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nano.RIPE - Tsumabiku Hitori

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xChippy
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xChippy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zaterdag 29 maart 2014 at 5:42:59

Artist: nano.RIPE
Title: Tsumabiku Hitori
Source: Hataraku Maou-sama!
Tags: unitedwesin The Devil is a Part-Timer! ending Sasaki Jun Kimiko moway
BPM: 145
Filesize: 4499kb
Play Time: 02:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 522 notes)
  2. Moway's Hard (4,9 stars, 328 notes)
  3. UWS's Normal (2,98 stars, 163 notes)
Download: nano.RIPE - Tsumabiku Hitori
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ninth ranked map~~!!

Hataraku Maou-sama! Last EP ED Theme~
Thanks Jonathanlfj for mp3 and for cutting it~
Normal by UnitedWeSin
Hard by Moway
Insane by xChippy
Last edited by xChippy , edited 62 times in total.
Xinely
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Xinely
first :)
Umi
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Umi
#2 >3</
Oyatsu
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Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
#3 ><
CeilingPanda
148 posts
Joined June 2012
CeilingPanda
I can do a timing check but I do believe that your song needs 30 seconds of DRAINING time to be ranked not just 30 seconds long.
I would suggest you looping it or re cut it so the offset(s?) won't be off after a change.
xChippy
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xChippy
Err it's not done yet o-o that 30 sec is what I mapped untill now Total draining time will be 2:30, I requested soo... I wouldn't have to resnap everything after I'm done mapping
CeilingPanda
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CeilingPanda
Timing seems fine, sorry for the earlier reply, just wanted to point it out to help you, (I did not have time to check it back then).
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar
Did some timing check here. Good luck on your map! :D

Log yeah
14:06 xChippy: Heeey Hinsvar >w<
14:06 Hinsvar: Hey :D
14:06 xChippy: Err... When you have time could you check the timing of my new map ^^?
14:07 Hinsvar: Hmm, it's okay.
14:07 Hinsvar: I'm modding right now.
14:07 Hinsvar: If I'm done, I'll get to you :P
14:07 xChippy: Okay :3, Thanks~ ^^
14:07 Hinsvar: No problem :D
15:12 Hinsvar: Uh, hi.
15:12 Hinsvar: I have finished modding.
15:12 Hinsvar: I can check the timing now :P
15:12 xChippy: Hehe yay :3
15:12 xChippy: err this is the map:
15:12 *xChippy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/273639 nano.RIPE - Tsumabiku Hitori (Cut Ver.)]
15:13 Hinsvar: Hmm, okay, let me download it first, of course :D
15:13 xChippy: hehe :3
15:17 *Hinsvar is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/273639 nano.RIPE - Tsumabiku Hitori (Cut Ver.)]
15:17 Hinsvar: k got it here
15:18 xChippy: :3
15:27 Hinsvar: Hmm, 488 seems to be better for the offset lol
15:28 xChippy: okay I'll try it out :3
15:32 xChippy: I'm getting 7ms early most of the time o-o
15:32 Hinsvar: Hmm, weird.
15:32 Hinsvar: Maybe we should make the offset even earlier.
15:33 xChippy: oops I mean late =w=
15:33 Hinsvar: lol ok.
15:35 Hinsvar: Hmm, 7 eh.
15:35 Hinsvar: Maybe try 495?
15:35 Hinsvar: Have tested, and yep, actually feels better.
15:35 xChippy: alright trying now :3
15:36 xChippy: better I guess around 0-5 now
15:39 Hinsvar: Oh wait, late? Damn it lol
15:39 Hinsvar: Hmm.
15:39 Hinsvar: Try 484 now? o.o
15:42 xChippy: getting +11
15:42 xChippy: o-o
15:42 xChippy: 9~11
15:42 Hinsvar: what
15:42 Hinsvar: +11 here means late by 11ms?
15:42 xChippy: yes
15:42 Hinsvar: what the
15:42 xChippy: around 493-496 it's around 0~3
15:42 Hinsvar: The earlier the offset, it shouldn't get more late lol
15:42 Hinsvar: Or is my logic wrong...
15:42 xChippy: o-o
15:43 xChippy: If it's more late shouldn't it be increased o-o?
15:44 Hinsvar: Hmm, well, let's just try again.
15:46 xChippy: 498?
15:47 xChippy: I got alot 0~2
15:47 Hinsvar: I think 497 is nice, but since they're only different by 1ms...
15:49 Hinsvar: Hmm, 498 should be good, IMO.
15:50 xChippy: nope getting not much difference :3 93.54 acc and 93.87 :3
15:50 xChippy: but playing =w=
15:50 xChippy: bad*
15:50 Hinsvar: Nah, I'm not really good at playing too :P
15:50 xChippy: bpm is correct o-o?
15:51 Hinsvar: Yes.
15:51 xChippy: hookay :3
15:51 Hinsvar: That's it I guess? :p
15:51 xChippy: yep :3
15:51 Hinsvar: Ah, k then :D
15:51 xChippy: Post in thread so I can kds you @.@
15:52 Hinsvar: lol ok
Kin
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Kin
can I make 2 taiko GD ? :)
xChippy
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xChippy

Kin wrote:

can I make 2 taiko GD ? :)
Err.. Sorry not accepting any GD for this map :/
neonat
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neonat
Just an observation here, for 02:17:979 (1) - it ends at 02:20:669 wouldn't you rather it end at 02:20:772 instead?
xChippy
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xChippy

neonat wrote:

Just an observation here, for 02:17:979 (1) - it ends at 02:20:669 wouldn't you rather it end at 02:20:772 instead?
yep you're correct =w=
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
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neonat
Other than that, nice map. Good luck!

Edit: Nice Insane ;X
UnitedWeSin
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UnitedWeSin
nano.Ripe <3
Normal finish! :3
http://puu.sh/3OWXl.osu
xChippy
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xChippy
Updated~
Wafu
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Wafu
Hard is WIP. Done 50%
I will add diff by editing this post.

Btw. Kiais are not snapped, fix it.
No kd for this post.
Last edited by Wafu , edited 1 time in total.
xChippy
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xChippy
Oops fixed the Kiais~
Black Abyss
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Black Abyss
GOD PLEASE LET THIS GET RANKED.
happy623
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happy623
:roll:
Moway
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Moway
Sorry for the long delay :P

http://puu.sh/5tcya.osu
xChippy
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xChippy
Thanks Moway >w<
Aight I guess owo To pending~~
yurunneram
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yurunneram
NORMAL

01:11:669 (1) - Ya could actually bend this a bit more and make it blanket the end of (3)

01:54:703 (1) - Move bit left? :3 the overlap looks a bit ugly

HARD

00:00:497 (1,2,3) - Did not like this bit... would spread out 1 and two

00:23:462 (5) - NC?

00:43:324 (6) - Stack over (1)?

01:43:945 (7) - Blanket nicer

not much :P Not bad I'd say. but interesting mapping~ No kudos pls

You have been modded out by Yurun _________ Neram~ ;)
DenoisoGoiso
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DenoisoGoiso
Hi~ From my queue

[General]
  1. good
[UWS's Normal]
  1. 00:05:462 (1) - NC is not useless so delete it because the Rhythm not changing
  2. 00:18:703 (1) - ^
  3. 00:21:600 (7) - just little suggestion here :
    SPOILER
  4. 00:33:600 (2) - don't curve it?
  5. 00:33:600 (2) - x:252 for the straight
  6. 00:58:014 (4,1) - Blanket nicer?
  7. 01:17:876 (5) - same suggestion like 00:21:600 (7)
  8. 02:01:324 (1) - Wave slider?? oh please change it into new shape :P
  9. 02:13:945 (4) - Stack nicer
  10. :3 done. My skill to mod BAT's diff is Lv.3 :o
[Moway's Hard]
  1. 00:01:324 (4) - Make it curve again?
  2. 00:06:083 (2) - More good. it's like blanketing with 00:05:462 (1) but fail lol
    SPOILER
  3. 00:07:117 (5) - While stanza you should add NC here
  4. 00:13:531 (4) - (End slider) stack nicer with 00:11:669 (7)
  5. 00:14:152 (5) - same suggestion at 00:07:117 (5)
  6. 00:23:462 (5) - Add NC
  7. 00:33:393 (6) - ^
  8. 00:43:324 (6) - Stack nicer
  9. 00:46:428 (5) - the end slider not really stack with 00:47:669 (8,10) these objects
  10. 00:53:461 (5) - not snapped
  11. 01:11:255 (7) - More curve, it's more perfect blanketing with next slider
  12. 01:57:393 (4,1) - Blanket. Here is the suggestion :
    SPOILER
  13. Done? alright ahuehuehue
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:495 (1) - not snapped huehuehue
  2. 02:12:289 (4) - object end not snapped
  3. Just check not snapped. ahuehuehue moe diff
That. Good luck~
xChippy
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xChippy
Fixed the unsnapped notes plus unticked the countdown etc on all diffs~~
Evil_Twilight
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Evil_Twilight
[Colours]
Combo1 : 85,170,255
Combo2 : 255,91,91
Combo3 : 0,183,91
Combo4 : 255,154,53

try these colours

[Insane]
00:01:324 (4) - add finish
00:07:117 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1182097
00:13:945 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:07:117 (1,2,3,4,5) - , make a stat will be better
00:15:393 (1) - add finish
00:31:428 (6) - add whistle
00:37:117 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1182120
00:59:772 (6) - change slider to note, and add a 1/2 slider on 00:59:876 (7) -
01:05:048 (1) - add finish
01:16:428 (5,1) - add somethings between here?
01:36:910 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - make a hexagon?

[Moway's Hard]
00:14:152 (5) - add NC
00:15:393 (1) - add finish
00:49:738 (3) - move to x:375 y:275
01:11:048 (6) - add clap

[UWS's Normal]
seems fine :D
xChippy
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xChippy

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 85,170,255
Combo2 : 255,91,91
Combo3 : 0,183,91
Combo4 : 255,154,53

try these colours aight fixed colour in all diffs owo

[Insane]
00:01:324 (4) - add finish fixed
00:07:117 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1182097 did it kinda owo
00:13:945 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:07:117 (1,2,3,4,5) - , make a stat will be better I prefer this one tho OAO imo better with music
00:15:393 (1) - add finish fixed
00:31:428 (6) - add whistle fixed
00:37:117 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1182120 the rythm here is a bit meeh to do this
00:59:772 (6) - change slider to note, and add a 1/2 slider on 00:59:876 (7) - did own changes
01:05:048 (1) - add finish fixed
01:16:428 (5,1) - add somethings between here? kinda like this break that the vocal offers
01:36:910 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - make a hexagon? I like the messy jumps Í´m using ><
Thx for modding! :3
UnitedWeSin
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UnitedWeSin
yurunneram

yurunneram wrote:

NORMAL

01:11:669 (1) - Ya could actually bend this a bit more and make it blanket the end of (3)
My intention wasn't really to blanket there so the 3 is placed a bit to the right.

01:54:703 (1) - Move bit left? :3 the overlap looks a bit ugly
I wanted the 1 to be on the center line. The overlap isn't so bad to me, I'd like to leave as is.

DenoisoGoiso

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

[UWS's Normal]
  1. 00:05:462 (1) - NC is not useless so delete it because the Rhythm not changing
    fixed
  2. 00:18:703 (1) - ^
    k
  3. 00:21:600 (7) - just little suggestion here :
    SPOILER
    I'd like to leave it like this, it's more interesting and beautiful for me.
  4. 00:33:600 (2) - don't curve it?
  5. 00:33:600 (2) - x:252 for the straight
    I think I prefer the flow when it's curved here.
  6. 00:58:014 (4,1) - Blanket nicer?
    k
  7. 01:17:876 (5) - same suggestion like 00:21:600 (7)
    This placement seems better for me :\
  8. 02:01:324 (1) - Wave slider?? oh please change it into new shape :P
    I like the wave slider ;_;
  9. 02:13:945 (4) - Stack nicer
  10. :3 done. My skill to mod BAT's diff is Lv.3 :o

Thanks so much for modding! :)
http://puu.sh/5Rxgz.rar
xChippy
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xChippy
Thx UWS Updated also changed the combo colours~ update pls :3
Rizia
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Rizia
[Insane]
HP -1/2?
00:28:014 - Try this if you like :3 [ http://puu.sh/5XZzO.jpg ](1 is 1/6)
00:39:600 (http://puu.sh/5XZHr.jpg)
01:16:841 - & 01:17:048 - add note , same as 02:06:497 -

sorry for poor mod :(
xChippy
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xChippy

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Insane]
HP -1/2?
00:28:014 - Try this if you like :3 [ http://puu.sh/5XZzO.jpg ](1 is 1/6) fixed
00:39:600 (http://puu.sh/5XZHr.jpg) Tried it but imo current on is a bit better
01:16:841 - & 01:17:048 - add note , same as 02:06:497 - imo this break from the vocal is pretty nice owo so nope

sorry for poor mod :(
Thanks for modding! ;3/

13/2/2014 Well remapped it a bit here and there~ Ready again ;33
Zekmer
68 posts
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Zekmer
From my queue!

[UWS's Normal]

00:14:979 (3) - Put slider start at at x:260 y:184 and slider end at x:256 y:124
00:21:600 (4) - Straighten it out, looks better.
00:25:324 (1) - Move to y:124
01:04:634 (5) - Straighten it out.
01:17:876 (5) - Same as above.
01:54:290 (5) - Same as above and move slider end to x:288 y:120
02:07:531 (5) - Same as above and move slider start to x:348 y:296 and end to x:292 y:324

[Moway's Hard]

00:06:083 (2) - Blankets better if you put the slider end at x:288 y:200
01:54:083 (10) - Looks better if slider end is at x:104 y:136 (Just a personal preference)

[Insane]

Nothing to mention here.


Cool map and song, good luck on getting this map ranked!
[Twinkle]
179 posts
Joined October 2012
[Twinkle]
NM from my Q

[UWS's Normal]
nothing special found

[Moway's Hard]
ar-1 and hp-1 might be better
SV maybe to high since the bpm is not so high
well mapped

[Insane]
ar-1 for bpm 145 ar8 is better for ranking peosonally I love ar9
OD-1 make it OD7 since it has many streams
00:24:290 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part is too hard for an insane diff, u may move the last 3 notes closer
02:21:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - final part is not so necessary i think.

nice song, good luck for ranking~
xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy

[Twinkle] wrote:

NM from my Q

[Insane]
ar-1 for bpm 145 ar8 is better for ranking peosonally I love ar9 it wouldn't fit imo, AR9 is pretty suitable here imo
OD-1 make it OD7 since it has many streams Changed hp+1 OD-1
00:24:290 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part is too hard for an insane diff, u may move the last 3 notes closer made a little bit easier
02:21:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - final part is not so necessary i think. I pretty like this tho, having an outro

nice song, good luck for ranking~
Thx for modding <3333
happy623
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happy623
support! o/
xChippy
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xChippy

happy623 wrote:

support! o/
Thx o/~~!!
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
[UWS's Normal]
Nice :)
[Moway's Hard]
00:15:393 (1) - Finish on the head
00:24:290 (7) - NC?
[Insane]
02:21:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Not sure if all these notes are really necessary. They're a bit too extra if you ask me.

Noob mod :roll: take my star
Good luck!
XinCrin
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Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hello , From my queue ~

I'm so rusty for modding, Sorry for the poor mod

UWS's Normal

  1. 00:18:703 (3) For consistency , remove this Finish from the beginning of slider
  2. 00:30:290 (2) Move the last sliderpoint to x:176 y:328 , Since the slider tail , goes off from the game screen
  3. 02:00:910 (5) Move to x:348 y:280 , same reason from above
Great difficulty

Moway's Hard

  1. 00:00:910 (2) Remove the Finish from this circle , honestly sounds better . Also if you will use a finish here , it should be here too 00:00:497 (1) , since it's
    the same sound in the music
  2. 00:02:152 (1) Put a Finish at the beginning of this slider , since sounds fine
  3. 01:40:634 (6,7) Replace these both sliders with 1 slider with revers and 1 circle for a better flow . Try something like this :
    SPOILER

Insane

  1. 01:09:186 (x) You should put a circle here , imo . It follows better the music
Good Luck with this project :3
xChippy
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xChippy
@10crystalmask01 well after many complaint I just changed the rythm instead owo
@XinCrin that beat doesnt have any sound on it tho OAO, but the blue tick before that one does but plays weird imo, this way nice break for that highlighting vocal
Thx for modding both~~ :3/!!!
Waiting for Moway/UWS owo
Satellite
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Joined June 2012
Satellite


[General]
  1. PreviewTime is not snapped? change 64019 → 64014 better.
[UWS's Normal]
  1. 00:24:497 (4,1) - ctrl + h only 00:24:497 (4) - this. I guess more follow the flow better?
    suggestion
  2. 00:55:117 (1) - add whistle on return slider.
  3. 01:04:221 (4) - add sampleset : D ? I think drum fit here.
  4. 01:16:014 (2) - add whistle here.
  5. 01:22:634 (2) - add clap?
  6. 01:25:945 (2) - remove clap. I guess whistle better.
  7. 01:34:841 (1) - add whistle on return slider.
  8. 01:40:634 (4,5) - Why the pattern was different? 00:50:979 (4,5) -
  9. 01:53:876 (4) - same as 01:04:221 (4) - here.
[Moway's Hard]
  1. 00:02:152 (1) - add Finish on head? I guess fit.
  2. 00:15:393 (1) - ^
  3. 00:18:703 (1,2) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Please use a different slider.
  4. 00:53:461 (5) - slider unsnapped.
  5. 01:56:359 (1) - remove Nc. why use a different pattern?
[Insane]
  1. HP-1 , HP8 is really high :o
  2. 00:41:255 (6) - 1/6 ? I like easy rhythm!! try this.
  3. 00:50:359 - add note on 00:49:945 (6) - here!!!
    try mini jump!
  4. 00:51:600 (8) - humm. I think stack 00:50:565 (1) - here better, because 00:51:807 (1) - To emphasize this.
  5. 02:06:497 - and 02:06:703 - add note.
Good Luck!!
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