HI~ Losertic M4M from my queue
General:
- Clean
Hard:
- AR 7 HP 6 OD 6 fit this diff alot better
- 00:11:329 (4,1) - swap NC
- 00:18:210 try to move this to x:196 y:167 so the tail get stackad with 00:17:384 look alot better
- 00:24:815 add a circle here then start the spinner in 00:24:953 sound alot better following the vocals
- 00:27:017 Add finish here fit alot with the music
- 00:29:632 Is kinda weird you ignore the vocal there I suggest you to map this beat
- 00:31:421 This slider dont follow the music really well try THIS
- 00:32:934 same as 00:24:815
- 00:39:127 1/2 slider fit really well the vocals here imo
- 00:41:879 I preffer if you start the NC stuff every stanza but I think is just your prefference
- 00:44:632 add finish on the head (kiai start here)
- 00:50:136 you forget a clap here
- 00:54:540 (5,6) - I preffer if you stack this It will follow the music alot better imo
- 01:01:696 add finish here too
- 01:02:246 same as above
- 01:05:411 (4,5,6,7) - turn off grid snap and stack this perfect
- 01:17:109 (6,1) - swap NC will make the map more readable imo
- 01:23:164 Finish in the tail Kiai end there
- 01:24:265 add finish here too
- 01:23:989 (1,2) - Oh also I will like if you try a jump here to put more empathize in the song maybe like THIS them 01:23:989 (1,2) - are stacked on the centre of the grid also add The NC to ake the jump readable If you follow my suggestion
- 01:41:604 add whiste fit with the starts of the vocals
- 01:41:879 remove whistle just keep the clap here
- 01:42:705 (4) - add more distance here with previous maybe 1.10 or 1.20
- 01:51:512 add a circle here imo actually sound too empty
- 01:56:467 (2,3,4) - stack they for consistency with 01:55:366 (2,3,4) -
- 01:57:292 same suggestion about the spinner in 00:24:815
- 01:57:292 (1) - also add a whistle on the spinner sound really nice
- 02:00:320 same as 01:51:512
- 02:01:421 add NC look really cool and fit alot with the star pattern
- 02:17:109 add finish here
- 02:20:687 this 1/1 slider dont fit this part try a 1/2 repeat will follow alot better the song
- 02:21:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I really dont like this part 02:22:063 and 02:23:164 got a important sounds uin the music and should be mapped also you did a jump pattern here 02:21:512 (1,2,3) - for consistency do the same in 02:22:338 (4,5,6) -
- 02:25:641 add circle 02:25:778 add circle should be a triplet there sound really nice and make the kiai part more fun :3
- 02:31:971 maybe NC im not sure
- 02:32:246 (1) - add finish
- 02:34:723 finish on the head
- 02:45:457 should be a triplet here x_x
- 02:54:540 same suggestion about the other spinners
- 03:36:375 add finish here too
- 03:49:035 (8,1) - swap NC
- 03:54:815 (1) - copy past previous slider and maybe you like to try THIS
- 04:11:604 same suggestion about the other spinners
Normal:
- 00:23:714 (2,3,4,5) - uhh this is too hard for a easy/normal I suggest you to convert they intwo 1/2 slider
- 00:42:980 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as above a new player cant read or play things like this try another rhythm
- 00:44:632 add finish here
- 00:53:164 (5,1) - fix the distance is little but noticeable
- 01:01:145 (2) - finish in the tail
- 01:02:246 add finish here kiai start again
- 01:46:008 (6,1,2) - same as 00:53:164
- 02:15:457 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:42:980
- 02:17:109 add finish here too
- 02:32:522 (1,1) - add finish in both of them
- 03:14:907 add whistle here fit aliot with the vocals
- 03:27:567 (1,2,3) - fix the distance
- 03:36:375 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:23:714
- 03:36:375 (1) - Finish
- 03:38:577 (1) - Fix the distance with previous one
- 03:49:586 (1,1) - add finish in both of them
- 04:11:054 convert this in 1/2 slider to it will finish with the kiai i forget to point this in previous kiai ends so do the same on they
Nice song GL with this