This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年12月2日 at 16:10:15

Artist: ALI PROJECT
Title: Datengoku Sensen
Source: Tatakau Shisho: The Book of Bantorra
Tags: Opening pomuta 戦う司書
BPM: 140
Filesize: 6824kb
Play Time: 04:11
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.78 stars, 411 notes)
2. Insane (4.81 stars, 663 notes)
3. Normal (2.84 stars, 238 notes)

Download: ALI PROJECT - Datengoku Sensen
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For Graveyard.
Beatmap 13rd.(My 1st own diff only mapset)
Hello! Enjoy play :3
Normal:Done.
Hard:Done.
Insane:Done.
Special Thanks: mursaki_sk,Tshemmp,eLtigreXXx,Irreversible
Timing Checker: captin1,Kert

か・・・かっこいい

timing check requested

so, your original offset was noticeably off, and then I decided to poke around with that slow ending section, so I have this


good luck!

fixed!
thanks timing check

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Clear.

[Insane]

1. HP-1? noteの密度的に高すぎるような気がします。
2. 00:55:251 (1) - 全体にclapはちょっとうるさいので、全部外して始端にwhistleなんか入れてみてはどうでしょう？
3. 01:11:965 (1,2,3) - 流れが悪く、非常に叩きづらいと感じました。個人的にはこの配置が良いと思いました。
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:17:537 (1,2,3) - ここが1/6のリズムで、01:18:822 (1,2,3,4,1) - こっちも同じようなリズムの音が目立っているので、1/6を使用したほうが自然だと思いました。
   
5. 02:08:108 (1) - 00:55:251 (1) - と同じです。
6. 02:13:251 (1) - 02:09:822 (1) - こっちと同じように02:13:537 - までのスライダーにしてみては？
7. 02:31:251 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 01:17:537 (1,2,3) - こっちと統一してみてはどうでしょう
8. 03:21:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
9. 03:29:751 - add note?　急にnoteが抜けて違和感がありました。
10. 03:37:251 - 音量大きすぎるので30~40%くらい下げましょう。
11. 03:43:465 (2) - 前のnoteに近すぎて叩きづらいです。x408 y280あたりに移動してみてはどうでしょう？

頑張ってください！

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Clear.

[Insane]

1. HP-1? noteの密度的に高すぎるような気がします。 ok
2. 00:55:251 (1) - 全体にclapはちょっとうるさいので、全部外して始端にwhistleなんか入れてみてはどうでしょう？ 終端にclapだけ残して他削除!
3. 01:11:965 (1,2,3) - 流れが悪く、非常に叩きづらいと感じました。個人的にはこの配置が良いと思いました。　良いですね、採用します。
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:17:537 (1,2,3) - ここが1/6のリズムで、01:18:822 (1,2,3,4,1) - こっちも同じようなリズムの音が目立っているので、1/6を使用したほうが自然だと思いました。 音取りを考慮すると、音楽に純粋だと判断してるので変更は無しです。
   
5. 02:08:108 (1) - 00:55:251 (1) - と同じです。こちらも同じく修正
6. 02:13:251 (1) - 02:09:822 (1) - こっちと同じように02:13:537 - までのスライダーにしてみては？ イマのままでも有りかなーって思います。ここも保留
7. 02:31:251 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 01:17:537 (1,2,3) - こっちと統一してみてはどうでしょう　^
8. 03:21:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
9. 03:29:751 - add note?　急にnoteが抜けて違和感がありました。
10. 03:37:251 - 音量大きすぎるので30~40%くらい下げましょう。
11. 03:43:465 (2) - 前のnoteに近すぎて叩きづらいです。x408 y280あたりに移動してみてはどうでしょう？確かにそうですね、修正完了です。

頑張ってください！

毎度ありがとう～

Checking Insane difficulty as requested.

[General]
• From what I see everywhere on Google the title should be "Datengoku Sensen".
• You could put "Opening" in the tags as this is the opening song from the Anime.
• Try and keep kiai time the same on every difficulty.

[Insane]
00:55:251 (1) - too many claps don't fit
02:02:537 (5,6,7) - odd to have close spacing here as it's the only place in the map this happens and everything else is spaced fairly far apart
02:08:108 (1) - same clap comment

That that the only issues I have with the map right now, sorry I can't be of more help but everything flows nicely and it's a well done Insane (even with difficulty stars lying about it). I definitely recommend doing a Hard at some point, call me back after the entire mapset is done and I should be able to star.

James2250 wrote:

Checking Insane difficulty as requested.

[General]
• From what I see everywhere on Google the title should be "Datengoku Sensen". fixed!
• You could put "Opening" in the tags as this is the opening song from the Anime. fixed!
• Try and keep kiai time the same on every difficulty. fixed!

[Insane]
00:55:251 (1) - too many claps don't fit fixed!
02:02:537 (5,6,7) - odd to have close spacing here as it's the only place in the map this happens and everything else is spaced fairly far apart fixed,so, i changed all stack.
02:08:108 (1) - same clap comment fixed!

That that the only issues I have with the map right now, sorry I can't be of more help but everything flows nicely and it's a well done Insane (even with difficulty stars lying about it). I definitely recommend doing a Hard at some point, call me back after the entire mapset is done and I should be able to star.

thanks for modding and advice! ok, i'll add hard diff

Hello, P o M u T a. Your PM mod req.
I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Insane] OD-1? I feel circle have a bit small..CS+1?

00:31:680 (2) - Blanket (1) slider end.
01:11:537 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel flow not better, try this: http://puu.sh/55spm.jpg
01:12:394 (1) - (440|240)?
01:13:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think we should not put so far(1.9x so far),because circle is small..suggest 1.2~1.4x.http://puu.sh/55sDt.jpg
01:14:965 (4) - Too far,move to (396|260)?
01:15:822 (1) - Can small jump. Try to increase the spacing.
01:19:680 (2) - Hitsound is noise , add green line reduce sound?
01:23:322 (3) - (239|302)? Can small jump.
01:29:108 (4,5,6) - Suggest 1.2~1.4x DS.
01:34:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Suggest not stack up.There can be a slight change. http://puu.sh/55sRi.jpg
01:47:965 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/55sUD.jpg
01:50:108 (3) - Move to (268|292),and ctrl+g?
01:57:822 (1,2,3) - Be an equilateral triangle? http://puu.sh/55sZr.jpg
02:01:679 (2) - (392|120)?
02:18:822 (2) - As the same 01:19:680.
02:20:322 (2,3,4) - Placed here will not see clearly the circle.
02:26:394 (5) - Stack (6).
02:46:251 (1,2) - Ctrl+g? Better flow.
03:23:108 (2) - As the same 01:19:680.
03:42:394 (4) - (8|140).


[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

smallboat wrote:

Hello, P o M u T a. Your PM mod req.
I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Insane] OD-1? I feel circle have a bit small..CS+1? no

00:31:680 (2) - Blanket (1) slider end. k
01:11:537 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel flow not better, try this: http://puu.sh/55spm.jpg sorry, no.
01:12:394 (1) - (440|240)? no
01:13:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think we should not put so far(1.9x so far),because circle is small..suggest 1.2~1.4x.http://puu.sh/55sDt.jpg little fixed
01:14:965 (4) - Too far,move to (396|260)? k
01:15:822 (1) - Can small jump. Try to increase the spacing. umm, idk.
01:19:680 (2) - Hitsound is noise , add green line reduce sound? no
01:23:322 (3) - (239|302)? Can small jump. 3.6 spacing is big...
01:29:108 (4,5,6) - Suggest 1.2~1.4x DS. no
01:34:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Suggest not stack up.There can be a slight change. http://puu.sh/55sRi.jpg keep better.
01:47:965 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/55sUD.jpg few change.
01:50:108 (3) - Move to (268|292),and ctrl+g? k
01:57:822 (1,2,3) - Be an equilateral triangle? http://puu.sh/55sZr.jpg no
02:01:679 (2) - (392|120)? k
02:18:822 (2) - As the same 01:19:680. no
02:20:322 (2,3,4) - Placed here will not see clearly the circle. ???
02:26:394 (5) - Stack (6).　no
02:46:251 (1,2) - Ctrl+g? Better flow. no
03:23:108 (2) - As the same 01:19:680. no
03:42:394 (4) - (8|140). sorry, i like kepp this.


[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

thanks modding~

Hello!

From Modding Queue.


S.T.A.R

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From Modding Queue.

Modding

General

1. Pass.

Normal

1. 00:26:965 (1) - move (259,282)? blanket fixed!
2. 01:33:822 (4) - hhmmm change this? (only rythem) It was different from the suggestion, but made modifications.
   ─ 1. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074319
   ─ 2. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074320
3. 01:46:251 (1,2) - blanket. all fixed.
   ─ example) 01:46:251 (1) - move (250,272) , 01:47:108 (2) - move (79,94)
4. 01:50:965 (3) - ^ all fixed.
   ─ example) move (262,333) if you fixed this mod, change this 01:51:822 (4,5) - example 01:51:822 (4) - move (456,292) , 01:52:251 (5) - move (489,197)
5. 02:46:679 (4) - like 01:33:822 (4) or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074331 sorry, i kept this rhythm. this is noraml diff, i think no problem!

Insane

1. Pass. nice map-set!!

S.T.A.R

thanks for modding and star!!
very useful mod

Hello,from my Queue.

General

Insane

Hard

Normal.

Hope you rank it!!!

Makina wrote:

Hello,from my Queue.

General

SPOILER

All Good.

Insane

SPOILER

01:26:965 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Overmapping. changed!
01:34:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ No.. because sound fit ;_;
I think,if you use this 02:48:501 (1,1,1) and 00:22:787 (1,1,1) - Maybe HP-1? keep, i'll change or not.
04:11:735 - add spinner sorry
I really bad for mod pro mappers

Hard

SPOILER

You can chage this? 01:25:680 (5,6) sorry, sounds good.
01:59:537 (1) - remove NC please. (and add 01:59:965 (1)) no.this is fine.
03:46:251 (5,6) - fix. umm? i think good.
04:11:735 - add spinner no all diff orz
all good,nice diff

Normal.

SPOILER

01:14:108 (1,3) - move this left on x=228 y=200 01:15:394 (2) - and this on x=128 y=236 sorry, keep better parts both imo.
End. No wrong. Really nice.

Hope you rank it!!! thanks

thanks for mod!

Hello ~
Mod from my queue

[General]
the BG size is 1280x720, idk this is ok or not but considering reduce it's size to 1024x768 would be better

[Normal]
00:26:965 (1) add finish at slider's tail
00:27:822 (2) ^
00:29:108 (3) ^ at slider's reverse
00:37:251 (2) add clap at slider's reverse
00:38:965 (4) ^
00:41:537 (3) add finish at slider's reverse
00:42:822 (4) ^ at slider's head
00:53:537 (1,2,3) remove finish at slider's tail and add finish at slider's head
00:56:537 (5) add clap at slider's tail
01:30:822 (4) this slider's placement direction isn't straight from the previous note to the next note. i mean it should be like this http://puu.sh/57tJc.jpg
01:32:537 (2) looks better if you remove the circle and the next slider then make a reverse slider like the previous note http://puu.sh/57tT6.jpg
02:45:394 (2) same as above
02:46:679 (4) how about this? http://puu.sh/57u48.jpg
03:10:679 - 03:37:251 oh it's surprising that there's no kiai at this section
03:37:251 uuuh what a tricky part. i think no need to add break time if it's 2,6s only because it's normal diff. you know when a newbie play,"oh it's a break time, let's take a breath a while" and then they miss the next note because a break time is really short than they expect
03:54:822 (2) same as 01:32:537
04:09:860 (5) have you tried 25% playback rate? i feel the timing is wrong, the note isn't match with the vocal

[Hard]
00:32:965 (1) add whistle here
00:34:680 (1) i think there's no need to add NC here
00:36:394 (1) add whistle here
00:46:680 (1) ^
00:50:108 (1) ^
01:12:394 (1,2,3) unstack these notes?
01:45:822 (1) add whistle here
01:49:251 (1) ^
01:59:537 (1) ^
02:02:965 (1) ^
03:23:965 (4) extend this slider to 03:24:286
04:09:860 (2) same as normal

woaaaaa as i though. just seeing your hard diff, i was think the insane diff would be more crazy. and looks like it is

good map overall, so many 1/3 notes there.
i'm sorry if my mod no help
good luck

Lunaties wrote:

Hello ~
Mod from my queue

[General]
the BG size is 1280x720, idk this is ok or not but considering reduce it's size to 1024x768 would be better fixed

[Normal]
00:26:965 (1) add finish at slider's tail
00:27:822 (2) ^
00:29:108 (3) ^ at slider's reverse
00:37:251 (2) add clap at slider's reverse
00:38:965 (4) ^
00:41:537 (3) add finish at slider's reverse
00:42:822 (4) ^ at slider's head
00:53:537 (1,2,3) remove finish at slider's tail and add finish at slider's head
00:56:537 (5) add clap at slider's tail
01:30:822 (4) this slider's placement direction isn't straight from the previous note to the next note. i mean it should be like this http://puu.sh/57tJc.jpg ok
01:32:537 (2) looks better if you remove the circle and the next slider then make a reverse slider like the previous note http://puu.sh/57tT6.jpg no
02:45:394 (2) same as above ^
02:46:679 (4) how about this? http://puu.sh/57u48.jpg not fit imo
03:10:679 - 03:37:251 oh it's surprising that there's no kiai at this section kiai spam i think!
03:37:251 uuuh what a tricky part. i think no need to add break time if it's 2,6s only because it's normal diff. you know when a newbie play,"oh it's a break time, let's take a breath a while" and then they miss the next note because a break time is really short than they expect add spin
03:54:822 (2) same as 01:32:537 no
04:09:860 (5) have you tried 25% playback rate? i feel the timing is wrong, the note isn't match with the vocal same as hard.
some finish add. good mod!
[Hard]
00:32:965 (1) add whistle here
00:34:680 (1) i think there's no need to add NC here ok
00:36:394 (1) add whistle here
00:46:680 (1) ^
00:50:108 (1) ^
01:12:394 (1,2,3) unstack these notes? ok
01:45:822 (1) add whistle here
01:49:251 (1) ^
01:59:537 (1) ^
02:02:965 (1) ^
03:23:965 (4) extend this slider to 03:24:286
04:09:860 (2) same as normal i can't timing fix.
other all no. i think not fit this part.
woaaaaa as i though. just seeing your hard diff, i was think the insane diff would be more crazy. and looks like it is

good map overall, so many 1/3 notes there.
i'm sorry if my mod no help
good luck

thanks for modding ;D

Here's the Wandering Mod:

General

Normal

Hard and Insane seem fine to me...

Good luck!

Chamle wrote:

Here's the Wandering Mod:

General

1. Insane: Kiai #1 is inconsistent with the others. fixed!

Normal

1. 01:10:680 (1) - Move the middle node to the other side (x:216,y:44). As of now, the flow is kind of disturbed and the formation itself looks weird IMO. (just a minor suggestion though)
2. 01:14:108 (1) - Move node #1 to {x:222 y:227}, move node #2 to {x:159 y:153}, move node #3 to {x:64 y:170}
3. 01:15:822 (3) - Move node #1 to {x:33 y:256}, move node #2 to {x:95 y:330}, move node #3 to {x:190 y:313}.
4. 01:17:537 (1) - Move node #1 to {x:324 y:314}, move node #2 to {x:418 y:329}, move node #3 to {x:480 y:256}
5. 01:18:822 (2) - Move to {x:436 y:176}.
6. 01:19:251 (3) - Move node #1 to {x:408 y:80}, move node #2 to {x:448 y:48}, move node #3 to {x:480 y:8}.
7. 02:14:965 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:200 y:44}, move node #3 to {x:256 y:40}.
8. 02:16:251 (4) - Move to {x:136 y:180}.
   These last seven I used AIBat so excuse me for that. Oh and it's mainly for symmetry.

sorry all no. spacing is weird and not need change... i can't understand your mod.

Hard and Insane seem fine to me...

Good luck!

thanks!

Hi! from My Queue

[General]
Ok, First of all.... http://puu.sh/58rxH.jpg
Here is some possibility :
1. if you change background, please tell us to redownload
2. Your background was deleted?
and... the size of background are 1366x768 (widescreen) or 800x600 as long as i know it, these sizes are fixed. please correct me if i'm wrong.

[Normal]
00:20:109 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/58rE2.jpg ?
00:34:680 (3) - nazi. Fix this blanket
02:43:679 (4) - end +clap?

[Hard]
00:44:965 (1) - nazi. http://puu.sh/58rSt.jpg
01:44:751 (2) - change to slider 01:44:751 - 01:44:858?

hmm... the insane's just insane. so skip, sorry
Sorry if this mod wasn't useful. so hard to find mistake
anyway, good luck!

Kiyura wrote:

Hi! from My Queue

[General]
Ok, First of all.... http://puu.sh/58rxH.jpg
Here is some possibility :
1. if you change background, please tell us to redownload
2. Your background was deleted?
and... the size of background are 1366x768 (widescreen) or 800x600 as long as i know it, these sizes are fixed. please correct me if i'm wrong.
i was channged BG size. so, should re-download map. no problem now. thanks :3
[Normal]
00:20:109 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/58rE2.jpg ? keep flow.
00:34:680 (3) - nazi. Fix this blanket i change this part (1,3) symmetry.
02:43:679 (4) - end +clap? no~.

[Hard]
00:44:965 (1) - nazi. http://puu.sh/58rSt.jpg fix.
01:44:751 (2) - change to slider 01:44:751 - 01:44:858? sounds keep better ;P. i don't like red line start slider.

hmm... the insane's just insane. so skip, sorry
Sorry if this mod wasn't useful. so hard to find mistake
anyway, good luck!

thanks modding

From your request to mod Hard Diff

[Hard]

hope helps.
maps is good.

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From your request to mod Hard Diff

[Hard]

1. 00:21:823 (3,4) - move (3) to x:282,y:43 and (4) to x:434,y:99 to make better flow fixed
2. 00:27:394 (3) - finish on the end i put slider head.
3. 00:30:394 (2,3,4) - make it in a curve that flow can be better i think easy playable.
4. 00:36:394 (1) - finish on the head not fit.
5. 00:38:108 (1) - ^ not fit
6. 00:39:822 (1) - ^ not fit
7. 00:51:822 (5) - NC nice find.
8. 00:58:894 (4) - NC ^
9. 01:03:394 (5) - remove finish, sounds weird why? you should listning music.(hit sound 0% music 100%) it's better.
10. 01:03:822 - add a note and add finish, make the spin 1 gird later no problem this.
11. 01:08:965 (1) - 01:10:680 (1) - 01:12:394 (1) - finish on the head why finish?
12. 01:19:251 (1) - finish on the head yes, this is very fit.
13. 01:29:537 (4) - NC ok
14. 02:11:751 (4) - ^ ok
15. 02:06:394 (1) - finish and clap on the end i remove clap (1,2)
16. 02:29:537 (4,5) - weird flow this is good.
17. 03:15:822 (4) - NC
18. 03:19:251 (1,2,3) - blanket? and flow is also weird. No. (1) slider end and (3) is symmetry. flow is good.
19. 03:20:108 (3,4,1) - I don't suggest to make like this in hard. why? nothing jump map is not interesting.
20. 03:48:394 (4) - NC

hope helps.
maps is good.

thanks modding!

As promised
[General]
Why have you stretched up BG? Previous variant looked better
[Insane]
00:53:537 (1,2,3,4) - could you keep alike spacing? The difference in spacing between 00:53:537 (1,2) - and 00:53:965 (2,3) - is really high. I propose to interchange these sliders 00:54:394 (3,4) -
00:42:608 (5,8) - 00:56:322 (3,6) - 01:55:465 (5,8) - 02:09:179 (3,6) - Normal-whistle on start of sliders?
01:33:394 (4,5) - why is here a different spacing than between these notes 01:32:965 (1,2,3,4) - 01:33:537 (5,6,7) - ?
01:56:108 (1,2,3) - this 1/2 stack confuses after triple 1/4 notes 01:55:251 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - suggesting to unstack those three notes. Example:
02:02:108 (4) - maybe make a blanket with 02:01:679 (2) - ?
02:15:394 (2) - ctrl+g?
02:16:251 (4) - same
02:21:394 (6) - could you make it a little neater?
02:31:251 (1,2) - please, don't hide that note under slider, it's confuses. Suggesting next placement:
03:14:108 (1,2) - maybe better to spread the ends of sliders?
03:15:679 (3,1) - another unexpected low spacing
>Circle Size 5
>Dat spacing
RAGE
[Hard]
HP DR +1?
00:27:394 (3) - add finish on the end
00:37:251 (3) - how about to bend it in opposite direction for making a blanket with 00:37:894 (4) -
00:44:965 (1,3) - make a neater blanket:
00:55:251 (3) - whistle on entire slider will fit the music
01:54:394 (1) - same
03:24:394 (1,3) - fix this blanket:
03:38:965 (2) - there is NC in Insane. Conform them
[Normal]
00:27:822 (2) - delete finish from the end and add it on the start
00:55:251 (3) - 02:08:108 (3) - whistle?
01:10:251 (4,1) - bending in opposite direction will be looked better I think
Hope you will get ranked it soon!

TrigonometrY wrote:

As promised
[General]
Why have you stretched up BG? Previous variant looked better because i changed 1024x768.
[Insane]
00:53:537 (1,2,3,4) - could you keep alike spacing? The difference in spacing between 00:53:537 (1,2) - and 00:53:965 (2,3) - is really high. I propose to interchange these sliders 00:54:394 (3,4) - sorry no changed. this is easy play imo. not hard spacing and confuse.
00:42:608 (5,8) - 00:56:322 (3,6) - 01:55:465 (5,8) - 02:09:179 (3,6) - Normal-whistle on start of sliders? ok
01:33:394 (4,5) - why is here a different spacing than between these notes 01:32:965 (1,2,3,4) - 01:33:537 (5,6,7) - ? oh, i want challenge this part. but,To make it easy to judge it.. i chnage (5) NC~.
01:56:108 (1,2,3) - this 1/2 stack confuses after triple 1/4 notes 01:55:251 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - suggesting to unstack those three notes. Example: great!! fixed.

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02:02:108 (4) - maybe make a blanket with 02:01:679 (2) - ? maybe fix

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02:15:394 (2) - ctrl+g? no. this is fine
02:16:251 (4) - same ^
02:21:394 (6) - could you make it a little neater? maybe fixed o.o

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02:31:251 (1,2) - please, don't hide that note under slider, it's confuses. Suggesting next placement: umm, i think fine imo. but, i will change or not. more ask modder.

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03:14:108 (1,2) - maybe better to spread the ends of sliders? keep :p

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03:15:679 (3,1) - another unexpected low spacing before many big spacing, but, this is reverse slider. i think easily part.
>Circle Size 5
>Dat spacing
RAGE ;w;
[Hard]
HP DR +1? ok
00:27:394 (3) - add finish on the end ok
00:37:251 (3) - how about to bend it in opposite direction for making a blanket with 00:37:894 (4) - ok

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00:44:965 (1,3) - make a neater blanket: ok

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00:55:251 (3) - whistle on entire slider will fit the music ok
01:54:394 (1) - same ok
03:24:394 (1,3) - fix this blanket: i poor blanket... maybe can't fix. i try.

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03:38:965 (2) - there is NC in Insane. Conform them add NC
[Normal]
00:27:822 (2) - delete finish from the end and add it on the start
00:55:251 (3) - 02:08:108 (3) - whistle?
01:10:251 (4,1) - bending in opposite direction will be looked better I think
Normal Diff All fixed!

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Hope you will get ranked it soon!

very useful mod thanks!!
i do best blanket make orz

~From popner's modding team~

Fycho wrote:

~From popner's modding team~

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[Insane]

• 
  Try AR8 for this diff.I played this diff with both ar9 and ar8,but AR9 is fast for me,and these jumps can be read when AR8; Nah,have many big jump this diff.i played AR8, but, i fit AR9.
  i like ar9 this map.[/color]
  00:21:609 (1,2,3) –try using this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5cafW.jpg.It will be better if you start kick slider at white tick. it's good.
  00:22:787 (1) –reduce the volume of this spinner, it’s too loud somehow; umm, i think not need reduce... reservation.
  01:06:608 (1,2) –how about using the same rhythm as 02:19:394 (1,2,3,4,5) -,just follow the same track; nice find. fixed!
  00:37:680 (4,5,6,7,1,2) –try to place them like this for better flow, http://puu.sh/5canK.jpg umm, this prat fine flow imo. sorry
  00:47:322 (2,3) –Ctrl+G, rhythm is bet ter imo; umm, sound fit now..
  00:50:965 (1) –try something like this, http://puu.sh/5carT.jpg,flow better,and this jump can emphasize a strong beat; keep flow.
  00:51:822 (1) –Ctrl+G for better flow; fixed. but, some possibility of doing change.
  00:58:358 (7,8,9) –how about removing these three and make00:58:251 (6) –a 3/4 or 1/2 slider.A little overmap here; fixed
  01:21:180 (2) –this spacing is to large.Try to use a smaller one; fixed.
  01:34:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) –stack is a little boring.How about setting a stream here? sorry, i want stack stream. i feels easily this.
  01:59:751 –add a note to be consistent with 00:46:680 (1) –and 01:56:322 (2) –;Otherwise you can try this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5caKP.jpg no changed.
  02:20:108 (1,2) –try using a smaller spacing like this02:26:965 (1,2) –; ok
  02:31:679 (2,3,4,5) –You just follow the music at02:30:394 (1,2) -,If you follow music not drums at02:31:251 (1,2,3,4,5) –it will be more consistent and much better; drum and synthesizer find sound this. no problem imo.
  03:21:822 (1,2,3,4) -^ ^
  03:15:679 (3,1) –These two are to close imo,try to use larger spacing; ok
  03:55:679 (1,3) –ctrl+g it plays more smoothly; no
  04:11:735 –add a spinner to show the long vocal sorry, same reason hard.

[Hard]

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  01:03:822 (1) –end the spinner at01:05:537 and add finish; follow vocal
  00:56:965 (1,2) - snap these to 1/3 tick;
  01:00:822 (2) -^ ^
  02:09:822 (1,2) –snap these to 1/3 tick; ^
  02:13:251 (1,2) -^[/color] ^
  01:06:394 (1,2) –If you place them like this, http://puu.sh/5cbcO.jpg;It will be more neat imo.This pattern won’t be hard because this is a hard diff; respecthave spacing.
  01:31:251 (1,2,3,4) –same reason as above,try using spacing x1.40; sorry no.
  03:31:251 (1,2,3) -^ no.
  03:20:536 (4) -^ no.
  03:50:108 (1,2,3,4) –These maybe looks a little mess.try to split them out; fine imo.
  04:11:735 –add a spinner? no. i like this end.

[Easy]

• 
  Because this is your lowest diff in your mapset,HP,OD and AR-1 to balance the difficulty; no changed. i will ask other modder.
  00:21:823 (1) –This is too up and touch the HP bar; fixed
  01:14:108 (1,2,3) –make a better blanket; i can't fix this. idk how to fix
  01:57:394 (3,4,5) –make a perfect triangle; (2) slider end and (3) and (4) is triangle.

thanks long and useful modding!

hi pomuta from my queues

[Normal]
00:21:823 (1,1) - too close. 00:21:823 - , 00:22:252 - here is circle add?

[Hard]
03:29:965 (2,3,4) - strange beat, change?

[Insane]
00:21:609 (1,2,3) - change it with a circle stream?
00:25:894 - Additional 5% volume
01:05:644 (1) - change the slide?
03:41:965 (3,4) - interval
03:42:822 (6,1) - ^
03:43:679 (3,1) - ^
03:44:536 (3,1) - ^
omg

omg 1/4 time signature and 1/3 beats the songs of combination
this map modding difficult, sry

q

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[Normal]

01:14:108 (1,2,3) - Weak blanket, move (2) into the centre.
02:35:537 (3,4) - Weak blanket, make the sliderbodies curvier.

Clean diff.

[Hard]

01:12:394 (1,2,3) - While acceptable, I don't encourage this pattern.
01:47:108 (1) - RNC
01:47:537 (2) - NC

This map has okay flow and doesn't make any errors, but it's not very visually appealing. Try touching up your sliders: add bankets, make things curvier, and please don't mix curvy sliders with sliders that have linear bends!

[Insane]

00:26:108 (1) - Why is this note randomly on this side? Centre it please.
00:36:108 (4) - Please do not put slider heads under sliderbodies. It looks terrible, doesn't flow properly in this case, and can sometimes be unreadable.
00:46:680 (1,2) - With all of these jumps you have, these two sldiers need to be more spaced apart.
00:52:680 (1) - Don't put sliderends under sliderbodies too, it looks baaaad.
00:54:394 (3,4) - Switch the placement of these two sliders, pattern flows terribly.
01:00:822 (2,3) - This is fine because the sliderend is on top of the sliderbody.

I find this difficulty really, really messy. The placement of objects seems totally random and at times messes up flow. The heavy mix of 1/3 and 1/4 can be done, but only with sliders and such. It's pretty unreadable as is, imo. The spacing is also very inconsistant and again the constant switch from 1/3 to 1/4 makes it stand out even more. With a little bit of work, this difficulty could be a lot better.

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GL

-SMIC

-Kirito wrote:

hi pomuta from my queues

[Normal]
00:21:823 (1,1) - too close. 00:21:823 - , 00:22:252 - here is circle add? i changed 1/1 slider.

[Hard]
03:29:965 (2,3,4) - strange beat, change? i find drum sound this.

box

[Insane]
00:21:609 (1,2,3) - change it with a circle stream? bit change.
00:25:894 - Additional 5% volume add 20%.
01:05:644 (1) - change the slide? idk good change.
03:41:965 (3,4) - interval
03:42:822 (6,1) - ^
03:43:679 (3,1) - ^
03:44:536 (3,1) - ^ no problem?
omg

omg 1/4 time signature and 1/3 beats the songs of combination
this map modding difficult, sry

thanks~.

SuperMICrophone wrote:

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[Normal]

01:14:108 (1,2,3) - Weak blanket, move (2) into the centre. maybe fixed.
02:35:537 (3,4) - Weak blanket, make the sliderbodies curvier. maybe fixed.

Clean diff.

[Hard]

01:12:394 (1,2,3) - While acceptable, I don't encourage this pattern. umm? i think fine pettern.
01:47:108 (1) - RNC done
01:47:537 (2) - NC done

This map has okay flow and doesn't make any errors, but it's not very visually appealing. Try touching up your sliders: add bankets, make things curvier, and please don't mix curvy sliders with sliders that have linear bends!

[Insane]

00:26:108 (1) - Why is this note randomly on this side? Centre it please. fixed
00:36:108 (4) - Please do not put slider heads under sliderbodies. It looks terrible, doesn't flow properly in this case, and can sometimes be unreadable. Half exposure
00:46:680 (1,2) - With all of these jumps you have, these two sldiers need to be more spaced apart. ok, i try bit change.
00:52:680 (1) - Don't put sliderends under sliderbodies too, it looks baaaad. BAT asked, not unrankable, it's ok, so, keep going ;w; sorry!
00:54:394 (3,4) - Switch the placement of these two sliders, pattern flows terribly. umm, i think playable.
01:00:822 (2,3) - This is fine because the sliderend is on top of the sliderbody. yes.

I find this difficulty really, really messy. The placement of objects seems totally random and at times messes up flow. The heavy mix of 1/3 and 1/4 can be done, but only with sliders and such. It's pretty unreadable as is, imo. The spacing is also very inconsistant and again the constant switch from 1/3 to 1/4 makes it stand out even more. With a little bit of work, this difficulty could be a lot better. thanks comment. but,song is bad
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GL

-SMIC

thanks for mods!

Ello o3o

Hope this helps~!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o HI

[Normal]
00:49:680 (4) - Would look better if it was blanketed by 00:48:394 (3) -something like this: sorry, keep!

01:02:965 (4) - ? ok.

or

01:33:822 (4) - NC i add (5)
01:48:394 (3) - I prefer it being straight after slider 01:47:108 (2) - (Notice how 01:50:965 (3) - is a straight slider after 01:49:679 (2) -, and 01:49:679 (2) - is pretty much like 01:47:108 (2) - ) changed
01:52:679 (1,2) - Blanket better. maybe fixed? idk.
01:59:108 (5) - Straight slider? keep.
02:46:679 (4) - NC No~
03:19:251 (3,4) - Straight sliders may work here better, since these objects are alongside each other. sorry, i wannt both slider.
03:25:251 (2) - ? no problem flow!

04:08:193 (4) - NC? ok!
[Hard]
00:52:680 (3) - ? keep.

01:07:251 (1) - Less curve, so it blankets the head of 01:08:537 (3) - idk how to fix! sorry.
02:02:108 (3,4) - - Don't make these a jump, since you didn't make 01:48:394 (3,4) - jumps. umm, i think fine, next beat up rhythm.
02:21:822 (4) - NC ok
02:35:537 (4) - ^ ok

[Insane]
Circle size -1? ok, i test.
..sorry can't really mod this diff

Hope this helps~!

thanks!

Hi~ From your In game reqs~

[Normal]

00:21:395 (4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089121
00:36:394 (1) - spacing please
00:43:251 (1,2) - NC Change
01:01:251 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089128
01:08:965 (3) - x: 280 y: 332 and 01:10:251 (4) - spacing
01:12:394 (3) - To unity 01:10:680 (1) - Please make this and similar
02:21:822 (3) - x: 376 y: 160 and 02:23:108 (4,1) - spacing