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solfa feat. Chata - Miracle infinity

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Fycho
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Fycho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年1月4日 at 20:58:55

Artist: solfa feat. Chata
Title: Miracle infinity
Source: ゆめこい ～夢見る魔法少女と恋の呪文～
Tags: Laurier Flower [Minakami Yuki] galgame eroge visual novel opening parasol Yumekoi ~Yume Miru Mahou Shoujo to Koi no Jumon~
BPM: 180
Filesize: 4503kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Flower's Easy (2.4 stars, 109 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 285 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 424 notes)
  4. Laurier's Insane (5 stars, 403 notes)
  5. Yuki's Normal (4.43 stars, 171 notes)
Download: solfa feat. Chata - Miracle infinity
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#14
Miracle infinity
Chata<3
Download hentai video here, and just put it in the folder.
Mapset:
Easy——Flower(100%)
Normal—— [Minakami Yuki](100%)
Hard——me(100%)
Insane——me(100%)
2nd Insane——Laurier(100%)
Last edited by Fycho , edited 56 times in total.
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
房顶小天使

Edit:
From your BG req
Just take some of these >.<
SPOILER



Last edited by Koiyuki , edited 1 time in total.
Kinomi
1,220 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
房顶小角度
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/5DTQa.zip
my diff!!!!
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
go Fyちゃん, Laurierさん
good song and map ^^
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
F~（骗KD时间


Flower's Easy

感觉有点点乱也


Yuki's Normal

00:22:230 (1) - 好长- -


Hard

00:25:230 (2) - 感觉这个有点点不顺,如果把00:24:563 (1) - 用和00:25:230 (2) - 一样形状怎样？
01:15:230 (1) - 挺好的，不过我想到01:15:230 (1) - 和01:15:730 (2) - 一样形状然后放到01:15:063 (4) - 右下\ 感觉比较三角形顺点
01:29:897 (1,2,3,4) - 我一直觉得这种一串的不好看呐哈哈哈


Insane

AR太高看的眼花= =
01:13:230 (1) - 觉得这里有点不顺


Laurier's Insane

Good

就这样啦（感觉没写··· :)
Good luck ！
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
hi~!!
thanks req :3

[Flower's Easy]
  1. 00:55:563 (4) - copy 00:52:897 (2) -
  2. 01:38:897 (4) - clap
[Yuki's Normal]
  1. 00:19:230 (1) - Spinner end at 00:21:563 -
    I think space toofew(00:21:897 - ~00:22:230 - )
  2. 00:41:730 (3) - NC Rhythm change part
[Hard]
  1. 00:40:397 (4) - Overlap 00:40:563 (1) - at end.
    00:40:397 (4) - 1grid up
    00:40:563 (1) - end point x:444 y:252
  2. 01:09:564 (4) - Ctrl+J,H,G
    SPOILER
  3. 01:34:730 (3) - I like opposite curve or straight slider :>
    img
  4. 01:28:480 (6,1) - spacing0.70x I think best :)
[Laurier's Insane]
  1. 00:40:563 (1) - もうちょっと曲げたほうがいいと思いました。曲調もゆるやかなので。
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:28:563 (1) - more blanket 00:27:730 (3) -
    SPOILER

    start point x:212 y:35
    2nd point x:148y:36
    end point x:112y:92
nice mapset!
chata<33 Good Luck!! :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
no fix with CET6's mod =.=

litoluna wrote:

[Yuki's Normal]
  1. 00:19:230 (1) - Spinner end at 00:21:563 -
    I think space toofew(00:21:897 - ~00:22:230 - )
  2. 00:41:730 (3) - NC Rhythm change part
All fixed
thx for modding

http://puu.sh/5GYXz.rar
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
yoyoyo

[General]
  1. maybe didn't needed (Short Ver.) on the title. sorry i don't know about that rule, please ask to other people
    1. http://puu.sh/5H6Hg.png (from official) doesn't have a (Short Ver.) in officially I guess you should be remove it ._.
  2. I HATE WHITE COMBO COLOR
[Insane]
00:01:563 (3) - delete centre point, I prefer this also be same pattern with 00:00:564 (1,2,3) -
00:16:063 (4) - (nazi) 1glid left 00:16:397 (1) - and this as well, would be looks and feels pretty good imo
00:23:563 (3) - (nazi again sry\- -/) I want to make a triangle with 00:23:230 (1,2) -
00:35:897 (4,5) - this pattern is feels bad in this part. remove a circle then a slider to 00:36:230
00:45:397 (4,5) - I feel a bit weird flow (but, it is a good flow enough now ;) ) move a slider to left below like this
01:02:730 - huh feels strange a little, add a circle here would better to flow, but this part will killing DT players. ahahah
01:15:230 (1) - why a slider has finish on the head, remove this :?. if you want to add finish in here, You should add a finish to 01:09:897 (1) - as well. (also 01:20:563 and 01:25:897 lol.. )
01:38:730 (2) - add a clap, cause i felt here is same sound with 01:38:897 (3,4) -

[Hard]
I thought enough by AR7 but that is fine now =3

00:08:230 (4) - (oh im a nazi modder hi ) A bit weird triangle here, same spacing please (1.2?) \==\
00:11:897 (3) - A slider to 00:12:063 then add a circle 00:12:230 - follow on the music, also same sound with 00:14:563 (3) -
01:15:230 (1) - same as Insane diff

[Yuki's Normal]
00:19:230 (1) - that spinner was so hard ==.. well maybe you fixed this already by litoluna's MOD
00:38:563 (2,3,4) - A bit weird here, fix to same with other patterns like this
SPOILER
01:09:897 (1) - uhhh why doesn't have a finish on the head here :( Also 01:20:563 (1) - and 01:25:897 (1) - .. orz
01:28:563 - Kiai end here? compare with other diffs, really long 8-)

[Flower's Easy]
00:33:230 (2) - make a curve slider here, would better flow to 00:34:563 (3) -
00:41:230 (2) - I want to add a clap on the tale..
01:38:897 (4) - add a clap? idk --;
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Delis wrote:

[Yuki's Normal]
00:19:230 (1) - that spinner was so hard ==.. well maybe you fixed this already by litoluna's MOD yeah fycho may not update it 0.0
00:38:563 (2,3,4) - A bit weird here, fix to same with other patterns like this nope, there is a clear voice at 00:38:897 - imo that i use this pattern 0.0
SPOILER
01:09:897 (1) - uhhh why doesn't have a finish on the head here :( Also 01:20:563 (1) - and 01:25:897 (1) - .. orz ok~
01:28:563 - Kiai end here? compare with other diffs, really long 8-) that's a mistake... fixed
thx for modding
fy我断网了现在用的爪机流量所以不上qq了，就puush吧0.0
http://puu.sh/5HfjX.rar
Fycho
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Topic Starter
Fycho

CET 6 wrote:

F~（骗KD时间


Hard

00:25:230 (2) - 感觉这个有点点不顺,如果把00:24:563 (1) - 用和00:25:230 (2) - 一样形状怎样？感觉不怎么好
01:15:230 (1) - 挺好的，不过我想到01:15:230 (1) - 和01:15:730 (2) - 一样形状然后放到01:15:063 (4) - 右下\ 感觉比较三角形顺点其实两个差不多
01:29:897 (1,2,3,4) - 我一直觉得这种一串的不好看呐哈哈哈 那怎么改呢？


Insane

AR太高看的眼花= =
01:13:230 (1) - 觉得这里有点不顺我觉得顺的呀orz，稍微改了一点

就这样啦（感觉没写··· :)
Good luck ！

litoluna wrote:

hi~!! hi~~
thanks req :3

[Flower's Easy]
  1. 00:55:563 (4) - copy 00:52:897 (2) - no
  2. 01:38:897 (4) - clapfixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:40:397 (4) - Overlap 00:40:563 (1) - at end. fixed
    00:40:397 (4) - 1grid up
    00:40:563 (1) - end point x:444 y:252
  2. 01:09:564 (4) - Ctrl+J,H,GI think it's fine noa
    SPOILER
  3. 01:34:730 (3) - I like opposite curve or straight slider :> fixed
    img
  4. 01:28:480 (6,1) - spacing0.70x I think best :)nice ,fixed!!
[Insane]
  1. 00:28:563 (1) - more blanket 00:27:730 (3) - ok,fixed
    SPOILER

    start point x:212 y:35
    2nd point x:148y:36
    end point x:112y:92
nice mapset!
chata<33 Good Luck!! :)

Delis wrote:

yoyoyo yo~

[General]
  1. maybe didn't needed (Short Ver.) on the title. sorry i don't know about that rule, please ask to other peoplethe song has full ver ,so should add short ver, imo
    1. http://puu.sh/5H6Hg.png (from official) doesn't have a (Short Ver.) in officially I guess you should be remove it ._.
  2. I HATE WHITE COMBO COLOR change a color orz
[Insane]
00:01:563 (3) - delete centre point, I prefer this also be same pattern with 00:00:564 (1,2,3) - changed the other slider
00:16:063 (4) - (nazi) 1glid left 00:16:397 (1) - and this as well, would be looks and feels pretty good imofixed
00:23:563 (3) - (nazi again sry\- -/) I want to make a triangle with 00:23:230 (1,2) - fixed
00:35:897 (4,5) - this pattern is feels bad in this part. remove a circle then a slider to 00:36:230 fixed
00:45:397 (4,5) - I feel a bit weird flow (but, it is a good flow enough now ;) ) move a slider to left below like this
01:02:730 - huh feels strange a little, add a circle here would better to flow, but this part will killing DT players. ahahah sorry ,no,there is no beat.
01:15:230 (1) - why a slider has finish on the head, remove this :?. if you want to add finish in here, You should add a finish to 01:09:897 (1) - as well. (also 01:20:563 and 01:25:897 lol.. )I think this finish fits music well
01:38:730 (2) - add a clap, cause i felt here is same sound with 01:38:897 (3,4) -ok

[Hard]
I thought enough by AR7 but that is fine now =3

00:08:230 (4) - (oh im a nazi modder hi ) A bit weird triangle here, same spacing please (1.2?) \==\fixed
00:11:897 (3) - A slider to 00:12:063 then add a circle 00:12:230 - follow on the music, also same sound with 00:14:563 (3) I'd like to see others's opinion
01:15:230 (1) - same as Insane diff
[Flower's Easy]
00:33:230 (2) - make a curve slider here, would better flow to 00:34:563 (3) - ok
00:41:230 (2) - I want to add a clap on the tale..no
01:38:897 (4) - add a clap? idk --;no
reallly big thanks for modding!!
Last edited by Fycho , edited 2 times in total.
Laurier
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Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/5Iaff.osu

all fixed!!!
AruOtta
1,296 posts
Joined May 2012
AruOtta
Hi, From my queue ~

[Flower's Easy]
00:13:563 (3,2) - Better blanket ^w^
00:45:897 (1,2) - Maybe blanket ?

[Yuki's Normal]
00:02:563 (4,1) - Overlapping is bad =/

[Hard]
00:04:897 (2,3) - Try this patern (for blanket)
SPOILER
00:13:897 (1) - Place at x:360 y:136
00:37:397 (4) - Place at x:400 y:164 (for Distance Snap)
00:43:730 (2,3) - Try to blanket please =3
00:49:897 (1,2) - ^
00:54:897 (4,1) - ^
00:59:563 (2) - Place at x:228 y:296

[Insane]
00:25:897 (1) - x:120 y:196
01:32:563 (1,4) - Try to blanket

Hope it'll be helpful ^w^

OwO


grumd
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Joined October 2010
grumd
If the official song title doesn't have "(Short Ver.)" in it, then you should not add it. Find a source that says that you need to use "Short Ver." or remove it.
KSHR
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KSHR
searched the source as Fycho requested.

there is only a character song album which was released by solfa / marble sky records (the artist group who produced game songs / BGMs).
and it has full ver. but short one. so you should remove (Short Ver.) from the title.

SPOILER
Fycho
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Topic Starter
Fycho

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi, From my queue ~
[Flower's Easy]
00:13:563 (3,2) - Better blanket ^w^ok
00:45:897 (1,2) - Maybe blanket ?no


[Hard]
00:04:897 (2,3) - Try this patern (for blanket) no ,for flow:<
SPOILER
00:13:897 (1) - Place at x:360 y:136no
00:37:397 (4) - Place at x:400 y:164 (for Distance Snap)ok
00:43:730 (2,3) - Try to blanket please =3ok
00:49:897 (1,2) - ^ok
00:54:897 (4,1) - ^no
00:59:563 (2) - Place at x:228 y:296not good imo

[Insane]
00:25:897 (1) - x:120 y:196 changed a little
01:32:563 (1,4) - Try to blanket ok

Hope it'll be helpful ^w^
thanks!!

To grumd and KSHR,thank you for reminding!,changed the title:3
Last edited by Fycho , edited 1 time in total.
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
that overlap is nothing and easy to get imo so no change

edit: well more than 1 modder point out that i will change it...

edit2: changed
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Miracle infinity.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67230
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Miracle infinity
TitleUnicode:ミラクルinfinity
Artist:solfa feat. Chata
ArtistUnicode:solfa feat. 茶太
Creator:Fycho
Version:Yuki's Normal
Source:ゆめこい ～夢見る魔法少女と恋の呪文～
Tags:Laurier Flower [Minakami Yuki] galgame eroge visual novel opening parasol Yumekoi ~Yume Miru Mahou Shoujo to Koi no Jumon~
BeatmapID:334975
BeatmapSetID:132638

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"OP.flv"
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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229,240,38563,2,0,P|288:244|335:280,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,306,39063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
422,297,39230,2,0,L|461:184,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,91,39897,2,0,P|400:35|336:13,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,108,40563,6,0,P|287:139|229:133,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,47,41230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
41,58,41730,5,4,0:0:0:0:
41,58,42063,1,4,0:0:0:0:
85,143,42397,1,4,0:0:0:0:
85,143,42730,2,0,L|88:208,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,293,43230,6,0,L|177:329,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,274,43897,2,0,L|374:310,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,275,44563,2,0,P|494:221|483:149,2,120,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,197,45563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,148,45897,6,0,P|256:135|192:152,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,223,46563,2,0,P|200:235|142:222,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,168,47230,2,0,L|49:99,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,263,47897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,325,48230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,337,48563,6,0,L|334:324,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,241,49230,2,0,L|403:228,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,186,49897,2,0,P|495:245|468:298,2,120,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,104,50897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
358,52,51230,6,0,P|296:78|230:74,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,62,51897,2,0,P|124:124|135:179,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,242,52563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,179,52897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
362,210,53230,2,0,L|422:218,2,60,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,285,53897,6,0,P|269:237|271:179,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,93,54563,2,0,L|344:38,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,111,55230,2,0,P|152:97|94:121,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,189,55897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
45,189,56230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,265,56563,6,0,P|169:279|227:255,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,186,57230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,111,57563,2,0,P|446:92|503:190,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,279,58563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
381,322,58897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
373,226,59230,6,0,L|433:119,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,111,59897,2,0,L|276:215,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,276,60563,2,0,P|142:302|87:286,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,219,61230,2,0,P|85:193|139:208,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,178,61897,5,4,0:0:0:0:
227,178,62230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,178,62563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,178,62897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,116,63230,2,0,L|425:164,3,120,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,245,64563,6,0,L|434:311,1,60,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,255,65063,6,0,L|334:321,1,60,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,270,65563,6,0,L|231:336,1,60,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,280,66063,6,0,L|131:346,1,60,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,294,66563,5,8,0:0:0:0:
37,102,67230,6,0,P|93:120|151:107,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,72,67897,2,0,P|298:59|355:77,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,115,68397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,158,68563,2,0,L|441:273,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,323,69230,2,0,L|322:208,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,170,69897,6,0,P|169:151|109:176,2,120,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,246,70897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,311,71230,2,0,P|308:330|368:305,2,120,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,235,72230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,145,72563,6,0,P|320:79|285:38,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,64,73230,2,0,P|136:58|72:82,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,111,73730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,155,73897,2,0,L|39:274,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,297,74563,2,0,L|116:177,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,193,75230,5,4,0:0:0:0:
297,152,75563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,159,75897,2,0,P|451:171|488:222,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,256,76563,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,317,76897,2,0,L|257:298,1,60,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,276,77397,1,4,0:0:0:0:
86,318,77730,5,8,0:0:0:0:
86,318,77897,2,0,P|77:260|101:206,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,170,78563,2,0,P|254:188|323:175,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,139,79063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,91,79230,2,0,P|259:73|190:86,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,18,79897,2,0,P|110:74|123:131,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,179,80563,6,0,L|238:298,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,315,81230,2,0,L|300:198,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,133,81897,2,0,L|402:252,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
494,269,82563,2,0,L|463:152,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,61,83230,6,0,P|368:37|312:58,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,124,83897,2,0,P|200:138|146:114,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,107,84397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,133,84563,2,0,P|30:196|40:253,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,316,85230,2,0,P|128:253|118:196,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,138,85897,5,4,0:0:0:0:
282,165,86230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,178,86563,2,0,P|436:175|483:137,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,84,87230,1,4,0:0:0:0:
331,149,87563,2,0,L|317:214,1,60,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,302,88063,2,0,L|357:338,2,60,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,290,88563,6,0,L|128:305,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,211,89230,2,0,L|41:225,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,131,89897,2,0,L|191:117,2,120,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,168,91230,6,0,P|316:182|372:157,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,87,91897,2,0,P|360:67|418:81,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,152,92563,2,0,P|500:212|484:271,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,259,93897,6,0,L|221:337,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,239,94563,2,0,L|103:317,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,234,95230,2,0,L|157:156,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,313,96563,6,0,P|287:338|340:323,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,262,97230,2,0,L|468:149,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,88,97897,2,0,P|334:63|281:78,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,139,98564,2,0,L|153:252,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99230,12,0,102897,0:0:0:0:
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Rizia
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Rizia
又一神麻婆陣容

[花花]
00:14:897 (2) - 中間的錨點 x240 y64

[M醬]
00:02:563 (4,1) - 這樣overlap不怕嗎?

[Hard]
00:21:063 (2) - 頭whistle
00:26:897 (6) - x216 y80
00:31:563 (4,5) - 中間的錨點?

[Insane]
沒問題

[Laurier]
Nice
Fycho
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Fycho

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

又一神麻婆陣容

[花花]
00:14:897 (2) - 中間的錨點 x240 y64 不了

[Hard]
00:21:063 (2) - 頭whistle fixed
00:26:897 (6) - x216 y80改了一点
00:31:563 (4,5) - 中間的錨點?？
thanks@@
Kamio Misuzu
580 posts
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Kamio Misuzu
[Flower's Easy]

00:11:230 - 到 00:21:563 - 说实话我感觉节奏很不好，空的拍子感觉有那么点莫名奇妙 建议这部分remap。。不要打我= =
00:28:563 - 加note
00:31:230 (2) - 起始点拉到00:31:063 -
00:48:230 (4) - 这个可以去掉
00:57:897 (3) - 去掉
00:57:563 - 到 00:59:230 - 试试这种的怎么样？
SPOILER
01:08:230 (2) - 后移到01:08:563 -
01:10:897 (3) - 去掉
01:13:563 (2) - 后移到01:13:897 -
01:17:397 (4) - 滑条尾压白线感觉不是很合适。试试这种节奏？
SPOILER
01:18:897 (2) - 去掉？
01:20:563 (1,2) - 大白线接滑条头感觉好一些，1和2换一下，先滑条再note
01:23:897 - 这个音空的很突兀，可以考虑01:23:230 - 到01:23:897 - 拉成滑条
01:25:897 (1,2) - 互换，先滑条后note
01:28:063 (4,1) - ^
01:37:563 (2,4) - 前面音空着，这里可以考虑直接去掉这两个note，突然的加速一下还是不怎么好

[Yuki's Normal]

all well

[Hard]

01:05:230 (4) - 滑条没什么必要，而且不太好读。单note就可以了

[Insane & Laurier's Insane]

all well
Flower
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kanon_sayuri wrote:

[Flower's Easy]

00:11:230 - 到 00:21:563 - 说实话我感觉节奏很不好，空的拍子感觉有那么点莫名奇妙 建议这部分remap。。不要打我= = 根据这条mod和Fycho的要求，进行了remap
00:28:563 - 加note 这里空出来可以暂时让玩家休息一下
00:31:230 (2) - 起始点拉到00:31:063 - ok
00:48:230 (4) - 这个可以去掉 没有太好的理由，不变
00:57:897 (3) - 去掉 同上
00:57:563 - 到 00:59:230 - 试试这种的怎么样？ 同上
SPOILER
01:08:230 (2) - 后移到01:08:563 - 我现在kiai就是跟鼓了 说什么都晚了 之后的同类问题同上
01:10:897 (3) - 去掉 没啥改进，不改
01:13:563 (2) - 后移到01:13:897 -
01:17:397 (4) - 滑条尾压白线感觉不是很合适。试试这种节奏？没什么规定说这样不好，实际上我认为没什么问题
SPOILER
01:18:897 (2) - 去掉？
01:20:563 (1,2) - 大白线接滑条头感觉好一些，1和2换一下，先滑条再note
01:23:897 - 这个音空的很突兀，可以考虑01:23:230 - 到01:23:897 - 拉成滑条
01:25:897 (1,2) - 互换，先滑条后note
01:28:063 (4,1) - ^
01:37:563 (2,4) - 前面音空着，这里可以考虑直接去掉这两个note，突然的加速一下还是不怎么好 这里不一样，是有鼓的，因此不改
Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/5NmHH.zip
MeraMiPoP_old
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MeraMiPoP_old
Flower's Easy:
花花

Yuki's Normal:
01:04:563 (1,1,1,1) - 不用加这么多

Hard:
01:38:563 (3,4,5,6,1) - 建议摆小一点, 打到最后会紧张, 一不小心就SS美丽

Laurier's Insane:
00:37:230 (3,4) - i think this is a better rhythm, it's also easier to read http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1180708
01:18:563 (3,4,5,6) - suggesting star formation http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1180712

Insane:
00:24:563 (1) - 这不科学 建议删了 (每次都打不着)
00:50:730 (2) - 感觉这个位置不好 至少太难读了吧o.o x:332 y:124怎么样
01:00:897 (2) - 叠起来? 右下1grid
01:01:897 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 好难啊
手好冷 打不动
Fycho
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Meramipop wrote:

01:38:563 (3,4,5,6,1) - 建议摆小一点, 打到最后会紧张, 一不小心就SS美丽 ok

Insane:
00:24:563 (1) - 这不科学 建议删了 (每次都打不着) 不好吧，这有个鼓音
00:50:730 (2) - 感觉这个位置不好 至少太难读了吧o.o x:332 y:124怎么样 好
01:00:897 (2) - 叠起来? 右下1grid好
01:01:897 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 好难啊1111
手好冷 打不动
thansk!!
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
no fixed thanks ar233333333333333
sammy711
207 posts
Joined November 2012
sammy711
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InsaneとLaurier's Insane二つとも素晴らしい譜面です!!!!>.<
ここからのはmodderからじゃなくてプレーヤーから言う提案です!

这两个diff都超爽
我以player的角度来提点建议 不是modder了
Laurier's Insane
01:12:063 (4) - (296,232)の近くに移動してみたらどう0.0
01:11:730 (3) - の弧とよく接するのでwww

01:00:730 (2) - これをCtrl＋Gしたらいいと思うよ
なぜかわかりませんが　とにかくそんな感じ！

01:34:563 (3,5,6,1,2) - これっ　正五角形とはちょっと違うんですね
01:35:063 (6,2) - の位置を調整してみたら~?

Insane

01:34:397 (3,4,1) - Ctrl+G之后爽得多呢
01:39:063 (4,1) - 萨米智障了 Ctrl G会爽一点的是这两个


00:44:397 (6) - 往下移20个坐标更爽
01:35:730 (3,4) - 弧度调整一下 打起来不爽
我把这两个贴在一起了感觉一下效果
SPOILER


Hard
很棒很棒 依旧是作为player的建议
00:28:313 (3,3,4,1) - 这段flow不太好。。00:40:397 (4) - 不在前面的滑条弧上
建议把4上移一点 把1右移点

00:43:730 (2) - 离前后的滑条的距离差不太相等呢....很容易蛋疼断 调整一下吧
01:19:897 (3) - 这个 Ctrl+H Ctrl+J Ctrl+G 爽点 和前面的滑条角度搭配不错
虽然知道是和01:18:897 (4) - 照应不过还是想说。改了之后的感觉要比之前要好很多

Yuki's Normal

没啥可说的。。。很好的normal
不愧是m酱

Flower‘s Easy

00:04:563 (2,1) - 这两个构一下blanket增强一下美观如何0.0 顺便按DS调整一下下面的滑条的位置
SPOILER

00:21:230 (4) - 滑条尾上的finish还是去掉吧 w
我仔细听了一遍 00:20:563 - 的音和00:21:230 - 的音 感觉前面的一个更需要强调
所以只需要前面加finish+clap这种特强调音效
后面的finish...有点赘余也很吵

嗯。。就这些吧。。Easy我也看不出来什么了






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Laurier
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http://puu.sh/5Takq.osu

sammy711 wrote:

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InsaneとLaurier's Insane二つとも素晴らしい譜面です!!!!>.<
ここからのはmodderからじゃなくてプレーヤーから言う提案です!

这两个diff都超爽
我以player的角度来提点建议 不是modder了
Laurier's Insane
01:12:063 (4) - (296,232)の近くに移動してみたらどう0.0
01:11:730 (3) - の弧とよく接するのでwww fixed!!! ついでに次の(5)も移動してスペーシングそろえましたっ

01:00:730 (2) - これをCtrl＋Gしたらいいと思うよ
なぜかわかりませんが　とにかくそんな感じ！　うーんこれはちょっと合わなさそうなのでnoで！

01:34:563 (3,5,6,1,2) - これっ　正五角形とはちょっと違うんですね
01:35:063 (6,2) - の位置を調整してみたら~?　たしかにこっちのほうが綺麗　調整しましたっ



剩下的明天摸
modありがとう！
Fycho
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sammy711 wrote:

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Insane

01:34:397 (3,4,1) - Ctrl+G之后爽得多呢 三个怎么ctrl+G，全乱了阿
00:44:397 (6) - 往下移20个坐标更爽移动了一点，太多感觉形状不好看
01:35:730 (3,4) - 弧度调整一下 打起来不爽ok
我把这两个贴在一起了感觉一下效果
SPOILER


Hard
很棒很棒 依旧是作为player的建议
00:28:313 (3,3,4,1) - 这段flow不太好。。00:40:397 (4) - 不在前面的滑条弧上我不觉得， 这用了滑条尾低判定吧
建议把4上移一点 把1右移点

00:43:730 (2) - 离前后的滑条的距离差不太相等呢....很容易蛋疼断 调整一下吧是想改的，但是一改就不美观了又想不到更好的
01:19:897 (3) - 这个 Ctrl+H Ctrl+J Ctrl+G 爽点 和前面的滑条角度搭配不错没什么区别啊
虽然知道是和01:18:897 (4) - 照应不过还是想说。改了之后的感觉要比之前要好很多

Flower‘s Easy

00:04:563 (2,1) - 这两个构一下blanket增强一下美观如何0.0 顺便按DS调整一下下面的滑条的位置我觉得不需要
SPOILER

00:21:230 (4) - 滑条尾上的finish还是去掉吧 w好的
我仔细听了一遍 00:20:563 - 的音和00:21:230 - 的音 感觉前面的一个更需要强调
所以只需要前面加finish+clap这种特强调音效
后面的finish...有点赘余也很吵

嗯。。就这些吧。。Easy我也看不出来什么了
thanks for modding！updated laurier‘s insane
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Hi~ Mod as requested :3 Sry it's late :?

Flower's Easy:
~00:05:897 (1) - Make 00:04:563 (2) blanket it. Since you've blanketed 00:01:897 (2,1) .
~00:45:897 (1) - Make this curve more so it can blanket 00:47:230 (2) ? http://puu.sh/5Y7CS.jpg
~00:52:897 (2) - I think it would make more sense if you moved this to (488,124) for following the slider path of 00:51:230 (1) and for much smoother cursor movements.
~00:59:230 (5) - Looks a bit odd compared with the next one. Copy 01:01:230 (6) and make reverse for better appearance? http://puu.sh/5Y7Mg.jpg
~01:04:563 (1,2) - Add finish on both ends of the sliders to follow the crashes in music.
~01:08:230 (2,3) = 01:11:230 (3,4) - Therefore keep patterns consistent?
~01:23:230 (1,2) - Just slider?

Yuki's Normal:
~00:03:230 (1) - Since 00:01:897 (3,4) both are straight, make 00:03:230 (1) the same shape as 00:03:897 (2) to keep consistency and avoid overlap.
~00:05:230 (5,6,1) - You could try to tidy these patterns a little as it looks a bit messy like it's randomly placed right now. A tip is to follow the slider's end path and put it to the best possible place to match the flow and comfort level while playing.
~00:07:897 (5) - Add one more reverse to follow the music completely? (Even for Normal diff, players should get the hang of playing with sliders that has more than 1 reverse arrow. Since Easy has only 1 reverse so Normal should have 2 :P )
~01:18:563 (3,5) - They should be symmetrical.
~01:19:897 (6) - Move to (118,19) So that 01:20:563 (1) can be stacked on top of 01:18:563 (3) 's head. (Not perfect stack though)
~01:21:063 - Add note and DS properly.
~01:22:397 - ^
~01:27:563 (5) - This overlap looks bad :( To fix it, Curve this down 01:26:563 (3) - the blanket 01:27:230 (4) - Furthermore DS 01:27:563 (5) . Then make 01:28:063 (6) like http://puu.sh/5Y8Ur.jpg . Now place 01:28:563 (1) in between the arrow and head of 01:28:063 (6) . DONE! Now DS the rest.
~Not done :P 01:29:730 - Add note to follow snare. Therefore add clap.
~ 01:32:397 - ^
~01:35:063 - ^
~01:37:730 - ^
~01:38:563 (4) - Change to Reverse slider to follow snare, sounds way better :P Therefore add clap into all head and arrow and end of slider. http://puu.sh/5Y955.jpg

Hard:
~00:41:730 (1,2,3) - I think it's better for you to only stack 00:42:730 (2,3) together cuz it's a tiny bit confusing for hard to read for hard diff in this slow speed.
~00:43:230 (1) - Then just avoid overlap by fixing shape if u took my suggestion that is.
~01:05:563 (1,2) - Suddenly jump @@ Keep consistent with 01:04:563 (1,2) ?
~01:06:230 (4) - 1/2 beat slider should be fine. As of now it creates a bit of a weird feeling while playing.
~01:17:063 (2) - You could DS this? Since it's easier to read and the position is almost the same :P
~01:39:063 (6) - Overlapped jumps in hard? Maybe don't overlap? Cuz it's only hard.

Insane:
~00:15:563 (2) - NC here instead? Easier to read ur next pattern.
~00:24:563 (1) - Hmm, I know it's a downbeat, but Putting the NC there is confusing Since u only have a gap between 00:24:563 (1,2) So I think it's best to emphasis that gap by putting NC on 00:24:897 (2) instead.
~01:15:563 (2) - This breaks the flow quite a bit. Maybe just circle is fine.
Good diff :3

Laurier's insane:
~00:11:230 - I don't really feel the chane in SV here, therefore I think multiplying it by 1.2 instead of 1 (This goes to all 1x SV ecxept 00:43:230 to Kiai)would be better for your patterns. Since there are many jumps, so just match it with the SV. Cuz atm, the SV is a bit slow and it feels a bit awkward while playing since it doesn't flow as smooth. I know it's a lot of work after adjusting the SV, so it's entirely up to you although I recommend it. If you totally disagree, just think of it to spice up the map a little since insane is has the same SV too. You could make this one stand out more, that's all I'm trying to say.
~I totally dunno wat mistakes are there since you are such an advanced mapper. So that's all I can give as advice atm :P Sry if it didn't help :?

Pretty neat map-set overall. GO GO FYCHO!!~ GET EM ALL RANKED! :) GL!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

gideon5504 wrote:

Yuki's Normal:
~00:03:230 (1) - Since 00:01:897 (3,4) both are straight, make 00:03:230 (1) the same shape as 00:03:897 (2) to keep consistency and avoid overlap. nope
~00:05:230 (5,6,1) - You could try to tidy these patterns a little as it looks a bit messy like it's randomly placed right now. A tip is to follow the slider's end path and put it to the best possible place to match the flow and comfort level while playing. because I like randomly placing notes
~00:07:897 (5) - Add one more reverse to follow the music completely? (Even for Normal diff, players should get the hang of playing with sliders that has more than 1 reverse arrow. Since Easy has only 1 reverse so Normal should have 2 :P ) I will think about it.
~01:18:563 (3,5) - They should be symmetrical. they are
~01:19:897 (6) - Move to (118,19) So that 01:20:563 (1) can be stacked on top of 01:18:563 (3) 's head. (Not perfect stack though)
~01:21:063 - Add note and DS properly. nope
~01:22:397 - ^ nope
~01:27:563 (5) - This overlap looks bad :( To fix it, Curve this down 01:26:563 (3) - the blanket 01:27:230 (4) - Furthermore DS 01:27:563 (5) . Then make 01:28:063 (6) like http://puu.sh/5Y8Ur.jpg . Now place 01:28:563 (1) in between the arrow and head of 01:28:063 (6) . DONE! Now DS the rest. make some changes
~Not done :P 01:29:730 - Add note to follow snare. Therefore add clap. nope
~ 01:32:397 - ^ ^
~01:35:063 - ^ ^
~01:37:730 - ^ ^
~01:38:563 (4) - Change to Reverse slider to follow snare, sounds way better :P Therefore add clap into all head and arrow and end of slider. http://puu.sh/5Y955.jpg ok
thanks~

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Source:ゆめこい ～夢見る魔法少女と恋の呪文～
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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi~ Mod as requested :3 Sry it's late :?

Flower's Easy:
~00:05:897 (1) - Make 00:04:563 (2) blanket it. Since you've blanketed 00:01:897 (2,1) .moved,but not blanket
~00:45:897 (1) - Make this curve more so it can blanket 00:47:230 (2) ? http://puu.sh/5Y7CS.jpg sorry no,
~00:52:897 (2) - I think it would make more sense if you moved this to (488,124) for following the slider path of 00:51:230 (1) and for much smoother cursor movements.I think flow is no problem since they both are sliders
~00:59:230 (5) - Looks a bit odd compared with the next one. Copy 01:01:230 (6) and make reverse for better appearance? http://puu.sh/5Y7Mg.jpgI think it's not good
~01:04:563 (1,2) - Add finish on both ends of the sliders to follow the crashes in music.ok
~01:08:230 (2,3) = 01:11:230 (3,4) - Therefore keep patterns consistent? sorry,no sense
~01:23:230 (1,2) - Just slider? I think they are the same

Hard:
~00:41:730 (1,2,3) - I think it's better for you to only stack 00:42:730 (2,3) together cuz it's a tiny bit confusing for hard to read for hard diff in this slow speed. I like the stack and the overlap is on purpose,this is not hard to read
~00:43:230 (1) - Then just avoid overlap by fixing shape if u took my suggestion that is.^
~01:05:563 (1,2) - Suddenly jump @@ Keep consistent with 01:04:563 (1,2) ? ok
~01:06:230 (4) - 1/2 beat slider should be fine. As of now it creates a bit of a weird feeling while playing.Since no drums at blue tick,so 3/4 is no problem and it can make rhythm more interesting
~01:17:063 (2) - You could DS this? Since it's easier to read and the position is almost the same :P This is a small jump to fit the musice better,so don't need to use ds
~01:39:063 (6) - Overlapped jumps in hard? Maybe don't overlap? Cuz it's only hard. I tested.It has no problem imo

Insane:
~00:15:563 (2) - NC here instead? Easier to read ur next pattern.no,keep it at big white tick
~00:24:563 (1) - Hmm, I know it's a downbeat, but Putting the NC there is confusing Since u only have a gap between 00:24:563 (1,2) So I think it's best to emphasis that gap by putting NC on 00:24:897 (2) instead.^
~01:15:563 (2) - This breaks the flow quite a bit. Maybe just circle is fine.I think flow is good now:<
Good diff :3
Pretty neat map-set overall. GO GO FYCHO!!~ GET EM ALL RANKED! :) GL!
thanks for modding!!updated normal diff
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
here's your ticket

[General]
我建议用sb给video打点圣光

[Normal]
00:07:897 (5) - 建议换个方向，现在有点难读这个sldier何时结束以及下个slider何时开始
00:09:063 (1,1,1,1) - 我觉得没必要这么多NC
00:41:730 (1,2,3,4) - 这个节奏非常难读，建议用一个1/1 repeat slider+ 1/1 sldier，N里出现这种节奏还是不太好
01:05:063 (1,1,1,1) - same
01:27:230 (4,5,6) - 可以试着让他们（不包括6的折返）在一条直线上，看着会舒服很多。顺带5加航clap会好听点
01:29:897 (3) - 同00:07:897 (5) -

[Hard]
00:41:230 (3) - 这个可以blanket好点
00:58:897 (4) - 建议试着改改pattern，让00:59:230 - 压在circle或者slider头上，现在这样压在slider尾上打起来不太带感
01:16:230 (3) - ctrl+g下？flow好点
01:38:563 (3,4,5,6,1) - 建议换spacing小点的梗，有点坑爹

[Laurier's Insane]
00:42:063 (1,1) - why added nc at here? they's seems help nothing here
00:50:063 (2,4) - ctrl+G? flow can be better imo(remember to fix the hitsounds if you fixed this)
01:29:230 - you missed clap here?

[Insane]
00:13:897 (1) - 这个3/4 slider非常违和，建议停在00:14:063 - ，当然这么改了的话这里会太简单，建议同时改改附近的pattern
01:31:230 - 建议吧这个NC移到01:31:730 - ，会让anti-jump更好读点，如果觉得combo太长，可以把01:29:897 - 这个NC移到01:30:563 -

好了叫我，别忘了圣光
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Normal]
00:07:897 (5) - 建议换个方向，现在有点难读这个sldier何时结束以及下个slider何时开始 考虑了下，加了个折返，不知道行不行
00:09:063 (1,1,1,1) - 我觉得没必要这么多NC 好吧
00:41:730 (1,2,3,4) - 这个节奏非常难读，建议用一个1/1 repeat slider+ 1/1 sldier，N里出现这种节奏还是不太好 fixed
01:05:063 (1,1,1,1) - same same
01:27:230 (4,5,6) - 可以试着让他们（不包括6的折返）在一条直线上，看着会舒服很多。顺带5加航clap会好听点 fix and加上了
01:29:897 (3) - 同00:07:897 (5) - 改了个摆法
thx
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Source:ゆめこい ～夢見る魔法少女と恋の呪文～
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227,178,62230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,178,62563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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47,294,66563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
37,102,67230,6,0,P|93:120|151:107,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,72,67897,2,0,P|298:59|355:77,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,115,68397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,158,68563,2,0,L|441:273,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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175,246,70897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,311,71230,2,0,P|308:330|368:305,2,120,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,235,72230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,145,72563,6,0,P|320:79|285:38,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,64,73230,2,0,P|136:58|72:82,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,111,73730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,155,73897,2,0,L|39:274,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,297,74563,2,0,L|116:177,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,193,75230,5,4,0:0:0:0:
297,152,75563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,159,75897,2,0,P|451:171|488:222,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,256,76563,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,317,76897,2,0,L|257:298,1,60,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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86,318,77730,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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99,107,84397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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282,165,86230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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402,84,87230,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/5ZyKN.osu
thanks!

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket


[Laurier's Insane]
00:42:063 (1,1) - why added nc at here? they's seems help nothing here ok
00:50:063 (2,4) - ctrl+G? flow can be better imo(remember to fix the hitsounds if you fixed this) sorry i keep my flow
01:29:230 - you missed clap here? fixed


好了叫我，别忘了圣光
Fycho
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Fycho
:D

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket

[General]
我建议用sb给video打点圣光 有点麻烦，干脆把video去掉了，之前嘉文也说过这.-.


[Hard]
00:41:230 (3) - 这个可以blanket好点 ok
00:58:897 (4) - 建议试着改改pattern，让00:59:230 - 压在circle或者slider头上，现在这样压在slider尾上打起来不太带感 ok
01:16:230 (3) - ctrl+g下？flow好点感觉不好，还顺着往下比较好，考虑了滑条尾低判定和后面一个重音的打击感
01:38:563 (3,4,5,6,1) - 建议换spacing小点的梗，有点坑爹好


[Insane]
00:13:897 (1) - 这个3/4 slider非常违和，建议停在00:14:063 - ，当然这么改了的话这里会太简单，建议同时改改附近的pattern好
01:31:230 - 建议吧这个NC移到01:31:730 - ，会让anti-jump更好读点，如果觉得combo太长，可以把01:29:897 - 这个NC移到01:30:563 - 好的，但是保留了一个NC,后面加了一个对应

好了叫我，别忘了圣光
其他有一个地方修改过，是insane的00:57:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 换了个梗，其他没有变动

Thanks！
wcx19911123
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wcx19911123
你可以这样
.osu里留着video的code，但是folder里不留video，之后可以在creator里加上带video的link，这样的话绅士们可以一边看video一边传成绩
Fycho
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Fycho

wcx19911123 wrote:

你可以这样
.osu里留着video的code，但是folder里不留video，之后可以在creator里加上带video的link，这样的话绅士们可以一边看video一边传成绩
其实原来就是这样的，osu文件里的video code还保留着，但是现在上传的之前那个会自动save一下，把视频去掉在上传当检测到没视频的时候自动把video代码去掉了，所以有一个diff没有video offset。。。所以现在让easy没有视频
终于搞定了，所有难度都加上视频了，ready for recheck。
wcx19911123
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Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
we fixed some tiny things, removed video but kept codes in .osu files
bubbled
Melophobia
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Melophobia
SPOILER
15:22 Fycho: btw do you have time to test my map now^^?
15:23 Melophobia: ofc
15:23 *Fycho is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/333458 solfa feat. Chata - Miracle infinity]
15:23 Melophobia: Insane?
15:23 Fycho: yes
15:25 Fycho: and I don't know if the video is nsfw since I removed it orz...
15:25 *Melophobia is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/333458 solfa feat. Chata - Miracle infinity [Insane]]
15:27 Melophobia: k im bad
15:27 Fycho: /w.\
15:29 Melophobia: *okay*
15:30 Melophobia: cant really stream cuz its way too cold here..
15:30 Fycho: so cold0.0
15:31 Melophobia: 00:42:063 (2,3) - doesnt flow well imo
15:31 Melophobia: because of its direction
15:32 Fycho: 1/1 spacing flow is not that more important than 1/2 imo
15:32 Fycho: to match the stress
15:33 Melophobia: hmm
15:34 Melophobia: mb thats because
15:34 Melophobia: 00:42:063 (2) - is too cornered
15:34 Melophobia: move it downward and it flows better imo
15:34 Melophobia: meh if you think its not important thats ok then
15:35 Fycho: ok moved a little
15:36 Melophobia: 01:24:230 (6,7,1) - hard to hit
15:37 Melophobia: id replace 6 and 7 with a slider
15:37 Melophobia: up to you tho
15:38 Fycho: I played and found that not hard to hit
15:42 Melophobia: 01:11:563 (2,3) - mb this could flow better by curving the slider in the opposite direction?
15:42 Melophobia: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219351
15:42 Melophobia: no big difference
15:44 Melophobia: 01:16:480 (7) - id remove this circle
15:44 Melophobia: using 2 triplets in a row plays bad for me
15:45 Melophobia: 01:28:897 (2) - newcombo here instead of (1)
15:46 Melophobia: btw ask multiple bats about the stack leniency
15:47 Melophobia: i'd say no for this usage
15:47 Fycho: so stack leniency 7?
15:48 Melophobia: or you should manual-stack many 1/1 stack patterns
15:49 Melophobia: indeed some patterns such as 01:31:230 (1,2) - are looking better with stack leniency 5
15:49 Melophobia: so ask other staff first
15:50 Fycho: ok
15:50 Melophobia: 00:08:480 (4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - how about increasing volume setting gradually?
15:51 Melophobia: like 20% => 30% => 40% ...
15:52 Fycho: ok
15:53 Fycho: in fact the volume in music seems the same
15:54 Melophobia: by doing that you can even manipulate it tho
15:54 Melophobia: and it fits nicely with ur pattern
15:55 Melophobia: 00:17:063 (3,1) - btw hard to hit for tablet players like me
15:55 Melophobia: just my opinion
15:56 Melophobia: 00:17:397 (1,2,3) - flows bad
15:56 Melophobia: due to its direction and inconsistent spacing
15:57 Fycho: fixed the spacing
15:58 Melophobia: 01:06:563 (3) - newcombo here?
15:58 Fycho: ok
15:58 Melophobia: 01:19:230 (1,2) - i like this btw
15:58 Fycho: forgot it lol
15:59 Fycho: thanks..
16:00 Melophobia: 01:37:897 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - u can also consider using the gradually increasing volume here
16:00 Melophobia: more suitable for the last of this difficulty imo
16:00 Melophobia: just suggestion
16:01 Fycho: ok use 50% for the first four and 60% for the rest
16:01 Melophobia: cool
16:01 Melophobia: and thats all
16:02 Fycho: wo!thanks for suggestions^
16:07 Fycho: post it to forum if you don't mind and I will give u kd
16:07 Melophobia: k
wcx19911123
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Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
melo wants me to recheck this, cuz he's busy these days
changelog
[insane]
00:08:563 (1) - added nc
00:08:563 - added green section to make the volume changing more smoothly
01:06:563 (1) - added nc
01:08:897 (2) - changed rhythm from 3/4 to 1/2
01:11:730 (3,1) - changed arc direction for better flow
that's all
nothing wrong, bubble fixed
melo might rank this when he has time
grumd
1,790 posts
Joined October 2010
grumd
— Laurier's Insane
  1. 00:31:647 (3) - Remove this note, no sound in the music under it
  2. 00:31:147 - Add a note here instead, make it a triple. Listen at 50% to hear the sounds if you're not sure.
  3. 00:24:480 - 00:27:147 - 00:29:813 - 00:35:147 - 00:37:813 - 00:40:480 - You might want to add notes at these places for the bass sounds. Feel free to refuse though.
— Insane
  1. 00:16:397 (1) - 1 grid up for proper spacing :v
  2. 00:58:563 (4) - Move the end point 1 grid down :v
  3. 01:31:397 - Please remove this note. It has a very bad rhythmical positioning. The climax sound at the downbeat, 01:31:230 - , askes for a pause afterwards, so this note is very distracting and unneeded. It should be removed.
  4. You might also want to add triples at the bass sounds at these places (as I suggested in Laurier's Insane: 00:24:480 - 00:27:147 - 00:29:813 - 00:35:147 - 00:37:813 - 00:40:480 -
— Hard
  1. 00:38:397 - Might add a note here? Would make a good transition.
  2. 01:21:897 (1,2,3) - If you listen to the vocals here, you'll see that you don't have a vocal on 01:22:063 - but you have a vocal sound on 01:22:397 - . Swapping some objects will make the rhythm better: http://puu.sh/6984i.jpg
— Normal
  1. AR is really low compared to the slider speed. I'd like to see AR+1 here. But do as you want, both choices are fine.
  2. 00:41:563 - Very important: add a note here. Otherwise this transition from white ticks to red ticks is not that easy to read and will cause many combo breaks.
  3. 00:48:397 - Add a note here?
  4. 01:31:230 (1) - This is a kind of anti-jump, quite confusing to play, players might think it's a small jump or 3/4 rhythm. Place (1) farther,at 0.8x distance. Like that for example: http://puu.sh/698l2.jpg
    And even better add a note at 01:30:897 -
  5. 01:33:897 (1) - Same, place it at 0.8x
  6. 01:38:563 (4) - The last repeat is quite unexpected, I expected a triple here.
    This slider is actually a problem. Look, 01:39:230 - this point is meant as a part of a stream from 01:38:563 - to 01:39:230 - . But what's the problem, spinner start can't be a fully-functional note. It doesn't need a click from the player and it doesn't have a sound in-game. This is just a place when the spinner appears. If you want to make it a stream, do it like that: http://puu.sh/698rx.jpg
    Otherwise just remove the extra repeat: http://puu.sh/698sq.jpg
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