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愛シテモ 恋シテモ ダメダメよ~
ひっふぅ～み～よっ
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:3
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Sana and YuupiN thank you 
Hi! ganbarimasu :3
Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
[Insane]
Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
- wide screenなんとかのチェック☑を外しましょう□
[Insane]
HitsoundについてはまだWIPっぽいので指摘してないです。
- HPとOD低すぎィ！ +1か+2しましょう。
- 00:21:991 - ここに3連打置きたいです！スピナーの開始は00:22:234 - からにして、00:22:153 - ここにfinishも付けられます。
- 00:25:072 (6) - 少し↑に移動して曲げてやるとさらに流れが綺麗になります！
- 00:32:045 (4) - この辺まで持ってきたほうがジャンプ気持ちいいです。
- 00:44:531 (2) - 00:43:883 (9) - Stack Leniencyでズレることもないのでここにスタック？
- 00:56:045 (6) - もう少し左下に配置したほうがAIMしやすいです。x240 y188あたり？
Topic Starter
Thanks Guy and kiiwa
I'll remake this mapset :3
kantokun asked me to make hard diff. But your diff has many unrankable point (Off-screen... etc) and a bit hard (stream and some 1/2 sliders ) so i cant add it on this mapset because of balance of difficulty.
I'll remake this mapset :3
kantokun asked me to make hard diff. But your diff has many unrankable point (Off-screen... etc) and a bit hard (stream and some 1/2 sliders ) so i cant add it on this mapset because of balance of difficulty.
very like this map ヽ(●ˋ∀ˊ●)ﾉ 
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thanks
why cat always got so cute and interesting song to map
I'm jealous =.=
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I'm jealous =.=
☆
shoot skystar
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Thanks
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Thanks guys <3
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scanter wrote:
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Unsnapnote is in iyasine's insane, skystar's extra
Baka iyasine.
Baka iyasine.
hey it's alive 0.0
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_(:3 」∠)_ I'll add hitsounds to Normal diff
please rank this /.\
/run nantoka kantoka
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hai :3 Insaneは前見たのですきっぷします！
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
[Skystar]
[Hard]
[Normal]
[litoluna's Easy]
Good luck!
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
- videoの画質が良くないと思ったのでもしよかったらこれ使ってみてください。現状のものよりもヌルヌルで画質もいいと思います。 (使用する場合は拡張子が違うので注意)
http://puu.sh/8rY13.avi
[Skystar]
- 00:06:585 (1) - Add finish?
- 00:09:180 (1) - ^
- 00:25:396 (1) - Add clap or whistle to slider end. better match the song.
- 00:22:153 (3) - Add finish to slider head.
- 00:30:585 (1) - same 00:25:396 (1) - here.
- 01:07:720 (4,5,1) - hmm, I thought that this is the overmapping. Actually, there is a sound 01:07:720 - 01:07:801 - only here. so I recommend rhythm pettern like a iyasine's Insane and Insane.
02:27:179 - 02:47:449 - Amazing part. cool!
- 00:13:721 (8,9) - なんか曲がりすぎじゃない!? もうすこーしだけ緩やかにすると更に見栄えよくなりそうです。
- 03:12:341 (4,1) - 03:12:665 (4,1) - アッー！！！！！！ 03:13:395 (1) - HRでプレイ中ここでfailするまで想像できた
なんも言うことない！！ nice map!
[Hard]
- 00:34:964 (4) - 個人的にだけどスライダーがずれてるのが気になりました。x308 y112あたりまで移動してみては？
[Normal]
- 特になし！ 03:23:125 - 03:23:449 - このへんの緑線は使ってないみたいだから消していいかも！
[litoluna's Easy]
- 00:42:910 (3) - シンバルが鳴っているのは00:42:748 - この位置なので、このスライダーの始端はfinishではなくwhislteがベターかと思います。
- 00:51:342 (2) - 00:46:153 (2,3) - ここの音取りと合わせたほうが自然かも？
- 01:41:936 (2,3) - 音取りの提案です。 特に強い音やボーカルもない場所にnoteを置くのは不自然なので、01:42:910 - ここにある音に合わせて1/1スライダーを入れたほうがいいと思います。
- 01:49:720 (5) - 00:42:910 (3) - とおなじ
Good luck!
Fycho wrote:
please rank this /.\
えいっ
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!?
Thanks guys !
Thanks guys !
another one
As promised~
Didn't mod Easy because it's perfect as it is.
Good luck!
General
- 00:44:856 - In my opinion, all diffs should use the sample iyasine used on this part, It's really fitting.
- I feel like one of the Insanes could benefit greatly from OD8, But I can't decide which one fits it better, you should discuss with iyasine about that.
Skystar's Extra
- 00:16:964 (1) - Nazi, but moving this to x:266 y:231 will make the stack perfect.
- 00:22:802 (5) - Consider a new combo here due to the snap change, I find this to be pretty confusing and hard to read.
- 00:31:721 (2) - Again, pretty nazi but moving to x:440 y:114 Will make the stack perfect.
- 00:35:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really don't like this type of patterns due to stack leniency ruining the perfect line, thus making the pattern a bit sloppy and not as clean as intended, Consider changing this by either spacing the triple or just redoing the pattern.
- 01:06:261 (1) - Nazi, this should be moved to x:340 y:152 For a perfect stack.
- 01:38:207 (2) - Maybe add a drum-hitwhistle to this in addition to the normal-hitnormal? I find it to emphasise the instrument really well.
- 01:54:260 (1,3) - I personally don't like patterns like this that intentionally don't flow visually, especially with barely curved sliders. Consider making a more curved slider that is more appealing and maybe even flip them so they flow better.
- 01:59:449 (1) - Nazi, move this to x:460 y:216 for a perfect stack.
- 02:03:341 (1) - Add a default normal whistle on the head to emphasise it better in addition to the sliderwhistle?
- 02:08:530 (1,2,3) - I personally find this pattern to be really plain and boring to play, you could possibly spice it up by doing Ctrl + G to 02:08:855 (2) - Or switch the timeline locations of 02:08:855 (2,3) - To create something like this:
- 02:24:990 (3,4) - These two make the whole combo feel stuttery and unintuitive to play, maybe Ctrl + G these two to create a cool circular movement? I personally find it to play much more nicely.
- 02:33:503 (3) - Consider doing Ctrl + G to this, It's pretty fine as it is but I find it to make the pattern a bit more interesting.
- 02:35:936 (2) - Same as above.
- 02:46:801 (4,5,6,7,1) - This lacks the impact of a section end, consider making the spacing higher to be equivelent to the previous sliders in this part or even higher than them to emphasise it better.
- 03:23:774 - 03:24:422 - 03:25:071 - 03:25:395 - 03:25:720 - As you probably learned from Airman, these levels of kiai spam aren't acceptable, I'd suggest you to remove the last two kiai bursts, this should be somewhat acceptable and still emphasise the part well.
- 03:27:665 (1,2,3) - Same as what I pointed at 02:08:530 (1,2,3)
- 03:33:828 (1,2,1,2,1) - I have no idea why, but this plays really well, Good job!
- 03:34:801 (3) - Nazi, Tail should be at x:261 y:227 For a perfect stack.
- 03:41:936 (3,3) - Should be moved to x:450 y:167 For a perfect stack.
- 03:47:936 (4) - Maybe remove this note to emphasise the vocals better? Reworking the pattern might be needed, but not mandatory.
Insane
- 00:11:694 (8,1) - Is this jump really nessecary? It just looks odd without actually affecting the playability.
- 00:19:883 (2,3) - Maybe switch the timeline locations of these two to spice up the pattern a bit?
- 00:24:585 (5,6) - Blanket is a bit off, you can see it if you Ctrl + G 00:25:072 (6)
- 00:32:856 (7) - Nazi, should be moved to x:284 y:245 For a perfect stack.
- 00:35:288 (8) - Nazi, should be moved to x:232 y:231 For a perfect stack.
- 00:56:531 (1) - Add a default normal-hitwhistle to emphasise the screeching sound?
- 01:11:450 (3,4) - Maybe blanket these? it looks kinda off and sloppy at the moment.
- 01:30:585 (1,2) - Blanket could be a bit better, Ctrl + G 01:30:585 (1) - To be able to see it better.
- 01:45:828 (1,3) - Blanket these? looks really bad at the moment in my opinion.
- 01:47:937 (4,5,6,1) - Blanket is off, readjust the shape of 01:48:423 (1) - To perfect it.
- 02:05:774 (5,1) - Blanket is off, There's not much to explain since you can see that the approach circle isn't really sitting well on the slider's border.
- 02:35:611 - End the break here? The guitar sound is on this time, not on the white tick and I think that's what you tried to emphasise.
- 03:22:314 (1,3) - Blanket is off due to the slider's curve being too flat.
- 03:45:503 (6,1) - Blanket isn't really good, Ctrl + G 03:45:503 (6) - To be able to see it better.
iyasine's Insane
- 00:22:315 (4,1) - Blanket is really off, There's not much to say because you can obviously see that it's off.
- 00:33:504 (1) - Unneeded combo, there's no emphasis change or anything like that.
- 00:50:369 (2,3) - Blanket is off, Move (3) A bit down to perfect it.
- 01:18:585 (6) - Add a new combo due to this being a new stanza?
- 01:51:666 (1) - Kinda nazi, Move this to x:149 y:129 For a perfect stack.
- 02:26:368 - Start the break here? Seems a bit better to me.
- 03:12:098 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These stream jumps are a bit too harsh for an Insane, consider reducing the spacing a bit.
Hard
- 00:09:829 (2,1) - Blanket these? looks a bit sloppy at the moment.
- 00:22:153 (1) - I recommend you to finish the spinner at 00:23:126 - And start mapping from 00:23:450 - So it would make more sense.
- 00:42:748 (1) - It seems like pretty much all the wave sliders in this diff aren't symmetrical and are too flat, I'd suggest you to redo them so they have nicer curves (Either put the points in more far positions or add a fifth point in the center) and so they are symmetrical. This also applies to the rest of the waves in this.
- 00:44:207 (1,2) - These types of stacks are really strange on Hards and I'd recommend you to refrain from them.
- 01:28:964 (1) - Again, I'd recommend you to end this at 01:29:937 - And start mapping from 01:30:261
- 01:55:395 (5,6) - Blanket is really off, Ctrl + G 01:55:882 (6) - To be able to see it better.
- 02:20:855 (2,3) - Blanket is off, Ctrl + G 02:21:503 (3) - To be able to perfect it.
- 02:50:044 (1) - I personally don't like this slider, but It's kinda fine as it is, just my own personal preference I guess.
- 03:11:125 (3,4,5) - This overlap seems really awkward to me, I'd suggest you to just not overlap these.
- 03:26:368 (1,2) - Blanket is off, Ctrl + G 03:27:017 (2) - To be able to see it better.
- 03:49:152 (1) - Maybe end this at 03:50:693 - And add a note at 03:51:017 - For better impact for the finish?
Normal
- 00:12:910 - The way you skipped this beat is kinda awkward due to the vocals, consider changing the pattern around so you have something on here.
- 00:26:045 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved a bit if you move the red anchor of 00:26:369 (2) - a bit up.
- 00:48:747 (4) - Move the red anchor to the slidertick so the wave is symmetrical?
- 01:12:099 (3,4,1) - Maybe readjust these so you create some sort of blanket between (3) and (1)?
- 01:39:991 (1) - Consider removing the repeat and place a beat on 01:40:639 - Since the repeat shouldn't be on a new stanza.
- 01:55:557 (4) - As suggested previously, move the red anchor to the slidertick to make this symmetrical?
- 02:20:206 (1,2) - Maybe blanket these for nicer visuals?
- 02:26:693 - Start the break here?
- 03:00:422 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect triangle for nicer visuals?
- 03:05:287 (7) - Sliderend on a new stanza? I'd suggest you to change this to two circles and have the new combo on 03:05:611
- 03:33:503 (5) - Again, I'd suggest you to not put a sliderend on a new stanza, consider changing this pattern around so you get a circle/sliderhead on 03:34:152
Didn't mod Easy because it's perfect as it is.
Good luck!
@Guy
Guyマンありがと
http://puu.sh/8u3GJ.zip
記載ないところは直しました！！Guy wrote:
hai :3 Insaneは前見たのですきっぷします！
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[litoluna's Easy]lazy mod gomen ._. nice mapset :3
- 00:42:910 (3) - シンバルが鳴っているのは00:42:748 - この位置なので、このスライダーの始端はfinishではなくwhislteがベターかと思います。
- 00:51:342 (2) - 00:46:153 (2,3) - ここの音取りと合わせたほうが自然かも？
この後の流れかわるところを強調したいのでこのままで！！
- 01:41:936 (2,3) - 音取りの提案です。 特に強い音やボーカルもない場所にnoteを置くのは不自然なので、01:42:910 - ここにある音に合わせて1/1スライダーを入れたほうがいいと思います。
- 01:49:720 (5) - 00:42:910 (3) - とおなじ
Good luck!
Guyマンありがと
http://puu.sh/8u3GJ.zip
Topic Starter
Mod, Videoありがとう～！Guy wrote:
hai :3 Insaneは前見たのですきっぷします！
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General][Hard]
- videoの画質が良くないと思ったのでもしよかったらこれ使ってみてください。現状のものよりもヌルヌルで画質もいいと思います。 (使用する場合は拡張子が違うので注意) ありがとう！！！
http://puu.sh/8rY13.avi[Normal]
- 00:34:964 (4) - 個人的にだけどスライダーがずれてるのが気になりました。x308 y112あたりまで移動してみては？ok!
- 特になし！ 03:23:125 - 03:23:449 - このへんの緑線は使ってないみたいだから消していいかも！他の部分も消しました！
lazy mod gomen ._. nice mapset :3
Good luck!