smallboat wrote:
[Collab Insane]
00:19:217 (2,3) - Drum的音效聽起來有點突兀,個人意見。 这个改了
00:26:717 (6) - 照這樣節奏聽下去這邊不加whistle感覺怪怪。
00:29:150 (8) - ^
00:39:690 (2) - 你這邊1234間距都一樣了有點難讀,所以建議說2移到(268|152)左右位置做個antijump,這樣比較好讀。
00:45:568 (2) - 感覺疊在3滑條頭比較好讀和順。
00:48:609 (8) - 怎不移到(240|128),原來位置也太遠了吧?
00:53:474 (3) - 可以複製1的來對稱
01:03:406 (6) - (360|20)試試。
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._.表示以上很多都是自己有想法所以没改..不管如何谢谢了~
Nunnally Lamperouge wrote:
00:35:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议↓
因为是开头,所以稍微简单点,和前面蓝色的5个点音一样比较好
00:51:447 (1,2) - 拉开一点吧,还有些其他的也是。还有就是我有点不明白2压蓝线的意义···就好像是为了压蓝线而压蓝线
00:53:474 (3,1) - 有点坑···建议00:53:879 (1,2,3) - 与00:55:095 (1,2,3) - 互调··虽然不换也行··比较我这里没断←只是建议
同上面..没有同意
Tsukuyomi wrote:
Collab Insane
00:28:339 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个我感觉 渐变的不太好,6 7 8 9组个四方看起来还好一点 fixed
Komeiji Hatsu wrote:
[insane]
00:11:312 - 這麼重的音你放滑條尾?又沒擺梗,放note或者起滑條好吧 不是不可以
00:13:744 - ^
00:16:177 - ^
00:25:906 (2,3,4,5,6) - 誤讀
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