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Topic Starter
Moway

captin1 wrote:

hey m4m

yet another great set wow, some of the best mappers in north america all here haha
and the only one I'm not mutual with is Moway lol fixed

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jesus this is all going to be supernazi, because it's very well done overall
it's like looking at this and going "this is how I want to map my normals"

00:26:389 (3) - I think if you went for blanketing the slider as a whole rather than just the slider end this would look a touch nicer adjusted the placement on this, should be better now
01:27:305 (3) - the blanket like pattern here looks a bit forced, I think if you moved to x172 y80 ish this will make the angle the same as the transition for 1-2 sure
01:35:549 (5,6,7,1) - perhaps make this a more even zig zag pattern, by pushing 6 to the right slightly and then adjusting 7 accordingly I'm going to adjust the angle of 7 here, the pattern here is a simple pentagon, and I'd like to keep it this way
02:53:870 (1,2) - while this makes sense as it is, personally I would move the end of 1 so that it points in the direction of the curve of 2 fixed this
03:21:351 (3) - flip the curve on this? I think it looks nice and makes a bit more sense flow wise I'll say no here, just as a preference
03:39:671 (1,2) - similar as to suggested earlier and fixed also

[Collab]

omg

Moway

00:46:313 (2,3,4) - to me, it makes the most musical sense for these three notes to have the same spacing between them, as they are all very nearly the same note pitch wise. perhaps moving 4 into a equal triangle pattern with 2 and 3, while perhaps rotating 5 to catch the motion from the triangle will help... meh [ I like the suggestion, but altered it a bit to fit the flow that I wanted to have happen here. Instead of an equilateral triangle, I did the same flow I have, but with adjusted spacing. Not exactly equal, but I have it in place where I like the way it plays.u]here have a picture so my suggestion might make sense[/u]
00:53:641 (2,3,4,5) - blanket pattern here might be a bit messy, touch it up if you'd like ;) think I fixed it
01:01:656 (4,1) - fairly liberal spacing here, not quite sure how tasteful it is. perhaps somewhere in the x68 y208 region will still get your point across without being over exaggerated. It also keeps all of your large spacings here fairly consistent at about 3-3.3, while this is 4.1 right now yeah this is too big I think. I tried adjusting some things, so it seems alright now
02:36:465 (3,4,5) - I think the spacing here should have more emphasis on the jump between 3-4 rather than 4-5, as the vocal note is with 4 here I chose to emphasize the drum hit, so I'll leave it for now. I really like how this formation feels.
02:49:290 (4) - 02:49:977 (7) - I think you should adjust ncs here for consistency with what uws did at this part of the kiai prior I agree, should be fixed up
02:54:557 (3) - when I took off the finish of this slider, it seemed like this is an impact that gets over-emphasized a bit too much. maybe you could move this so it's stacking with the end of 02:55:702 (1) - (might want to move it a bit right so it doesn't hit 02:53:870 (1) - heh) so that it's still an impact, but not quite as drastic moved it over some
02:59:137 (1) - this note here I feel should have more impact with the map than it does, this note is even higher than the previous one and yet actually has lower spacing than most of this section I agree, I origianlly had it spaced more, and I'll revert to how I had it
04:14:938 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - awesome idea like jonny did with these, however I think you should keep them all on the same angle, just so it's a bit more noticable and neater dat tornado tho


there is so much good stuff in these maps, it's amazing. good luck with this!
Thanks captin, updating with Raose's changes.
Lanturn
More nagi maps by Moway? <3
Lust
From my queue~

I LOVE THE STORYBOARD

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  1. 00:23:641 (1,2,3) - these could fit together better, try angling your slider points better so they are symmetrical to eachother
  2. 01:32:114 (4,1,2,3) - pattern looks ugly in comparison to rest of map, change it up perhaps?
  3. 01:34:862 (4) - does not sound right to me, i would put a note here 01:34:633
  4. 01:35:549 (5) - NC
All I could really find :o
[Raose's Hard]
  1. 01:14:022 (2) - there are other parts like this in the map, but this one in particular does not really fit
This is well polished and was fun to play! :)

Take my star, it is a good set!
Topic Starter
Moway

Lust wrote:

From my queue~

I LOVE THE STORYBOARD

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:641 (1,2,3) - these could fit together better, try angling your slider points better so they are symmetrical to eachother thkn fixed
  2. 01:32:114 (4,1,2,3) - pattern looks ugly in comparison to rest of map, change it up perhaps? I think it looks alright, adjusted a very tiny amount but I like the flow of this.
  3. 01:34:862 (4) - does not sound right to me, i would put a note here 01:34:633 this is to avoid too much 1/2, and it matches the vocal nicely
  4. 01:35:549 (5) - NC would make these combos too short for me, I like consistency for the easiest diff as too much NC can be not great
All I could really find :o

This is well polished and was fun to play! :)

Take my star, it is a good set!
Thanks Lust!
Kayano
Mod request from Popner's Modding Team

  1. Red - Unrankable
  2. Purple - Highly recommended
  3. Black - You'd better fixed
  4. Gray - Just suggestion
  • General
  1. Fine

    Collab
  2. 02:14:022 (2) - clap
  3. 02:17:687 (2) - ^
  4. 02:36:694 (4) - missing whistle (you whistle at 01:16:083 (4) - so here should be a whistle)
  5. 02:37:381 (1) - ^
  6. 02:51:351 (4) - ^
  7. 03:37:152 (4) - ^
  8. 03:51:809 - ^
  9. 03:51:809 (5) - ^
  10. 02:58:221 (3) - put the whistle at the beginning of the slider and remove the one at the end? Then 03:00:511 (4) - whistle. These changes fits the music better imo.
  11. 03:41:961 (2,3) - whistle at the beginning of slider then remove one at the end. And better remove whistle in sliderbody?
  12. 03:56:618 (2,3) - ^
  13. 03:44:480 (3) - whistle?
  14. 03:57:992 (1) - finish instead of whistle, that's because 03:55:015 (4) - you finish to fit the music, but it is weird if you hear one finish suddenly, so it should be another finish in 03:56:160 (1) - or 03:57:992 (1) - to match. In simillar pattern, 02:54:557 (3) - you finish, then you finish at 02:57:534 (1) - , so 03:57:992 (1) - should be finish like that. However, you can do same things at 01:33:946 (3) - and 01:36:923 (3) -
  15. 01:28:679 (1,2,3) - , 02:49:290 (1,2,3,4) - , 04:19:061 (4,5,6) - do something like 03:49:748 (4,5,1) - (clap - clap&finish - clap - clap&finish)
  16. 04:01:427 (5) - whistle?
  17. 04:09:900 (3) - , 04:11:732 (3) - ^
  18. 04:20:664 - whistle move to 04:20:893 (3) -
  19. 04:34:404 - finish
    I can't find other problem..
    Normal and Hard seems good to me
Take my star :)
Good luck :D
Losertic
Hello!

From Modding Queue.

Modding

General

  1. Pass.

Normal

  1. plz change same rythem.
    ─ 01:19:290 ~ 01:20:206
    ─ 02:36:236 ~ 02:37:152
    ─ 03:55:473 ~ 03:55:702
    I think " 01:19:290 ~ 01:20:206 " - change this rythem. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091482 / http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091489
    also. it's my opinion - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091485
  2. 03:57:763 - add note?

Raose's Hard

  1. Pass.

Collab - jonathanlfj's part

  1. 00:36:923 - add note -, ex) (127,104)?

Collab - Moway's part

  1. 03:04:633 (4) - NC, like 01:44:022 (1) -

Collab - UnitedWeSin's part

  1. 03:35:549 (3) - remove NC?

Nice beatmap! ;)
Raose

Lust wrote:

[Raose's Hard]
  1. 01:14:022 (2) - there are other parts like this in the map, but this one in particular does not really fit changed the angle of it
ty for modding wwww
Topic Starter
Moway

OniJAM wrote:

Mod request from Popner's Modding Team

  1. Red - Unrankable
  2. Purple - Highly recommended
  3. Black - You'd better fixed
  4. Gray - Just suggestion
  • General
  1. Fine

    Collab
  2. 02:36:694 (4) - missing whistle (you whistle at 01:16:083 (4) - so here should be a whistle)
  3. 02:37:381 (1) - ^
  4. 02:51:351 (4) - ^
  5. 03:37:152 (4) - ^
  6. 02:58:221 (3) - put the whistle at the beginning of the slider and remove the one at the end? Then 03:00:511 (4) - whistle. These changes fits the music better imo.
  7. 04:09:900 (3) - , 04:11:732 (3) - ^
  8. 04:20:664 - whistle move to 04:20:893 (3) -
  9. 04:34:404 - finish fixed all hitsounds for my part
    I can't find other problem..
    Normal and Hard seems good to me
Take my star :)
Good luck :D

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From Modding Queue.

Modding

General

  1. Pass.

Normal

  1. plz change same rythem.
    ─ 01:19:290 ~ 01:20:206
    ─ 02:36:236 ~ 02:37:152
    ─ 03:55:473 ~ 03:55:702
    I think " 01:19:290 ~ 01:20:206 " - change this rythem. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091482 / http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091489
    also. it's my opinion - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091485 these are left like this to make everything a bit easier, so I prefer them for now
  2. 03:57:763 - add note? kinda the same for this also, don't want too much 1/2 and I think this plays fine

Collab - Moway's part

  1. 03:04:633 (4) - NC, like 01:44:022 (1) - fixed

Nice beatmap! ;)
Thanks guys!
UnitedWeSin
Sorry so late.

Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

Collab:

01:15:854 (3,4) - ctrl+G is way better in flow imo.
I don't agree lol, ctrl+G makes an uncomfortable circle flow that doesn't fit. I tried rotating 2 to make it better.

01:23:641 (5,6) - Whistle at the head of (6) fits better then (5) imo.
Hrm following vocals/piano I suppose.

01:25:702 (6) - Delete whistle? The sound feels similar with (5).
Prefer to keep.

02:18:603 (1) - Imo, deleting NC feels better. If you are concerned about the distance, you can place at (0,212) maybe.
Alright.

02:25:244 (3) - Curving down flows better.
Hrm I guess so, but it destroys the entire pattern so I'd like to keep original intentions.

captin1

captin1 wrote:

UnitedWeSin

01:22:954 (2,5,6) - if you did this pattern with keeping a sort of imaginary symmetry axis that goes through 2 and 3 and mirrors the two sliders, I think it would be really really cool...umm something like this (didn't adjust sliders but drew the line...yeah)
Hope it's better :<

01:30:740 (5) - I think this would be better off placed in a triangle pattern with the ends of 01:29:595 (2,3) - , as sadly the 2-5 blanket right now won't be noticed by the time 5 appears.
I just don't think it makes much of a difference, since most other things are placed in blankets, I think I'll keep this one the way it is.

01:34:404 (4,5,6) - I would unstack these personally, just so that motion continues through this
kk

02:18:145 (1) - I'm not sure this nc is needed here, to me it sounds like the small phrase continues through these two notes, while having a nc on 02:18:603 (1) - is fine since it emphasizes these two vocal notes.
done

02:25:702 (4,5,6) - maybe you could do a bit more structured of a pattern here, like 02:26:160 (6) - to x296 y140 so it makes two isosceles triangles (oh hell yea geometry). perhaps with this structure you could also adjust 02:25:244 (3,1) - these two notes so that the head of 1 is even between 3 and 4. so many patterns whee
This pattern plays fine for me :< I don't see the need to make perfect shapes, I'd prefer to keep my original intention.

02:29:824 (6) - no overlap plz hue lol it's probably fine
The overlap was on purpose here, I'd like to keep it because I think it's a staple in that pattern.

Fixed everything in other two mods.

Thanks a lot for modding!

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108,152,147076,2,0,P|192:142|245:184,1,152,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,308,147763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,308,147877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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jonathanlfj
mod replies

Sonnyc wrote:

Collab:
03:41:961 (2) - Delete the whistle at the end? Not sure if this was on purpose. following piano
03:46:771 (7) - Delete whistle? Similar reason here too. ok
03:50:206 (1) - Not sure about this NC. Was it your purpose to not be confused with 03:49:748 (4)? got rid of it
03:56:618 (2,3) - Delete whistle at (2) and add at the head of (3)? following piano
03:59:366 (3) - Reduce spacing plz. This long note didn't played nicely. ok
03:59:595 (4,1) - Merge in to one long slider. I think that's a better way in following the lyrics. Or if you want to make 03:59:824 a beat, then you can also try a 1/2 slider in 03:59:595 and then adding two notes or something. following piano here, ur setup would be better for vocals but this keeps the patterns and NC nice

captin1 wrote:

[Collab]

omg omg

jonathanlfj

00:22:267 (2,3,4,5) - I was hoping that the most prominent jump here would be between 00:22:725 (3,4) - these two notes, as this is on a higher pitched note than the other notes here, I think finding an arrangement where the largest jump is between them and the others have just a bit less spacing would make this very cool. If I could suggest some rhythm changes, it would be to have 00:22:267 (2) - this as a circle, and then 00:22:496 - this as a 1/2 slider, since the opening piano note for this small portion of the melody is on the end of the slider right now, which may not be the best way to do this. i actually like pianos to land on ends since it gives a smooth transition to the next object, but i fixed the spacing here so its more intuitive
00:34:633 (1,2,3,1) - perhaps unify the spacing between all of these? small thing but it helps with a bit of consistency. aite
01:55:931 (2) - hmmm I think the drop down here is a bit much for this section of music, bring it upwards a bit to lessen it? it feels more drastic because of the slider before it having upward motion at the end ok
02:05:778 (5) - I think using a few green points to do a volume crescendo on this would be super cool ahh yes lazy me
03:45:625 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i quit. this is too awesome. I just...aaaaaa it's so perfect with the descending scale expect more to come huehuehue
03:49:748 (4,1) - similar to what I suggested for moway, nc consistency with what uws did here? yep has been done

OniJAM wrote:

Collab
[*]03:37:152 (4) - ^ added
[*]03:51:809 (5) - ^ no piano here in the music
[*]03:41:961 (2,3) - whistle at the beginning of slider then remove one at the end. And better remove whistle in sliderbody?
[*]03:56:618 (2,3) - ^ hmm im following the piano here so the whistles dont really fit well
[*]03:44:480 (3) - whistle? aite
[*]03:57:992 (1) - finish instead of whistle, that's because 03:55:015 (4) - you finish to fit the music, but it is weird if you hear one finish suddenly, so it should be another finish in 03:56:160 (1) - or 03:57:992 (1) - to match. In simillar pattern, 02:54:557 (3) - you finish, then you finish at 02:57:534 (1) - , so 03:57:992 (1) - should be finish like that. However, you can do same things at 01:33:946 (3) - and 01:36:923 (3) - done for my part
[*]04:01:427 (5) - whistle? i would prefer having a quiet note here to bring out the emphasis on the repeat sliders afterwards
Thanks alot for modding~
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60,32,21351,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Moway
Thanks guys, updated.
10crystalmask01
Ello, here's your requested mod o̿ ̭ o̿
00:16:312 (1) - Wanna try adding a finish on the head, to match the cymbal crash heard in the background?
00:45:167 (6) - A clap on this note would sound better then a whistle imo. It follows up better with the finish on the head of 00:45:625 (1) -
00:45:625 (1,2,3) - Another personal preference, I think it'll be more visually appealing if these sliders were more curved (similar to 00:42:877 (3) - something like this:

00:52:954 (1) - Add finish on the head for the cymbal crash
00:52:954 (1) - A spinner doesn't really fit here (unless your trying to follow how the vocals place a long hold on the 'ta' in 'natteta')
If that's not the case, try removing 01:01:656 (1) - , copy and paste objects 00:49:290 (1,2,3) - at 00:58:450. And from here, you'll pretty much need to preposition the objects to keep the natural flow going.
01:28:908 (5) - Replace the whistle on the reverse with a clap, and replace the clap (on the tail and head) with a finish.
(so that the hitsounds hit on the same timing as the ones on objects 03:48:603 (4,5) - )
01:33:946 (3) - Place a finish on the head please. If not, you may want to remove the finish on 02:54:557 (2) - and 03:54:328 (1) - .
01:38:755 (3) - I dislike how this sliders dragging over the lyrics 'iro ga shimi...' I feel that the 'shimi' should be emphasized, and here's how I'd do it.
I would remove the reverse on this slider, and add a note on 01:39:900. That way, the tail of 01:38:755 (3) - (which is at 01:39:442) will hit the 'shi', and the note at 01:39:900 will hit the 'mi' :)
02:48:603 (4,5) - Umm, could you try to re-arrange these objects? For a Normal diff, this sort of flow is kind of confusing, because you have note 5 placed between 3 and 4 :S
Consider re-positioning your objects to something like this:

[Raose's Hard]
AR -1, so its consistent through the entire mapset (since Normal = 4, Raose's Hard = 7, Collab = 8)
00:59:824 (5) - Forgot to add a clap here >.<
01:07:152 (7) - ^
01:13:106 (1) - Try adding a whistle on the head?
01:19:290 (2,3) - These two notes sounds very odd. The head of 01:19:290 (2) hits the 'no' but the tail of 01:19:290 (2) - hits nothing, and the head of 01:19:748 (3) - already hits the 'dou' in 'shoudou'.
Try switching objects 01:19:290 (2,3) -. That way, 01:19:748 (3) - flows better with the vocals long hold on the 'shou' in 'shoudou'
And my (lame) suggestion on how you can re-position them :|

01:29:595 (1) - Add finish?
02:20:435 (5) - Forgot to add a clap here :S
02:33:717 (1) - Try adding a whistle on the head?
[Collab]
00:52:954 (1) - Add finish on the head?
03:35:549 (1) - I don't really see a point in making this object a NC, so just remove the NC.
03:58:679 (2) - shrink its tail to 03:58:908, and then add a note on 03:59:137, so that the rhythm 03:57:992 - 03:59:595 is similar to 03:59:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Notes should look something like this:
Where 03:58:679 (2) - is positioned around 140/364 and hit circle 3 is just under 03:57:534 (4) -

Hope this helps~!
Topic Starter
Moway

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, here's your requested mod o̿ ̭ o̿
00:16:312 (1) - Wanna try adding a finish on the head, to match the cymbal crash heard in the background? fixed
00:45:167 (6) - A clap on this note would sound better then a whistle imo. It follows up better with the finish on the head of 00:45:625 (1) - going to use both!
00:45:625 (1,2,3) - Another personal preference, I think it'll be more visually appealing if these sliders were more curved (similar to 00:42:877 (3) - something like this: I agree here, fixed this one up

00:52:954 (1) - Add finish on the head for the cymbal crash too noisy for me here I think
00:52:954 (1) - A spinner doesn't really fit here (unless your trying to follow how the vocals place a long hold on the 'ta' in 'natteta')
If that's not the case, try removing 01:01:656 (1) - , copy and paste objects 00:49:290 (1,2,3) - at 00:58:450. And from here, you'll pretty much need to preposition the objects to keep the natural flow going.I think it fits alright here
01:28:908 (5) - Replace the whistle on the reverse with a clap, and replace the clap (on the tail and head) with a finish.changed tehse to whistles, finishes I think take too much sound contrast away from the next big finish which is more important
(so that the hitsounds hit on the same timing as the ones on objects 03:48:603 (4,5) - )
01:33:946 (3) - Place a finish on the head please. If not, you may want to remove the finish on 02:54:557 (2) - and 03:54:328 (1) - .fixed
01:38:755 (3) - I dislike how this sliders dragging over the lyrics 'iro ga shimi...' I feel that the 'shimi' should be emphasized, and here's how I'd do it.
I would remove the reverse on this slider, and add a note on 01:39:900. That way, the tail of 01:38:755 (3) - (which is at 01:39:442) will hit the 'shi', and the note at 01:39:900 will hit the 'mi' :) sure
02:48:603 (4,5) - Umm, could you try to re-arrange these objects? For a Normal diff, this sort of flow is kind of confusing, because you have note 5 placed between 3 and 4 :S took some messing with but I think I got it
Consider re-positioning your objects to something like this:


[Collab]
00:52:954 (1) - Add finish on the head? same reason as the Normal
03:35:549 (1) - I don't really see a point in making this object a NC, so just remove the NC. uws lkes this one I think so I'll leave it
03:58:679 (2) - shrink its tail to 03:58:908, and then add a note on 03:59:137, so that the rhythm 03:57:992 - 03:59:595 is similar to 03:59:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Notes should look something like this:
Where 03:58:679 (2) - is positioned around 140/364 and hit circle 3 is just under 03:57:534 (4) -

Hope this helps~!
Thanks!
Raose
fixed everything, thanks for the helpful mod!

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dkun
I wanted to bubble this straight out! You should really invest in getting AIB to catch small errors like these. The map is great to begin with!

[General]
Are combo colors inconsistent on purpose? (Normal has a different color compared to the other two diffs)

[Normal]
02:13:564 (1) - Clap is missing on sliderend? (I'm pretty sure Rose bugged you about these)

[Raose's Hard]
Epilepsy toggle is missing (the other diffs have it).

[Collab]
02:31:885 (1) - The sliderend here is unsnapped.

Please call me back.
Topic Starter
Moway
alright updated.

Edit: everything was fixed.
dkun
Last thing, I don't know what happened, but I didn't see this last time.
50..png seems to be unused in the folder? It's similar to 50...png. Should check that out.

Sorry for the delay. I'll be back within a day this time. :P
Topic Starter
Moway
Yeah, after reviewing the kanji lyrics it seems like that is a redundant one, so I removed it.
dkun
Alright!
Topic Starter
Moway
Whoop whoop
jonathanlfj
gogo~

though im a bit unsure whether "Collab" is still acceptable as a diff name, lets wait and see what happens :3
Topic Starter
Moway
If worse comes to worst I can always just change it to Insane Collab or something like that. Although that sounds kind of weird to me. We'll see.
Frostmourne
I am afraid if I will get bashed after ranking this right away and disregarding the Collab name one. ;o;

modded
2013-12-24 06:17 Frostmourne: clap here
2013-12-24 06:17 Frostmourne: 01:24:557 (1) -
2013-12-24 06:17 Frostmourne: because 02:45:167 (2) -
2013-12-24 06:17 Moway: yeah
2013-12-24 06:17 Moway: fixed
2013-12-24 06:18 Frostmourne: 01:38:068 (1,2) - swap clap
2013-12-24 06:19 Moway: fixed
2013-12-24 06:22 Frostmourne: I hope it could be shorter
2013-12-24 06:22 Frostmourne: about spacing between notes and notes
2013-12-24 06:22 Frostmourne: it works pretty well though
2013-12-24 06:22 Frostmourne: but just for the future ?!
2013-12-24 06:22 Moway: yeah the spacing is pretty big on this map lol
2013-12-24 06:22 Frostmourne: lol
2013-12-24 06:26 Frostmourne: in Raose's diff
2013-12-24 06:27 Frostmourne: 02:17:916 (2,3) -
2013-12-24 06:27 Frostmourne: add claps
2013-12-24 06:27 Frostmourne: similar to 00:57:305 (2,3) -
2013-12-24 06:27 Frostmourne: clap this tail 00:57:305 (2) -
2013-12-24 06:27 Frostmourne: clap this tail 00:57:992 (3) -
2013-12-24 06:27 Frostmourne: remove clap on head 00:57:992 (3) -
2013-12-24 06:28 Frostmourne: do the same at 02:17:916 (2,3) -
2013-12-24 06:28 Frostmourne: that's what I am explaining ;o
2013-12-24 06:28 Moway: alright
2013-12-24 06:28 Moway: sounds good
2013-12-24 06:29 Frostmourne: clap head 01:27:534 (4) -
2013-12-24 06:30 Frostmourne: clap tail 01:26:618 (2) -
2013-12-24 06:30 Frostmourne: 02:48:145 (4) - clap thead
2013-12-24 06:30 Frostmourne: clap tail 02:47:229 (2) -
2013-12-24 06:30 Frostmourne: so nazi hitsound loool
2013-12-24 06:30 Moway: orz
2013-12-24 06:31 Frostmourne: 03:47:687 (2,4) -
2013-12-24 06:31 Frostmourne: same =_=
2013-12-24 06:31 Frostmourne: that's all I guess....
2013-12-24 06:32 Moway: alright
2013-12-24 06:32 Frostmourne: I would make Insane diff
2013-12-24 06:32 Frostmourne: this way lol
2013-12-24 06:32 Frostmourne: so it may not be distinct apart from the hard diff =_=..
2013-12-24 06:33 Moway: :3
2013-12-24 06:34 Frostmourne: 01:38:297 (2) - clap head (normal diff)
2013-12-24 06:35 Frostmourne: and
2013-12-24 06:35 Moway: ah fixed
2013-12-24 06:35 Frostmourne: 01:39:442 (4) -
2013-12-24 06:35 Frostmourne: not sure if you are looking at my stream
2013-12-24 06:35 Moway: i am
2013-12-24 06:35 Frostmourne: I would shorten a slider
2013-12-24 06:36 Frostmourne: and end it at 01:39:900
2013-12-24 06:36 Frostmourne: and make a repeat
2013-12-24 06:36 Frostmourne: to match the vocal
2013-12-24 06:36 Frostmourne: your choice!
2013-12-24 06:37 Moway: sure i'll fix it since i do it at 03:00:053 (4) -
2013-12-24 06:37 Frostmourne: didn't notice O_o
2013-12-24 06:37 Moway: i guess i'll change this one too lol
2013-12-24 06:37 Moway: 04:00:511 (4) -
2013-12-24 06:37 Frostmourne: ok lol
2013-12-24 06:38 Frostmourne: ok \:D/
2013-12-24 06:39 Frostmourne: clap?
2013-12-24 06:39 Frostmourne: 03:55:702 (2) -
2013-12-24 06:39 Moway: orz
2013-12-24 06:39 Frostmourne: not sure if
2013-12-24 06:40 Frostmourne: 03:57:763 (1) - start on the red tick
2013-12-24 06:40 Frostmourne: instead
2013-12-24 06:40 Frostmourne: to match to vocal
2013-12-24 06:40 Frostmourne: I feel it's incoherent
2013-12-24 06:40 Frostmourne: maybe lool
2013-12-24 06:40 Frostmourne: that's all I guess
2013-12-24 06:40 Moway: i think i'll leave that one since i think it matches the rest of the kiais
2013-12-24 06:41 Frostmourne: ok :p
Frostmourne
Ranked (double post) :o
HabiHolic
Gratz!!!!!!
dkun
Awwww yeah. Congrats!
meiikyuu
ohh it got ranked, grats!
Gamu
Congrats <3
jonathanlfj
yeeeeee
Lust
congratulations moway&company!
Heanday
Nice, gratz moway, awesome map
vizzy
YAY! Finally there is a full version. Congrats!
Kyouren
Gratzz!! Raose, jonathanlfj, UnitedWeSin, and Mioway!!^^
mingmichael
i've been waiting for this full version map for a long timee <3
congratss guy :3
captin1
woah grats feels like forever ago i modded this lol
Raose
THANKS EVERYONE :D :D :D
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