Melophobia wrote:

[Hard]
Volume setting is kinda higher than it needs to be, especially in kiai sections. yep, turn down the volume in kiai time
01:00:895 - This is still optional, but i think this crush-symbal somewhat sounds differently and a normal-finish would fit nicely with it. ok :3

Melophobia wrote:

Just few suggestions before pushing this forward.~

[General]
Title Unicode: There needs to be an extra space between なないろびより and (TV Size). Fixed
It'd be more suitable to end the kiai time at 01:24:178 - where the next stanza exactly begans. or you can extend it to 01:27:537 - , or 01:29:104 - .
The bg file is better as .jpeg imo considering that the current file size is way too big. (i have never seen such a heavy bg...) change into .jpg
I think Source should be "Non non biyori" (uncapitalize the last 2 words), or do you have any source about it? i don't really have source but i always saw it write like that (ex : 1, 2, 3)

[Insane]
00:19:253 (4,5,6,7) - Considering how the (3) flows, this stream should be curved for a better flow imo.
00:32:910 (3) - Honestly i dont like this pattern since it caused me to misread the rhythm due to the stack and it ignores the crush-symbal at 00:33:134 - . Please consider remove the slider and rearrange the rhythm.
00:42:089 (3) - Copy (2) and rotate it by -120 degree. I dont think the current angle looks that great.

[Easy]
00:08:955 (1) - This slider should be more curved imo because it looked weird compared to (3).
01:14:999 - A finish would fit better with the instruments.
01:22:387 (3) - This slider somehow looks randomly placed, due to its angle and shape. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1130265
01:27:649 (1) - The spinner apprears too suddenly and is surprising to beginners imo. It's highly recommended to replace (5) with a circle and start the spinner at 01:27:537 - instead.

All fixed

Pretty much a perfect mapset, not much to complain about patterns! Throw a forum pm at me once you're done with these fixes.

Source: のんのんびより