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Mikakuning! - Tomadoi Recipe (TV size)

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koreapenguin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 3월 2일 일요일 at 오후 9:28:51

Artist: Mikakuning!
Title: Tomadoi Recipe (TV size)
Source: 未確認で進行形
Tags: Mikakunin de Shinkoukei Junky Haruka Terui Eriko Matsui Yuri Yoshida op opening Xinely laurier sonnyc
BPM: 170
Filesize: 9504kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 366 notes)
  2. Laurier's Hard (4.97 stars, 273 notes)
  3. Sonnyc's Normal (4.21 stars, 145 notes)
  4. Xinely's Easy (3.19 stars, 114 notes)
Download: Mikakuning! - Tomadoi Recipe (TV size)
Download: Mikakuning! - Tomadoi Recipe (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 4th Ranked Map :)
Map Set
Xinely's Easy - By. Xinely
Sonnyc's Normal - By. Sonnyc
Laurier's Hard - By. Laurier
Insane - By. Me
Vicho Thanks for BG, Video >_< \o/ Enjoy ><
Ending is > here < By. P A N

History
(Thanks MOD) (★=Special thanks)
(1) W h i t e
(2) TaMul
(★) Vicho
(3) smallboat
(4) Sonnyc
(5) arviejhay
(6) 10crystalmask01
(7) -Bakari-
(8) Caffe_[Latte]
(★) P o M u T a
(★) Minao
(9) Irreversible
(10) HabiHolic
(★) Unsfamiliar
(11) Okoratu
(12) -Kirito
(13) Andrea ()
(14) bmin11
(★) Andrea ()
(★) Irreversible()
Topic Starter
koreapenguin
yea Laurier is Baka
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

koreapenguin wrote:

yea Laurier is Baka
really?
Laurier
Topic Starter
koreapenguin
아싸 풀맵셋
Beige
아싸 첫모딩

[General]

AudioLeadIn 500ms 정도는 하셔야 될거 같은데요?

[Easy]

I recommand to use slidertick sound like soft-slidertick(number)

00:01:298 (2) - This distance is 1.17x, Move 2 grid down also can make blanket, too.
I skipped some nazi, like blanket, etc.

00:35:181 (2) - Delete clap goal of slider. Because it's rlly weird, I recommand to use slidertick sound.

00:36:592 (2) - weird rhythm, How about like this?

01:15:769 (4) - Move 1 grid up at last point make straight slider like 01:17:534 (2) - this slider.

01:19:651 (1) - oh, rlly overlap with 01:17:534 (2) - this slider. It really can make confuse noob player. How about like this?

01:25:651 (5) - overlapped with 01:23:887 (3) - this slider. Move (276,204) is better.
Don't forget 01:27:416 (2) - stack with this circle.

[Normal]

From AIBAT, AIMod : Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:26:961 - snap to 00:26:975

슬라이더 아트가 예술적입니다 ㅇㅅㅇbb

00:21:769 (5) - NC

01:21:769 (1) - NC 제거

솔직히 잡을거 없어요. ㅋㅋ;

[Hard]

00:14:798 (2) - Delete this circle. Little bit weird and overmapped.

00:23:181 (1) - You forget add whistle at goal of slider.

01:02:357 (3) - custom hitsound is better.

really good mapset.

[Insane]

00:14:710 (1) - 피니쉬 넣어주세요.

00:33:416 (3,5) - 걍 디테일입니다. NC 해보시는게 어떨까요?

00:35:534 (5) - Ctrl+G 하시는게 더 재미있을 듯.

00:35:887 (1,2,3,4) - 너무 단순합니다. 꼬아보세요!

00:40:828 (6) - 끝에 클랩 제거

01:07:651 (5) - NC 제거

01:09:063 (3,4,5,6) - 이렇게 해보세요!

01:18:240 (1) - NC 추가 하셨으면 01:19:475 (5) - NC 제거 하셨으면 01:19:651 (1) - NC 추가

01:20:710 (5) - NC 제거 하셨으면 01:21:063 (1) - NC 추가

굿bb

원하는 코드 나왔슴돠

292,328,35887,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,208,36063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,332,36240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,164,36416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

W h i t e wrote:

아싸 첫모딩

[General]

AudioLeadIn 500ms 정도는 하셔야 될거 같은데요? - :P

[Insane]

00:14:710 (1) - 피니쉬 넣어주세요.

00:33:416 (3,5) - 걍 디테일입니다. NC 해보시는게 어떨까요?

00:35:534 (5) - Ctrl+G 하시는게 더 재미있을 듯.

00:35:887 (1,2,3,4) - 너무 단순합니다. 꼬아보세요!

00:40:828 (6) - 끝에 클랩 제거

01:07:651 (5) - NC 제거

01:09:063 (3,4,5,6) - 이렇게 해보세요!

01:18:240 (1) - NC 추가 하셨으면 01:19:475 (5) - NC 제거 하셨으면 01:19:651 (1) - NC 추가

01:20:710 (5) - NC 제거 하셨으면 01:21:063 (1) - NC 추가

굿bb

Thanks mod 흰색님
Enon
굇펭귄님 응원함다
GugUCorn
[General]

  1. Please don't Check "WideScreen Support", "Letterbox during breaks".
[Xinely's Easy]

  1. 00:48:592 (1) - Whistle on head of sldier
  2. 00:51:416 (1) - ^
  3. 00:58:475 (3) - I think that Clap on arrow of slider is little strange..
  4. 01:24:945 (4) - blanket. Like this
  5. 01:23:887 (3,1,2) - Add NC on 01:23:887(3) and remove NC on 01:26:004(1). And add NC on 01:27:416 (2)
[소닉 노말]

  1. 00:22:475 (8) - 슬라이드 꼬리에 드럼 휘슬
  2. 01:06:769 - 리듬 추가

    소닉님 제 하드겟난...><
[Laurier's Hard]
recommend AR 7 ^^

  1. 00:22:122 (2) - remove clap on end of sldier
  2. 00:27:416 (1) - clap on end of sldier
  3. 00:28:475 (3) - clap
  4. 00:52:475 (4,1) - swap NC
  5. 00:53:534 (3) - whistle
  6. 01:01:651 - Change to Normal Hitsound for 01:02:357 (3)'s Clap sound..Maybe it's more better
  7. 01:15:240 (4) - perfectly overlap. move to (278,32)
  8. 01:24:240 (2) - clap on end of slider
[Insane]
  • IRC MOD
  1. 00:00:593 ~ - 첫파트 휘슬사운드 소리 큰 것 같아요.. 50% 정도로 낮춰주세요
  2. 00:36:681 (6) - 클랩 추천
  3. 00:36:945 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리에 드럼 휘슬
  4. 00:46:475 (3) - 모양 개선?
  5. 00:48:240 (3) - 클랩?
  6. 00:51:063 (3) - 클랩
  7. 00:54:240 (5) - 뉴콤보
  8. 00:54:592 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
  9. 00:56:004 (5) - 첫부분 드럼 휘슬
  10. 01:07:651 (5) - 클랩
  11. 01:23:887 (1) - 슬라 첫부분 클랩
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

TaMul wrote:

[General]

  1. Please don't Check "WideScreen Support", "Letterbox during breaks".
[Insane]
  • IRC MOD
  1. 00:00:593 ~ - 첫파트 휘슬사운드 소리 큰 것 같아요.. 50% 정도로 낮춰주세요
  2. 00:36:681 (6) - 클랩 추천
  3. 00:36:945 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리에 드럼 휘슬
  4. 00:46:475 (3) - 모양 개선?
  5. 00:48:240 (3) - 클랩?
  6. 00:51:063 (3) - 클랩
  7. 00:54:240 (5) - 뉴콤보
  8. 00:54:592 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
  9. 00:56:004 (5) - 첫부분 드럼 휘슬
  10. 01:07:651 (5) - 클랩
  11. 01:23:887 (1) - 슬라 첫부분 클랩

Thanks mod baka
Laurier
Vicho
tehee
SPOILER
2014-02-05 20:01 koreapenguin: vicho chan, how are you?
2014-02-05 20:01 Vicho: I'm good
2014-02-05 20:01 Vicho: you?
2014-02-05 20:03 koreapenguin: i always sleey, lazy =_=
2014-02-05 20:03 koreapenguin: sleepy*
2014-02-05 20:15 Vicho: uploading video
2014-02-05 20:15 koreapenguin: lol
2014-02-05 20:15 koreapenguin: fast
2014-02-05 20:16 Vicho: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p3ih4rDduug map this too
2014-02-05 20:16 Vicho: lol
2014-02-05 20:17 Vicho: http://puu.sh/6LoP7.zip
2014-02-05 20:17 Vicho: there's a BG, maybe you like it
2014-02-05 20:17 koreapenguin: lol
2014-02-05 20:17 koreapenguin: doki doki
2014-02-05 20:19 koreapenguin: lol
2014-02-05 20:19 koreapenguin: really thanks vicho ><
2014-02-05 20:19 Vicho: video offset is -186
smallboat
Hi,koreapenguin,In-game mod req.

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Clear.

[Xinely's Easy]

00:36:592 (2) - I think this rhythm is fit the drum sound : 00:51:416 (1) - Have a bit the finish sound,so I suggest can add finish in the head this here? (Remember turn down the volume)

[Sonnyc's Normal] Have 4 errors in AiMod :
00:20:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feel the sound a bit noisy,turn down 10~20%? Because a bit loud voice.
00:33:063 (1) - Perhaps can add whistle in the slider head.
01:22:475 (1,2,3,4) - Feel the continuous finish hitsound a bit noisy , cancel 01:22:828 (2,4) finish?

[Laurier's Hard]

00:03:416 (1) - I feel a bit low voice (compare with 00:00:593 (1) ,seems a bit strange.),turn up 10% ~ 20%?
00:06:240 (1) - ^
00:33:416 (1) - I feel this use ctrl+g will be a good flow.
01:05:181 (4) - Move to (408|176),I think have a good jump.
01:18:769 (3) - Feel can add finish in the slider head.
01:21:945 (4) - ^

[Insane]

00:01:298 (2) - Cancel the medium whistle? Feel no need continuous whistle hitsound at this here.
00:07:475 (4) - Cancel whistle in the slider head? ^
00:20:887 (4) - I feel stack 00:20:710 (3) will be have a sense of rhythm.
00:35:534 (5) - Stack 00:36:063 (2) and turn a bit angle ? 00:36:945 (1) - Try move to (184|44) ? Make a bit jump.
00:38:004 (6) - Try move to (504|160) ? ^
00:42:416 (3) - Try move to (320|372) ? ^
01:15:416 (1) - Stack 01:14:534 (4) ? Keep good pattern and flow.
01:20:710 (5) - Stack 01:14:534 (4) ,too ?
01:26:357 (5) - Move to (472|216),I think have a good jump.

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
Xinely

W h i t e wrote:

아싸 첫모딩

[notice][General]

AudioLeadIn 500ms 정도는 하셔야 될거 같은데요?

[Easy]

I recommand to use slidertick sound like soft-slidertick(number)

00:01:298 (2) - This distance is 1.17x, Move 2 grid down also can make blanket, too.
I skipped some nazi, like blanket, etc. fix

00:35:181 (2) - Delete clap goal of slider. Because it's rlly weird, I recommand to use slidertick sound. deleted

00:36:592 (2) - weird rhythm, How about like this? note about your mod ahahaha

01:15:769 (4) - Move 1 grid up at last point make straight slider like 01:17:534 (2) - this slider. yep

01:19:651 (1) - oh, rlly overlap with 01:17:534 (2) - this slider. It really can make confuse noob player. How about like this? my mistake but different than your SS since i supposed 01:18:945 (3,1) - for blanket

01:25:651 (5) - overlapped with 01:23:887 (3) - this slider. Move (276,204) is better. yap
Don't forget 01:27:416 (2) - stack with this circle.

TaMul wrote:

[General]

  1. Please don't Check "WideScreen Support", "Letterbox during breaks".
[Xinely's Easy]

  1. 00:48:592 (1) - Whistle on head of sldier only drum sound here so no
  2. 00:51:416 (1) - ^ should be finish because cymbal. my mistake. thanks 4 mention it
  3. 00:58:475 (3) - I think that Clap on arrow of slider is little strange.. blame the song (music) C:
  4. 01:24:945 (4) - blanket. Like this damn i already used approach circle and still not perfect? ;-;
  5. 01:23:887 (3,1,2) - Add NC on 01:23:887(3) and remove NC on 01:26:004(1). And add NC on 01:27:416 (2) i confused see the time but i understand what you're mean. fixed
@smallboat : the first one, sorry blame the sound of like cymbal on red tick. louder than drum and i need to follow it too i guess. the second one : yeah thanks 4 mention it but i found it while was checking this diff lol
thanks 4 mods C:
code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 5556.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 61480
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11884,23178,34472,45766,57060,62707
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tomadoi Recipe (TV size)
TitleUnicode:とまどい→レシピ (TV size)
Artist:Mikakuning!
ArtistUnicode:みかくにんぐッ!
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:Mikakunin DE Sinkoukei
Tags:Mikakunin de Shinkoukei Junky Haruka Terui Eriko Matsui Yuri Yoshida op opening Xinely laurier sonnyc
BeatmapID:366526
BeatmapSetID:147975

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,-186,"mikakunin.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Topic Starter
koreapenguin

smallboat wrote:

Hi,koreapenguin,In-game mod req.

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Clear.

[Insane]

00:01:298 (2) - Cancel the medium whistle? Feel no need continuous whistle hitsound at this here. - ok :D
00:07:475 (4) - Cancel whistle in the slider head? ^ - ^
00:20:887 (4) - I feel stack 00:20:710 (3) will be have a sense of rhythm. - i think so now is better and more fun :D
00:35:534 (5) - Stack 00:36:063 (2) and turn a bit angle ? - keep xD
00:36:945 (1) - Try move to (184|44) ? Make a bit jump. - change different
00:38:004 (6) - Try move to (504|160) ? ^ - ^
00:42:416 (3) - Try move to (320|372) ? ^ - ^
01:15:416 (1) - Stack 01:14:534 (4) ? Keep good pattern and flow. - xD
01:20:710 (5) - Stack 01:14:534 (4) ,too ? - xD
01:26:357 (5) - Move to (472|216),I think have a good jump. - lol nice!

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
<3 bigboat
Beige

Xinely wrote:

00:36:592 (2) - weird rhythm, How about like this? note about your mod ahahaha
omg lol Q_Q
Sonnyc
White

W h i t e wrote:

[Normal]

From AIBAT, AIMod : Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:26:961 - snap to 00:26:975 // 이거 왜있지? 삭제함요

슬라이더 아트가 예술적입니다 ㅇㅅㅇbb

00:21:769 (5) - NC // 2 주기로 뉴콤 하고 있고 동일한 드럼이라 동일 콤보 시키고 싶습니다. 대칭이라는 점에서도 뉴콤 하면 좀 틀어질까 걱정
01:21:769 (1) - NC 제거 // 이거는 드럼 때문에 추가한건데 일단 더 보고 문제 될듯 싶으면 삭제하겠습니다
TaMul

TaMul wrote:

[소닉 노말]

  1. 00:22:475 (8) - 슬라이드 꼬리에 드럼 휘슬 // 왜 힛사가 사라졌지<< 추가.
  2. 01:06:769 - 리듬 추가 // 강한 박자 위주로 만든 부분이라 01:18:063 에도 마찬가지로 리듬은 비웠어요,,
smallboat

smallboat wrote:

[Sonnyc's Normal] Have 4 errors in AiMod :
00:20:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feel the sound a bit noisy,turn down 10~20%? Because a bit loud voice. // Fixed
00:33:063 (1) - Perhaps can add whistle in the slider head. // No hit sounds emphasizes the silence here the best imo.
01:22:475 (1,2,3,4) - Feel the continuous finish hitsound a bit noisy , cancel 01:22:828 (2,4) finish? // I think keeping all sounds the same will be the best, and I wanted to emphasize these with a finish. This custom sounds isn't that terribly loud, is it?
Thanks.
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osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 61480
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
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GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tomadoi Recipe (TV size)
TitleUnicode:とまどい→レシピ (TV size)
Artist:Mikakuning!
ArtistUnicode:みかくにんぐッ!
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:Sonnyc's Normal
Source:Mikakunin DE Sinkoukei
Tags:Mikakunin de Shinkoukei Junky Haruka Terui Eriko Matsui Yuri Yoshida op opening Xinely laurier sonnyc
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CircleSize:4
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196,344,56004,2,0,B|168:340|144:328|120:292|124:256|124:256|136:176,1,200,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
156,104,57063,6,0,L|356:104,1,200,4|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
376,184,58122,1,2,0:3:0:0:
352,260,58475,2,0,B|316:336|224:340|172:312|140:252|136:184,1,300,2|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59887,12,2,61298,0:0:0:0:
184,64,62710,6,0,B|228:40|284:40|328:64,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,88,63416,2,0,B|400:117|424:168|420:218,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,256,64122,2,0,B|370:280|339:265|307:251|266:275,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,312,65004,2,0,B|164:328|124:316|108:280,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,256,65534,6,0,B|170:213|153:151|102:132,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,124,66240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,152,66945,2,0,B|240:196|224:224|224:268|248:300,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,344,67828,2,0,B|346:356|382:330|388:300,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,260,68357,5,4,0:3:0:0:
404,180,68710,1,8,0:3:0:0:
412,100,69063,2,0,L|452:64,2,50,2|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,84,69769,1,2,0:3:0:0:
252,68,70122,1,8,0:3:0:0:
180,100,70475,2,0,L|120:132,2,50,2|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
124,40,71181,6,0,L|35:87,1,99.9999999999999,2|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
24,168,71887,1,2,0:3:0:0:
35,247,72240,2,0,P|36:252|56:296,1,50,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,320,72592,2,0,B|128:356|181:336|175:300|219:184|84:320|128:203|122:167|175:148|219:184,1,300,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
288,216,74004,6,0,B|328:232|392:232|432:196,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,164,74710,2,0,B|479:127|458:50|416:32,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,55,75416,2,0,B|348:80|311:65|274:51|239:76,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,144,76298,2,0,B|300:175|288:216|252:232,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,248,76828,6,0,B|179:264|109:224|102:179,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,140,77534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,300,78240,2,0,B|136:324|176:332|220:324|256:340,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,360,79122,2,0,B|364:324|364:324|364:272,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,236,79651,5,4,0:3:0:0:
300,188,80004,1,8,0:3:0:0:
224,208,80357,2,0,L|168:224,2,50,2|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
244,132,81063,2,0,B|256:88|236:24|168:16,1,150,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,48,81769,6,0,L|88:132,1,99.9999999999999,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
44,192,82475,5,12,0:3:0:0:
96,252,82828,1,12,0:3:0:0:
148,312,83181,1,12,0:3:0:0:
200,372,83534,1,12,3:0:0:0:
280,372,83887,6,0,B|336:372|416:336|436:268,1,200,12|0,1:3|0:0,2:0:0:0:
448,188,84945,1,12,0:3:0:0:
436,108,85298,6,0,B|424:74|402:51|368:40,1,99.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
288,40,86003,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,124,86533,2,0,B|155:172|192:208|143:257,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
72,288,87416,2,0,B|38:276|15:254|4:220,1,99.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,204,88122,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Laurier's Hard:

00:22:122 (2) - Delete Clap at the end. Three claps in a row didn't seem to fit the song.
00:30:945 (3) - The stacks felt boring imo. Really suggest to move somewhere else. (128,216) or (355,109) are those.
00:33:416 (1,1) - Imo NC spams felt a bit pointless since there was no sv change. If it's your personal preference, free to keep though.
00:42:857 - Consider adding a note here.
01:00:945 (6) - I think the hitsound at the end should be something like soft-whistle.
arviejhay
Hi from my modding queue

Xinely's normal
00:02:358(2) - slider end - add whistle
00:05:149(2) - slider end - Add whistle
00:08:010(2) - slider end - add whistle
00:10:802(3) - slider end - add whistle

Insane
00:00:934(1) - slider end - add whistle
00:06:610(1) - slider end - add whistle
00:09:418(1) - slider end - add whistle
00:26:878(4) - slider end - remove whistle
00:27:092(5) - slider start - add whistle
00:36:603(5) - add clap
00:41:078(6) - slider end - remove clap
01:07:660(5),(6),(7) - Add clap
01:08:190(8) - slider end - add clap
01:13:839(1) - add clap
01:19:563(6) - add clap
01:21:945(4) - add clap

Good luck mapping
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

arviejhay wrote:

Hi from my modding queue

Insane
00:00:934(1) - slider end - add whistle
00:06:610(1) - slider end - add whistle
00:09:418(1) - slider end - add whistle
00:26:878(4) - slider end - remove whistle
00:27:092(5) - slider start - add whistle
00:36:603(5) - add clap
00:41:078(6) - slider end - remove clap
01:07:660(5),(6),(7) - Add clap
01:08:190(8) - slider end - add clap
01:13:839(1) - add clap
01:19:563(6) - add clap
01:21:945(4) - add clap

Good luck mapping
Thanks mod :D
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
*You know,your BG can easily be made to have the 1366x768 dimensions for widescreen computers 8-) Just a suggestion.
[Xinely's Easy]
00:53:887 (4,3) - Clearly you can see the overlap here, either try to move these objects apart, or stack them.
01:17:534 (2) - Doesn't sound quite right here. Try this rhythm instead:
With a finish on the 3rd hit circle.

[Sonnyc's Normal]
00:20:710 (2,3,4) - This might be a bit hard to read. Consider unstacking them.
00:22:122 (6,7,8) - ^
01:12:592 (4) - NC?
01:21:769 (1) - Remove NC, not necessary here.

[Laurier's Hard]
Nothing wrong here.

[Insane]
00:38:357 (8) - Add finish no the tail

Nice mapset :P Good luck!
Topic Starter
koreapenguin

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
*You know,your BG can easily be made to have the 1366x768 dimensions for widescreen computers 8-) Just a suggestion.


[Insane]
00:38:357 (8) - Add finish no the tail
- fix

Nice mapset :P Good luck!
Thanks >< MOD
riffy
Yo, as requested.

[General]
  1. I think that you're supposed to use the official name of the anime as a source. It shoul be 未確認で進行形 Also, add Engaged to the Unidentified to tags, it's an english-translated name of the anime.
[Xinely's Easy]
  1. 00:06:945 (2) - nazi - I would change its shape to something like 00:09:769 (3) - because it'll look neater and make your flow a bit smoother. example!
  2. 00:08:357 (3) - I'd replace the slider with two circles, as you've done it with two previous patterns. It reflects the music better, I think.
    Note: agree? 00:13:298 (3,4,5) - do the same here. Just Ctrl+G the selection and fix the spacing, it'll make your rhythm a bit prettier.
    Note2: 01:27:416 (4) - same happens here :)
  3. 00:15:416 (2,3) - nazi - the transition here doesn't feel great. (3) is catchable, but it feels a bit awkward because of the angle. :(
    Note: 01:04:122 (5,1) - the same :(
  4. 00:23:181 (1) - you can move (1), so (4) will shape a blanket slider. (example le cute blanket)
  5. 00:33:769 (2) - the beat here sounds a bit awkward, eitherremove the circle or add one on 00:33:416 - so, that'd fit better.
  6. 01:02:710 (2) - i'd consider adding a new combo here. It'd emphasize the start of kiai and fit with the song <3
    Note: yeah, the previous combo will become kinda too short, but I think beginners will be able to understand it.
  7. 01:15:416 (3) - nazi - try to move this circle up, in order to make it more readable. The whole pattern will look like this, which is quite cool, imo.

    Nice diff. Like your style! <3
[Sonnyc's Normal]
  1. Try to reduce HP and OD by one tick. HP5 feels too agressive for this cheerful song and OD3 will make your unstable (from 1/2 and 3/2 to 1/1) rhythm a bit easier!
  2. 00:05:534 (4) - would replace all similar sliders with two circles. It sounds the way better, imo.
  3. 00:28:475 (5,1) - previously, you've stacked similar 1/2 patterns, I'd recommend you to do the same here. Consistency, y'know.
  4. 00:33:063 (1) - shouldn't this slider be end on the next red tick? I feel like it'll fit with the music much better. Though it may be a bit hard to play, it sounds awesome!
  5. 00:44:357 (4,1) - the transition feels a bit weird and I don't really like the way how you ignore the clap on 00:45:416 - I'd recommend you to map this beat and look for a better pattern. an example
  6. 01:02:357 - since the Easy diff has a circle here, it is a bit illogical to have it unmapped in this diff. You know, Normal should be a bit harder, so I recommend you to place a circle here!
  7. 01:21:769 (1) - looks really inconsistent and confusing, would recommend you to remove this new combo.

    Great, except for a few patterns I didn't really like.
[Laurier's Hard]
  1. I would increase the HP Drain to make the diff spread a bit better-balanced. Also, HP Drain 6 feels better and a bit more interesting with your rhythm!
  2. 00:05:534 (4) - 00:08:710 (6) - these two sliders would be a trouble for some players. You know, the second repeat appears too fast and it's really hard to notice it. Try to replace the repeat with a circle or something. I'm sure that it'd work much better.
  3. 00:11:181 (3) - vocals appear! add a new combo to emphasize vocals and jumps. That'd work really great here.
  4. 00:33:416 (1,1) - NCs here are verused, imo. I don't see/hear any reason to use them. Try to remove them in order to keep comboing consistent and follow the music closer.
  5. 01:27:416 (5) - it kinda repeats the pattern on 00:11:181 (3), so I'd add a new combo and some jump. At least add a jump, it will fit here perfectly!

    Liked the slowdown parts, everything else is alright, too.
[Insane]
  1. x2.5+ jumps in the beginning of the map (it's a calm part, btw) aare really confusing, imo. They're just too difficult for that part and don't really fit with the music, try to reduce the DS on them a bit.
  2. 00:17:269 (6) - please, remove the circle it feels really overmapped. I understand your effort to make the diff more enjoyable for skillful players but overmapping isn't a way to go. :(
    Note: 00:28:034 (3) - the same here and in some more patterns. I'm sure youcan fix it yourself! :)
  3. 01:01:210 (9,1) - love it. It looks and plays perfectly.
  4. 01:24:769 - thr beat is quite strong, I don't think that you can ignore this. Try to make slider 1/2 shorter and put a circle on 01:24:945 - to make it sound a bit prettier.

    Except for some overmapped parts everything else is nicely done. Good job!
Nice mapset. Try to get a few more mods just to make it perfect. <3

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Best of luck!
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