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Misawa Sachika - Unite (TV Size)

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Gloria Guard wrote:

늦은 모딩 죄송합니다.

Gloria Guard's Modding
[General]

Fine


[Easy]

00:03:195 (1,2) 이 (1)번 슬라이더를 (2)번 슬라이더 머리에 blanket 하시는게 모양이 더이쁠거 같아요 → 수정 완료.
00:06:386 (2,2) f5로 돌려보시면 뒤에 보라색 슬라이더 잔상이 남으면서 앞에 빨간색 슬라이더 부분이 겹치네요, 빨간색 (2)번슬라이더를
위로 조금만 올려주시거나, 다른 방법으로 겹치지 않게 해주세요. → 수정 완료.
00:17:556 (4,5) 초보자들은 이렇게 겹쳐진 노트는 박자를 제대로 읽지못하고 그냥 비슷한 박자라고 생각하고 치다가 틀리는 경우가 많아요.
노트끼리 스택하는것은 Easy나 Normal 에서는 되도록 자제해주시고, 겹친 두 노트는 서로 떨어트려서 배치해주세요. → 수정 완료.
00:38:939 (1) 이 스피너 끝은 00:41:493 여기에 끊는게 더 자연스러운것 같네요 → 수정 완료.
00:51:227 (1,2) 위에서 언급했듯이 쉬운 난이도에서 이렇게 겹쳐진 노트는 초보자들이 읽기 어렵습니다, 여기는 노트대신에 슬라이더로
만드시는게 더 쉽게 읽을 수 있을것 같네요. → 수정 완료.
01:01:120 (2,3,4) 여기도 마찬가지로 슬라이더 1개 노트 1개로 하시거나 아니면 짧은 1/2 슬라이더 반복1번으로 바꿔주세요.
01:05:110 (1,2) 여기도 슬라이더로 바꿔주시는게 더읽기 쉽습니다 → 수정 완료.


[Normal]
뉴콤보가 매우 짧습니다, 뉴콤보를 넣는 부분을 늘려주세요

00:12:768 (4,5) 이지 난이도와 같습니다. → 수정 완료.
00:14:365 (3,4,5) 흐름이 별로 좋지가 않네요, 이런 흐름은 어떻습니까? → 수정 완료.
00:38:301 (1) 뉴콤보 제거해주세요, 여기서 뉴콤할만한 이유가 없습니다. → 수정 완료.


[Hard]
제 개인적인 의견이지만, 하드는 조금 흐름이나 패턴이 복잡하게 되있어서 지저분하게 보이네요.
조금만 패턴이랑 흐름에 신경을 쓰셨다면 좀더 좋은 하드가 되었을것 같네요.


00:35:588 (1) 뉴콤제거해주세요 그리고 00:36:386 여기다가 뉴콤넣어주시구요 → 수정 완료.


[Insane]
인세인은 제작자님이 직접 흐름을 보시면서, 몇가지를 개선하시는게 더좋은 방법이라고 판단하여 모딩을 하지 않았습니다.
몇가지 말씀드리자면, 인세인치고 노트간의 길이가 짧고, 밀도도 높고 ar9라고해도 제법 읽기가 난잡해서 어떤부분은 리매핑이나, 패턴자체를 바꾸셔야 될것같습니다.
→ 하드,인세인 문제는 역시 제 맵핑 경험 부족이네요. 알겠습니다!

감사합니다 ;)
eniyan
:) Hi :) from my queue!

[Easy]

  1. 00:08:301 (1,2) - prepare a line. Of course you should do form of 00:07:024 (2) with form of 00:08:301 (1) symmetrically.
    SS
    ↓prepare a line





    ↓do form of 00:07:024 (2) with form of 00:08:301 (1) symmetrically.


[Normal]

  1. 00:55:216 (1) - remove NC and add NC to 00:55:535 (2)
[Insane]

  1. 00:02:237 (2) - Ctrl+g
  1. 00:02:876 (4) - ^
  1. 01:05:110 (6,7,8) - I suggest that add note at 01:05:189 and 01:05:349.
[Hard]

  1. 00:31:120 (2,3) - I feel that it is too difficult for hard dif.





There is not so the place that I can point out, and I'm sorry.
As for me, most of this beatmap seems to be completed.
so i'm shooting a kudosu!
Topic Starter
Losertic

EnixYuki wrote:

:) Hi :) from my queue!

EnixYuki's Modding
[Easy]

  1. 00:08:301 (1,2) - prepare a line. Of course you should do form of 00:07:024 (2) with form of 00:08:301 (1) symmetrically. → Change 00:09:418 (2) slider.(i like 00:07:024 (2,1) slider) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1023795
    ↓prepare a line





    ↓do form of 00:07:024 (2) with form of 00:08:301 (1) symmetrically.


[Normal]

  1. 00:55:216 (1) - remove NC and add NC to 00:55:535 (2) → change new NC pattern. and fixed NC
[Insane]

  1. 00:02:237 (2) - Ctrl+g → i tried your idea. but, too easy..
  1. 00:02:876 (4) - ^ → same problem.
  1. 01:05:110 (6,7,8) - I suggest that add note at 01:05:189 and 01:05:349. → umm.. i tried. but, bad rythem..
[Hard]

  1. 00:31:120 (2,3) - I feel that it is too difficult for hard dif. → Okay, I missed..






There is not so the place that I can point out, and I'm sorry.
As for me, most of this beatmap seems to be completed.
so i'm shooting a kudosu!


Thank you for kudosu! ;)
Mao

~ From Queue~


[Easy]
00:37:503 (2) - Probably just me but I don't like the look of this slider. 00:36:386 (1) - How about replacing it with a flipped version of this one?
01:06:386 (1,2) - It would be look better imo when these 2 sliders would look the same

[Normal]
Nothing wrong in here :3

[Hard]
00:06:068 (1,2) - Why is (1) so far away from (2)?

[Insane]
00:03:833 (8,1,2) - How about reforming (2) to build a blanket with (8)?
00:04:631 (2,3) - Change spacing between those two.
00:38:301 (1) - Triple stack to the next red tick?
00:47:556 (1) - Change the placement of this cirle to build a blanket with 00:47:876 (2) - or to make it follow the slider path of 00:47:237 (5) -
01:03:673 (6,7) - Weird spacing.
01:04:790 (5,6) - Add a cirle on the blue tick between these

Really good mapset so just found some nitpicks :/ Enjoyed modding it. I hope my mod helps you and good luck :3
Topic Starter
Losertic

MetalJo wrote:


~ From Queue~


MetalJo's Modding
[Easy]
00:37:503 (2) - Probably just me but I don't like the look of this slider. 00:36:386 (1) - How about replacing it with a flipped version of this one? → Change slider axis, and shape. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040656
01:06:386 (1,2) - It would be look better imo when these 2 sliders would look the same → Fixed.

[Normal]
Nothing wrong in here :3 → o.0

[Hard]
00:06:068 (1,2) - Why is (1) so far away from (2)? → change new pattern, and fixed distance. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040623

[Insane]
00:03:833 (8,1,2) - How about reforming (2) to build a blanket with (8)?
00:04:631 (2,3) - Change spacing between those two. → Change another rythem. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040646
00:38:301 (1) - Triple stack to the next red tick? → Fixed.
00:47:556 (1) - Change the placement of this cirle to build a blanket with 00:47:876 (2) - or to make it follow the slider path of 00:47:237 (5) - → Fixed. and add note 00:47:716
01:03:673 (6,7) - Weird spacing. → Fixed.
01:04:790 (5,6) - Add a cirle on the blue tick between these → Fixed.

Really good mapset so just found some nitpicks :/ Enjoyed modding it. I hope my mod helps you and good luck :3
Thank you! ;)
frost-b-spec
thanks m4m~

really 1st map??
like this map :)

[General]
add tag : Wakeshima Kanon

[Hard]
AR+1?
00:25:216 (3) - x284
00:36:865 (2) - x107 y131

[Easy]
00:26:173 (1) - 3rd waypoint,1grid right and last waypoint,1grid up

Insane and Normal - fine.
Topic Starter
Losertic

frost-b-spec wrote:

thanks m4m~

really 1st map??
like this map :) → Thank you! ;) ;) ;)

frost-b-spec's Modding
[General]
add tag : Wakeshima Kanon → Fixed. she's write lyrics.... right?

[Hard]
AR+1? → i think better now! maybe it's AR8... too hard?
00:25:216 (3) - x284 → change perpect stack, fixed.
00:36:865 (2) - x107 y131 → change perpect stack, fixed.

[Easy]
00:26:173 (1) - 3rd waypoint,1grid right and last waypoint,1grid up → Fixed.

Insane and Normal - fine. → x_x b

Thank you! ;)
Asgard
[Hard]
일단 초반 부분이 하드치곤 좀 어려운것같네요

00:05:269 (5) - 왼쪽으로 돌리면 어떨까요? 1번 슬라이더랑 평행이 되도록.. 이렇게요 http://puu.sh/4Wi9p.jpg
00:06:546 (2) - 이것도 마찬가지로 왼쪽으로 좀 더 돌려주면 보기 더 좋을거같아요 25도정도
00:07:344 (4) - 디스탠스 조정해주세요 1.1로
00:08:461 (2) - 이것도 디스탠스 좀 어긋났네요
00:19:950 (2) - 1번 노트랑 스택시켜 주세요 http://puu.sh/4WicW.jpg 이렇게
00:29:524 (4) - 5번 슬라이더 시작부분에 놔도 좋을꺼같아요
00:31:599 (4) - 리버스?
01:09:737 (7) - 너무 동그랗게 만거 같네요
01:15:881 - 시작부터 10퍼로 바로 하지 말고 처음엔 60퍼정도로 시작했다가 갈수록 조금씩 소리를 줄여나가는것도 괜찮을꺼같아요 이런식으로
http://puu.sh/4Wik0.jpg

[insane]
00:01:120 (5,6,7,8,9) - 이렇게 단순한 패턴 쓸꺼면 차라리 별모양을 만들어보세요
00:03:195 (5) - 뉴콤보
00:07:344 (3) - 리버스
00:07:663 (4) - 리버스
00:49:950 (5) - 152 248
00:50:110 (6) - 256 114
00:50:747 (3) - 236 250

[Normal]
딱히 문제될건 안보이네요

[Easy]
마찬가지
Topic Starter
Losertic

Asgard wrote:

Asgard's Modding
[Hard]
일단 초반 부분이 하드치곤 좀 어려운것같네요

00:05:269 (5) - 왼쪽으로 돌리면 어떨까요? 1번 슬라이더랑 평행이 되도록.. 이렇게요 http://puu.sh/4Wi9p.jpg → 수정 완료.
00:06:546 (2) - 이것도 마찬가지로 왼쪽으로 좀 더 돌려주면 보기 더 좋을거같아요 25도정도 → 이거는 음.. 2번 슬라이더가 3번부분을 감싸는 느낌으로 한거라서... 이게 더 나아보여요. [/color]
00:07:344 (4) - 디스탠스 조정해주세요 1.1로 → 수정 완료.
00:08:461 (2) - 이것도 디스탠스 좀 어긋났네요 → 수정 완료.
00:19:950 (2) - 1번 노트랑 스택시켜 주세요 http://puu.sh/4WicW.jpg 이렇게 → 수정 완료.
00:29:524 (4) - 5번 슬라이더 시작부분에 놔도 좋을꺼같아요 → 수정 완료.
00:31:599 (4) - 리버스? → 이부분은 뭐지.. 간격이 0.6x...; 제 실수인가 봅니다.
01:09:737 (7) - 너무 동그랗게 만거 같네요 → 이건 (제 생각엔) 이쁘다고 생각합니다. 하드락걸어도 괜찮고 이런 슬라이더 솔직히 대충 만들었는데 제 느낌엔 이쁘게 나와서 냅뒀던거에요....
01:15:881 - 시작부터 10퍼로 바로 하지 말고 처음엔 60퍼정도로 시작했다가 갈수록 조금씩 소리를 줄여나가는것도 괜찮을꺼같아요 이런식으로
http://puu.sh/4Wik0.jpg → 수정 완료. insane 난이도도 마찬가지로 수정 완료

[insane]
00:01:120 (5,6,7,8,9) - 이렇게 단순한 패턴 쓸꺼면 차라리 별모양을 만들어보세요 → 단타로 툭툭치는것 보다 슬라이더 섞는게 더 자연스러울것 같아서 수정 했습니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1053048 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1053049
00:03:195 (5) - 뉴콤보 → 수정 완료.
00:07:344 (3) - 리버스 → 수정 완료.
00:07:663 (4) - 리버스 → 수정 완료.
00:49:950 (5) - 152 248 → 수정 완료.
00:50:110 (6) - 256 114 → 수정 완료.
00:50:747 (3) - 236 250 → 수정 완료.

[Normal]
딱히 문제될건 안보이네요

[Easy]
마찬가지


감사합니다. ;)

As님이 님이셨군요... 는 리맵핑 하시라 할줄 알았습니다ㅠ

솔직히 Hard,Insane이 좀...
[ Yuki ]_old
Hello~:3

[Easy]
00:09:418 (2) - 꼬리 피니쉬
00:15:322 (1) - 크랩 제거 and 피니쉬?
00:15:642 (2) - 크랩
01:15:881 (1) - 스핀 01:19:790에서 끝 <제안 (타이밍 포인트 하드,인세인처럼 소리 줄여주세여)

[Normal]
00:20:428 (1) - 크랩
00:48:514 (3,4) - 슬라이드가 어떨까요? <제안
01:15:881 (1) - 스핀 01:19:790에서 끝 <제안 (타이밍 포인트 하드,인세인처럼 소리 줄여주세여)

[Hard]
00:15:003 (4,5) - 슬라이드 어떨까요? <제안
00:15:482 (6,7) - ^


good Map!!
Topic Starter
Losertic

[ Yuki ] wrote:

Hello~:3

Yuki's Modding
[Easy]
00:09:418 (2) - 꼬리 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
00:15:322 (1) - 크랩 제거 and 피니쉬? → clap만 제거하겠습니다.
00:15:642 (2) - 크랩 → 수정 완료.
01:15:881 (1) - 스핀 01:19:790에서 끝 <제안 (타이밍 포인트 하드,인세인처럼 소리 줄여주세여) → 이렇게 강한 처리는 이지,노말에선 너무 어려울것 같아 스피너로 넣었습니다.

[Normal]
00:20:428 (1) - 크랩 → 없는것이 더 낫게 들리네요..
00:48:514 (3,4) - 슬라이드가 어떨까요? <제안 → 수정 완료.
01:15:881 (1) - 스핀 01:19:790에서 끝 <제안 (타이밍 포인트 하드,인세인처럼 소리 줄여주세여) → 이지와 동일합니다.

[Hard]
00:15:003 (4,5) - 슬라이드 어떨까요? <제안 → 이건 제가 처음부터 넣었던 패턴이고 맘에 들고 이쁘기에(??) 일단은 패스...
00:15:482 (6,7) - ^ → 위와 동일합니다.


good Map!!
감사합니다 ;)
Kinomi
Hi~hi~from my queue
reply to m4m req

Hard
00:01:759 (5) - NC
00:04:313 (1,2) - NC 2 and remove NC on 1
00:15:003 (4) - NC
NC is a mess try more regular way,NC every 1 long white tick in hard and insane,2 in easy and normal
00:05:747 (6) - move it a bit down
00:10:694 (4) - repalce it bt stream or repeater
00:26:652 (3) - try 3/4 rhythm
00:27:290 (1) - i prefer a slider here
00:37:503 (4) - a 1/1 slider + 1 note is better
00:56:971 (7) - be care for distance between sliders,current one looks not so good
01:02:237 (1) - rhythm here is complex,don't use a long slider to cover these drums
for example 01:11:812
01:12:131
some parts like these,you miss loud drum or other things this make diff inconsistent

Insane
too many empty notes,make diff looks inconsistent,you can use more slider to solve this problem
00:04:790 (3,4,5) - you can stack 5 on 00:04:312 (1) - 's tail and change 4 and 6's placement,current one looks random
00:10:774 add a note,make a stream to show the drum
00:20:429 (1) -make it a repeater,drum at 00:20:509 is loud
00:26:652 (6) - same as hard
00:27:769 (3) - blanket,decrease its curve
00:37:503 (8) - same as hard
00:52:184 (8,9,10) - i think there is stream here
01:02:237 you can here stream here,but change or no it's call you
01:06:227 add note,i think you should change this pattern,it dosen't fit the music imo,music is consistent here

i think easy and normal's rhythm isn't good
especially beginning and end
they sound strange
here is my rhythm
http://puu.sh/5bjEV.rar
only map the beginning
they are not best but i hope they can help you

also arrangement can be improved

let's all
good luck
Topic Starter
Losertic

Tsukuyomi wrote:

Hi~hi~from my queue
reply to m4m req

Tsukuyomi's Modding
Hard
00:01:759 (5) - NC
00:04:313 (1,2) - NC 2 and remove NC on 1
00:15:003 (4) - NC
NC is a mess try more regular way,NC every 1 long white tick in hard and insane,2 in easy and normal → remake NC of hard diff
00:05:747 (6) - move it a bit down → Fixed.
00:10:694 (4) - repalce it bt stream or repeater → Fixed reverse slider.
00:26:652 (3) - try 3/4 rhythm → i think better now
00:27:290 (1) - i prefer a slider here → Fixed.
00:37:503 (4) - a 1/1 slider + 1 note is better → Fixed.
00:56:971 (7) - be care for distance between sliders,current one looks not so good → Fixed.
01:02:237 (1) - rhythm here is complex,don't use a long slider to cover these drums → Fixed.
for example 01:11:812
01:12:131
some parts like these,you miss loud drum or other things this make diff inconsistent → Fixed.

Insane
too many empty notes,make diff looks inconsistent,you can use more slider to solve this problem
00:04:790 (3,4,5) - you can stack 5 on 00:04:312 (1) - 's tail and change 4 and 6's placement,current one looks random → Fixed.
00:10:774 add a note,make a stream to show the drum → Fixed.
00:20:429 (1) -make it a repeater,drum at 00:20:509 is loud → Fixed.
00:26:652 (6) - same as hard → i think better now
00:27:769 (3) - blanket,decrease its curve → Fixed.
00:37:503 (8) - same as hard → Fixed.
00:52:184 (8,9,10) - i think there is stream here → i think better now
01:02:237 you can here stream here,but change or no it's call you → ^ because it's follow vocal??
01:06:227 add note,i think you should change this pattern,it dosen't fit the music imo,music is consistent here → Fixed.

i think easy and normal's rhythm isn't good
especially beginning and end
they sound strange
here is my rhythm
http://puu.sh/5bjEV.rar
only map the beginning
they are not best but i hope they can help you

also arrangement can be improved

let's all
good luck
Thank you! ;)

I'll change easy,normal diff. because i'm sleep now-

Easy - non-fixed. because it's too hard. so i made easy pattern. umm

Normal - fixed some little.

ahh

sleep now. :o
kogasa_old_1
Boo! From my modding queue.

Easy
No problems here.

Normal
00:01:918 (3,4,5) - This is a little too fast and hard for normal mode.
00:05:269 (3) - Weird beat. Hard to read. Would be better on the white line. Try these:

It emphasizes the beat you wanted to but is more readable.

(Alternate suggestion)
00:54:259 (4,5,6) - If moved to curve more would flow better.

Hard
00:22:982 (5) - How about moving this to where the start of 00:22:024 (3) was?
00:34:312 (2) - Move to where 00:33:833 (3) is.

Insane
00:04:312 (1) - This combo's pattern was confusing and didn't flow well.

This is really good for your first map! Really nice. :)
Good luck!
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kogasa wrote:

Boo! From my modding queue.

kogasa's Modding
Easy
No problems here.

Normal
00:01:918 (3,4,5) - This is a little too fast and hard for normal mode. → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091773
00:05:269 (3) - Weird beat. Hard to read. Would be better on the white line. Try these: :D → umm, change rythem. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091787

It emphasizes the beat you wanted to but is more readable.

(Alternate suggestion)
00:54:259 (4,5,6) - If moved to curve more would flow better. → change this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091789

Hard
00:22:982 (5) - How about moving this to where the start of 00:22:024 (3) was? → Fixed.
00:34:312 (2) - Move to where 00:33:833 (3) is. → moved 00:34:631 (3) - and changed some notes axis. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091799

Insane
00:04:312 (1) - This combo's pattern was confusing and didn't flow well. → hmm, if i fix this mod, change another NC pattern...

This is really good for your first map! Really nice. :)
Good luck!
Wait, i'll check your mod..

Thank you! ;)
ritsu-tanaika
Hey, M4M

EASY

00:00:642 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning, to emphasize the start of the song

00:03:195 (1) - Would suggest stacking this on top of 00:00:642 (1) - to avoid the overlap (caused by low approach rate)

X:124 Y:184

00:10:854 (3) - - I think this note would be better if it was on 00:10:695 instead

00:15:961 (3) - Add a clap at the turn back point, clap should be at regular intervals

00:17:556 (4) - ^ but at the end of this slider instead

00:31:280 (1) - Should extend slider to 00:32:070, Easy difficulty shouldnt really follow complicated vocals, more on regular drum rhythm

00:52:024 (5) - Suggest adding this slider here to avoid the gap, gaps break rhythm and makes the player lose focus sometimes


01:02:876 (2) - Add a clap at beginning

01:05:110 (3) - I think its better if this slider started at 01:05:748 instead, and ending at 01:06:067

NORMAL

00:00:642 (1) - Add finish at the beginning, again, same reason as the first note on Easy

00:22:024 (2) - This note appears to be too high off screen, try to lower it to X:212 Y:48 to make it easier to hit

00:25:535 (1) - Add whistle at beginning, without it its totally silent

00:41:812 (2) - Try this rhythm, it sounds better than the current one, more accurate rhthym


00:44:046 (3,4) - Try not to stack these notes together, because it may be hard to distinguish under the same color

01:11:174 (1,2) - Its not recommended to have so many 1/2 sliders on a Normal difficulty, try separating them through white ticks only, or replace them with individual circles on the white ticks. many alternative ways so you'll have to experiment it yourself

01:12:450 (4,5) - Doesnt really fit the rhythm, try changing to one long slider from 01:12:450 to 01:13:088

HARD

00:10:376 (3) - Suggest adding a Finish to emphasize a note on the red tick

00:13:408 (1) - Spacing error, too far apart from 00:13:089 (4) -

00:26:971 (4) - I think the flow of the map would be better if this was stacked at the head of 00:26:173 (2) - instead of the tail, the tail forces the player to make awkward movements

00:29:684 (5) - Add this note here to avoid confusion in the rhythm, the gap creates the confusion

00:35:269 (4,5) - watch for spacing here

00:41:493 (2,3,4,5) - increase the volume of hitsounds of this square pattern, preferably 80%, and then add claps to 2 and 5

00:52:024 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesnt really flow well, consider changing to 2 1/2 sliders instead

01:06:865 (3) - Add a clap here, the note is silent without it

01:11:971 (1) - NC this note to make the two seperate patterns more obvious


Cant mod insane, sorry. but I hope I helped
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ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hey, M4M

ritsu-tanaika's Modding
EASY

00:00:642 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning, to emphasize the start of the song → Fixed.

00:03:195 (1) - Would suggest stacking this on top of 00:00:642 (1) - to avoid the overlap (caused by low approach rate)

X:124 Y:184 → okay, stack '1' slider's tail.

00:10:854 (3) - - I think this note would be better if it was on 00:10:695 instead → add slider 00:10:695 ~ 00:10:854

00:15:961 (3) - Add a clap at the turn back point, clap should be at regular intervals → Fixed hit clap (add some slidertick)

00:17:556 (4) - ^ but at the end of this slider instead → Fixed 00:17:556 - add hitclaps

00:31:280 (1) - Should extend slider to 00:32:070, Easy difficulty shouldnt really follow complicated vocals, more on regular drum rhythm → hmm, well. i think better now. it's slider. and 00:32:397 (2) - this note. follow vocal+drum sound. so.. i think better now!..

00:52:024 (5) - Suggest adding this slider here to avoid the gap, gaps break rhythm and makes the player lose focus sometimes → Fixed.


01:02:876 (2) - Add a clap at beginning → Fixed.

01:05:110 (3) - I think its better if this slider started at 01:05:748 instead, and ending at 01:06:067 → Fixed.

NORMAL

00:00:642 (1) - Add finish at the beginning, again, same reason as the first note on Easy → Fixed.

00:22:024 (2) - This note appears to be too high off screen, try to lower it to X:212 Y:48 to make it easier to hit → i checked this problem. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096798

00:25:535 (1) - Add whistle at beginning, without it its totally silent → hmm, i think... not? i don't have another hitwhistle sound.

00:41:812 (2) - Try this rhythm, it sounds better than the current one, more accurate rhthym → I first tried your rhythm..


00:44:046 (3,4) - Try not to stack these notes together, because it may be hard to distinguish under the same color → it's normal diff. it's alright!

01:11:174 (1,2) - Its not recommended to have so many 1/2 sliders on a Normal difficulty, try separating them through white ticks only, or replace them with individual circles on the white ticks. many alternative ways so you'll have to experiment it yourself → well, okay. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096813

01:12:450 (4,5) - Doesnt really fit the rhythm, try changing to one long slider from 01:12:450 to 01:13:088 → i think better now.

HARD

00:10:376 (3) - Suggest adding a Finish to emphasize a note on the red tick → Fixed.

00:13:408 (1) - Spacing error, too far apart from 00:13:089 (4) - → i think better now. maybe not hard.

00:26:971 (4) - I think the flow of the map would be better if this was stacked at the head of 00:26:173 (2) - instead of the tail, the tail forces the player to make awkward movements → Fixed.

00:29:684 (5) - Add this note here to avoid confusion in the rhythm, the gap creates the confusion → changed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096834

00:35:269 (4,5) - watch for spacing here → Fixed.

00:41:493 (2,3,4,5) - increase the volume of hitsounds of this square pattern, preferably 80%, and then add claps to 2 and 5 → Fixed.

00:52:024 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesnt really flow well, consider changing to 2 1/2 sliders instead → Fixed.

01:06:865 (3) - Add a clap here, the note is silent without it → Fixed.

01:11:971 (1) - NC this note to make the two seperate patterns more obvious → Fixed.


Cant mod insane, sorry. but I hope I helped
Thank you! ;)
TatsumiAlicekawa
Hello~ M4M~

It is the color that fit your background ←Though they are chinese,you know what to do.
[Easy]
Maybe AR+1
00:10:695 - feel uncomfortable.You can change it to a note at 00:10:854
[Normal]
00:06:067 - change to this
[Hard]
00:40:216 - add a clap
[Insane]
00:00:801 - Ctrl+G
00:04:790 - move to x:283 y:225 00:04:950 - move to x:156 y:225 00:05:110 - move to x:156 y:93 00:05:269 - move to x:286 y:94
00:30:163 - move to x:211 y:221

That`s all.I think your map is nice. :D And I will shoot a star.
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TatsumiAlicekawa wrote:

Hello~ M4M~ hi!

TatsumiAlicekawa's Modding
It is the color that fit your background ←Though they are chinese,you know what to do. → hmm? i added background image. so... pass?
[Easy]
Maybe AR+1 → umm... okay.
00:10:695 - feel uncomfortable.You can change it to a note at 00:10:854 → Fixed.
[Normal]
00:06:067 - change to this → i think better now
[Hard]
00:40:216 - add a clap → no, wait... 00:41:173 - add clap.
[Insane]
00:00:801 - Ctrl+G → maybe it's too easy?
00:04:790 - move to x:283 y:225 00:04:950 - move to x:156 y:225 00:05:110 - move to x:156 y:93 00:05:269 - move to x:286 y:94 → it's quadrangle o.o non-fixed. because it's too easy...?
00:30:163 - move to x:211 y:221 → i missed. change perfect star

That`s all.I think your map is nice. :D And I will shoot a star.
Thank you! ;)
-Teina-
[Insana]
open
00:06:705 (1,2) - try to reversion the qualify ↓


Sorry I can don't other uncomfortable thing.

Your map is very nice.
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tellertheworld wrote:

[Insanae]
open
00:06:705 (1,2) - try to reversion the qualify ↓


Sorry I can don't other uncomfortable thing.

Your map is very nice.
Fixed your mod.


Thank you! ;)
Mythiax
Hi, mod from



[General]
  1. Remove (TV Size) from the title.
    SPOILER

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.
[Easy]
  1. 00:48:993 (2) - I'm not sure about this note. It's in a red tick and it's confusing even for me :P
  2. 00:52:982 (1) - This sliders has a weird rhythm. Try this. Makes more sense with the song.
  3. 01:02:876 (2) - Remove the repeat and add a note at 01:04:471 - to emphasize the downbeat.
  4. 01:09:578 (2) - This slider doesn't look really good. Can you make a nicer one?
[Normal]
  1. Not much. All i can say is that it looks like a Normal +. So many notes lol
[Hard]
  1. AR +1 This is a High BPM map (188) and it plays much better with AR8. It helps map's reading.
  2. 00:34:152 (1,2) - This notes are confusing. You're using same spacing as 00:33:514 (2,3) - but it's closer in the time line. Read carefully: you should fix this ONLY if you DON'T change the AR. Having a higher AR makes it readable imo so, if you use AR8 this shouldn't be a problem at all.
[Insane]
  1. 00:15:003 (5) - NC here. The music asks for it.
  2. 00:53:461 - Add a note here, it feels so empty
I think that's all, some parts of your map are awkward but they're ok after all.

Good luck with this o/
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Zeroarg wrote:

Hi, mod from



Zeroarg's Modding
[General]
  1. Remove (TV Size) from the title. → umm, really?.. i think it's wrong answer. because http://osu.ppy.sh/s/110803 it's ranked. (actually, i don't know ↓this sentence. because i have bad english skill. maybe it's do not use a short ver, tv size.. etc.?)
    SPOILER

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.
[Easy]
  1. 00:48:993 (2) - I'm not sure about this note. It's in a red tick and it's confusing even for me :P → well, it's follow vocal. umm... i changed simple slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1152995
  2. 00:52:982 (1) - This sliders has a weird rhythm. Try this. Makes more sense with the song. → fix some hitsound. umm, not bad this slider ;_;.
  3. 01:02:876 (2) - Remove the repeat and add a note at 01:04:471 - to emphasize the downbeat. → Fixed.
  4. 01:09:578 (2) - This slider doesn't look really good. Can you make a nicer one? → okay
[Normal]
  1. Not much. All i can say is that it looks like a Normal +. So many notes lol → OwO
[Hard]
  1. AR +1 This is a High BPM map (188) and it plays much better with AR8. It helps map's reading. → nice!
  2. 00:34:152 (1,2) - This notes are confusing. You're using same spacing as 00:33:514 (2,3) - but it's closer in the time line. Read carefully: you should fix this ONLY if you DON'T change the AR. Having a higher AR makes it readable imo so, if you use AR8 this shouldn't be a problem at all. → i changed ar8
[Insane]
  1. 00:15:003 (5) - NC here. The music asks for it. → Fixed.
  2. 00:53:461 - Add a note here, it feels so empty → change slider
I think that's all, some parts of your map are awkward but they're ok after all.

Good luck with this o/
Thank you! ;)
Mythiax

Losertic wrote:

[General]
  1. Remove (TV Size) from the title. → umm, really?.. i think it's wrong answer. because http://osu.ppy.sh/s/110803 it's ranked. (actually, i don't know ↓this sentence. because i have bad english skill. maybe it's do not use a short ver, tv size.. etc.?)

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.
Here is a korean translation. Thanks to ykcarrot

곡의 제목에 공식적(신뢰할 수 있는 사이트로부터 제공된 정보)으로 "Short Ver." 혹은 "TV Size"가 붙어있지 않은 이상은 곡의 제목을 바꾸지마십시오.

No kds for this post ofc.
Andraxy
Very nice beatmap!
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TheANDRAXY wrote:

Very nice beatmap!
Thank you! ;)
No_Gu
M4M

[General]
your hitsound in kiai time is really noisy,try normal-hitclap in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50835 (sry...my puush doesn't work now so I can't upload the file directly)and add 24clap,it will better than yours

[Easy]
00:08:301 (1) - I strongly suggest shortening this by 1/4.First,00:08:939 matches nothing.Second,if you do so,the time distance between 00:08:301 (1,2) - will be 2/1,which is easier for newbies.
00:09:418 (2) - the head need a finish
00:10:854 (3,1,2) - a little crowded,I advise you to use 1.2x when you make your next map
00:13:407 (3) - use tick to follow the drums like 00:15:961 (3) - ?
00:19:790 (2,3) - add clap sounds very good
00:21:705 (1,1,2) - try like this? your flow is bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1190651
00:28:407 I'd add a note with clap
00:31:280 (1) - use tick to follow the drums
00:37:503 (2) - head - finish tail - clap
00:38:939 (1) - add whistle?

[Normal]
00:04:312 (3,5) - add whistle sounds good
00:09:099 (2,3,4) - 2's tail-finish 3-whitle 4-finish

[Hard]
00:22:024 (3) - head-clap
a little easy,maybe you can add some more 1/2s

[Insane]
00:05:110 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow
I advise you to reset all the NCs.add NC for downbeat,and each downbeat one NC

much better than the last time I modded.
you need take pains to find out the good method of adding NC and hitsound,but the map is ok enough since it's your first one?
maybe you can ask mod from BAT now
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No_Gu wrote:

M4M

No_Gu's Modding
[General]
your hitsound in kiai time is really noisy,try normal-hitclap in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50835 (sry...my puush doesn't work now so I can't upload the file directly)and add 24clap,it will better than yours → okay! I changed your hitsound

[Easy]
00:08:301 (1) - I strongly suggest shortening this by 1/4.First,00:08:939 matches nothing.Second,if you do so,the time distance between 00:08:301 (1,2) - will be 2/1,which is easier for newbies. → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191278
00:09:418 (2) - the head need a finish → Fixed.
00:10:854 (3,1,2) - a little crowded,I advise you to use 1.2x when you make your next map → ahhh-. right... (but, change 1.2x → maybe it's too hard..? hmm. anyway. nice advice o_o)
00:13:407 (3) - use tick to follow the drums like 00:15:961 (3) - ? → it's my mistake. Fixed.
00:19:790 (2,3) - add clap sounds very good → Fixed.
00:21:705 (1,1,2) - try like this? your flow is bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1190651 → Fixed.
00:28:407 I'd add a note with clap → Fixed.
00:31:280 (1) - use tick to follow the drums → Fixed.
00:37:503 (2) - head - finish tail - clap → Fixed.
00:38:939 (1) - add whistle? → umm. like another diff. (not use whistle → it's fine.)

[Normal]
00:04:312 (3,5) - add whistle sounds good → Fixed.
00:09:099 (2,3,4) - 2's tail-finish 3-whitle 4-finish → okay, and add custom whistle sound(it's original osu! soft-hitwhistle.wav file)

[Hard]
00:22:024 (3) - head-clap → Fixed.
a little easy,maybe you can add some more 1/2s → add some notes. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191186 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191196 - etc.

[Insane]
00:05:110 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow → Fixed.
I advise you to reset all the NCs.add NC for downbeat,and each downbeat one NC → okay. but umm.. it's too hard ;_;

much better than the last time I modded.
you need take pains to find out the good method of adding NC and hitsound,but the map is ok enough since it's your first one?
maybe you can ask mod from BAT now
i love hitsound mod

Thank you! ;)
Shohei Ohtani
SPOILER
haha i don't know what that black haired chick is named but I would do her multiple times.

Insane:
00:00:801 (4) - This feels weird to play mostly because it starts on the red tick, whereas the emphasis is on the white tick beforehand.
00:04:631 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd rather have the jumps more spaced out from (6). I'm not saying to increase spacing, but I'm getting really confused having to go back to (8) since it's so close to (6)
00:09:737 (1,2,3) - Would prefer it if these were in the same order as the previous notes
00:38:461 (2) - I know stacks are pretty but proper spacing is like having a personal stripper on your own private island. Make this spacing even so (3) isn't awkwardly shorter
00:45:801 (4) - ^

Hard:
00:17:237 (2) - Remove clap.
00:34:312 (2) - WOAH. Jumps are fun when they're natural, and this doesn't feel all too natural
00:38:301 (1) - Spinners should have some sort of meaning, weather it be a long held out note, or a low-key transitional area. This spinner is REALLY random. I'd personally just map this part.
00:52:024 (5) - Add normal hitnormal on the end of this slider
01:15:481 (2,3) - This is dying to be a jump

Normal:
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 pls

Easy:
00:26:173 (1) - This would be better not overlapping
00:38:860 (1) - Add some sort of hitsound to this. Maybe like a whistle or finish or something
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 ALSO pls

It's a good start. The biggest issues I'm finding is that although you have a decent grasp of sparsely using jumps, its important to also look at how jumps play. Even if something looks visually pleasing and looks cool to play, sometimes it might be awkward to actually achieve.
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CDFA wrote:

SPOILER
haha i don't know what that black haired chick is named but I would do her multiple times. → she's really.. :oops:

CDFA's Modding
Insane:
00:00:801 (4) - This feels weird to play mostly because it starts on the red tick, whereas the emphasis is on the white tick beforehand. → changed rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211440
00:04:631 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd rather have the jumps more spaced out from (6). I'm not saying to increase spacing, but I'm getting really confused having to go back to (8) since it's so close to (6) → hmm.. right. too close '6' note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211459
00:09:737 (1,2,3) - Would prefer it if these were in the same order as the previous notes → okay.
00:38:461 (2) - I know stacks are pretty but proper spacing is like having a personal stripper on your own private island. Make this spacing even so (3) isn't awkwardly shorter → (...maybe)it's pretty shape hmm. changed http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211697
00:45:801 (4) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211694 like this?

Hard:
00:17:237 (2) - Remove clap. → Fixed.
00:34:312 (2) - WOAH. Jumps are fun when they're natural, and this doesn't feel all too natural → hmm. okay. it's too hard o.o i changed 1.1x distance.
00:38:301 (1) - Spinners should have some sort of meaning, weather it be a long held out note, or a low-key transitional area. This spinner is REALLY random. I'd personally just map this part. → remove spinner. add note(slider) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211403
00:52:024 (5) - Add normal hitnormal on the end of this slider → hitnormal?.. umm. i don't know. (it's N:C1 Sound)
01:15:481 (2,3) - This is dying to be a jump → remove NC

Normal:
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 pls → MAYBE IT'S MY MISTAKE.

Easy:
00:26:173 (1) - This would be better not overlapping → Fixed.
00:38:860 (1) - Add some sort of hitsound to this. Maybe like a whistle or finish or something → add soft-whistle
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 ALSO pls → ALSO MAYBE IT'S MY MISTAKE.

It's a good start. The biggest issues I'm finding is that although you have a decent grasp of sparsely using jumps, its important to also look at how jumps play. Even if something looks visually pleasing and looks cool to play, sometimes it might be awkward to actually achieve. → thanks advice. (maybe it will be improved)
Thank you! ;)
Andraxy
HARD: Add a circle on white tick 00:34:152 (x383,y273)
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TheANDRAXY wrote:

HARD: Add a circle on white tick 00:34:152 (x383,y273)

nice~ fixed this axis (444,320)

(it's my mistake. where is my note?)
yurunneram
Haru :3

EASY

00:17:556 (4) - Stack not perfect

00:26:173 (1) - Extend by half a beat

00:52:024 (4,1) - this is so much nicer

NORMAL

00:56:174 (3) - Blanket nicer?

Can't mod hard :< or insane :<< gomen

Wheeeeeeeeeeee~

lazy mod, dun give kudos

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
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yurunneram wrote:

Haru :3 HELLO!

yurunneram's Modding
EASY

00:17:556 (4) - Stack not perfect → Fixed. like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1243051

00:26:173 (1) - Extend by half a beat → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1243222

00:52:024 (4,1) - this is so much nicer → Fixed.

NORMAL

00:56:174 (3) - Blanket nicer? → Fixed.

Can't mod hard :< or insane :<< gomen

Wheeeeeeeeeeee~

lazy mod, dun give kudos → doesn't matter. 8-) you check some problems. and i fixed this. decisively reason- you tried first mod this beatmap.

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Thank you! ;)
jonathanlfj
so uhh the beatmap is corrupt for me when i tried to download it, i did some tweaking and was able to extract the files, but you might want to confirm if others are having the same issue

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
i think the osz corruption is due to a file called "__ - normal-hitclap2" (yes it has 2 extra underscores and the dash) in the osz, not sure where it came from but you probably want to check if you have that in your local map folder and delete it
the timing at 01:05:110 is a bit off; add a red line at 01:05:145 and then restore the timing with another red line at 01:05:748. make sure to resnap everything!

[Easy]
00:04:471 (2) - might want a finish on the end to catch the cymbal crash
00:26:173 (1) - sounds more fitting if you ended this at 00:27:290; also add a finish on the start here
00:32:397 (2) - the rhythm difference here is somewhat hard to grasp for a newbie player; make this a slider ending at 00:32:876 instead
00:36:386 (1) - finish on start
01:00:003 - add a note here to cover for the vocals
01:02:876 (2) - use this rhythm instead, covers the down beat at 01:03:195: 01:05:748 (1) - finish on start

[Normal]
00:04:312 (3,4,5,6) - could use some whistles here so it doesnt sound too blant; i would add it on 00:04:312 (3,6)
00:22:024 (2) - lower this a bit, would flow better with 00:21:387 (1,3) (e.g. x:228 y:164)
00:42:290 - this should be covered with something; you can add a note here or use a 1/2 slider and then delete 00:42:450 (3)
01:02:876 (2) - use a 3-point slider here for a more natural curve
01:09:418 (3,6) - you can add whistles here too

[Hard]
use HP6, fits the overall note density of this diff better
00:10:056 (2) - should have a finish on the start here to match the cymbal in the music
00:23:620 (1,2) - use a better blanket here will make it look a lot nicer
00:33:354 - i would add a note here to catch the drum roll
00:42:290 (1) - NC here is not really necessary; if you want to keep this then move the next NC to start on 00:43:088 (2) instead
00:45:003 (1,2) - this would fit the music better if you used a rhythm like this: 01:00:641 (8) - NC here since combo is quite long
01:05:110 (4) - uhh break this into 3 notes? would fit the drum pattern in the music nicely (or repeat slider or anything else that covers 01:05:269)
01:09:737 (7) - clap with sliderslide? the clap is skipped over at 01:09:897
01:15:163 (6) - i would add a NC here to emphasize the finishing pattern

[Insane]
00:05:269 (6) - the stacking here is quite flow breaking; i would place this at somewhere like x:200 y:164 for a nice circular flow
00:10:056 (3) - finish on start
00:13:407 (8) - NC here, combo is way too long
00:25:216 (6,7) - try ctrl+g on this, would give a more interesting flow for playing
00:28:727 (1) - forgot clap on end
00:33:833 (5) - add a NC here, remove the one at 00:36:067 (1) and add one onto 00:36:386 (3); this way its neater and fits the music better
00:42:290 (5,1,2) - these 3 should be the same color since they belong to one jump
00:52:663 (11,12) - try moving these two like this, flows much better imo: 01:01:280 (3) - delete this note, because of the way you handled 00:50:907 (4,5) its really easy to think that the same rhythm applies here and miss-hit the note
01:04:790 (5,6) - due to the timing change mentioned before you could change this to one 3/4 slider to avoid timing confusion
01:12:135 (6,7,8,9) - this is easier to handle if you stacked 01:12:135 (6,7) together and 01:12:454 (8,9) together, leaving 01:12:773 (10) out of the stack

Well thats about it from me, let me know when you are done with fixing
Topic Starter
Losertic

jonathanlfj wrote:

so uhh the beatmap is corrupt for me when i tried to download it, i did some tweaking and was able to extract the files, but you might want to confirm if others are having the same issue

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

jonathanlfj's Modding
[General]
i think the osz corruption is due to a file called "__ - normal-hitclap2" (yes it has 2 extra underscores and the dash) in the osz, not sure where it came from but you probably want to check if you have that in your local map folder and delete it → okay! (it's copy files. it's my mistake. removed)
the timing at 01:05:110 is a bit off; add a red line at 01:05:145 and then restore the timing with another red line at 01:05:748. make sure to resnap everything! → nice. i don't know how thinking this fact

[Easy]
00:04:471 (2) - might want a finish on the end to catch the cymbal crash → Fixed.
00:26:173 (1) - sounds more fitting if you ended this at 00:27:290; also add a finish on the start here → fixed, but.. umm, it's too hard? well- i don't know. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259465
00:32:397 (2) - the rhythm difference here is somewhat hard to grasp for a newbie player; make this a slider ending at 00:32:876 instead → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259470
00:36:386 (1) - finish on start → Fixed.
01:00:003 - add a note here to cover for the vocals → Fixed.
01:02:876 (2) - use this rhythm instead, covers the down beat at 01:03:195: → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125950901:05:748 (1) - finish on start → Fixed.

[Normal]
00:04:312 (3,4,5,6) - could use some whistles here so it doesnt sound too blant; i would add it on 00:04:312 (3,6) → i missed. i'm already fixed this mod, but... umm where is my whistle sound?.. Fixed.
00:22:024 (2) - lower this a bit, would flow better with 00:21:387 (1,3) (e.g. x:228 y:164) → Fixed.
00:42:290 - this should be covered with something; you can add a note here or use a 1/2 slider and then delete 00:42:450 (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259528 you find nice sound. Fixed. ah. but i think hard rhythm? umm..
01:02:876 (2) - use a 3-point slider here for a more natural curve :) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259532
01:09:418 (3,6) - you can add whistles here too → Fixed.

[Hard]
use HP6, fits the overall note density of this diff better → Fixed.
00:10:056 (2) - should have a finish on the start here to match the cymbal in the music → Fixed.
00:23:620 (1,2) - use a better blanket here will make it look a lot nicer → like this! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259559
00:33:354 - i would add a note here to catch the drum roll → change this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259581
00:42:290 (1) - NC here is not really necessary; if you want to keep this then move the next NC to start on 00:43:088 (2) instead → remove NC '1' note
00:45:003 (1,2) - this would fit the music better if you used a rhythm like this: → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125958601:00:641 (8) - NC here since combo is quite long → Fixed.
01:05:110 (4) - uhh break this into 3 notes? would fit the drum pattern in the music nicely (or repeat slider or anything else that covers 01:05:269) → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259605 and changed some rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259632
01:09:737 (7) - clap with sliderslide? the clap is skipped over at 01:09:897 → umm. fixed sliderslide. (but it's bad sound?.. i don't know.)
01:15:163 (6) - i would add a NC here to emphasize the finishing pattern → fixed, and changed some axis http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259638

[Insane]
00:05:269 (6) - the stacking here is quite flow breaking; i would place this at somewhere like x:200 y:164 for a nice circular flow → Fixed.
00:10:056 (3) - finish on start → Fixed.
00:13:407 (8) - NC here, combo is way too long → Fixed.
00:25:216 (6,7) - try ctrl+g on this, would give a more interesting flow for playing → nice.
00:28:727 (1) - forgot clap on end → Fixed.
00:33:833 (5) - add a NC here, remove the one at 00:36:067 (1) and add one onto 00:36:386 (3); this way its neater and fits the music better → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259691
00:42:290 (5,1,2) - these 3 should be the same color since they belong to one jump → 00:42:450 (1) - remove NC
00:52:663 (11,12) - try moving these two like this, flows much better imo: → it's pretty ;) 01:01:280 (3) - delete this note, because of the way you handled 00:50:907 (4,5) its really easy to think that the same rhythm applies here and miss-hit the note → :roll: hmmmm. make sure -change too hard this part? okay-
01:04:790 (5,6) - due to the timing change mentioned before you could change this to one 3/4 slider to avoid timing confusion → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259785
01:12:135 (6,7,8,9) - this is easier to handle if you stacked 01:12:135 (6,7) together and 01:12:454 (8,9) together, leaving 01:12:773 (10) out of the stack → Fixed.

Well thats about it from me, let me know when you are done with fixing
Thank you! ;)

also, re-check some hitsounds. redownload plz~~
jonathanlfj
alright quick recheck no kd

first of all you forgot to restore the timing at 01:05:748; add a red line there and resnap everything


[Easy]
00:26:173 (1) - since you didnt end this at the place i said, shorten it to 00:26:971 instead; fits the music much better imo

[Normal]
00:17:876 (4,1,2) - aline them properly (move 00:18:513 (1) towards bottom left)
01:04:950 (3) - due to the timing change this slider end is unsnapped (and you can't fix it unless you hack the osu code); i would recommend you remove it entirely and have a 1/2 slider starting at 01:05:145 instead

[Hard]
01:09:897 - unsnapped green line, resnap this preperly once you get that new red timing in here

[Insane]
00:33:035 (3) - you can replace this with a triplet to get that drum roll in the music
00:51:227 (5) - stack on 00:50:110 (10)?
01:04:790 (5,1) - hmm i meant that you could stack 01:05:145 (1) after 01:04:790 (5), something like this:
just make sure you have that red line added and the unsnapped stuff sorted out
Topic Starter
Losertic

jonathanlfj wrote:

alright quick recheck no kd
jonathanlfj's Modding

first of all you forgot to restore the timing at 01:05:748; add a red line there and resnap everything
ALL CHECK!

[Easy]
00:26:173 (1) - since you didnt end this at the place i said, shorten it to 00:26:971 instead; fits the music much better imo → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1262412

[Normal]
00:17:876 (4,1,2) - aline them properly (move 00:18:513 (1) towards bottom left) → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1262501
01:04:950 (3) - due to the timing change this slider end is unsnapped (and you can't fix it unless you hack the osu code); i would recommend you remove it entirely and have a 1/2 slider starting at 01:05:145 instead → Fixed.

[Hard]
01:09:897 - unsnapped green line, resnap this preperly once you get that new red timing in here → Fixed.

[Insane]
00:33:035 (3) - you can replace this with a triplet to get that drum roll in the music → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1262461
00:51:227 (5) - stack on 00:50:110 (10)? → Fixed.
01:04:790 (5,1) - hmm i meant that you could stack 01:05:145 (1) after 01:04:790 (5), something like this: → good idea!

just make sure you have that red line added and the unsnapped stuff sorted out

thanks for recheck!!
jonathanlfj
alright everything looks fine on my end, good luck on your first rank!

Bubbled~
Mythiax
go, this song needs a ranked mapset.
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