Nymph wrote:

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01:38:068 (1) - 我建议这后面还是加一点hitsound吧 一点hitsound都没有略显奇怪

02:19:014 (4) - 这slider不好看啊 建议改锚点位置改成直线惹

02:21:447 (9) - 同上^

03:08:879 (4) - 不好看 换个造型吧 这一小段就这slider自己比较扭曲啊改成普普通通带弧度的滑条惹

03:30:771 (6) - 这个减速略突然 而且这个节奏 如果是为了做这个vocal的特殊梗的话 最好这段每个这样的vocal都用类似的做法这里那声so真的很强啊所以只有这里变了下速强调一下，把0.75改成1.0惹

03:33:609 (6) - 这个同上节奏也用蓝线结束更好 减速还是觉得没什么必要

03:56:312 (5) - 美观度差了点 和4的间距也略短改成普通弧度滑条惹

03:57:528 (1) - 这里根据vocal就不需要蓝线停了 1/2正好好

04:24:285 (3) - hitsound 应该用normal了这里

04:24:690 (4) - 结尾也是 这段可以用长白线全加normal hitnormal的梗 既然前面用了 最好就不要只用一点 一直用完吧 要不然很凌乱补好了

整体还行 细节差点苦苦哦;w;

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最低难度尽量避免note连续放太多 那些3个4个note连续的梗建议全改简单点第三个KIAI前简化不少最后一个KIAI留了几个感觉爽

hitsound太混乱 如果你是想全程靠whistle的话 就不要有的地方有漏加hitsound现象 也不要突然某个地方加个normal finish啊 吓死人了放弃全程whistle

求remap hitsound on this diff done.-.

judgment light wrote:

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00:17:393 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这样子节奏好点 http://puu.sh/6mwGe.jpg
00:51:447 (1,2) - 这里的1滑条尾也弄个消音吧
01:22:460 (2,4) - 这两个试试都加drum的finish
01:38:068 (1) - 为何这后面就没有hitsound了
01:41:312 (5,7,9) - 这三个头上都加个whistle
01:51:041 (2) - 滑条头加个whistle呗done
02:28:339 (3) - 这里也加个D的whistledone
03:01:582 (2) - 怎么从这里到03:04:825 (3) - 都没hitsound
03:19:927 (1) - 感觉这个转盘尾换whistle会好一点done
03:30:771 (6) - 这里红线有一个音被你盖住了 不如反正不太明显.-.
03:35:636 (1) - 同上
03:37:258 (1) - 这个你用后面的那个ctrl+G过来吧那样可能影响flow.-.
03:39:285 - 这里加个finish吧厚
03:44:960 (1) - 这个加速很奇怪 而且为什么要把重音放在滑条尾不会改orz
03:52:156 (4) - 往上放一点 尽量被之前那个1滑条盖住盖不住.-. 往上移了点
04:08:474 (1) - 滑条头finishdone
04:09:285 (3) - 尾巴换Normaldone
04:13:339 (5) - 不如用S音效的finishdone
04:32:798 (1) - 其实我觉得这后面到04:39:285 (7) - 之前的每一根白线都加个whistle挺好done
04:41:312 (1,2) - 都加个whistle吧 衬托钟声厚
04:46:582 - 去掉这个break既然不止一个mod提到了那就去掉re

normal重做了音效之后简单看了一下整齐了挺多(不对我之前根本就没看过normal殴打
祝rank

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]
- BG的Size是1058*667,找一張1024/1366*768?
- mp3能找個192位元率的嗎?
- Unicode Title跟Tags不一致我真是zz

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- 00:38:474 (3,1) - 這兩個可以包好好
- 01:12:528 (4) - 這個flow可能更好done

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- 01:53:474 (3,1) - 這兩個可以複製done
- 02:20:231 (3) - Prev:1.07x调整了

[Collab]
- 我沒啥好說的;__;it's a shit map

Nymph wrote:

recheck

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04:40:501 (1,1,1) - too loud音量降低了20%

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为啥用S不用SC1呢？好

tick2有啥特殊用意吗 我觉得tick1就够了好

00:19:825 (1) - 这里开始需要降低音量啊 60已经很吵了 40 45差不多

01:47:393 (1) - 这也是 这里没有多少伴奏 不应该用60吧（其实看到这我觉得你这可以这个diff整体音量都降低 跟collab insane对比一下 这个diff实在是太吵了我把N的音量都调低了一些感觉好一些惹.-.

1. Inconsistent Letterbox during breaks
2. BG size is not a good choice, try to find a 1024x768 ver
3. Uncheck widescreen storyboard support since there's not 16:9 storyboard

1. 02:59:977 (2) - remove clap here
2. 03:49:640 - recommend to add a 1/2 slider here for transition
3. 03:51:058 - also suggest a note
4. 03:57:545 (5) - Clap should be here but not 03:58:761 (1) - , also the following in kiai are misplaced
5. 04:40:518 (1,2,3) - stacks here maybe not a good choice

S o a p wrote:

支持楼上

ZZHBOY wrote:

S o a p wrote:

支持楼上

不 我信肥球

S o a p wrote:

淦 别忘了你现在用的BG也是我选的

ZZHBOY wrote:

S o a p wrote:

淦 别忘了你现在用的BG也是我选的

no 你zz

Scorpiour wrote:

Okay then here comes the mod

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

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1. Inconsistent Letterbox during breaks 没问题啊o.o
2. BG size is not a good choice, try to find a 1024x768 verdone
3. Uncheck widescreen storyboard support since there's not 16:9 storyboarddone

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1. 02:59:977 (2) - remove clap heredone
2. 03:49:640 - recommend to add a 1/2 slider here for transitiondone
3. 03:51:058 - also suggest a notedone
4. 03:57:545 (5) - Clap should be here but not 03:58:761 (1) - , also the following in kiai are misplaced hao
5. 04:40:518 (1,2,3) - stacks here maybe not a good choicei like it

S o a p wrote:

绝交

S o a p wrote:

绝交

Bungaku Shounen wrote:

S o a p wrote:

绝交

1. it's strange to be in kiai mode here 03:29:572 - ~03:39:302 -. consider to cancel it.

1. 00:47:815 (5) - perfect this. http://puu.sh/6Jc2H.jpg
2. 01:00:585 - it's really weird that the hitsound is reduced suddenly here when people are spinning, i'd prefer to put several inherited points for a fade-out.
3. 04:32:815 - how about to set a kiai burst right here? looks pretty.

1. 04:35:248 (1) - it's really not a beat sounds right with whistle..