fail, no? Btw yes xD
08:12:690 (1) - From this note: Check all the following notes. They seems to be note snapped correctly, i think. Oh I didn't see that =3
08:32:404 (3) - What about reducing this note of 1/4 tick to make it sound better? I don't see what you mean... Done I think ? xD
08:36:690 (1,2,3) - I'll swear this part just feels weird Done
09:05:833 (1) - It's kinda bezier. Done
11:42:490 (1) - Try this shape http://puu.sh/7iqr4/7f10125a55.jpg I like your skin... Anyway, Done xD
11:51:290 (3,4) - Shouldn't this part be a slider a bit like 11:44:890 (4)? Match more the little "cry" we hear. Done but the curve of the slider is different
11:58:490 (1) - `The 1/4 doesn't match very well, what about 1/2? Wynaut =D
12:03:690 (2) - Maybe change shape, and even maybe convert to a 1/2. 'bout the same suggestion as upper. I think you should review the entire beatmap to see if there are anymore shape like these, you should change, yes. Done
13:06:490 (5) - In this little stream, this slider fits kinda bad, suggest you convert into stream or short 1/4 sliders. Done
14:10:063 (3) - That's kinda bezier, don't you think? Try a simple curve? Okay =p
14:13:396 (1) - I really think you should change that shape >< I changed it a little but, but I think it's not necessary, and also I love these kind of shape xD
14:39:396 (3) - Same comment about bezier. I think you should review your beatmap cause i don't want to list them, (It can be quite insulting.) Try spotting bizarre shape and changing them to something else, simple curves, or even straight.
16:14:453 (1) - What about doing a 1/1 slider? Think it'll fit more the current rythm. Same as above, I'm sorry but I don't want to remove them ='(
17:11:303 (3) - Think it would fits better as a 1/1. There's something in the music, that's why it's a 1/2 slider =3
17:11:303 (3,4,5) - Try blanketing these two notes? Done
21:00:431 (2,3) - Better blanket, maybe, that avoid overlap? :3 But... okay, Done xD
21:33:431 (5) - What about maybe.. Add a finish at the reverse arrow? The note feels too silencious. Great Idea =D
21:35:098 (3) - The clap here feels weird, it's not constant, and it was a mistake right? >< No, it's not a mistake xD I seems like this part : 21:13:098
22:49:264 (2,3,4,5,6) - Think here you should have a constant 1/4 rythm to fits more the (drum) (?) Done =D
24:15:194 (3) - I'm not sure about this slider! Is it acceptable? >< I think yes... If not, I'll see with a BAT, but for the moment, I leave it =3
24:42:527 (6) - You should NC this note, like you did NC these two: 24:43:861 (1) and 24:45:194 (1) .

I'm done! I took around 4 hours to mod that. I'm sorry if my mod looks short or unuseful.
Hopes i helped you anyway Yes =D
Totally approve of this beatmap. Bat, Approve this please! YAAAAAY (btw I need more mods xD)

Aldwych wrote:

Nice job Kenterz!
Gl for approval

Groumiezi wrote:

I sure on the 240 BPM Part is composed by t+pazolite, i don't know why

add it? =D

Edit : DAT TRAP AT 240 BPM shit

neonat wrote:

01:56:498 (2) - I think this note is not really necessary here, I think you should remove it
03:13:156 (6) - bring it closer to 03:13:314 (1)
04:11:340 - stream continues here
05:13:945 - you left out the note here
06:10:945end the slider here and add a note at 06:11:024
06:52:119 (1,2) - merge them to be one longer slider from 06:52:119 to 06:52:440 - I think this fits better as a starting for this part of the song, to allow people to get the feel of the new rhythm, so they can do the rest easily
07:04:654 (2,3) - swap positions, slider before circle
07:14:940 (2,3) - ^ because I feel the circle in front feels like an extra beat, but by switching, it sounds more natural
07:18:369 (2,3) - ^
07:46:011 (4) - start only at 07:46:119 instead, it is starting too early now, compared to the music
08:44:833 (4) - have this slider repeat once I added a circle
12:43:390 (1,2) - replace this with 2 circles at 12:43:490 and 12:43:590 and move 12:43:790 (3) - to start at 12:43:690 so that there is a gap at 12:43:990 I don't think it's fine with the timing. Maybe you should look at the original music (here =3) because it's stream from 12:43:990 to 12:44:590 (same for all propositions below)
12:44:490 (8) - remove and move 12:44:590 (9) - to start at 12:44:490
12:45:090 (2) - remove one repeat and start 12:45:390 (3) - at 12:45:290
12:46:190 (9) - ^ start the slider on the white line, remove the circle
12:46:990 (5) - ^
12:47:790 (9) - ^
12:48:590 (5) - ^
12:49:390 (10) - ^
12:50:190 (2) - ^ This is starting the focus point 1/4 beat too late. It doesn't fit into it
12:50:990 (4) - ^ either swap their places if you want to keep the continuous stream or remove one circle. But for all, ensure slider starts on the white line
12:51:790 (6) - ^
12:53:390 (5) - slider starts on white line
12:54:190 (9) - ^
19:07:203 (3) - remove and add a note at 19:07:203 and move 19:07:453 (1) - to start at 19:07:328 and end at 19:07:578 and add a note at 19:07:703 I made a 1/2 slider with a reverse because I want to have the clap hitsound ^w^
25:44:861 (10) - object end is not snapped

The starting has many jumps/big spacing between 1//4 beat objects, which make it very easy to break combo, you might want to reduce that amount, or shorten the spacing for some. I don't know... It's "easy" to make 2000 combo from 06:52:119... I think it's not a huge problem if I let them (It's not because I'm lazy x3)

Tsukuyomi wrote:

because map is too long, i can't point out all problems
so i just point out some examples and you need to find similar problems yourself

00:36:050 (3,4) - this is 1/4,but 00:36:366 (5,1) - is 1/2, it's really confusing because they have similar spacing, which you should avoid in the whole map
plz increase the spacing of 00:36:366 (5,1) -, till people can easily know which is 1/4 jump

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00:57:682 (5) - it is kinda umcomfortable, i think 2 notes here is better, empty after a slider in such a tight-rhythm song is not very good, because people need not to hit the end of the slider, so peoople will feel an empty of 1/1 after a slider will be a bit longer than note when playing

01:00:682 (1) - move it far away is better because of the empty.but i think put stream 01:00:366 here fits the song better?

01:36:050 (1,2,3) - 6 notes here fit the music better,i prefer patter like this I changed the entire pattern

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03:20:261 (9,10) - increase spacing a bit ? make it easier to read I made it a little bit

04:25:629 (4,5) - increase spacing is better,finish here is loud,and try this flow,i think it is nice ^

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05:13:945 why not map here? Because it follows the music

05:20:577 (6) - no hit no fun I made a hit but not like your picture

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06:21:050 (5) - idk why you use this rhythm here,it is strange,a note at06:21:050 and a repeat at 06:21:208 is better

06:48:568 (1) - put it far away is more exciting

07:37:761 (6,8) - ctrl g fit the music better Yes, but it's too weird to play imo =/

07:39:476 add a note here? It doesn't fit the music =3

10:41:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - use notes to replace them is better I see no interest to make circle to replace slider here '-'

10:44:190 (6,7) - it is weak，use stream here

11:12:090 (1) - 11:37:690 rhythm is a mess imo,you should consider more about this part,music here is different from other parts obiviously I don't see why you think it's messy, it just fit the music xD

11:37:690 - 11:44:090 long stream patterns here is better imo But it doesn't fit the music =/

12:09:690 - 12:16:090 same here music here is especial，you should not use general patterns you used before,which is very boring and not fit. I consider this part as a pause, that's why it's boring x3

15:01:703 (1,2,1,2) - slider pattern is weak,use note pattern is better imo Why ? I think this patern isn't weak xD
http://puu.sh/7G3k5.zip

17:09:803 (2) - use 3/4 slider here and move 17:10:103 (3) - to 17:10:103 3/4 slider for this part is bad

18:29:953 (6) - you should NC here,it is too hard to read
and i think you'd better move 18:30:015 (2) - a bit away from 18:29:828 (5) - ,don't stack them perfectly I changed the patern

18:39:453 finish here is loud,if you put slider's head here it will be awesome,but slider's end here is awful I changed the volume for the slider's end (60%)

some parts lack of representability,and some rhythm problems consist in some parts
it can beimproved
good luck