Chocoliti wrote:

Skalim wrote:

This link is not original sound voltex Max Burning!!'s pattern(Actually it's Reflec Beat), but check rhythm by using this video.(especially 01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104) http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21977659 I am not trying remap the diff, this map is made by me and asd123iii and i wanna get this ranked with my patterns suggerences

Sorry, I mean not pointing out your own pattern, notes' timing is wrong. Between 01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 all notes should be moved 1/4 earlier. (ex: In 6K BASIC Diff, First this LN should be end at 01:32:525 , 01:32:604 (92604|0) - this should be at 01:32:525 , 01:32:762 (92762|2) - this should be at 01:32:683 like this. Refer to my screen shots that I uploded and 3i's 4K NOVICE diff. asd123iii fixed that part.)

AceNic wrote:

Hi, nice mapper Skalim
I'm modding beginner(studying and practicing), so please see to a reference grade.

Rage!!:
00:06:000 (6000|5,6000|6,6000|1,6000|4) - timing feel little early i listen good the song
00:41:289 (41289|6) - timing feel early ^
01:00:631 (60631|6) - to which sound does it correspond? if you don't have intention, I recommend delete

It's my liking, so no problem even if it does not change.
01:11:052 (71052|5,71052|3) - change hold is not necessary, is the reason what i put a speed change here XD
01:12:000 BPMx1.50 - 01:11:052～01:12:157 change over BPMx2.0
01:54:156 (114156|4,114156|0,114157|6,114157|2) - change hold is very much used in every maps, i don´t wannaise these metod in this map, sorry ^^

Since the translation site was used in part, it may not be transmitted ;;
Do your best!! XD

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi, there are mods for your diffs except 4K diff, it's nice and easy to play already ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diff)
5K ADVANCED

Inside :3

00:02:999 (2999|2) - move to 3rd column, it's more suitable with your pattern here rather that repeating previous position

00:03:788 - add here note to 2nd column according to the sound, don't ignore it here, it'll be also good transition between your previous and next going patterns here

00:04:735 (4735|4) - move to 2nd column too, this triplet will be more playable, there's no need to place beginning if so far from next going note

00:13:905 - same suggestion like previous - add here note to 2nd column according to the beat sound which goes there

00:17:841 - add here one more note to 0 column according to the beat again, dong ignore this sound, it's clearly heard there

00:24:630 (24630|0) - move to 3rd column to place this chorus correctly here according to previous note, check that

00:31:578 - add here at least one note to accent the strong beat, it's suitable with SV here, don't be afraid of it

00:32:683 (32683|3) - this note should be here 00:32:762 - according to the music, check it with lower playback and you'll see

00:36:551 (36551|0,36551|4) - this chord should be here 00:36:472 according to the beat, listen closely to it here

00:49:420 (49420|1) - move to centre column or to 4th column here, it'll be better chord transition

01:15:235 - add here one more note to 1st column according to the music and perform triplet note

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 for 6K diffs)
6K BASIC

Inside :3

00:06:332 - I suggest you to make this map more accent-able, place at least one more note here to 3rd column for it or better add notes to 0 and 6th columns to accent this beat

00:11:367 - add here notes to 2nd and 3rd columns too or add at least one of them to accent this part too

00:29:683 (29683|3) - move it to 2nd column, it's more suitable transition between previous and next going patterns here

00:46:972 - add here one more note according to the beat here, it's missed now but clearly sounds there

00:55:972 (55972|3) - move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable to catch this note for your pattern here

01:02:209 - I suggest you to accent this break part too with adding chorus (0 and 6th column notes), there's not enough placing only LNs for it and it wouldn't be difficult here

01:23:367 - add here at least one single note according to the beat which goes there, don't leave this place empty (add to 3rd column I suggest) / repeat it here 01:25:893 and 01:28:420 here to, no need to leave these parts empty coz the beat is clearly sounds there this pause is a "prepare for LN practice" XD.

01:41:367 (101367|1) - move to 2nd column and perform smooth transition between your patterns there

6K EXHAUST

Inside :3

00:02:367 (2367|2) - move this note to 3rd column, it's more comfortable to play it here and more suitable with next going pattern

00:04:104 (4104|4) - there's no need to move this not so far from LN here, move it to 2nd column and you'll see that this pattern is more comfortable here

00:07:578 (7578|1) - I recommend you to "open" chord here and move this note to 0 column, there's some difference in play style after doing it, listen to the music here and you'll understand it

00:23:683 (23683|1,23841|2) - move these notes to 2nd and 3rd columns accordingly, it's better to place them here after chord which goes before them

00:29:378 - add here one more note to 4th column here to accent the beat, placing one note is not enough for EX

00:33:078 (33078|2) - delete this note, there's no suitable sound for placing it here

00:52:104 - add here one more note to 3rd column to make chord here according to the beat, one note isn't enough to accent it

01:24:156 (84156|4) - move this note to 3rd column again and "open" this chord and make comfortable chord transition here

01:29:999 (89999|3) - move to 1st column to make this note suitable with your next going stair pattern

Here 01:30:156 and here 01:30:314 - you can add more notes to 3rd and 4th columns accordingly and make double stair pattern, I think it'll be good there

01:34:656 (94656|2) - move this note to 1st column and perform comfortable transition between chords in this part

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K BASIC

Inside :3

00:05:999 (5999|5,5999|4) - I suggest you to remove one of these notes coz chord of 3 notes in a row looks hard for Basic diff

00:09:788 (9788|2,10104|0) - switch these notes and reverse them to 0 and 2nd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable to play here with your next going pattern

00:11:051 - you can add here one more note to 3rd column to accent beat sound here like you did it for next part here 00:11:367

00:28:420 (28420|6) - move this note to 4th or 5th column, don't place notes in triplets far from each other, it's really uncomfortable to play, move them closer

00:31:893 (31893|6) - move it to 5th column, to perform next going pattern correctly, you already have LN and next going single note in 6th column

00:34:578 (34578|0) - move to 5th column again to make stair pattern here, there's no suitable sound to place two notes in a row in this column

00:51:551 (51551|2) - there are already two holds and one single note so I suggest you to delete this note, it's hard for Basic diff

01:01:735 - add here one more note to 2nd column according to the sound and connect it with your previous pattern by doing that

01:23:130 (83130|5) and 01:23:446 (83446|3) - I suggest you to delete these notes, playing such triplets with holding LN is difficult for Basic

01:25:656 (85656|1,85972|3) - save suggestion ^ this diff don't look Basic with such patterns, they are hard for many beginners

Rage!!

Inside :3

It's hard to understand these patterns, but I see there some really overmapped places. Please, re-model chords in this diff, which include more than 5 notes in them. After it I recommend you to re-check jacks in this diff, no need to place so many jacks in it so try to re-arrange them without overmapping. After all, there's no need to overmap all sounds by placing two notes for each sound, you can make really hard diff without it, just cut some chords by 30% and re-arrange other notes, when you make this, you'll see that after it your diff will looks better and cleaner.

So many diffs. Nice mapset again \o/
Good luck :3/

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there. Here's my mod as requested.

[General]
- You must add hitsounds if you want this set ranked. This applies to all maps.

[6K BASIC]
00:01:578 Add normal note in 3rd column.
00:21:788 (21788|1) Move to 3rd column. At same time, add normal note in 4th column.
01:07:893 (67893|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:08:525 (68525|4) Move to 4th column.

Other than that, there's not much else I can suggest so here's a star.
Call me for recheck after applying my mod.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there. BAT check as requested.

I noticed that the volume for each difficulty is slightly inconsistent:
3i's 4K NOVICE - 85%
5K ADVANCED - 83% mostly
6K BASIC - 85%
6K EXHAUST - 73% mostly
7K BASIC - 82%
Rage!! - 72% mostly

I recommend that you should just set them all to 75% or 80%.

Skalim wrote:

The Rage!! is a special diff of the most played key of o!m (i guess), i thought what is not necessary, and i don´t wanna problems with the diff name now u_u

PROGUY wrote:

Rebubbled.

Roxas wrote:

I started to mod this, but I noticed that drum-hitnormal and drum-hitwhistle are the same. Why? Is this an error? :/

Roxas wrote:

Are you sure that one is more intense than the other? Even in audacity they're the same o.o

Roxas wrote:

Well it's useless to have 2 same hitsounds... They shouldn't be the same D:

Edit: Well, wait, I will say everything in my mod

IQ166 wrote:

3i's 4K NOVICE - 4Key

please, change small notes timing(?) between 01:45(?) ~ 01:47(?).
like bottom,

01:45:156 (105156|3)
01:45:314 (105314|2)
01:45:630 (105630|3)
01:45:788 (105788|1)
01:46:104 (106104|2)
01:46:262 (106262|3)
01:46:578 (106578|2)
01:46:735 (106735|1)
01:47:051 (107051|3)
01:47:209 (107209|2)
01:47:367 (107367|3)

and just test it with 50% speed.
you can feel it.

Roxas wrote:

I have to pop this bubble for timing issue.

Add those red lines:
Offset: 92604 - BPM: 190,00
Offset: 100104 - BPM: 190,00

YunoFanatic wrote:

Hi! here's a slap from me and shira.. thanks

Minor details. Lets go

[3i's 4k novice]
00:11:683 (11683|2) - why not open this chord? move this to the 4th column where you can open a chord and get better pattern.No
-00:21:472 (21472|1,21630|2,21788|3) - move them to 1 2 3 because the pattern for 00:21:235 (21235|2,21472|1) - isnt good enough though it makes the pattern balance with 00:21:235 (21235|2,21472|1,21788|3,22104|0) - ..Changed
-00:23:051 (23051|1) - move this note to 1 it makes sense repeating the pattern from a previous note which is usual for novice.Changed
-00:30:314 (30314|2) - move to 4 why is this place on 3 the pattern is so inconsistent because the note suddenly moved.Changed
-00:30:946 (30946|3) - here why not move this note to 1 take a look it makes more sense with 00:31:578 (31578|1,31578|0) - No
-00:42:314 should there be a new holder? this was a new sound i guess and it slides in the music which means its addable with an holderNo
-00:44:683 (44683|3) - move this to 1 because it can be much easy to press when the note is mush closer to the released note.No
-01:05:367 (65367|0) - this slider really needs to be starting at 01:05:525 which is the REAL starting of the new music.No
-01:18:946 (78946|0) - move to 2? it makes more sense because 01:19:262 (79262|2,79578|2) - which you used a double noting.No

Some minor details about pattern hope you fix it..

YunoFanatic wrote:

Hi! here's a slap from me and shira.. thanks

Minor details. Lets go

6K BASIC

-00:02:525 (2525|2,2525|5) - not really sure why you placed this note on 3rd and 6th column where you can actually move it on 2nd and 5th column which makes more sense for the pattern. Moved to column 4
-00:02:841 (2841|1) - this note should be moved to 5th column which you do in 00:02:841 (2841|1) - just to keep good pattern.
-00:06:946 (6946|4) - this note is destroying the pattern a little bit move it on 6th column because the main pattern here is 00:06:314 (6314|3,6630|2,6946|3,7262|2,7578|3) - ..
-00:07:578 (7578|1) - move this to 1 as what i stated above this is not the main pattern.
-00:07:893 (7893|4) - move this to 3 to continue the pattern if you broke the pattern.. you arent even creating a new one next.
-00:10:735 (10735|0) - move to 2nd i guess you already created an opening in this note 00:09:472 (9472|3,9472|1,10735|0) - so it should be really good. mirror effect created
-00:23:367 (23367|5,23367|3,23367|0) - why is this notes should be loud and be tripled? if you arent following the pattern if you do this. the music will be a bit unbalanced since you used triple now you gotta add moar triples. is a "specific emphasize" in the drum, you can see it in all the map
-00:44:683 (44683|2) - seriously move this to 5th really serious. ok, don´t kill me plz T.T
-00:52:104 (52104|3) - move this to 5th the pattern seems to be or tends to be a little bit awkward.
-01:22:420 (82420|2,82735|4) - exchange columns with this note. ive seen you done this 01:20:525 (80525|2,81156|4) - its a bit awkward if you unbalanced the pattern though

7K BASIC

-00:05:999 (5999|4,5999|1,6314|3,6314|0,6314|6) - this pattern a bit awkwards placing
-00:38:209 (38209|3) - move to 7th column which makes sense to continue a pattern fixed, but with other pattern
-00:51:314 (51314|4,51788|5) - exchange columns with this. it makes the pattern more good because you used holders and pattern it with 00:50:604 (50604|0,50841|5,51078|0) -
-00:52:104 (52104|4) - move to 3rd column it makes the pattern more comfortable though
-00:53:841 (53841|2) - move to 4th it should be because there's 2 reasons 00:53:841 (53841|2) - this notes possess stair pattern.
-00:53:367 you must add note here.. remember.. Press to make SOUND not Release. no
-01:29:999 (89999|1) - awkward placing for this note. move it to 4th column.. if your trying to follow this pattern 01:30:630 (90630|5,91262|1,91578|5) - you cant. if you are gonna follow that your gonna have to add slider beside this note 01:29:999 (89999|1) -
-01:31:893 (91893|3) - and then to make the pattern consistent. move this to 2nd

Some minor details about pattern hope you fix it..

Roxas wrote:

Fix timing (again)

1st offset: 1598ms - BPM: 190,00
2nd offset: 92604ms - BPM: 190,00
3rd offset: 100120ms - BPM: 190,00

Then, resnap all notes and adjust green lines

By the way, drum-hitnormal and drum-hitwhistle are still the same...

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