1. Easy (2.25 stars, 254 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 692 notes)
3. Muzukashii (4.55 stars, 785 notes)
4. Nardo's Oni (4.83 stars, 1142 notes)
5. Normal (4.22 stars, 360 notes)
6. Ts8zs' Hard (4.86 stars, 553 notes)

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

Ticket：When you finish all diffs and your map has more than 5 mods(this post is not include in the 5 mods), you can call me to mod this map.

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

2.0 sv is not good imo, I suggest 1.6 to 1.8
not always ctrl+c then ctrl+v and then ctrl+h ctrl+j
00:43:412 (3) - few ranked maps have this kind of all-overlap. The same to the following overlap 01:11:020 (3) - and so on.

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

01:11:020 (3) - 01:11:020 (3) - remove the kiai
make the kiai end at 01:20:368 - and 02:36:890 -
00:10:803 (2) - stack, or move away
00:22:107 (4) - some sliders like this is ugly, not fit the map. also 01:01:238 (6) - , especially 03:25:151 (2,3,4) -
03:35:803 (3,4,5,6,1) - too sudden

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

03:39:716 - this kiai should be earlier
00:26:890 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this kind of jumps isn't good here.

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

I make a little for fun, don't ask me for GD if you really really really need it >//<(it's important so I speak 3 times) http://puu.sh/4ZdHY.osu
This little map may do some help to you

ichivictus wrote:

General:
Amazing storyboard ;3 (thanks :3)

04:04:063 to 04:14:498 on easy and normal are not mapped (just a short spinner). Consider mapping it and ending with a spinner like you did with Hard and Insane so players see the Thanks for Playing storyboard. (done~)

[Easy]
00:51:019 (5) - Maybe stack it on (2)
03:46:671 (1,3) - Not fond of this overlap
01:15:367 - I don't think clap sounds good here.
03:07:106 (7) - Maybe use drum sampleset (~70% vol.) for this slider?
(fixed too)

Why is there no finish? Places I'd put finish at (it's up to you)
00:56:237 - Highly suggested
01:10:150 - ^
01:17:106 - ^
01:18:845 - ^
02:12:758 - ^
02:26:671 - ^
02:33:628 (1) - ^
02:35:367 - ^
03:29:280 - ^
03:39:715 - ^
03:53:628 (1) - ^
04:02:324 - ^
04:02:541 - ^
(all fixed)

01:03:193 - (maybe or maybe not) (added)
01:06:671 - ^ (no)
02:05:802 (1) - ^ (no)
02:09:280 (1) - ^ (no)
03:37:976 (3) - Whole slider (added some)

[Normal]
This diff also lacks finish in places that could really use it. I guess it's just your preference to keep it that way, but I still suggest adding some.
(will do later~)

A lot of the spacing doesn't really make sense for a normal. I'll simply point out ones that threw me off
00:53:412 (1,2,3) - ^
01:11:455 (4) - ^
01:49:499 (3,4) - Very hard for a normal
04:00:151 (2) - ^
(need further modding for this, thanks for pointing it out)

03:33:194 (2) - I really don't understand the spacing here. Sure it's readable, but why the slight jump/antijump? (antijump? i don't see any?)
03:34:933 (3) - Brush over all your spacing because some places like this are not consitent and it is noticeable when playing. Unless it is meant to be a jump, try to have .03x or less DS difference between notes.

00:27:542 (4,1) - Perhaps make these line up perfectly? http://i.imgur.com/8RnO9UH.png
00:05:584 (1) -
(fixed)

03:35:803 (5,6,7,8,1) - Could use more pattern http://i.imgur.com/XiNe90v.png
(nice pattern, accepted~)

03:29:716 (2,1) - I don't like this overlap
(fixed)


[Hard]
Overall it's a really good hard diff. Watch some of your overlaps though and doublecheck spacing.

00:32:324 (1) - Consider giving this a slight jump
00:39:063 (3,5,6) - Odd overlap.
00:57:541 (4,6) - ^
00:40:150 (5) - .08x DS difference is still a little noticeable while playing. Move one grid up.
01:39:280 (1,2) - This can be blanketed better (try using just one anchor point) and consider starting (1) on x:248 y:200

03:01:889 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really like this part :3

03:36:889 (1) - I think you miss an opportunity to have an awesome jump around here. Consider mapping this part instead of a spinner.
(all fixed~)

[Insane]
I don't think it's fast enough to justify AR9. Consider AR8.

00:35:803 (5) - This completely breaks the flow. Consider Ctrl+g and stack on (4)
(fixed)

Try this triangular kinda pattern and see what you think:
02:35:368 (1,2,3) - x:360 y:240
02:36:238 (1) - X:184 y:120
02:36:455 (2) - x:80 y:240
02:36:672 (1,2,3) - x:256 y:240
(i think that's good too, accepted~)

I love this insane, but I really think it should be AR8. During normal parts you shouldn't have to see only 1 or 2 notes at a time. This makes it feel like HR. AR8 fixes this. (i prefer AR9 because it's more fit the flow of the jumpy diff like this)



Take a star for the SB <3

theramdans wrote:

Hi m4m from my queue
[General]
Wow what an SB (thanks anyway :3)

[Easy]
slidertick: use slider tick rate 1, it is more natural to hear and is easier to hitsound the ticks, if you want (i'll stick with tick rate 2 for consistency :3)
00:01:889 (2-3-4-5-6) - spacing inconsistency, not good for easy diff
00:05:802 (7-8-1-2-3) - same^
(um.. fixed a little)
00:16:237 (3) - this slider is kinda weird in shape, not sure though (fixed with simpler shape)
00:21:019 (4-1-2-3) - spacing inconsistency, not good for easy diff
00:26:671 (7-1-2-3-4-5-6) - spacing inconsistency, not good for easy diff
00:50:584 (4) - [368||236]
01:07:106 (5) - [252||44]
01:10:584 (1) - [96||288]
01:14:063 (6) - [256||204]
01:15:802 (8-9) - bad spacing
01:34:498 (4) - [348||168]
01:45:367 (1) - avoid placing a hit object after a spinner (especially 1 beat apart like this) for easy diff
01:58:845 (1) - [284||196]
02:00:584 (3) - [156||84]
02:02:324 (5) - [200||260]
02:04:498 (8) - [360||52]
02:16:237 (5) - [292||208]
02:22:758 (4) - [196||176]
02:31:889 (7) - [284||132]
02:52:758 (3) - [88||332]
02:59:715 (3) - [48||232]
03:03:193 (2) - [124||96]
03:41:019 (2) - [180||232]
03:42:758 (4) - [216||336]
03:29:280 (1-2-3) - fix the spacing (x0.94), it is not consistent
(salute with these nazi mod, fixed anyway o.o)

01:19:280 (1) - I prefer sliders 1/1 here rather than spinner
02:36:237 (1) - same with 01:19:280 (1)
(the hitsound doesn't fit, so perhaps no)

03:14:063 (break section) - drag the break section to 03:15:367 (fixed)
03:47:976 (2) - [140||232] (you serious?)
03:48:411 (3) - this overlaps the previous slider (1), which is bad (fixed already~)
03:57:106 (5-6) - 6 is too far from 5 (x0.94)
03:58:845 (2-3-4-1-2) - inconsistency in spacing (why there is x1.0 spacing?)
(both fixed)

And from the AIMOD, your beatmap needs epilepsy warning due to the SB (will consider this later)
I will mod 1 more diff since the draining time is too long ~ 216 sec (ok, np~)

For now I need to rest

picture

1. 00:23:193 (3) - blanket perfectly
   
   SS

   

1. 00:35:367 (1) - ^

1. 00:52:324 (3,1) - Spacing is different.

Spacing

1. 01:16:237 (9,1) - ^

1. 01:37:976 (4) - blanket perfectly

1. 03:50:150 (5,6) - Spacing is too different

1. 04:01:889 (2,1) - Spacing is different

1. 00:00:585 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - it is too difficult in Normal You shouldnt stack.

1. 00:04:064 (4,5) - ^

1. 00:11:019 (1) - remove finish.

1. 01:03:193 (4,5) - stack perfectly

1. 03:01:889 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:11:019 (1) - remove finish.

theramdans wrote:

my further m4m

Insane

AR-1 OD+1 pls, coz the bpm is rather slow
00:22:106 (4) - slider looks weird
00:40:802 - NC
00:41:671 - remove NC
00:47:106 (1) - replace with a circle and remove NC
01:01:237 (5) - slider looks weird
02:35:476 (2) - remove this
02:59:498 (4) - slider looks weird
03:11:454 (1-2) - replace both sliders with circles, 1/4 sliders do not fit here
03:11:889 - add a circle
03:12:106 - remove spinner and continue mapping till 03:13:628 , because the vocal is still there
03:34:280 (4) - slider looks weird

Ok Im done with this
good luck~

Lust wrote:

Always need more maps of this song, love it

[Easy]Mmm wow okay, nice sliders haha

1. 00:03:628 (4,5) - this would look better if blanket was fixed better (angle slider end down just a bit) (fixed)
2. 00:09:280 (3) - make this shape more like 00:07:541 (1) (fixed)
3. 00:10:584 (1) - i wouldnt have this note here, move it so it is not underneath 00:08:845 (2) maybe it is better to have 00:10:584 (1) be blanketed by 00:09:280 (3) like so
   this is an easy diff so notes hidden like that shouldnt be like that (good point, fixed)
4. 00:17:976 (1) - this looks very wrong to me for some reason, but i cant place my finger on it. probably the location of 00:17:541 (4) so i suggest you change it up just for design purposes (i got your point, and i've thought of an interesting shape lol)
5. 00:47:541 (1) - better to have repeat slider here (nope, it would break the flow)
6. 00:45:367 (4) - NC (fixed)
7. 00:58:845 (1) - have this blanket 01:00:150 (2) or something, the way it looks now is very ugly (same for the other parts that look like it (fixed this but kept the rest)

thats basically it that i found, there are more of the same issue repeating throughout the map that i stated, just look out for overall flow and design (thanks for pointing those, but please be more spesific later because it's kind of confusing without you pointing what you found wrong :3)

[Normal]
Nothing too out of the ordinary here, just make sure to recheck your spacing!

(fixed all issues)

Nice set, good luck! (thanks~)

Mako Sakata wrote:

がんばってね~