骗
高bpm单点果然是打不起..
边缘可能可以多利用一下?
01:02:458 (2) - 01:42:124 (4) - 重拉
大概可以试试这些类型的?↓↓
别的什么想法都没有(
don't forget my kd
哭哭 泥萌都在不断进步
01:02:458 (2) - 01:42:124 (4) - 重拉
别的什么想法都没有(
don't forget my kd
哭哭 泥萌都在不断进步
感谢Panic Room wrote:
EASY
00:30:842 (1) - 转盘结尾换到00:32:342 EZ里转盘不敢弄太短 只是凑个时间._.
00:32:557 - 在这里加多一个转盘到00:33:842 - ^
NORMAL
00:27:414 (1,2,3,4) - 这一块可以alt拉开点
01:02:458 (3) - 节奏慢了半拍。滑条结尾收到01:02:958 - 记得后面的note用ds调回来done
01:13:124 (2) - 这根也是,同上收半拍done
01:16:124 (4) - 其实这里可以弄一根短来回滑条对应节奏done
Death
其实这个难度我感觉SV略低
音效也是变化无常,有些亮,不过更多的地方都是多余的,应该老实按着鼓点摆。
00:28:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这贪吃蛇我是不建议摆,还不如弄一个跳,并且躲在滑条下面的贪吃蛇更难受了。换成跳了
01:11:458 (1) - 转盘往后拉半拍,然后在这下一个note,节奏才对上,想留着的话就把转盘的音效变normal吧。done
01:32:791 (1,2,3,4) - 没有形成一条直线改成弯的了直线懒得摆
01:26:624 (3) - 尽量避免和上上个note重叠。这样会读图困难。要么在01:26:458 - 这里加多一个note要么就拉开吧。done
00:55:291 (7,1) - 滑条开头可不会出音效,要是想弄这样的节奏的话就把转盘拉后半拍,在00:55:458 - 这里加一个notedone
01:58:958 (5,6) - 依然会读图困难先留着._.
也没什么我能找到的问题了,起码比上一张良心多了不过那段来回又重叠的贪吃蛇真是二我一脸
good luck 祝您身提体前健射康精
感谢~etc wrote:
death
感覺180的圖被做成了90 有點興奮不起來 可以增加點連打之類的 然後做成鬼畜map wwww
00:49:458 (1) - ctrl+g done
01:20:791 - 這裡可以鬼畜一下我可是善良麻婆~所以这个难度不准备太难._.
normal
01:54:791 (1) - Qdone
01:56:791 (4) - ^done
easy
it‘s ok
============
祝好運
thx~smallboat wrote:
Hi,紙張男孩,久等啦,QQ Mod Req。
看你post數蠻少 建議找老爺跟拉克修和yuki來幫你看圖? 那是啥.-.
[General]
滑條後面最後那一個瞄點別漏出來呀..好多都這樣 @_@露出来多不美观 强迫症(?
小心被噴。
怎麼Death的kiai time不一樣? 统一了._.
[Easy]
01:27:458 (3) - 包住4 done
01:36:791 (3) - 3包2 done
01:40:791 (1) - 1包2 done
01:44:791 (2) - 太靠近3換個位置,弧度朝左邊不要右邊。 done
[Normal]
00:15:414 (4) - 後面白線有音 done
00:34:125 (1) - 離轉盤很遠,而且轉完後很難點到那一個圈,放中間點。 done
00:29:985 - 後面可以放,突然停頓蠻怪。 done
01:06:125 (1) - 折返三次容易斷,返一次就好 done
01:07:458 (2) - 怎麼這個變0.9x? 不是0.8x嘛,後面也是 done
01:10:124 (1) - 1包2 done
[Death]
00:26:128 (2,3) - 可跟00:26:557 (1,2) -作對稱 done
00:34:125 (1) - 音量40 或50,有點吵 done
00:44:125 (3) - NC done
00:52:458 (9) - 9疊到前面5上 done
01:04:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 試個等距來回? done
01:26:624 (4,5,6) - 可以跳 done 不过跳的有点奇怪QUQ
01:43:458 (1,2,3,4) - 四點呈一個正四方形 done
[Other]
1.如果有任何修改上的問題,可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Good Luck,祝Ranked.
3.多拉點人來看圖(?
Red——You must fix.ZZHBOY wrote:
smallboat wrote:
Hi,紙張男孩,久等啦,QQ Mod Req。
看你post數蠻少 建議找老爺跟拉克修和yuki來幫你看圖? 那是啥.-. 我就是Yuki
Fycho wrote:
hiBlack: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix[General]
- AImod里,那个stack leniency,绝对别乱动,建议改回0.7,它会毁你图的
Letterbox check下,看看是否要去掉
关于source和TAGs,最好加上DNF的英文名字 done
音效太简陋,你仔细听音乐,因为你BPM翻倍了,所以下2,4白线clap这些基本还是要做的,找个合适的做鼓点的snare加在每个第3梗白线上,整曲下满应该音效就足够了 没加因为加了音效感觉违和
Tick音别乱用啊,音效什么时候soft default什么时候SC1用的有点混乱条理不明,建议需要用tick的时候切换
所有难度KIAI time统一下 done
Combo的颜色不一样,自己看OSU文件里的代码[/color] done[Death]
整体:两段KIAI的结束时间毫无根据啊,在蓝线随便结束?建议移到白线上 done
间距十分随意,有的1/2的间距很大,这样会被喷diff spread的,因为你这样看着像normal到insane,这作为hard太难,而且你还OD7
例如
00:13:699 (1,2,3,4) –这个1/2大死了,00:21:200 (2) 00:35:125 (3,4) – 这些又太小,明显不符合歌曲氛围,你看一开始曲子是很缓的,到你第一个KIAI才开始变强烈
00:28:914 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – 这些跳也不符合歌曲氛围,后面才是KIAI,前面曲子也没这么激烈这么有必要跳,而KIAI又缩了,这样在难度平衡方面就很不好。
滑条身的whistle吵,加在首尾就行,一般别这么加,后同
00:21:414 (3,4,5) –在一条直线上flow打着不舒服,改成曲线试试 done
00:23:985 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –缩小点间距 done
00:29:771 (1,2,3,4) –如果你非要这么跳,请用工具摆正方形或者矩形,这个形状很难看啊 done
00:30:842 (1,2,3,4) –用复制粘贴旋转工具 不会QAQ
00:34:625 –我比较倾向于这里加note done
00:36:625 -^ done
00:38:125 (5,6) –间距太小容易误读,非要这样加NC done
00:41:958 (6) –这个去掉,打击感不好 done
00:42:458 (3,4,5,6) –正三角,别擦边 done
00:43:458 (1) –这里没减速的必要,减速很weird done
00:44:125 (1) –这里不跟鼓放串子?done
00:52:624 –加note done
00:55:291 (7) –这finish逗我吧?加到8上 done
00:55:624 (1) –加点音效在转盘上,建议音效组改成normal done
00:58:125 (1,2) –间距 done
01:02:458 (2) –这…也太难看了吧,拉拉好看啊两边都设置红点,别歪向一边done
01:03:291 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) –clap加的挺别扭音效删了
01:10:458 (1,1,1) –别乱NC,有点乱,去掉NC done
01:13:124 (1) –尾部finish去掉done
01:26:958 –跟鼓点下1/4节奏done
01:27:458 (1,2,3) –间距
01:29:458 (5) –finish吵而难听,这里应该是放snare的地方done
01:42:124 (4) –重拉 done
01:43:791 (2) –向另一个方向凹凸done
01:44:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –没有增加间距的必要这样好玩QUQ
01:46:291 (2) –去掉尾finishdone
01:56:791 (1,2,1) –间距,容易误读done
01:58:791 –加notedone
01:59:458 -^done[Noraml]因为是normal所以就弄简单点惹节奏有点无聊,排列可以加强,还有要加音效
00:47:458 (3,5) –overlap移开了
01:03:458 (1,2) –这里跟音乐下,http://puu.sh/4SY4o.jpg改成那样惹
01:46:124 (2,3,4,5) –这轨迹flow不好,建议改流线型done[Easy]找不到适合这曲的音效QAQ
00:56:791 –搞不懂break拉到这干嘛,完全没必要提前了
还有要加音效,别的似乎都可以
最后祝你身体健康,please reply to my mod thanks
原来:x-x x---x01:02:458 - 01:16:124 + 01:13:124 - 01:16:791 --> 能跟旋律就跟旋律,跟线不好
修改:x x-x x-x
感谢hoshisorakiseki wrote:
from qq
全局:
这个诡异的歌名...建议找一个trackid之类的软件识别一下歌名。
然后艺术家写nexon比较好,将原艺术家移到source中
接着tag补上几个译名更好:“地下城与勇士”、“アラド戦記”(印象中是这个名字)、毒奶粉、老马、网络连接中断、小霸王服务器、等等......
AiMod好像有几个报错,看一下done
难度:Easy
00:43:458 (2,1) - 看下面这样滑条尾重音感觉得不偿失就没改了原来:x-x x---x01:02:458 - 01:16:124 + 01:13:124 - 01:16:791 --> 能跟旋律就跟旋律,跟线不好ez嘛 根线摆摆可以了
修改:x x-x x-x
难度:Normal
00:17:128 (1,2) - 这里变成两个sliderno
01:02:458 - 01:16:124 + 01:13:124 - 01:16:791 -->同Easyno
难度:Hard+
00:19:485 + 00:20:432 + 00:22:485 + 00:22:914 + 00:23:342 + 00:23:771 + 01:55:124 + 01:56:458 --> 漏音fixed some
01:02:458 (2) - 带有争议性的slider
01:42:124 (6) - 同上这种先保留看后面modder怎么说
加油
音效部分基本都改了 不过没用finish而是whistle和drumhit thxNightNine wrote:
你们怎么都在打童年牌...QAQ
Easy:
00:20:557 (1) - 开头 add finish
00:29:128 (3,4) - 间距没ds稍微大了一点点
00:39:458 (1) - 开头 finish
00:42:124 (1) - 开头 finish
00:44:791 (1) - 结尾 finish
00:48:791 (2) - 结尾 finish
01:06:124 (1) - 开头 finish
01:11:458 (1) - 开头 finish
01:22:791 (1) - finish
01:27:458 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:33:458 (1) - finish
01:43:458 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:48:791 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:54:124 (1) - 结尾 finish
01:55:458 (2) - 结尾 finish
Normal
00:13:699-00:32:126
http://puu.sh/71gcB 建议用这个音效 作为hitnormal
00:17:128 (1) - 开头 Whistle
00:20:557 (1) - finish & whistle
00:23:985 (1) - remove whistle add finish
01:06:124 (8) - 开头finish
01:12:124 (3) - finish
01:28:124 (1) - finish
01:33:458 (3) - 开头finish
01:48:791 (1) - finish
01:54:791 (1) - finish
01:55:458 (3) - 结尾finish
01:33:458 (3) - 开头finish
Hard+:
00:52:458 (8,9) - stack http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0d3M72
00:53:291 (2,3,1) - http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bn06yB1
01:25:458 (1) - NC
01:25:458 (1) - Remove NC
有个叫我是挂壁的让我帮你看图 但我最近比较busy 我之前简单看了下你图感觉排列问题还比较多你先改改日后有空我抽时间帮你mod一下tm1209 wrote:
觉得difficult的那个圈还可以再小一号。本来的确是cs4但是我zz
然后第一个转盘那个地方转盘转成stream说不定打起来会更爽。那里有变速我没测 不能放连打不然会美丽
总体看来好像还是不够鬼畜,我觉得连打有点少但是又说不出来哪里少了。
作为一个新人,能找到的问题好像也就那么多了。
嗯,好,我normal也快做完了,这样就有3diff了。ZZHBOY wrote:
有个叫我是挂壁的让我帮你看图 但我最近比较busy 我之前简单看了下你图感觉排列问题还比较多你先改改日后有空我抽时间帮你mod一下tm1209 wrote:
觉得difficult的那个圈还可以再小一号。本来的确是cs4但是我zz
然后第一个转盘那个地方转盘转成stream说不定打起来会更爽。那里有变速我没测 不能放连打不然会美丽
总体看来好像还是不够鬼畜,我觉得连打有点少但是又说不出来哪里少了。
作为一个新人,能找到的问题好像也就那么多了。
thx for modS o a p wrote:
[EZ]
00:50:113 (1,2) - blanket哦草这也没包好啊
[Medium]
01:48:280 (6,7) - 有点怪异改了nc
[Regraz's Advanced]
01:58:947 (1,2,3,4) - flow不好
[Difficult]
很多绿线没snap,还有好多没必要的绿线,自己选选裁掉吧
00:22:903 (4,6,2) - 对好
00:25:689 (1) - 这滑条弯过头了好
00:27:403 - 这边几个边音量的地方太突兀了没必要
00:32:117 (4) - 声音太大
00:34:447 (2,3) - 和00:35:114 (4,5) - 间距差好多 大丈夫?空拍嘛
00:37:780 (4,5) - 间距好小,如果不动间距的话请(4)x76 y260移了点
00:50:113 (1) - 这音量变得太突兀了
01:02:113 (1,2) - 节奏不好听
01:20:280 (4,3,4) - 隔远点
01:59:447 - 建议加个note,转盘往后移一格好
美丽
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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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342,238,105780,2,0,L|433:243,1,81.25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,110,106113,2,0,L|301:27,1,81.25,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,173,106447,2,0,P|255:191|295:186,2,81.25,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,164,106947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,274,107114,6,0,P|232:305|330:286,1,162.5,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,273,107613,2,0,L|481:221,1,81.25,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,97,107947,2,0,L|398:45,1,81.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,161,108280,2,0,L|310:213,1,81.25,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,337,108614,2,0,L|393:389,1,81.25,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,340,108947,6,0,P|249:348|209:342,2,81.25,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,223,109447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,209,109780,6,0,P|201:200|161:206,2,81.25,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,159,110280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,212,110447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
463,229,110780,6,0,B|470:261|470:261|465:290|471:325,1,81.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,144,111113,2,0,B|343:112|343:112|348:83|342:48,1,81.25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,265,111447,2,0,P|257:265|224:278,1,81.25,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,78,111947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,94,112280,2,0,L|193:96,1,81.25,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,164,112613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,242,112780,6,0,B|157:248|157:248|123:278|98:280,1,81.25,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,153,113113,2,0,B|329:147|329:147|363:117|388:115,1,81.25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,137,113447,2,0,P|158:112|118:110,1,81.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,247,113780,2,0,P|354:272|394:274,1,81.25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,102,114113,5,4,0:0:0:0:
358,62,114280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,127,114447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,94,114613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,179,114780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,197,115113,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,237,115280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,172,115447,1,4,0:0:0:0:
397,205,115613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,120,115780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,106,116113,6,0,L|501:22,1,81.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,215,116447,2,0,L|380:299,1,81.25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,309,116780,2,0,P|206:302|164:313,1,81.25,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,306,117113,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,204,117280,2,0,L|93:121,2,81.25,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,182,117780,6,0,B|310:164|310:164|341:122|397:111,1,162.5,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,241,118280,2,0,P|442:281|445:325,1,81.25,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,288,118613,2,0,P|329:333|314:375,1,81.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,315,118947,5,0,0:0:0:0:
194,353,119030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,383,119113,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,289,119280,2,0,P|55:321|13:335,1,81.25,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,119530,12,0,124530,0:0:0:0:
Yoshino-Sakura wrote:
什么req我忘记了
[General]
没有发现问题
[Difficult]
看起来还是像新人图;w;
00:17:117 (1) - 这个中间的鼓是咋回事啊,前面几个小结都没有这里的鼓?
00:20:546 (1) - ^
00:25:689 (1) - ctrlg一下
00:29:331 (2,3,4) - 这也太小了
00:46:447 (1,2) - 不建议这么放啊,看起来像是1/4
00:44:447 (5) - 不nc一发?好
00:46:114 (6) - 和00:45:113 (2) - 重叠,柑橘flow更好些
00:52:780 (1,2) - 挨着了(原来是用cs4做的图?)对!移开惹
01:06:780 (3,4) - 拉远一点
01:29:113 (3,4) - 交换,打着顺一点好
[Advanced]
00:27:831 (2,3) - 没包好
00:28:689 (1) - 不stack?
00:51:780 (4) - 翻过来貌似更好 ctrlh和ctrlj
01:36:280 (6,1) - 没包好
[Medium]
01:04:447 丢了?
01:15:113 也是
normal嘛 适当空一点
[Beginner]
还好
Good luck