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Suzuyu - Mezameta Asa ni wa Kimi ga Tonari ni (TV Size)

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Rizia
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Rizia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, April 04, 2014 at 下午 05:47:32

Artist: Suzuyu
Title: Mezameta Asa ni wa Kimi ga Tonari ni (TV Size)
Source: Little Busters! EX
Tags: happy623 Awaken ending
BPM: 140
Filesize: 7542kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. 623's Easy (1.48 stars, 73 notes)
  2. Awaken's Hard (4.74 stars, 187 notes)
  3. Insane (4.94 stars, 290 notes)
  4. Normal (3.45 stars, 107 notes)
Download: Suzuyu - Mezameta Asa ni wa Kimi ga Tonari ni (TV Size)
Download: Suzuyu - Mezameta Asa ni wa Kimi ga Tonari ni (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st Ranked - 鈴湯 -
>^<" again and again...finally
Easy by happy623
Hard by Awaken
2014/02/09 - Title thanks sammy711/happy623)
Video from Momochikun Map <3

Thanks a lot
Bubble - Frostmourne
Ranked - Zero__Wind
Rebubble - Chewin
Rerank - BeatofIke
Rebubble #2 - Charles445
Rerank #2 - Zero__wind

Timing - Chewin, BeatofIke, Frostmourne, lolcubes, Charles445, Zero__wind, OnosakiHito

Modding - yf_bmp, pkmnyab, axschiming, Atrue, ts8zs, Holoaz, 10crystalmask01, Flask, ZZHBOY, 615915887, BATs
Last edited by Rizia , edited 75 times in total.
happy623
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Foreverends
992 posts
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Foreverends
forget comment QAQ
2nd \:D/
Unsfamiliar
540 posts
Joined May 2013
Unsfamiliar
Little Busters saikyou!
GitahMuttan
164 posts
Joined May 2013
GitahMuttan
This song <3
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
1st mod


  1. Red: Be unrankable
  2. Blue: Be important
  3. Black: Suggestions
[General]
这样配音效还真是累啊 下次尝试将hitnormal改成无声或小声 clap之类的改成hitnormal的音效. 然后不建议完全消音
Tags: Add "Awaken" 除非他弃坑

[Insane]
00:07:431 (1,2,3,4) - 这种标准距离请与00:08:717 (5,6) - 一致. 现在的来说有点远 建议:00:07:860 (2) - x:156 y:188 ; 00:08:503 (4) - x:376 y:80
00:22:003 (3,6) - 遮的不美观 要更美观些或者不遮
00:25:860 (4,5) - ^
00:24:146 (11) - 这个应该放错地方了吧
00:23:932 (10,11,12,1) - 让这些看起来距离一致
00:29:503 (5,6,7) - 有点近稍微下移一点
00:40:003 (1,2) - 有点近
00:42:146 (2,4) - ^
00:46:646 (6) - 碰血条了?
00:50:289 (2) - 头finish是刻意不加还是漏了?
00:52:432 (2) - 这样拉看起来不像是刻意做形状反而会令人觉得有些奇怪 可以一个白点就行
01:07:003 (5,5) - 叠好
01:15:360 (7,3) - 这样碰到反而不美观

[Normal]
00:15:146 (2,4) - 拉开些
00:49:432 (2) - 碰血条了?
00:50:717 (2,4) - 拉开些
00:53:717 (1,1) - 间隔太短
01:03:574 (2,4) - 叠好
01:29:350 (1,2) - 这样拉看起来不像是刻意做形状反而会令人觉得有些奇怪 可以一个白点就行

先这些了 百姐不做?打他
祝rank
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

yf_bmp wrote:

1st mod


  1. Red: Be unrankable
  2. Blue: Be important
  3. Black: Suggestions
[General]
这样配音效还真是累啊 下次尝试将hitnormal改成无声或小声 clap之类的改成hitnormal的音效. 然后不建议完全消音
Tags: Add "Awaken" 除非他弃坑

[Insane]
00:07:431 (1,2,3,4) - 这种标准距离请与00:08:717 (5,6) - 一致. 现在的来说有点远 建议:00:07:860 (2) - x:156 y:188 ;
00:08:503 (4) - x:376 y:80 故意的
00:22:003 (3,6) - 遮的不美观 要更美观些或者不遮
00:25:860 (4,5) - ^
00:24:146 (11) - 这个应该放错地方了吧
00:23:932 (10,11,12,1) - 让这些看起来距离一致 我覺得現在挺好
00:29:503 (5,6,7) - 有点近稍微下移一点
00:40:003 (1,2) - 有点近 故意的
00:42:146 (2,4) - ^ ^
00:46:646 (6) - 碰血条了?
00:50:289 (2) - 头finish是刻意不加还是漏了?
00:52:432 (2) - 这样拉看起来不像是刻意做形状反而会令人觉得有些奇怪 可以一个白点就行 我覺得現在挺好
01:07:003 (5,5) - 叠好
01:15:360 (7,3) - 这样碰到反而不美观

[Normal]
00:15:146 (2,4) - 拉开些
00:49:432 (2) - 碰血条了? 我這邊沒碰
00:50:717 (2,4) - 拉开些 不明白
00:53:717 (1,1) - 间隔太短
01:03:574 (2,4) - 叠好
01:29:350 (1,2) - 这样拉看起来不像是刻意做形状反而会令人觉得有些奇怪 可以一个白点就行 同Insane
先这些了 百姐不做?打他
祝rank
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk
From M4M~
[General]
You need some tags. I suggest putting "Little Busters", "Kawaiwyik", "Suzuyu".


normal
00:31:432 (1) - Slider looks weird
Maybe delete one point like this:

Or make both points linear:


01:29:350 (1) - maybe change slider shape a little, maybe like this:

I moved the red point away from the first point.

00:11:717 (2) - I think this is too close to the left of the screen, it might feel weird to play. Maybe move it to the right a little like this:

[Insane]
00:52:432 (2) - I think four points on this slider is not needed, maybe delete the red one so you only have three points:



---

Overall the song is well-made. Have fun mapping! :)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

pkmnyab wrote:

From M4M~
[General]
You need some tags. I suggest putting "Little Busters", "Kawaiwyik", "Suzuyu".


normal
00:31:432 (1) - Slider looks weird
Maybe delete one point like this:

Or make both points linear:


01:29:350 (1) - maybe change slider shape a little, maybe like this:

I moved the red point away from the first point.

00:11:717 (2) - I think this is too close to the left of the screen, it might feel weird to play. Maybe move it to the right a little like this:

[Insane]
00:52:432 (2) - I think four points on this slider is not needed, maybe delete the red one so you only have three points:



---

Overall the song is well-made. Have fun mapping! :)
thanks for mod
i will fix and mod your map later
axschiming
63 posts
Joined December 2009
axschiming
Hello

[Easy]
前面那波绿线怎么回事;w;
00:17:289 (4) - 你看看472,220那附近的位置好不好。
00:25:003 (1) - 包好
00:45:574 (1) - 没包好
00:47:289 (3) - 往上抬一点更好看？
01:07:432 (1) - 和前面的4叠好一点点？
01:16:431 (2) - 没叠好。
卡瓦我最近见到好多你的GD哦

[Hard]
00:23:289 (2) - 前面那个红点去掉，一个尖有点违和
百姐你这样狂做GD我狂凑不出行数啊，放条生路猴不猴

[Insane]
00:19:003 (1) - 没和尾巴叠好。。
00:27:789 (12) - 288,88试试看？
00:30:146 (7,8,9) - 尾巴平一点也有另一种感觉0 0
http://puu.sh/6LUmV.jpg
00:33:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这附近可以做个Antijump的感觉？纯建议
00:34:860 (1) - 包一下？
00:40:432 (2,3) - 432,260看看？
00:46:217 (4) - 328,176试试
00:58:646 (11,12,1) - 340,324.。
01:13:003 (1,2,3,4) - 稍稍转转角度更好看？
KIAI2全单note大丈夫？
小柚子给我抱抱

祝早日rank哦
sammy711
207 posts
Joined November 2012
sammy711
歌名罗马音写错了
目覚めた朝にはきみが隣に
断句错误 はきみ不是一个词(估计智障谷歌把这个当一个词了)
罗马音应为 Mezameta Asa niwa Kimi ga Tonari ni
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

sammy711 wrote:

歌名罗马音写错了
目覚めた朝にはきみが隣に
断句错误 はきみ不是一个词(估计智障谷歌把这个当一个词了)
罗马音应为 Mezameta Asa niwa Kimi ga Tonari ni
我等GD齊了再改吧xd

axschiming wrote:

Hello

[Easy]
前面那波绿线怎么回事;w;
00:17:289 (4) - 你看看472,220那附近的位置好不好。
00:25:003 (1) - 包好
00:45:574 (1) - 没包好
00:47:289 (3) - 往上抬一点更好看？
01:07:432 (1) - 和前面的4叠好一点点？
01:16:431 (2) - 没叠好。
卡瓦我最近见到好多你的GD哦

[Hard]
00:23:289 (2) - 前面那个红点去掉，一个尖有点违和
百姐你这样狂做GD我狂凑不出行数啊，放条生路猴不猴

[Insane]
00:19:003 (1) - 没和尾巴叠好。。
00:27:789 (12) - 288,88试试看？
00:30:146 (7,8,9) - 尾巴平一点也有另一种感觉0 0
http://puu.sh/6LUmV.jpg
00:33:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这附近可以做个Antijump的感觉？纯建议
00:34:860 (1) - 包一下？
00:40:432 (2,3) - 432,260看看？
00:46:217 (4) - 328,176试试
00:58:646 (11,12,1) - 340,324.。
01:13:003 (1,2,3,4) - 稍稍转转角度更好看？
KIAI2全单note大丈夫？
小柚子给我抱抱

祝早日rank哦
遲點再改 thanks for mod , 也祝你早日rank
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
阿挖坑被禁言不能读书
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

yf_bmp wrote:

阿挖坑被禁言不能读书
這是個悲慘的故事
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
Hello~
From



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
祝rank，质量不错
widescreen support不需要 吧
tag建议（其实已经够了，不过方便起见嘛）：Sasasegawa Sasami Futaki Kanata Tokido Saya（其实还应该有不少，我觉得这三个女主还是比较重要的）
[623's Easy]
General
还不错

Beats
00:33:146 (2) - 嗯，这里为何不直接学前边那个类似的滑条00:19:217 (2) 提前一根红线来起滑条呢？白线起滑条这样好像打击感不太好而且没有前边那种起滑条的紧迫感惹
00:36:360 (2) - 作为一个ez难度我觉得难了，连续的1/2，不过也不是很过分，只是略难一些，所以如果想要改的话建议00:40:003 (2) - 跟这个一回事

Hitsound
00:19:217 (2) - 这个滑条slide的声音听得还是很清楚，建议用个custom给他弄成静音的
01:10:003 - 这里的tick设置成了clap音也是觉得不太舒服
01:20:717 (3) - ^
01:35:149 (2) - 不知道为何我觉得这里的whistle不太舒服，因为这两根白线本来是clap的地方不太适合whistle强音，不过也是可能个人喜好不同吧
[Normal]
General
也是没有太多可以说
有些地方的blanket要是十分仔细看是不完美的，这并不影响整体质量和美观，我也就不过多的说，除非值得一说

Beats
00:33:146 (2) - 这个滑条击打感实在是虚飘飘的，从跟的音轨上说也是开头击打的地方没有明显的音乐标志，只有尾巴上有一声，我的建议是只用尾巴上的那一声，在1上stack一下也是可以的，另外这里nc我感觉有点乱，后边的nc只有1个combo，即便是节奏建议没有采纳，也是建议后边那个1的nc取消

Placement
00:45:574 (1,2) - 包的不太仔细，怪不得看起来有一点奇怪，不过我才也就是挑刺的才会吐槽这个
01:06:574 (5,1) - 这里我建议做一个blanket，修的好看些
01:11:503 (1,1) - 我只是觉得这样接起来的变速最好少用为好，或者你要变的话从前边的1来变速，不会造成那么大的冲击力
01:15:574 (1,2) - 虽说也是大丈夫的地方，还是觉得如果对称就弄得完全对称吧，这样似是而非的blanket或对称有一点点难看

NCs
nc有一点点乱不过还不错
[Awaken's Hard]
General
祝贺禁言！
你不能说话啊，那我就各种nazi来说一通了
结果也没写多少
01:27:360 - 另外这一块地方要不要break啊，虽说好像即便hr也不会有太大压力

Beats
00:17:396 (4) - 即便不nazi我也得说，这个note跟的是哪里？不太明白用意，建议去掉。。

Placement
00:14:074 (5,1) - uccu来包好，尾巴应该离5远一点，不要怪我nazi哦~
SPOILER
01:00:574 (1,2) - 遮一半不好看，况且这一小部分这么一遮全挤在左下角了，不过如果要是改需得改几个note了，亲试可行，并不是十分麻烦
[Insane]
General
绿线吓尿
kiai的跳阵吓尿
一句话mod，那一段的随机跳挺精彩，可是也是容易被吐槽的

Placement
00:46:003 (3,4,5,6) - 456应该能整个更好看点的三角形

NCs
提个建议，nc有点长，一根长白线弄一个nc呗。。不然都排到了12

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Edit:(ノ·ω·)ノ︵
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

Atrue wrote:

[Normal]
General
也是没有太多可以说
有些地方的blanket要是十分仔细看是不完美的，这并不影响整体质量和美观，我也就不过多的说，除非值得一说

Beats
00:33:146 (2) - 这个滑条击打感实在是虚飘飘的，从跟的音轨上说也是开头击打的地方没有明显的音乐标志，只有尾巴上有一声，我的建议是只用尾巴上的那一声，在1上stack一下也是可以的，另外这里nc我感觉有点乱，后边的nc只有1个combo，即便是节奏建议没有采纳，也是建议后边那个1的nc取消 keep 暫時只在後面nc

Placement
00:45:574 (1,2) - 包的不太仔细，怪不得看起来有一点奇怪，不过我才也就是挑刺的才会吐槽这个
01:06:574 (5,1) - 这里我建议做一个blanket，修的好看些
01:11:503 (1,1) - 我只是觉得这样接起来的变速最好少用为好，或者你要变的话从前边的1来变速，不会造成那么大的冲击力
01:15:574 (1,2) - 虽说也是大丈夫的地方，还是觉得如果对称就弄得完全对称吧，这样似是而非的blanket或对称有一点点难看

NCs
nc有一点点乱不过还不错
[Insane]
General
绿线吓尿
kiai的跳阵吓尿
一句话mod，那一段的随机跳挺精彩，可是也是容易被吐槽的

Placement
00:46:003 (3,4,5,6) - 456应该能整个更好看点的三角形

NCs
提个建议，nc有点长，一根长白线弄一个nc呗。。不然都排到了12 感覺上找不到合適的nc位置才這樣的

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Edit:(ノ·ω·)ノ︵
thanks for mod and star :3
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Throws stars o/
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

Frostmourne wrote:

Throws stars o/
thanks for star \>___</
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
[Insane]
00:08:074 - 滑条头5%你确定不会nuke？
00:17:503 (10,11) - ^
00:23:932 (2) - 380,328
00:48:146 (4,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1333881
00:58:003 (8) - NC
01:04:217 (7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1333883
01:07:217 (6,7,1) - 288,280
>01:08:503 (4) - overlap
01:12:146 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这属于作死型暴走 01:18:360 (4,5,6) - 不放在中心想什么呢
[Hard]
00:16:860 (3,4) - 放近点？
00:48:682 (1) - Del this spinner
01:10:432 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1333889
[Normal]
01:20:717 (1,2) - SwapNC
01:25:646 (5) - 弯一点？
……嗯~虽然说不出有什么问题吧 o(*￣▽￣*)o
[623]
00:10:860 (1) - 看着好不爽
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
祝rank，质量不错
widescreen support不需要 吧
tag建议（其实已经够了，不过方便起见嘛）：Sasasegawa Sasami Futaki Kanata Tokido Saya（其实还应该有不少，我觉得这三个女主还是比较重要的）
[623's Easy]
General
还不错

Beats
00:33:146 (2) - 嗯，这里为何不直接学前边那个类似的滑条00:19:217 (2) 提前一根红线来起滑条呢？白线起滑条这样好像打击感不太好而且没有前边那种起滑条的紧迫感惹 其實是因為音樂後來漸大, 用圓形滑條感覺比較配合音樂就是了
00:36:360 (2) - 作为一个ez难度我觉得难了，连续的1/2，不过也不是很过分，只是略难一些，所以如果想要改的话建议00:40:003 (2) - 跟这个一回事 不錯

Hitsound
00:19:217 (2) - 这个滑条slide的声音听得还是很清楚，建议用个custom给他弄成静音的 這是我在滑條加了whistle啦ww'' 刻意的;w; 不過我試試加點綠線令他更顯眼吧
01:10:003 - 这里的tick设置成了clap音也是觉得不太舒服 好的
01:20:717 (3) - ^ 都改了
01:35:149 (2) - 不知道为何我觉得这里的whistle不太舒服，因为这两根白线本来是clap的地方不太适合whistle强音，不过也是可能个人喜好不同吧 唔...刪了233 感覺也好

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Edit:(ノ·ω·)ノ︵

ts8zs wrote:

[623]
00:10:860 (1) - 看着好不爽 應該還好啦;w; 先保留
thanks both!!

@柚子 : me唔記得改title就改左mod ;w; 得既話幫我改埋na sry DX
柚子? 柚子!
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Holoaz
358 posts
Joined November 2009
Holoaz
[Easy]
00:14:289 (1) - Hit soundの音量が小さくて殆ど聞こえないので少し大きくした方がいいと思います。
00:17:717 (1) - 折り返しをやめて00:19:217 (2) - を00:19:003から始めたほうがいいと思います。

[Normal]
00:30:574 (4) - 最初からここまでのHit soundが少なくて寂しいのでEasyを同じようにしてみては？

[Hard]
00:17:396 (4) - タイミングが00:17:503の間違い？間違ってなくても変えたほうがいいです。

[Insane]
この難易度もEasyやHardに比べて序盤のHit soundが静かなので少し聞こえにくいです。
音量を上げるか音を増やしてみるかしたほうがいいと思います。
00:50:074 - add note?
01:36:512 (1) - ここはCircleを消してここからspinnerを初めないと一個だけタイミングがおかしいのでとても良くないと思います。
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

Holoaz wrote:

[Easy]

00:14:289 (1) - Hit soundの音量が小さくて殆ど聞こえないので少し大きくした方がいいと思います。おｋ
00:17:717 (1) - 折り返しをやめて00:19:217 (2) - を00:19:003から始めたほうがいいと思います。fixed
arigatou! \o\

好na今次改番title
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Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]
00:08:074 - 滑条头5%你确定不会nuke？
00:17:503 (10,11) - ^
00:23:932 (2) - 380,328
00:48:146 (4,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1333881 kepp
00:58:003 (8) - NC
01:04:217 (7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1333883 kepp
01:07:217 (6,7,1) - 288,280
>01:08:503 (4) - overlap 故意的
01:12:146 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这属于作死型暴走 01:18:360 (4,5,6) - 不放在中心想什么呢

[Normal]
01:20:717 (1,2) - SwapNC
01:25:646 (5) - 弯一点？
……嗯~虽然说不出有什么问题吧 o(*￣▽￣*)o

Holoaz wrote:

[Normal]
00:30:574 (4) - 最初からここまでのHit soundが少なくて寂しいのでEasyを同じようにしてみては？

[Insane]
この難易度もEasyやHardに比べて序盤のHit soundが静かなので少し聞こえにくいです。
音量を上げるか音を増やしてみるかしたほうがいいと思います。
00:50:074 - add note? keep
01:36:512 (1) - ここはCircleを消してここからspinnerを初めないと一個だけタイミングがおかしいのでとても良くないと思います。 Good idea
Thanks for mod >v<
and uploaded awaken's , 623's diff
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
[623's Easy]
00:33:146 (2) - Should start at 00:33:574 instead, with a clap. It sounds abit awkward where it is now, because it doesn't hit any words, or beat in the music.
[Normal]
00:17:717 (1) - Not a very good spot for a spinner. Even it if was, I'd expect to see this in the Easy diff instead, not the Normal diff (since Normal is suppose to be more harder then Easy lol). Consider mapping here instead.
00:21:146 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:50:289 (1,4) - The overlapping here is bad.
[Hard]
00:54:789 (5) - Drum finish
01:00:574 (1,2) - Really bad overlap here, you really should consider re-positioning these sliders.

[Insane]
00:16:432 (7) - NC
00:35:503 (3) - Interesting. Try adding a drum finish on the tail to match the bat similar beat heard in the music.
00:36:146 (4) - ^ For both head and the tail.
00:37:432 (4) - Drum finish on the tail
00:37:860 (5) - Drum finish for both head and tail.
00:39:146 (5) - Drum finish on the tail
00:39:574 (6,7) - ^
00:41:289 (6) - Drum finish on the head.
00:42:789 (4,5,6) - Drum finish
00:44:289 (3) - Drum finish on the tail
00:44:717 (4,5) - ^

Cute song :) Have a star
Good luck!
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[Normal]
00:17:717 (1) - Not a very good spot for a spinner. Even it if was, I'd expect to see this in the Easy diff instead, not the Normal diff (since Normal is suppose to be more harder then Easy lol). Consider mapping here instead.
00:21:146 (1) - Add finish on the head. ok
00:50:289 (1,4) - The overlapping here is bad.

[Insane]
00:16:432 (7) - NC OK
00:35:503 (3) - Interesting. Try adding a drum finish on the tail to match the bat similar beat heard in the music.
00:36:146 (4) - ^ For both head and the tail.
00:37:432 (4) - Drum finish on the tail
00:37:860 (5) - Drum finish for both head and tail.
00:39:146 (5) - Drum finish on the tail
00:39:574 (6,7) - ^
00:41:289 (6) - Drum finish on the head.
00:42:789 (4,5,6) - Drum finish
00:44:289 (3) - Drum finish on the tail
00:44:717 (4,5) - ^

Cute song :) Have a star
Good luck!
thanks for mod >w<
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
[623's Easy]
00:33:146 (2) - Should start at 00:33:574 instead, with a clap. It sounds abit awkward where it is now, because it doesn't hit any words, or beat in the music.

Cute song :) Have a star
Good luck!
fixed, thanks x)

hey
osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:目覚めた朝にはきみが隣に (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:鈴湯
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Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
我遭到柚子的召喚(ﾉﾟдﾟ)ﾉ沒什麼好講的就讓我nazi幾下

[General]
  1. Tags裡的Little busters! Ex和Source重複了, 建議去掉. 另外可以加個game eroge之類的
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:289 (2,3) - 跳得略莫名..用1.2x擺就好了 (還是說其實本來(1,2)之間是1.4x不小心擺成1.2x?)
  2. 00:40:646 (3,4,5) - 弄個正三角形? 不然就是(5)可以再往左邊一點. 反正我看上去(3,5)就是擠擠的
    SPOILER
  3. 01:24:788 (1) - 你需要這種flow
    SPOILER
    超乾淨
[Awaken's Hard]
  • 啥都沒看出來Q_Q
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:860 (4,1) - 感覺可以(4)加個reverse, 然後(1)直接變成1/2滑條? 就是覺得重音出現在折返上略奇怪..
[623's Easy]
  1. 00:26:074 (3) - 這個感覺不必要跟到vocal, 縮短1/2然後往後直接跟1/1節奏就好
  2. 00:29:503 (2) - ^
你可以rank了
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
好
[Easy]00:45:146 (1) - 可以blanket
01:04:003 (3) - 简单难度里那个红点滑条建议红点处弧度小一点
KIAI部分可以把soft whistle换成重一点的音效
01:24:146 (1) - 这个就可以用Normal finish让这里音效带感一些
[Normal]
24白线没音效??
00:13:860 (4,1) - 好丑啊
00:20:717 - 转盘可以拉到这里 这里音漏了感觉好不舒服..
00:39:574 (2) - 可以加drum音效
00:45:574 (1) - 弧度大一点blanket好
01:15:146 (6,2) - 感觉这个叠的好丑啊不过好像也没办法
01:19:003 - 怎么这里开始跟vocal了 不如老老实实跟鼓点
01:31:134 (2) - 丑 不如复制粘贴上一个
[Hard]
00:14:074 (5,1) - 没blanket好
白恶俗神马坡 dio 夫妻
[Insane]
00:30:146 (7,9) - I里这样overlap丑不如stack
00:32:717 (3,2) - ^ 那个长滑条也丑...
00:50:182 (1,2) - 这里有个不算问题 的问题 bg这里是紫色所以如果bg没100%黑暗的话可能会读不出是几个缩圈 所以可以改nc颜色.....
第二个kiai里基本全是单点啊...可以适当加一些滑条 1/4之类的也行吧感觉会好点
01:32:472 (8) - 这里我听起来像是跟vocal啊所以这里nc并取消前后的nc
美丽
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

Flask wrote:

我遭到柚子的召喚(ﾉﾟдﾟ)ﾉ沒什麼好講的就讓我nazi幾下

[General]
  1. Tags裡的Little busters! Ex和Source重複了, 建議去掉. 另外可以加個game eroge之類的
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:289 (2,3) - 跳得略莫名..用1.2x擺就好了 (還是說其實本來(1,2)之間是1.4x不小心擺成1.2x?) 故意的 不過都改了 大家都1.4DS
  2. 00:40:646 (3,4,5) - 弄個正三角形? 不然就是(5)可以再往左邊一點. 反正我看上去(3,5)就是擠擠的 原來可以三角形 fixed
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  3. 01:24:788 (1) - 你需要這種flow Keep 現在挺好
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    超乾淨
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:860 (4,1) - 感覺可以(4)加個reverse, 然後(1)直接變成1/2滑條? 就是覺得重音出現在折返上略奇怪.. Keep

ZZHBOY wrote:

好
[Normal]
24白线没音效??
00:13:860 (4,1) - 好丑啊 - -
00:20:717 - 转盘可以拉到这里 这里音漏了感觉好不舒服.. ok
00:39:574 (2) - 可以加drum音效 ok
00:45:574 (1) - 弧度大一点blanket好 怎麼我都感覺沒問題
01:15:146 (6,2) - 感觉这个叠的好丑啊不过好像也没办法
01:19:003 - 怎么这里开始跟vocal了 不如老老实实跟鼓点
01:31:134 (2) - 丑 不如复制粘贴上一个 就是ctrl+c+v啊
[Hard]
00:14:074 (5,1) - 没blanket好 fixed
白恶俗神马坡 dio 夫妻
[Insane]
00:30:146 (7,9) - I里这样overlap丑不如stack keep
00:32:717 (3,2) - ^ 那个长滑条也丑... fixed
00:50:182 (1,2) - 这里有个不算问题 的问题 bg这里是紫色所以如果bg没100%黑暗的话可能会读不出是几个缩圈 所以可以改nc颜色..... 讀圖問題吧
第二个kiai里基本全是单点啊...可以适当加一些滑条 1/4之类的也行吧感觉会好点
01:32:472 (8) - 这里我听起来像是跟vocal啊所以这里nc并取消前后的nc keep
美丽
thanks for 兩個 mod ><
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
From my modding queue

[General]
LB居然有妹子，为什么不早告诉我

[Insane]
柚子也是绿化先锋
00:07:431 (2) - 这里不nc一发？
00:32:074 (2,3) - 总觉得不好看，叠在一起了
00:33:789 (2) - 有可能误读，以为是1/4连（只有我自己可能误读吧喂
00:47:717 (3,4) - 碰到了不好看

[Hard]
00:23:289 (2) - 这包的是有多难看 哦不对白姐美丽
00:26:074 (4) - 为什么从这里开始NC就变得很乱了。。
00:54:360 (2,3,4) - 感觉hard里大量出现这种东西不是很合适，最好改成reverse吧

[Normal]
00:17:717 (1,1) - 稍微有点近，不过问题不大
01:32:472 (3,3) - 没叠好

[Easy]
00:10:003 (3,1) - 隔这么近。。
00:16:432 (4) - 没包好
00:19:003 (2) - 能不能把body的whistle去掉啊

好图，祝早日rank :)
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