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Losertic

Satellite wrote:

Hi
KOTOKO <3

Satellite's Modding
[General]
Source: Accel World ? → hmm. pass. (i don't know this part... maybe. ask to BAT.)
Tag: Saitou is better? http://ja.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?sea ... C%E7%B4%A2 umm... no?

[Normal]
01:12:980 - add note? → Fixed.
02:23:439 - ^ → Fixed.
03:23:714 (1) - why don't use distancesnap? → It's my mistake! o.o. Fixed.

good. → thanks! ;)

[Hard]
00:32:246 (2) - why a mini jump? I think not need jump >.> → hmm, but-..maybe.. it's no problem!...
00:49:861 (4) - remove note? same as 00:46:558 - and 00:48:760 - → Fixed.
00:52:338 (4) - The dirty a little... → umm. like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1079711 (change little shape, ctrl+g)
01:13:806 (2,3,4,5) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
→ wait, what?.. ;_;
01:18:760 (5) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well. → Fixed.
01:52:888 (5) - try CTRL+G → i think better now. because it's too hard jump. and.. ummmm. not good this voice part+hard jump?
02:03:347 (1) - remove Nc and 02:03:897 (2) - add Nc → Fixed.
02:19:861 (6) - Move x256 y96 is better? (DS) → Fixed.
02:24:815 (7) - try CTRL+G → Fixed.
02:32:384 (1) - spinner start 02:32:522 - here → Fixed.

good luck~
Thank you! ;)
El SolarBeam
from M4M

[Storyboard]

well, since I'm quite fond of SB, I'll include it in this mod~
00:10:503 Add sb/circle to follow the song rythm
00:11:604 ^
00:12:705 ^
00:14:907 ^
00:17:109 ^
00:44:081 I think circle here should be changed with something like this http://puu.sh/5chet.png
01:24:265 Consider adding sb/white
02:17:109 ^
02:41:329 to 02:43:531 Consider fading both bg, then give white flash afterwise. That should do an impact
03:01:146 to 03:14:357 Please give whatever SB element here, cause black bg seems ugly
oh, and I like that snow effect <3


[Normal]

00:33:623 Could you reshape it so that the slider's end make a better blanket with next slider?
00:55:641 Rotate it around 33' to create a symmetry
01:12:980 Maybe move to x:332 y:152
You sure don't want to map it until the end of the song? This diff is good though


[Hard]

00:16:008 Move anchor to x:360 y:144 (sorry if it's just a little different change)
00:16:008 Move slider to x:300 y:88
00:52:338 Just suggestion, make (4) and (5) become reverse slider
01:15:458 Make it into more creative shape maybe?
01:23:990 Add finish
03:25:366 NC
03:28:393 ^
03:47:935 (7) The shape doesn't fit the (6) slider
04:06:100 Move the red anchor to x:276 y:116

not much that I can say, since the map itself is good :3
good luck~
Topic Starter
Losertic

El SolarBeam wrote:

from M4M

El SolarBeam's Modding
[Storyboard]

well, since I'm quite fond of SB, I'll include it in this mod~
00:10:503 Add sb/circle to follow the song rythm
00:11:604 ^
00:12:705 ^
00:14:907 ^
00:17:109 ^
00:44:081 I think circle here should be changed with something like this http://puu.sh/5chet.png
01:24:265 Consider adding sb/white
02:17:109 ^
02:41:329 to 02:43:531 Consider fading both bg, then give white flash afterwise. That should do an impact
03:01:146 to 03:14:357 Please give whatever SB element here, cause black bg seems ugly
oh, and I like that snow effect <3 → I send PM to SB Maker.


[Normal]

00:33:623 Could you reshape it so that the slider's end make a better blanket with next slider? → moved 00:35:825 (1) - this slider.
00:55:641 Rotate it around 33' to create a symmetry → Fixed.
01:12:980 Maybe move to x:332 y:152 → i want 1.0x distance ;_;
You sure don't want to map it until the end of the song? This diff is good though → :3


[Hard]

00:16:008 Move anchor to x:360 y:144 (sorry if it's just a little different change) → Fixed.
00:16:008 Move slider to x:300 y:88 → ummm??.. wait, umm.. well.... like this?... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089484 i don't like this ;_;
00:52:338 Just suggestion, make (4) and (5) become reverse slider → i think better now :3
01:15:458 Make it into more creative shape maybe? → umm? i think better this note's shape. like bowling? ;)
01:23:990 Add finish → maybe not. hmm. i think weird sound..?
03:25:366 NC → this NC pattern, like 00:39:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . sorry. umm.
03:28:393 ^ → non fixed.
03:47:935 (7) The shape doesn't fit the (6) slider → Fixed. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089502
04:06:100 Move the red anchor to x:276 y:116 → move (274,121) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089506

not much that I can say, since the map itself is good :3
good luck~

Wait. I'll check your mod.

Thank you! ;)
Sun Rainbow
No change,But thx your SB mod!>w<
yurunneram
Normal

00:11:604 (3) - Rather flow-breaking. But actually the problem lies in (1) since people expect it to flow just because the first two notes did

01:02:797 (2) - Stack below the end of slider 01:00:044 (3) (you'd have t rearrange (1))

01:50:411 (4,1) - flows badly. Put them on the left side of (3) instead

02:18:210 (3) - Make good triangle with (1) and (2)

02:22:338 - Add note?

02:46:008 - ^

03:21:513 (4) - This was unexpected

Love your pentagons @w@

HARD

00:23:714 (4,5) - Would rather replace with same slider from (3)

00:42:429 (8) - NC here instead

01:18:760 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hey, this pentagon ain't perfect

02:19:724 - Shouldn't there be a note here?

02:43:256 and 02:43:393 - Add note to make tripplet

Very good ^^ Star~ I'll be waiting for this rank~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
GugUCorn
late m4m~

[normal]

  1. 00:42:980 (4) - NC.
  2. 00:53:439 (1) - 첫 부분에 피니쉬
  3. 01:02:246 (1) - 피니쉬
  4. 01:04:449 (5) - 가운데 슬라이더 포인트를 (148,228) 으로
  5. 01:19:861 (1) - 피니쉬
  6. 01:22:063 (1) - ^
  7. 02:08:301 (1) - 역시 피니쉬.
  8. 02:15:458 (5) - NC
  9. 03:42:980 (1) - 피니쉬
  10. 03:50:687 (6) - 끝에 피니쉬 빠졌네요
  11. 04:11:604 (1) - 피니쉬
[hard]

  1. 00:24:953 (1) - 00:26:742 이 때 끝내는 건 어떨까요?
  2. 00:33:622 (1) - 2번째 슬라이더 포인트를 (316,144)
  3. 00:38:026 (6) - NC
  4. 00:39:678 (1,3) - 1번 뉴콤 해제,3번 뉴콤
  5. 00:53:438 (1) - 첫 부분 피니쉬
  6. 01:19:861 (5) - 피니쉬
  7. 02:41:329 (4) - 뉴콤보
  8. 03:25:366 (5) - 이 다음 노트가 겹쳐있어서 인식하기 어려울것 같아서, 5번 노트에 뉴콤보!
  9. 03:33:622 (4) - 끝에 피니쉬
  10. 03:36:100 - 여기서부터 보컬이 시작되는거 같은데, 노트추가 제안
Topic Starter
Losertic

yurunneram wrote:

yurunneram's Modding
Normal

00:11:604 (3) - Rather flow-breaking. But actually the problem lies in (1) since people expect it to flow just because the first two notes did → well.... but, it's normal diff. not matter? (slow BPM,AR. seeing notes)

01:02:797 (2) - Stack below the end of slider 01:00:044 (3) (you'd have t rearrange (1)) → Fixed.

01:50:411 (4,1) - flows badly. Put them on the left side of (3) instead → Changed.

02:18:210 (3) - Make good triangle with (1) and (2)

02:22:338 - Add note? → i think better now :3

02:46:008 - ^ → same answer.

03:21:513 (4) - This was unexpected → add NC

Love your pentagons @w@ → Thanks @w@

HARD

00:23:714 (4,5) - Would rather replace with same slider from (3) → Fixed.

00:42:429 (8) - NC here instead → i think not. like normal diff, and 02:15:457 (1) - same rhythm.

01:18:760 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hey, this pentagon ain't perfect → Fixed.

02:19:724 - Shouldn't there be a note here? → yep, because it's too hard.

02:43:256 and 02:43:393 - Add note to make tripplet → Fixed.

Very good ^^ Star~ I'll be waiting for this rank~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Thank you Yurun Ceroia Neram. ;) (it's your full name? lol)


TaMul wrote:

late m4m~

TaMul's Modding
[normal]

  1. 00:42:980 (4) - NC. → 수정 완료.
  2. 00:53:439 (1) - 첫 부분에 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  3. 01:02:246 (1) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  4. 01:04:449 (5) - 가운데 슬라이더 포인트를 (148,228) 으로 → 왜 슬라이더 중간점을 이렇게 옮기시는지는 알겠습니다. 그러나 4번 노트와 약간 부딪쳐서 패스할게요.
  5. 01:19:861 (1) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  6. 01:22:063 (1) - ^ → 수정 완료.
  7. 02:08:301 (1) - 역시 피니쉬. → 수정 완료.
  8. 02:15:458 (5) - NC → 수정 완료.
  9. 03:42:980 (1) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  10. 03:50:687 (6) - 끝에 피니쉬 빠졌네요 → 수정 완료.
  11. 04:11:604 (1) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
[hard]

  1. 00:24:953 (1) - 00:26:742 이 때 끝내는 건 어떨까요? → 스핀이 끝난다음 바로 노트인게 좀 맘에들지 않네요...
  2. 00:33:622 (1) - 2번째 슬라이더 포인트를 (316,144) → 수정 완료.
  3. 00:38:026 (6) - NC → 02:13:531 (4) - 처럼 뉴콤보 유지하겠습니다.
  4. 00:39:678 (1,3) - 1번 뉴콤 해제,3번 뉴콤 → 00:40:228 - 이 3번 슬라이더 부분이 그렇게 임팩트 있는 부분이 아니라서 패스하겠습니다. 이거랑 비슷한 박자도 이런 배치입니다. 02:12:155 (1) - 예시.
  5. 00:53:438 (1) - 첫 부분 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  6. 01:19:861 (5) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  7. 02:41:329 (4) - 뉴콤보 → 수정 완료.
  8. 03:25:366 (5) - 이 다음 노트가 겹쳐있어서 인식하기 어려울것 같아서, 5번 노트에 뉴콤보! → 수정 완료.
  9. 03:33:622 (4) - 끝에 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  10. 03:36:100 - 여기서부터 보컬이 시작되는거 같은데, 노트추가 제안 → 이부분은 비슷한 박자와 동일하게 하는게 맘에들어서 넣지 않겠습니다.

힛사관련 모딩! 좋아요 진짜ㅠㅠ

감사합니다 ;)
yurunneram

Losertic wrote:

(it's your full name? lol)
Haha hai desu OwO)/ Beautiful name desune?~ giehehe~
Topic Starter
Losertic

yurunneram wrote:

Losertic wrote:

(it's your full name? lol)
Haha hai desu OwO)/ Beautiful name desune?~ giehehe~
giehehe/...

nice laughter 8-)
Robbydie
Hiya :D

First of all, i like the song and the anime^^
Here is my modding :

Hard

  • 00:38:026 (6) - clap is missing
    00:44:081 (5) - the whistle makes a strange sound there, i prefer the finish more -> same at this place -> 02:16:558 (5)
    00:46:146 (3) - imo it sounds better if there is a note
    00:48:347 (7) - here should be then also a note
    00:49:448 (3) - the jump from the note before to this one is too big, you should make it some shorter -> same at this place ->00:50:549 (6)
    02:11:604 to 02:12:430 - this sequenz is strange for me , may you should change it a bit, for example like this :
    http://s7.directupload.net/file/d/3441/9z2cdjf8_jpg.htm
    03:14:357 - i would add there a note
    03:25:366 (1) - clap is missing
Normal

  • 00:33:072 (4) - whistle is missing
    00:44:081 (3) - like i wrote in Hard, there is a strange sound. if you change it in Hard, you also should change it in Normal.
    03:33:623 (6) - turn the whistle off there and make it on at the next note
Generall

  • You did a nice job ^^ , i hope for you it will get ranked ;D
    One point: Like someone said before me, i think the desing is really dark. You should edit the video and improt some other pictures.
I tried to find more errors, but i am just fine with the rest xDD,
so at least i hope my modding is a bit helpful ;D
Topic Starter
Losertic

Robbydie wrote:

Hiya :D

First of all, i like the song and the anime^^ :3
Here is my modding :

Robbydie's Modding
Hard

  • 00:38:026 (6) - clap is missing → Fixed.
    00:44:081 (5) - the whistle makes a strange sound there, i prefer the finish more -> same at this place -> 02:16:558 (5) → i think better now.
    00:46:146 (3) - imo it sounds better if there is a note → okay, change one slider (1/4)+add reverse
    00:48:347 (7) - here should be then also a note → fixed. like ↑
    00:49:448 (3) - the jump from the note before to this one is too big, you should make it some shorter -> same at this place ->00:50:549 (6) → change rhythm! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1102972
    02:11:604 to 02:12:430 - this sequenz is strange for me , may you should change it a bit, for example like this : → i think better now. and 00:39:678 (1,2,3) - it's same rhythm part.
    http://s7.directupload.net/file/d/3441/9z2cdjf8_jpg.htm
    03:14:357 - i would add there a note → Fixed.
    03:25:366 (1) - clap is missing → Fixed.
Normal

  • 00:33:072 (4) - whistle is missing → umm... no?
    00:44:081 (3) - like i wrote in Hard, there is a strange sound. if you change it in Hard, you also should change it in Normal. → Well... pass ;_;. i don't know. i think better this sound.
    03:33:623 (6) - turn the whistle off there and make it on at the next note → Fixed.
Generall

  • You did a nice job ^^ , i hope for you it will get ranked ;D
    One point: Like someone said before me, i think the desing is really dark. You should edit the video and improt some other pictures. → really dark? lol .... but, i don't have BG. ;_;

I tried to find more errors, but i am just fine with the rest xDD,
so at least i hope my modding is a bit helpful ;D
Thank you! ;)
Robbydie
hmm for the design : i think you can cut some pictures into a video and make them slide a bit . then you have another background.
It makes the video more interesting, but its just my opinion and it is just an addition to the beatmap, so dont keep thinking about this long ^^
Topic Starter
Losertic

Robbydie wrote:

hmm for the design : i think you can cut some pictures into a video and make them slide a bit . then you have another background.
It makes the video more interesting, but its just my opinion and it is just an addition to the beatmap, so dont keep thinking about this long ^^

Thanks for your advice!!

( but, i don't know how to use "photoshop" :( ) and Storyboard...
tutuhaha
Hi~ o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ

[Hard]
I think this hard should add more rhythm so....maybe lot of mod is about add note so....whatever...
00:20:412 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109053 (just look at rhythm)
00:27:017 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109058 (just look at rhythm)
00:31:283 (x) - add note
00:46:558 (x) - ^
00:51:237 (1) - delete 2 then http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109061 (just look at rhythm)
00:53:302 (x) - add note
00:59:907 (x) - ^
01:03:347 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109102 (just look at rhythm)
01:07:476 (x) - ^
01:55:366 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - little bit werid when I play this
02:19:724 (x) - note
02:20:136 (8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109082 (just look at rhythm)
02:28:393 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109088 (just look at rhythm【slider 2 】)
00:27:017 (x) - 00:44:081 (x)
01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x)
those two part should have almost same rhythm, and I think you lose many rhythm in 01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x) ._.
03:36:925 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109109 (just look at rhythm)
03:41:604 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109112 (just look at rhythm)
03:48:760 (x) - add note
well because this song has almost same rhythm in kiai time so...some problem will be same as another kiai time
v This is what rhythm I try to describe v
http://puu.sh/5ln71.osu
I just think this diff lost much blue tick rhythm /_\...
Topic Starter
Losertic

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~ o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ >,<

tutuhaha's Modding
[Hard]
I think this hard should add more rhythm so....maybe lot of mod is about add note so....whatever... → Wellllll. okay
00:20:412 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109053 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
00:27:017 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109058 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
00:31:283 (x) - add note → Fixed.
00:46:558 (x) - ^ → Fixed.
00:51:237 (1) - delete 2 then http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109061 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
00:53:302 (x) - add note → Fixed.
00:59:907 (x) - ^ → Fixed.
01:03:347 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109102 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
01:07:476 (x) - ^ → add note.
01:55:366 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - little bit werid when I play this → Changed. maybe much better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1112468
02:19:724 (x) - note → no, because it's too hard. 7 notes ;_;. ( and i don't like this rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1112478 )
02:20:136 (8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109082 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
02:28:393 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109088 (just look at rhythm【slider 2 】) → Fixed.
00:27:017 (x) - 00:44:081 (x)
01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x)
those two part should have almost same rhythm, and I think you lose many rhythm in 01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x) ._. → well, okay. i changed some rhythm. ex) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1112683
03:36:925 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109109 (just look at rhythm) → → Fixed. and changed little http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1112698
03:41:604 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109112 (just look at rhythm) → i think better now. because it's not follow vocal. follow boomboom sound anyway, it's maybe alright rhythm for hard diff XD
03:48:760 (x) - add note → Fixed.
well because this song has almost same rhythm in kiai time so...some problem will be same as another kiai time
v This is what rhythm I try to describe v
http://puu.sh/5ln71.osu
I just think this diff lost much blue tick rhythm /_\... → ahhhh. right, but maybe too hard for hard diff user? hmm..
Thank you! ;)

I'll fixed tomorrow. (and i download your diff hehe 8-) it's good rhythm notes. it was helpful ;) )
Sun Rainbow

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~ o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ

[Hard]
I think this hard should add more rhythm so....maybe lot of mod is about add note so....whatever...
00:20:412 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109053 (just look at rhythm)
00:27:017 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109058 (just look at rhythm)
00:31:283 (x) - add note
00:46:558 (x) - ^
00:51:237 (1) - delete 2 then http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109061 (just look at rhythm)
00:53:302 (x) - add note
00:59:907 (x) - ^
01:03:347 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109102 (just look at rhythm)
01:07:476 (x) - ^
01:55:366 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - little bit werid when I play this
02:19:724 (x) - note
02:20:136 (8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109082 (just look at rhythm)
02:28:393 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109088 (just look at rhythm【slider 2 】)
00:27:017 (x) - 00:44:081 (x)
01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x)
those two part should have almost same rhythm, and I think you lose many rhythm in 01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x) ._.
03:36:925 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109109 (just look at rhythm)
03:41:604 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109112 (just look at rhythm)
03:48:760 (x) - add note
well because this song has almost same rhythm in kiai time so...some problem will be same as another kiai time
v This is what rhythm I try to describe v
http://puu.sh/5ln71.osu
I just think this diff lost much blue tick rhythm /_\...
haha姐姐!
Atrue
Hello~
From my modding queue. Sorry for late mod.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Hmm.. No easy or Insane? That's ok because I think it can be hard to make a In diff.
Ok let's start.
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ Good luck.
[Normal]
General
Hard to find something to say because you followed drums almost all the map and arrangement is almost blanket.. Not bad idea for a normal diff but may not so interesting.
Placement
00:33:623 (1,1) - Blanket is a good choice.
[Hard]
General
Some suggestions here.
Beats
00:27:017 (1,2,3) - The start of slider 2 is not on vocal, so I suggest this beat.00:55:640 (2,3,4) - This beat is messy in following tracks. Maybe not use reverse in 2 is a better choice.
01:04:861 - Add a note? A voice here is missing.
01:08:852 (5,6) - The vocal is more like 01:13:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why the first 2 sets of vocals are sliders and the 3rd set is a triplet? A more balanced rhythm here is better.
01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really not good rhythm here. Vocal is easy to follow.
01:17:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Boring 1/2s... So sorry because you did followed drums but maybe vocal is a better choice because you followed vocal in previous part and the 2 part is better to be seen as a whole part.
02:19:724 - Add a note. If you are not sure about this because the difficult you can make 02:19:036 (1,2) a slider.
02:20:825 (10) - change the slider in to the note here.
02:20:825 (10) - A triplet is suitable. And if you added triplet here, you may need to add here too 02:22:476
02:28:256 - Add a note to cover the vocal
02:30:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - My advice is following vocal here.
02:47:934 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:50:411 (4) - Also vocal is not well followed..
04:04:999 (1,2,3) - Also a matter of track. I think vocal is better. 1 1/4 longer?
Placement
00:09:402 (1,2) - Not perfect blanket but ok.
00:22:613 (3,4) - Bend 3 a bit will make it a better flow.
00:43:531 (3,4) - A sudden jump.
00:53:990 (2,3) - ^, and flow is not so good.
01:06:650 (1) - The jump is really big.
01:06:650 (1,2) - Not good blanket.
01:09:265 (6,1) - ^
01:42:705 (4) - Distance is really need to be controlled.
01:46:558 (5,6,7) - ^ pay attention to the distance between stream.
03:47:109 (6,7) - Blanket is not good here.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Topic Starter
Losertic

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From my modding queue. Sorry for late mod.



azuretwinight's Modding
[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Hmm.. No easy or Insane? That's ok because I think it can be hard to make a In diff.
Ok let's start.
(ノ·ω·)ノ? Good luck. → uh, umm.. star? :roll:
[Normal]
General
Hard to find something to say because you followed drums almost all the map and arrangement is almost blanket.. Not bad idea for a normal diff but may not so interesting. → I know. (maybe) it's boring diff.... but- i choose this way... it's simple. and (maybe) pretty?
Placement
00:33:623 (1,1) - Blanket is a good choice. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1153277 :3
[Hard]
General
Some suggestions here.
Beats
00:27:017 (1,2,3) - The start of slider 2 is not on vocal, so I suggest this beat. → Fixed.
00:55:640 (2,3,4) - This beat is messy in following tracks. Maybe not use reverse in 2 is a better choice. → i changed new rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1165468
01:04:861 - Add a note? A voice here is missing. → Fixed.
01:08:852 (5,6) - The vocal is more like → umm... not change. follow boom-boom- sound 01:13:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why the first 2 sets of vocals are sliders and the 3rd set is a triplet? A more balanced rhythm here is better. → change new pattern!
01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really not good rhythm here. Vocal is easy to follow. → change new pattern!
01:17:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Boring 1/2s... So sorry because you did followed drums but maybe vocal is a better choice because you followed vocal in previous part and the 2 part is better to be seen as a whole part. → change new pattern!
02:19:724 - Add a note. If you are not sure about this because the difficult you can make 02:19:036 (1,2) a slider. → add slider
02:20:825 (10) - change the slider in to the note here. → 02:21:513 ~ 02:25:366 - not follow vocal o.o
02:20:825 (10) - A triplet is suitable. And if you added triplet here, you may need to add here too 02:22:476 → 02:21:513 ~ 02:25:366 - this part, not follow vocal.
02:28:256 - Add a note to cover the vocal → Fixed.
02:30:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - My advice is following vocal here. → Fixed.
02:47:934 (1,2,3,4) - ^ → Fixed.
02:50:411 (4) - Also vocal is not well followed.. → Fixed.
04:04:999 (1,2,3) - Also a matter of track. I think vocal is better. 1 1/4 longer? → Fixed.
Placement
00:09:402 (1,2) - Not perfect blanket but ok. → :3
00:22:613 (3,4) - Bend 3 a bit will make it a better flow. → changed shape http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1165394
00:43:531 (3,4) - A sudden jump. → well.. i think it's good. (because this song-slow bpm. not hard)
00:53:990 (2,3) - ^, and flow is not so good. → i changed new rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1165468
01:06:650 (1) - The jump is really big. → Fixed.
01:06:650 (1,2) - Not good blanket. → Fixed.
01:09:265 (6,1) - ^→ where..? umm but i think it's okay.
01:42:705 (4) - Distance is really need to be controlled. → changed distance 1.5x.
01:46:558 (5,6,7) - ^ pay attention to the distance between stream. changed distance. - 01:47:659 (2,3,4)
03:47:109 (6,7) - Blanket is not good here. → maybe... no problem?..
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Thank you! ;) and i really busy now T.T

Finally fixed your mod.
terametis


Hi, from Quiz Modding team. sorry for late :(

Black = suggestion.  Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Hard]

Hitsound
  1. 00:59:219 (2) - This clap is intentional?
  2. 01:15:458 (1) - add clap to slider's start.
  3. 01:56:742 (8) - You put clap to slider's end, is it intentional?
  4. 02:24:815 (7) - maybe add clap to slider's start.
  5. 03:52:338 (2) - remove clap on slider's start.
  6. 04:11:742 (1) - maybe add finish
General
  1. 01:21:788 (x) - add note is more good for me.
  2. 01:22:063 (1) - I don't recommend this slider. I am not certain whether this is applicable to the Ranking Rule, but this slider point is very dangerous.
  3. 01:23:164 (2) - ^
  4. 01:24:402 (x) - maybe add spinner. You put it on [Normal].
  5. 02:54:540 (x) - KIAI pattern is incorrect. move to 02:54:265 or shift the others KIAI.
  6. 04:11:329 (1) - You put N:C1 sound 02:54:265 (1), but here is S:C1. You should be unified either.
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:412 (3) - add clap to slider's start and end.
  2. 00:33:623 (1) - (nazi). add silence soft-sliderslide3.
good luck<3
Topic Starter
Losertic

terametis wrote:



Hi, from Quiz Modding team. sorry for late :(

terametis's Modding
Black = suggestion.  Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Hard]

Hitsound
  1. 00:59:219 (2) - This clap is intentional? → remove clap.
  2. 01:15:458 (1) - add clap to slider's start. → Fixed.
  3. 01:56:742 (8) - You put clap to slider's end, is it intentional? → remove clap.
  4. 02:24:815 (7) - maybe add clap to slider's start. → Fixed.
  5. 03:52:338 (2) - remove clap on slider's start. → Fixed.
  6. 04:11:742 (1) - maybe add finish → Fixed.
General
  1. 01:21:788 (x) - add note is more good for me. → Fixed.
  2. 01:22:063 (1) - I don't recommend this slider. I am not certain whether this is applicable to the Ranking Rule, but this slider point is very dangerous.→ okay, change this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1251062
  3. 01:23:164 (2) - ^ → Fixed. ^
  4. 01:24:402 (x) - maybe add spinner. You put it on [Normal]. → Fixed. ^
  5. 02:54:540 (x) - KIAI pattern is incorrect. move to 02:54:265 or shift the others KIAI. → Fixed.
  6. 04:11:329 (1) - You put N:C1 sound 02:54:265 (1), but here is S:C1. You should be unified either. → ahh, set N:C1
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:412 (3) - add clap to slider's start and end. → Fixed.
  2. 00:33:623 (1) - (nazi). add silence soft-sliderslide3. → change this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1251090

good luck<3
Thank you! ;)
Feith
hai...hai..
I'm from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/ehta5q4qaxz4

what is changed :
- keep the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standadr monitor size
- little bit change of object timing and hitsound

that is all for me
hope this is useful to you

thank you for request ;)
Topic Starter
Losertic

Feith wrote:

hai...hai..
I'm from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/ehta5q4qaxz4

what is changed :
- keep the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standadr monitor size
- little bit change of object timing and hitsound

that is all for me
hope this is useful to you

thank you for request ;)

thanks mod, but i don't know change your mod

sry, non-fixed. next time write mod in this thread plz!
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