44teru-k - Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~ · forum

[Twinkle]

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-10T11:31:52+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月2日 at 10:44:03

Artist: 44teru-k
Title: Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~
Source: BMS
Tags: xholic Stream [Minakami_Yuki]
BPM: 156
Filesize: 4358kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (4.85 stars, 290 notes)
Another (5 stars, 593 notes)
Beginner (1.63 stars, 84 notes)
Hyper (4.96 stars, 552 notes)
Standard (3.28 stars, 111 notes)
Yuki's Extra (5 stars, 668 notes)

Download: 44teru-k - Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~
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44teru-k
Yuki's Extra - Minakami Yuki

Last edited by [Twinkle] 2015-05-19T12:28:54+00:00, edited 152 times in total.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-02-11T16:07:18+00:00

加油(/・ω・＼)

Jemmmmy

526 posts

Joined September 2012

Jemmmmy 2014-02-11T16:18:52+00:00

IRC

2014-02-10 22:47 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QOYc.png
2014-02-10 22:47 Jemmmmy: 1459
2014-02-10 22:47 Jemmmmy: 等等
2014-02-10 22:47 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QOZo.png 点中一个绿线然后ctrl+a全选
2014-02-10 22:48 Jemmmmy: 然后http://puu.sh/6QP18.png 填上1459
2014-02-10 22:48 Jemmmmy: 点move
2014-02-10 22:49 [Twinkle]: 我找找~
2014-02-10 22:50 Jemmmmy: 一般重音都是落在白线上
2014-02-10 22:50 [Twinkle]: 咦这样move完了note歪了
2014-02-10 22:50 [Twinkle]: 偏前面一点
2014-02-10 22:50 Jemmmmy: 然后compse里点空白处
2014-02-10 22:50 Jemmmmy: 按ctrl+a全选
2014-02-10 22:51 [Twinkle]: 嗯
2014-02-10 22:51 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QP74.jpg
2014-02-10 22:51 Jemmmmy: 这里拖动所有note
2014-02-10 22:51 Jemmmmy: 到线上
2014-02-10 22:52 Jemmmmy: 最早的note对上红线
2014-02-10 22:52 [Twinkle]: 嗯对准了
2014-02-10 22:53 Jemmmmy: ctrl+shift+a
2014-02-10 22:53 Jemmmmy: 打开auto mod
2014-02-10 22:53 Jemmmmy: 就是电脑检测哪里有rank的问题
2014-02-10 22:53 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QPaZ.png
2014-02-10 22:53 [Twinkle]: 全都要改吗？
2014-02-10 22:54 Jemmmmy: 他说你滑条尾没有对齐到线上
2014-02-10 22:54 Jemmmmy: 对的
2014-02-10 22:54 Jemmmmy: 稍微移动下滑条的描点改变滑条长度
2014-02-10 22:54 [Twinkle]: 改了offset绿线都错了
2014-02-10 22:55 Jemmmmy: ...
2014-02-10 22:55 Jemmmmy: 等等
2014-02-10 22:56 Jemmmmy: 你先出去外面更新到你之前的
2014-02-10 22:56 Jemmmmy: 我看看offset怎么调
2014-02-10 22:56 [Twinkle]: 没事
2014-02-10 22:57 [Twinkle]: 那就几根绿线我手动改一下
2014-02-10 22:57 Jemmmmy: 不用
2014-02-10 22:57 Jemmmmy: 第一根红线offset是1459
2014-02-10 22:57 Jemmmmy: 其他绿线offset+17
2014-02-10 22:58 Jemmmmy: 然后音量不推荐100,
2014-02-10 22:58 Jemmmmy: 70,60差不多了
2014-02-10 22:59 [Twinkle]: 音量在哪?
2014-02-10 23:00 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QPmN.png
2014-02-10 23:00 Jemmmmy: audio
2014-02-10 23:01 [Twinkle]: 调好了
2014-02-10 23:01 [Twinkle]: 绿线我还是没弄准..
2014-02-10 23:01 Jemmmmy: 0.0
2014-02-10 23:01 Jemmmmy: 。没有回到上传得状态？
2014-02-10 23:01 [Twinkle]: 好
2014-02-10 23:02 Jemmmmy: 。。现在回到上传得状态了？
2014-02-10 23:02 Jemmmmy: 的
2014-02-10 23:02 [Twinkle]: 红线1459然后其他加17?
2014-02-10 23:02 Jemmmmy: 对
2014-02-10 23:04 [Twinkle]: 太厉害了OwO
2014-02-10 23:04 Jemmmmy: 。。0.0
2014-02-10 23:05 Jemmmmy: 然后是new combo的添加
2014-02-10 23:05 Jemmmmy: 不，你先上传下
2014-02-10 23:06 [Twinkle]: 嗯
2014-02-10 23:06 [Twinkle]: 好啦
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 00:26:074 (1,2,1,2) -
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 等等
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 当我没发现
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 发，
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 先
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 00:37:997 (11) - nc
2014-02-10 23:08 Jemmmmy: new combo
2014-02-10 23:08 [Twinkle]: 嗯
2014-02-10 23:08 Jemmmmy: 00:42:997 (11) - nc
2014-02-10 23:09 Jemmmmy: 00:57:997 (9) - nc
2014-02-10 23:09 Jemmmmy: 00:58:574 (1) - 取消nc
2014-02-10 23:10 [Twinkle]: 加这个NC很讲究吗?
2014-02-10 23:10 Jemmmmy: 00:59:536 (8,14,20,26) - nc
2014-02-10 23:10 [Twinkle]: 还是比较随意?
2014-02-10 23:10 Jemmmmy: 不能过长
2014-02-10 23:10 Jemmmmy: 一般一小节一次nc
2014-02-10 23:11 Jemmmmy: 还有一些读图难点，变速滑条也要nc
2014-02-10 23:11 Jemmmmy: 01:09:151 (11) - nc
2014-02-10 23:11 Jemmmmy: 01:14:343 (14) - nc
2014-02-10 23:12 Jemmmmy: 01:56:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: ...
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: 这个这么方便
2014-02-10 23:13 Jemmmmy: 。。
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: 都没发现0.0
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: 下次可以用了
2014-02-10 23:13 Jemmmmy: 嗯快捷键都在http://puu.sh/6QPNn.png
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: 哈哈
2014-02-10 23:13 Jemmmmy: 然后是摆放点，
2014-02-10 23:14 Jemmmmy: 第一张是做的算挺干净的
2014-02-10 23:14 [Twinkle]: 之前也有乱做过..
2014-02-10 23:14 Jemmmmy: QAQ
2014-02-10 23:15 Jemmmmy: 00:07:613 (1,2) - 这种滑条互相重叠的最好少用，如果不是特意的话
2014-02-10 23:15 [Twinkle]: 好的
2014-02-10 23:16 Jemmmmy: 貌似这些滑条都是一个个手拉的
2014-02-10 23:16 Jemmmmy: 你可以选中第一个滑条
2014-02-10 23:16 Jemmmmy: ctrl+c
2014-02-10 23:16 [Twinkle]: http://puu.sh/6QPSP.png
2014-02-10 23:16 [Twinkle]: 现在还有这些
2014-02-10 23:17 [Twinkle]: 主要我之前ctrl+G不会用
2014-02-10 23:17 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QPUm.png
2014-02-10 23:17 Jemmmmy: 这里最好不要动，原本是7
2014-02-10 23:17 Jemmmmy: 0.7
2014-02-10 23:17 Jemmmmy: 选中第一个滑条 ctrl+c复制
2014-02-10 23:17 [Twinkle]: 嗯改回来了
2014-02-10 23:18 Jemmmmy: 鼠标滚轮滚到后面的时间点 ctrl+v粘贴
2014-02-10 23:18 Jemmmmy: 出现一样的滑条
2014-02-10 23:18 Jemmmmy: 然后ctrl+shift+r旋转工具
2014-02-10 23:18 [Twinkle]: 嗯这个我会了
2014-02-10 23:18 Jemmmmy: ，，
2014-02-10 23:19 Jemmmmy: 00:26:074 (1,2,1,2,3) - 这里太空荡了
2014-02-10 23:21 Jemmmmy: 后面的婆婆style能打其实挺好玩
2014-02-10 23:21 [Twinkle]: 前面的滑条需要加东西吗?
2014-02-10 23:21 Jemmmmy: 加东西？
2014-02-10 23:21 [Twinkle]: 用AHO那个摆法好了
2014-02-10 23:22 [Twinkle]: 滑条起点8分拍
2014-02-10 23:23 Jemmmmy: 0.0.8分拍？
2014-02-10 23:24 [Twinkle]: 就是原来滑条起点放一个note
2014-02-10 23:24 [Twinkle]: 滑条推迟8分之一拍
2014-02-10 23:24 Jemmmmy: 哦
2014-02-10 23:24 Jemmmmy: ，，也可以
2014-02-10 23:24 Jemmmmy: 其实你想到什么就下
2014-02-10 23:25 Jemmmmy: 前几张图要实验多一点
2014-02-10 23:25 Jemmmmy: 不用参照太多，毕竟你见的图也挺多了
2014-02-10 23:29 [Twinkle]: 嗯,那我自己改拉,谢谢黑子姐姐试图><
2014-02-10 23:29 Jemmmmy: 0.0嗯好
2014-02-11 00:55 [Twinkle]: 更新啦~
2014-02-11 00:55 [Twinkle]: 应该好一些了
2014-02-11 00:55 Jemmmmy: 0.0
2014-02-11 00:56 Jemmmmy: 那我再试试
2014-02-11 00:56 [Twinkle]: ;D
2014-02-11 01:01 Jemmmmy: 0.0嗯
2014-02-11 01:01 Jemmmmy: 还不错。你现在是对称图
2014-02-11 01:02 [Twinkle]: 对称方便嘛
2014-02-11 01:02 Jemmmmy: 不过不过没有对称的时候还是要注意下移动流向
2014-02-11 01:02 Jemmmmy: 多比划比划就好
2014-02-11 01:02 Jemmmmy: 也不用多说
2014-02-11 01:33 [Twinkle]: 额，可能他们没点更新
2014-02-11 01:40 [Twinkle]: 对了，转盘要怎么加呀？
2014-02-11 01:41 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QVge.jpg\
2014-02-11 01:41 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QVge.jpg
2014-02-11 01:43 [Twinkle]: 不能设置到哪里转多少分吗？
2014-02-11 01:43 Jemmmmy: 不能呢
2014-02-11 01:43 Jemmmmy: 转盘转的分数跟od有关
2014-02-11 01:44 [Twinkle]: 。额
2014-02-11 01:44 Jemmmmy: 也跟转盘长度有关
2014-02-11 01:44 [Twinkle]: 其实我才知道
2014-02-11 01:44 [Twinkle]: QAQ
2014-02-11 01:44 Jemmmmy: 分数不是直接跟od相关，是od小的话转盘就容易到达300点
2014-02-11 21:29 [Twinkle]: 黑子~我又弄了三个难度OwO
2014-02-11 21:29 Jemmmmy: 0.0
2014-02-11 21:31 [Twinkle]: 额，反正我最近闲;D
2014-02-11 21:31 [Twinkle]: 感觉还要个insane？
2014-02-11 21:31 [Twinkle]: 弄了EZ NM HD
2014-02-11 21:31 Jemmmmy: ex名字改成another就行
2014-02-11 21:31 Jemmmmy: 不一定要insane
2014-02-11 21:32 [Twinkle]: 嗯，好的
2014-02-11 21:32 [Twinkle]: 还有好多东西不会QAQ
2014-02-11 21:33 Jemmmmy: 。。低难度 normal和ez要一直开着distance snap做
2014-02-11 21:33 Jemmmmy: 就是你只能选定一个距离
2014-02-11 21:34 [Twinkle]: 。。但是遇到暂停呢
2014-02-11 21:34 [Twinkle]: 或者我故意想空开一段
2014-02-11 21:34 Jemmmmy: 可以缩小间距
2014-02-11 21:34 Jemmmmy: 那样的话
2014-02-11 21:35 [Twinkle]: 嗯，那我改一下先，看下hd吧
2014-02-11 21:37 Jemmmmy: 00:22:035 (2,1) - hard里这种不好的overlap要改呢
2014-02-11 21:38 Jemmmmy: 00:56:074 (3,1) - 这里也是overlap
2014-02-11 21:38 [Twinkle]: overlap是？
2014-02-11 21:38 Jemmmmy: 01:26:266 (2,3) - 重叠
2014-02-11 21:38 Jemmmmy: 一般指不好的重叠
2014-02-11 21:39 Jemmmmy: 改的话就是令他们没有重叠就行
2014-02-11 21:39 [Twinkle]: 嗯知道了
2014-02-11 21:40 Jemmmmy: 然后滑条。2分以上的滑条最好不要出现1个折返以上
2014-02-11 21:40 Jemmmmy: 比如你在normal里面的 00:32:228 (1) -
2014-02-11 21:41 Jemmmmy: 这些要拆开来
2014-02-11 21:41 Jemmmmy: 00:50:689 (3) - 这个有时候用用还可以
2014-02-11 21:42 Jemmmmy: 这些短滑条来回折返01:55:305 (5,6,7,8) - 是可以的
2014-02-11 21:43 Jemmmmy: 但是最好保持各各滑条的折返数相同
2014-02-11 21:53 Jemmmmy: .。刚掉线了
2014-02-11 21:53 Jemmmmy: 我说到哪
2014-02-11 21:53 [Twinkle]: 21:42
2014-02-11 21:54 [Twinkle]: 折返是可以的那里
2014-02-11 21:54 Jemmmmy: 。。哦然后最好保持滑条折返数相同
2014-02-11 21:56 [Twinkle]: ez改了一下
2014-02-11 21:59 Jemmmmy: ..所以ez是想用distance 0.6X还是1.0X
2014-02-11 21:59 [Twinkle]: 用0.6的话滑条就出现重叠了orz
2014-02-11 22:01 Jemmmmy: 嗯但是只能选一个距离一直用呢..重叠就得想办法令他们重叠得不难看
2014-02-11 22:01 Jemmmmy: 然后没有hitsound是不行的呢
2014-02-11 22:01 [Twinkle]: 咦可以重叠的吗？
2014-02-11 22:02 Jemmmmy: 可以呀,只是好不好看的问题
2014-02-11 22:32 [Twinkle]: 改好拉
2014-02-11 22:36 Jemmmmy: .....
2014-02-11 22:37 Jemmmmy: 你需要打开automod
2014-02-11 22:43 Jemmmmy: 00:52:228 (4,5) - normal
2014-02-11 22:43 Jemmmmy: 没有完全重叠,英文就是not snap well
2014-02-11 23:09 Jemmmmy: ..网有点差啊
2014-02-11 23:09 [Twinkle]: 嗯
2014-02-11 23:10 [Twinkle]: 那个滑条的末尾就不是Grid怎么办
2014-02-11 23:10 [Twinkle]: 关Grid调？
2014-02-11 23:10 Jemmmmy: 这是一个办法
2014-02-11 23:10 Jemmmmy: 一般就是重新画一个

咲夜上上

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-11T17:23:41+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
加油(/・ω・＼)

谢谢~

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-02-12T23:13:42+00:00

Hi ~~ modding back from my Q

[General]
Need Insane diff (poor difficulty distribution)
Your HP OD are pretty low

[Easy]
00:18:382 (4,5,1) - I wouldn't in a 1 star easy diff. They aren't even stacked properly
00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - equally stack them

[Normal]
00:16:843 (1,2) - blanket properly
00:18:382 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - very confusing to me (cuz of stream beat)

SPOILER

00:21:459 (3) - NC
00:22:997 (6) - NC
00:24:535 (8) - NC
00:35:689 (5) - NC
00:37:997 (5) - add a circle here, feels too empty
01:09:151 (7) - NC
01:24:535 (3) - NC
01:27:612 (1) - NC
01:32:997 (4,5) - I wouldn't stack these
01:49:151 (5) - NC
01:53:766 (3,4) - I wouldn't overlap like this
01:55:305 (5) - NC
01:58:766 (5) - make it a circle with NC

[Hard]
Seems a bit too hard
00:18:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - as normal
00:23:574 (2,3,4,1) - hard for a 4.5 star hard
00:29:151 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - lame
00:32:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I consider this as over mapping hard. Sliders please?
00:44:920 (3,4,1,2) - I think this pattern is way too hard for hard diff
01:02:997 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - reduce distance?
01:06:074 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you have to fix this
01:58:766 (7) - NC

[Another]
Sorry I failed

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-13T06:18:55+00:00

[quote="No Dap"]Hi ~~ modding back from my Q

[General]
Need Insane diff (poor difficulty distribution) I am considering making a insane diff
Your HP OD are pretty low Easy:HP+1 normal:HP+1 OD+1 Hard:OD+1

[Easy]
00:18:382 (4,5,1) - I wouldn't in a 1 star easy diff. They aren't even stacked properly fixed
00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - equally stack them fixed

[Normal]
00:16:843 (1,2) - blanket properly moved the second slider away
00:18:382 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - very confusing to me (cuz of stream beat) changed that 6 notes to 2 sliders

SPOILER

00:21:459 (3) - NC fixed
00:22:997 (6) - NC fixed
00:24:535 (8) - NC fixed
00:35:689 (5) - NC fixed
00:37:997 (5) - add a circle here, feels too empty added
01:09:151 (7) - NC fixed
01:24:535 (3) - NC fixed
01:27:612 (1) - NC fixed
01:32:997 (4,5) - I wouldn't stack these changed it back to normal
01:49:151 (5) - NC fixed
01:53:766 (3,4) - I wouldn't overlap like this fixed
01:55:305 (5) - NC fixed
01:58:766 (5) - make it a circle with NC fixed

[Hard]
Seems a bit too hard I changed the DS to make it easier :/
00:18:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - as normal changed to slider
00:23:574 (2,3,4,1) - hard for a 4.5 star hard made them closer to each other
00:29:151 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - lame I think it is fine
00:32:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I consider this as over mapping hard. Sliders please? I think make it all notes will describe the rhythm better
00:44:920 (3,4,1,2) - I think this pattern is way too hard for hard diff changed them much closer
01:02:997 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - reduce distance? fixed
01:06:074 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you have to fix this made it much easier
01:58:766 (7) - NC fixed

[Another]
Sorry I failed

Thank you! Great improvment

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-13T06:20:21+00:00

Jemmmmy wrote:
IRC
2014-02-10 22:47 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QOYc.png
2014-02-10 22:47 Jemmmmy: 1459
2014-02-10 22:47 Jemmmmy: 等等
2014-02-10 22:47 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QOZo.png 点中一个绿线然后ctrl+a全选
2014-02-10 22:48 Jemmmmy: 然后http://puu.sh/6QP18.png 填上1459
2014-02-10 22:48 Jemmmmy: 点move
2014-02-10 22:49 [Twinkle]: 我找找~
2014-02-10 22:50 Jemmmmy: 一般重音都是落在白线上
2014-02-10 22:50 [Twinkle]: 咦这样move完了note歪了
2014-02-10 22:50 [Twinkle]: 偏前面一点
2014-02-10 22:50 Jemmmmy: 然后compse里点空白处
2014-02-10 22:50 Jemmmmy: 按ctrl+a全选
2014-02-10 22:51 [Twinkle]: 嗯
2014-02-10 22:51 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QP74.jpg
2014-02-10 22:51 Jemmmmy: 这里拖动所有note
2014-02-10 22:51 Jemmmmy: 到线上
2014-02-10 22:52 Jemmmmy: 最早的note对上红线
2014-02-10 22:52 [Twinkle]: 嗯对准了
2014-02-10 22:53 Jemmmmy: ctrl+shift+a
2014-02-10 22:53 Jemmmmy: 打开auto mod
2014-02-10 22:53 Jemmmmy: 就是电脑检测哪里有rank的问题
2014-02-10 22:53 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QPaZ.png
2014-02-10 22:53 [Twinkle]: 全都要改吗？
2014-02-10 22:54 Jemmmmy: 他说你滑条尾没有对齐到线上
2014-02-10 22:54 Jemmmmy: 对的
2014-02-10 22:54 Jemmmmy: 稍微移动下滑条的描点改变滑条长度
2014-02-10 22:54 [Twinkle]: 改了offset绿线都错了
2014-02-10 22:55 Jemmmmy: ...
2014-02-10 22:55 Jemmmmy: 等等
2014-02-10 22:56 Jemmmmy: 你先出去外面更新到你之前的
2014-02-10 22:56 Jemmmmy: 我看看offset怎么调
2014-02-10 22:56 [Twinkle]: 没事
2014-02-10 22:57 [Twinkle]: 那就几根绿线我手动改一下
2014-02-10 22:57 Jemmmmy: 不用
2014-02-10 22:57 Jemmmmy: 第一根红线offset是1459
2014-02-10 22:57 Jemmmmy: 其他绿线offset+17
2014-02-10 22:58 Jemmmmy: 然后音量不推荐100,
2014-02-10 22:58 Jemmmmy: 70,60差不多了
2014-02-10 22:59 [Twinkle]: 音量在哪?
2014-02-10 23:00 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QPmN.png
2014-02-10 23:00 Jemmmmy: audio
2014-02-10 23:01 [Twinkle]: 调好了
2014-02-10 23:01 [Twinkle]: 绿线我还是没弄准..
2014-02-10 23:01 Jemmmmy: 0.0
2014-02-10 23:01 Jemmmmy: 。没有回到上传得状态？
2014-02-10 23:01 [Twinkle]: 好
2014-02-10 23:02 Jemmmmy: 。。现在回到上传得状态了？
2014-02-10 23:02 Jemmmmy: 的
2014-02-10 23:02 [Twinkle]: 红线1459然后其他加17?
2014-02-10 23:02 Jemmmmy: 对
2014-02-10 23:04 [Twinkle]: 太厉害了OwO
2014-02-10 23:04 Jemmmmy: 。。0.0
2014-02-10 23:05 Jemmmmy: 然后是new combo的添加
2014-02-10 23:05 Jemmmmy: 不，你先上传下
2014-02-10 23:06 [Twinkle]: 嗯
2014-02-10 23:06 [Twinkle]: 好啦
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 00:26:074 (1,2,1,2) -
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 等等
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 当我没发现
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 发，
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 先
2014-02-10 23:07 Jemmmmy: 00:37:997 (11) - nc
2014-02-10 23:08 Jemmmmy: new combo
2014-02-10 23:08 [Twinkle]: 嗯
2014-02-10 23:08 Jemmmmy: 00:42:997 (11) - nc
2014-02-10 23:09 Jemmmmy: 00:57:997 (9) - nc
2014-02-10 23:09 Jemmmmy: 00:58:574 (1) - 取消nc
2014-02-10 23:10 [Twinkle]: 加这个NC很讲究吗?
2014-02-10 23:10 Jemmmmy: 00:59:536 (8,14,20,26) - nc
2014-02-10 23:10 [Twinkle]: 还是比较随意?
2014-02-10 23:10 Jemmmmy: 不能过长
2014-02-10 23:10 Jemmmmy: 一般一小节一次nc
2014-02-10 23:11 Jemmmmy: 还有一些读图难点，变速滑条也要nc
2014-02-10 23:11 Jemmmmy: 01:09:151 (11) - nc
2014-02-10 23:11 Jemmmmy: 01:14:343 (14) - nc
2014-02-10 23:12 Jemmmmy: 01:56:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: ...
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: 这个这么方便
2014-02-10 23:13 Jemmmmy: 。。
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: 都没发现0.0
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: 下次可以用了
2014-02-10 23:13 Jemmmmy: 嗯快捷键都在http://puu.sh/6QPNn.png
2014-02-10 23:13 [Twinkle]: 哈哈
2014-02-10 23:13 Jemmmmy: 然后是摆放点，
2014-02-10 23:14 Jemmmmy: 第一张是做的算挺干净的
2014-02-10 23:14 [Twinkle]: 之前也有乱做过..
2014-02-10 23:14 Jemmmmy: QAQ
2014-02-10 23:15 Jemmmmy: 00:07:613 (1,2) - 这种滑条互相重叠的最好少用，如果不是特意的话
2014-02-10 23:15 [Twinkle]: 好的
2014-02-10 23:16 Jemmmmy: 貌似这些滑条都是一个个手拉的
2014-02-10 23:16 Jemmmmy: 你可以选中第一个滑条
2014-02-10 23:16 Jemmmmy: ctrl+c
2014-02-10 23:16 [Twinkle]: http://puu.sh/6QPSP.png
2014-02-10 23:16 [Twinkle]: 现在还有这些
2014-02-10 23:17 [Twinkle]: 主要我之前ctrl+G不会用
2014-02-10 23:17 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QPUm.png
2014-02-10 23:17 Jemmmmy: 这里最好不要动，原本是7
2014-02-10 23:17 Jemmmmy: 0.7
2014-02-10 23:17 Jemmmmy: 选中第一个滑条 ctrl+c复制
2014-02-10 23:17 [Twinkle]: 嗯改回来了
2014-02-10 23:18 Jemmmmy: 鼠标滚轮滚到后面的时间点 ctrl+v粘贴
2014-02-10 23:18 Jemmmmy: 出现一样的滑条
2014-02-10 23:18 Jemmmmy: 然后ctrl+shift+r旋转工具
2014-02-10 23:18 [Twinkle]: 嗯这个我会了
2014-02-10 23:18 Jemmmmy: ，，
2014-02-10 23:19 Jemmmmy: 00:26:074 (1,2,1,2,3) - 这里太空荡了
2014-02-10 23:21 Jemmmmy: 后面的婆婆style能打其实挺好玩
2014-02-10 23:21 [Twinkle]: 前面的滑条需要加东西吗?
2014-02-10 23:21 Jemmmmy: 加东西？
2014-02-10 23:21 [Twinkle]: 用AHO那个摆法好了
2014-02-10 23:22 [Twinkle]: 滑条起点8分拍
2014-02-10 23:23 Jemmmmy: 0.0.8分拍？
2014-02-10 23:24 [Twinkle]: 就是原来滑条起点放一个note
2014-02-10 23:24 [Twinkle]: 滑条推迟8分之一拍
2014-02-10 23:24 Jemmmmy: 哦
2014-02-10 23:24 Jemmmmy: ，，也可以
2014-02-10 23:24 Jemmmmy: 其实你想到什么就下
2014-02-10 23:25 Jemmmmy: 前几张图要实验多一点
2014-02-10 23:25 Jemmmmy: 不用参照太多，毕竟你见的图也挺多了
2014-02-10 23:29 [Twinkle]: 嗯,那我自己改拉,谢谢黑子姐姐试图><
2014-02-10 23:29 Jemmmmy: 0.0嗯好
2014-02-11 00:55 [Twinkle]: 更新啦~
2014-02-11 00:55 [Twinkle]: 应该好一些了
2014-02-11 00:55 Jemmmmy: 0.0
2014-02-11 00:56 Jemmmmy: 那我再试试
2014-02-11 00:56 [Twinkle]: ;D
2014-02-11 01:01 Jemmmmy: 0.0嗯
2014-02-11 01:01 Jemmmmy: 还不错。你现在是对称图
2014-02-11 01:02 [Twinkle]: 对称方便嘛
2014-02-11 01:02 Jemmmmy: 不过不过没有对称的时候还是要注意下移动流向
2014-02-11 01:02 Jemmmmy: 多比划比划就好
2014-02-11 01:02 Jemmmmy: 也不用多说
2014-02-11 01:33 [Twinkle]: 额，可能他们没点更新
2014-02-11 01:40 [Twinkle]: 对了，转盘要怎么加呀？
2014-02-11 01:41 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QVge.jpg\
2014-02-11 01:41 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6QVge.jpg
2014-02-11 01:43 [Twinkle]: 不能设置到哪里转多少分吗？
2014-02-11 01:43 Jemmmmy: 不能呢
2014-02-11 01:43 Jemmmmy: 转盘转的分数跟od有关
2014-02-11 01:44 [Twinkle]: 。额
2014-02-11 01:44 Jemmmmy: 也跟转盘长度有关
2014-02-11 01:44 [Twinkle]: 其实我才知道
2014-02-11 01:44 [Twinkle]: QAQ
2014-02-11 01:44 Jemmmmy: 分数不是直接跟od相关，是od小的话转盘就容易到达300点
2014-02-11 21:29 [Twinkle]: 黑子~我又弄了三个难度OwO
2014-02-11 21:29 Jemmmmy: 0.0
2014-02-11 21:31 [Twinkle]: 额，反正我最近闲;D
2014-02-11 21:31 [Twinkle]: 感觉还要个insane？
2014-02-11 21:31 [Twinkle]: 弄了EZ NM HD
2014-02-11 21:31 Jemmmmy: ex名字改成another就行
2014-02-11 21:31 Jemmmmy: 不一定要insane
2014-02-11 21:32 [Twinkle]: 嗯，好的
2014-02-11 21:32 [Twinkle]: 还有好多东西不会QAQ
2014-02-11 21:33 Jemmmmy: 。。低难度 normal和ez要一直开着distance snap做
2014-02-11 21:33 Jemmmmy: 就是你只能选定一个距离
2014-02-11 21:34 [Twinkle]: 。。但是遇到暂停呢
2014-02-11 21:34 [Twinkle]: 或者我故意想空开一段
2014-02-11 21:34 Jemmmmy: 可以缩小间距
2014-02-11 21:34 Jemmmmy: 那样的话
2014-02-11 21:35 [Twinkle]: 嗯，那我改一下先，看下hd吧
2014-02-11 21:37 Jemmmmy: 00:22:035 (2,1) - hard里这种不好的overlap要改呢
2014-02-11 21:38 Jemmmmy: 00:56:074 (3,1) - 这里也是overlap
2014-02-11 21:38 [Twinkle]: overlap是？
2014-02-11 21:38 Jemmmmy: 01:26:266 (2,3) - 重叠
2014-02-11 21:38 Jemmmmy: 一般指不好的重叠
2014-02-11 21:39 Jemmmmy: 改的话就是令他们没有重叠就行
2014-02-11 21:39 [Twinkle]: 嗯知道了
2014-02-11 21:40 Jemmmmy: 然后滑条。2分以上的滑条最好不要出现1个折返以上
2014-02-11 21:40 Jemmmmy: 比如你在normal里面的 00:32:228 (1) -
2014-02-11 21:41 Jemmmmy: 这些要拆开来
2014-02-11 21:41 Jemmmmy: 00:50:689 (3) - 这个有时候用用还可以
2014-02-11 21:42 Jemmmmy: 这些短滑条来回折返01:55:305 (5,6,7,8) - 是可以的
2014-02-11 21:43 Jemmmmy: 但是最好保持各各滑条的折返数相同
2014-02-11 21:53 Jemmmmy: .。刚掉线了
2014-02-11 21:53 Jemmmmy: 我说到哪
2014-02-11 21:53 [Twinkle]: 21:42
2014-02-11 21:54 [Twinkle]: 折返是可以的那里
2014-02-11 21:54 Jemmmmy: 。。哦然后最好保持滑条折返数相同
2014-02-11 21:56 [Twinkle]: ez改了一下
2014-02-11 21:59 Jemmmmy: ..所以ez是想用distance 0.6X还是1.0X
2014-02-11 21:59 [Twinkle]: 用0.6的话滑条就出现重叠了orz
2014-02-11 22:01 Jemmmmy: 嗯但是只能选一个距离一直用呢..重叠就得想办法令他们重叠得不难看
2014-02-11 22:01 Jemmmmy: 然后没有hitsound是不行的呢
2014-02-11 22:01 [Twinkle]: 咦可以重叠的吗？
2014-02-11 22:02 Jemmmmy: 可以呀,只是好不好看的问题
2014-02-11 22:32 [Twinkle]: 改好拉
2014-02-11 22:36 Jemmmmy: .....
2014-02-11 22:37 Jemmmmy: 你需要打开automod
2014-02-11 22:43 Jemmmmy: 00:52:228 (4,5) - normal
2014-02-11 22:43 Jemmmmy: 没有完全重叠,英文就是not snap well
2014-02-11 23:09 Jemmmmy: ..网有点差啊
2014-02-11 23:09 [Twinkle]: 嗯
2014-02-11 23:10 [Twinkle]: 那个滑条的末尾就不是Grid怎么办
2014-02-11 23:10 [Twinkle]: 关Grid调？
2014-02-11 23:10 Jemmmmy: 这是一个办法
2014-02-11 23:10 Jemmmmy: 一般就是重新画一个
咲夜上上

All fixed during chatting

GustKraken

50 posts

Joined September 2012

GustKraken 2014-02-13T15:08:17+00:00

Easy也mod好了
改了一个错别字= =

General

[*]another的Tags 和 Source 的内容也写进其他难度吧，看样子好像是忘记了
[*]Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~这个标题是日文的罗马音吧，要把原日文标题写进Title
[*]为每个难度设置同一个preview point，就是选歌界面选中歌曲要从哪个位置开始音乐预览（时间轴拖到该点上方菜单栏 timing最后一项）
[*]Kiai Time 要一致 Easy里Kiai Time没了
[*]..难度跨度好大，200 notes直接到700 notes了，可以考虑增加一个Hyper

Another

00:04:920 (1) - 和之前的串尾距离太近，打到前面7的时候这个1已经出来了没出来还好说
00:06:170 (6,7,8) - 这三个这么叠在下面感觉收缩圈有点乱了毕竟这个带滑条的串还是个偶数连
00:19:920 (1,2) - 阿勒骚年你确定要用8分拍嘛 00:20:785 - 像这里听到的音应该是4分拍线上的呀虽然感觉上还不错但是最好改了
00:29:535 - another难度的话这么明显的音最好不要忽略掉。。无视一段可以，还是有点那种意思的，全篇无视不大好 00:33:766 - 00:35:305 - 00:35:497 - 下同
00:35:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 读图压力略大。。转一点角度都行
00:52:132 - 这里还是有个note的。。下了note之后距离过大00:52:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 可以全部ctrl+h再调位置嘛
从00:28:862 - 到00:55:593 - 一个滑条都没..~~@yeahyeahyeahhhhhh~~
00:56:459 (9) - orz 距离过大
00:56:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - DS慢慢变小了是故意的嘛挺拥挤的其实感觉跳一点都没事
01:11:267 (1,2) - 不太好读下同
01:22:997 (5,6,7,8,9) - 我懂你这里是什么意思，感觉地方小这样弄不太好 0 0~~@DokoLP~~ 下同
01:28:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 你看像这个就挺好的>.>

Hard

00:14:535 - 这里你是想加快点打图节奏吧，但是这个音就没了orz 可以考虑改成一个折返滑条或者像星爷神社那图一样滑条变速0 0 下同
00:30:497 - 少一个note 然后00:30:689 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也可以放远一点
00:34:151 (1,2) - 距离小了，时间上隔了一拍半呢
00:57:804 (1) - 前后都是1.0的DS这个2.4了 hard不要太鬼畜了嘛下同
01:25:689 - 01:30:305 - 这些滑条和单点都不大能看得懂。。。
01:52:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这些在hard里过难了，真要2个note一组的话建议先白线再红线

Normal

ar4其实NM od3就可以了
SV1.4对于3星NM过高啦，所以DS只能开0.6
00:09:151 (5) - 00:10:689 (9) - NC 后面我看你是两个两个一组的0 0 后同00:47:612 - 等
00:38:382 (1) - 歪掉了细节强迫症移到(100,178)
00:53:766 (5) - 虽然这个简直不能算遮挡。。还是别放滑条下面吧下同01:06:074 (3) - 等
01:32:228 (3,4) - 各ctrl+g一次看起来更舒服0 0更贴近音乐

Easy

没什么问题的样子= =

00:46:843 (1) - 去掉NC 加在00:47:613 (2) - 上，00:49:151 (1) - 也去掉nc ，不一定非要改0 0我这样加是按音乐加的，你那样更容易读图

最后记得两个简单难度的音效喔

Last edited by GustKraken 2014-02-14T10:48:39+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Kirin

267 posts

Joined August 2012

Kirin 2014-02-13T15:32:53+00:00

Mod from my queue

[Easy]
Put the kiai here too.
00:07:612 (1) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by -5
00:10:689 (2) ^
00:14:535 (4) (100% accurate mode on) Delete it. Then do CTRL+C on 00:12:997 (3) (remember to remove the repeater) and CTRL+V on the 2nd white tick next to 00:12:997 (3) then CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by 180 then do CTRL+G and rotate it again by 180
00:21:458 (3) x:144 y:328

[Normal]
Maybe the SV is too fast
00:49:535 Why there is no circles or sliders
00:45:689 Add circle
00:47:228 ^
00:48:766 ^
00:57:997 ^
00:59:535 ^
01:01:074 ^
01:02:612 ^

[Hard]
Mapped better than previous diffs btw
00:30:689 (1,2,3,4,5) Remove
00:49:535 (1,2,3,4,5) ^

[Another]
I don't know what to say here x.x

Good luck with the map!

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-13T17:10:21+00:00

MasterKirin wrote:
Mod from my queue

[Easy]
Put the kiai here too.
00:07:612 (1) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by -5 fixed
00:10:689 (2) ^ fixed
00:14:535 (4) (100% accurate mode on) Delete it. Then do CTRL+C on 00:12:997 (3) (remember to remove the repeater) and CTRL+V on the 2nd white tick next to 00:12:997 (3) then CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by 180 then do CTRL+G and rotate it again by 180 fixed
00:21:458 (3) x:144 y:328 fixed

[Normal]
Maybe the SV is too fast
00:49:535 Why there is no circles or sliders added one here
00:45:689 Add circle
00:47:228 ^
00:48:766 ^
00:57:997 ^
00:59:535 ^
01:01:074 ^
01:02:612 ^
added some

[Hard]
Mapped better than previous diffs btw
00:30:689 (1,2,3,4,5) Remove 5notes stream here is not so hard so I decided to keep it thx anyway!
00:49:535 (1,2,3,4,5) ^

[Another]
I don't know what to say here x.x this is made for some really crazy players lol

Good luck with the map!

thx you very much!

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-13T18:24:06+00:00

GustKraken wrote:
同新，我会加油的0 0
串图哦槽我不会打串啊

General
[*]another的Tags 和 Source 的内容也写进其他难度吧，看样子好像是忘记了已加
[*]Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~这个标题是日文的罗马音吧，要把原日文标题写进Title 说实话这个我真不知道，rank的AHO版本里面也没写
[*]为每个难度设置同一个preview point，就是选歌界面选中歌曲要从哪个位置开始音乐预览（时间轴拖到该点上方菜单栏 timing最后一项）已加
[*]Kiai Time 要一致 Easy里Kiai Time没了 Fixed
[*]..难度跨度好大，200 notes直接到700 notes了，可以考虑增加一个Hyper 已经接受了几个GD了

Another
00:04:920 (1) - 和之前的串尾距离太近，打到前面7的时候这个1已经出来了没出来还好说调远了一些
00:06:170 (6,7,8) - 这三个这么叠在下面感觉收缩圈有点乱了毕竟这个带滑条的串还是个偶数连这里是leniency的问题啦
00:19:920 (1,2) - 阿勒骚年你确定要用8分拍嘛 00:20:785 - 像这里听到的音应该是4分拍线上的呀虽然感觉上还不错但是最好改了这个我是学了AHO的放法orz
00:29:535 - another难度的话这么明显的音最好不要忽略掉。。无视一段可以，还是有点那种意思的，全篇无视不大好 00:33:766 - 00:35:305 - 00:35:497 - 下同加上去了几个~
00:35:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 读图压力略大。。转一点角度都行这边我认为还可以，找了好几个人打这里都没有问题~
00:52:132 - 这里还是有个note的。。下了note之后距离过大00:52:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 可以全部ctrl+h再调位置嘛的确是有note但是连在一起我想不出什么好梗了这里就这样吧
从00:28:862 - 到00:55:593 - 一个滑条都没..~~@yeahyeahyeahhhhhh~~
00:56:459 (9) - orz 距离过大已修改
00:56:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - DS慢慢变小了是故意的嘛挺拥挤的其实感觉跳一点都没事这里其实是Leniency的问题导致打的时候note位置不对所以改的，打起来的话开始的位置是对的
01:11:267 (1,2) - 不太好读下同放到旁边了，放弃遮盖
01:22:997 (5,6,7,8,9) - 我懂你这里是什么意思，感觉地方小这样弄不太好 0 0~~@DokoLP~~ 下同 Fixed
01:28:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 你看像这个就挺好的>.>

Hard
00:14:535 - 这里你是想加快点打图节奏吧，但是这个音就没了orz 可以考虑改成一个折返滑条或者像星爷神社那图一样滑条变速0 0 下同一开始稀疏一点应该没事，我是想让它有一个慢慢加上去的过程
00:30:497 - 少一个note 已+然后00:30:689 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也可以放远一点有的人说我这样在hard里放太难，所以就这样吧orz
00:34:151 (1,2) - 距离小了，时间上隔了一拍半呢已改大
00:57:804 (1) - 前后都是1.0的DS这个2.4了 hard不要太鬼畜了嘛下同这个之前改了没有传上去~
01:25:689 - 01:30:305 - 这些滑条和单点都不大能看得懂。。。这里还好吧，不是很难读
01:52:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这些在hard里过难了，真要2个note一组的话建议先白线再红线减少了DS

Normal
ar4其实NM od3就可以了 OD3实在太低，过于送分了。而且我难度也不是很难
SV1.4对于3星NM过高啦，所以DS只能开0.6
00:09:151 (5) - 00:10:689 (9) - NC 后面我看你是两个两个一组的0 0 后同00:47:612 - 等 fixed
00:38:382 (1) - 歪掉了细节强迫症移到(100,178) fixed
00:53:766 (5) - 虽然这个简直不能算遮挡。。还是别放滑条下面吧下同01:06:074 (3) - 等我觉得这样还行
01:32:228 (3,4) - 各ctrl+g一次看起来更舒服0 0更贴近音乐嗯，改成对称了

Easy
先碎觉了明天看233

Snaggletooth

491 posts

Joined November 2012

Snaggletooth 2014-02-14T09:19:01+00:00

M4M~ Sorry for the delay..

[Insane]

General

Unconsistent Widescreen Support
The tapping gets really tireing. I would suggest you replace some streams with holdsliders
so it isnt the same thing over and ove again.
Some spacing issues

From 00:01:459 to 00:07:612 I would suggest soft sound samples, as it is the intro with only Piano. Normal hitsounds are quite harsh
for this part.
00:26:651 (4,1) - The spacing is really confusing. I also think it would flow better to have the circle (4) on x:280 y:112
00:27:420 (1) - Same as above but with x:240 y:184
00:28:189 (4) - ^ x:280 y:248
00:35:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to find a new pattern that isn't such confusing. Maybe a star formation?
00:38:767 (3,3,3,3) - These notes are on blank spots. There is no beat ect on these ticks. You can make 1/1 sliders to fill
the gap.
00:42:035 (6,6,6,6) - ^
00:44:536 (1,2) - Spacing
00:45:497 (1,2) - ^
00:47:036 (1,2) - ^
00:48:574 (1,2) - ^
I would love too see some holdsliders in the area from 00:44:535 to 00:53:574
From 00:57:228 to 01:05:882: Watch your spacing and add some hold sliders
01:09:151 (1,2) - These doubles are awesome to play but it gets tiring after some time. Try to bring in some variation
with sliders or other shapes.

[Hard]

General

Raise OD and HP to 6. Raise AR to 7/8

00:29:343 (4,5) - Spacing
00:32:420 (2,3) - Spacing might be too big but I'm not sure about that.
00:37:420 (10,1) - Please space this further apart
00:53:766 (1,2,3,4) - I think what you did there is not that bad. It got me thinking that this would sound good.
example

[Normal]

General

You have quite a lot of multiple reverses. This can confuse newbs. You don't have to
fix every slider, but maybe reduce them a bit.
Slider Velocity seems a bit big. Maybe reduce to 1 or 1.1

01:55:305 (1,2,3,4) - As far as I know, this would be unrankable. You cant add holdsliders/streams on a Normal. You should try 1/1 sliders.

[Easy]

Nothing bothers me here, nice diff~

Good luck with your map~

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-14T11:23:12+00:00

Snaggletooth wrote:
M4M~ Sorry for the delay..

[Insane]

General
Unconsistent Widescreen Support
The tapping gets really tireing. I would suggest you replace some streams with holdsliders I decided to change be non know how.
so it isnt the same thing over and ove again.
Some spacing issues
From 00:01:459 to 00:07:612 I would suggest soft sound samples, as it is the intro with only Piano. Normal hitsounds are quite harsh
for this part. good suggestion! fixed
00:26:651 (4,1) - The spacing is really confusing. I also think it would flow better to have the circle (4) on x:280 y:112 yea, it is true accepted
00:27:420 (1) - Same as above but with x:240 y:184 fixed
00:28:189 (4) - ^ x:280 y:248 fixed
00:35:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to find a new pattern that isn't such confusing. Maybe a star formation? changed it to star!
00:38:767 (3,3,3,3) - These notes are on blank spots. There is no beat ect on these ticks. You can make 1/1 sliders to fill
the gap. im not quite sure your meaning
00:42:035 (6,6,6,6) - ^
00:44:536 (1,2) - Spacing
00:45:497 (1,2) - ^
00:47:036 (1,2) - ^
00:48:574 (1,2) - ^ these are all for the leniency, when real played it will be looked nice.
I would love too see some holdsliders in the area from 00:44:535 to 00:53:574
From 00:57:228 to 01:05:882: Watch your spacing and add some hold sliders yeah! im trying to make some.
01:09:151 (1,2) - These doubles are awesome to play but it gets tiring after some time. Try to bring in some variation
with sliders or other shapes.

[Hard]

General
Raise OD and HP to 6. Raise AR to 7/8
OD HP changed to 6 and ar changed to 7
00:29:343 (4,5) - Spacing i think it is fine here
00:32:420 (2,3) - Spacing might be too big but I'm not sure about that. ^
00:37:420 (10,1) - Please space this further apart fixed
00:53:766 (1,2,3,4) - I think what you did there is not that bad. It got me thinking that this would sound good. good idea! fixed
example

[Normal]

General
You have quite a lot of multiple reverses. This can confuse newbs. You don't have to
fix every slider, but maybe reduce them a bit. I think it fit the rhythem very well and also not hard so i put it
Slider Velocity seems a bit big. Maybe reduce to 1 or 1.1
I just thinking of that my map set's overall difficulty will be not enough so~
01:55:305 (1,2,3,4) - As far as I know, this would be unrankable. You cant add holdsliders/streams on a Normal. You should try 1/1 sliders.
thx for this ,fixed

[Easy]

Nothing bothers me here, nice diff~

Good luck with your map~

thank u very much! really great ideas for me.

Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2014-02-16T07:28:10+00:00

hello, mod from m4m ~

Easy

音效方面：找个空白音效把滑条的声音去了，现在有点刺耳。然后找一些自定义的音效来修饰一下，不光是这个EZ难度，现在没有音效的图是很难rank的
排版方面：感觉排版有点简陋？很多滑条其实可以多加修饰一下就会比较美观，像是01:02:997 (1,1,1,1) - 这四个，还有很多，关于滑条的美观可以参考下这个帖子。https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/117425
另外X0.6的DS会不会太短了点= =
节奏方面，kiai留空拍会比较难受，比如01:02:228 - 这里可以加个1/1的滑条
00:44:535 - 我觉得kiai是从这里开始的。。。

Normal

滑条速度和0.6的DS太违和了
00:35:689 (1,2,3) - 这三个在游戏里会自动叠起来，1会和后面的4重叠，不好看，拉开点
00:54:535 (7,8,9) - 拉开点，像6和7一样不要重叠
01:06:074 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个也是，不是等间距很明显，关了grid snap重新摆一下。另外最好方向向下，3的折返箭头被挡了一半可能会被说

Hard

00:29:728 (5,6,7,8,9) - 单点游戏内叠起来了不好看，后面的连打放远点或者单点分开来放
00:21:266 (4) - 这个note删了吧，不然跳太大了，毕竟只是hard
00:22:805 (4) - ^
00:31:362 - 这里好空啊，放点1/2滑条吧
01:06:459 (3) - 这里附近单点有点多，可以吧三连的最后一个改成1/2滑条
00:10:689 (1,2) - 1和2换一下，不然1和前面那个间距太近了
00:37:997 (1,2) - 太高了和血条重叠，不好看，换个位置
01:52:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 还是游戏内重叠的问题，拉开一点

Insane

00:05:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不合适
00:16:651 (7,1) - flow不好，换一个顺手一点的摆法
00:29:151 - 从这里开始一大段都没有滑条诶。。。。不建议放大段的单点，打起来是十分不舒服的，也会被很多人吐槽。
00:45:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这边附近这些五连，可能edit里看起来很漂亮，游戏内就会叠的很难看，稍微改一下
01:10:017 (1,2) - Ctrl+G
后面这一段给我一种浓浓的夜骑士即视感。。。。现在这种老图的风格是很不收欢迎的。

作为第一张图还是不错的，不过离rank还有点距离，加油吧 ~

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-16T11:11:15+00:00

Spring Roll wrote:
hello, mod from m4m ~

Easy
音效方面：找个空白音效把滑条的声音去了，现在有点刺耳。然后找一些自定义的音效来修饰一下，不光是这个EZ难度，现在没有音效的图是很难rank的音效我准备再去问问别人，实在不行就加24白线了orz
排版方面：感觉排版有点简陋？很多滑条其实可以多加修饰一下就会比较美观，像是01:02:997 (1,1,1,1) - 这四个，还有很多，关于滑条的美观可以参考下这个帖子。https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/117425 的确，根据帖子改了几个~
另外X0.6的DS会不会太短了点= = 还好，毕竟Easy嘛
节奏方面，kiai留空拍会比较难受，比如01:02:228 - 这里可以加个1/1的滑条这里的确是一部分的结束，后面换了一个节奏所以就想留出一个空白，EZ还是能接受的
00:44:535 - 我觉得kiai是从这里开始的。。。
的确，已经修改。

Normal
滑条速度和0.6的DS太违和了我觉得还好啊，normal 稍微比ez难一点就好orz
00:35:689 (1,2,3) - 这三个在游戏里会自动叠起来，1会和后面的4重叠，不好看，拉开点已分开
00:54:535 (7,8,9) - 拉开点，像6和7一样不要重叠 fixed
01:06:074 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个也是，不是等间距很明显，关了grid snap重新摆一下。另外最好方向向下，3的折返箭头被挡了一半可能会被说fixed

Hard
00:29:728 (5,6,7,8,9) - 单点游戏内叠起来了不好看，后面的连打放远点或者单点分开来放单点分开了
00:21:266 (4) - 这个note删了吧，不然跳太大了，毕竟只是hard fixed
00:22:805 (4) - ^ fixed
00:31:362 - 这里好空啊，放点1/2滑条吧已+~
01:06:459 (3) - 这里附近单点有点多，可以吧三连的最后一个改成1/2滑条fixed
00:10:689 (1,2) - 1和2换一下，不然1和前面那个间距太近了 fixed
00:37:997 (1,2) - 太高了和血条重叠，不好看，换个位置 fixed
01:52:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 还是游戏内重叠的问题，拉开一点fixed

Insane
00:05:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不合适之后可能会换个摆法
00:16:651 (7,1) - flow不好，换一个顺手一点的摆法变换了角度
00:29:151 - 从这里开始一大段都没有滑条诶。。。。不建议放大段的单点，打起来是十分不舒服的，也会被很多人吐槽。马上想棒法改~
00:45:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这边附近这些五连，可能edit里看起来很漂亮，游戏内就会叠的很难看，稍微改一下好
01:10:017 (1,2) - Ctrl+G
后面这一段给我一种浓浓的夜骑士即视感。。。。现在这种老图的风格是很不收欢迎的。这个我是肯定会改的加一些滑条

作为第一张图还是不错的，不过离rank还有点距离，加油吧 ~

十分感谢春卷的mod！帮助很大~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-02-17T13:32:23+00:00

送一分~

General

标题没填unicode

Another

100%音量太高了, 75%左右吧
也不要用soft音效, normal就刚好, 你去找个自定义clap 或者就用yuki的
00:06:266 (7,8) - 我觉得叠着放到打图的时候就不好看了。。
00:07:612 - 这里前面的音量放低一点
00:34:343 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 感觉放的有点多, 也不需要那么多newcombo
01:13:094 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1343617
01:13:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里加速太突然了音乐里又没有变化但是变难了这么多逐渐增加间距比较有流畅感

Yuki's Extra

00:04:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个串太莫名了, 摆的好看一点吧
01:03:959 (2,3) - 这样好看一点111 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1343561

Hard

00:19:151 (1) - 去掉new combo
00:42:228 (1,1) - ^
01:31:459 (1,1) - ^
01:56:074 (1,2) - ^
00:29:343 (4) - 这中间放滑条比较流畅 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1343567
00:45:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里不好读的感觉, 不要叠起来, 放出去吧
01:06:459 (3) - 这个出屏幕了
01:07:997 (3) - 这个也有点
01:48:959 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得这样一大弧线挺难玩的, 摆成折线如何 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1343579
01:52:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 你叠错地方了啊, 两个同样的音不在一个地方

Normal

00:10:689 (1) - 挡住剪头了不好
00:50:689 (6) - 这里没包好, 把滑条尾往上一格
01:09:151 (1) - 不要叠在那里啊
01:33:766 (5) - ^

Easy

00:51:459 (1) - 尽量不要叠着
01:55:305 (1) - new combo

嘛, 我觉得another和extra打着还挺爽的, 太多串了按不动

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-17T14:51:52+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
送一分~

General

标题没填unicode
fixed

Another

100%音量太高了, 75%左右吧 fixed
也不要用soft音效, normal就刚好, 你去找个自定义clap 或者就用yuki的已经改为normal
00:06:266 (7,8) - 我觉得叠着放到打图的时候就不好看了。。fixed
00:07:612 - 这里前面的音量放低一点 fixed
00:34:343 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 感觉放的有点多, 也不需要那么多newcombo fixed
01:13:094 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1343617 fixed
01:13:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里加速太突然了音乐里又没有变化但是变难了这么多逐渐增加间距比较有流畅感背景音仔细听其实是变了一个音调的，这里就这样吧

Hard

00:19:151 (1) - 去掉new combo fixed
00:42:228 (1,1) - ^ fixed
01:31:459 (1,1) - ^ fixed
01:56:074 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:29:343 (4) - 这中间放滑条比较流畅 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1343567 改成了repeater
00:45:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里不好读的感觉, 不要叠起来, 放出去吧这里之前已经改过间距，应该比较好打了~~就算不行多试几次也~~放出去的话也和之前的梗重复了。
01:06:459 (3) - 这个出屏幕了fixed
01:07:997 (3) - 这个也有点 fixed
01:48:959 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得这样一大弧线挺难玩的, 摆成折线如何 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1343579 其实弧线就是我故意用来增加难度的
01:52:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 你叠错地方了啊, 两个同样的音不在一个地方
还真是，fixed

Normal

00:10:689 (1) - 挡住剪头了不好这里没有挡住吧？
00:50:689 (6) - 这里没包好, 把滑条尾往上一格 fixed
01:09:151 (1) - 不要叠在那里啊 fixed
01:33:766 (5) - ^fixed
Easy

00:51:459 (1) - 尽量不要叠着 fixed
01:55:305 (1) - new combofixed

嘛, 我觉得another和extra打着还挺爽的, 太多串了按不动

非常感谢AR3的mod！

Last edited by [Twinkle] 2014-02-20T09:06:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2014-02-17T15:38:14+00:00

本来想送gd 但是玩脱了/.\
加油!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-02-17T17:21:49+00:00

To AR3
第二个梗改了下
http://puu.sh/6ZNMq.osu

To [Twinkle]

把我的id加到tag里面去，就和我的diff一样就行
在song setup——design里面把所有打钩的都去掉
Insane难度ar,od+1
Extra 可以考虑od+2，5毕竟太低了，HP的话可以先这么放着

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-18T08:34:07+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
To AR3
第二个梗改了下
http://puu.sh/6ZNMq.osu

To [Twinkle]
把我的id加到tag里面去，就和我的diff一样就行
在song setup——design里面把所有打钩的都去掉
Insane难度ar,od+1
Extra 可以考虑od+2，5毕竟太低了，HP的话可以先这么放着

都改了，除了EX od+1 原因：连打太多而且有分开的连打 OD太高不好。

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-02-18T15:44:07+00:00

Another的source不見了
怎看都是another比extra難xd

[Hard]
00:17:805 - 漏clap?(前面的00:15:882 (2) - 相同位置有clap)
00:19:920 (1) - Finish
00:29:728 (5) - 試試換成這個

00:32:228 (1) - finish
00:41:459 (1,2,3,1) - 這4個slider最尾加個finish
00:43:766 (1) - 多餘的NC?
00:50:689 (1,1) - finish
00:53:766 (1,3) - ^
00:55:305 (1,3) - ^
00:56:843 (1) - ^
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^
01:06:074 (1,1) - ^
01:07:612 - 這裡開始到break之前的白線加finish
01:32:997 (1) - remove nc
01:53:382 (3,7) - 漏clap?

好多地方能加finish
圖還好最主要都是finish的問題

[Normal]
00:07:612 (1,2,3,4) - 換成slider我覺得比較好讓player感覺一下節奏
00:53:766 (8) - NC吧這段combo都到8了
01:52:228 (1,2) - 最尾的錨點想怎樣

跟Hard一樣可以加finish的地方並沒有加

[Easy]
沒太多問題
circle有點多建議平衡一下circle跟slider的數目
節奏有點空具體的建議....我不太能說出xd
hitsound跟上面的diff一樣

hope helpful >_< and good luck for your map

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-19T07:01:13+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
Another的source不見了
怎看都是another比extra難xd

[Hard]
00:17:805 - 漏clap?(前面的00:15:882 (2) - 相同位置有clap) 改了，hard的音效我一会儿继续弄~
00:19:920 (1) - Finish fixed
00:29:728 (5) - 試試換成這個好
00:32:228 (1) - finish fixed
00:41:459 (1,2,3,1) - 這4個slider最尾加個finish fixed
00:43:766 (1) - 多餘的NC? fixed
00:50:689 (1,1) - finish fixed
00:53:766 (1,3) - ^ fixed
00:55:305 (1,3) - ^ fixed
00:56:843 (1) - ^ fixed
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^ fixed
01:06:074 (1,1) - ^ fixed
01:07:612 - 這裡開始到break之前的白線加finish fixed
01:32:997 (1) - remove nc fixed
01:53:382 (3,7) - 漏clap? fixed

好多地方能加finish 音效还是不怎么会下，之后会重点弄的orz
圖還好最主要都是finish的問題

[Normal]
00:07:612 (1,2,3,4) - 換成slider我覺得比較好讓player感覺一下節奏其实我想弄得和下面对称来着~就不改了吧
00:53:766 (8) - NC吧這段combo都到8了 fixed
01:52:228 (1,2) - 最尾的錨點想怎樣 fixed

跟Hard一樣可以加finish的地方並沒有加

[Easy]
沒太多問題
circle有點多建議平衡一下circle跟slider的數目
節奏有點空具體的建議....我不太能說出xd
hitsound跟上面的diff一樣

hope helpful >_< and good luck for your map

thx very much!

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-02-19T17:44:12+00:00

from　ｙｏｕｒ　ｒｅｑｕｅｓｔ、
都是些建议额　你自己看采纳不采纳额
[easy and normal]
这两个低难度感觉节奏没啥大问题主要是排列感觉比较散 note一般都是一句之间一个梗但是句和句之间基本没啥关系了就0.0 这个不急额慢慢练就行可以多看看别人的怎么做的就能明白额0.0

[hard]
额感觉hard节奏不太好0.0
比如说你前面全部用的1/1. 但是你仔细听鼓点 00:10:497 这里有个很强的鼓前面就没有再比如00:12:998 (2) - 从这里开始是1/2的五连很重的鼓音和之前又不一样。你要仔细听这种鼓点的变化然后根据这样下节奏才比较有意思额单纯的1/1一般是EZ的做法额0.0 hard以及更高难度应该多注重鼓点变化然后表现他
00:13:766 (1,2,3) - 然后这里音和前面一样突然就变了并且红线其实没有很强的音所以这个节奏就听着很勉强
00:29:343 (4,5) - 你这个距离很微妙额读不出来这里空了一排的建议要么拉很近要么很远或者干脆叠起来额
00:44:920 (3,4) - 这个节奏非常坑不觉得很违和么。因为有很强的重音在00:45:305这里但是你用滑条尾巴直接带过去了。完全没有击打感。如果在这里用note或者开始一个滑条感觉就完全不一样了额。
01:21:459 (1) - 这种一个道理不过因为这里尾巴哪里音没有之前那个强所以感觉还算可以

[insane]
00:15:305 (3,1,2,3) - 别的地方都是2个2个一组这里怎么变了0.0 顺便这图感觉梗太过单一了=L=
00:17:612 (1,2) - 这两个角度小一些？感觉会更顺手一点
00:38:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - 这梗真心屌！
00:44:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个重复太多了这里重复了好多好多次后面00:57:228 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里开始又是一大堆最后kiai又是这样的也不是说不行就是感觉有点单调 0.0 看看想想别的梗么？
00:53:766 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉不是很好读不太容易看出来这个都是1/2节奏尤其是刚开始前面1/4滑条那么挑然后突然就变成0.6的1/2额

建议是主要先看看hard的节奏问题比较好音效其实不着急先把节奏弄好然后研究排列怎么联系更紧啊更有趣啊（你ｆｌｏｗ做的都挺好的其实）最后在研究音效额0.0

这是我低２３３个帖０.０

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-20T10:27:41+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:
from　ｙｏｕｒ　ｒｅｑｕｅｓｔ、
都是些建议额　你自己看采纳不采纳额
[easy and normal]
这两个低难度感觉节奏没啥大问题主要是排列感觉比较散 note一般都是一句之间一个梗但是句和句之间基本没啥关系了就0.0 这个不急额慢慢练就行可以多看看别人的怎么做的就能明白额0.0

[hard]
额感觉hard节奏不太好0.0 是的，稍微remap了一下
比如说你前面全部用的1/1. 但是你仔细听鼓点 00:10:497 这里有个很强的鼓前面就没有再比如00:12:998 (2) - 从这里开始是1/2的五连很重的鼓音和之前又不一样。你要仔细听这种鼓点的变化然后根据这样下节奏才比较有意思额单纯的1/1一般是EZ的做法额0.0 hard以及更高难度应该多注重鼓点变化然后表现他嗯，很有道理
00:13:766 (1,2,3) - 然后这里音和前面一样突然就变了并且红线其实没有很强的音所以这个节奏就听着很勉强 remaped
00:29:343 (4,5) - 你这个距离很微妙额读不出来这里空了一排的建议要么拉很近要么很远或者干脆叠起来额拉近了~
00:44:920 (3,4) - 这个节奏非常坑不觉得很违和么。因为有很强的重音在00:45:305这里但是你用滑条尾巴直接带过去了。完全没有击打感。如果在这里用note或者开始一个滑条感觉就完全不一样了额。
01:21:459 (1) - 这种一个道理不过因为这里尾巴哪里音没有之前那个强所以感觉还算可以都重做了~

[insane]
00:15:305 (3,1,2,3) - 别的地方都是2个2个一组这里怎么变了0.0 顺便这图感觉梗太过单一了=L= 和前面的三个slider对应的
00:17:612 (1,2) - 这两个角度小一些？感觉会更顺手一点好
00:38:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - 这梗真心屌！;w;反震的啦
00:44:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个重复太多了这里重复了好多好多次后面00:57:228 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里开始又是一大堆最后kiai又是这样的也不是说不行就是感觉有点单调 0.0 看看想想别的梗么？努力想过了但是想不到,我想这个既美观有有节奏，重复几下应该问题不打，我想想办法把后面那片改一下摆放orz
00:53:766 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉不是很好读不太容易看出来这个都是1/2节奏尤其是刚开始前面1/4滑条那么挑然后突然就变成0.6的1/2额改了，先大跳再小跳~

建议是主要先看看hard的节奏问题比较好音效其实不着急先把节奏弄好然后研究排列怎么联系更紧啊更有趣啊（你ｆｌｏｗ做的都挺好的其实）最后在研究音效额0.0

这是我低２３３个帖０.０

233 的确还有很多问题，十分感谢

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-02-21T12:45:38+00:00

这个音效让我想起很多神触的皮肤默认音效 23333
图蛮好玩的，就是有几个地方想建议一下
Another
00:29:920 (5,6) - 2分拍稍微拿开点，因为整体间距比较大所以容易读成二连
01:11:267 (1,2,3,4) - 太近了，实在难读
01:13:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - 另外我觉得这种间距其实不太有必要，因为这图大部分连打都是不太大的间距。这有点突然
01:14:920 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:21:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 你对比一下一模一样的音乐01:22:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的间距多少，真心没必要=-=
01:48:574 - 这个空太疼了，就应该全部塞满，而且后面突如其来的妹抖火感觉也不适合。。。01:48:766 (1,2,3,4) -
01:51:362 - ^ 01:51:459 (1,2,3,4) -

good luck then.

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-22T08:03:39+00:00

Oracle wrote:
这个音效让我想起很多神触的皮肤默认音效 23333
图蛮好玩的，就是有几个地方想建议一下
Another
00:29:920 (5,6) - 2分拍稍微拿开点，因为整体间距比较大所以容易读成二连 fixed
01:11:267 (1,2,3,4) - 太近了，实在难读 fixed
01:13:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - 另外我觉得这种间距其实不太有必要，因为这图大部分连打都是不太大的间距。这有点突然
01:14:920 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:21:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 你对比一下一模一样的音乐01:22:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的间距多少，真心没必要=-= 这些我是根据图里一些重音来放的，至于第一个，是让玩家做一个热手准备吧，毕竟这是another难度
01:48:574 - 这个空太疼了，就应该全部塞满，而且后面突如其来的妹抖火感觉也不适合。。。01:48:766 (1,2,3,4) -
01:51:362 - ^ 01:51:459 (1,2,3,4) - 最后的这一段都是满满的4分拍，个人认为都放满玩起来不是很有意思，所以就留了两个空哈

good luck then.

十分感谢mod！

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2014-02-22T15:06:54+00:00

Hello. M4M request

[Easy]
00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's a pattern that isn't for an easy difficulty. Try to move 00:22:997 (2,3,4) like this, but it'll affect the distance snap:

SPOILER

00:35:305 (1) - Move it to x:212 y:320.
00:36:074 (2) - Move it to x:110 y:255.
00:36:843 (3) - Move it to x:170 y:146.
00:41:459 (4) - Add a new combo, because there's a new beat here.
00:45:305 (2,2,2) - Those slider are a bit plain. Try to make something creative. Like for instance, 00:45:305 (2) can be like a bird:

SPOILER

00:47:612 (2) can be a wave slider:

SPOILER

00:49:920 (2) can be something like that:

SPOILER

00:49:920 (2) - At the tail of the slider, add a finish, since in the music, it has a cymbal sound.
00:52:228 (2) - ^
00:53:766 (4) - ^
00:54:535 (5) - At the head of the slider, add a finish.
00:56:843 (1) - ^
01:02:997 (1,2,3) - Try to find yourself where to add a finish :3
01:22:997 (2) - Move it to x:492 y:304, and move 01:24:535 (3) x:256 y:356 for a better flow to 01:26:074 (4) .
01:29:151 (1) - Move it to x:120 y:340.
01:30:689 (2) - Move it to x:256 y:144.
01:32:228 (3) - Move it to x:396 y:340.
01:30:689 (2) - Move it to x:256 y:144.
01:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - Like in the first suggestion (00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) ).

[Normal]
00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make another pattern.
00:50:689 (6) - Add a new combo, to introduce the new beat.

[Hard]
00:21:843 (1) - Move it to x:468 y:176.

That's all I can find.
Good Luck on ranking this map.

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-02-22T16:49:14+00:00

HI~ M4M here

all my mod is suggestion

[Easy]

00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - overlapped patterns are not good for easy diff
00:36:843 (3) - move to 96, 152
01:29:151 (1,2,3,4) - better change these notes to slider maybe 2,4 or 1,3 notes
01:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - overlapped

[Normal]

00:20:689 (2) - move to 96, 280
00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - reverse these sliders will be good
00:32:997 (2) - move to 172, 108
00:49:151 (4) - move to 144, 180

[Hard]

00:10:497 (1) - remove
00:11:843 (5) - ^
00:17:901 (7) - this pattern is weird better change
00:25:112 (2) - make sure this slider is horizontal with 1st slider
00:46:459 (3) - make this sliders reverse point watching first note http://puu.sh/769Im.jpg
00:49:535 (1) - this pattern is not good for hard diff
01:01:074 (2) - move to 312, 188

[Insane]

00:09:728 (2) - move to 144, 244
00:27:035 (2) - change is this plz http://puu.sh/769Sz.jpg
00:27:804 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/769Uj.jpg
00:28:574 (2) - ^
01:00:689 (3) - http://puu.sh/769Z6.jpg this one will be better
01:01:458 (3) - ^
01:02:227 (3) - ^

Good luck

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-22T17:19:05+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hello. M4M request

[Easy]
00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's a pattern that isn't for an easy difficulty. Try to move 00:22:997 (2,3,4) like this, but it'll affect the distance snap: yeah, fixed it in another way
SPOILER
remapped this part
00:35:305 (1) - Move it to x:212 y:320.
00:36:074 (2) - Move it to x:110 y:255.
00:36:843 (3) - Move it to x:170 y:146.
00:41:459 (4) - Add a new combo, because there's a new beat here. fixed
00:45:305 (2,2,2) - Those slider are a bit plain. Try to make something creative. all fixed
Like for instance, 00:45:305 (2) can be like a bird:
SPOILER
00:47:612 (2) can be a wave slider:
SPOILER
00:49:920 (2) can be something like that:
SPOILER
00:49:920 (2) - At the tail of the slider, add a finish, since in the music, it has a cymbal sound.
00:52:228 (2) - ^
00:53:766 (4) - ^
00:54:535 (5) - At the head of the slider, add a finish.
00:56:843 (1) - ^
01:02:997 (1,2,3) - Try to find yourself where to add a finish :3 finish all added
01:22:997 (2) - Move it to x:492 y:304, and move 01:24:535 (3) x:256 y:356 for a better flow to 01:26:074 (4) .
01:29:151 (1) - Move it to x:120 y:340.
01:30:689 (2) - Move it to x:256 y:144.
01:32:228 (3) - Move it to x:396 y:340.
01:30:689 (2) - Move it to x:256 y:144. remapped this part
01:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - Like in the first suggestion (00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) ).fixed

[Normal]
00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make another pattern. fixed
00:50:689 (6) - Add a new combo, to introduce the new beat. fixed

[Hard]
00:21:843 (1) - Move it to x:468 y:176. good idea

That's all I can find.
Good Luck on ranking this map.

thx a lot

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-22T18:19:12+00:00

Neta wrote:
HI~ M4M here

all my mod is suggestion

[Easy]
00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - overlapped patterns are not good for easy diff yeah fixed increase DS
00:36:843 (3) - move to 96, 152 remapped these
01:29:151 (1,2,3,4) - better change these notes to slider maybe 2,4 or 1,3 notes fixed
01:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - overlapped
remapped

[Normal]
00:20:689 (2) - move to 96, 280 fixed
00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - reverse these sliders will be good yeah fixed
00:32:997 (2) - move to 172, 108 fixed
00:49:151 (4) - move to 144, 180
fixed

[Hard]
00:10:497 (1) - remove
00:11:843 (5) - ^
00:17:901 (7) - this pattern is weird better change fixed
00:25:112 (2) - make sure this slider is horizontal with 1st slider change their shapes
00:46:459 (3) - make this sliders reverse point watching first note http://puu.sh/769Im.jpg
00:49:535 (1) - this pattern is not good for hard diff fixed
01:01:074 (2) - move to 312, 188
fixed

[Insane]
00:09:728 (2) - move to 144, 244 fixed
00:27:035 (2) - change is this plz http://puu.sh/769Sz.jpg
00:27:804 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/769Uj.jpg
00:28:574 (2) - ^ im not quite sure your meaning ;w;
01:00:689 (3) - http://puu.sh/769Z6.jpg this one will be better
01:01:458 (3) - ^
01:02:227 (3) - ^ some kind of overlap is necessary in insane

Good luck

thx!

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-02-23T04:32:01+00:00

[Yuki]
00:07:035 (2) - Ctrl+G
>00:07:228 (3) - ^ better flow to 00:07:612 (1) -
01:03:766 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1359668 better flow to 01:04:535 (1) -
01:28:766 (8,9,10,11) - same as 01:27:228 (8,9,10,11) -
01:58:766 - try 0.5x?
>01:57:997 (5) - thy other shape
Rating:★★★★★ perfect map
[Another]
hitnormal sounds not fit
00:19:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why do this,And this partten didn't appear other parts
00:51:844 (7) - Ctrl+G will have a better flow
01:47:997 (1,2,3) - This stopped no sense
01:50:689 (1,2,3) - ^
Rating:★★★☆☆ Still have improve space
[Insane]
hitnormal sounds not fit
00:21:459 (1) - blanket 2
00:30:305 (4) - compare to 00:29:535 -
00:31:266 (1) - Ctrl+G for easy to miss
00:37:420 (10) - blanket
00:38:382 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is use in another,not fit for such an insane
00:51:459 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:52:997 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:02:612 (5,6) - change a partten
01:20:689 (1) - NC
01:46:074 - Stream have been used,you should take a care of diff spread.
Rating:★★☆☆☆ Needs more work
[Hard]
00:09:151 (3) - blanket
00:14:247 (4,5,6,7) - too hard
00:19:920 (1) - copy from 2
00:23:574 (2) - later 1/2
00:46:939 (5) - del
Rating:★★☆☆☆ Needs more work in blanket and follow the music
[Normal]
00:13:766 (1,2) - blanket
00:19:920 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This is hard to play for hid
00:40:689 (6,1,2) - this seems not feeling good
00:50:689 (1,2) - try to reduce 4 reverse
Rating:★★☆☆☆ too many straight
[Easy]
00:10:689 (3) - not feeling good
00:14:535 (2) - don't make a head to a end
00:39:920 (3,4) - too narrow,it could be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1359736
00:47:612 (2) - ^
01:46:074 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is hard to play for hid
01:55:305 (5) - NC
Rating:★★☆☆☆ try to make slider more pretty:3

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-23T09:41:34+00:00

[Another]
hitnormal sounds not fit
00:19:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why do this,And this partten didn't appear other parts
00:51:844 (7) - Ctrl+G will have a better flow no
01:47:997 (1,2,3) - This stopped no sense no
01:50:689 (1,2,3) - ^
Rating:★★★☆☆ Still have improve space
[Insane]
hitnormal sounds not fit
00:21:459 (1) - blanket 2
00:30:305 (4) - compare to 00:29:535 -
00:31:266 (1) - Ctrl+G for easy to miss no
00:37:420 (10) - blanket
00:38:382 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is use in another,not fit for such an insane the space is pretty close though
00:51:459 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:52:997 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:02:612 (5,6) - change a partten fixed
01:20:689 (1) - NC no
01:46:074 - Stream have been used,you should take a care of diff spread. yeah
Rating:★★☆☆☆ Needs more work
[Hard]
00:09:151 (3) - blanket
00:14:247 (4,5,6,7) - too hard
00:19:920 (1) - copy from 2 fixed
00:23:574 (2) - later 1/2 fixed
00:46:939 (5) - del
Rating:★★☆☆☆ Needs more work in blanket and follow the music
[Normal]
00:13:766 (1,2) - blanket
00:19:920 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This is hard to play for hid
00:40:689 (6,1,2) - this seems not feeling good fixed
00:50:689 (1,2) - try to reduce 4 reverse
Rating:★★☆☆☆ too many straight
[Easy]
00:10:689 (3) - not feeling good
00:14:535 (2) - don't make a head to a end
00:39:920 (3,4) - too narrow,it could be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1359736
00:47:612 (2) - ^
01:46:074 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is hard to play for hid
01:55:305 (5) - NC fixed
Rating:★★☆☆☆ try to make slider more pretty:3[/quote]

thank you for modding!

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Ikaros_F 2014-02-23T10:43:56+00:00

Hi,Twinkle
昨晚说好了今天给你的mod

[Yuki's Extra]
00:11:843 (3,4,5,6) - 其中00:11:939 (4,5) - 交换一下位置会比较适合吧
00:28:382 (4,5,6) - 不把它往左移动一点，让00:28:574 (6) - 的位置和00:27:420 (9) - 的位置一样嘛
00:10:305 (3) - 00:10:497 (4) - 把这2个滑条的头尾都交换下位置可能flow会顺一点吧
00:25:689 (2) - 滑条头是不是多了一个finish呢
抱歉找不出什么了._.
这难度简直能玩

[Another]
00:17:228 (2) - ctrl+G会顺一些吧
00:44:536 (1,2) - 这里感觉读图不方便，因为ds的原因，建议→http://puu.sh/77j8L
00:50:113 (2,3,4) - 同上，感觉这个距离的跳跃在这里不太合适欸
01:13:382 (1) - 这里滑条弄减速感觉不太好，建议还是原来的bpm但是弄成中间一堆红点的滑条，像这样→http://puu.sh/77jl5（我画的不好看啦
01:25:689 (1) - 这里也和上面那条一样
玩的时候感觉有点地方空的时间有点长会感觉不连贯
比如00:36:651 (6,7,8,9,10) - ，所以我建议这么改一下→http://puu.sh/77jTJ

[Insane]
感觉AR9会好一点._.
00:37:420 (10) - 取消滑条回转的箭头，在00:37:805处加上一个circle在该滑条头处会不会有意思一些呢
00:40:305 (4) - 感觉这个放在下面太乱了，所以我建议还是移到3的上面吧→http://puu.sh/77kf4
01:22:612 (1) - 其实感觉这里不用NC啦

[Hard]
01:22:612 (4) - 感觉这个弹来弹去时间太长了，建议→http://puu.sh/77kEM
01:27:035 (2) - 可以吧这个note去掉
00:50:689 (1,2,3) - 把这3个的ds还是弄一致吧，把中间的2往左边移动一些

抱歉normal和easy找不出什么东西

就这样了，祝你好运

顺便射一发

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-02-23T13:38:30+00:00

Ikaros_F wrote:
Hi,Twinkle
昨晚说好了今天给你的mod

[Another]
00:17:228 (2) - ctrl+G会顺一些吧 fixed
00:44:536 (1,2) - 这里感觉读图不方便，因为ds的原因，建议→http://puu.sh/77j8L 嗯，DS加大了
00:50:113 (2,3,4) - 同上，感觉这个距离的跳跃在这里不太合适欸这里有前面那么多的来回的缓冲读图肯定是没问题啦
01:13:382 (1) - 这里滑条弄减速感觉不太好，建议还是原来的bpm但是弄成中间一堆红点的滑条，像这样→http://puu.sh/77jl5（我画的不好看啦减速的确是不妥，改了。
01:25:689 (1) - 这里也和上面那条一样 fixed
玩的时候感觉有点地方空的时间有点长会感觉不连贯
比如00:36:651 (6,7,8,9,10) - ，所以我建议这么改一下→http://puu.sh/77jTJ 这里我那种摆放已经十分跳了，再加note就太难了。

[Insane]
感觉AR9会好一点._. 好！就AR9了
00:37:420 (10) - 取消滑条回转的箭头，在00:37:805处加上一个circle在该滑条头处会不会有意思一些呢前面已经有很多note了，再加不太好
00:40:305 (4) - 感觉这个放在下面太乱了，所以我建议还是移到3的上面吧→http://puu.sh/77kf4 好
01:22:612 (1) - 其实感觉这里不用NC啦的确，那里我加错了orz

[Hard]
01:22:612 (4) - 感觉这个弹来弹去时间太长了，建议→http://puu.sh/77kEM 好的
01:27:035 (2) - 可以吧这个note去掉这后面还是有鼓声的虽然不是太响，去了不是太好
00:50:689 (1,2,3) - 把这3个的ds还是弄一致吧，把中间的2往左边移动一些 ;w;这个我自己都没发现fixed

抱歉normal和easy找不出什么东西

就这样了，祝你好运
顺便射一发

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-02-23T14:45:59+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Yuki]
00:07:035 (2) - Ctrl+G nope
>00:07:228 (3) - ^ better flow to 00:07:612 (1) -
01:03:766 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1359668 better flow to 01:04:535 (1) - 好
01:28:766 (8,9,10,11) - same as 01:27:228 (8,9,10,11) - 故意的
01:58:766 - try 0.5x? 动了点
>01:57:997 (5) - thy other shape 没想法，结尾就“善良”点了

Ikaros_F wrote:
[Yuki's Extra]
00:11:843 (3,4,5,6) - 其中00:11:939 (4,5) - 交换一下位置会比较适合吧这岂不是更鬼畜
00:28:382 (4,5,6) - 不把它往左移动一点，让00:28:574 (6) - 的位置和00:27:420 (9) - 的位置一样嘛这里整段梗改了下
00:10:305 (3) - 00:10:497 (4) - 把这2个滑条的头尾都交换下位置可能flow会顺一点吧没问题我打过
00:25:689 (2) - 滑条头是不是多了一个finish呢是多了，已去
抱歉找不出什么了._.
这难度简直能玩能玩

BG又换了？
劳烦你改了……

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CPU_old

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CPU_old 2014-02-23T17:07:34+00:00

[General]
除了那个GD外音效可以找到更适合的

[Easy]
感觉太分散规划一个能组成有趣形状的紧凑路线会更好

[Normal]
横平竖直的地方可以加倾斜角直滑条中间也可以加一个很细微的弧度

[Hard]
00:13:382 (7) - 改为一个圈留出了1/2拍的停顿
00:16:939 (4) - 去除 00:17:035 (5) - 改为3个圈
00:51:843 (4) - 改为一个1/2拍的滑条
00:53:382 (4) - 改为一个3/4拍的滑条或者多重复一个1/4拍
01:24:343 (3) - 重复太多了
01:25:689 (6,7) - 略感突兀

[Insane]
00:39:727 (6,1) - insane建议减小间距
00:40:689 (6) 与 00:40:882 (7) 与 00:41:074 (8) - 可以Ctrl+G

[Another]
00:36:843 (7,10) - Ctrl+G
00:37:035 (8,9) - ^ 会更有趣
00:56:266 (8) 与 00:56:459 (9,10,11) - 建议减小间距
01:47:228 (1) - 在Grid size: tiny下向右平移6个单位长度
01:47:420 (3) - ^
01:55:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - selection centre 逆时针旋转5度 Grid size: tiny下向上平移2个单位长度
01:56:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - selection centre 逆时针旋转5度
01:48:766 (1,2,3,4,1) - 建议减小间距
01:51:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

曲子非常棒！祝早日rank

Flappy Bird_old

Flappy Bird_old 2014-02-23T18:50:10+00:00

[General]

Maybe name your diffs like this:
Easy - Beginner
Normal - Standard
Hard - Advanced
Insane - Hyper
Another - Another
Extra - Extra

[Easy]

00:10:689 (3) - This slider looks ugly, try making something like this? http://puu.sh/77J0K.JPG
00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit ugly and it looks like you just threw that slider randomly in map, try making something like this? http://puu.sh/77JtT.JPG
00:36:843 (3) - This slider is ugly, try making it a bit neater
00:53:766 (4) - x:216 y:128 - Put it here because it can follow the flow
01:02:228 - Note here?
01:25:305 (1,2) - You made good blanket here, so why don't you make blankets on 01:22:228 (2,3) and 01:23:766 (4,5) ?
01:28:382 (1) - NC
01:29:151 (1) - Remove NC

[Normal]

00:20:305 - So you followed the rythm in the beginning and now here is an emptiness, try putting a note here, this is just my opinion, feel free to ignore it!
00:37:420 (5) - This overlap is kinda tricky, try putting this note somewhere else
00:41:459 (1) - Overlapping sliders isn't recommended for anyone, anywhere, anyhow. This can trick HD users, it's not so much of a problem if you can't get it somewhere better. If you like it, just leave it as it is
01:04:535 (2) - x:68 y:160 - Put this slider here to make a perfect blanket
01:58:766 (1) - Add finish here
This diff is better than easy, but some patterns are crazy and don't make sense, also SV is a bit too high for normal but okay.

[Hard]

00:10:689 (2,3,4) - Do not overlap sliders like this!
00:12:035 (1) - Remove this?
00:47:612 (7) - NC
00:48:766 (1) - Remove NC, also don't overlap
01:32:228 (3) - NC here because it's new rythm
01:32:997 (8) - ^
Some patterns are crazy, again. Fix some of them, try looking into similar beatmap's patterns ( LOOK for ranked diffs )

I couldn't find any mistakes in next diffs, they were better than previous ones, I think you are better at making insanes, lunatic diffs than easy ones!
GOOD LUCK

44teru-k - Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~

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[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

Jemmmmy wrote:

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Snaggletooth wrote:

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Spring Roll wrote:

Easy

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[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

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