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nano.RIPE - Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)

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Umi
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mardi 3 décembre 2013 at 18:54:00

Artist: nano.RIPE
Title: Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
Source: のんのんびより
Tags: Non Non Biyori opening xchippy alacat Renge Miyauchi Hotaru Ichijo Natsumi Koshigaya Komari Koshigaya lolicon Silver Link
BPM: 134
Filesize: 10187kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Hard (4,83 stars, 190 notes)
  2. Easy (1,93 stars, 74 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 261 notes)
  4. xChippy's Normal (4 stars, 112 notes)
Download: nano.RIPE - Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
Download: nano.RIPE - Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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7th のんのんびより

Easy/Insane by me
Normal by xChippy
Hard by Alacat

Here Ending by Fycho (~'-')~ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/130688
it's not like i was lolicon o3o





















Last edited by Umi , edited 42 times in total.
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy
Me grabs first post+Shoot star~

-Umi- wrote:

it's not like i was lolicon :roll:
\( ﾟヮﾟ)/
I'll edit this post with diff =w=
Here is the updated ver.
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Non non Biyori.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62602
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nanairo Biyori (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:なないろびより(TV Size)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:-Umi-
Version:xChippy's Normal
Source:Non non Biyori
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png",0,0
Video,0,"ED.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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86088,-100,4,2,3,80,0,1
87544,-100,4,2,3,80,0,0
89782,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


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Combo1 : 28,192,227
Combo2 : 233,65,162
Combo3 : 255,156,0
Combo4 : 30,200,38

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Last edited by xChippy , edited 2 times in total.
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
thk u baka ! as always :3/
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Nyanpatsu!! Nyanpatsu!! Nyanpatsu!! Nyanpatsu!! Nyanpatsu!! Nyanpatsu!! Nyanpatsu!! Nyanpatsu!! Nyanpatsu!! Nyanpatsu!!
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
にゃんぱす(～・ω・)～

http://puu.sh/5lVUL.zip
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
～(・ω ・～) にゃんぱす

Added ! thx alacat-chan :3/

move to pending ~
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Mod request in-game :3


─ :!: Unrankable ─ :?: Doubtful Item ─ :idea: Tips & Tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments ─

Other lines are normal mods, just suggestion unless for Unrankable or strongly recommended changes.

[Easy]
01:02:686 (1,2) - These sliders are too near from each other. Make 01:02:686 (1) - to be at x:312 y:192 and 01:04:477 (2) - to be at x:200 y:192. Although they'll get something like 1.24x (the DS is 1.2x) by the result, it feels better than 0.97x.

[xChippy's Normal]
00:41:641 (2,3,4,5) - There are some spacing irregularities (very small jumpies) present here, around the 00:42:984 (4) object, specifically.
In order to help fixing, first move 00:41:641 (2,3) altogether to x:317 y:73, and then move 00:42:984 (4) - by 2 grids up.
00:42:984 (4) - Hm... looking a bit more, it's not so symmetrical as you can think. Select it and make Ctrl-H few times and you will see the points "moving". For the object be 100% symmetrical, no points should move while doing Ctrl-H often.
Since the fix for this is a bit hard to do by hand, I'll give the code below:
156,256,42984,2,0,B|236:244|256:282|256:282|276:244|356:256,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

If you applied the code (as last mod pointed out), move 00:44:328 (5) - to x:412 y:148 for more improved spacing accuracy.

00:50:149 (2) - To improve the blanket, move the middle node of the slider to x:116 y:140.
♥ 00:54:402 (4,1) - Nice blanket

[alacat's Hard]
* 00:08:507 (7,1) - This jump feels intentional due to placements made and song suggests it.
* 00:08:283 (6,7) - But this other jump feels a bit unintentional, no higher voice pitch... so you could set 00:08:507 (7) - at x:264 y:156, overlapping its tail with 00:08:059 (5) - perfectly. It regularizes spacing (:
00:19:925 (2,3) - would be a bit closer, and also 00:23:507 (2,3), since there's no stronger voice pitch nor strong drum/instrument to justify this. It feels done by aesthetics (avoid some overlapping, etc), like you did at 00:25:074 (2,3,4) -

[Insane]
♥ No complaints here. Overall flow feels amazing (: as an Insane diff should be :3

So well made diffs ^^

Hope the mod be useful (: Nice song! STAR!

And let's go rank it soooon ~.~

Att.
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi,-Umi-. Forum PM mod req.(Bad English.)

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Easy diff"s Misc. Toggles you forget select the" widescreen support". Add it?

The tag add " loli lolicon girl purple " try it? 8-)

[Easy]

00:41:193 (1) - I think this can cancel exhumation,
and at 00:42:537 (2) , 00:42:984 (3) add note,it feel fit better,beacuse slider end at big white line,a bit strange.
SPOILER

00:51:268 (1) - Slider end is big white line,feel a bit strange,change note? imo.

[xChippy's Normal]

00:20:596 (3) - The same situation (End is at big white line) with easy diff,try to cancel exhumation,at 00:21:492 (4) - add a note?
SPOILER
00:24:178 (3) - If you fix the above mentioned recommendations,and here also fix it.
00:27:984 (3) - End should place red line? and at 00:28:656 (4) - add note.
00:31:790 (3) - Although it is above mention,but I feel it better,imo.
01:06:940 (2,3) - - The same rhythm with 01:03:358 (2,3) , change it?
01:19:253 (5) - End is white line? imo.

[alacat's Hard]

00:22:835 (4) - (12|72)? (I think slider cover another slider end is not good pattern.)

00:24:402 (5) - Slider end rotate angle? Try it:
SPOILER
00:31:790 (6) - Feel can make a small jump,move to (440|64)?
01:11:417 (1) - Ctrl+g? (Because this music is turn up,and feel flow better.)

[Insane]

00:05:820 (2) - (388|84)? I feel keep the same DS.
00:35:149 (5) - a bit close the HP bar,move down?
00:54:178 (4) - I think stack the 00:53:731 (3) slider end is fit better,stack (5) slider end feel a bit read hard.

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
Thx :3 ! I'll check them asap.
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
Hello~
From pm req.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
A star for you and good luck! (ノ·ω·)ノ︵

[Easy]
General
Good diff. Hard to find something to say.
Beats
00:46:567 - I know you may want to decrease the difficulty but here really needs a note on ling white tick.


[xChippy's Normal]
General
Good diff which I can hardly find some place to make suggestion.
Beats
00:27:984 (3) - Maybe you can break the slider into beats like this for it covered some brief vocals.
SPOILER
01:12:313 (4) - Here I can understand why you use a simple note here but not a long slider which is fit the long vocal here. But to make the feeling consistent, a long slider is also good. And if you are really tired of using long sliders in this part, I think make new type of beats which follows more drums here is feasible.

[alacat's Hard]
General
Good diff. Some suggestions here.
Beats
01:06:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 01:20:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (and 01:02:686 (1,2,3,4) and 01:17:014 (1,2,3,4) - ) - Use former one as example. This 2 part you make the same beats which find the reason. But I still think the beats is not so good in distributing hittings. You used tirple hit in the long vocal which I think is acceptable and then the slider is a little long and covered the next strong voice at 01:06:716 . And this made a feeling of missing the strong voice.Then the voice on 01:06:940 (4) is a long voice which I think is more fit in a slider, but you distributed a hit at 01:07:164 which is less important to emphasize I think. And if you want to follow drum here, the change of following is kinda rapid I think.(01:02:686 (1,2,3,4) and 01:17:014 (1,2,3,4) Here the 2 part is less important to mention the beat issue I think.)
Placement
00:13:880 (2) - Though blanket is good but is not so consistent in flow here.
00:31:119 (3,4) - Jump is not so reasonable here I think. Just suggestion.
00:52:387 - Add a note here to fix the feeling of break?
01:06:268 (3) - Maybe you can bend the slider to make the flow smoother.Something like this.
SPOILER

[Insane]
General
Good diff!
Beats
00:11:865 (5) - You have strong beats at the tail of the slider and the formal beats are sliders start at strong beat. Maybe this beat fits.
SPOILER
Or you made this on purpose and here is also a good change if it is reasonable for you~

Placement
00:19:701 (1,2) - Maybe symmetry fits the music better.. The pattern you used is changing flow here and I think is not so reasonable.
00:27:089 (2,3) - Jump and flow change here is a little sudden and not so reasonable. Maybe ctrl+g 3,4,5 is a good choice. You can refer to this picture.
SPOILER
(Just suggestion ~)
00:28:432 (7,1) - Not reasonable flow change and I think the music is really consistent here. Ctrl+g 1?
00:32:686 (2,3) - Not reasonable pattern. You know the pattern will lead to a jump which change the flow. Making a more consistent pattern is a good choice though I think the flow change and jump is partly reasonable.
00:34:477 (2,3,4) - I think the music suggests the patterns more open so this kind of flow which from 1 to 2 is really limited comparing to the music change. A bigger jump is needed. You can move the 2,3,4 further from the slider 1.
00:38:731 (4,5,6) - Flow change is not reasonable. And the jump is strange. So maybe ctrl+g 5,6?
00:42:984 (1) - Also I think the tendency of the music is not likely to change flow, and the tune is decreasing I think. Ctrl+g 1 and move it a little down-left is a good choice.
00:55:970 (2,3) - Jump is a little sudden. And I think 3,4 is more suitable for a jump.
00:57:089 (5,6) - And to make flow better you can bend the slider 6 a little.
00:59:552 (2,3) - And here the jump is a little sudden, too. To sum up this part the distance you make is not so reasonable for me. But the distance is kinda interesting I think so I didn't make these suggestions in blue color. BTW, to make here the flow better, you may try to bend the slider 3 in another direction if you choose to stay your style.
01:04:925 (2,3) - Sudden jump I think. So maybe make 3 closer to 2?
01:08:731 (3) - Bend the slider to make flow smoother will be better.
01:13:208 (1,2) - Feeling of inconsistency is really not necessary in the consistent music. Some changes are needed to make the flow smoother.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

Alarido wrote:

Mod request in-game :3


─ :!: Unrankable ─ :?: Doubtful Item ─ :idea: Tips & Tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments ─

Other lines are normal mods, just suggestion unless for Unrankable or strongly recommended changes.

[Easy]
01:02:686 (1,2) - These sliders are too near from each other. Make 01:02:686 (1) - to be at x:312 y:192 and 01:04:477 (2) - to be at x:200 y:192. Although they'll get something like 1.24x (the DS is 1.2x) by the result, it feels better than 0.97x. ops fixed

[Insane]
♥ No complaints here. Overall flow feels amazing (: as an Insane diff should be :3 :3

So well made diffs ^^

Hope the mod be useful (: Nice song! STAR!

And let's go rank it soooon ~.~

Att.

smallboat wrote:

Hi,-Umi-. Forum PM mod req.(Bad English.)

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Easy diff"s Misc. Toggles you forget select the" widescreen support". Add it? I deleted them in every diff instead since it's useless here '-'

The tag add " loli lolicon girl purple " try it? 8-) only add lolicon o3o

[Easy]

00:41:193 (1) - I think this can cancel exhumation,
and at 00:42:537 (2) , 00:42:984 (3) add note,it feel fit better,beacuse slider end at big white line,a bit strange. fixed in another way
SPOILER

00:51:268 (1) - Slider end is big white line,feel a bit strange,change note? imo. i prefer how it's now

[Insane]

00:05:820 (2) - (388|84)? I feel keep the same DS. Fixed
00:35:149 (5) - a bit close the HP bar,move down? down a bit
00:54:178 (4) - I think stack the 00:53:731 (3) slider end is fit better,stack (5) slider end feel a bit read hard. feel contrary for me :o

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From pm req.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
A star for you and good luck! (ノ·ω·)ノ︵

[Easy]
General
Good diff. Hard to find something to say.
Beats
00:46:567 - I know you may want to decrease the difficulty but here really needs a note on ling white tick. the time between the spinner and the note will be too short if i do :/


[Insane]
General
Good diff!

01:08:731 (3) - Bend the slider to make flow smoother will be better. well i fixed only this one :/

I'll try to explain why ^^
First about
Sudden jump
since it's an insane diff and also that the bpm is kinda slow, i don't think at all they're sudden '-'
And About
Flow change
i guess it's a part of my mapping style, i like break the flow, ofc when it doesn't feel weird, and in the place where you pointed them i think the flow change is not that bad in contrary i like it >.<, it's more about taste imo

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Thx a lot guys for mod :3 and also for star !
PlainGuy
10 posts
Joined December 2012
PlainGuy
you made maps for Non non byori too XDD this is gettin interesting XDD Now i will support u toooooo...Finish it XDDD for my nano.ripe osu collection XDD

btw Love the maps XD u did a hell of a job there :D
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
thx for support again :3
mintong89
3,695 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Hello, mod from your request.

Black - Normal Suggestion
Pink - You may need to consider
Red - Unrankable stuff

[Insane]

00:05:373 (1) - I wish this slider-end can with 00:05:820 (2) - as a line, like put slider-end as x181 y141 to make one line with 00:05:820 (2) -
00:11:865 (5,1) - Use same slider curve?
00:17:238 (7,1) - ^
00:38:283 (3) - Well, i prefer 00:38:507 - as a note but not slider-end.
00:50:820 (6) - I prefer CTRL+G here to keep the flow better, see screenshot at below
SPOILER
00:54:178 (4,5) - Put it as x:264 y:232, if not in-game will see like this:
SPOILER

[アラキャット's Hard]

00:24:850 (1,2) - i prefer don't stack here, it just no so fun to play imo at here.
00:42:761 (1,2) - ^
00:29:104 (3,4) - it's look little stiff imo with 00:28:432 (1) - , so i prefer curve here.
SPOILER

[エックスチッピ's Normal]

00:08:955 (1,2) - make this two slider one line?
SPOILER
00:33:581 (6,1) - ^ , well i think 00:34:029 (1,2) - is too curve.
00:10:746 (3) - I prefer make the middle point down at here.
00:13:432 (2) - make middle point up? it look fun with not same imo.
01:27:537 - i prefer make a note at here and put 01:27:761 - spinner at here, because spinner isn't click-able and you ignore the hitsound too.

[Easy]

it's fine for me.

good luck~
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

Mintong wrote:

Hello, mod from your request.

Black - Normal Suggestion
Pink - You may need to consider
Red - Unrankable stuff

[Insane]

00:05:373 (1) - I wish this slider-end can with 00:05:820 (2) - as a line, like put slider-end as x181 y141 to make one line with 00:05:820 (2) - it took me some time to understand but i think it's okay now ? x)
00:11:865 (5,1) - Use same slider curve? i want make a blanket between them, if i use the same shape i can't :/ i mean like this
SPOILER
00:17:238 (7,1) - ^ ^
00:38:283 (3) - Well, i prefer 00:38:507 - as a note but not slider-end. If we listen the voice, a slider fit better imo
00:50:820 (6) - I prefer CTRL+G here to keep the flow better, see screenshot at below I moved the slider before in the other way so the flow is better now
SPOILER
00:54:178 (4,5) - Put it as x:264 y:232, if not in-game will see like this: moved a bit
SPOILER



[Easy]

it's fine for me.

good luck~
thx for mod mint :3
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii
Hi -Umi- :)
From PM request ~

[Easy]
  1. 00:57:313(2) - I think 360° with 00:55:522(1) - will be better flow fit song :3
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/5pNzy
[xChippy's Normal]
  1. 00:14:328 - Why don't set rhythm same like the front ?
    Just when I listen from song's start , feel little bit suddenly here.
  2. 01:12:313(4) - Maybe set a slider here until 01:12:537 - ?
    It's a long vocal here , if you don't want to use 3/2 slider like 01:09:626(1,2,3) - , at least give a 1/2 slider ?
    And also keep 1/1 with 01:12:984(5) - is comfortable to play.
[alacat's Hard]
  1. 01:26:641(3,4) - Maybe like this ? :
    SPOILER
    I hear 01:27:089 - to 01:27:537 - have three stronger drum voice , just feel it will be fit in slider with repeat , and 01:26:641 - 's vocal fit a slider too.
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:790(3,4,5,6,7) - Suggest like :
    SPOILER
    cus seems it haven't durm voice at 00:17:126(6) -
  2. 00:54:178(4)- Maybe overlapping under 00:53:731(3) - 's end.
    Like you do at 00:48:358(1,2) - and 00:55:522(1,2) -
    Just think it's more comfortable to read to me :3

Oh , so great map that I can't raise more !
sorry for poor mod , and good luck !

~ Star
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
Hi! From your request :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Clear.

[Insane]
  1. 00:33:581 (4) - hmm Why is volume too low? Not down the back volume here, so I recommend remove 00:33:581 - this green line. and I felt that drum-clap is not fit the song.
    I suggest 00:33:581 (4,5,6,7) - change soft-hitclap at all.
  2. 00:34:029 (1) - Add finish.
  3. 00:46:790 (2) - Suggestion, Add the green line here (volume 40%) and add finish this note. It is really fit the cymbal sound.
  4. 00:47:014 (3) - Add finish to slider end (Volume 60%). Exist big sound (cymbal) here. so pretty fit the finish imo.
  5. 00:50:149 (5) - Try to same pattern here 00:48:358 (1,2) - . I hope you put note 00:50:484 - here.
  6. 00:52:275 - Add note here?
  7. 01:01:343 - Whistle sound is a little loud. Try Volume 30%.
  8. 01:04:253 (1) - Add whistle to slider end. (Like a 01:07:835 (1) - )
  9. 01:18:581 (1) - ^
  10. 01:19:253 (2) - You forgot to add clap?
  11. 01:19:477 (3) - ^ to slider end.
  12. 01:24:850 (3) - Add whistle to slider end.
  13. 01:25:970 (1) - ^ to slider head.
  14. 01:26:641 (3) - Add finish to slider end (Volume 40%)

[alacat's Hard]
  1. 00:41:193 (1) - 赤点ついた00:15:223 (5) - これと同じようなスライダー使ったほうが見た目が良いと思います。これをそのままコピペしてCtrl+Jでいいと思います。
    SPOILER
  2. 01:09:626 (1) - シンバルのような音も見当たらないしfinishは合わない気がしました。whistleに変更してみてはどうでしょう
  3. 01:13:432 (1) - ^

[xChippy's Normal]
  1. 00:33:134 (5) - Add finish instead of clap. really fit the song imo.
  2. 00:56:641 (2) - Add whistle.
  3. 00:42:984 (4) - a little ugly form this slider. Like this?
    SPOILER
    152,264,42984,2,0,B|204:257|256:292|256:292|308:257|360:264,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:58:432 (4) - Add whistle.
  5. 01:00:223 (2) - Add finish instead of whistle to slider head.
  6. 01:04:253 (3,4,5) - Rhythm suggestion. Vocal's voice is long here 01:05:149 - . so want to put the slider. Like this?

  7. 01:15:671 (4) - Please more shape this slider. similar as 01:14:999 (3) -
    SPOILER
  8. 01:27:537 (1) - Spinner end is 01:29:104 - here fine to me.

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:746 (3) - Try this flow. more good playable for beginners.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:17:910 (3) - (nazi) move to slider end point is x296 y:212 for blanket.
  3. 00:19:701 (1) - Make a curve for flow? That is looks good for me.
    SPOILER
nice song nice map!
Good luck~~ :)
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi -Umi- :)
From PM request ~

[Easy]
  1. 00:57:313(2) - I think 360° with 00:55:522(1) - will be better flow fit song :3 more or less fixed
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/5pNzy

[Insane]
  1. 00:16:790(3,4,5,6,7) - Suggest like : but it fit the song imo, no change >.<
    SPOILER
    cus seems it haven't durm voice at 00:17:126(6) -
  2. 00:54:178(4)- Maybe overlapping under 00:53:731(3) - 's end. I want some diversity, that's why i use a different one here, and i also think it's not that hard to read :o
    Like you do at 00:48:358(1,2) - and 00:55:522(1,2) -
    Just think it's more comfortable to read to me :3

Oh , so great map that I can't raise more !
sorry for poor mod , and good luck !

~ Star
Thx for mod and star Leon :3

Guy wrote:

Hi! From your request :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Clear.

[Insane]
  1. 00:33:581 (4) - hmm Why is volume too low? Not down the back volume here, so I recommend remove 00:33:581 - this green line. and I felt that drum-clap is not fit the song.
    I suggest 00:33:581 (4,5,6,7) - change soft-hitclap at all.
  2. 00:34:029 (1) - Add finish.
  3. 00:46:790 (2) - Suggestion, Add the green line here (volume 40%) and add finish this note. It is really fit the cymbal sound.
  4. 00:47:014 (3) - Add finish to slider end (Volume 60%). Exist big sound (cymbal) here. so pretty fit the finish imo.
  5. 00:50:149 (5) - Try to same pattern here 00:48:358 (1,2) - . I hope you put note 00:50:484 - here.
  6. 00:52:275 - Add note here?
  7. 01:01:343 - Whistle sound is a little loud. Try Volume 30%.
  8. 01:04:253 (1) - Add whistle to slider end. (Like a 01:07:835 (1) - )
  9. 01:18:581 (1) - ^
  10. 01:19:253 (2) - You forgot to add clap?
  11. 01:19:477 (3) - ^ to slider end.
  12. 01:24:850 (3) - Add whistle to slider end.
  13. 01:25:970 (1) - ^ to slider head.
  14. 01:26:641 (3) - Add finish to slider end (Volume 40%)

    All fixed '-'

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:746 (3) - Try this flow. more good playable for beginners. I prefer my current flow here
    SPOILER
  2. 00:17:910 (3) - (nazi) move to slider end point is x296 y:212 for blanket. Fixed
  3. 00:19:701 (1) - Make a curve for flow? That is looks good for me. fixed
    SPOILER
nice song nice map!
Good luck~~ :)
mod ありがとうございます Guyさん :3
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy
Thx for mods all fixed alot >w<
Srry to lazy to reply but if you want them I'll post them later owo

osu file format v12

[General]
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TitleUnicode:なないろびより(TV Size)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:-Umi-
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196,244,28656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,143,29104,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,211,29552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,312,29999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
195,246,30447,6,0,B|234:239|251:246|251:246|262:230|302:222,2,110,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,246,31567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
81,216,31790,2,0,B|87:193|73:166|73:166|100:141|119:103,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,25,32686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
258,121,33134,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,20,33581,2,0,L|358:82,1,55,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,126,34029,6,0,P|357:214|333:226,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,282,34925,2,0,P|152:270|140:246,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,157,35820,2,0,L|134:127,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,97,36268,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,97,36492,2,0,B|282:135|282:135|274:176|310:220|355:210,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,259,37611,6,0,P|464:234|466:207,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,302,38283,2,0,B|361:298|361:298|338:324|284:335|246:304,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,260,39402,2,0,L|151:314,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,199,40074,2,0,B|205:190|205:190|230:218|268:223|322:200,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,149,41193,5,2,0:0:0:0:
309,80,41641,2,0,L|241:68,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,43,42089,2,0,B|196:99|168:115|168:115|160:168,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,264,42984,2,0,B|236:252|256:290|256:290|276:252|356:264,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,161,44328,2,0,L|401:100,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44775,12,2,46567,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47014,5,8,0:0:0:0:
170,106,47462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
67,170,47910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,255,48358,6,0,B|180:284|196:317|196:317|242:312|306:342,2,165,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,170,50149,2,0,P|116:140|185:138,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,113,50820,2,0,B|260:172|241:216|241:216|297:250,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,291,51940,6,0,P|422:235|478:200,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,161,52611,2,0,B|458:128|458:128|439:89|439:89|375:48,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,53,53731,2,0,P|254:113|214:153,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,191,54402,2,0,B|236:200|252:260|252:260|309:265,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,306,55522,6,0,P|427:244|364:158,1,165,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,98,56641,2,0,L|208:93,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,45,57313,2,0,B|63:134|145:158|76:217,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,308,58432,2,0,L|97:303,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,226,59104,6,0,P|256:204|336:226,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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464,196,60895,1,4,0:0:0:0:
342,296,62686,6,0,P|287:284|231:296,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,265,63358,2,0,B|165:232|170:212|170:212|100:190|124:103,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,73,64253,2,0,L|260:53,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,39,64925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,67,65149,2,0,P|388:103|472:111,1,110
502,146,65820,2,0,L|492:207,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,259,66268,6,0,B|449:280|431:287|431:287|408:273|365:281,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,257,66940,2,0,P|253:253|164:287,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,301,67835,2,0,L|102:365,1,55,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,254,68507,2,0,L|41:181,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,58,69402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,58,69626,6,0,B|169:106|169:106|217:119|235:169|216:203,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,254,70522,2,0,P|280:286|371:269,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,275,71417,2,0,B|410:240|421:212|421:212|372:176|374:118,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,83,72313,2,0,L|276:72,1,55,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,49,72984,2,0,L|90:65,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,95,73432,6,0,P|46:196|147:211,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,126,74775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,126,74999,2,0,P|303:138|325:187,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,224,75671,2,0,P|248:232|201:208,2,110,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,120,77014,5,4,0:0:0:0:
433,224,77462,2,0,L|448:296,2,55,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,120,78358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,120,78581,2,0,B|328:122|317:117|317:117|305:130|266:142,1,110
225,184,79253,2,0,L|208:240,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,79,80149,2,0,L|95:137,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,175,80596,6,0,P|76:231|54:298,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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233,190,83731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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107,243,84626,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,87761,12,0,89775,0:0:0:0:
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
mods reply

Alarido wrote:

[alacat's Hard]
* 00:08:507 (7,1) - This jump feels intentional due to placements made and song suggests it. It's ok :3
* 00:08:283 (6,7) - But this other jump feels a bit unintentional, no higher voice pitch... so you could set 00:08:507 (7) - at x:264 y:156, overlapping its tail with 00:08:059 (5) - perfectly. It regularizes spacing (: Same.
00:19:925 (2,3) - would be a bit closer, and also 00:23:507 (2,3), since there's no stronger voice pitch nor strong drum/instrument to justify this. It feels done by aesthetics (avoid some overlapping, etc), like you did at 00:25:074 (2,3,4) - hmm i put jump part to follow the vocal :3

smallboat wrote:

[alacat's Hard]

00:22:835 (4) - (12|72)? (I think slider cover another slider end is not good pattern.) It's fine to me.
00:24:402 (5) - Slider end rotate angle? Try it: no change.
SPOILER
00:31:790 (6) - Feel can make a small jump,move to (440|64)? nope.
01:11:417 (1) - Ctrl+g? (Because this music is turn up,and feel flow better.) the flow will be really bad :<

azuretwinight wrote:

[alacat's Hard]
General
Good diff. Some suggestions here.
Beats
01:06:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 01:20:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (and 01:02:686 (1,2,3,4) and 01:17:014 (1,2,3,4) - ) - Use former one as example. This 2 part you make the same beats which find the reason. But I still think the beats is not so good in distributing hittings. You used tirple hit in the long vocal which I think is acceptable and then the slider is a little long and covered the next strong voice at 01:06:716 . And this made a feeling of missing the strong voice.Then the voice on 01:06:940 (4) is a long voice which I think is more fit in a slider, but you distributed a hit at 01:07:164 which is less important to emphasize I think. And if you want to follow drum here, the change of following is kinda rapid I think.(01:02:686 (1,2,3,4) and 01:17:014 (1,2,3,4) Here the 2 part is less important to mention the beat issue I think.) hmm it is enough for playing imo.
Placement
00:13:880 (2) - Though blanket is good but is not so consistent in flow here. It's ok to me.
00:31:119 (3,4) - Jump is not so reasonable here I think. Just suggestion. nope.
00:52:387 - Add a note here to fix the feeling of break? i didn't follow this sound.
01:06:268 (3) - Maybe you can bend the slider to make the flow smoother.Something like this. for what ? i prefer straight slider.
SPOILER

Mintong wrote:

[アラキャット's Hard]

00:24:850 (1,2) - i prefer don't stack here, it just no so fun to play imo at here. i prefer stack :p
00:42:761 (1,2) - ^ Same.
00:29:104 (3,4) - it's look little stiff imo with 00:28:432 (1) - , so i prefer curve here. no change. i used previous slider :3
SPOILER

leon1341414 wrote:

[alacat's Hard]
  1. 01:26:641(3,4) - Maybe like this ? :
    SPOILER
    I hear 01:27:089 - to 01:27:537 - have three stronger drum voice , just feel it will be fit in slider with repeat , and 01:26:641 - 's vocal fit a slider too. not fit to me.

Guy wrote:

[alacat's Hard]
  1. 00:41:193 (1) - 赤点ついた00:15:223 (5) - これと同じようなスライダー使ったほうが見た目が良いと思います。これをそのままコピペしてCtrl+Jでいいと思います。ok
    SPOILER
  2. 01:09:626 (1) - シンバルのような音も見当たらないしfinishは合わない気がしました。whistleに変更してみてはどうでしょうはずしました~ ...( ばれた
  3. 01:13:432 (1) - ^ こちらはkiai timeを盛り上げるために必要なのではずしません

http://puu.sh/5qFaQ.zip

Thank you for modding.
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
updated both :3/ Thk u !
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hi umi san~

[Easy]
none :D

[xChippy's Normal]
01:01:343 - 1/1 slide Arrow to change?

start point x:344 y:180
mid point x:320 y:124
end point x:324 y:72
01:05:149 - whistle(soft none) add
01:09:626 - ^
01:10:522 - ^
01:11:417 - ^

[alacat's Hard]
01:01:343 (1,2,3,1) - change a X0.5 interval? this

[Insane]
00:52:164 (10) - whistle add? (vocal)
01:04:029 - clap add
01:15:671 (1,2,6) - stream add? i hear drums, add the stream here.
box

296,340,75671,6,0,L|244:348,2,45,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
389,212,76119,1,2,0:0:0:0:
387,185,76230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,160,76342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,136,76454,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,116,76566,1,10,0:0:0:0:
327,100,76678,1,0,3:0:0:0:
302,89,76790,1,0,3:0:0:0:
275,84,76902,1,0,3:0:0:0:

good lucky umi san
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

-Kirito wrote:

hi umi san~

[Easy]
none :D :3

[Insane]
00:52:164 (10) - whistle add? (vocal) nope
01:04:029 - clap add ops added
01:15:671 (1,2,6) - stream add? i hear drums, add the stream here. this stream doesn't fit for me :x
box

296,340,75671,6,0,L|244:348,2,45,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
389,212,76119,1,2,0:0:0:0:
387,185,76230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,160,76342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,136,76454,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,116,76566,1,10,0:0:0:0:
327,100,76678,1,0,3:0:0:0:
302,89,76790,1,0,3:0:0:0:
275,84,76902,1,0,3:0:0:0:

good lucky umi san
thx for mod kirito :3
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
nice song!( 'ω')!!!!!!!!!!
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
ありがとう (>3<)/
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -
hihi, here is my mod. From forum PM. (have nazi point)
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- OK ✔
[Easy]
00:23:283 (1) - front x128 y152 ?
00:39:402 (3) - snap second dot on the grid ?
01:06:268 (1) - snap front's dot on the grid ?
01:20:596 (1) - x277 y43, x256 y64, x240 y120 ?
hitsound ok
[xChippy's Normal]
00:31:790 (3) - add whistle for the end ?
00:55:522 (1) - x423 y306, x420 y232, x360 y164 ?
01:14:999 (3,4) - same shape ?
[alacat's Hard]
01:26:641 (3) - add whistle ?
[Insane]
seems ok

:o i try to do my best, sorry that only a few !
Hope it could help you ! 彡★
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

hihi, here is my mod. From forum PM. (have nazi point)
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- OK ✔
[Easy]
00:23:283 (1) - front x128 y152 ? Front, what u mean '-' ?
00:39:402 (3) - snap second dot on the grid ? I 'm not using grid snap when i map, it"s not a problem imo '-'
01:06:268 (1) - snap front's dot on the grid ? ^
01:20:596 (1) - x277 y43, x256 y64, x240 y120 ? prefer the current position >.<
hitsound ok

[Insane]
seems ok :3

:o i try to do my best, sorry that only a few !
Hope it could help you ! 彡★
no change for me but thx for checking and star :3/
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod via PM o̿ ̭ o̿
[General]
Letterbox conflicts
[Easy]
Circle size -1?
00:52:387 - Consider adding a note here, so that the objects are equalyl spaced apart (by a beat) consistently. I was kinda caught off guard on this part, now seeing why, since 00:52:611 (3) - is placed on a red tick :lol:
01:13:208 (1) - Try having it start at 01:13:432 instead. The spacing between 01:12:984 - 01:13:432 follows up well with 01:05:820 - 01:06:268, 01:09:402 - 01:09:850 and will be recognizable.
[xChippy's Normal]
01:15:671 (4) - Make it look like this, so that it's perfectly parallel with 01:17:462 (2) - :

[alacat's Hard]
00:31:119 (3,4) - What's the sudden jump here for? o.o
00:46:567 (1) - Move to about x:292/y:320 00:47:014 and switch notes (2,3) - like this:

Makes a pretty interesting jump imo.
[Insane]
00:17:126 (6) - Remove this note, it sounds extra here.A stream here doesn't really fit since I'd usually see it during the part where you'd hear the drum rolls.
00:47:910 (5,6,7,8) - May want to increase the volume of these notes, I could barely identify what hitsound they were o~o
00:50:596 (6) - NC?
00:57:313 (6) - Should be NC instead of 00:57:984 (1) - .

Hope this helps~!
[NSER]-Zazalng
194 posts
Joined August 2012
[NSER]-Zazalng
Hello sir, I'm from modding queues

Let's start with me (Neko isn't here)
[Easy]
01:13:208 change end Point to 01:14:552
01:18:805 change Beat to here 01:18:581

[Normal]
01:22:164 change end point to 01:22:611 or reverse it

[alacat's Hard]
00:38:731 snap with 1,2 ?

[Insane]
00:27:761 unsnap plzzzzz
00:32:686 I think it too hard for insane low bpm here try to unsnap it
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod via PM o̿ ̭ o̿
[General]
Letterbox conflicts
[Easy]
Circle size -1? np i prefer the current CS
00:52:387 - Consider adding a note here, so that the objects are equalyl spaced apart (by a beat) consistently. I was kinda caught off guard on this part, now seeing why, since 00:52:611 (3) - is placed on a red tick :lol: nope i don't think it's confused imo
01:13:208 (1) - Try having it start at 01:13:432 instead. The spacing between 01:12:984 - 01:13:432 follows up well with 01:05:820 - 01:06:268, 01:09:402 - 01:09:850 and will be recognizable. ok fixed

[Insane]
00:17:126 (6) - Remove this note, it sounds extra here.A stream here doesn't really fit since I'd usually see it during the part where you'd hear the drum rolls. nope it fit for me
00:47:910 (5,6,7,8) - May want to increase the volume of these notes, I could barely identify what hitsound they were o~o increase by 10% '-'
00:50:596 (6) - NC? fixed on the next note
00:57:313 (6) - Should be NC instead of 00:57:984 (1) - . fixed

Hope this helps~!

[NSER]-Zazalng wrote:

Hello sir, I'm from modding queues

Let's start with me (Neko isn't here)
[Easy]
01:13:208 change end Point to 01:14:552 I changed the start instead '-'
01:18:805 change Beat to here 01:18:581 no

[Insane]
00:27:761 unsnap plzzzzz you mean unstack no ? if yes, no i prefer stack them
00:32:686 I think it too hard for insane low bpm here try to unsnap it it play well for me
thx for mod :3/
xChippy
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Joined August 2011
xChippy
Mod replies:

-Kirito wrote:

hi umi san~

[xChippy's Normal]
01:01:343 - 1/1 slide Arrow to change? nope prefer to keep the little pause here
http://puu.sh/5qHpj.jpg
start point x:344 y:180
mid point x:320 y:124
end point x:324 y:72
01:05:149 - whistle(soft none) add
01:09:626 - ^
01:10:522 - ^
01:11:417 - ^
Added some by myself as some of those above would disrupt my consistency

good lucky umi san

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

hihi, here is my mod. From forum PM. (have nazi point)
-------------------------------------------------
[xChippy's Normal]
00:31:790 (3) - add whistle for the end ? there is already one OAO
00:55:522 (1) - x423 y306, x420 y232, x360 y164 ? huh o.o? even tho I didn't understand this one prefer to keep the blanket I have atm
01:14:999 (3,4) - same shape ? Making them the same shape will leave an ugly taste behind.

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod via PM o̿ ̭ o̿
[xChippy's Normal]
01:15:671 (4) - Make it look like this, so that it's perfectly parallel with 01:17:462 (2) - : fixed

[NSER]-Zazalng wrote:

Hello sir, I'm from modding queues
[Normal]
01:22:164 change end point to 01:22:611 or reverse it prefer the current rythm as I used this alot in this diff
Thanks for modding all owo

Diff:
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Non non Biyori.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62602
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nanairo Biyori (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:なないろびより(TV Size)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:-Umi-
Version:xChippy's Normal
Source:Non non Biyori
Tags:のんのんびより opening xchippy alacat Renge Miyauchi Hotaru Ichijo Natsumi Koshigaya Komari Koshigaya lolicon
BeatmapID:325657
BeatmapSetID:126224

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png",0,0
Video,0,"ED.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Umi
2,478 posts
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Umi
updated :3
CPLs
351 posts
Joined April 2012
CPLs
just taking a quick look..

capitalize all the first word of source

and how about adding "silver link" in tags?
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
Fixed Both thx ^^
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
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Melophobia
Just few suggestions before pushing this forward.~

[General]
Title Unicode: There needs to be an extra space between なないろびより and (TV Size).
It'd be more suitable to end the kiai time at 01:24:178 - where the next stanza exactly begans. or you can extend it to 01:27:537 - , or 01:29:104 - .
The bg file is better as .jpeg imo considering that the current file size is way too big. (i have never seen such a heavy bg...)
I think Source should be "Non non biyori" (uncapitalize the last 2 words), or do you have any source about it?

[Insane]
00:19:253 (4,5,6,7) - Considering how the (3) flows, this stream should be curved for a better flow imo.
00:32:910 (3) - Honestly i dont like this pattern since it caused me to misread the rhythm due to the stack and it ignores the crush-symbal at 00:33:134 - . Please consider remove the slider and rearrange the rhythm.
00:42:089 (3) - Copy (2) and rotate it by -120 degree. I dont think the current angle looks that great.

[Hard]
Volume setting is kinda higher than it needs to be, especially in kiai sections.
01:00:895 - This is still optional, but i think this crush-symbal somewhat sounds differently and a normal-finish would fit nicely with it.

[Easy]
00:08:955 (1) - This slider should be more curved imo because it looked weird compared to (3).
01:14:999 - A finish would fit better with the instruments.
01:22:387 (3) - This slider somehow looks randomly placed, due to its angle and shape. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1130265
01:27:649 (1) - The spinner apprears too suddenly and is surprising to beginners imo. It's highly recommended to replace (5) with a circle and start the spinner at 01:27:537 - instead.

Pretty much a perfect mapset, not much to complain about patterns! Throw a forum pm at me once you're done with these fixes.
alacat
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alacat

Melophobia wrote:

[Hard]
Volume setting is kinda higher than it needs to be, especially in kiai sections. yep, turn down the volume in kiai time :)
01:00:895 - This is still optional, but i think this crush-symbal somewhat sounds differently and a normal-finish would fit nicely with it. ok :3
めろさんありがと(～・ω・)～

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