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moonlightleaf

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2013-12-08T09:28:02+00:00

M4M

mod技术比较水= =希望有用

Normal
00:10:096(1)滑条拉到白线，00:10:704加note 感觉比较顺

00:12:528(1)^

00:34:420(1)前端x|16 y|184

00:35:231 加note

01:09:690(1)(2) 对换

01:50:839(1)(2)^

02:20:028(2)(3)^

02:13:339(1)没包好结尾点右移一格

03:05:231这边开始做？后面突然起步好怪

03:16:987加note

03:49:014(1)q

04:08:474(2)这个不知道行不行开头结尾快连一块了（待思考

04:20:636(1)白线结束

04:21:447加note

结束好突然= =后面接着做，结束点和collab保持一致

Collab
00:10:704缺note

00:20:839(4)放1上

00:23:068(2)放这好坑= =

00:25:501(6)^

00:33:001加note

00:33:102(2)删

00:33:204(3)(4)(5)能接？都拉红线结尾 34对换

00:37:258(1)(2)(3)都拉红线结尾

00:50:231(3)(4)(5)^

00:35:028(4)删

00:36:244(4)^

00:36:447(4)换单note

01:02:798(3)(1)(2)(3)

SPOILER

01:42:123(9)Ctrl+G

01:52:866(4)和01:54:082(4) 删

02:02:595(4)和02:03:812(4) ^

01:57:528(1)这减速坑

02:11:717(2)结尾拉白线

02:32:393(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)做成六边形跳都比这个好些（坑

02:38:271(4)放(2)

02:46:379(3)删作为跳完的缓冲

02:47:595删

这段参考

SPOILER

02:52:866 (4) - 删

02:54:082 (4) - x|336 y|344

02:54:893和02:55:095加note

03:17:798这段滑条可以，前面的这种不行，距离太远

03:39:285加note？或者6号返折一次

03:49:825加note在5

03:53:474加note在x|432 y|192

04:00:771加note在04:00:974(1)

04:37:156加note和前面保持

04:40:501和04:40:906加note，都放屏幕中间好了

04:46:312(1)切1/6能选中这线，放04:46:379

04:46:683break放转盘吧到04:49:825结束后面转盘不要了

图过几天再丢link给你

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2013-12-08T15:35:53+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
M4M

mod技术比较水= =希望有用

Normal
00:10:096(1)滑条拉到白线，00:10:704加note 感觉比较顺我很认同但那样会让开头连着一大串没有段落感

00:12:528(1)^ ^

00:34:420(1)前端x|16 y|184 blanket

00:35:231 加note 跟的是vocal所以鼓点就空了

01:09:690(1)(2) 对换好

01:50:839(1)(2)^ 好

02:20:028(2)(3)^ done

02:13:339(1)没包好结尾点右移一格 done

03:05:231这边开始做？后面突然起步好怪给玩家多留点休息时间嘛其实是我懒

03:16:987加note done

03:49:014(1)q 跟vocal于是nc了

04:08:474(2)这个不知道行不行开头结尾快连一块了（待思考可以不开蛇形滑条能读

04:20:636(1)白线结束那样的话下一个note不好摆

04:21:447加note 尾声所以摆的疏松一点拉o.o

结束好突然= =后面接着做，结束点和collab保持一致因为nomal我主跟vocal所以后面就没有继续做拉其实是我懒

Collab
00:10:704缺note

00:20:839(4)放1上

00:23:068(2)放这好坑= =

00:25:501(6)^

00:33:001加note

00:33:102(2)删

00:33:204(3)(4)(5)能接？都拉红线结尾 34对换

00:37:258(1)(2)(3)都拉红线结尾

00:50:231(3)(4)(5)^

00:35:028(4)删

00:36:244(4)^

00:36:447(4)换单note

01:02:798(3)(1)(2)(3)
SPOILER

01:42:123(9)Ctrl+G

01:52:866(4)和01:54:082(4) 删

02:02:595(4)和02:03:812(4) ^

01:57:528(1)这减速坑

02:11:717(2)结尾拉白线

02:32:393(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)做成六边形跳都比这个好些（坑

02:38:271(4)放(2)

02:46:379(3)删作为跳完的缓冲

02:47:595删

这段参考
SPOILER

02:52:866 (4) - 删

02:54:082 (4) - x|336 y|344

02:54:893和02:55:095加note

03:17:798这段滑条可以，前面的这种不行，距离太远

03:39:285加note？或者6号返折一次 vocal结束接breaktime比较有感觉o.o

03:49:825加note在5 flow不好

03:53:474加note在x|432 y|192 加上了但感觉flow不太好

04:00:771加note在04:00:974(1) 04:00:771这里声还没出所以空了

04:37:156加note和前面保持避免重复挖

04:40:501和04:40:906加note，都放屏幕中间好了加了和下一个notestack了

04:46:312(1)切1/6能选中这线，放04:46:379 不对哦~

04:46:683break放转盘吧到04:49:825结束后面转盘不要了后面有一段音而且我偶像也是这样做的(?

图过几天再丢link给你猴

感谢你的mod

正好最近有点忙你图弄好了链接发给我吧pmQQ都可以

(这就让他们来看mod

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-08T15:43:46+00:00

我的part就一条mod 蛋疼
no fix

Emperor_old_1

Emperor_old_1 2013-12-08T19:18:10+00:00

建议添加hard难度和easy的.歌曲算慢节奏的感觉可以加2个难度.collab难度有点怪。因为没作图不知道哪里奇怪......normal的话感觉不错,节奏抓的都很好~

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Ikaros_F 2013-12-12T09:11:26+00:00

Hello, ZZ

[Collab]
00:14:960 (1,2,3,4) - 我改变了下flow。→ http://puu.sh/5K9b4
00:28:947 (7,8,9) - 我觉得把它们变成正三角会不会好看一点，虽然我打的时候没有刻意注意这个._.
01:08:474 (1) - 01:09:690 (1) - 不如尝试不要减速而是在红线的时候回转的滑条
01:18:204 (1) - 01:19:420 (1) - ↑
01:44:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change flow → http://puu.sh/5K9Bb
02:08:068 (3) - 不知道需不需要加个NC呢？因为变速
02:09:285 (1) - 做成在白线的回转滑条比较好吧。
03:55:095 (3) - 往左下放一点对着2的方向比较爽
04:08:474 (1) - 个人感觉不好看._.
04:24:690 (4) - 变速了要不要加NC呢

[Normal]
00:29:555 (1,2,3) - 对新手来说会不会有点难了呢
01:06:852 (1,2,3,4,1) - ↑
你normal可能有点难，有些新手要是加个DT的话就是210+的
还有跟着鼓点走会好一点，让图保持连贯

这摸这样了._.汪汪汪

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-12T10:07:01+00:00

Ikaros_F wrote:
Hello, ZZ

[Collab]
01:08:474 (1) - 01:09:690 (1) - 不如尝试不要减速而是在红线的时候回转的滑条图能搞出特点是很爽的号码
01:18:204 (1) - 01:19:420 (1) - ↑ ^
01:44:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change flow → http://puu.sh/5K9Bb 其实这里没想搞星星只是看没地方放了正好有个地方可以放个歪的星星然后（

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2013-12-12T19:33:25+00:00

Ikaros_F wrote:
Hello, ZZ

[Collab]
02:08:068 (3) - 不知道需不需要加个NC呢？因为变速我给他加一个希望他不打我

03:55:095 (3) - 往左下放一点对着2的方向比较爽对着2看上去美观一些但是flow会差一点(个人看法
04:08:474 (1) - 个人感觉不好看._.打的爽o.o
04:24:690 (4) - 变速了要不要加NC呢要;w;

[Normal]
00:29:555 (1,2,3) - 对新手来说会不会有点难了呢你书的对删了3
01:06:852 (1,2,3,4,1) - ↑ 因为是kiai所以就没动了o.o
你normal可能有点难，有些新手要是加个DT的话就是210+的
还有跟着鼓点走会好一点，让图保持连贯感觉vocal更容易跟QAQ

这摸这样了._.汪汪汪

感谢

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2013-12-12T19:34:55+00:00

Emperor wrote:
建议添加hard难度和easy的.歌曲算慢节奏的感觉可以加2个难度.collab难度有点怪。因为没作图不知道哪里奇怪......normal的话感觉不错,节奏抓的都很好~
hard难度委托别人制作中哦;w;

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-12-17T12:18:29+00:00

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Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-17T15:36:40+00:00

hitsound
你千万记得先把我那部分的绿线全部删掉啊不然到时候check很麻烦的

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Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-12-18T16:36:57+00:00

[Collab]
00:20:636 (3) - 這種改變了DS的地方最好NC一下
00:23:068 (2) - 同上不過這個可以放近 3 , 例如x160 y200附近
00:33:102 (2) - 移前到紅線?
00:33:204 (3) - 感覺不太合適另外我覺得要nc
00:42:123 (2,5) - overlap了 , 5移左一點點
00:50:231 (3,4,5) -
01:23:068 - 感覺能一個slider帶過後面整個空位
01:32:798 (1,3) - 放開點跟1,2的距離一樣就行了
01:36:041 (1) - blanket好
01:39:285 (4,5) - 現在這樣放有點醜但我想不到解決方法x(
01:40:095 (1) - finish? if yes ,後面還有差不多相同的地方
01:42:123 (9) - blanket好6
01:46:785 (2) - x160 y136
01:47:393 - 為啥突然變大聲
02:11:717 (2) - 這個早了完吧..
02:56:717 (1) - 想吐糟最後的錨點
03:01:582 (2) - nc
03:31:177 (2) - ^
03:46:582 (4) - ^
這裡主要是變速slider的NC
04:44:960 - 建議把vol.調到20
04:46:312 (1) - ctrl+h也好不建議放同一個位置啊

我最主要想吐糟有關DS方面

[Normal]
00:11:312 (1,2) - 這裡排得好醜
00:18:609 (4) - 未blanket好
00:19:825 (1) - 把尾蓋在3下面吧
00:23:271 (2) - 建議在後面的大白線開始
00:27:933 (2) - blanket
00:45:771 (2) - ^
00:47:798 (1) - ^
00:55:095 (2,1) - 不想再提了..
01:01:177 - 放點東西代替break吧
01:08:474 (7) - 太長了建議這裡nc
01:54:690 (1) - 用跟01:53:474 (1) - 同款的slider吧
02:11:717 (3) - 錨點們你們調皮了嗎?
02:21:447 (4) - NC吧
02:29:150 - 同之前的Break
02:34:825 (8) - NC
02:50:636 (3) - 錨點們在調皮的話我會使出柚子攻擊的說 >O<
02:53:068 (3) - overlap了...
03:34:420 (5) - NC
03:50:028 (2) - 拆開兩個1/2比較好

感覺NM糟點加多多下點功夫

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2013-12-19T08:53:22+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Collab]
03:31:177 (2) - ^done
03:46:582 (4) - ^done
這裡主要是變速slider的NC
04:44:960 - 建議把vol.調到20 调到了30后面一个调到了20
04:46:312 (1) - ctrl+h也好不建議放同一個位置啊这个是有意的因为不知道摆哪里好 ctrl+h的话有可能会使后一个折返箭头被遮住o.o

我最主要想吐糟有關DS方面

[Normal]
00:11:312 (1,2) - 這裡排得好醜flow说的过去就没改惹orz
00:18:609 (4) - 未blanket好调了
00:19:825 (1) - 把尾蓋在3下面吧猴
00:23:271 (2) - 建議在後面的大白線開始不猴这里跟了vocal
00:27:933 (2) - blanketdone
00:45:771 (2) - ^done
00:47:798 (1) - ^done
00:55:095 (2,1) - 不想再提了..我真是zz
01:01:177 - 放點東西代替break吧不猴正好转盘接break休息一下多开心o.o
01:08:474 (7) - 太長了建議這裡ncdone
01:54:690 (1) - 用跟01:53:474 (1) - 同款的slider吧猴
02:11:717 (3) - 錨點們你們調皮了嗎?QAQQQQ
02:21:447 (4) - NC吧done
02:29:150 - 同之前的Break我懒
02:34:825 (8) - NCdone
02:50:636 (3) - 錨點們在調皮的話我會使出柚子攻擊的說 >O<殴打柚子`_>`
02:53:068 (3) - overlap了...感觉没太大影响o.o
03:34:420 (5) - NCdone
03:50:028 (2) - 拆開兩個1/2比較好done

感覺NM糟點加多多下點功夫

感谢柚子~~(吃柚子~~

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2013-12-21T12:23:00+00:00

from ur req

Collab Insane

我强烈建议整个diff的音效下的有整体性一些，即使各有各的音效风格可能也是一种有趣的想法，不过现在从结果看来效果不是很好。
00:16:582 (6) - 丧心病狂的出界，unrankble
00:39:690 (2,3,4,1) - 这边同ds不同ts的话我的建议是要用nc提醒一下，比如这里可以1的nc提前到4，或者改成像00:44:960 (3,1,2) - 一样，不然确实有点confusing
01:35:231 (1) - 这个也出界了unrankble
01:37:258 (1) - 不明白这里为什么要静音，而且打击音效静音是unrankble的，与此同时，绿线的音量最好不要低于20%。就正常的放个折返嘛，从第一次折返开始把音量调小一点就好。
01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 前面看了下都是各旋转120度对称的，这里稍微调整一下也做好看点？
01:47:393 (1,2) - 这两个note被放在了100%音效那边了，再树个路线吧
01:51:041 (2) - 这个滑条whistle是啥意思，这个音效下的有点超出理解范围了0.0
01:50:231 (1) - 身子向左凸更顺手点
02:10:501 (1,2) - 1的nc移动到2上
02:11:717 (2) - 滑条蓝线结尾是闹哪样。。。
03:12:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这。。。感觉可以换个更有趣点的梗
03:19:825 这里感觉还是要加个note，或者直接让03:19:420 (6) - 在这里结尾，转盘头可没音效
03:38:879 (6) - 变速加nc
03:50:028 (6) - nc，并且这个note后面跟着的三连和之前靠的实在太近了，可以换个位置
03:54:690 (2) - 这个ctrl+j一下会不会好一点？
03:57:933 (2) - 变速加nc，可能还有些我没看到，都注意一下
04:32:798 (1) - 从这里开始一直到结尾，音效音量柑橘都有点太响了
作为开了同一个坑的人我必须表示自己无法很客观地摸这个图，毕竟我跟你们做的完全不一样，只能尽量摒弃一些主观感受给你们提些意见，希望有所帮助。
（硬要说的话我觉得awaken做的部分更好一些233

Normal

全图nc我建议：combo count控制在6左右，别太长了，具体自己从头到尾过一遍吧
00:14:960 (1,2) - blanket perfect，好多，想改就改吧，不改也不是大问题就是了（低难度还是多注意一下美观比较好
00:51:447 (1,1) - 这个ds变得有点太多了，在normal里不推荐这么摆
04:27:123 (2,3) - 同上，类似的还有一些，normal的话一般直接锁ds摆东西就好
02:55:501 这个beat为什么不摆东西呢。。。
呃，跟vocal跟的太凶啦，好多鼓点都漏了orz

噗，开了同样的坑再去摸对方的感觉怪怪的，本来不应该是你撞死我我撞死你什么的么orz

good luck

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2013-12-21T14:10:06+00:00

mod太多就不分条回复了

总之改了一些谢谢了

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ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2013-12-21T15:13:11+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
from ur req
Collab Insane
我强烈建议整个diff的音效下的有整体性一些，即使各有各的音效风格可能也是一种有趣的想法，不过现在从结果看来效果不是很好。~~不得不说不是有意的orz 肥皂也一直懒得来加~~
03:38:879 (6) - 变速加ncdone
03:50:028 (6) - nc，并且这个note后面跟着的三连和之前靠的实在太近了，可以换个位置移了下
03:54:690 (2) - 这个ctrl+j一下会不会好一点？done
03:57:933 (2) - 变速加nc，可能还有些我没看到，都注意一下check了一遍都改了
04:32:798 (1) - 从这里开始一直到结尾，音效音量柑橘都有点太响了降了15%
作为开了同一个坑的人我必须表示自己无法很客观地摸这个图，毕竟我跟你们做的完全不一样，只能尽量摒弃一些主观感受给你们提些意见，希望有所帮助。你的ex屌飞起
（硬要说的话我觉得awaken做的部分更好一些233怎么都这么说不服百恶俗可是有rank图的神马破
Normal
全图nc我建议：combo count控制在6左右，别太长了，具体自己从头到尾过一遍吧remap后没注意都改了
00:14:960 (1,2) - blanket perfect，好多，想改就改吧，不改也不是大问题就是了（低难度还是多注意一下美观比较好我懒orz
00:51:447 (1,1) - 这个ds变得有点太多了，在normal里不推荐这么摆改了
04:27:123 (2,3) - 同上，类似的还有一些，normal的话一般直接锁ds摆东西就好猴
02:55:501 这个beat为什么不摆东西呢。。。改了之后感觉违和然后又改回去了orz
呃，跟vocal跟的太凶啦，好多鼓点都漏了orz大概是半年前曾经跟一段vocal跟一段鼓点被喷过留下心理阴影所以决心跟vocal就跟到底.-.
噗，开了同样的坑再去摸对方的感觉怪怪的，本来不应该是你撞死我我撞死你什么的么orz ~~相爱相杀(?~~

good luck

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-21T15:45:08+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Collab]
01:23:068 - 感覺能一個slider帶過後面整個空位 fixed
01:32:798 (1,3) - 放開點跟1,2的距離一樣就行了没明白;w;
01:36:041 (1) - blanket好 fixed
01:39:285 (4,5) - 現在這樣放有點醜但我想不到解決方法x( sad

Hollow Wings wrote:

01:35:231 (1) - 这个也出界了unrankble fixed
01:37:258 (1) - 不明白这里为什么要静音，而且打击音效静音是unrankble的，与此同时，绿线的音量最好不要低于20%。就正常的放个折返嘛，从第一次折返开始把音量调小一点就好。这里我本来是不想让音量太大吵看来过头了两边绿线删掉了
01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 前面看了下都是各旋转120度对称的，这里稍微调整一下也做好看点？其实这里我也是120 只是不知道为什么这么丑;w;

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165,143,97663,1,4,0:0:0:0:
302,172,97866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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302,172,98677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,144,98879,2,0,P|412:132|447:131,1,70
390,290,99285,2,0,P|373:260|367:226,1,70
492,198,99690,2,0,P|485:232|468:262,1,70
321,341,100095,5,0,0:0:0:0:
243,224,100298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,345,100501,2,0,P|99:336|57:283,1,140
50,217,101109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,90,101312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,269,101514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,110,101717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,201,101920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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226,201,102731,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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443,252,105366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,306,105568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,170,105771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,325,105974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,204,106177,6,0,B|282:174|234:249|175:191,1,140
159,144,106785,1,0,3:3:0:0:
186,281,106987,1,0,3:3:0:0:

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-12-22T10:04:06+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

Tags suggetion:
劇場版魔法少女まどか☆マギカ [新編] 叛逆の物語
ending

[Normal]

For Normal diff, it is better to conform DS as far as possible.
for Example, 00:11:717 (2,1,2,3,1,2) - is not good
00:16:177 (2) - end at 00:16:987
00:23:271 (2,3) - I prefer the same pattern as 00:20:839 (2,3,4) -
00:30:771 (1) - remove NC
00:33:001 (1) - ^ instead, add NC at 00:36:852 (2) -
00:38:068 (1) - remove NC
00:39:285 (2) - ^
00:38:068 (1,2) - how about making symmetric?
00:47:798 (1) - remove NC
00:56:312 (1) - end at 00:57:123
01:06:041 (5) - end at 01:06:852
01:14:352 (1) - remove NC
01:26:717 (1) - ^
01:48:406 (1) - ^ instead, add NC at 01:49:825 (3)
01:55:906 (1) - remove NC. instead add NC at 01:57:123
02:00:568 (1) - remove NC. instead, add NC at 02:01:987 (3) -
02:03:204 (1,2,3) - it's difficult to use many triplet like this. it is better to change into the pattern like 02:01:987 (3,4) -
02:06:649 (1) - move to 02:06:447
02:10:298 (1) - remove NC. instead, add NC at 02:11:717
02:13:339 (1) - ^ at 02:14:150 (2) -
02:15:366 (1) - remove NC
02:21:447 (1,2) - avoid overlap
02:36:041 (3) - NC?
03:37:663 (2,4) - avoid overlap
04:03:204 (1) - how about stack on the end of 04:01:582 (3) - ?
04:19:420 (3,1) - DS is too large
04:24:082 (1) - move NC to 04:23:068 (3) -
04:25:095 (1) - ^ to 04:25:906 (2) -
04:26:717 (1) - ^ to 04:27:933 (3) -
04:30:366 (1) - remove NC

[Collab Insane]
yf_bmp

00:24:690 (4) - how about curveing and blanket?
SPOILER
00:56:312 (1,2) - I prefer to make symmetric pattern to 00:57:528 (3,4) -
01:01:987 (3) - it is better to be toward not 01:02:595 (2) - but 01:02:393 (1) -

Awaken

01:41:109 (4,5,6,7,8) - how about symmetric star?

SPOILER

56,203,101109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,101,101312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,264,101514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,103,101717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,201,101920,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:42:933 (2,3) - too close

S o a p

01:49:420 (4) - move to x:269 y:60 (stack correctly)
02:06:244 (2,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G
02:11:717 (2) - end at 02:12:528

02:23:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - it looks awkward. how about this?

SPOILER

296,224,143879,5,4,3:0:0:0:
320,113,144082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,147,144285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,147,144487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,36,144690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,190,144893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,258,145095,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,281,145501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,327,145906,1,4,3:0:0:0:

615915887

02:49:014 (3) - move to x:471 y:231
02:49:217 (4) - move to x:229 y:121
02:50:636 (1) - I prefer the same shape slider as 02:51:852 (3) -

ZZHBOY

too many NC. I recommend to decrease
04:00:771- add a note
04:06:041 (1) - I prefer this
04:09:690 (2) - move to x:167 y:199
04:13:339 (1) - it is better to add a note at this time

many member's collab~
You seem to be having fun

~Good Luck~

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2013-12-23T18:23:46+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
Tags suggetion:
劇場版魔法少女まどか☆マギカ [新編] 叛逆の物語
ending
[Normal]
For Normal diff, it is better to conform DS as far as possible.
for Example, 00:11:717 (2,1,2,3,1,2) - is not goodthat's right, fixed
00:16:177 (2) - end at 00:16:987not good, this way may follow the music better o.o
00:23:271 (2,3) - I prefer the same pattern as 00:20:839 (2,3,4) - done
00:30:771 (1) - remove NC done
00:33:001 (1) - ^ instead, add NC at 00:36:852 (2) - done
00:38:068 (1) - remove NCdone
00:39:285 (2) - ^done
00:38:068 (1,2) - how about making symmetric?changed but may not perfectly
00:47:798 (1) - remove NCdone
00:56:312 (1) - end at 00:57:123nope, the same as before
01:06:041 (5) - end at 01:06:852^
01:14:352 (1) - remove NCdone
01:26:717 (1) - ^done
01:48:406 (1) - ^ instead, add NC at 01:49:825 (3) done
01:55:906 (1) - remove NC. instead add NC at 01:57:123done
02:00:568 (1) - remove NC. instead, add NC at 02:01:987 (3) - done
02:03:204 (1,2,3) - it's difficult to use many triplet like this. it is better to change into the pattern like 02:01:987 (3,4) -done
02:06:649 (1) - move to 02:06:447changed
02:10:298 (1) - remove NC. instead, add NC at 02:11:717done
02:13:339 (1) - ^ at 02:14:150 (2) - done
02:15:366 (1) - remove NCdone
02:21:447 (1,2) - avoid overlapi konw it's not goood but i prefer to keep it blanketed
02:36:041 (3) - NC?done
03:37:663 (2,4) - avoid overlapfixed
04:03:204 (1) - how about stack on the end of 04:01:582 (3) - ?done
04:19:420 (3,1) - DS is too largefixed
04:24:082 (1) - move NC to 04:23:068 (3) - done
04:25:095 (1) - ^ to 04:25:906 (2) - done
04:26:717 (1) - ^ to 04:27:933 (3) - done
04:30:366 (1) - remove NCdone
[Collab Insane]
ZZHBOY
too many NC. I recommend to decrease
04:00:771- add a notedone
04:06:041 (1) - I prefer this done
04:09:690 (2) - move to x:167 y:199 stacked
04:13:339 (1) - it is better to add a note at this timedone
many member's collab~
You seem to be having fun it's right but it's hard to do well
~Good Luck~

thank you for your mod especially about NC

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

S o a p 2013-12-25T10:11:53+00:00

感谢智障boy帮我加音效和改图！！

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2013-12-25T10:12:49+00:00

S o a p wrote:
感谢智障boy帮我加音效和改图！！

打死懒皂

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2013-12-25T10:40:11+00:00

Hi,紙張波,In-game PM req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

soft-sliderslide的音效沒有運用到阿，你這邊是S，你要調S:C1才會讓滑條聲無聲，現在還是有聲的。

[Normal]

1.同猴王所說跟人聲跟太多，希望再考慮下。
2.02:57:123 的綠線可刪掉，因為音量是一樣的，如果不想刪的話就減低音量。
3.另外有些部分可以+whistle音效，加大白線試試。
4.有些甚至差個0.10x間距，建議是一致。

00:14:960 (1) - 這個間距不一樣呢
00:16:177 (2) - 這個也是
00:20:839 (2) - 不知為何大白線放在滑條尾有點不順的感覺。(1點到2蠻難以判定。) 覺得00:20:636 這個要加一個note還比較好點。
00:23:271 (2) - 感覺前面漏了一個note
00:27:123 (1) - 間距
00:29:555 (1) - ^
00:34:420 (1,1) - 這兩個空隙加個note，點的比較舒服些。
00:44:150 (1) - 間距
01:08:879 (3) - 感覺換個長條比較適合音樂。
01:11:717 (2) - 這可以複製1的怎不兩個一樣? 兩個一樣比較好看
01:14:555 (3) - 既然是跟人聲，那這邊紅線怎麼沒跟到?
01:18:204 (3) - Blanket (2) 滑條頭。
01:22:663 (2) - 大白線忘了finish?
02:05:636 (3) - 間距
02:36:041 (1) - Blanket，尾端白線試試?
02:45:771 (1) - 不要折返，用1/1的滑條試試。
02:50:636 (3) - 開頭finish
03:13:744 (3) - 間距
03:19:420 (3) - 換成1/1滑條還比較好點。
03:34:420 (1) - 滑條頭finish
03:38:068 (3) - 看看要不要考慮用1/1滑條。
03:50:028 (2,3) - 往後一格，前面白線加note。
03:53:879 (1,2) - 不太好看的堆疊。
03:51:852 (4,3) - 兩個明顯不一樣，怎不複製?
04:01:379 (2) - 刪掉，然後04:00:974 (1) 往後一格，前面紅線+個note。
04:20:636 (1) - Blanket.
04:21:852 (2) - 間距
04:23:068 (1) - 滑條頭finish
04:27:933 (1) - ^
04:29:555 (4,5,6) - 還是分開間距放吧?
04:32:798 (5) - 不如加個note +whistle 做個結束?

[Collab Insane]

00:19:217 (2,3) - Drum的音效聽起來有點突兀，個人意見。
00:26:717 (6) - 照這樣節奏聽下去這邊不加whistle感覺怪怪。
00:29:150 (8) - ^
00:39:690 (2) - 你這邊1234間距都一樣了有點難讀，所以建議說2移到(268|152)左右位置做個antijump，這樣比較好讀。
00:45:568 (2) - 感覺疊在3滑條頭比較好讀和順。
00:48:609 (8) - 怎不移到(240|128)，原來位置也太遠了吧?
00:53:474 (3) - 可以複製1的來對稱
01:03:406 (6) - (360|20)試試。
01:23:068 (1) - 忘了finish?
01:25:095 (3,4,5) - 3個擺的間距怎不一樣，建議一樣比較好看。
01:29:960 (3) - ^
01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 微調一下:

SPOILER

01:41:312 (5,6) - 建議用5邊形作，另外6也沒blanket到。
01:44:960 (1,3,4,5,6) - 試著五邊形，356放遠點也比較好點擊。
01:48:609 (1) - 因為前面變速這邊NC。
01:55:906 (5) - (336|170)，三角+Blanket。
02:38:068 (3) - 這樣折返點有點太遠，建議說移到(486|247)試試。
02:49:420 (1) - 4點到1有點扭，所以推薦用ctrl+g這樣就順了。
02:50:231 (2) - 如用上面這也用ctrl+g加開間距。
02:53:474 (2) - Ctrl+g?
03:09:893 (5) - 覺得這邊可以刪掉note，因為沒有節奏在這裡。
03:48:204 (7) - 推薦(306|318)比較順。
03:54:487 (1) - (371|240)。
03:55:906 (1) - 跟前面疊起來吧
04:19:217 (4) - 試著test看看，有可能會被誤認成連打，還是放開點間距好了。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2013-12-25T11:07:50+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
02:56:717 (1) - 想吐糟最後的錨點去惹
03:01:582 (2) - nc 这样前一个slider只有一个惹

Hollow Wings wrote:
03:12:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这。。。感觉可以换个更有趣点的梗想不出来惹TAT
03:19:825 这里感觉还是要加个note，或者直接让03:19:420 (6) - 在这里结尾，转盘头可没音效猴

RandomEffect wrote:
615915887
02:49:014 (3) - move to x:471 y:231 fixed
02:49:217 (4) - move to x:229 y:121 fixed
02:50:636 (1) - I prefer the same shape slider as 02:51:852 (3) - I think this is okay

smallboat wrote:
02:49:420 (1) - 4點到1有點扭，所以推薦用ctrl+g這樣就順了。稍稍移了下
02:50:231 (2) - 如用上面這也用ctrl+g加開間距。有道理
02:53:474 (2) - Ctrl+g? 挺顺的没必要
03:09:893 (5) - 覺得這邊可以刪掉note，因為沒有節奏在這裡。好

thx for your mods~

@zzh

绿线没改动~~除了你改的那个~~

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ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2013-12-26T08:17:33+00:00

[quote="smallboat"]Hi,紙張波,In-game PM req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

soft-sliderslide的音效沒有運用到阿，你這邊是S，你要調S:C1才會讓滑條聲無聲，現在還是有聲的。

[Normal]

1.同猴王所說跟人聲跟太多，希望再考慮下。
2.02:57:123 的綠線可刪掉，因為音量是一樣的，如果不想刪的話就減低音量。
3.另外有些部分可以+whistle音效，加大白線試試。
4.有些甚至差個0.10x間距，建議是一致。

00:14:960 (1) - 這個間距不一樣呢
00:16:177 (2) - 這個也是
00:20:839 (2) - 不知為何大白線放在滑條尾有點不順的感覺。(1點到2蠻難以判定。) 覺得00:20:636 這個要加一個note還比較好點。
00:23:271 (2) - 感覺前面漏了一個note
00:27:123 (1) - 間距
00:29:555 (1) - ^
00:34:420 (1,1) - 這兩個空隙加個note，點的比較舒服些。
00:44:150 (1) - 間距
01:08:879 (3) - 感覺換個長條比較適合音樂。
01:11:717 (2) - 這可以複製1的怎不兩個一樣? 兩個一樣比較好看
01:14:555 (3) - 既然是跟人聲，那這邊紅線怎麼沒跟到?
01:18:204 (3) - Blanket (2) 滑條頭。
01:22:663 (2) - 大白線忘了finish?
02:05:636 (3) - 間距
02:36:041 (1) - Blanket，尾端白線試試?
02:45:771 (1) - 不要折返，用1/1的滑條試試。
02:50:636 (3) - 開頭finish
03:13:744 (3) - 間距
03:19:420 (3) - 換成1/1滑條還比較好點。
03:34:420 (1) - 滑條頭finish
03:38:068 (3) - 看看要不要考慮用1/1滑條。
03:50:028 (2,3) - 往後一格，前面白線加note。
03:53:879 (1,2) - 不太好看的堆疊。
03:51:852 (4,3) - 兩個明顯不一樣，怎不複製?
04:01:379 (2) - 刪掉，然後04:00:974 (1) 往後一格，前面紅線+個note。
04:20:636 (1) - Blanket.
04:21:852 (2) - 間距
04:23:068 (1) - 滑條頭finish
04:27:933 (1) - ^
04:29:555 (4,5,6) - 還是分開間距放吧?
04:32:798 (5) - 不如加個note +whistle 做個結束?
Normal难度的间距、blanket问题和蓝字部分都改了
[Collab Insane]

00:19:217 (2,3) - Drum的音效聽起來有點突兀，個人意見。
00:26:717 (6) - 照這樣節奏聽下去這邊不加whistle感覺怪怪。
00:29:150 (8) - ^
00:39:690 (2) - 你這邊1234間距都一樣了有點難讀，所以建議說2移到(268|152)左右位置做個antijump，這樣比較好讀。
00:45:568 (2) - 感覺疊在3滑條頭比較好讀和順。
00:48:609 (8) - 怎不移到(240|128)，原來位置也太遠了吧?
00:53:474 (3) - 可以複製1的來對稱
01:03:406 (6) - (360|20)試試。
01:23:068 (1) - 忘了finish?
01:25:095 (3,4,5) - 3個擺的間距怎不一樣，建議一樣比較好看。
01:29:960 (3) - ^
01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 微調一下:

SPOILER

01:41:312 (5,6) - 建議用5邊形作，另外6也沒blanket到。
01:44:960 (1,3,4,5,6) - 試著五邊形，356放遠點也比較好點擊。
01:48:609 (1) - 因為前面變速這邊NC。
01:55:906 (5) - (336|170)，三角+Blanket。
02:38:068 (3) - 這樣折返點有點太遠，建議說移到(486|247)試試。
02:49:420 (1) - 4點到1有點扭，所以推薦用ctrl+g這樣就順了。
02:50:231 (2) - 如用上面這也用ctrl+g加開間距。
02:53:474 (2) - Ctrl+g?
03:09:893 (5) - 覺得這邊可以刪掉note，因為沒有節奏在這裡。
03:48:204 (7) - 推薦(306|318)比較順。
03:54:487 (1) - (371|240)。这一部分排列重改了一下
03:55:906 (1) - 跟前面疊起來吧done
04:19:217 (4) - 試著test看看，有可能會被誤認成連打，還是放開點間距好了。有意放的没改

感谢小船的mod~

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-27T17:31:57+00:00

smallboat wrote:
01:25:095 (3,4,5) - 3個擺的間距怎不一樣，建議一樣比較好看。 k
01:29:960 (3) - ^ k
01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 微調一下:
SPOILER
k
01:41:312 (5,6) - 建議用5邊形作，另外6也沒blanket到。 k
01:44:960 (1,3,4,5,6) - 試著五邊形，356放遠點也比較好點擊。 nope,我这里本来是想随机乱跳一下的

SPOILER

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Nunnally Lamperouge

97 posts

Joined July 2012

Nunnally Lamperouge 2013-12-28T03:53:23+00:00

渣MOD，仅供参考
以下仅仅是建议
先说一下总体印象···这滑条断尾出100简直是····还有就是滑条速度拉慢的有点多···
最后就是··这DS···HD必定跪
00:35:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议↓

IMG

因为是开头，所以稍微简单点，和前面蓝色的5个点音一样比较好
00:51:447 (1,2) - 拉开一点吧，还有些其他的也是。还有就是我有点不明白2压蓝线的意义···就好像是为了压蓝线而压蓝线
00:53:474 (3,1) - 有点坑···建议00:53:879 (1,2,3) - 与00:55:095 (1,2,3) - 互调··虽然不换也行··比较我这里没断←只是建议
01:08:474 (1,1,1,1) - 滑条过分慢，还有其他的也是。
01:27:933 (1,3) - 重新包一下吧←好吧，我承认我有强迫症···
01:47:798 (1) - soap啊··真的不要拉这么慢啊···坑死了·····其他也是，除去滑条我觉得soap这部分最舒服···
02:33:406 (6) - 拉到2下面一点
02:33:609 (1) - 拉慢，否则太难看
02:38:271 (4) - 去掉吧
02:44:555 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好吧，我被坑了···但是我连上惹！
02:48:001 (6) - 去掉吧
03:14:960 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 赞！
04:25:704 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 红蓝拉开点吧

总体蛮不错的，加油！

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-28T14:30:27+00:00

Nunnally Lamperouge wrote:
01:08:474 (1,1,1,1) - 滑条过分慢，还有其他的也是。不要不服
01:27:933 (1,3) - 重新包一下吧←好吧，我承认我有强迫症··· 包的还不够好嘛;w;

thx for mod

Nunnally Lamperouge

97 posts

Joined July 2012

Nunnally Lamperouge 2013-12-30T12:16:47+00:00

Awaken wrote:
Nunnally Lamperouge wrote:
01:08:474 (1,1,1,1) - 滑条过分慢，还有其他的也是。不要不服
01:27:933 (1,3) - 重新包一下吧←好吧，我承认我有强迫症··· 包的还不够好嘛;w;
thx for mod

不要不服笑尿

Kinomi

1,218 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-01-04T14:03:24+00:00

General
乱NC

Collab Insane
00:28:339 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个我感觉渐变的不太好，6 7 8 9组个四方看起来还好一点
01:43:541 (3) - 怎么挤那么近
01:59:555 (1) - 空拍间距看上去和前面的1/2太接近了，用眼睛看，不是右上角的数字
02:11:717 (1) - 这变速段的NC很乱，影响读变速
02:25:704 漏音
02:30:974 ^
02:50:028 ^
02:54:893 ^
02:34:217 ^ 被长滑条盖掉了，拆出来
03:01:177 ^
02:47:595 (4) - NC，这样前面三个，后面三个各组成一组
02:53:068 变速段NC还是乱好好排一下
03:12:933 (2,3,4,5,6) - 中间有漏音，要压这种鼓点用滑条就行
03:11:920 (4) - 可以换成三连或者一个repeat
03:17:190 漏音
03:18:812 放了3/4结果有个比较响的鼓点刚好在前面间隔1/4的线上，这可能很多人会让你改，，因为容易听到声音放手然后miss，斟酌一下吧
03:38:474 (5) - ^同样的问题
03:29:555 NC乱
03:36:041 (2) - 这个1/4间距和后面的1/2间距看起来差不多，不是右上角那个数字，是眼睛看起来差不多，这影响读图的
03:53:271 漏音
03:59:150 (2) - 弄成折返压中间的鼓点
04:21:041 (2) - ^
03:59:758 漏音
04:00:568 ^，虽然不是鼓点我举得还是价格note好
04:06:852 漏音
04:11:514 ^
04:21:650 ^
04:09:285 鼓点被滑条身体带掉了，拆出来
04:18:812 这个鼓点么，要拆滑条还是怎么的随你吧._.
04:31:987 (6) - 改成折返压中间的鼓点
04:44:150 (3) - 难看，换个形状
04:44:960 (1) - 应该是前面的蓝线开始

有的地方我可能没找到，所以你要改类似的地方都找一下改一改比较好
柑橘吧，既然是insane，那鼓点应该尽最大可能都踩了，这歌细小的节奏又不多，能表现的都表现出来
我觉得可以了，就是有几段加速减速的颜色花花绿绿看着乱，NC排好一点

Normal
00:35:636 (1) - NC干嘛，你不是2根大白线1NC么，多加的全都去掉吧
00:44:150 (1) - 这个棱离靠前面的滑条太近不好看，改一下
00:53:879 (1) - 没包好
01:12:528 (3) - 尾巴靠的太近不难看吗

SPOILER

02:00:771 (5) - 滑条身体和后面的靠太近了，改一下
02:11:717 (3) - 一个锚点就够，这样难看
02:49:420 (1) - 间距
03:15:366 (3) - 这三个的弧度不对，导致最后一个note和前面的滑条靠太近，拉开一点
03:19:420 (3) - 难看，和前面两个平行，或者你就完全横过来还好一点
03:53:879 (1) - 间距
04:13:136 (3) - 和02:55:298 (3) - 节奏不好抓，我觉得你去掉然后前面1/2处起一个滑条好一点

Fycho's Hard
01:18:609 (2) - 改成折返
02:29:961 (1) - 这种和后面的靠太近了，稍微分开点，影间距响整体感
03:15:366 (3) - 改成滑条压后面的鼓点
04:11:920 加note
04:46:379 (1) - 明显前面蓝线起，有四个音

音效，就不看了.-.

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-01-05T01:07:02+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Collab Insane
01:43:541 (3) - 怎么挤那么近我记得我改了啊._. 纸张boy你怎么搞的！

Komeiji Hatsu

Komeiji Hatsu 2014-01-05T04:24:37+00:00

SPOILER

( ´ ω ` )ZZHBOY(512169867) 10:16:41
你们有群主的mu吗？有我的吗？有rank图吗？有#1吗？没有？
这样把给你们个机会
t/168822有星射星没星mod

zengdaen ：這個好囂張，是我喜歡的風格，你去噴他吧
Komeiji Hatsu ：好啊，不知道噴不噴的動
zengdaen ：…… 你不是真的要去噴吧
zengdaen ：╮(╯▽╰)╭
Komeiji Hatsu ：反正我閑
Komeiji Hatsu ：╮(╯▽╰)╭

[normal]

整體上，渣。低難度最重要的是整潔和規範，先用四號格子開DS好好挪一遍然後

tick用2是什麼想法

按一遍ctrl+A，把從頭到尾都沒用到過的部分用起來

00:10:096 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 看見在中間繞圈圈還沒有疊什麼就奠定了這個圖渣的感覺，走貪吃蛇不能咬自己不知道嗎

00:17:798 (2,1) - 這些輕微的遮擋最好一個不留全部取締，把00:19:825 (1) - 放上面

00:24:285 (4,2) - ^

00:42:731 (3,1) - ^ 到處都是……不寫了

re掉吧

[insane]

00:11:312 - 這麼重的音你放滑條尾？又沒擺梗，放note或者起滑條好吧

00:13:744 - ^

00:16:177 - ^

00:25:906 (2,3,4,5,6) - 誤讀

01:08:474 - 這個減速是為什麼？

01:40:298 (2,4,5,6,7,8) - 這個五角誰下的？前面的還能看就算了……

SPOILER

02:40:400 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1.2距離的連打你是要走奇葩路線嗎

03:29:555 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 挺不錯的，不過分開點，跟normal一樣擠在中間了，加距離，這段難度低了，強調擊敗

看不出思路……只寫點基礎問題

[***********************************************************************************]

❤eat~~
❤i like this
❤suggestions
❤count for little

[hard]

❤~~SV比insane高，~~讓他們改~~

❤~~不開grid真霸氣……

❤~~NC兩個長白一次如何……現在的NC好像太多，都是到3啊4啊就停了

❤~~00:11:312 (1) - 下個錨點在（56.128），彎的看起來舒服點

❤~~00:15:568 (2) - 可能你忘記了whistle

❤~~00:22:460 (2,3) - 疊

❤~~00:23:474 (1) - 彎

❤~~00:36:852 (1,2,3) - 該去右邊啦↓↓↓

SPOILER

❤~~00:42:731 (2) - （488.72）

❤~~00:57:933 (2) - ctrl+g

❤~~01:00:771 - 音量55%

❤~~01:06:852 (3,2) - 避免覆蓋

❤~~01:19:420 (1) - 可能你忘記了改打擊底音

❤~~02:59:960 - 為何不加note疊，用和03:09:285 - 一樣的音效？

❤~~03:19:420 (1,1,1) - 這個肯定會誤讀吧……就算NC提示感覺也沒用

❤~~03:28:339 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 同樣不能直視的五角……

❤~~03:38:068 (1,2,4) - 這裡用了normal的打擊底音……那麼前面一排類似的比如03:36:852 - 為什麼不用呢？

❤~~04:29:960 (4) - 下錯音效了吧……

❤~~04:57:933 - 轉盤結束時間和insane不一樣，~~讓他們改~~

❤~~好多地方我覺得疊起來比較好……然後覆蓋我覺得應該避免，像03:28:744 (3,1) - 我會把滑條方向再偏左……還有很多不准比如02:27:933 (2,3,4,5,1) - ……可能我強迫症比較嚴重

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-01-05T07:39:04+00:00

Komeiji Hatsu wrote:
[insane]
01:08:474 - 這個減速是為什麼？我自己的想法

01:40:298 (2,4,5,6,7,8) - 這個五角誰下的？前面的還能看就算了…… 我纸张boy自己转转这里吧

你一下就喷了一堆麻婆
不想活了
妈的纸张boy最近这么嚣张打死你被PA姥爷影响了？

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2014-01-05T09:01:06+00:00

Komeiji Hatsu wrote:
SPOILER
( ´ ω ` )ZZHBOY(512169867) 10:16:41
你们有群主的mu吗？有我的吗？有rank图吗？有#1吗？没有？
这样把给你们个机会
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/168822有星射星没星mod

zengdaen ：這個好囂張，是我喜歡的風格，你去噴他吧
Komeiji Hatsu ：好啊，不知道噴不噴的動
zengdaen ：…… 你不是真的要去噴吧
zengdaen ：╮(╯▽╰)╭
Komeiji Hatsu ：反正我閑
Komeiji Hatsu ：╮(╯▽╰)╭

[normal]

整體上，渣。低難度最重要的是整潔和規範，先用四號格子開DS好好挪一遍然後

tick用2是什麼想法
感觉这样会少漏点音更有节奏感._.
按一遍ctrl+A，把從頭到尾都沒用到過的部分用起來

00:10:096 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 看見在中間繞圈圈還沒有疊什麼就奠定了這個圖渣的感覺，走貪吃蛇不能咬自己不知道嗎

00:17:798 (2,1) - 這些輕微的遮擋最好一個不留全部取締，把00:19:825 (1) - 放上面

00:24:285 (4,2) - ^

00:42:731 (3,1) - ^ 到處都是……不寫了

re掉吧你知道我懒还这么说QAQ

[insane]
03:29:555 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 挺不錯的，不過分開點，跟normal一樣擠在中間了，加距離，這段難度低了，強調擊敗这段有几个1/4间隔所以不能间距太大.-.

能写这么多辛苦了o.o
感谢mod❤

liangv587

472 posts

Joined April 2013

liangv587 2014-01-05T11:02:39+00:00

normal
整体重心略偏右

00:20:839 (2) - 右上不好么00:23:271 (2) - 左上？感觉这种反向的不怎么好
~~00:27:933 (2) - 明明3点滑条可以完美包的，何必呢~~
00:46:582 (1,3) - 抱一下吧
00:55:095 (2) - ctrl+G？
01:18:204 (3) - 换成1的折返感觉顺点
01:57:123 (1) - 往右上？
02:17:595 (2) - 这类的顺着趋势往左就行了，注意下
03:34:420 (1) - 可以向下弯
03:45:366 (3,4) - 转角略急
03:57:325 (1,2) - ↑
04:29:555 (4,5,6) - 就顺着那个趋势往左不好么，搞得后面好像空间不够了的样子

就这样吧，~~怒骗一分~~

最后祝你好运

如果要re03:37:258 (1,2) - 这种可以合并成1滑条加圈

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-01-05T13:18:36+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Fycho's Hard
01:18:609 (2) - 改成折返好
02:29:961 (1) - 这种和后面的靠太近了，稍微分开点，影间距响整体感好
03:15:366 (3) - 改成滑条压后面的鼓点这跟人声
04:11:920 加note好
04:46:379 (1) - 明显前面蓝线起，有四个音我选择忽略那个十分微弱的音,to zzhboy,又不是所有的音都要跟，undermap而已

音效，就不看了.-.

Komeiji Hatsu wrote:
[hard]

❤~~SV比insane高，~~讓他們改~~ hard sv比insane高的图一堆..

❤~~不開grid真霸氣…… 其实是我没改gs的习惯，开了反而难受

❤~~NC兩個長白一次如何……現在的NC好像太多，都是到3啊4啊就停了我的习惯是一根大白线一次

❤~~00:11:312 (1) - 下個錨點在（56.128），彎的看起來舒服點好的

❤~~00:15:568 (2) - 可能你忘記了whistle加了

❤~~00:22:460 (2,3) - 疊没必要

❤~~00:23:474 (1) - 彎好

❤~~00:36:852 (1,2,3) - 該去右邊啦↓↓↓稍微改了下

SPOILER

❤~~00:42:731 (2) - （488.72）改到其他地方了

❤~~00:57:933 (2) - ctrl+g不好，flow绕向别扭了

❤~~01:00:771 - 音量55%懒改了，其实我觉得现在音量挺合适

❤~~01:06:852 (3,2) - 避免覆蓋这没什么问题，不影响美观

❤~~01:19:420 (1) - 可能你忘記了改打擊底音没漏啊，好好在那呢

❤~~02:59:960 - 為何不加note疊，用和03:09:285 - 一樣的音效？加了个滑条

❤~~03:19:420 (1,1,1) - 這個肯定會誤讀吧……就算NC提示感覺也沒用等别人说再看吧

❤~~03:28:339 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 同樣不能直視的五角……故意不正的

❤~~03:38:068 (1,2,4) - 這裡用了normal的打擊底音……那麼前面一排類似的比如03:36:852 - 為什麼不用呢？没理解你说的，前面是哪里？

❤~~04:29:960 (4) - 下錯音效了吧……没错

❤~~04:57:933 - 轉盤結束時間和insane不一樣，~~讓他們改~~ 其实所有难度结束时间不一样也不是大问题.-.

❤~~好多地方我覺得疊起來比較好……然後覆蓋我覺得應該避免，像03:28:744 (3,1) - 我會把滑條方向再偏左……還有很多不准比如02:27:933 (2,3,4,5,1) - ……可能我強迫症比較嚴重

thanks!

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yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2014-01-08T13:08:28+00:00

smallboat wrote:
[Collab Insane]
00:19:217 (2,3) - Drum的音效聽起來有點突兀，個人意見。这个改了
00:26:717 (6) - 照這樣節奏聽下去這邊不加whistle感覺怪怪。
00:29:150 (8) - ^
00:39:690 (2) - 你這邊1234間距都一樣了有點難讀，所以建議說2移到(268|152)左右位置做個antijump，這樣比較好讀。
00:45:568 (2) - 感覺疊在3滑條頭比較好讀和順。
00:48:609 (8) - 怎不移到(240|128)，原來位置也太遠了吧?
00:53:474 (3) - 可以複製1的來對稱
01:03:406 (6) - (360|20)試試。
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._.表示以上很多都是自己有想法所以没改..不管如何谢谢了~

Nunnally Lamperouge wrote:
00:35:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议↓
IMG
因为是开头，所以稍微简单点，和前面蓝色的5个点音一样比较好
00:51:447 (1,2) - 拉开一点吧，还有些其他的也是。还有就是我有点不明白2压蓝线的意义···就好像是为了压蓝线而压蓝线
00:53:474 (3,1) - 有点坑···建议00:53:879 (1,2,3) - 与00:55:095 (1,2,3) - 互调··虽然不换也行··比较我这里没断←只是建议
同上面..没有同意

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Collab Insane
00:28:339 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个我感觉渐变的不太好，6 7 8 9组个四方看起来还好一点 fixed

Komeiji Hatsu wrote:
[insane]
00:11:312 - 這麼重的音你放滑條尾？又沒擺梗，放note或者起滑條好吧不是不可以
00:13:744 - ^
00:16:177 - ^
00:25:906 (2,3,4,5,6) - 誤讀

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Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2014-01-11T07:55:55+00:00

群里看到了就跑来~~骗kds~~了

[Normal]
normal没什么好说的，布局有点乱感觉。。。

每个人作图习惯不同。我习惯于能在白线结束尽量压白线的那种，比如00:10:096 (1) - normal难度下在00:10:501 - 结尾，滑条长度或者布局什么的可能会更舒服一些吧

[Fycho's Hard]

03:42:933 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个音的note下的感觉有点拘谨。这里的音乐是扩散的那种感觉，换成顺手甩的可能会好一些。例如

SPOILER

03:48:609 (5) - 甩的方向换一下？朝右拐

04:13:440 (1,1) - 接的有点紧，打着不是很舒服。考虑一下让转盘在04:17:798 - 结束，04:18:204 - 再补一个note

04:37:460 (2) - 这个音起始点应该在04:37:511 - （开1/8对一下，速度应该是1/6没错）

04:46:312 - 有个小音看到前面的mod了。。忽略也ok

[Collab Insane]

00:28:744 (6,7,8,9) - 间距稍微小一些

00:33:204 (3,4) - 拉到红线停吧，拉到蓝线太拖拉了。00:34:014 (5) - 像这个后面接了个note而且没跳的拉到蓝线的话还是可以

00:37:258 (1,2) - ^

00:50:231 (3,4) - ^

01:03:609 (1) - 跳完之后对应一下flow吧，建议ctrl+g 后移到 208,276

01:10:805 (2) - 这个note塞的比较强硬，删掉吧

01:08:474 (1,1) - 好慢、、、Orz，稍微加点速？

01:18:204 (1,1) - ^ 有上面的习惯了一下倒是也还凑合。。不想改的话应该问题也不大。。只不过不太顺手

01:27:933 (1,2,3) - 和01:30:366 (1,2,1) - 一样，试着换一下？（只是建议。不改也很顺手的）

SPOILER

01:45:366 (3,4,5,6,1) - 五角星？

03:49:623 (2) - 删掉，或移至 03:49:825 -

以上，祝rank~

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2014-01-11T10:54:34+00:00

kanon_sayuri wrote:
群里看到了就跑来~~骗kds~~了

[Normal]
normal没什么好说的，布局有点乱感觉。。。

每个人作图习惯不同。我习惯于能在白线结束尽量压白线的那种，比如00:10:096 (1) - normal难度下在00:10:501 - 结尾，滑条长度或者布局什么的可能会更舒服一些吧

[Collab Insane]

00:28:744 (6,7,8,9) - 间距稍微小一些

00:33:204 (3,4) - 拉到红线停吧，拉到蓝线太拖拉了。00:34:014 (5) - 像这个后面接了个note而且没跳的拉到蓝线的话还是可以

00:37:258 (1,2) - ^

00:50:231 (3,4) - ^

01:03:609 (1) - 跳完之后对应一下flow吧，建议ctrl+g 后移到 208,276

01:10:805 (2) - 这个note塞的比较强硬，删掉吧

01:08:474 (1,1) - 好慢、、、Orz，稍微加点速？

01:18:204 (1,1) - ^ 有上面的习惯了一下倒是也还凑合。。不想改的话应该问题也不大。。只不过不太顺手

01:27:933 (1,2,3) - 和01:30:366 (1,2,1) - 一样，试着换一下？（只是建议。不改也很顺手的）
SPOILER

01:45:366 (3,4,5,6,1) - 五角星？

03:49:623 (2) - 删掉，或移至 03:49:825 - done

以上，祝rank~

感谢.-.

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-01-11T12:00:50+00:00

kanon_sayuri wrote:
[Collab Insane]
01:03:609 (1) - 跳完之后对应一下flow吧，建议ctrl+g 后移到 208,276 这里原来不是这样的;w;

01:10:805 (2) - 这个note塞的比较强硬，删掉吧感觉现在这样也可以

01:08:474 (1,1) - 好慢、、、Orz，稍微加点速？ no

01:18:204 (1,1) - ^ 有上面的习惯了一下倒是也还凑合。。不想改的话应该问题也不大。。只不过不太顺手

01:27:933 (1,2,3) - 和01:30:366 (1,2,1) - 一样，试着换一下？（只是建议。不改也很顺手的）怀疑贴错图
SPOILER

01:45:366 (3,4,5,6,1) - 五角星？这里我是随手摆的233
以上，祝rank~

thx for mod.
再乱改打爆你<(－︿－)>

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EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2014-01-12T13:31:30+00:00

智障波你好;w;

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

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总体：为了blanket损失flow，不值当，还不如不包。。

03:55:095 - 漏音，其他地方漏也就算了，大白线上漏音简直
01:21:852 (3,4,5) - 1.31x 1.27x 0.83x 这是要干啥为何不开DS啊;w;
02:38:271 (1) - Prev: 1.18x
00:11:717 (3) - 感受一下

SPOILER

00:27:933 (2) - 做blanket用三点式多好啊拉多点还不容易拉圆何苦呢后面还好多不再提了
00:31:987 (1) - 尾巴翘起来点
00:33:001 (2) - 你看明明vocal音乐都一样的00:29:555 (3,4,5) - 和00:31:987 (1,2,3) - 非要用不同的节奏
00:45:366 (2,3) - 没包好
00:53:879 (1,2) - ^ 外加00:53:879 (1,1) - 没叠好
00:58:744 (1) - 拉到01:01:177 -
01:11:717 (2) - 01:11:717 - 弱拍 01:12:123 - 强拍，建议拆成单点
04:25:095 (4) - ^
02:06:852 (2) - 好随便哦不拉对称点么
02:36:041 (3) - 1/1吧（统一性参照02:45:771 (8) -
04:18:204 (1,3) - 长得不一样啊 04:19:420 (3,4) - 也没包好
04:30:771 (1,2,3,4) - 建议复制粘贴旋转形状拉一样
00:29:555 (3) - NC
00:39:285 (4,5) - 按小节NC应该在(4)起，按歌词NC应该在(5)起啊，为啥要在后面NC
02:06:447 - 02:09:082 - 这一段NC同上意义不明
00:52:460 (1) - NC去掉
02:44:555 (6) - NC啊（加在(5)上也行
02:50:231 (1) - “物語”是一个词啊为啥要在中间加NC

音效莫名听不懂啥pattern

[马猴烧酒老飞球]
01:13:947 (2) - 往左弯吧
02:25:907 (3,1) - 这个有点不太善良。。
04:46:379 (1) - 把前面的音也补上吧，后面都有也不差这一个

老飞球作图我放心

[Collab]
00:10:906 (5,6) - 不一样形状要不要统一一下
00:39:285 (1) - soft finish
01:03:609 (1) - 跟前面的衔接丧病，整个flow都不好了，这个拉条怎么都该向右滑啊
01:03:609 - finish
01:35:231 - 这里的clap应该放到01:36:447 - 这里吧
01:41:109 (4,5,6,7,8) - 五边形梗不摆正？
01:47:393 - finish
02:14:150 (5,7) - 不是一个finish一个clap么怀疑下错音效
03:46:582 - normal finish声音太大，本来就有normal底音了，音量调小点吧
03:53:474 (4) - ^
04:13:440 (1) - 莫名在04:17:798 - 结束吧
04:26:717 (4,5) - 分别Ctrl-g试试
04:35:231 - 有点突兀，音量调小
04:43:947 (2) - 这个overmap了吧柑橘这儿没音
04:46:683 - break点掉

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2014-01-14T08:01:49+00:00

EmingK wrote:
智障波你好;w;

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
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[Normal]
总体：为了blanket损失flow，不值当，还不如不包。。因为懒orz

03:55:095 - 漏音，其他地方漏也就算了，大白线上漏音简直改了
01:21:852 (3,4,5) - 1.31x 1.27x 0.83x 这是要干啥为何不开DS啊;w;改了
02:38:271 (1) - Prev: 1.18x改了
00:11:717 (3) - 感受一下苦苦你们都会flow
SPOILER
00:27:933 (2) - 做blanket用三点式多好啊拉多点还不容易拉圆何苦呢后面还好多不再提了三点实在包不起来
00:31:987 (1) - 尾巴翘起来点厚
00:33:001 (2) - 你看明明vocal音乐都一样的00:29:555 (3,4,5) - 和00:31:987 (1,2,3) - 非要用不同的节奏不喜欢重复.-.
00:45:366 (2,3) - 没包好改好了
00:53:879 (1,2) - ^ 外加00:53:879 (1,1) - 没叠好改了
00:58:744 (1) - 拉到01:01:177 - 好
01:11:717 (2) - 01:11:717 - 弱拍 01:12:123 - 强拍，建议拆成单点好
04:25:095 (4) - ^好
02:06:852 (2) - 好随便哦不拉对称点么懒.-.
02:36:041 (3) - 1/1吧（统一性参照02:45:771 (8) - 2/1了不喜欢重复.-.
04:18:204 (1,3) - 长得不一样啊 04:19:420 (3,4) - 也没包好改了
04:30:771 (1,2,3,4) - 建议复制粘贴旋转形状拉一样这里有意不一样的.-.
00:29:555 (3) - NCdone
00:39:285 (4,5) - 按小节NC应该在(4)起，按歌词NC应该在(5)起啊，为啥要在后面NCdone
02:06:447 - 02:09:082 - 这一段NC同上意义不明去掉了
00:52:460 (1) - NC去掉好
02:44:555 (6) - NC啊（加在(5)上也行好
02:50:231 (1) - “物語”是一个词啊为啥要在中间加NCo.o

音效莫名听不懂啥pattern随便加的QAQ

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02:14:150 (5,7) - 不是一个finish一个clap么怀疑下错音效改了
03:46:582 - normal finish声音太大，本来就有normal底音了，音量调小点吧厚
03:53:474 (4) - ^厚
04:13:440 (1) - 莫名在04:17:798 - 结束吧好
04:26:717 (4,5) - 分别Ctrl-g试试done
04:35:231 - 有点突兀，音量调小调了
04:43:947 (2) - 这个overmap了吧柑橘这儿没音堆我真是zz
04:46:683 - break点掉点不掉苦苦留着防hr死

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