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RandF
From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

[General]
  1. Romanised Title: "Sakura no Ame Moegi no Yo"
  2. mp3: outro is too long. I recommend to cut appropriately
[Normal]
  1. 01:41:880- remove whistle
  2. 01:43:531- add whistle
  3. 01:44:081- remove whistle
  4. 02:27:017 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider
  5. 02:45:463- add a note?
  6. 03:14:907- whistle is necessary?
[Hard]
  1. According to AI-Mod, Object isn't snapped!
  2. 00:35:549 (1) - how about moving to x:272 y:242 (you can make star-pattern)
  3. 00:44:357- I prefer to add a note
  4. 00:53:438 (1) - curve slider is better
  5. 01:06:100 (7,8) - I prefer to change for 1 slider
  6. 01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this pyramid-pattern looks awkward. how about this?
    SPOILER

    393,135,75457,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    324,176,75733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,215,76008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    324,254,76283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,295,76558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,216,77109,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:22:063~01:24:265- I suggest to reduce SV
  8. 01:41:604 (1) - move whistle from it to 01:41:880
  9. 01:50:412- add a note
  10. 01:57:430 (1) - whistle is necessary?
  11. 02:16:834- I prefer to add a note
  12. 02:53:989 (4,5,6) - I suggest to unifrom DS to 1.45x, and you can make star-pattern
  13. 03:18:760 (4) - I prefer the slider: 03:18:485~03:18:760
  14. 03:35:274~03:36:100- it is better to add someting note (I prefer 1/4 beat rolling)
  15. 04:00:320- add a note
Nice KOTOKO~ :)
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Losertic

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

RandomEffect's Modding
[General]
  1. Romanised Title: "Sakura no Ame Moegi no Yo" →

    Umm. wait.
    SPOILER
    Title: Accel World ED Single - unfinished
    Artist: KOTOKO

    Tracklist:
    1. unfinished
    2. Sakura no Ame Moegi no yo <<
    3. unfinished (Instrumental)
    4. Sakura no Ame Moegi no yo (Instrumental)
  2. mp3: outro is too long. I recommend to cut appropriately → uh, but. not cut Original-song File ;_;
[Normal]
  1. 01:41:880- remove whistle → Fixed.
  2. 01:43:531- add whistle → Fixed.
  3. 01:44:081- remove whistle → Fixed.
  4. 02:27:017 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider → i think its' too hard
  5. 02:45:463- add a note? → I think.. umm. it's follow boom- sound
  6. 03:14:907- whistle is necessary? → remove whistle.
[Hard]
  1. According to AI-Mod, Object isn't snapped! → it's my mistake! fixed
  2. 00:35:549 (1) - how about moving to x:272 y:242 (you can make star-pattern) → i want jump(pattern) this part.
  3. 00:44:357- I prefer to add a note → umm. it's great. but, i like this pattern!
  4. 00:53:438 (1) - curve slider is better → Fixed.
  5. 01:06:100 (7,8) - I prefer to change for 1 slider → Fixed.
  6. 01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this pyramid-pattern looks awkward. how about this? → Fixed.
    SPOILER

    393,135,75457,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    324,176,75733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,215,76008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    324,254,76283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,295,76558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,216,77109,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:22:063~01:24:265- I suggest to reduce SV → what is SV?
  8. 01:41:604 (1) - move whistle from it to 01:41:880 → Fixed.
  9. 01:50:412- add a note → Ummm.....
  10. 01:57:430 (1) - whistle is necessary? → 01:59:494 (1) - remove whistle hitsound much better!
  11. 02:16:834- I prefer to add a note → yep, same opinion.. l like 5 note!
  12. 02:53:989 (4,5,6) - I suggest to unifrom DS to 1.45x, and you can make star-pattern → maybe it's too hard. because 02:54:265 (5) - this.
  13. 03:18:760 (4) - I prefer the slider: 03:18:485~03:18:760 → oh, i think better this pattern: 03:18:485 ~ 03:18:760 - add note.
  14. 03:35:274~03:36:100- it is better to add someting note (I prefer 1/4 beat rolling) → I like this part. (no note, slider..maybe you know why i like this part)
  15. 04:00:320- add a note → i like better now
Nice KOTOKO~ :)
~Good Luck~
Thank you! ;)
Sun Rainbow
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Topic Starter
Losertic

Sun Rainbow wrote:

http://puu.sh/4Un7j.zip

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Thank you! ;) Fixed!
Hanabi
M4M

[Overall]
Slider Tick Rate -> 2

[Hard]
00:48:485 (4,5,7,8,9,10) - 이런 박자 추천 드려요
00:57:843 (6) - NC
01:03:622 (5) - 써클 제거
01:05:962 (6) - ^
01:11:053 (1,2) - 같은 모양으로 체인지
01:12:430 (5) - 써클 제거
01:16:283 (4,5) - 디스턴스 쳌
01:20:411 (1,2,3) - 조금 넓게 해주세요 -> ctrl + shift + S 한후에 1.3정도로
01:55:916 (5) - NC
02:10:503 (5) - 박자 실수하셨네요
02:16:696 - 02:16:971 노트 추가
02:18:485 - 제거
02:24:815 - 힛사 넣어주세요
02:27:292 - 제거
02:44:907 (5) - ^
02:54:265 (5) - NC
04:11:329 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:34:724 - 클랩
00:35:824 (1,2,3) - 같은 모양으로 -> ctrl + c,v한후에 120도씩 돌리면 되요
00:42:980 (4) - 이렇세
02:27:843 (5) - 제거04:11:054 (4) - 펴주세여
Topic Starter
Losertic

[ Sana ] wrote:

M4M

Sana's Modding
[Overall]
Slider Tick Rate -> 2 → 히트사운드를 잘 맞추는 것도 아니고 해서 일단은 '1'개로 냅둘게요.

[Hard]
00:48:485 (4,5,7,8,9,10) - 이런 박자 추천 드려요 → 이건.. insane에서나 어울릴듯한 느낌.. 너무 어려운것 같아요
00:57:843 (6) - NC → 수정 완료.
01:03:622 (5) - 써클 제거 → 퉁 거리는 소리도 나고.. 있는게 더 나을것 같습니다. 그리고 노트 2개, 바로 노트2개는 어려 울듯..
01:05:962 (6) - ^ → 위와 같은 이유이고, 에- 라는 소리가 그 부분에서 나옵니다.
01:11:053 (1,2) - 같은 모양으로 체인지 → 1번슬라이더로 교체 해봤으나...이 둘이는 원래 같은 모양입니다 ㅠ.ㅠ
01:12:430 (5) - 써클 제거 → 위와 같은 이유들 입니다.
01:16:283 (4,5) - 디스턴스 쳌 → 수정 완료. 실수;_;
01:20:411 (1,2,3) - 조금 넓게 해주세요 -> ctrl + shift + S 한후에 1.3정도로 → 수정 완료.
01:55:916 (5) - NC → 수정 완료.
02:10:503 (5) - 박자 실수하셨네요 → 수정 완료.
02:16:696 - 02:16:971 노트 추가 → 이부분은 앞에 있는 것처럼 노트 없는게 나을것 같아요.
02:18:485 - 제거 → 위와 같은 이유 입니다.
02:24:815 - 힛사 넣어주세요 → 슬라이더 틱 1개로 설정해서..
02:27:292 - 제거 → 위와 같은 이유 입니다....
02:44:907 (5) - ^ → 위와 같은 이유 입니다.
02:54:265 (5) - NC → 수정 완료.
04:11:329 (5) - ^ → 수정 완료.

[Normal]
00:34:724 - 클랩 → 수정 완료.
00:35:824 (1,2,3) - 같은 모양으로 -> ctrl + c,v한후에 120도씩 돌리면 되요 → 수정 완료.
00:42:980 (4) - 이렇세 → 수정 완료.
02:27:843 (5) - 제거 → 이부분에 보컬이 들려서 일단은 패스..
04:11:054 (4) - 펴주세여 → 수정 완료.

감사합니다! ;)
Xinchii
Hi ~ from your queue :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:109(5,6,1) - set at 180|104 , 280|112 , 380|112 to make more fit the circle flow.
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:522(3,4,5) - make it more curve ? will be smooth during play
  2. 00:49:036(1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part I see you want to follow vocal , but current it feel some strange on 00:49:586(3) - and 00:50:687(6) -
    cus both of them's front two note follow vocal close , but those two just set on durm.
    umm... maybe like this :
    or other patterns that have note on 00:49:448 - and 00:50:594 -
  3. 00:59:769(4,5) - Cus it have a storng vocal on 01:00:045 - ,it really not fit with slider end :<
    I will suggest set slider strat at 01:00:045 - and a note at 00:59:769 -
  4. 01:24:265(4) - maybe a spinner will be great with here :3
  5. 02:18:210(3,4,5,6,7,1) - This will be more fit I think.
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/53GG0.jpg
    02:19:036 - 02:19:586 - have a speed vocal , my view is it seems more fit with stream than 02:18:210 - 02:18:760 -
  6. 03:32:522(2,3,4) - Bigger spacing with (1) to make it symmetry
  7. 04:03:072(5) - stream contine ? until 04:03:347 -

Good song

Good luck for you !
[ Yuki ]_old
Hello~

[Normal]
03:31:971 (5) - 180'돌리고, Ctrl+G, x:172,y:208

[Hard]
00:49:035 (1,2) - 슬라이드 어때요? <언랭요소 (맞나?ㅇㅅㅇ;)
00:50:136 (4,5) - ^
00:57:843 (1,2,3) - 리버스 슬라이드 어떨까요? <이유^
02:35:824 (3,4) - ^^
03:46:008 (3,4) - ^
04:03:622 (1,2) - ^
04:08:301 (5,6) - ^

죄송합니다 모딩 잘못해요,,ㅇㅅㅇ;
Good song.. GL
Topic Starter
Losertic

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi ~ from your queue :D

leon1341414's Modding
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:109(5,6,1) - set at 180|104 , 280|112 , 380|112 to make more fit the circle flow. → Fixed.
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:522(3,4,5) - make it more curve ? will be smooth during play → 00:32:522 (3) - it's blanket 00:31:145 (5) - this note.
  2. 00:49:036(1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part I see you want to follow vocal , but current it feel some strange on 00:49:586(3) - and 00:50:687(6) -
    cus both of them's front two note follow vocal close , but those two just set on durm.
    umm... maybe like this :
    or other patterns that have note on 00:49:448 - and 00:50:594 - → Fixed.
  3. 00:59:769(4,5) - Cus it have a storng vocal on 01:00:045 - ,it really not fit with slider end :<
    I will suggest set slider strat at 01:00:045 - and a note at 00:59:769 - → Fixed.
  4. 01:24:265(4) - maybe a spinner will be great with here :3 → i think better now. same normal diff! (same break time)
  5. 02:18:210(3,4,5,6,7,1) - This will be more fit I think. → nice
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/53GG0.jpg
    02:19:036 - 02:19:586 - have a speed vocal , my view is it seems more fit with stream than 02:18:210 - 02:18:760 - → long stream.. it's really hard for "Hard" diff
  6. 03:32:522(2,3,4) - Bigger spacing with (1) to make it symmetry → maybe it's too hard;_;
  7. 04:03:072(5) - stream contine ? until 04:03:347 - → i think better now. and it's too hard

Good song

Good luck for you !
Thank you! ;)


[ Yuki ] wrote:

Hello~

Yuki's Modding
[Normal]
03:31:971 (5) - 180'돌리고, Ctrl+G, x:172,y:208 → 수정 완료.

[Hard]
00:49:035 (1,2) - 슬라이드 어때요? <언랭요소 (맞나?ㅇㅅㅇ;) → 이게 언랭 요소인가요...? 일단 이거 말고 그뒤에 노트 슬라이더로 바꿉니다.
00:50:136 (4,5) - ^ → 위와 동일합니다.
00:57:843 (1,2,3) - 리버스 슬라이드 어떨까요? <이유^ → 보컬에 따라서 갔습니다. 노말도 아니니 괜찮을듯.
02:35:824 (3,4) - ^ → 언랭 요소는 아닐 듯 합니다. 네;.
03:46:008 (3,4) - ^ → 위와 동일합니다.
04:03:622 (1,2) - ^ → 역시..
04:08:301 (5,6) - ^→ ㅜ.ㅜ

죄송합니다 모딩 잘못해요,,ㅇㅅㅇ;
Good song.. GL
감사합니다! ;)
Come[Back]Home
Normal

00:30:320 (4) This Repeat Slider just doesnt makes any sense, Maybe like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072422
00:55:641 (3) Move it to x: 496 y: 148 i think it looks better
03:21:513 (4) Delete 5 and do i like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072432

Hard

00:13:531 (1) Why that distance snap? Maybe use normal Distance snap
00:32:522 (3) Why is here a jump? I cant seem to find anything in the song to make a jump there
00:46:008 Add HC, would fit very nice
00:48:210 ^
00:49:861 ^
00:58:393 ^
01:45:182 (3) Move it to x: 336 y: 240
01:45:733 (4) Move it to x: 280 y: 192
04:08:577 Add HC


Thats all, nice Beatmap for your second *_*
The song is actually really catchy :3
Topic Starter
Losertic

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Come-back-home's Modding
Normal

00:30:320 (4) This Repeat Slider just doesnt makes any sense, Maybe like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072422 → I think better now. umm...
00:55:641 (3) Move it to x: 496 y: 148 i think it looks better → Fixed (495,153)
03:21:513 (4) Delete 5 and do i lik this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072432 → I tried first map set. but.. i like follow vocal XD

Hard

00:13:531 (1) Why that distance snap? Maybe use normal Distance snap → i think better now. it's hard diff!
00:32:522 (3) Why is here a jump? I cant seem to find anything in the song to make a jump there → ^
00:46:008 Add HC, would fit very nice → Fixed. nice
00:48:210 ^ → Fixed.
00:49:861 ^ → Fixed.
00:58:393 ^ → i think better now. follow vocal + hard pattern!
01:45:182 (3) Move it to x: 336 y: 240 → Fixed.
01:45:733 (4) Move it to x: 280 y: 192 → Fixed.
04:08:577 Add HC → I fixed first map set. maybe it's follow vocal.


Thats all, nice Beatmap for your second *_*
The song is actually really catchy :3
Thank you! ;)
Sonnyc
랜덤 모딩~

Hard:

00:14:081 (4) - 이 부분 리듬 처리도 00:15:182 (6,7) 처럼 하는건 어떨까요?
00:22:613 (3,4) - (3)을 1/4 늘이시고 (4) 삭제해 보세요
00:39:678 (1) - 노트를 2개 넣으시고, 슬라이더는 00:40:228 부터 1/1로 가는게 나을듯요
00:59:769 (4) - 뉴콤 어떨까요
01:01:696 (5) - 여기에서의 피니시는 개인적으로 어색하다고 봐요
01:13:255 (1) - 시작의 피니시 삭제
01:22:063 (1,2) - 음...... 음악이 역동적이지 않기 때문에 개인적으로 이렇게 꼬은 거 보다는 무난하게 sv 속도 줄이는게 어울릴거라고 봅니다.
01:42:705 (4) - 다음 슬라와의 점프가 이상한거 같아요. (316,28) 같은데에 놓는게 나을듯요
02:12:155 (1) - 노트 2개와 02:12:705 부터 슬라이더?
02:19:173 (2) - 이거 삭제하고 02:19:724 에 노트 추가가 더 어울릴듯요
02:24:540 (6,7) - 02:24:540 에 노트 두시고 02:24:815 에 1/1 슬라이더 놓는게 더 어울릴듯요
02:32:246 (1) - 노트 하나 넣으시고 스핀은 02:32:522 부터 하는게 어때요?
02:45:732 (1) - 시작의 피니시 제거
02:54:678 (1) - 피니시
03:31:971 (1) - ctrl+G가 더 일관성 있는 패턴으로 보일듯요
03:34:361 - 브레이크 넣어주세요
04:02:797 (3) - 피니시 제거

괜찮게 만드신 것 같습니다. 스타 받으시고 굳럭하세요~!
Topic Starter
Losertic

Sonnyc wrote:

랜덤 모딩~ ♥♥♥♥

Sonnyc's Modding
Hard:

00:14:081 (4) - 이 부분 리듬 처리도 00:15:182 (6,7) 처럼 하는건 어떨까요? → 수정 완료.
00:22:613 (3,4) - (3)을 1/4 늘이시고 (4) 삭제해 보세요 → 수정 완료.
00:39:678 (1) - 노트를 2개 넣으시고, 슬라이더는 00:40:228 부터 1/1로 가는게 나을듯요 → 수정 완료.
00:59:769 (4) - 뉴콤 어떨까요 → 수정 완료.
01:01:696 (5) - 여기에서의 피니시는 개인적으로 어색하다고 봐요 → 수정 완료.
01:13:255 (1) - 시작의 피니시 삭제 → 수정 완료.
01:22:063 (1,2) - 음...... 음악이 역동적이지 않기 때문에 개인적으로 이렇게 꼬은 거 보다는 무난하게 sv 속도 줄이는게 어울릴거라고 봅니다. → 글을 보니까 왠지 어색한게 느껴지고 그렇다고 슬라이더 속도를 줄이니 너무 밋밋하고ㅠㅠ 그래서 결론은(...) 일단 놔두겠습니다.
01:42:705 (4) - 다음 슬라와의 점프가 이상한거 같아요. (316,28) 같은데에 놓는게 나을듯요 → 수정 완료.
02:12:155 (1) - 노트 2개와 02:12:705 부터 슬라이더? → 그 전에 같은 리듬을 수정했으므로 이것 역시 수정.
02:19:173 (2) - 이거 삭제하고 02:19:724 에 노트 추가가 더 어울릴듯요 → 노트하나-연타5개는 이 하드 난이도안에서는 한개도 없는 리듬입니다(아마도요.) 대신 슬라이더하나-연타5개 or 연타5개-슬라이더하나 or 연타5개-노트하나는 이 비트맵에 있어요(아마도)그래서 일단 놔두겠습니다.
02:24:540 (6,7) - 02:24:540 에 노트 두시고 02:24:815 에 1/1 슬라이더 놓는게 더 어울릴듯요 → 수정 완료. 는 그냥 자리 바꾸기만 했는데 은근히 괜찮은것 같네요... 모양은 그대로.
02:32:246 (1) - 노트 하나 넣으시고 스핀은 02:32:522 부터 하는게 어때요? → 수정 완료.
02:45:732 (1) - 시작의 피니시 제거 → 수정 완료.
02:54:678 (1) - 피니시 → 수정 완료.
03:31:971 (1) - ctrl+G가 더 일관성 있는 패턴으로 보일듯요 → 수정 완료. 이건 좀 역발상....
03:34:361 - 브레이크 넣어주세요 → 수정 완료.
04:02:797 (3) - 피니시 제거 → 수정 완료.

괜찮게 만드신 것 같습니다. 스타 받으시고 굳럭하세요~!
스타&모딩 감사합니다! ;)
Satellite
Hi
KOTOKO <3

[General]
Source: Accel World ?
Tag: Saitou is better?

[Normal]
01:12:980 - add note?
02:23:439 - ^
03:23:714 (1) - why don't use distancesnap?

good.

[Hard]
00:32:246 (2) - why a mini jump? I think not need jump >.>
00:49:861 (4) - remove note? same as 00:46:558 - and 00:48:760 -
00:52:338 (4) - The dirty a little...
01:13:806 (2,3,4,5) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

01:18:760 (5) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
01:52:888 (5) - try CTRL+G
02:03:347 (1) - remove Nc and 02:03:897 (2) - add Nc
02:19:861 (6) - Move x256 y96 is better? (DS)
02:24:815 (7) - try CTRL+G
02:32:384 (1) - spinner start 02:32:522 - here

good luck~
Topic Starter
Losertic

Satellite wrote:

Hi
KOTOKO <3

Satellite's Modding
[General]
Source: Accel World ? → hmm. pass. (i don't know this part... maybe. ask to BAT.)
Tag: Saitou is better? http://ja.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?sea ... C%E7%B4%A2 umm... no?

[Normal]
01:12:980 - add note? → Fixed.
02:23:439 - ^ → Fixed.
03:23:714 (1) - why don't use distancesnap? → It's my mistake! o.o. Fixed.

good. → thanks! ;)

[Hard]
00:32:246 (2) - why a mini jump? I think not need jump >.> → hmm, but-..maybe.. it's no problem!...
00:49:861 (4) - remove note? same as 00:46:558 - and 00:48:760 - → Fixed.
00:52:338 (4) - The dirty a little... → umm. like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1079711 (change little shape, ctrl+g)
01:13:806 (2,3,4,5) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
→ wait, what?.. ;_;
01:18:760 (5) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well. → Fixed.
01:52:888 (5) - try CTRL+G → i think better now. because it's too hard jump. and.. ummmm. not good this voice part+hard jump?
02:03:347 (1) - remove Nc and 02:03:897 (2) - add Nc → Fixed.
02:19:861 (6) - Move x256 y96 is better? (DS) → Fixed.
02:24:815 (7) - try CTRL+G → Fixed.
02:32:384 (1) - spinner start 02:32:522 - here → Fixed.

good luck~
Thank you! ;)
El SolarBeam
from M4M

[Storyboard]

well, since I'm quite fond of SB, I'll include it in this mod~
00:10:503 Add sb/circle to follow the song rythm
00:11:604 ^
00:12:705 ^
00:14:907 ^
00:17:109 ^
00:44:081 I think circle here should be changed with something like this http://puu.sh/5chet.png
01:24:265 Consider adding sb/white
02:17:109 ^
02:41:329 to 02:43:531 Consider fading both bg, then give white flash afterwise. That should do an impact
03:01:146 to 03:14:357 Please give whatever SB element here, cause black bg seems ugly
oh, and I like that snow effect <3


[Normal]

00:33:623 Could you reshape it so that the slider's end make a better blanket with next slider?
00:55:641 Rotate it around 33' to create a symmetry
01:12:980 Maybe move to x:332 y:152
You sure don't want to map it until the end of the song? This diff is good though


[Hard]

00:16:008 Move anchor to x:360 y:144 (sorry if it's just a little different change)
00:16:008 Move slider to x:300 y:88
00:52:338 Just suggestion, make (4) and (5) become reverse slider
01:15:458 Make it into more creative shape maybe?
01:23:990 Add finish
03:25:366 NC
03:28:393 ^
03:47:935 (7) The shape doesn't fit the (6) slider
04:06:100 Move the red anchor to x:276 y:116

not much that I can say, since the map itself is good :3
good luck~
Topic Starter
Losertic

El SolarBeam wrote:

from M4M

El SolarBeam's Modding
[Storyboard]

well, since I'm quite fond of SB, I'll include it in this mod~
00:10:503 Add sb/circle to follow the song rythm
00:11:604 ^
00:12:705 ^
00:14:907 ^
00:17:109 ^
00:44:081 I think circle here should be changed with something like this http://puu.sh/5chet.png
01:24:265 Consider adding sb/white
02:17:109 ^
02:41:329 to 02:43:531 Consider fading both bg, then give white flash afterwise. That should do an impact
03:01:146 to 03:14:357 Please give whatever SB element here, cause black bg seems ugly
oh, and I like that snow effect <3 → I send PM to SB Maker.


[Normal]

00:33:623 Could you reshape it so that the slider's end make a better blanket with next slider? → moved 00:35:825 (1) - this slider.
00:55:641 Rotate it around 33' to create a symmetry → Fixed.
01:12:980 Maybe move to x:332 y:152 → i want 1.0x distance ;_;
You sure don't want to map it until the end of the song? This diff is good though → :3


[Hard]

00:16:008 Move anchor to x:360 y:144 (sorry if it's just a little different change) → Fixed.
00:16:008 Move slider to x:300 y:88 → ummm??.. wait, umm.. well.... like this?... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089484 i don't like this ;_;
00:52:338 Just suggestion, make (4) and (5) become reverse slider → i think better now :3
01:15:458 Make it into more creative shape maybe? → umm? i think better this note's shape. like bowling? ;)
01:23:990 Add finish → maybe not. hmm. i think weird sound..?
03:25:366 NC → this NC pattern, like 00:39:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . sorry. umm.
03:28:393 ^ → non fixed.
03:47:935 (7) The shape doesn't fit the (6) slider → Fixed. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089502
04:06:100 Move the red anchor to x:276 y:116 → move (274,121) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089506

not much that I can say, since the map itself is good :3
good luck~

Wait. I'll check your mod.

Thank you! ;)
Sun Rainbow
No change,But thx your SB mod!>w<
yurunneram
Normal

00:11:604 (3) - Rather flow-breaking. But actually the problem lies in (1) since people expect it to flow just because the first two notes did

01:02:797 (2) - Stack below the end of slider 01:00:044 (3) (you'd have t rearrange (1))

01:50:411 (4,1) - flows badly. Put them on the left side of (3) instead

02:18:210 (3) - Make good triangle with (1) and (2)

02:22:338 - Add note?

02:46:008 - ^

03:21:513 (4) - This was unexpected

Love your pentagons @w@

HARD

00:23:714 (4,5) - Would rather replace with same slider from (3)

00:42:429 (8) - NC here instead

01:18:760 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hey, this pentagon ain't perfect

02:19:724 - Shouldn't there be a note here?

02:43:256 and 02:43:393 - Add note to make tripplet

Very good ^^ Star~ I'll be waiting for this rank~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
GugUCorn
late m4m~

[normal]

  1. 00:42:980 (4) - NC.
  2. 00:53:439 (1) - 첫 부분에 피니쉬
  3. 01:02:246 (1) - 피니쉬
  4. 01:04:449 (5) - 가운데 슬라이더 포인트를 (148,228) 으로
  5. 01:19:861 (1) - 피니쉬
  6. 01:22:063 (1) - ^
  7. 02:08:301 (1) - 역시 피니쉬.
  8. 02:15:458 (5) - NC
  9. 03:42:980 (1) - 피니쉬
  10. 03:50:687 (6) - 끝에 피니쉬 빠졌네요
  11. 04:11:604 (1) - 피니쉬
[hard]

  1. 00:24:953 (1) - 00:26:742 이 때 끝내는 건 어떨까요?
  2. 00:33:622 (1) - 2번째 슬라이더 포인트를 (316,144)
  3. 00:38:026 (6) - NC
  4. 00:39:678 (1,3) - 1번 뉴콤 해제,3번 뉴콤
  5. 00:53:438 (1) - 첫 부분 피니쉬
  6. 01:19:861 (5) - 피니쉬
  7. 02:41:329 (4) - 뉴콤보
  8. 03:25:366 (5) - 이 다음 노트가 겹쳐있어서 인식하기 어려울것 같아서, 5번 노트에 뉴콤보!
  9. 03:33:622 (4) - 끝에 피니쉬
  10. 03:36:100 - 여기서부터 보컬이 시작되는거 같은데, 노트추가 제안
Topic Starter
Losertic

yurunneram wrote:

yurunneram's Modding
Normal

00:11:604 (3) - Rather flow-breaking. But actually the problem lies in (1) since people expect it to flow just because the first two notes did → well.... but, it's normal diff. not matter? (slow BPM,AR. seeing notes)

01:02:797 (2) - Stack below the end of slider 01:00:044 (3) (you'd have t rearrange (1)) → Fixed.

01:50:411 (4,1) - flows badly. Put them on the left side of (3) instead → Changed.

02:18:210 (3) - Make good triangle with (1) and (2)

02:22:338 - Add note? → i think better now :3

02:46:008 - ^ → same answer.

03:21:513 (4) - This was unexpected → add NC

Love your pentagons @w@ → Thanks @w@

HARD

00:23:714 (4,5) - Would rather replace with same slider from (3) → Fixed.

00:42:429 (8) - NC here instead → i think not. like normal diff, and 02:15:457 (1) - same rhythm.

01:18:760 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hey, this pentagon ain't perfect → Fixed.

02:19:724 - Shouldn't there be a note here? → yep, because it's too hard.

02:43:256 and 02:43:393 - Add note to make tripplet → Fixed.

Very good ^^ Star~ I'll be waiting for this rank~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Thank you Yurun Ceroia Neram. ;) (it's your full name? lol)


TaMul wrote:

late m4m~

TaMul's Modding
[normal]

  1. 00:42:980 (4) - NC. → 수정 완료.
  2. 00:53:439 (1) - 첫 부분에 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  3. 01:02:246 (1) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  4. 01:04:449 (5) - 가운데 슬라이더 포인트를 (148,228) 으로 → 왜 슬라이더 중간점을 이렇게 옮기시는지는 알겠습니다. 그러나 4번 노트와 약간 부딪쳐서 패스할게요.
  5. 01:19:861 (1) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  6. 01:22:063 (1) - ^ → 수정 완료.
  7. 02:08:301 (1) - 역시 피니쉬. → 수정 완료.
  8. 02:15:458 (5) - NC → 수정 완료.
  9. 03:42:980 (1) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  10. 03:50:687 (6) - 끝에 피니쉬 빠졌네요 → 수정 완료.
  11. 04:11:604 (1) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
[hard]

  1. 00:24:953 (1) - 00:26:742 이 때 끝내는 건 어떨까요? → 스핀이 끝난다음 바로 노트인게 좀 맘에들지 않네요...
  2. 00:33:622 (1) - 2번째 슬라이더 포인트를 (316,144) → 수정 완료.
  3. 00:38:026 (6) - NC → 02:13:531 (4) - 처럼 뉴콤보 유지하겠습니다.
  4. 00:39:678 (1,3) - 1번 뉴콤 해제,3번 뉴콤 → 00:40:228 - 이 3번 슬라이더 부분이 그렇게 임팩트 있는 부분이 아니라서 패스하겠습니다. 이거랑 비슷한 박자도 이런 배치입니다. 02:12:155 (1) - 예시.
  5. 00:53:438 (1) - 첫 부분 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  6. 01:19:861 (5) - 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  7. 02:41:329 (4) - 뉴콤보 → 수정 완료.
  8. 03:25:366 (5) - 이 다음 노트가 겹쳐있어서 인식하기 어려울것 같아서, 5번 노트에 뉴콤보! → 수정 완료.
  9. 03:33:622 (4) - 끝에 피니쉬 → 수정 완료.
  10. 03:36:100 - 여기서부터 보컬이 시작되는거 같은데, 노트추가 제안 → 이부분은 비슷한 박자와 동일하게 하는게 맘에들어서 넣지 않겠습니다.

힛사관련 모딩! 좋아요 진짜ㅠㅠ

감사합니다 ;)
yurunneram

Losertic wrote:

(it's your full name? lol)
Haha hai desu OwO)/ Beautiful name desune?~ giehehe~
Topic Starter
Losertic

yurunneram wrote:

Losertic wrote:

(it's your full name? lol)
Haha hai desu OwO)/ Beautiful name desune?~ giehehe~
giehehe/...

nice laughter 8-)
Robbydie
Hiya :D

First of all, i like the song and the anime^^
Here is my modding :

Hard

  • 00:38:026 (6) - clap is missing
    00:44:081 (5) - the whistle makes a strange sound there, i prefer the finish more -> same at this place -> 02:16:558 (5)
    00:46:146 (3) - imo it sounds better if there is a note
    00:48:347 (7) - here should be then also a note
    00:49:448 (3) - the jump from the note before to this one is too big, you should make it some shorter -> same at this place ->00:50:549 (6)
    02:11:604 to 02:12:430 - this sequenz is strange for me , may you should change it a bit, for example like this :
    http://s7.directupload.net/file/d/3441/9z2cdjf8_jpg.htm
    03:14:357 - i would add there a note
    03:25:366 (1) - clap is missing
Normal

  • 00:33:072 (4) - whistle is missing
    00:44:081 (3) - like i wrote in Hard, there is a strange sound. if you change it in Hard, you also should change it in Normal.
    03:33:623 (6) - turn the whistle off there and make it on at the next note
Generall

  • You did a nice job ^^ , i hope for you it will get ranked ;D
    One point: Like someone said before me, i think the desing is really dark. You should edit the video and improt some other pictures.
I tried to find more errors, but i am just fine with the rest xDD,
so at least i hope my modding is a bit helpful ;D
Topic Starter
Losertic

Robbydie wrote:

Hiya :D

First of all, i like the song and the anime^^ :3
Here is my modding :

Robbydie's Modding
Hard

  • 00:38:026 (6) - clap is missing → Fixed.
    00:44:081 (5) - the whistle makes a strange sound there, i prefer the finish more -> same at this place -> 02:16:558 (5) → i think better now.
    00:46:146 (3) - imo it sounds better if there is a note → okay, change one slider (1/4)+add reverse
    00:48:347 (7) - here should be then also a note → fixed. like ↑
    00:49:448 (3) - the jump from the note before to this one is too big, you should make it some shorter -> same at this place ->00:50:549 (6) → change rhythm! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1102972
    02:11:604 to 02:12:430 - this sequenz is strange for me , may you should change it a bit, for example like this : → i think better now. and 00:39:678 (1,2,3) - it's same rhythm part.
    http://s7.directupload.net/file/d/3441/9z2cdjf8_jpg.htm
    03:14:357 - i would add there a note → Fixed.
    03:25:366 (1) - clap is missing → Fixed.
Normal

  • 00:33:072 (4) - whistle is missing → umm... no?
    00:44:081 (3) - like i wrote in Hard, there is a strange sound. if you change it in Hard, you also should change it in Normal. → Well... pass ;_;. i don't know. i think better this sound.
    03:33:623 (6) - turn the whistle off there and make it on at the next note → Fixed.
Generall

  • You did a nice job ^^ , i hope for you it will get ranked ;D
    One point: Like someone said before me, i think the desing is really dark. You should edit the video and improt some other pictures. → really dark? lol .... but, i don't have BG. ;_;

I tried to find more errors, but i am just fine with the rest xDD,
so at least i hope my modding is a bit helpful ;D
Thank you! ;)
Robbydie
hmm for the design : i think you can cut some pictures into a video and make them slide a bit . then you have another background.
It makes the video more interesting, but its just my opinion and it is just an addition to the beatmap, so dont keep thinking about this long ^^
Topic Starter
Losertic

Robbydie wrote:

hmm for the design : i think you can cut some pictures into a video and make them slide a bit . then you have another background.
It makes the video more interesting, but its just my opinion and it is just an addition to the beatmap, so dont keep thinking about this long ^^

Thanks for your advice!!

( but, i don't know how to use "photoshop" :( ) and Storyboard...
tutuhaha
Hi~ o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ

[Hard]
I think this hard should add more rhythm so....maybe lot of mod is about add note so....whatever...
00:20:412 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109053 (just look at rhythm)
00:27:017 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109058 (just look at rhythm)
00:31:283 (x) - add note
00:46:558 (x) - ^
00:51:237 (1) - delete 2 then http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109061 (just look at rhythm)
00:53:302 (x) - add note
00:59:907 (x) - ^
01:03:347 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109102 (just look at rhythm)
01:07:476 (x) - ^
01:55:366 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - little bit werid when I play this
02:19:724 (x) - note
02:20:136 (8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109082 (just look at rhythm)
02:28:393 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109088 (just look at rhythm【slider 2 】)
00:27:017 (x) - 00:44:081 (x)
01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x)
those two part should have almost same rhythm, and I think you lose many rhythm in 01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x) ._.
03:36:925 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109109 (just look at rhythm)
03:41:604 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109112 (just look at rhythm)
03:48:760 (x) - add note
well because this song has almost same rhythm in kiai time so...some problem will be same as another kiai time
v This is what rhythm I try to describe v
http://puu.sh/5ln71.osu
I just think this diff lost much blue tick rhythm /_\...
Topic Starter
Losertic

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~ o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ >,<

tutuhaha's Modding
[Hard]
I think this hard should add more rhythm so....maybe lot of mod is about add note so....whatever... → Wellllll. okay
00:20:412 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109053 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
00:27:017 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109058 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
00:31:283 (x) - add note → Fixed.
00:46:558 (x) - ^ → Fixed.
00:51:237 (1) - delete 2 then http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109061 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
00:53:302 (x) - add note → Fixed.
00:59:907 (x) - ^ → Fixed.
01:03:347 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109102 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
01:07:476 (x) - ^ → add note.
01:55:366 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - little bit werid when I play this → Changed. maybe much better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1112468
02:19:724 (x) - note → no, because it's too hard. 7 notes ;_;. ( and i don't like this rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1112478 )
02:20:136 (8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109082 (just look at rhythm) → Fixed.
02:28:393 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109088 (just look at rhythm【slider 2 】) → Fixed.
00:27:017 (x) - 00:44:081 (x)
01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x)
those two part should have almost same rhythm, and I think you lose many rhythm in 01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x) ._. → well, okay. i changed some rhythm. ex) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1112683
03:36:925 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109109 (just look at rhythm) → → Fixed. and changed little http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1112698
03:41:604 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109112 (just look at rhythm) → i think better now. because it's not follow vocal. follow boomboom sound anyway, it's maybe alright rhythm for hard diff XD
03:48:760 (x) - add note → Fixed.
well because this song has almost same rhythm in kiai time so...some problem will be same as another kiai time
v This is what rhythm I try to describe v
http://puu.sh/5ln71.osu
I just think this diff lost much blue tick rhythm /_\... → ahhhh. right, but maybe too hard for hard diff user? hmm..
Thank you! ;)

I'll fixed tomorrow. (and i download your diff hehe 8-) it's good rhythm notes. it was helpful ;) )
Sun Rainbow

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~ o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ

[Hard]
I think this hard should add more rhythm so....maybe lot of mod is about add note so....whatever...
00:20:412 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109053 (just look at rhythm)
00:27:017 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109058 (just look at rhythm)
00:31:283 (x) - add note
00:46:558 (x) - ^
00:51:237 (1) - delete 2 then http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109061 (just look at rhythm)
00:53:302 (x) - add note
00:59:907 (x) - ^
01:03:347 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109102 (just look at rhythm)
01:07:476 (x) - ^
01:55:366 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - little bit werid when I play this
02:19:724 (x) - note
02:20:136 (8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109082 (just look at rhythm)
02:28:393 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109088 (just look at rhythm【slider 2 】)
00:27:017 (x) - 00:44:081 (x)
01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x)
those two part should have almost same rhythm, and I think you lose many rhythm in 01:59:494 (x) - 02:16:558 (x) ._.
03:36:925 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109109 (just look at rhythm)
03:41:604 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1109112 (just look at rhythm)
03:48:760 (x) - add note
well because this song has almost same rhythm in kiai time so...some problem will be same as another kiai time
v This is what rhythm I try to describe v
http://puu.sh/5ln71.osu
I just think this diff lost much blue tick rhythm /_\...
haha姐姐!
Atrue
Hello~
From my modding queue. Sorry for late mod.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Hmm.. No easy or Insane? That's ok because I think it can be hard to make a In diff.
Ok let's start.
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ Good luck.
[Normal]
General
Hard to find something to say because you followed drums almost all the map and arrangement is almost blanket.. Not bad idea for a normal diff but may not so interesting.
Placement
00:33:623 (1,1) - Blanket is a good choice.
[Hard]
General
Some suggestions here.
Beats
00:27:017 (1,2,3) - The start of slider 2 is not on vocal, so I suggest this beat.00:55:640 (2,3,4) - This beat is messy in following tracks. Maybe not use reverse in 2 is a better choice.
01:04:861 - Add a note? A voice here is missing.
01:08:852 (5,6) - The vocal is more like 01:13:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why the first 2 sets of vocals are sliders and the 3rd set is a triplet? A more balanced rhythm here is better.
01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really not good rhythm here. Vocal is easy to follow.
01:17:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Boring 1/2s... So sorry because you did followed drums but maybe vocal is a better choice because you followed vocal in previous part and the 2 part is better to be seen as a whole part.
02:19:724 - Add a note. If you are not sure about this because the difficult you can make 02:19:036 (1,2) a slider.
02:20:825 (10) - change the slider in to the note here.
02:20:825 (10) - A triplet is suitable. And if you added triplet here, you may need to add here too 02:22:476
02:28:256 - Add a note to cover the vocal
02:30:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - My advice is following vocal here.
02:47:934 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:50:411 (4) - Also vocal is not well followed..
04:04:999 (1,2,3) - Also a matter of track. I think vocal is better. 1 1/4 longer?
Placement
00:09:402 (1,2) - Not perfect blanket but ok.
00:22:613 (3,4) - Bend 3 a bit will make it a better flow.
00:43:531 (3,4) - A sudden jump.
00:53:990 (2,3) - ^, and flow is not so good.
01:06:650 (1) - The jump is really big.
01:06:650 (1,2) - Not good blanket.
01:09:265 (6,1) - ^
01:42:705 (4) - Distance is really need to be controlled.
01:46:558 (5,6,7) - ^ pay attention to the distance between stream.
03:47:109 (6,7) - Blanket is not good here.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Topic Starter
Losertic

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From my modding queue. Sorry for late mod.



azuretwinight's Modding
[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Hmm.. No easy or Insane? That's ok because I think it can be hard to make a In diff.
Ok let's start.
(ノ·ω·)ノ? Good luck. → uh, umm.. star? :roll:
[Normal]
General
Hard to find something to say because you followed drums almost all the map and arrangement is almost blanket.. Not bad idea for a normal diff but may not so interesting. → I know. (maybe) it's boring diff.... but- i choose this way... it's simple. and (maybe) pretty?
Placement
00:33:623 (1,1) - Blanket is a good choice. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1153277 :3
[Hard]
General
Some suggestions here.
Beats
00:27:017 (1,2,3) - The start of slider 2 is not on vocal, so I suggest this beat. → Fixed.
00:55:640 (2,3,4) - This beat is messy in following tracks. Maybe not use reverse in 2 is a better choice. → i changed new rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1165468
01:04:861 - Add a note? A voice here is missing. → Fixed.
01:08:852 (5,6) - The vocal is more like → umm... not change. follow boom-boom- sound 01:13:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why the first 2 sets of vocals are sliders and the 3rd set is a triplet? A more balanced rhythm here is better. → change new pattern!
01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really not good rhythm here. Vocal is easy to follow. → change new pattern!
01:17:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Boring 1/2s... So sorry because you did followed drums but maybe vocal is a better choice because you followed vocal in previous part and the 2 part is better to be seen as a whole part. → change new pattern!
02:19:724 - Add a note. If you are not sure about this because the difficult you can make 02:19:036 (1,2) a slider. → add slider
02:20:825 (10) - change the slider in to the note here. → 02:21:513 ~ 02:25:366 - not follow vocal o.o
02:20:825 (10) - A triplet is suitable. And if you added triplet here, you may need to add here too 02:22:476 → 02:21:513 ~ 02:25:366 - this part, not follow vocal.
02:28:256 - Add a note to cover the vocal → Fixed.
02:30:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - My advice is following vocal here. → Fixed.
02:47:934 (1,2,3,4) - ^ → Fixed.
02:50:411 (4) - Also vocal is not well followed.. → Fixed.
04:04:999 (1,2,3) - Also a matter of track. I think vocal is better. 1 1/4 longer? → Fixed.
Placement
00:09:402 (1,2) - Not perfect blanket but ok. → :3
00:22:613 (3,4) - Bend 3 a bit will make it a better flow. → changed shape http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1165394
00:43:531 (3,4) - A sudden jump. → well.. i think it's good. (because this song-slow bpm. not hard)
00:53:990 (2,3) - ^, and flow is not so good. → i changed new rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1165468
01:06:650 (1) - The jump is really big. → Fixed.
01:06:650 (1,2) - Not good blanket. → Fixed.
01:09:265 (6,1) - ^→ where..? umm but i think it's okay.
01:42:705 (4) - Distance is really need to be controlled. → changed distance 1.5x.
01:46:558 (5,6,7) - ^ pay attention to the distance between stream. changed distance. - 01:47:659 (2,3,4)
03:47:109 (6,7) - Blanket is not good here. → maybe... no problem?..
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Thank you! ;) and i really busy now T.T

Finally fixed your mod.
terametis


Hi, from Quiz Modding team. sorry for late :(

Black = suggestion.  Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Hard]

Hitsound
  1. 00:59:219 (2) - This clap is intentional?
  2. 01:15:458 (1) - add clap to slider's start.
  3. 01:56:742 (8) - You put clap to slider's end, is it intentional?
  4. 02:24:815 (7) - maybe add clap to slider's start.
  5. 03:52:338 (2) - remove clap on slider's start.
  6. 04:11:742 (1) - maybe add finish
General
  1. 01:21:788 (x) - add note is more good for me.
  2. 01:22:063 (1) - I don't recommend this slider. I am not certain whether this is applicable to the Ranking Rule, but this slider point is very dangerous.
  3. 01:23:164 (2) - ^
  4. 01:24:402 (x) - maybe add spinner. You put it on [Normal].
  5. 02:54:540 (x) - KIAI pattern is incorrect. move to 02:54:265 or shift the others KIAI.
  6. 04:11:329 (1) - You put N:C1 sound 02:54:265 (1), but here is S:C1. You should be unified either.
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:412 (3) - add clap to slider's start and end.
  2. 00:33:623 (1) - (nazi). add silence soft-sliderslide3.
good luck<3
Topic Starter
Losertic

terametis wrote:



Hi, from Quiz Modding team. sorry for late :(

terametis's Modding
Black = suggestion.  Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Hard]

Hitsound
  1. 00:59:219 (2) - This clap is intentional? → remove clap.
  2. 01:15:458 (1) - add clap to slider's start. → Fixed.
  3. 01:56:742 (8) - You put clap to slider's end, is it intentional? → remove clap.
  4. 02:24:815 (7) - maybe add clap to slider's start. → Fixed.
  5. 03:52:338 (2) - remove clap on slider's start. → Fixed.
  6. 04:11:742 (1) - maybe add finish → Fixed.
General
  1. 01:21:788 (x) - add note is more good for me. → Fixed.
  2. 01:22:063 (1) - I don't recommend this slider. I am not certain whether this is applicable to the Ranking Rule, but this slider point is very dangerous.→ okay, change this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1251062
  3. 01:23:164 (2) - ^ → Fixed. ^
  4. 01:24:402 (x) - maybe add spinner. You put it on [Normal]. → Fixed. ^
  5. 02:54:540 (x) - KIAI pattern is incorrect. move to 02:54:265 or shift the others KIAI. → Fixed.
  6. 04:11:329 (1) - You put N:C1 sound 02:54:265 (1), but here is S:C1. You should be unified either. → ahh, set N:C1
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:412 (3) - add clap to slider's start and end. → Fixed.
  2. 00:33:623 (1) - (nazi). add silence soft-sliderslide3. → change this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1251090

good luck<3
Thank you! ;)
Feith
hai...hai..
I'm from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/ehta5q4qaxz4

what is changed :
- keep the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standadr monitor size
- little bit change of object timing and hitsound

that is all for me
hope this is useful to you

thank you for request ;)
Topic Starter
Losertic

Feith wrote:

hai...hai..
I'm from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/ehta5q4qaxz4

what is changed :
- keep the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standadr monitor size
- little bit change of object timing and hitsound

that is all for me
hope this is useful to you

thank you for request ;)

thanks mod, but i don't know change your mod

sry, non-fixed. next time write mod in this thread plz!
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