Song sounds good. Inner seems to be nice. I might mod it later.
modありがとう!taiko_maniac1811 wrote:
M4M incoming :3Mod
- [Kantan]
- Nothing wrong with this diff, just looks hard for a kantan for me but still tolerable to play ww - well youre right. i changed some patterns.
[Futsuu]
- 00:02:258 (4) - move this to 00:02:070 ? plays better here imo
00:03:008 (5) - if above is done, move this to 00:02:633 ,flows better with the drums- 00:05:258 (10) - move this to 00:05:070 ? plays better here
00:06:008 (11) - if above is done, move this to 00:05:633 ,flows better with the drums - nice- 00:23:633 (53) - delete? have a little break here is nice, let the beginning part of the song be abit simple
- 00:35:633 (86) - delete? ^ - fixed both.
- 00:48:570 (120) - move this to 00:48:570 flows nice here and follow 00:44:258 (109,110,111) rhythm - move to 00:47:445 - ? :3
00:48:758 (121) - if above is done, change this to kat? - sure.- 01:07:133 (172) - delete? too intense here .w." have a little break here is nice lol - fixed.
- 01:18:008 (205,206,207) - change to slider/spinner? if want to keep i don't mind o3o - yup, i want to place some notes for 01:19:133 (205) -
- 02:07:133 (38) - delete? same as 01:07:133 (172) - sure.
[Muzukashii]- 00:02:258 (4) - move this to 00:02:070 ? plays better here imo
- 00:05:258 (14) - delete this to make the same pattern as above ^ - fixed both.
- 00:48:476 (186) - move this to 00:49:226 instead? plays better with the violin - i deleted triplet.
- 00:53:539 - add kat? - ^
[Oni]
- OD 5? let Inner Oni have OD 6 o3o - kept. Inner is just an extra diff.- 00:02:258 (6) - move this to 00:02:070 ? plays better here imo
- 00:05:258 (20) - move this to 00:05:445 ? ^ - fixed both.
- 00:57:851 (284) - kat? to make more interesting pattern play lol
- 01:03:851 (319) - ^
- 01:09:851 (353) - ^
- 01:15:851 (388) - ^ - sounds good.
- 01:49:883 (549) - kat? i can hear a snare sound here
- 01:51:383 (557) - same as above ^ - snare? hi-hat? anyway, fixed it.
- 01:57:851 (15) - kat? just like 00:57:851 (284)
- 02:03:851 (50) - ^
- 02:09:851 (84) - ^
- 02:15:851 (119) - ^ - sure.
[Inner Oni]- 00:15:289 - add don here? to make a ddk pattern to make a good flow (ddk d D ddkkk D ddkdddkk...)
00:15:383 (92) - if above is added, delete this finisher - sure.- 00:23:258 (147) - don? kat here is abit too loud/early for me here, and it follows the bass drum better imo o3o
- 00:29:258 (184) - same as above ^ - agree.
- 00:35:820 (227,228) - k d? plays better imo .w. - changed some pattern.
- 00:41:258 (263) - same as 00:23:258 (147) - ok.
- 00:54:570 (367) - don? flows better for me o3o - nope. 00:54:570 (368) - is still very high pitch sound.
- 01:54:195 (1) - move this spinner to 01:54:383 too early there .w. also shorten the spinner after moved ww - this is intentional spinner. please look at the Auto+HR and Auto+HD :3c
Nice mapset :3
good luck ww
mod arigatou!!DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi TKSalt, sorry for being a bit late, but here's my mod for M4M :3
All here are just suggestions, feel free to ignore any of them if you don't like, the mapset is already nice for me.
[General]
No errors in metadata, timing and folder. Clean.
[Kantan]
00:42:758 (65) - Maybe remove this, I feel a pause would fit nicely here. - sure.
01:18:008 (126,127,128,129) - How about a d d d K pattern here? This way the big kat would sound nicer in my opinion. - changed to d d K
01:19:508 (130) - Maybe remove this? The finisher before would feel even better if it was the last note to hit in this part. - nope. lose the sound of the axis is unnatural.
01:42:758 - Add a note here? This part feels a bit empty as the beats here are quite strong. - changed the pattern.
01:50:258 (176,177) - Add a note between these two and make the resulting pattern d k d, like the previous one? - kept. some changed the previous pattern.
02:21:383 (48) - Maybe use a don here? Like I suggested in 01:18:008 (126,127,128,129). - sure
[Futsuu]
I'd suggest you to change the dkd and kdk patterns in 1/2 to either ddk, kkd, ddd, or kkk, I think they may be a bit hard to handle in Futsuu. This would require adjusting the notes around these parts, but this depends of your style - i can understand your feeling, but i dont think so. the BPM is relatively low. players can be provide against those patterns.
01:12:758 (186) - Remove the finisher? - kept. its good contrast with 01:00:758 (150) -
01:18:570 - Add a note here? This part is a bit intense, so a note would fit here. - added k.
01:42:758 - This would add a bit of difficulty, but a note is definitely missing here, hitting the 2 big kats after a 3/2 beats feels a bit weird in my opinion. - i added d here 01:42:570 -
02:12:758 (55) - Remove the finisher? - kept.
02:21:570 - Add a note, like I suggested in 01:18:570. - yes!
[Muzukashii]
00:17:726 (67,68) - You could remove these notes and add a note in 00:18:195, to follow better the instrument playing there (viola-like), if you do, you could also remove 00:18:945 (73), to follow it better. - youre right.
01:39:195 (382) - Maybe remove this to keep following the piano nicely. - nice suggestion. got it.
01:42:195 - I feel a note is missing here, try adding one here, if you do, remove 01:42:664 (394) to not make the pattern too heavy. - i deleted 01:42:664 (390) - . i want to follow only bassdrum.
01:57:383 (10) - Use a kat here? I this would be a bit more consistent with your patterns in the previous kiai and more intuitive in my opinion. - its intentional pattern.
02:03:383 (37) - ^
01:55:883 (3) - Maybe here too.
02:01:883 (30) - ^ - ~ ^
[Oni]
01:19:883 - How about making a kd dk rhythm here, instead the k k k you have? That way you'd follow better that instrument-whose-name-I-can't-remember. - maybe, ...accordion sound? anyway i applied it.
01:21:945 - A don would fit nicely here, same reason as above. - sure.
01:22:883 - And same suggestion about the kd dk rhythm. - yes.
[Inner Oni]
00:15:945 (96,97,98,99,100) - Try ddkdk? :3 - sounds good :3
00:18:570 (119,120,121,122,123) - Try ddkdd? <: - i think 00:18:851 (122) - has still high pitch sound.
01:42:851 (695) - How about removing this note and making 01:42:945 (696) a big kat, it'd fit better I think. - 01:42:945 (696) is a bit weak sound than 01:43:133 (697) - and i can hear the drumroll sound around here 01:42:758 (694,695,696) -
That'd be all from my part, good luck /o/
thanks for mod!ReySHeL wrote:
hi~
M4M[Inner Oni]
- 00:10:508 - add finish - ここ 00:07:508 (41) - と同様にcymbal音は拾ってないのでこのままにします。
- 01:34:320 (636) - これはmodとは関係ないですがこれだけサークルが反抗期です - なんかのはずみで追加されたノーツっぽいので削除しました助かりました。代わりに他のノーツを動かしました。
[Oni]
- 00:20:070 - add d?
- 00:21:570 - ^ - 他の同じような d でも直前に空白を作っているのでこのままにします!
- 00:23:070 - add d 00:23:258 - k - パートの終わりには良さそうなので追加だけしました。
- 00:25:508 - ここからも同様に - kept.
バイオリン見たいな音をフォロー出来るのでnoteを追加してもいいと思いました- 01:00:008 - 01:12:008 - この部分はfinishじゃなくても良いと思いました 修正する場合2つ目のkiai timeもお願いします - fixed.
- 01:30:008 (454) - add finish
01:28:508 (450) - 01:29:258 (452) - この二つをbigで合わせてるので 3つ目も追加した方が自然で良いと思います - 奇数になるので不自然かなって気がしてたけど思ったより良さそうだったので追加しました。[Muzukashii]
- 01:00:008 - 01:12:008 - same as Oni
- 01:30:008 (349) - add finish
- 01:59:820 - add k 02:11:820 - こっちが入ってたので - all fixed.
[Futsuu]
- 01:00:008 - 01:12:008 - same as Oni
- 01:30:008 - add finish - both fixed.
[Kantan]
- fine - you too.
thats all~!
頑張って!
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[Inner][Oni]
- 00:18:570 (119,120,121,122,123) - kdkkd? Ends the phrase better I think. - sounds good.
- 01:19:320 (541,542) - Better to remove I think. It creates more emphasis on the next section. Consistency reasons too because 01:22:508 (560) - is alone (and it should be). - it has the triplet sound certainly like 01:22:695 (561,562,563) -
- 01:33:008 (629) - Can be changed to k for the piano, but I am not sure if you want this. Just a suggestion, since you seem to be focusing more on the strings here, but you mapped 01:33:195 (630,631,632,633) - which go with the piano better so I think you should probably change this so the piano is complete. - the don is intentionally because that point has a bit lower pitch piano sound than 01:36:008 (643) -
- 02:09:758 (105) - Because you followed the strings at 02:03:758 (59) - and 01:57:758 (18) - , you might want to have a k here. However, if you do this, then the pattern is maybe awkward to play, so you might want to consider another pattern. Up to you.
- 02:15:383 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - Same thing. - i dont like the kdkkkdk. i changed to ddkdkkkdk
- 02:21:570 (193,194,195,196,197) - kdkkd? Ends the phrase better I think. - i think 02:21:851 (196,197) - these notes are should keep don because i really want to enphasize 02:22:133 (198) - that K. should be emphasized more. so, for the end of song.
[Muzukashii]
- 00:06:195 - kkk expected for structure reasons (00:03:195 (9,10,11)). I don't think it's too hard. - yea, youre right. but just i want to emphasize snaredrum sound.
- 00:54:008 (264) - K fits better I think, because the next D begins another section. It creates a nice variety. - i dont like the xxx X with the same color basically. but agreed to that nice variety.
- 00:54:758 (267,268,269,270,271) - d dkd or ddddk suggested. I don't think current pattern is that appropriate because if you followed the background percussion you should probably have ddddk, but you chose to go with the melody instead so splitting up the two works better I think. - ddddk!!!!!!
- 01:18:008 (402) - D? Creates more emphasis on this change. Fits the music better too since there is a crash. (you have it in inner) - i gotto itto.
- 01:24:195 - kkk expected for structure reasons. Same thing as the beginning kinda. - kept. same as 00:06:195
- 02:21:008 (153) - D? Makes it so much better imo, just like in the previous kiai that was suggested. - yes.
[Futsuu]
- 00:03:382 (7,8,9,10) - k k x k k suggested instead. It fits the rhythm better because of the alt sound. (x = nothing) - good contrast with d d.
- 00:06:570 (17) - Best to remove I think. Still sounds nicely without and it's easier and more appropriate imo. - sure.
- 00:24:383 (89,90,91) - kkk suggested because you try to go for the melody here. - but its still lower pitch than 00:24:758 (91) - imo.
- 00:36:383 (133,134,135) - Same thing. - ^. 00:36:195 (131) - has too higher pitch.
- 00:42:945 (159) - Consider k here. Makes things more simple and it also fits the music so no fear there. - try it.
- 00:59:070 (228,229,230) - kkk suggested because the melody is much stronger here, compared to 01:00:758 (236,237,238). This goes for the second kiai too, which has the same structure like this one. - nice
- 01:11:070 (283,284,285) - Same thing. Also in the 2nd kiai. - fixed.
- 01:30:195 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359) - I would suggest you use all kats here. It fits the drum type used here and it also fits the melody better because it's strong. - hmm okey, i try it.
- 01:37:133 (375,376) - I think the big note should be 376 instead. In Oni and Inner Oni you had patterns which would support the intensity here, however in this muzukashii 1/2 notes are not strong enough for big note on 375 I think. Big note on 376 fits the crash sound too, also the piano which is more intense. - i see. got it!
- 01:40:133 (384) - d suggested because it's the same note played in the music just like 01:39:758 (383), which is a don. - why did i use a don?
- 01:42:008 (389) - D expected because of 01:41:258 (386) - and 01:40:508 (385). - awesome.
- 01:55:133 (1) - k suggested because the intensity isn't stronger than at 01:54:383 (442).
- 02:02:820 (36,37,38) - kkk expected because of 01:02:820 (245,246,247) - and 02:03:383 (39). The don at 02:03:383 (39) - plays and sounds really bad if you don't change. - fixed all sections of 2nd kiai.
- 02:04:320 (43,44,45) - I am ok with this. It's different to what you have in the other kiai but it fits the melody. - i changed to same as 1st kiai
[Kantan]
- 00:16:508 (36) - K suggested. Fits the music better I think. - yes.
- 00:43:133 (105,106) - Because of light patterns around, I suggest big note at 106 instead of 105. Big note on 105 feels too strong. - sounds good.
- 00:49:508 (121) - Should be a big note, if the above change is applied (I think it should be applied). - wakatta!
- 01:12:758 (186) - Remove finish? I would suggest you use big drum rolls in the 2nd kiai instead. - なるほど。
- 01:18:008 (202) - Big note? Same reason as Muzukashii. - yes.
- 01:25:133 (217,218) - Same reasons as 105,106. - ok.
- 01:55:133 (1) - k suggested. Same reasons like in Muzukashii. - fixed.
- 01:56:258 (4,5,6) - Should be at 01:57:758 (9,10,11) - and 9,10,11 should be here maybe. I don't think you need to create so much variety here if the structure suffers (1/2 k k kdk d d dkd, when it's d k dkd and k d kdk everywhere else). - fixed. and i added a k here 01:59:820 and 02:11:820 for 2nd kiai.
- 02:00:758 (18) - Big roll suggested if you applied the suggestion at 01:12:758 (186). - yes.
- 02:02:258 (21,22,23) - Same thing as 01:56:258. (you also did it nicely at 02:07:508 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - which is even more reason to change I think) - ok!
- 02:18:008 (72) - big note? - changed to a finisher.
- 02:21:008 (81) - ^ - ^
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- 00:07:508 (7) - Big note suggested.
- 00:43:508 (63) - ^
- 00:49:508 (73) - ^ - all changed to a finisher.
- 01:18:758 (124) - Remove maybe? It brings more attention to 01:19:133 (125) if you remove. Also consider a big note at 01:18:008 (123). - わかりました!
- 01:36:383 (148,149) - Use kats? It would fit better I think. - fixed.
- 01:52:508 (1) - Personally, I don't think this fits that well. I would suggest to map notes until 01:54:008 - instead. - i thought you would say so. ww
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