smallboat wrote:

[General]

Your many unnecessary files and hitsound in your folder,delete it.
(Can delete OGG) The .ogg files are NOT unnecessary, as they are used to hitsound galvenize and Insane

[Normal] Front overall volume is too quiet ,please turn up (10~15%). changed to 15%

I feel the front part should add hitsound.
I think that without sound to click, is a bit bored.

00:16:288 (1,2) - slider head +whistle. done
00:21:288 (1,3) - +whistle,(3) +slider head. done
00:26:288 (1,3) - ^ done
00:31:288 (1,3) - +whistle,(3) +slider head. done
00:36:913 (1) - The spinner start is 00:37:225, not this. the effect starts there, it's fine as it is
00:42:538 (1,2,3) - These three circles can become equilateral triangle. done
01:22:538 (1,2,3) - ^ done
01:31:913 (4) - End is white line? this ends on the correct tick

[Insane] Pattern is not good...try this?

00:23:163 (6) - (300|360),good pattern? it would be too spaced
00:26:913 (3,4,5,6,7) - Into a regular pentagon? it flows good like this, and a penthagon wouldn't even be noticeable out of editor
00:35:194 (1) - Spinner start at 00:35:350? it's ok as it is
00:43:475 (4) - Recommend move to (392|248). agree, changed position
00:44:881 (8) - (160|212)? changed the whole pattern here
00:45:506 (3) - Recommend move to (328|204). i think i'll completely change this pattern when i get a good idea, thank you for your suggestion here!
00:46:913 (3) - Slider head stack crooked oof. fixed!
00:48:319 (5,6) - Bad flow,suggest (6) move to (376|244). tbh i kinda like it because it's weird, but if someone else tells me to change it i'll probably do it
00:49:413 (3) - Recommend move to (288|96).
00:49:725 (4) - Recommend move to (28|248).
00:50:663 (4) - Recommend move to (460|160).
00:52:225 (4) - Recommend move to (420|104).
01:02:381 (6) - Stack 01:01:444 (2) , better flow. very nice, done
01:03:475 (5) - Move to (173|88),and Select (anti-clock),(selection centre),rotate (27 angle) blanket (4).Better flow.
01:04:413 (3) - Ctrl+g,move to (488|100). it's fine as it is
01:04:725 (4,5) - Read hard , get smaller spacing. changed
01:08:163 (3) - Ctrl+g,move to (416|156). it's fine
01:08:788 (1,2) - Be parallel? they are more dynamic if they are not parallel imo, i like them more now
01:10:506 (2) - Stack 01:10:038 (1) slider end? I might change its position, but not on (1)'s end
01:11:913 (3) - Ctrl+g,move to (448|154). i'm thinking about doing this, i'll keep as it is for now
01:16:913 (3) - Stack 01:16:288 (1) slider head. it creates a nice flow not being stacked imo
01:18:788 (1,2) - Be parallel? same as above
01:32:225 (1) - I think move to 01:32:381 start is good. it wouldn't be correct

Tsukuyomi wrote:

thanks for test it was a fun map

General
you need a hard for better diff spread it will come soon, i hope

why only in insane notes are silenced at the beginning they're not silenced they are piano samples with the same notes as the song.btw i turned up the volume noticeably, any feedback is appreciated! if they still sound weird i'll probably just get rid of them

may be you can add some soft or drum hitsound by using addition

SPOILER

Insane
last stream is too long, try to use some 1/4 sliders to replace some notes,imo it will be more interesting

highly suggest about this pattern I'm gonna change this pattern for sure when i'll get a good idea, thank you for giving me one!
00:59:100 (3,4) - ctrl g
00:59:725 (3) - stack on 01:00:038 (1) - 's head
00:59:881 (4) - stack on 01:00:350 (2) - 's head
00:59:413 (1) - stack on 00:57:850 (2) - 's head
00:59:569 (2) - stack on 00:57:538 (1) - 's head

01:03:788 (1) - blanket that's a blanket! and i love this kind of blanket
01:11:288 (1) - ^
01:16:756 (2) - move it to x420 y176 for better blanket it would flow much worse
01:11:913 (3) - i'll probably change this, but not now

SPOILER

01:13:475 (4) - ctrl g it wouldn't lead to (1) anymore

Normal
01:22:538 (1) - done!

SPOILER

James2250 wrote:

[General]
• Have to say those beginning hitsounds on galvenize/Insane give a strange feeling, they fit so well with the song it does sound like the notes are completely silent - I had to delete them to see the differences compared to the song. It is an interesting effect but I would make them slightly more noticeable if possible. i turned volume up noticeably, let me know if effect is still weird, maybe this just wasn't the right song to do that
• It is unrankable to silence both the slider-slide and the slider-tick hitsounds at the same time (looks like 00:18:788 (1) and 00:23:788 (1) have both silenced + your custom piano sounds). i didn't know this, sliderticks are not silenced anymore
• If you don't want to have a full kiai section maybe just a kiai fountain at 00:42:538? The contrast between before/after this really stands out so it would fit nicely in my opinion sounds nice, but where should it finish?
• Kind of strange you are using custom hit-normals for some of the piano sounds and imported .ogg for some of them. But I guess it is ok. that's because sample import isn't supported on sliders, i had to convert them to .wav and rename them for that purpose
• You should put preview point at the soft beginning and throw everyone off. (Just kidding). rofl
• Even for that really quiet beginning 5% volume is pretty low. Increase by at least 5%? increased to 15%
• Why only have insane using tick rate 2. Test with the other difficulties? honestly i don't like tick rate 2 on Normal, do you think it is nice? Pagno and galvenize will chose the tickrate they prefer for their diffs

[Normal]
• Kind of wish those 2 breaks at the beginning didn't exist, the HP drain isn't too high. If you don't agree feel free to wait for more opinions. totally agree, deleted both
01:09:413 (1) - clap at the beginning to match things around it?
01:19:413 (3) - ^ i intentionally let them unhitsounded, i think it's much nicer like this because there's a short pause before

[Insane]
00:22:850 (5,6,7) -unnecessary spacing changes for such a soft part, keep them all equal if possible this part is very slow, so it'll still be easy to play; also, it fits perfectly with notes interval. if i'll have to change it i'll probably do something like this http://puu.sh/53R8O.jpg
00:33:163 (6,1) - reduce spacing, I wouldn't expect to have to make too many jumps at this part and the next 90% easily makes up for jumps same as the previous one, slow + note interval
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - strange to hear regular whistles here (only place in the map) they probably got there for a mistake when i changed this pattern, thanks for pointing them out! btw i changed the pattern again, i cannot find one that completely satisfies me
00:46:131 (6,7,3,1) - looks strange as they are almost stacked, I would stack them perfectly :O i actually was sure i had fixed this already.. thank you!
01:12:538 (1,3) - doesn't look too good overlapping while playing it's intentional, i think it creates a nice flow, i like it
01:16:288 (1,3) - would prefer stacked but obviously on purpose so up to you same ^

Take most things here as a suggestion and fix whatever you agree with, let me know if you need any more help. Stared! thank you for your kindness, if you could answer some of the few questions i made it would be awesome!

HabiHolic wrote:

[Normal]

00:28:788 (1) - Why New combo? delete Nc please i'll keep this one
01:07:538 (7,1) - change New Combo yep agree
01:32:381 - finish? nope

-Kirito wrote:

[Normal]
01:30:038 (1) - reverse the direction of the slide this i like it more as it is now

[Insane]
00:44:413 (5) - NC add? I'm trying to make a NC each new measure (long white tick), but probably i'll add a NC here when i find a good pattern
00:45:663 (4) - ^ ^
00:51:131 (7,8) - x:292 y:312 view is not good..
01:04:725 (4,5) - going to be a good jump. (hmm?) changed!

01:26:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - in the middle of the edges of the stream...change a little bit more? i like stream shape as it is


But where hard difficulty? it should come soon, i hope

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sjoy wrote:

[Normal]
01:09:100 (2) - add a note? no, the pause there is
[Insane]
01:11:288 (1) - ctrl+g this would create some crazy spacing

Autumn wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:42:538 (1,2,3,4) - Let me have a try: i didn't want to change this pattern, it was the following one
   
   SPOILER

   80,176,42538,6,0,L|183:214,1,85
   276,329,42850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   260,244,43006,2,0,L|345:173,1,85
   490,150,43318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   408,128,43475,2,0,L|304:89,1,85

2. 00:48:163 (4,5) - The flow is a little awkward here. You may use ctrl+G on the slider or make a reverse slider: definitely yes, a reverse slider is nice here
   
3. 01:03:788 (1) - blanket changed a little, but i still didn't make a perfect blanket - this one was the effect i wanted to give
   
   SPOILER

   160,208,63788,6,0,P|232:208|272:112,1,170

4. 01:04:725 (4,5) - Tiny suggestion: it was like this before, it is funnier as it is now with those minijumps
   http://puu.sh/5d8K9.jpg
   
5. 01:11:288 (1) - blanket changed a little, but i still didn't make a perfect blanket - this one was the effect i wanted to give
   
   SPOILER

   56,184,71288,6,0,P|100:128|200:184,1,170

6. 01:13:475 (4) - Try ctrl+G? i don't like it
7. 01:16:288 (1) - ^ i want to increase the spacing because the note here is quite high compared to the previous one
   
8. 01:18:631 - May add a note to fit the drum sound
   http://puu.sh/5d8Wo.jpg
   
9. 01:22:381 - Add 2 notes: adding 2 notes 1/4 snapped would be incorrect, btw adding 1 note 1/3 snapped could be a good idea - i'll think about it
   http://puu.sh/5d90s.jpg
   
10. 01:24:413 (3,4,5) - You may use sliders to cover these sounds: i think circles are nicer but this isn't a bad idea
    http://puu.sh/5d96F.jpg
    (reverse at 01:24:621 - )
    
11. 00:23:788 (1) - Try whistle on the head? done!

Really impressive hitsounds, take my star ^^ Thank you!

pieguy1372 wrote:

[Insane]
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern seem fine for me 0.0 but i think it still can be improved!
00:59:413 (1,2,3,4) - mb try smth like this http://puu.sh/5f28D.jpg i prefer circles here
01:03:788 (1) - bette rblanket http://puu.sh/5f2b7.jpg changed a little, but i still didn't make a perfect blanket - this one was the effect i wanted to give
01:11:288 (1) - move the last point down and left 1 grid for better blanket http://puu.sh/5f21E.jpg done
01:17:225 (4) - mb try to move it a bit more down and left? for me the angle with this distance makes the flow really weird, this way might be more natural IMO angle and distance doesn't really matter with these kind of sliders, but i changed it to make it nicer
01:25:038 (1) ~ end - mb try soft-whistle here? i didn't understand this suggestion - do you mean to replace finish with whistle? or add whistle keeping the finish?

nice map, GL ~ thank you!