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ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY

Panic Room wrote:

EASY
00:30:842 (1) - 转盘结尾换到00:32:342 EZ里转盘不敢弄太短 只是凑个时间._.
00:32:557 - 在这里加多一个转盘到00:33:842 - ^
NORMAL
00:27:414 (1,2,3,4) - 这一块可以alt拉开点
01:02:458 (3) - 节奏慢了半拍。滑条结尾收到01:02:958 - 记得后面的note用ds调回来done
01:13:124 (2) - 这根也是，同上收半拍done
01:16:124 (4) - 其实这里可以弄一根短来回滑条对应节奏done
Death
其实这个难度我感觉SV略低
音效也是变化无常，有些亮，不过更多的地方都是多余的，应该老实按着鼓点摆。
00:28:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这贪吃蛇我是不建议摆，还不如弄一个跳，并且躲在滑条下面的贪吃蛇更难受了。换成跳了
01:11:458 (1) - 转盘往后拉半拍，然后在这下一个note，节奏才对上，想留着的话就把转盘的音效变normal吧。done
01:32:791 (1,2,3,4) - 没有形成一条直线改成弯的了直线懒得摆
01:26:624 (3) - 尽量避免和上上个note重叠。这样会读图困难。要么在01:26:458 - 这里加多一个note要么就拉开吧。done
00:55:291 (7,1) - 滑条开头可不会出音效，要是想弄这样的节奏的话就把转盘拉后半拍，在00:55:458 - 这里加一个notedone
01:58:958 (5,6) - 依然会读图困难先留着._.
也没什么我能找到的问题了，起码比上一张良心多了不过那段来回又重叠的贪吃蛇真是二我一脸
good luck 祝您身提体前健射康精
感谢 :)
bokito
76 posts
Joined July 2010
bokito
这是DNF的歌?，如果是建议在Tag里加上DNF 顺便加上毒奶粉也不错
[Death]
00:24:414 (3,3) - 这两个circle换成1/4slider
00:28:914 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858311 这里看上去有点乱 来点nc
00:34:625 - 加个circle 和后面那个ovwelap
00:35:458 (6) - 取消finish 在00:35:958 - 加个circle
00:41:958 - 移除这个circle
00:59:458 (3,4,5) - 这个条得有点大了
01:02:458 (2) - 丑 像盲肠一样
01:01:791 - 加个circle
01:04:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 你这里想排什么形状？ 三角形又不像 四边形又不像
01:06:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - 排好看点啊 如果你不知道怎么排就一条直线算了
01:16:791 (1,4) - 没对称
01:21:458 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858323 这样如何 因为你1号会被前面的300挡住看不到
01:27:458 - 这个slider换成2个circle
[normal]
有些地方有点乱 建议改下 然后没什么音效
G S X
88 posts
Joined August 2012
G S X
[easy]
不会mod easy
[Normal]
00:34:125 (1) - 简单的难度不应该在转盘后面马上放东西
00:55:124 (2) - 去掉
01:06:125 (1) - normal和easy都建议不要出现超过1下的折返滑条
[Death]
00:27:414 (1,2) - 建议去掉红线上的whistle 并将滑条的呼呼音效去掉
00:31:271 (2,3,4) - 试试取消全部whistle 因为原曲里面几乎没有任何音效 强加反而更违和
00:43:458 (1,2,3) - 原曲里面有一串连打音效 不考虑放连打吗 用1/8放连打
00:54:791 (6,7,8) - 试试这样
SPOILER

01:03:291 (1) - 到01:05:791 (6) - 的音效都换成n:c1 默认clap比较蛋疼
01:19:458 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/3znkx.jpg 换成这样的节奏 就算不换也建议在原来的上面按这个节奏下whistle
01:24:791 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不要乱下whistle 全部去掉 然后在重音上下whistle吧
01:35:958 (2,3,4) - 中间红线加个note
01:54:124 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 突然放1/1note比较影响流畅性 而且抓重音也抓得很奇怪
大体上的建议就是音效统一一点会好很多 这样放有点乱
另外排列多花一点功夫 美观一点
最后祝您身体健康 再见
etc
84 posts
Joined March 2012
etc
death

感覺180的圖被做成了90 有點興奮不起來 可以增加點連打之類的 然後做成鬼畜map wwww
00:49:458 (1) - ctrl+g
01:20:791 - 這裡可以鬼畜一下


normal
01:54:791 (1) - Q
01:56:791 (4) - ^

easy
it‘s ok
============
祝好運
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

etc wrote:

death

感覺180的圖被做成了90 有點興奮不起來 可以增加點連打之類的 然後做成鬼畜map wwww
00:49:458 (1) - ctrl+g done
01:20:791 - 這裡可以鬼畜一下 我可是善良麻婆~所以这个难度不准备太难._.


normal
01:54:791 (1) - Qdone
01:56:791 (4) - ^done

easy
it‘s ok
============
祝好運
感谢~
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi，紙張男孩，久等啦，QQ Mod Req。

看你post數蠻少 建議找老爺跟拉克修和yuki來幫你看圖?

[General]

滑條後面最後那一個瞄點別漏出來呀..好多都這樣 @_@
小心被噴。

怎麼Death的kiai time不一樣?

[Easy]

01:27:458 (3) - 包住4
01:36:791 (3) - 3包2
01:40:791 (1) - 1包2
01:44:791 (2) - 太靠近3換個位置，弧度朝左邊不要右邊。

[Normal]

00:15:414 (4) - 後面白線有音
00:34:125 (1) - 離轉盤很遠，而且轉完後很難點到那一個圈，放中間點。
00:29:985 - 後面可以放，突然停頓蠻怪。
01:06:125 (1) - 折返三次容易斷，返一次就好
01:07:458 (2) - 怎麼這個變0.9x? 不是0.8x嘛，後面也是
01:10:124 (1) - 1包2


[Death]

00:26:128 (2,3) - 可跟00:26:557 (1,2) -作對稱
00:34:125 (1) - 音量40 或50，有點吵
00:44:125 (3) - NC
00:52:458 (9) - 9疊到前面5上
01:04:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 試個等距來回?
01:26:624 (4,5,6) - 可以跳
01:43:458 (1,2,3,4) - 四點呈一個正四方形


[Other]

1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Good Luck,祝Ranked.
3.多拉點人來看圖(?
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

smallboat wrote:

Hi，紙張男孩，久等啦，QQ Mod Req。

看你post數蠻少 建議找老爺跟拉克修和yuki來幫你看圖? 那是啥.-.

[General]

滑條後面最後那一個瞄點別漏出來呀..好多都這樣 @_@露出来多不美观 强迫症(?
小心被噴。

怎麼Death的kiai time不一樣? 统一了._.

[Easy]

01:27:458 (3) - 包住4 done
01:36:791 (3) - 3包2 done
01:40:791 (1) - 1包2 done
01:44:791 (2) - 太靠近3換個位置，弧度朝左邊不要右邊。 done

[Normal]

00:15:414 (4) - 後面白線有音 done
00:34:125 (1) - 離轉盤很遠，而且轉完後很難點到那一個圈，放中間點。 done
00:29:985 - 後面可以放，突然停頓蠻怪。 done
01:06:125 (1) - 折返三次容易斷，返一次就好 done
01:07:458 (2) - 怎麼這個變0.9x? 不是0.8x嘛，後面也是 done
01:10:124 (1) - 1包2 done


[Death]

00:26:128 (2,3) - 可跟00:26:557 (1,2) -作對稱 done
00:34:125 (1) - 音量40 或50，有點吵 done
00:44:125 (3) - NC done
00:52:458 (9) - 9疊到前面5上 done
01:04:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 試個等距來回? done
01:26:624 (4,5,6) - 可以跳 done 不过跳的有点奇怪QUQ
01:43:458 (1,2,3,4) - 四點呈一個正四方形 done


[Other]

1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Good Luck,祝Ranked.
3.多拉點人來看圖(?
:) thx~
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
random mod
will write another post soon(maybe today or tomorrow)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki


Random Mod

Sry for late for one day.
I used to play DNF and now AFK.

ZZHBOY wrote:

smallboat wrote:

Hi，紙張男孩，久等啦，QQ Mod Req。

看你post數蠻少 建議找老爺跟拉克修和yuki來幫你看圖? 那是啥.-. 我就是Yuki
Red——You must fix.
Blue——My suggestions that should be noticed, better to change it.
Black——My personal suggestions.

[General]
  1. Easy和Normal的音效都没下好还叫all done？快去下音效。
  2. 音乐这么响不把音量调到60%以上你让人怎么听到Hitsounds？
  3. Tags？加个毒奶粉也成啊
  4. 所有的难度的第一个Kiai在这里结束：00:55:458 -
    第二个Kiai在这里结束：01:59:458 -
  5. Combo Color 不一致
    Inconsistency in combo colours:
    - [Death] :
    Combo3 : 134,183,255
    Combo5 : 255,222,121
    - [Easy] :
    Combo3 : 140,184,255
    Combo5 : 255,231,157
    - [Normal] :
    Combo3 : 140,184,255
    Combo5 : 255,225,134
    除非你说我就要用不一样的，那我也没办法。

[Easy]
  1. 00:50:124 (3) - NC
  2. 00:52:791 (7) - NC
  3. 01:03:458 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏完全不对，这么下：
  4. 01:14:124 (1,2) - 这里节奏也不对，Easy再简化节奏也不能不对啊，不是所有object都放在红白线上就是准的
  5. 01:19:458 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 这里下的什么乱七八糟的啊，快re了
  6. 01:27:458 (3) - NC
  7. 01:35:458 (1,2,3) - 节奏不对
  8. 01:46:124 (3) - NC，顺带一提我觉得01:46:124 (3,4,5,6) - 节奏也不对
  9. 01:48:791 (7) - NC
  10. 01:56:791 (1,2,3) - 节奏不对
  11. 你ctrl+A看一下，几乎所有的note都堆积在中心，多利用空间啊亲。

[Normal]
  1. SliderTick的声音听起来相当蠢
  2. 你ctrl+A看一下，几乎所有的note都堆积在中心，多利用空间啊亲+1。
  3. NC加的不是很合理。
  4. 00:39:458 (3,1) - 有些直滑条拉的相当ugly，在我看来
  5. 00:44:791 (4) - NC，歌曲的又一段开始了难道不NC么
  6. 01:03:458 (1,2,3,4) - 自己听听音乐再看看你摆的
  7. 01:06:124 (5) - NC
  8. 01:14:124 (1,2,3) - 和easy里面一样的问题
  9. 01:29:458 (4) - 尾巴拉到长白线干嘛，长白线歌曲段落变化应该加note换NC的
  10. 01:35:458 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一样听起来无比违和，还有把长白线空出来啊，拖着个尾巴进kiai么？
  11. 01:38:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 全体往前拖一根白线，然后后面加个slider
  12. 01:47:124 (5,6,7) - 节奏不对，重音01:47:624 - 在红线上

[Death]
  1. 好多unsnap的绿线
    SPOILER
    Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:43:369 - snap to 00:43:374
    00:43:866 - snap to 00:43:874
    00:44:613 - snap to 00:44:624
    00:45:940 - snap to 00:45:958
    00:54:394 - snap to 00:54:374
    00:54:560 - snap to 00:54:541
    00:55:060 - snap to 00:55:041
    00:55:227 - snap to 00:55:208
    00:57:884 - snap to 00:57:874
  2. 00:24:628 - 00:25:485 - add a note
  3. 00:27:414 (1,2,3) - 这三个口哨听起来特别蠢
  4. 00:29:771 (1,2,3,4) - 画的规则点
  5. 00:46:125 (6,7,8,6,7,8,9) - 这种地方没必要搞跳
  6. 01:00:291 - add a note
  7. 01:03:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏不说什么了但是音效这里放的很蛋疼啊，根据音乐下音效啊亲，这么多拍手声干啥呢
  8. 01:13:958 (1) - 白线起音的干嘛从前面那个红线开始？
  9. 01:25:458 (1) - 这里不是音乐重音地方加了个哨子听起来不怪么？
  10. 01:25:458 (1,2) - 节奏不对
  11. 01:40:791 (5) - 后面那个nc移到这里来
  12. 01:42:124 (4) - 现在拉红点使滑条变速似乎不太好，上次我用红点拉变速滑条被batmanager喷了。我建议你这里也改下，要么全用红点，要么就别用
  13. 01:59:624 (1) - spin移到这里来01:59:458 -
  14. Death总体感觉就是，放不开。

最后祝你身体健康
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
hi
Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  • AImod里，那个stack leniency，绝对别乱动，建议改回0.7，它会毁你图的
    Letterbox check下，看看是否要去掉
    关于source和TAGs，最好加上DNF的英文名字
    音效太简陋，你仔细听音乐，因为你BPM翻倍了，所以下2,4白线clap这些基本还是要做的，找个合适的做鼓点的snare加在每个第3梗白线上，整曲下满应该音效就足够了
    Tick音别乱用啊，音效什么时候soft default什么时候SC1用的有点混乱条理不明，建议需要用tick的时候切换
    所有难度KIAI time统一下
    Combo的颜色不一样，自己看OSU文件里的代码

[Death]
整体：两段KIAI的结束时间毫无根据啊，在蓝线随便结束？建议移到白线上
间距十分随意，有的1/2的间距很大，这样会被喷diff spread的，因为你这样看着像normal到insane，这作为hard太难,而且你还OD7
例如
00:13:699 (1,2,3,4) –这个1/2大死了，00:21:200 (2) 00:35:125 (3,4) – 这些又太小，明显不符合歌曲氛围，你看一开始曲子是很缓的，到你第一个KIAI才开始变强烈
00:28:914 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – 这些跳也不符合歌曲氛围，后面才是KIAI，前面曲子也没这么激烈这么有必要跳，而KIAI又缩了，这样在难度平衡方面就很不好。

  • 滑条身的whistle吵，加在首尾就行，一般别这么加，后同
    00:21:414 (3,4,5) –在一条直线上flow打着不舒服，改成曲线试试
    00:23:985 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –缩小点间距
    00:29:771 (1,2,3,4) –如果你非要这么跳，请用工具摆正方形或者矩形，这个形状很难看啊
    00:30:842 (1,2,3,4) –用复制粘贴旋转工具
    00:34:625 –我比较倾向于这里加note
    00:36:625 -^
    00:38:125 (5,6) –间距太小容易误读，非要这样加NC
    00:41:958 (6) –这个去掉，打击感不好
    00:42:458 (3,4,5,6) –正三角，别擦边
    00:43:458 (1) –这里没减速的必要，减速很weird
    00:44:125 (1) –这里不跟鼓放串子？
    00:52:624 –加note
    00:55:291 (7) –这finish逗我吧？加到8上
    00:55:624 (1) –加点音效在转盘上，建议音效组改成normal
    00:58:125 (1,2) –间距
    01:02:458 (2) –这…也太难看了吧，拉拉好看啊两边都设置红点，别歪向一边
    01:03:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) –clap加的挺别扭
    01:10:458 (1,1,1) –别乱NC，有点乱，去掉NC
    01:13:124 (1) –尾部finish去掉
    01:26:958 –跟鼓点下1/4节奏
    01:27:458 (1,2,3) –间距
    01:29:458 (5) –finish吵而难听，这里应该是放snare的地方
    01:42:124 (4) –重拉
    01:43:791 (2) –向另一个方向凹凸
    01:44:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –没有增加间距的必要
    01:46:291 (2) –去掉尾finish
    01:56:791 (1,2,1) –间距，容易误读
    01:58:791 –加note
    01:59:458 -^

[Noraml]

  • 00:47:458 (3,5) –overlap
    01:03:458 (1,2) –这里跟音乐下，http://puu.sh/4SY4o.jpg
    01:46:124 (2,3,4,5) –这轨迹flow不好，建议改流线型
节奏有点无聊，排列可以加强，还有要加音效

[Easy]
00:56:791 –搞不懂break拉到这干嘛，完全没必要
还有要加音效，别的似乎都可以
最后祝你身体健康,please reply to my mod thanks
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
晚点回复 ;)
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Fycho wrote:

hi
Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  • AImod里，那个stack leniency，绝对别乱动，建议改回0.7，它会毁你图的
    Letterbox check下，看看是否要去掉
    关于source和TAGs，最好加上DNF的英文名字 done
    音效太简陋，你仔细听音乐，因为你BPM翻倍了，所以下2,4白线clap这些基本还是要做的，找个合适的做鼓点的snare加在每个第3梗白线上，整曲下满应该音效就足够了 没加因为加了音效感觉违和
    Tick音别乱用啊，音效什么时候soft default什么时候SC1用的有点混乱条理不明，建议需要用tick的时候切换
    所有难度KIAI time统一下 done
    Combo的颜色不一样，自己看OSU文件里的代码[/color] done

[Death]
整体：两段KIAI的结束时间毫无根据啊，在蓝线随便结束？建议移到白线上 done
间距十分随意，有的1/2的间距很大，这样会被喷diff spread的，因为你这样看着像normal到insane，这作为hard太难,而且你还OD7
例如
00:13:699 (1,2,3,4) –这个1/2大死了，00:21:200 (2) 00:35:125 (3,4) – 这些又太小，明显不符合歌曲氛围，你看一开始曲子是很缓的，到你第一个KIAI才开始变强烈
00:28:914 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – 这些跳也不符合歌曲氛围，后面才是KIAI，前面曲子也没这么激烈这么有必要跳，而KIAI又缩了，这样在难度平衡方面就很不好。

  • 滑条身的whistle吵，加在首尾就行，一般别这么加，后同
    00:21:414 (3,4,5) –在一条直线上flow打着不舒服，改成曲线试试 done
    00:23:985 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –缩小点间距 done
    00:29:771 (1,2,3,4) –如果你非要这么跳，请用工具摆正方形或者矩形，这个形状很难看啊 done
    00:30:842 (1,2,3,4) –用复制粘贴旋转工具 不会QAQ
    00:34:625 –我比较倾向于这里加note done
    00:36:625 -^ done
    00:38:125 (5,6) –间距太小容易误读，非要这样加NC done
    00:41:958 (6) –这个去掉，打击感不好 done
    00:42:458 (3,4,5,6) –正三角，别擦边 done
    00:43:458 (1) –这里没减速的必要，减速很weird done
    00:44:125 (1) –这里不跟鼓放串子？done
    00:52:624 –加note done
    00:55:291 (7) –这finish逗我吧？加到8上 done
    00:55:624 (1) –加点音效在转盘上，建议音效组改成normal done
    00:58:125 (1,2) –间距 done
    01:02:458 (2) –这…也太难看了吧，拉拉好看啊两边都设置红点，别歪向一边done
    01:03:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) –clap加的挺别扭音效删了
    01:10:458 (1,1,1) –别乱NC，有点乱，去掉NC done
    01:13:124 (1) –尾部finish去掉done
    01:26:958 –跟鼓点下1/4节奏done
    01:27:458 (1,2,3) –间距
    01:29:458 (5) –finish吵而难听，这里应该是放snare的地方done
    01:42:124 (4) –重拉 done
    01:43:791 (2) –向另一个方向凹凸done
    01:44:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –没有增加间距的必要这样好玩QUQ
    01:46:291 (2) –去掉尾finishdone
    01:56:791 (1,2,1) –间距，容易误读done
    01:58:791 –加notedone
    01:59:458 -^done

[Noraml]

  • 00:47:458 (3,5) –overlap移开了
    01:03:458 (1,2) –这里跟音乐下，http://puu.sh/4SY4o.jpg改成那样惹
    01:46:124 (2,3,4,5) –这轨迹flow不好，建议改流线型done
节奏有点无聊，排列可以加强，还有要加音效
因为是normal所以就弄简单点惹

[Easy]
00:56:791 –搞不懂break拉到这干嘛，完全没必要提前了
还有要加音效，别的似乎都可以
找不到适合这曲的音效QAQ
最后祝你身体健康,please reply to my mod thanks
:) :) :)
ZZHBOY
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Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
啊我真纸张
hoshisorakiseki
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hoshisorakiseki
from qq
全局：
这个诡异的歌名...建议找一个trackid之类的软件识别一下歌名。
然后艺术家写nexon比较好，将原艺术家移到source中
接着tag补上几个译名更好：“地下城与勇士”、“アラド戦記”（印象中是这个名字）、毒奶粉、老马、网络连接中断、小霸王服务器、等等......
AiMod好像有几个报错，看一下

难度：Easy
00:43:458 (2,1) - 看下面
原来：x-x x---x 
修改：x x-x x-x
01:02:458 - 01:16:124 + 01:13:124 - 01:16:791 --> 能跟旋律就跟旋律，跟线不好

难度：Normal
00:17:128 (1,2) - 这里变成两个slider
01:02:458 - 01:16:124 + 01:13:124 - 01:16:791 -->同Easy

难度：Hard+
00:19:485 + 00:20:432 + 00:22:485 + 00:22:914 + 00:23:342 + 00:23:771 + 01:55:124 + 01:56:458 --> 漏音
01:02:458 (2) - 带有争议性的slider
01:42:124 (6) - 同上

加油
ZZHBOY
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Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

from qq
全局：
这个诡异的歌名...建议找一个trackid之类的软件识别一下歌名。
然后艺术家写nexon比较好，将原艺术家移到source中
接着tag补上几个译名更好：“地下城与勇士”、“アラド戦記”（印象中是这个名字）、毒奶粉、老马、网络连接中断、小霸王服务器、等等......
AiMod好像有几个报错，看一下done

难度：Easy
00:43:458 (2,1) - 看下面这样滑条尾重音感觉得不偿失就没改了
原来：x-x x---x 
修改：x x-x x-x
01:02:458 - 01:16:124 + 01:13:124 - 01:16:791 --> 能跟旋律就跟旋律，跟线不好ez嘛 根线摆摆可以了

难度：Normal
00:17:128 (1,2) - 这里变成两个sliderno
01:02:458 - 01:16:124 + 01:13:124 - 01:16:791 -->同Easyno

难度：Hard+
00:19:485 + 00:20:432 + 00:22:485 + 00:22:914 + 00:23:342 + 00:23:771 + 01:55:124 + 01:56:458 --> 漏音fixed some
01:02:458 (2) - 带有争议性的slider
01:42:124 (6) - 同上这种先保留看后面modder怎么说

加油
感谢 :)
IamKwaN
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hi, from in-game pm request.

General

  1. Offset可能是早了,我自己量的話是13714(+14 ms),可能也不太準,你找個人來量量吧

Hard+

  1. 00:17:128 (1) - whistle on head missing? 跟00:13:699 (1) 是同一段的開頭
  2. 00:21:414 (3,4) - 這跳會不會有點過份,已經是I的程度
  3. 00:20:557 (1) - whistle on head
  4. 00:28:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 你能告訴我這個是什麼排列? 我感覺是每兩個圓圈的音是一對的,所以我柑橘你這排列有點隨機;這種就很好:00:30:842 (1,2,3,4)
    SPOILER
  5. 00:37:458 (2,3,4) - 你確定這裡的spacing不誤導? 白線-->白線跟白線-->紅線的DS一樣
  6. 00:41:291 - 不加圓圈? 跟00:39:458 (1,2,3) 明顯是同一段來的,但你前面加了
  7. 00:43:958 (10,1) - Prev: 5.10x? 你確定這只是一個H+?
  8. 00:48:625 (5,6) - 這兩個的DS是故意比00:47:958 (3,4) 多還是怎樣
  9. 01:13:124 (1,2,3) - 3跳去4, 5跳去6, 7跳去1, 然後我看不透這是根據什麼來決定他們之間的DS
  10. 01:16:124 (3,4,5) - 這三個好強烈的感覺,但你不跳
  11. 01:55:124 (4,5) - 又來誤導性的DS ; 01:54:791 (3,4) = 01:55:124 (4,5)

Normal

  1. 00:13:699 (1) - 為何跟H不同,這個的頭沒whistle
  2. 00:23:985 (1) - ^
  3. 00:29:128 (3,4) - 包好
  4. 00:37:791 (4) - 你不覺得這flow很彆扭?
    SPOILER
  5. DS的問題, 同樣一段kiai,為何轉DS,我看不到有必要轉DS
    SPOILER
    00:40:791 - 00:43:124 :arrow: 0.8x
    00:43:458 - 00:46:791 :arrow: 0.9x
    00:47:458 - 00:55:124 :arrow: 0.8x
  6. 01:32:124 (1) - remove NC,這個NC有什麼意義
  7. 01:36:124 (3,4) - 包好
  8. 01:38:791 (1) - DS???
  9. 01:59:458 (1) - 這個spinner的完結時間可以跟H+的一樣的吧

Easy

  1. 00:13:699 (1) - whistle on head? 起碼三個diff的音效要一致吧..
  2. 01:44:791 (2,1) - 包好?

- TiRaFiouS -
128 posts
Joined November 2012
- TiRaFiouS -
在讀圖方面 有點亂 很難跟
大致上跟距離和方向有關

在flow上也要下一番功夫~

Remap! don't forget my kds
這句名言吶名言
[General]
自動忽略BPM細節變動....厲害= =
offset:33,414 BPM:165
offset:33,777 BPM:175
offset:34,119 BPM:180

下面的不太確定
offset:120,785 BPM:160
offset:122,285 BPM:150
offset:123,885 BPM:140

BPM問題影響:(+)

[Hard+]
這跳絕對奇怪!((嗯
節奏變快那段前半和後半ds怎麼差這麼多
ds好大文題的樣子
00:14:128 (3,4) - 2和3距離大了,調一下
00:13:914 (5,6,1) -不爽吶!怎麼00:14:985 (6) - 快接近直滑條了,曲多一點
00:21:414 (3,4) - ZZ....分這麼開
00:24:842 (5) - 感覺要NC
00:29:771 (5) - remove.....其實感覺這段...00:29:985 (6,7,8,9) - 這段一定是一組
00:32:557 (1) - 這spinner尾絕對不對音(+)
00:41:458 (5) - 延長到00:41:958 - 看看
00:42:791 (5) - NC
00:43:958 (10,1) - 擦...這個分這麼開!!!
00:50:125 (1,2) - 上一個同樣節奏的Note ds 0.98....這個0.26...ORZ= =
00:53:791 (4) - 太近....
01:04:124 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 左右上下移動距離不一樣故意的?
01:19:458 (4,5,6,7) - 這感覺作出來的....
試試這個
01:25:458 (1,2) - 重音在尾?建議重音在return位
01:48:791 (1) - 那個音一定都沒完所以建議spinner01:51:124 - 這裡停
01:57:291 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -

[NM]
00:27:414 (1,2,3,4) -
後面再補個circle吧= =
00:32:557 (1) - (+)
01:14:124 (1,2,3,4) - hhh
01:24:791 (1,2,3,4) - 音放在滑跳尾比我的圖更不對音嘛!!
01:36:124 (3,4,5) - ^
01:47:124 (4,5,6) - 怪異感

[EZ]
好像沒什麼問題...因為不懂改

就這樣...你差我一首歌= =
ZZHBOY
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NightNine_old
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你们怎么都在打童年牌...QAQ
Easy:
00:20:557 (1) - 开头 add finish
00:29:128 (3,4) - 间距没ds稍微大了一点点
00:39:458 (1) - 开头 finish
00:42:124 (1) - 开头 finish
00:44:791 (1) - 结尾 finish
00:48:791 (2) - 结尾 finish
01:06:124 (1) - 开头 finish
01:11:458 (1) - 开头 finish
01:22:791 (1) - finish
01:27:458 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:33:458 (1) - finish
01:43:458 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:48:791 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:54:124 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:55:458 (2) - 结尾 finish

Normal
00:13:699-00:32:126
http://puu.sh/71gcB 建议用这个音效 作为hitnormal
00:17:128 (1) - 开头 Whistle
00:20:557 (1) - finish & whistle
00:23:985 (1) - remove whistle add finish
01:06:124 (8) - 开头finish
01:12:124 (3) - finish
01:28:124 (1) - finish
01:33:458 (3) - 开头finish
01:48:791 (1) - finish
01:54:791 (1) - finish
01:55:458 (3) - 结尾finish
01:33:458 (3) - 开头finish

Hard+：
00:52:458 (8,9) - stack http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0d3M72
00:53:291 (2,3,1) - http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bn06yB1
01:25:458 (1) - NC
01:25:458 (1) - Remove NC
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY

NightNine wrote:

你们怎么都在打童年牌...QAQ
Easy:
00:20:557 (1) - 开头 add finish
00:29:128 (3,4) - 间距没ds稍微大了一点点
00:39:458 (1) - 开头 finish
00:42:124 (1) - 开头 finish
00:44:791 (1) - 结尾 finish
00:48:791 (2) - 结尾 finish
01:06:124 (1) - 开头 finish
01:11:458 (1) - 开头 finish
01:22:791 (1) - finish
01:27:458 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:33:458 (1) - finish
01:43:458 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:48:791 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:54:124 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:55:458 (2) - 结尾 finish

Normal
00:13:699-00:32:126
http://puu.sh/71gcB 建议用这个音效 作为hitnormal
00:17:128 (1) - 开头 Whistle
00:20:557 (1) - finish & whistle
00:23:985 (1) - remove whistle add finish
01:06:124 (8) - 开头finish
01:12:124 (3) - finish
01:28:124 (1) - finish
01:33:458 (3) - 开头finish
01:48:791 (1) - finish
01:54:791 (1) - finish
01:55:458 (3) - 结尾finish
01:33:458 (3) - 开头finish

Hard+：
00:52:458 (8,9) - stack http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0d3M72
00:53:291 (2,3,1) - http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bn06yB1
01:25:458 (1) - NC
01:25:458 (1) - Remove NC
音效部分基本都改了 不过没用finish而是whistle和drumhit thx
ts8zs
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0,428.571428571429,4,2,0,40,1,0
34127,333.333333333333,4,2,0,40,1,0

不会粘的话 Offset 0 BPM140 (这个和你差14ms)
Offset 34127 BPM 180 (这个和你差2ms)
命名建议用Basic Standard Hyper
[Hard]
00:14:557 (5) - Copy from 00:14:985 (6) -
01:34:791 (5) - overlap on 01:35:458 (1) -
[Easy]
01:59:791 (1) - 请在同一地方结束
也就这样……
pw384
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request via forum-pm, as promised
这曲子好

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.


[General]
  1. 我觉得timing是这样的 00:32:985 - 150BPM，00:33:385 - 160BPM，00:33:760 - 170BPM，因为从32:985开始有一个很明显的加速过程，而且从140~180按照公差10的等差数列把BPM加上去刚好能凑满小节数 所以我觉得timing有可能是这样=。=别忘了resnap掉00:32:557 (1) - （N/H里）（因为原来的落点仔细听音乐也是有问题的）和其它难度的红线


[Hard+]
  1. HP+1，这种让人感觉intense的歌曲HP高一点会好玩些
  2. diff名最好改成Hard，Hard+可能不会让rank
  3. 00:30:842 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得做成正方形会更好看
  4. 00:37:791 (3,4) - 我觉得可以做成这样的形状，3就不会和1擦到了 而且绝对间距相等：
    Picture
  5. 00:43:458 (5) - 按照flow的走势来说可能要往左边移动几格，顺带还要调整一下00:43:958 (6) -
  6. 00:47:458 (1,2) - 分开一点吧
  7. 00:47:958 (3) - 同理
  8. 00:48:625 (5) - 这很坑啊很坑啊很坑啊！！！1111，即使是在Hard+里，我觉得这样的spacing很容易让人读错以为是1/1的间距，而且不好看，也没有什么跳的理由。。
  9. 00:50:625 (3) - 和4分开来一点，间距太蛋疼
  10. 00:53:791 (4) - WTF
  11. 01:02:458 (2) - 不对称 差评
  12. 01:04:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 诗人，我觉得第一个note的位置从x=304,y=240开始会比较好，而且这个折返跳不合曲。。
  13. 01:24:624 (4) - (nazi) 123都没有互相擦到而34擦到一点边了
  14. 01:44:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这很难让人想到你是认真摆的。。1357一直线，2468一直线，123456788的间距逐渐增大会比较好
  15. 01:56:124 (7,8,1) - 都高潮段落了间距那么点不太合适
  16. 额总的来说modder的印象就是"你这图随手摆的？"，有的地方排列和排版的确略丑，控制间距方面也做得不算太出色。音效很认真


[Normal]
  1. 00:16:271 (5) - (nazi)你好像是要blanket掉6的。。那么改完美一些吧
  2. 00:30:842 (1,2,3,4) - 闹哪样，我不建议太多重叠（在normal里）和这种没必要的spacing变化，这样变难读图（for beginners）
  3. 00:38:124 (4) - Prev: 0.66x, Next: 1.21x 在Normal里不合适（虽然这是case-to-case的东西但是这里没有这样改变spacing的必要）
  4. 00:39:125 (5) - orz spacing一样会美观一些
  5. 00:39:458 (6,1) - NC对调
  6. 01:06:124 (8) - NC
  7. 01:27:291 (5) - 这个在normal里也不合适，新人会把滑条末尾当做起点然后点了一下然后miss了然后retry然后怒投一分
  8. 这个难度还行，不足是spacing和NC混乱（懒得分条写啦wwww），统一一下NC吧，还有一些难读的spacing改掉吧。我对Normal的spacing意见是只要方便新人（Normal玩家）读图就可以改变spacing（或者是那些如果遵守spacing了反而难读的情况），但是这张图里那几处也没有必要改spacing，为了一个blanket放弃spacing有的时候不值


[Easy]
  1. 01:59:791 (1) - 和其它难度统一结束点02:04:624 - （我猜你做Easy是开着1/1的）
  2. 美丽

这个mapset新人味太重 要加加油咯~
Good luck :)


EDIT: 爷爷啊我和楼上包子的posts数一样
smallboat
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smallboat
無聊再摸一次，之前這好像是之前我進新人群不久摸的(?

怎不把自己的map加一個fav?

[Easy] Ctrl+A之後的範圍太集中中心了，稍微往外點放?
前面的音量有點小，finish 聽不太到。

00:20:557 (1) - 這個就改成00:17:128 (1,2) 單點吧，同樣音軌維持整體，兩個連續滑條有點莫名。(開頭音效也錯了，應該是跟00:17:128 (1) -一樣是whistle?)

00:23:985 (1) - 不加whistle?
00:27:414 (1) - 後面節奏 改這樣試試 蠻適合music :
SPOILER
00:34:125 (1) - 或許你中間可以用個折返來壓鼓點，雖然縮短了但這樣也沒多難。(後面也是)
00:43:458 (2) - 我覺得結尾在 00:44:458 因為有連續鼓聲。
00:44:791 (1) - 對稱?
00:54:124 (2) - 結尾finish聽不到，需要加大點音量做break。(70~80%?)
01:06:124 (1,2) - 感覺結尾drum 聲不好聽，還是設auto就好?
01:14:124 (1,2) - 可對稱
01:16:791 (1) - finish忘了加?
01:31:458 (3) - 後面適合加finish阿
01:38:124 (1,2,3,4) - 不放四邊形感覺隨手亂擺。
01:46:124 (1,2,3,4) - 不會覺得1跟2看起來有點近? 重排吧
01:59:791 (1) - 為什麼只有這個spin在白線結尾，3個要統一。

[Normal]

00:17:128 (1) - 結尾忘了加whistle?
00:27:414 (1,2) - 這兩個滑的還蠻大聲的，或許你可以加個soft-sliderslide (靜滑條音)
00:34:791 (2,3) - 或許這兩者你可以對稱，保持好pattern。
00:36:791 (3,4,5) - DS
01:00:791 (1) - finish
01:04:124 (5) - 往前白線一格，因為01:02:458 (3) - 你這有跟到這怎沒跟
01:06:124 (8) - NC
01:13:124 (2) - 我覺得尾端紅線比較好，後面那幾個NOTE看看也能不能換成跟前面一樣滑條來放，似乎放的不合呢
01:19:458 (1,2) - 換成長條? 後面這段我感覺放節奏放的蠻鬆，擺滿白線看看? (有些同樣音軌還是放的不太一樣，再仔細觀察些?)

[Hard+]

00:15:842 (2,6) - 疊00:14:342 (4) 上?
00:17:985 (3,4) - 或許開頭能加whistle音
00:21:414 (3) - 感覺尾端少了whistle。
00:28:271 (3) - ^
00:28:914 (1) - 去掉whistle
00:35:125 (3) - 跟4疊在一起比較有感覺。
00:38:791 (6) - 或許能疊 00:39:458 (1)開頭，這邊太擠了。
00:44:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這些間距放開一點比較符合音樂。
00:49:458 (7) - 不疊3嗎
01:00:791 (8) - NC ?
01:03:958 (5) - 開頭應該是在後面紅線，跟01:03:458 (4) 可以大跳。
01:04:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這不是一組的，我覺得456，應該4要NC，然後456也可以大跳。
01:10:124 (1,3) - 間距拉開，不跳沒感覺。
01:13:958 (3,5) - 理由同 01:03:958 ， 你這 01:15:124 (1,2) 就有跟。
01:16:624 (6) - Test了一下蠻坑，沒節奏可以去掉。
01:19:458 (4,5,6,7) - 間距再拉開些
01:24:791 (1,2) - ^
01:29:458 (5) - 與其疊不如來個跳
01:31:458 (1,2,3,4) - 間距也拉開
01:37:124 (5,6) - ^
01:42:124 (6) - 你確定這可以?
01:47:624 (5,6) - 拉開
01:55:458 (5) - Drum好大聲，建議別選這音效?
01:58:958 (8) - 這個感覺也能跳


500 Post achieve!
Ikaros_F
88 posts
Joined December 2012
Ikaros_F
ZZZZZZZZZZZZ

[Hard]
00:30:200 (2) - 把这个2放在00:29:128 (2) - 这个2的位置会顺一点吧
00:44:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - 尝试一下改成这样的节奏？→http://puu.sh/777F9
00:53:291 (2,3,4) - 读图的时候会有点困难欸，建议把4移动到00:52:791 (1) - 的尾巴上
01:24:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得把2移动下面一点会顺一些→http://puu.sh/777Ud
01:35:458 (1) - 我觉得这样弄一个滑条不如弄成2个跳跃的Note好→http://puu.sh/7781R
01:53:291 (3,4) - ._.感觉跳跃难度大但是又感觉后面是滑条其实无所谓，呃呃呃，当我没说
关于音效的话，建议在00:34:791 ，00:36:125，00:37:458，00:38:791.......等地方加上clap吧
Hard+这种难度名真的可以嘛

[Normal]
00:36:791 (3,4,5) - 这个地方的DS是异类啊
01:10:124 (1) - DS，可以稍微移动一下._.

→ →，就这么多了，祝你早日康复 :) :) :)
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
:D
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
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rs_fadeaway
264 posts
Joined May 2010
rs_fadeaway
[medium]
01:03:447 - 改成这样吧
01:13:947 - 这里类似
01:25:780 - 这里开始
01:35:447 -
01:46:113 - 同上
尽量跟节奏吧，有多个音轨跟比较强的那个

[advanced]
第二个kiai排满点吧

[difficult]
01:16:613 (3) - 这里空更好
疯狂自建节奏不得不服

那么除了节奏我觉得很不舒服的就没啥说的了
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
觉得difficult的那个圈还可以再小一号。
然后第一个转盘那个地方转盘转成stream说不定打起来会更爽。
总体看来好像还是不够鬼畜，我觉得连打有点少但是又说不出来哪里少了。
作为一个新人，能找到的问题好像也就那么多了。
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

tm1209 wrote:

觉得difficult的那个圈还可以再小一号。本来的确是cs4但是我zz
然后第一个转盘那个地方转盘转成stream说不定打起来会更爽。那里有变速我没测 不能放连打不然会美丽
总体看来好像还是不够鬼畜，我觉得连打有点少但是又说不出来哪里少了。
作为一个新人，能找到的问题好像也就那么多了。
有个叫我是挂壁的让我帮你看图 但我最近比较busy 我之前简单看了下你图感觉排列问题还比较多你先改改日后有空我抽时间帮你mod一下
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW

ZZHBOY wrote:

tm1209 wrote:

觉得difficult的那个圈还可以再小一号。本来的确是cs4但是我zz
然后第一个转盘那个地方转盘转成stream说不定打起来会更爽。那里有变速我没测 不能放连打不然会美丽
总体看来好像还是不够鬼畜，我觉得连打有点少但是又说不出来哪里少了。
作为一个新人，能找到的问题好像也就那么多了。
有个叫我是挂壁的让我帮你看图 但我最近比较busy 我之前简单看了下你图感觉排列问题还比较多你先改改日后有空我抽时间帮你mod一下
嗯，好，我normal也快做完了，这样就有3diff了。
SuperHD
37 posts
Joined May 2013
SuperHD
[Difficult]
  1. 00:24:831 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个note打起来感觉不在一条直线上
  2. 01:15:947 (7,8,1) - 7,8号note跟滑条开头要在一条直线上？
  3. 01:21:113 (2) - 这个滑条跟1,3号滑条平行如何
;) 好图赞一个
[Medium]
  1. 00:23:760 (6) - 这个note可以跟5号滑条末尾、7号滑条开头呈直线
  2. 00:23:974 (1,2) - 1号滑条方向可以指向2，想来会整齐一些
  3. 00:23:974 (1,2) - 感觉距离有点近 :?
  4. 00:50:113 (1,2) - 同上 不过感觉良好一些 :roll:
  5. 01:44:113 (2) - 可以跟3号滑条开头再水平对齐一点
:roll:
毒奶粉啊 满满的高中三年的回忆啊 热赞一个
S o a p
359 posts
Joined March 2012
S o a p
[EZ]
00:50:113 (1,2) - blanket

[Medium]
01:48:280 (6,7) - 有点怪异

[Regraz's Advanced]
01:58:947 (1,2,3,4) - flow不好

[Difficult]
很多绿线没snap，还有好多没必要的绿线，自己选选裁掉吧
00:22:903 (4,6,2) - 对好
00:25:689 (1) - 这滑条弯过头了
00:27:403 - 这边几个边音量的地方太突兀了没必要
00:32:117 (4) - 声音太大
00:34:447 (2,3) - 和00:35:114 (4,5) - 间距差好多 大丈夫？
00:37:780 (4,5) - 间距好小，如果不动间距的话请(4)x76 y260
00:50:113 (1) - 这音量变得太突兀了
01:02:113 (1,2) - 节奏不好听
01:20:280 (4,3,4) - 隔远点
01:59:447 - 建议加个note，转盘往后移一格

美丽
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

S o a p wrote:

[EZ]
00:50:113 (1,2) - blanket哦草这也没包好啊

[Medium]
01:48:280 (6,7) - 有点怪异改了nc

[Regraz's Advanced]
01:58:947 (1,2,3,4) - flow不好

[Difficult]
很多绿线没snap，还有好多没必要的绿线，自己选选裁掉吧
00:22:903 (4,6,2) - 对好
00:25:689 (1) - 这滑条弯过头了好
00:27:403 - 这边几个边音量的地方太突兀了没必要
00:32:117 (4) - 声音太大
00:34:447 (2,3) - 和00:35:114 (4,5) - 间距差好多 大丈夫？空拍嘛
00:37:780 (4,5) - 间距好小，如果不动间距的话请(4)x76 y260移了点
00:50:113 (1) - 这音量变得太突兀了
01:02:113 (1,2) - 节奏不好听
01:20:280 (4,3,4) - 隔远点
01:59:447 - 建议加个note，转盘往后移一格好

美丽
thx for mod
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
1. Offset: 13,721ms BPM: 140.00
2. Offset: 33,006ms BPM: 150.00
3. Offset: 33,406ms BPM: 155.00
4. Offset: 33,779ms BPM: 160.00
5. Offset: 34,124ms BPM: 180.00

試試看 有問題的話最好再找更專業的timing
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,361 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Adjust a little, code here:
Regraz's CS3 大冒险
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32579
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 66958
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Evil Tower 1
TitleUnicode:Evil Tower 1
Artist:NEXON
ArtistUnicode:NEXON
Creator:ZZHBOY
Version:Regraz's Advanced
Source:Dungeon and Fighter Dungeon
Tags:DNF NEXON
BeatmapID:420030
BeatmapSetID:102913

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.3
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
什么req我忘记了

[General]
没有发现问题

[Difficult]
看起来还是像新人图
00:17:117 (1) - 这个中间的鼓是咋回事啊，前面几个小结都没有这里的鼓
00:20:546 (1) - ^
00:25:689 (1) - ctrlg一下
00:29:331 (2,3,4) - 这也太小了
00:46:447 (1,2) - 不建议这么放啊，看起来像是1/4
00:44:447 (5) - 不nc一发？
00:46:114 (6) - 和00:45:113 (2) - 重叠，柑橘flow更好些
00:52:780 (1,2) - 挨着了（原来是用cs4做的图？）
01:06:780 (3,4) - 拉远一点
01:29:113 (3,4) - 交换，打着顺一点

[Advanced]
00:27:831 (2,3) - 没包好
00:28:689 (1) - 不stack？
00:51:780 (4) - 翻过来貌似更好 ctrlh和ctrlj
01:36:280 (6,1) - 没包好

[Medium]
01:04:447 丢了？
01:15:113 也是

[Beginner]
还好

Good luck
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Yoshino-Sakura wrote:

什么req我忘记了

[General]
没有发现问题

[Difficult]
看起来还是像新人图;w;
00:17:117 (1) - 这个中间的鼓是咋回事啊，前面几个小结都没有这里的鼓?
00:20:546 (1) - ^
00:25:689 (1) - ctrlg一下
00:29:331 (2,3,4) - 这也太小了
00:46:447 (1,2) - 不建议这么放啊，看起来像是1/4
00:44:447 (5) - 不nc一发？好
00:46:114 (6) - 和00:45:113 (2) - 重叠，柑橘flow更好些
00:52:780 (1,2) - 挨着了（原来是用cs4做的图？）对!移开惹
01:06:780 (3,4) - 拉远一点
01:29:113 (3,4) - 交换，打着顺一点好

[Advanced]
00:27:831 (2,3) - 没包好
00:28:689 (1) - 不stack？
00:51:780 (4) - 翻过来貌似更好 ctrlh和ctrlj
01:36:280 (6,1) - 没包好

[Medium]
01:04:447 丢了？
01:15:113 也是
normal嘛 适当空一点
[Beginner]
还好

Good luck
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
m4m

[Medium]
00:21:403 (3,4) - 有点近 建议往下拉点 http://puu.sh/8LQiI.jpg
00:25:689 (4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/8LQjQ.jpg

[Regraz's Advanced]
00:36:114 (2) - ctrl g? 现在有点卡手
00:46:613 - add a note

[Diff]
00:14:117 (3,4) - 这个有点aji 你想怎么换都行 哪怕四方也行 现在这样不太好
00:27:188 (3) - 我感觉直到这里 你都可以绿线每段升高音量 第二段高 后面又逐渐降低
00:37:780 (4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/8LR8m.jpg 弧度太小 而且间距也很小 使得FLOW不好 也不好看 建议这样 http://puu.sh/8LRb3.jpg 后同
00:30:831 (1,2,3,4) - 为何不用旋转90度做风车？
00:50:113 (1) - 这边开始又是莫名降音
01:05:447 (1,2,3) - 这3个从音乐上来说应该是一个PART 然而从排列上你却将01:05:447 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这4个做成一个整体 这部太好 而且我从你前面那段激霸连打看来你想做有特色的东西 01:05:447 (9,10) - 这俩 其实可以做成1/4 slider
01:12:280 (6,8,9) - 看一下整体间距 http://puu.sh/8LQWF.jpg 何谓排列整洁 低头看看你的键盘 排列整齐吗? 数字键那里一圈 相同的间距 键盘那里相同的间距 每个部分都能看成一个整体
01:15:947 (1) - 如果这里想玩空拍 那就这个NC 不要后面长白线 按PART来NC会帮助读图
01:26:613 (5,6) - 不要overlap 十分屎
01:30:947 (4) - NC


有点乱.. 送你一句性液当时对我说过的话 我觉得你想法一直很好 不过细节实在是屎 你这排列跟谁学的啊 怎么这么乱 我当年排列也很屎 但是我至少还算整齐 你可以试试开DS 做个几张整齐的图再关DS
l4liko
1 post
Joined October 2010
l4liko
[Basic]

01:00:780 (3) - 全篇都是弯的，这也弄个形状吧
01:11:447 (1) - 折返，01:12:780 - 感觉这是弱
01:13:113 - 01:13:613 - 这样一个滑条才对
01:14:113 (1) - 这种3/2？
01:15:113 - 同上

[Medium]

00:47:947 (2) - ctrl+g？
01:02:447 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这段节奏不好，处理同Basic
01:14:113 (1) - 01:14:613 (2) - 01:15:113 (3) - 01:15:613 (4) - 分别1/1试试
01:17:447 (2) - 01:18:447 (3) - 分别1/1折返
01:19:447 (1) - 圈，01:19:613 (2) - 1/1滑条
01:20:780 (1) - 1/2折返2次并nc，01:21:447 (2) - 1/2折返2次
01:24:780 (1) - 圈，01:24:947 (2) - 3/2，01:25:780 (3) - 3/2，01:26:447 (4) - 圈，01:26:613 (5) - 1/1折返
01:36:113 (2) - 圈，01:36:447 (3) - 圈

[Regraz's Advanced]

01:02:447 (1) - 间距太大，不符合难度
01:13:113 (1) - 上

[Difficult]

ar-1或者od+1，不然太简单
00:43:947 (4) - 坑，换成两个圈多好
01:15:447 (6) - 折返
01:30:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列坑，01:30:947 (4,5,6) - 可以把这3个移开
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,361 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu

Yoshino-Sakura wrote:

什么req我忘记了

[Advanced]
00:27:831 (2,3) - 没包好 Fixed!
00:28:689 (1) - 不stack？不了，下面也有错位
00:51:780 (4) - 翻过来貌似更好 ctrlh和ctrlj 调整了一下
01:36:280 (6,1) - 没包好 改好了
Good luck
感谢615大大ww~~
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