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Nishizawa Hagumi - Yureru Cycle

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alacat
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月9日 at 1:30:25

Artist: Nishizawa Hagumi
Title: Yureru Cycle
Source: Cocoro@Function!
Tags: KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai Willplus pulltop ココロ＠ファンクション！
BPM: 140
Filesize: 18527kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 353 notes)
  2. KSHR's Easy (2.28 stars, 105 notes)
  3. Melo's Hard (4.88 stars, 266 notes)
  4. Umi's Normal (4.11 stars, 156 notes)
Download: Nishizawa Hagumi - Yureru Cycle
Download: Nishizawa Hagumi - Yureru Cycle (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 20th Ranked map! :)

Easy KSHR !!!
Normal -Umi- !!!
Hard Melo !!!
Thanks!
Last edited by alacat , edited 17 times in total.
phoon
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phoon
v^v^v
alacat
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alacat
:D
Melophobia
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Melophobia
http://puu.sh/6JHCV.osu
alacat
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alacat
†Melo†さん、ありがとうです ;)
CakiP
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CakiP
がんばれ～、@l@c@tさん!
KSHR
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KSHR
数日で出来るとか言っときながらBATに昇格とか色々あって遅れちゃった　ごめんね
何か変なところがあったらgame内でもforum pmでもなんでもいいので教えてもらえると
よろしく！　http://puu.sh/6PsWV.zip
alacat
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alacat
@CakiP

☆@rig@to!!!!!!!

@KSHR

Yureru Kaminoke

ありがとです :D
KSHR
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Joined July 2010
KSHR
Japanese BAT x 3
Fycho
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Joined August 2012
Fycho
nice song/map and starred xD
Umi
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Joined November 2012
Umi

KSHR wrote:

Japanese BAT x 3
I feel alone xD

anyways normal incoming >.</

done =w=/

> http://puu.sh/6QrqP/778a8d7727.rar (with some custom hitsounds :3)
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
Hi guys! Actually, this song is cool! Melophobia requested a mod so yeah, here I am :3

General thoughts
  1. Let's get nazi, shall we! Your BG rezo is 1365 x 768 and not 1366 x 768, that's a simple resize if you want to do it!
  2. Some inconsistencies in kiai-times:
    See here
  3. I see you have umi and -umi- in tags, I'd honestly remove one of them from there. If not, you should add probably ''Melo'' to your tags aswell, I myself
    would search it with ''Melo'' more but I guess that's just me.
  4. Disable widescreen support please!
  5. Clean!

KSHR's Easy
  1. 00:04:531 (3) - Shouldn't this be NC'd according to 00:07:960 (1) - ? If not, remove the NC from 00:07:960 (1) -
  2. 00:15:674 (2) - I'd move this slider a bit down to the movement doesn't feel too bad here, like erm, x:277, y:260?
  3. 00:25:531 (2) - Doesn't fit because of it's shape, I mean it does fit but not as well as it could. I think this slider should be more blanketed 00:24:031 (4) - with this sliders end. Well, if you don't understand what I mean, see this picture:
    Example
  4. 01:14:388 (2) - Movement here was also a bit unnatural for me, you could move this slider somewhere around x:203 y:34 to help the flow a bit ;)
  5. 01:40:531 (1) - I'm not really a fan of 1 combo objects, I mean yeah, it could be for the emphaziz (idk how to write it properly... orz) but still, it feels too unnecessary so consider removing the NC there.
  6. One problem I had with this was the tick sounds, they shouldn't be there at all, sometimes it screwed the rhythm imo... well, get more opinions on that I guess! Other than that, solid and nice difficulty!

Umi's Normal
  1. 00:02:603 (3) - This shouldn't belong to 00:01:960 (2) - this combo at all. It felt really weird while playing. 00:01:103 (1,2) - are so strong and 00:02:603 (3) - and this isn't so it's really weird :( I guess you made your mind now! (note: this applies for 00:05:817 (4) - etc)
  2. 00:23:388 (4,5) - Dat spacing, I guess it should be pretty easy to fix!
  3. 00:40:317 (3) - Moving this note a bit more down creates a cool flow there! It plays better than this straight one, try it!
  4. Honestly, I would've done those overlaps a bit differently but that seems to be your style and it'd be quite rude to try to change it so I rather not. Cool diff otherwise.

Melo's Hard
/me pokes Melo
  1. 00:01:103 (1) - Just a personal thing here, you could make it a bit better looking, now it feels kind of meh... like this maybe? http://puu.sh/6QXfB.jpg
  2. 00:01:103 (1,2,3) - If you can, rotate them a bit clockwise, the movement wasn't was natural as I wanted it to be. Like this:
    Example
  3. 00:21:031 (4,5) - This jump was quite unexpected (for me) but I guess you want to keep it though. Could you reduce the spacing on this maybe a bit? The song isn't imo that intense to have such a jump there, atleast not that big. : p
  4. 00:28:960 (1) - I guess it's small thing but I'd rotate this slider a bit so the movement gets better here. Atleast it got better when I tested it.
    Example
  5. 00:42:031 (1) - This kind of overlaps felt wrong to play, I'd just adjust them a bit so they don't get overlapped. Of course if you don't like this idea, don't apply this to anywhere ^^
  6. 00:57:674 (1,2) - This was so pretty but the small, small overlap (imo) kind of ruined it, care to fix that?
  7. 01:15:460 (2,3,4,5,6) - Those jumps were pretty big if you ask me. I'd reduce them a bit.
  8. So pretty o.o Great job!

Insane
  1. 00:04:317 - There's actually a beat that you could place a note. I feel like this place having not a note made it play pretty weird, I didn't like the break there.
  2. 00:13:103 (1,2) - This played way better if you would CTRL + G 1 and then CTRL + G, kind of reverse them, try it out!
  3. 00:16:960 (2) - Try to CTRL + J this slider and move it back to it's original place? Feels more natural this way!
  4. 00:22:317 (2) - I'd honestly move this note a bit up, considering the movement wasn't perfect here. This would make it way better imho! (x:158 y:54 could work)
  5. 01:16:103 (7) - Try CTRL + G here, plays more interesting and feels good to play, check it!
  6. 01:16:960 (2) - I'd move this note more closer to 01:16:531 (1) - 's end, I first thought it would be on the red tick instead in the blue tick.
  7. 01:41:817 (7) - I would NC this note to be consistent with the other diffs?
  8. Can't really point out much stuff because this diff played well. GJ ~

Sorry for the crappy mod ;-; this mapset is nice (btw I love the BG) so yeah, GL guys with it! ~ 8-)
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
<3
KSHR
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KSHR
βёдтofIκё
Melophobia
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Melophobia

Asphyxia wrote:

Melo's Hard
/me pokes Melo
  1. 00:01:103 (1) - Just a personal thing here, you could make it a bit better looking, now it feels kind of meh... like this maybe? http://puu.sh/6QXfB.jpg　I somehow wanted to try something new to me. lol but yeah, yours should look better. Fixed accordingly.
  2. 00:01:103 (1,2,3) - If you can, rotate them a bit clockwise, the movement wasn't was natural as I wanted it to be. Like this: Good point, I've been thinking that could be better. Fixed in my own way though.
    Example
  3. 00:21:031 (4,5) - This jump was quite unexpected (for me) but I guess you want to keep it though. Could you reduce the spacing on this maybe a bit? The song isn't imo that intense to have such a jump there, atleast not that big. : p Well I don't love that pattern either. Fixed into a boring stacking pattern.
  4. 00:28:960 (1) - I guess it's small thing but I'd rotate this slider a bit so the movement gets better here. Atleast it got better when I tested it. Hmm, no. The current one flows/looks better to me.
    Example
  5. 00:42:031 (1) - This kind of overlaps felt wrong to play, I'd just adjust them a bit so they don't get overlapped. Of course if you don't like this idea, don't apply this to anywhere ^^ I liked the way it touches the previous slider but i found a cool alternative so fixed.
  6. 00:57:674 (1,2) - This was so pretty but the small, small overlap (imo) kind of ruined it, care to fix that? Agreed. I curved it in the opposite direction.
  7. 01:15:460 (2,3,4,5,6) - Those jumps were pretty big if you ask me. I'd reduce them a bit. Well that was a bit too much. xD Reduced the spacing.
  8. So pretty o.o Great job!
Thanks for modding! it was quite helpful to me. :D
I thought you disliked non-english songs so I'm glad you like this song. xD
Guy
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2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
Hi! from Melo-san's request :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. 少し始まるのが早いのでLead-inを500~1000くらい入れてもいいかも？
  2. BGのサイズが1365x768になってますがこれはいいんですかね・・・？ きちんと16:9である1366x768のものを使用することをオススメします。
  3. 全diffのWidescreen supportのチェックを外しましょう。

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:603 (4) - 音取りの提案です。ボーカルをフォローしつつ裏のバスを拾えるこの音取りはどうでしょうか？

  2. 00:06:995 (7,8,9) - 7,8を00:06:888 (6) - と同様にSampleset Drumにして（もしくは8をSampleset Noneでwhistle）、00:07:424 (9) - ここの終端と同じ音が00:07:103 (8) - この終端にあるので、同じようにAdd whistleはどうでしょう
  3. 00:10:103 (5) - 曲にfitさせるならclapよりwhistleが合ってると思います。
  4. 00:16:531 (1,2) - ここは次にくる3連に繋ぎやすくするように丸い流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？
    SPOILER
  5. 00:20:388 (4,5,6) - 6への流れがスムーズではなかったので配置の提案です。このように三角形を作ってみてはどうでしょうか？ 4は 00:21:245 (7) - の終端にスタックしてあり、5は 00:19:960 (3) - のブランケットを意識してます。この流れならばスムーズなAIM運びが可能であると思います。
    SPOILER
  6. 00:24:245 (7) - whistleが入るはずですがストリームの途中ということで故意的に抜いているのであればスルーしてください！
  7. 00:24:674 (10) - 次のnoteへ直線上になるように置いたほうが、個人的にはAIMした時に若干打ちやすいです。
    SPOILER
  8. 00:35:388 (1) - 1/4スライダーの後のせいか、若干スペーシングが狭く感じました。　それと合わせてスライダーの向きを反対側に曲げて次のスライダーを打ちやすくしてみるのはどうでしょう？
    SPOILER
  9. 01:29:388 - この手の音のする箇所にはfinishの入ったnoteが必ずあるので、Add noteしてfinishをいれて欲しい場所でした。　周りの配置を崩さずに置くなら x:404 y:128あたりがベストかなと思います。
  10. 01:34:745 (4) - 01:35:817 (3) - ここにスタックして、ストンと落ちるような配置が自分は好みです！

[Melo's Hard]
  1. 00:04:531 (1) - かなり細かいけどx:360 y:136に移動すると00:03:888 (4,5,1) - ここの始端同士で綺麗な三角形になります。
  2. 01:04:317 (1,3,4) - 1と4のスライダーは並行な形になっているので、それに合わせて3のスライダーも同じように角度を合わせてみてはどうでしょう
    SPOILER
  3. 01:07:103 (2,3,4) - 曲の方が思いっきり1/6のリズムなのでこの3連は違和感がありました。Insaneと同じようにスライダーで音取りしてみてはどうでしょう？
  4. 01:12:031 (3) - ボーカルをフォローした音取りの方が自然で、さらに他の同じような箇所もボーカルフォローが多いので統一感を出すためにも合わせてみては？
  5. 01:15:460 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - BPM低いというのもありますがHardにしては少し飛びすぎではと思いました。少し縮めたものを作ってみたのでよかったら使ってみてください。
    SPOILER

    396,176,75460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    276,84,75674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,239,75888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    360,96,76103,1,10,0:0:0:0:
    220,156,76317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    344,248,76531,6,0,P|432:260|480:208,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    312,328,77174,2,0,P|224:316|176:368,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 01:24:245 (3) - このスライダーも少し曲げてあげた方が流れも見栄えも良くなると思います。4の位置も若干移動させてます。
    SPOILER
  7. 01:25:745 (2) - 01:12:031 (3) - と同じです。

[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:02:603 (3) - Add finish to slider head. same as 00:09:460 (4) - here.
  2. 00:26:817 (4) - Add whistle to slider end. Whistle and clap have been added in other similar places.
  3. 00:51:460 (4) - Add clap to slider head and end?
  4. 01:11:388 (4) - design suggesiton. I think current one is a little bad form. so What about use a copy slider?
    SPOILER
  5. 01:20:817 (3) - Add finish.
  6. 01:39:674 (4) - add a slider curve for blanket.
    SPOILER

[KSHR's Easy]
  1. 01:03:460 (2) - Sampleset drumよりもピアノに合わせてwhistle入れたほうが曲にあっていていいと思いました。

    Nice diff!!
Good luck! :)
Melophobia
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Melophobia

Guy wrote:

[Melo's Hard]
  1. 00:04:531 (1) - かなり細かいけどx:360 y:136に移動すると00:03:888 (4,5,1) - ここの始端同士で綺麗な三角形になります。ほい
  2. 01:04:317 (1,3,4) - 1と4のスライダーは並行な形になっているので、それに合わせて3のスライダーも同じように角度を合わせてみてはどうでしょう　おっけー
    SPOILER
  3. 01:07:103 (2,3,4) - 曲の方が思いっきり1/6のリズムなのでこの3連は違和感がありました。Insaneと同じようにスライダーで音取りしてみてはどうでしょう？　悩んでたんですよねぇ３連打でHardの人でも叩けるようにしたかったんですけどまぁ確かに違和感あったのでスライダーにしちゃいました
  4. 01:12:031 (3) - ボーカルをフォローした音取りの方が自然で、さらに他の同じような箇所もボーカルフォローが多いので統一感を出すためにも合わせてみては？　ごもっともな意見ではあるんですけど今の方が好みなのでしばらくこれでいきます
  5. 01:15:460 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - BPM低いというのもありますがHardにしては少し飛びすぎではと思いました。少し縮めたものを作ってみたのでよかったら使ってみてください。前のModで指摘されて自力で修正したんですけどこっちの方が綺麗ですねありがとうございます使わせてもらいます
    SPOILER

    396,176,75460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    276,84,75674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,239,75888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    360,96,76103,1,10,0:0:0:0:
    220,156,76317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    344,248,76531,6,0,P|432:260|480:208,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    312,328,77174,2,0,P|224:316|176:368,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 01:24:245 (3) - このスライダーも少し曲げてあげた方が流れも見栄えも良くなると思います。4の位置も若干移動させてます。おっけーです
    SPOILER
  7. 01:25:745 (2) - 01:12:031 (3) - と同じです。同じ理由です
ありがとう！
http://puu.sh/6R1ed.osu
Umi
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Joined November 2012
Umi

Asphyxia wrote:

Umi's Normal
  1. 00:02:603 (3) - This shouldn't belong to 00:01:960 (2) - this combo at all. It felt really weird while playing. 00:01:103 (1,2) - are so strong and 00:02:603 (3) - and this isn't so it's really weird :( I guess you made your mind now! (note: this applies for 00:05:817 (4) - etc) So you mean NC right ? added then
  2. 00:23:388 (4,5) - Dat spacing, I guess it should be pretty easy to fix! ops lol fixed
  3. 00:40:317 (3) - Moving this note a bit more down creates a cool flow there! It plays better than this straight one, try it! yeah not bad :3
  4. Honestly, I would've done those overlaps a bit differently but that seems to be your style and it'd be quite rude to try to change it so I rather not. Cool diff otherwise.

Guy wrote:

[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:02:603 (3) - Add finish to slider head. same as 00:09:460 (4) - here.
  2. 00:26:817 (4) - Add whistle to slider end. Whistle and clap have been added in other similar places.
  3. 00:51:460 (4) - Add clap to slider head and end?
  4. 01:11:388 (4) - design suggesiton. I think current one is a little bad form. so What about use a copy slider?
    SPOILER
  5. 01:20:817 (3) - Add finish.
  6. 01:39:674 (4) - add a slider curve for blanket.
    SPOILER

    All fixed :3

Good luck! :)
sankyuu both for mod ;)

diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: yuyu.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68603
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Yureru Cycle
TitleUnicode:ユレルサイクル
Artist:Nishizawa Hagumi
ArtistUnicode:西沢はぐみ
Creator:alacat
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Cocoro@Function!
Tags:KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai game pulltop ココロ＠ファンクション！
BeatmapID:368721
BeatmapSetID:146778

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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335,93,8817,2,0,P|398:104|442:168,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,198,9460,6,0,P|376:279|407:361,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,280,10531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
409,198,10960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
289,198,11388,5,4,0:0:0:0:
202,280,11817,2,0,L|148:206,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,225,12245,2,0,L|183:117,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,66,13103,2,0,P|346:71|406:63,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,157,13960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,211,14388,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,316,14817,6,0,P|367:332|310:315,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,15460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,315,15674,2,0,P|145:331|88:315,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,195,16531,2,0,P|145:178|202:195,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,237,17388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,138,17817,1,10,0:0:0:0:
293,57,18245,5,4,0:0:0:0:
220,152,18674,2,0,L|143:160,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,162,19103,2,0,P|119:217|100:272,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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403,226,20817,2,0,L|372:86,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,22,21674,6,0,L|252:153,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,193,22317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
237,193,22531,2,0,P|177:185|118:192,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,312,23388,2,0,P|177:319|236:312,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,275,24245,2,0,L|360:201,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,160,24674,2,0,L|364:80,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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122,247,26603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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215,31,29388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,107,29817,2,0,L|379:61,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,43,30245,2,0,P|430:98|420:156,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,190,30888,2,0,P|359:248|381:303,1,120
411,355,31531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,345,31960,6,0,L|168:326,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,317,32603,2,0,P|159:209|228:230,1,180
315,248,33674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
357,135,34103,2,0,L|291:100,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,78,34531,2,0,P|223:127|153:153,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,154,35174,6,0,P|137:236|106:318,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,341,36245,2,0,P|281:328|339:342,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,222,37103,2,0,P|282:236|224:222,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,141,37960,2,0,L|188:77,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,101,38388,2,0,L|294:58,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,82,38817,6,0,L|456:58,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,176,39674,2,0,L|321:200,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,220,40317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,40531,2,0,P|169:152|209:41,2,180,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,254,42031,6,0,P|327:224|410:255,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,342,43103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,255,43531,2,0,L|192:204,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,207,43960,2,0,L|206:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,49,44603,2,0,L|327:29,1,120
358,26,45245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
461,87,45674,6,0,P|425:162|437:216,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,255,46317,2,0,P|366:260|286:345,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,324,47388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,217,47817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,111,48245,6,0,B|211:98|257:109|257:109|313:125|349:106,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,231,49960,2,0,P|231:243|296:223,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,175,50817,2,0,L|412:241,2,60,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,118,51460,2,0,P|337:79|242:72,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,62,52103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,149,52531,6,0,P|114:231|27:275,2,180,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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354,169,54888,2,0,P|282:219|275:306,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,364,55960,6,0,P|451:314|458:227,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,105,57245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,165,57674,2,0,P|144:172|83:159,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,149,58317,1,4,0:0:0:0:
29,267,58745,2,0,L|93:328,1,60,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,321,59388,6,0,P|289:301|375:330,2,180,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,353,60888,2,0,L|140:216,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,172,61531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,172,61745,2,0,P|194:187|251:171,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
277,116,62388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,59,62603,6,0,P|355:42|412:58,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,169,63460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
390,269,63888,2,0,L|310:299,1,60,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,313,64317,1,4,0:0:0:0:
196,224,64745,2,0,L|225:147,1,60,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,50,65388,2,0,L|158:63,2,60,8|8|4,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
303,41,66031,5,4,0:0:0:0:
388,125,66460,1,4,0:0:0:0:
322,225,66888,2,0,P|259:257|151:216,2,180,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,190,68388,2,0,P|434:202|492:278,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,311,69245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
275,249,69674,6,0,P|260:167|293:119,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,85,70317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,85,70531,2,0,L|151:67,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,168,71388,2,0,L|269:186,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,215,72245,2,0,L|402:184,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,124,72674,2,0,L|357:93,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,69,73103,6,0,P|242:58|183:69,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,147,73960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
145,253,74388,2,0,L|241:181,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,309,75674,2,0,L|365:268,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,248,76317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,192,76531,6,0,P|409:138|418:67,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,23,77174,1,2,0:0:0:0:
305,66,77603,2,0,L|226:56,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,52,78031,2,0,P|126:106|185:159,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,188,78888,2,0,P|265:231|230:295,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,317,79531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,273,79960,5,4,0:0:0:0:
72,153,80388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,214,80817,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,94,81245,2,0,P|236:77|354:101,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,129,82103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,248,82531,2,0,L|345:249,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,290,82960,2,0,L|241:291,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,314,83388,6,0,P|137:294|97:250,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,84031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,133,84245,2,0,P|137:89|192:69,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,163,85103,2,0,P|322:142|362:98,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,52,85960,2,0,L|457:140,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,169,86388,2,0,L|436:219,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,257,86817,6,0,P|312:288|229:257,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,221,87674,1,4,0:0:0:0:
79,155,88103,2,0,P|180:100|282:153,1,240,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,268,89388,1,4,0:0:0:0:
349,328,89817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,227,90245,6,0,P|402:153|423:109,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,43,91103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,102,91531,2,0,L|107:34,2,120,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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287,294,93245,2,0,L|207:282,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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246,51,94531,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,72,94960,2,0,B|401:123|371:187|371:187|341:252|377:300,1,240,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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475,123,96674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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134,118,97960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
As requested from Melophobia.
[General]
前の二人が全部言ってくれたので特に無いです
[Easy]
Hit Sound
01:30:245(1) 始点にfinish追加
[Normal]
Placement
00:17:388(5,6,1) Put these notes more symmterically, and the flow looks more nice.
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:21:245(4) It looks a bit difficult because of not 1/1 rhythm, so I suppose it would be better if you like.
SPOILER
Hit Sound
01:16:531(1) Prefer finish than whistle to follow the instrumental.
[Hard]
Placement
00:23:388(1) 前の三連スタックのオーバーラップが少し気になるので、ブランケット状に配置してみるのは？
SPOILER
01:13:745(2) スライダーの向きが次のnoteに対してやや不自然なので、以下のようにしてみては？
SPOILER
01:33:674(1)　強迫でfinishもついてるので、ここはジャンプさせた方が曲調に合ってると思います。前の部分で星形ジャンプかけてて、ここでスペーシング急に小さくするのはやや不自然に見えます。e.g.)
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:33:674(3) 途中でボーカル始まってるので、それを拾ってやったほうが今よりも違和感なく聞こえます。 e.g.)
SPOILER
00:47:338(3) ^
[Insane]
Placement
00:11:174(13,14,1) - (13,14)が直線になっており(1)への流れが少し妙なので、内側へ曲げるような形にすると今よりもいい感じになります。　e.g.)
SPOILER
00:16:531(1) 逆側に曲げたやった方が前のnoteから自然につながり、かつ次の(2)への流れも良いと思います。
SPOILER
00:21:245(7) ここも同様の理由で、前後のnoteの家回しを考えると向きを逆にするといいです。　
SPOILER
00:49:317(2,3) ここCTRL+Gしてみては？今の配置だと四角形っぽく回す形にしては、(4)から(5)へのジャンプで少し打ち回しが変わって少し妙なので、それならば星形等間隔でジャンプさせた方が読みやすいように思いました。
01:08:603(4) ここでNC入れてみては？01:07:531でNC入れてるのを見ると、2コンボの後に11コンボ続くのも少し見た目が悪いので、ボーカルが始まるここで一旦区切ったほうがいいです。
01:24:460(4) ここ×1.00になってますけど、次の(5,1)間や他のスペーシング見ると×1.10にするべきでは？
01:29:574(5) ブランケットがやや強制気味で次のnoteへの流れが悪いように見えるので、直線スライダーで置き換えてみては？また(8,1)でジャンプを設けると、強迫をフォロー出来ると思います。。e.g.)
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:04:317 ここにnote追加してみては？バックにインストとボーカルが聞こえて、次の00:07:745でnote入ってるので対称的にした方がいいです。

Good luck.
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia

kajiyatta wrote:

[Hard]
Placement
00:23:388(1) 前の三連スタックのオーバーラップが少し気になるので、ブランケット状に配置してみるのは？ わざと重ねてます、後続のスライダーの曲げ方的にも今のままの方が好きです
SPOILER
01:13:745(2) スライダーの向きが次のnoteに対してやや不自然なので、以下のようにしてみては？　個人的にそこまで違和感ない＆次のNoteとの間に一拍置いてるので問題ないと思ってます　今の置き方は前のスライダーの角度と合わせてて個人的に綺麗だと思うので見た目的にも現状維持します
SPOILER
01:33:674(1)　強迫でfinishもついてるので、ここはジャンプさせた方が曲調に合ってると思います。前の部分で星形ジャンプかけてて、ここでスペーシング急に小さくするのはやや不自然に見えます。e.g.)　流れとは反対の方向にアンチジャンプを作っても強調はできるかなーと思ってこうしてます
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:33:674(3) 途中でボーカル始まってるので、それを拾ってやったほうが今よりも違和感なく聞こえます。 e.g.)　違和感あるかどうかはイマイチわからないんですがこのパートはボーカルが比較的少ないのでボーカル寄りに音取りすると違和感あるように感じたのもありバックグラウンドの音を重視しておいてます（00:27:674 (3,4) - とか顕著です）
SPOILER
00:47:338(3) ^
Modありがとう～
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
alacat
@Fycho, BeatofIke

Thank you so much! ☆

Asphyxia

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi guys! Actually, this song is cool! Melophobia requested a mod so yeah, here I am :3 hi, Asphyxia :3 !

General thoughts
  1. Let's get nazi, shall we! Your BG rezo is 1365 x 768 and not 1366 x 768, that's a simple resize if you want to do it! oops, changed it to this size.
  2. Some inconsistencies in kiai-times: Melo fixed this point, thanks!
  3. I see you have umi and -umi- in tags, I'd honestly remove one of them from there. If not, you should add probably ''Melo'' to your tags aswell, I myself
    would search it with ''Melo'' more but I guess that's just me. It's ok, please search -Umi-'s name at web site then you can understand.
  4. Disable widescreen support please! sure!
  5. Clean!

Insane
  1. 00:04:317 - There's actually a beat that you could place a note. I feel like this place having not a note made it play pretty weird, I didn't like the break there. yes, that's right!
  2. 00:13:103 (1,2) - This played way better if you would CTRL + G 1 and then CTRL + G, kind of reverse them, try it out! I prefer to have the up and down motion.
  3. 00:16:960 (2) - Try to CTRL + J this slider and move it back to it's original place? Feels more natural this way! It's on purpose!
  4. 00:22:317 (2) - I'd honestly move this note a bit up, considering the movement wasn't perfect here. This would make it way better imho! (x:158 y:54 could work) ok!
  5. 01:16:103 (7) - Try CTRL + G here, plays more interesting and feels good to play, check it! hmm, it would be nice jump but it's not natural imo.
  6. 01:16:960 (2) - I'd move this note more closer to 01:16:531 (1) - 's end, I first thought it would be on the red tick instead in the blue tick.ok, reduce this distance ~
  7. 01:41:817 (7) - I would NC this note to be consistent with the other diffs? orz, i forgot to do this.
  8. Can't really point out much stuff because this diff played well. GJ ~

Sorry for the crappy mod ;-; this mapset is nice (btw I love the BG) so yeah, GL guys with it! ~ 8-)

Guy

Guy wrote:

Hi! from Melo-san's request :3 ありがとう！ :D

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
  1. 少し始まるのが早いのでLead-inを500~1000くらい入れてもいいかも？1秒あれば充分かなと思うので、今後指摘を受けたら検討してみます。
  2. BGのサイズが1365x768になってますがこれはいいんですかね・・・？ きちんと16:9である1366x768のものを使用することをオススメします。修正！
  3. 全diffのWidescreen supportのチェックを外しましょう。はーい！

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:603 (4) - 音取りの提案です。ボーカルをフォローしつつ裏のバスを拾えるこの音取りはどうでしょうか？ 最初のパート(3回)で全てこのパターンで統一してるのでこのままで！
  2. 00:06:995 (7,8,9) - 7,8を00:06:888 (6) - と同様にSampleset Drumにして（もしくは8をSampleset Noneでwhistle）、00:07:424 (9) - ここの終端と同じ音が00:07:103 (8) - この終端にあるので、同じようにAdd whistleはどうでしょう 白いline上に定期的にこの音がなっているのでここにはその音がないです。
  3. 00:10:103 (5) - 曲にfitさせるならclapよりwhistleが合ってると思います。whistle忘れてました、clapがないと寂しいのでclapはつけたままにします。
  4. 00:16:531 (1,2) - ここは次にくる3連に繋ぎやすくするように丸い流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？ この配置もｲｲと思いますが、今のパターンが気に入っているのでこのままで。
    SPOILER
  5. 00:20:388 (4,5,6) - 6への流れがスムーズではなかったので配置の提案です。このように三角形を作ってみてはどうでしょうか？ 4は 00:21:245 (7) - の終端にスタックしてあり、5は 00:19:960 (3) - のブランケットを意識してます。この流れならばスムーズなAIM運びが可能であると思います。　 (5)を下にジャンプさせるように変更しました！
    SPOILER
  6. 00:24:245 (7) - whistleが入るはずですがストリームの途中ということで故意的に抜いているのであればスルーしてください！その通りです！ :) clapと連続していて煩いのでいれてないです。
  7. 00:24:674 (10) - 次のnoteへ直線上になるように置いたほうが、個人的にはAIMした時に若干打ちやすいです。前の5連打からの流れを考えてこの角度にしています。
    SPOILER
  8. 00:35:388 (1) - 1/4スライダーの後のせいか、若干スペーシングが狭く感じました。　それと合わせてスライダーの向きを反対側に曲げて次のスライダーを打ちやすくしてみるのはどうでしょう？前のスライダーを移動して調節しました。
    SPOILER
  9. 01:29:388 - この手の音のする箇所にはfinishの入ったnoteが必ずあるので、Add noteしてfinishをいれて欲しい場所でした。　周りの配置を崩さずに置くなら x:404 y:128あたりがベストかなと思います。確かに強い音はありますが、その後の連続するclapでのおおきなジャンプを見せ付けたいのでスライダーの終点にしています。
  10. 01:34:745 (4) - 01:35:817 (3) - ここにスタックして、ストンと落ちるような配置が自分は好みです！　前の(2,3)からの流れで半時計回りの流れができているので内側にある(1)の始点にスタックしています！
Good luck! :)

kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:

As requested from Melophobia.　　ありがとうですー！
[General]
前の二人が全部言ってくれたので特に無いです
[Insane]
Placement
00:11:174(13,14,1) - (13,14)が直線になっており(1)への流れが少し妙なので、内側へ曲げるような形にすると今よりもいい感じになります。　より丸を描くように配置しました。　e.g.)
SPOILER
00:16:531(1) 逆側に曲げたやった方が前のnoteから自然につながり、かつ次の(2)への流れも良いと思います。普段ならそうしているところですが、今回は遊んでみました :)
SPOILER
00:21:245(7) ここも同様の理由で、前後のnoteの家回しを考えると向きを逆にするといいです。　Guyさんのmodで少しここのパートを変更したので流れは大丈夫になったと思います。
SPOILER
00:49:317(2,3) ここCTRL+Gしてみては？今の配置だと四角形っぽく回す形にしては、(4)から(5)へのジャンプで少し打ち回しが変わって少し妙なので、それならば星形等間隔でジャンプさせた方が読みやすいように思いました。星の形に置くとそのようなジャンプが一般的ですが(1,2)間でジャンプさせるような音がないのでこのように配置しています。
01:08:603(4) ここでNC入れてみては？01:07:531でNC入れてるのを見ると、2コンボの後に11コンボ続くのも少し見た目が悪いので、ボーカルが始まるここで一旦区切ったほうがいいです。追加しました！
01:24:460(4) ここ×1.00になってますけど、次の(5,1)間や他のスペーシング見ると×1.10にするべきでは？あら・・修正しました！
01:29:574(5) ブランケットがやや強制気味で次のnoteへの流れが悪いように見えるので、直線スライダーで置き換えてみては？また(8,1)でジャンプを設けると、強迫をフォロー出来ると思います。。e.g.)　直線に変更しました～(8)は始点にスタックさせておきたいのでこのままで。
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:04:317 ここにnote追加してみては？バックにインストとボーカルが聞こえて、次の00:07:745でnote入ってるので対称的にした方がいいです。追加しました。

Good luck.

Mod ありがとうございます～ :D

Special thanks : Melophobia !!!
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi

kajiyatta wrote:

[Normal]
Placement
00:17:388(5,6,1) Put these notes more symmterically, and the flow looks more nice. k fixed
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:21:245(4) It looks a bit difficult because of not 1/1 rhythm, so I suppose it would be better if you like. not that hard imo
SPOILER
Hit Sound
01:16:531(1) Prefer finish than whistle to follow the instrumental. added
thx :3/

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KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
Asphyxia

Asphyxia wrote:

KSHR's Easy
  1. 00:04:531 (3) - Shouldn't this be NC'd according to 00:07:960 (1) - ? If not, remove the NC from 00:07:960 (1) -
    Yea, this's my mistake. (alacat also pointed out this yesterday lol). Added a nc here anyway.
  2. 00:15:674 (2) - I'd move this slider a bit down to the movement doesn't feel too bad here, like erm, x:277, y:260?
    It's kinda hard to fix in your way considering 00:18:245 (1,2) - . So I rearranged the shape of 00:14:817 (1) - and moved 00:15:674 (2,3) - upward a bit. The current pattern should be so close to yours!
  3. 00:25:531 (2) - Doesn't fit because of it's shape, I mean it does fit but not as well as it could. I think this slider should be more blanketed 00:24:031 (4) - with this sliders end. Well, if you don't understand what I mean, see this picture: Looks nice. Fixed!
  4. 01:14:388 (2) - Movement here was also a bit unnatural for me, you could move this slider somewhere around x:203 y:34 to help the flow a bit ;)
    hmm..your suggestion is not that bad. But I didn't fix because I think this way is against the flow from (1) which has a gentle curve. Also I have no idea to rearrange (1,3).. Orz
  5. 01:40:531 (1) - I'm not really a fan of 1 combo objects, I mean yeah, it could be for the emphaziz (idk how to write it properly... orz) but still, it feels too unnecessary so consider removing the NC there.
    Not fixed. I added a nc to make consistence with 01:33:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - , So this 1 combo makes sense, right? Btw, I don't get your point well to be honest as you expected. But at least you tried to explain. I really think that's sooooo important ! Well I understand you have a good attitude to modding ;3 ( I sometimes don't know how to write the explanation either.. lol)
  6. One problem I had with this was the tick sounds, they shouldn't be there at all, sometimes it screwed the rhythm imo... well, get more opinions on that I guess! Other than that, solid and nice difficulty!
    I got some opinions about the ticksounds, and decide to keep for now~

Guy

Guy wrote:

[KSHR's Easy]
  1. 01:03:460 (2) - Sampleset drumよりもピアノに合わせてwhistle入れたほうが曲にあっていていいと思いました。
    (1)と同じヒットサウンドをつけたかったので両方にSoft whistleを追加、あんど、それだと音が高すぎて違和感があったからその2箇所だけ音量を15%ほど下げてみました。
    p.s. ここ本当にピアノある・・？



    Nice diff!! てぃーわい！

kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:

As requested from Melophobia.
[Easy]
Hit Sound
01:30:245(1) 始点にfinish追加
おっと、忘れてました。これを修正するときに気づいたけど、01:26:817 (1) - 終端の方も忘れてたので一緒に追加！

Thanks for your mods!


To alacat:
Slidertickの音の件、自分で何人かに意見もらって、とりあえず今のところはそのままにすることにしました。何度も指摘を受けたり、何か理に適った理由があったときはtickのwav削除を頼むと思います！

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Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Hi alameow ~
As KSHR's request here. since i starting mod this while alacat didin't update yet. i'm sorry if you guys already fixed from mod above
my version still your "pure" (no mods) diff here lol



Guide


old = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Personal Taste

  • General
  1. Clean


  • KSHR's Easy
  1. 00:02:603 (1) - omg Ultimate nazi, 1 grid down for better blanket with 00:01:103 (1) -
  2. 00:03:674 (2) - nazi again, move this node of slider's tail to 172,212 so it'll point the next object, same as you did at 00:02:603 (1) - slider's tail to (2)'s head. somehow looked neater and flow a little bit better
  3. 00:06:031 (1,2) - remove clap on (1)'s tail and add it to (2)'s head same as you did at 00:02:603 (1,2) - ? ii guess the music a little bit similar so consistency would be better here
  4. 00:07:960 (1) - remove NC here as you did at 00:04:531 (3) - for consistency ? oh God i becoming nazi finder like this lol
  5. 00:12:245 (3) - damn another nazi lol, if i were you i would to change the slider's flow become like http://puu.sh/6S11d.jpg . somehow it fits better with your previous sliders flow here (personal taste)
  6. 00:23:388 (3,4) - maybe much of starting slider on red tick could make the newbie get a trap here (i got it while playing with HD lol) imo rhythm could be easier here, http://puu.sh/6S1eo.jpg just use it and add finish on repeat cause music ~
  7. 00:26:817 (3) - since the music is drum here. i guess soft-hitnormal can't emphasize it with well. add whistle here instead to emphasize the vocal too. or sampleset drum if you want to use whistle to emphasize piano sound only here
  8. 00:29:388 (1) - hmm since i heard a little sound here (like a tick) i would to use clap here with volume 30% to emphasize it. even softhitnormal is fine here but i wanna emphasize it more ~
  9. 00:30:245 (2) - same as 00:26:817 (3) - (for head and tail)
  10. 00:37:531 (3) - same as 00:29:388 (1) -
  11. 00:40:531 - until 00:50:817 - i would suggest to add sampleset drum for each 1st whitetick (i mean downbeat) here since there is a drum sound which feels empty with soft hit normal here imo (except 00:45:674 - lol. oh btw hinsvar agreed with this too)
  12. 00:46:103 (1,2) - imo flow of (1) too upward with the previous slider imo. i guess flow could be smoother here. try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1327051 instead?
  13. 00:55:103 (3) - hmm i would to ctrl+G this slider for better flow to 00:55:960 (1) - but it is a nazi ;-;
  14. 00:59:388 (1) - inconsistency spacing 1,27x here? fix it? :P
  15. 01:09:460 - unnecessary greenline :p
  16. 01:19:960 (1) - altho you're using clap on tick, i'm still feel empty to skip map 01:20:388 - , i would to use 1/1 repeat slider or http://puu.sh/6S37D.jpg for following vocal properly
  17. 01:26:817 (1) - add finish on tail too since there is a cymbal sound here. confirmed with hinsvar (again lol, for sure :p)
  18. 01:30:245 (1) - add finish on head. same reason. cymbal is appear here
  19. 01:39:674 (4) - imo altho the music still like cyrstal sound here. i heard a cymbal here. change whistle with finish?

  • Umi's Normal
  1. 00:05:817 (1,2) - hmm actually the vocal of red tick doesn't emphasize it with well if you use slider's tail here. i would to use http://puu.sh/6S3K6.jpg for following vocal properly instead
  2. 00:12:245 (3) - 1/2 whistle space is really noisy for me. since the pitch of piano appear in 00:12:031 - i would to remove whistle on head here
  3. 00:12:245 (3) - flow could be better here if you curving it a little bit down http://puu.sh/6S47P.jpg , confirmed with Hinsvar btw =3=
  4. 00:21:674 (1) - add whistle in head for emphasize the piano sound too here, you did it in previous 00:14:817 -
  5. 00:26:817 (4) - since i just hear a drum sound on slider's tail. i would to remove the whistle on tail. as i said before. 1/2 whistle space too noisy imo
  6. 00:42:031 (1) - nazi, blanket could be better. previous , should like this or neater than this
  7. 00:45:674 (1) - flip this slider for better flow, i really, since i feel uncomfortable with my mouse movement from here to next slider ;_;
  8. 00:59:388 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - omg too many of 1/2 space here. altho this is Normal diff. i would to remove some of 1/2 space since the Easy is quite Easy imo , if i were you i would to remove 01:01:531 (3) -
  9. 01:20:388 (2,3) - i would to ctrl+G this slider to keep flow from 01:19:531 (6) - . i mean keep a zig zag flow and pattern
  10. 01:21:245 (4) - yeah as i said before, vocal of 01:21:888 - doesn't emphasize with well if you use a slider's tail. i would to use http://puu.sh/6S4Kz.jpg instead
  11. 01:30:245 (1) - me and hinsvar have same suggestion about this


  • Melo's Hard
  1. 00:08:817 (2) - nazi, i prefer to make symmetrical pattern here with move this slider to 432,104 for neater pattern. (if you agree with this, fix the spacing after this slider lol)
  2. 00:19:103 (3) - nazi again, if it supposed for symmetrical pattern, should be move this to 348,40
  3. 00:21:674 (1) - a little bit nazi, try to move this slider to 200,76 to make a triangle pattern between 00:20:817 (3,4,5,6,1) - ? i guess it could make a neater pattern here
  4. 00:23:388 (1) - hmm personal taste, could you to avoid the overlap here? a little bit break the neat of pattern here.
  5. 00:27:460 (2,3) - hmm a little bit weird while you want to emphasize the vocal of red tick with circle here. i would to use slider's head instead but seems you using 1/1 slider on whitetick for emphasize piano sound. i would to suggest change them become http://puu.sh/6S5SG.jpg for emphasize both vocal and piano with clearly here
  6. 00:35:174 (6,1) - imo should be swap NC here, NC for slider to emphasize the piano/music change here (as you did at 00:42:031 (1) - )
  7. 00:35:174 (6) - also another nazi, it it supposed for symmetrical, i guess move it to 76,60 for better symmetrical
  8. 00:52:102 (2,3,4) - it because next of triplet is a slider with jump. i would to make 1/4 slider repeat instead here to make easier, a little bit hard for player who want to try Hard after completely able to play Normal diff imo (also the jump is little bit far imo, but since supposed as perfect triangle pattern, i think it's fine). About placement, maybe 1/4 slider like http://puu.sh/6S6mr.jpg
  9. 00:58:960 (3) - maybe ctrl+G this slider to make a jump for 00:59:388 (1) - ? to emphasize the cymbal i guess
  10. 01:05:603 (4) - imo jump of this slider doesn't fit since the music is becoming relax (no hard music). but i don't have any idea for solution so just saying here >_<
  11. 01:09:245 (6,7,8) - it because next of triplet is a slider with jump. i would to make 1/4 slider repeat instead here to make easier, a little bit hard for player who want to try Hard after completely able to play Normal diff imo
  12. 01:25:103 (1) - i guess no cymbal sound on slider's head time. remove it and use whistle instead. (the music is similar with 01:11:388 - imo)
  13. 01:31:960 (1) - flip this slider (ctrl+H) here, somehow flow seems better from this slider to 01:32:603 (2) - altho use a opposite of natural flow from (1) slider
  14. 01:41:817 - unnecessary greenline since it is same with previous greenline
  15. 01:45:674 - imo volume 100% here is too loud. use 80% instead for consistency with Easy and Insane?
    Overall this diff is nice and fun to play :3

  • Insane
  1. 00:10:745 (9) - nazi, maybe NC this because the pattern is changed here? also the combo is kinda long ahuehue
  2. 00:13:103 (1) - maybe add whistle on tail to emphasize the music here? a little bit empty imo
  3. 00:16:531 (1) - flip this slider with ctrl+J? the flow seems better and more natural
  4. 00:40:103 (5) - to keep flow of curving here 00:39:245 (3,4) - between this. i would move this circle to 68,160 for keep it as natural flow
  5. 00:49:960 (5) - maybe NC this since the pattern shape is changing here. (previous is flower and changing to triangle) , i guess it player could to read it easier with NC
  6. 00:56:817 (3) - nazi, could you to avoid the overlap with 00:55:960 (1) - here? somehow it looked a little bit messy here. (if you want a nazi reason there is a inconsistency 1,24x for next object huahua)
  7. 01:15:031 (2) - imo the music isn't loud here. a huge jump like this feels uncomfortable. i would to reduce the jump around move this circle to 96,72
    01:16:103 (7) - personal taste, i would to ctrl+G this slider. somehow it more challenging for play and flow more natural here
    01:22:960 (7) - since i'm still able to see 01:22:531 (5) - 's fade while (7) appearing. i would to NC the (7) for easier to read
    01:36:031 (4,5,6) - how nazi, stack them on 01:34:960 (1) - 's head for neater pattern onegai lol
    Nothing much to say, you're really pro xD

Nice map ;)
Good Luck >3<
Last edited by Xinely , edited 2 times in total.
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR

  • KSHR's Easy
  1. 00:02:603 (1) - omg Ultimate nazi, 1 grid down for better blanket with 00:01:103 (1) -
    ok~
  2. 00:03:674 (2) - nazi again, move this node of slider's tail to 172,212 so it'll point the next object, same as you did at 00:02:603 (1) - slider's tail to (2)'s head. somehow looked neater and flow a little bit better
    ^
  3. 00:06:031 (1,2) - remove clap on (1)'s tail and add it to (2)'s head same as you did at 00:02:603 (1,2) - ? i guess the music a little bit similar so consistency would be better here
    As you wrote, there is little difference between them. I'd follow it with hitsounds!
  4. 00:07:960 (1) - remove NC here as you did at 00:04:531 (3) - for consistency ? oh God i becoming nazi finder like this lol
    Added a nc to 00:04:531 (1) - instead for consistency~
  5. 00:12:245 (3) - damn another nazi lol, if i were you i would to change the slider's flow become like http://puu.sh/6S11d.jpg. somehow it fits better with your previous sliders flow here (personal taste)
    Yea, nazi party! Well I agree with rearranging this shape a bit. Fixed in my own way.
  6. 00:23:388 (3,4) - maybe much of starting slider on red tick could make the newbie get a trap here (i got it while playing with HD lol) imo rhythm could be easier here, http://puu.sh/6S1eo.jpg just use it and add finish on repeat cause music ~
    Let me keep this for some reasons.
    1, Even if beginners misread this 3/4 gap, 00:24:031 - is followed by the beginning of the slider. So most of them won't make a 100 or a combo-break here. (Why did you played this with HD! ww)
    2, There are similar strong sounds at 00:23:388 - and 00:24:031 - . So I wanna let players to beat them~
  7. 00:26:817 (3) - since the music is drum here. i guess soft-hitnormal can't emphasize it with well. add whistle here instead to emphasize the vocal too? or sampleset drum if you want to use whistle to emphasize piano sound only here
    Drum-Sampleset sounds nice :3
  8. 00:29:388 (1) - hmm since i heard a little sound here (like a tick) i would to use clap here with volume 30% to emphasize it. even softhitnormal is fine here but i wanna emphasize it more ~
    Probably I got what sound you wanna emphasize. But a clap? Maybe did you mean a whistle?
  9. 00:30:245 (2) - same as 00:26:817 (3) - (for head and tail)
    Fixed this as well
  10. 00:37:531 (3) - same as 00:29:388 (1) -
    ^
  11. 00:40:531 - until 00:50:817 - i would suggest to add sampleset drum for each 1st whitetick (i mean downbeat) here since there is a drum sound which feels empty with soft hit normal here imo (except 00:45:674 - lol. oh btw hinsvar agreed with this too)
    okke~
  12. 00:46:103 (1,2) - imo flow of (1) too upward with the previous slider imo. i guess flow could be smoother here. try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1327051 instead?
    You received a private message from 'Hinsvar'. Click to read it! I mean fixed in my own way.
  13. 00:55:103 (3) - hmm i would to ctrl+G this slider for better flow to 00:55:960 (1) - but it is a nazi ;-;
    I prefer the current flow which changes at 00:55:103 (3,1,2) -
  14. 00:59:388 (1) - inconsistency spacing 1,27x here? fix it? :P
    oops.. moved this slider leftward by 1 grid.
  15. 01:09:460 - unnecessary greenline :p
    okkei!
  16. 01:19:960 (1) - altho you're using clap on tick, i'm still feel empty to skip map 01:20:388 - , i would to use 1/1 repeat slider or http://puu.sh/6S37D.jpg for following vocal properly
    hmm.... your point makes sense. But let me keep for now. I have no idea to fix this.. (I mean placement) Orz
  17. 01:26:817 (1) - add finish on tail too since there is a cymbal sound here. confirmed with hinsvar (again lol, for sure :p)
    F
  18. 01:30:245 (1) - add finish on head. same reason. cymbal is appear here
    I
  19. 01:39:674 (4) - imo altho the music still like cyrstal sound here. i heard a cymbal here. change whistle with finish?
    X

thanks for your mod!


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512,272,23388,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,200,24031,2,0,P|352:132|360:68,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,128,25531,2,0,P|360:164|276:136,1,180
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500,232,31960,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,148,32388,2,0,B|396:172|388:224|388:224|352:200|300:200,1,180
232,280,33674,2,0,P|190:262|155:234,1,89.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,34531,2,0,B|40:112|40:112|0:132,2,135,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,234,36245,6,0,P|200:232|244:220,1,89.9999999999999
312,136,37103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,224,37531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,184,37960,2,0,P|480:152|476:92,1,89.9999999999999,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,16,38817,5,4,0:0:0:0:
372,120,39245,2,0,P|296:164|204:160,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,76,40531,1,0,3:0:0:0:
48,140,40960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,224,41388,2,0,P|124:292|100:356,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,140,43103,6,0,P|32:96|32:44,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,76,43960,2,0,P|152:120|152:172,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,244,44817,2,0,P|172:272|240:232,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,132,46103,5,8,0:0:0:0:
360,212,46531,2,0,P|364:256|356:304,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,352,47388,2,0,L|172:340,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,48245,2,0,B|52:248|52:248|0:240,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,148,49960,6,0,P|248:156|300:152,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,72,50817,2,0,P|432:56|496:60,2,135,0|8|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,153,52531,6,0,P|225:156|160:141,2,135,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,72,54245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,276,55103,2,0,P|396:288|352:288,1,89.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,55960,5,4,0:0:0:0:
228,232,56603,2,0,P|220:300|244:368,1,135,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
348,356,57674,2,0,P|356:288|332:220,2,135,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
252,300,59388,6,0,L|160:312,1,89.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,204,60245,2,0,B|80:216|80:216|48:244,2,135,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,120,61960,2,0,P|308:140|372:132,1,135,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,44,63031,5,2,0:0:0:0:
480,144,63460,2,0,P|480:188|472:236,1,89.9999999999999,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
408,320,64317,2,0,B|320:296|320:296|276:304,1,135,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,352,65388,6,0,P|116:364|48:348,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,252,66460,2,0,P|-4:208|0:160,1,89.9999999999999,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,204,67531,2,0,P|164:268|156:340,2,135,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
100,112,69245,1,0,1:0:0:0:
180,40,69674,6,0,P|224:36|272:40,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,128,70531,2,0,P|420:140|504:108,2,180
268,40,72674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,140,73103,6,0,P|224:192|232:232,2,89.9999999999999,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,40,74388,2,0,P|180:28|96:60,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,156,75674,2,0,P|48:200|60:248,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,76531,5,4,0:0:0:0:
212,268,76960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,352,77388,2,0,P|348:364|412:348,2,135,0|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,268,79103,2,0,L|120:280,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,368,79960,6,0,P|16:288|40:208,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,172,81245,2,0,P|164:108|144:44,2,135,12|8|0,0:0|0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
40,208,82960,1,0,1:0:0:0:
122,279,83388,6,0,L|212:268,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,340,84245,2,0,P|380:352|456:308,2,180
211,268,86388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,232,86817,6,0,P|344:148|312:68,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,28,88103,2,0,P|160:32|120:40,1,89.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,120,88960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,144,89388,2,0,P|160:188|156:236,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,280,90245,6,0,P|56:324|64:368,2,89.9999999999999,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,232,91531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,328,91960,2,0,P|288:368|376:356,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,280,93245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,176,93674,6,0,P|440:176|392:188,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,94531,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,164,94960,2,0,P|176:128|88:152,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,256,96245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,332,96674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,304,97103,6,0,P|256:260|256:216,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,97960,1,4,0:0:0:0:
272,56,98388,2,0,P|356:32|444:52,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,152,99674,2,0,L|468:240,1,89.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,192,100531,6,0,L|344:340,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102031,12,4,105674,0:0:0:0:
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