angela - ANGEL [Osu|Taiko] · forum

GugUCorn

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-10-23T12:45:56+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 2월 27일 목요일 at 오전 9:19:18

Artist: angela
Title: ANGEL
Source: COPPELION
Tags: TKSalt Habiholic opening TV Size
BPM: 184
Filesize: 16787kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.96 stars, 99 notes)
Habi's Normal (4.13 stars, 128 notes)
Hard (4.98 stars, 187 notes)
Insane (4.9 stars, 373 notes)
TK'S Muzukashii (4.77 stars, 367 notes)
TK'S Oni (4.89 stars, 530 notes)

Download: angela - ANGEL
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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IT'S TV SIZE VERSION

Easy - Done! By Me

Habi's Normal - Done! By HabiHolic

Hard - Done! By Me

Insane - Done! By Me

TKS's Muzu, Oni - Done! By TKSalt
>>COPPELION ENDING<<

[MOD of History]

2013-10-27 ritsu-tanaika MOD
2013-10-27 Main Black MOD
2013-10-28 [ Yuki ] MOD
2013-10-29 [ Sana ] MOD
2013-10-30 Negri_sk MOD
2013-10-31 [ Zzz ] MOD
2013-11-06 Sonnyc MOD
................ Damori MOD
................ Delis MOD
2013-11-13 Dainesl Taiko MOD
2013-11-15 taiko_maniac1811 Taiko MOD
2013-11-16 qoot8123 Taiko MOD
2013-12-08 KanaRin Taiko MOD
2014-01-05 Rakuen MOD
2014-01-19~22 CXu MOD
>>TOTAL : 11 STANDARD MOD | 4 TAIKO MOD

Last edited by GugUCorn 2014-02-27T00:21:31+00:00, edited 33 times in total.

ritsu-tanaika

468 posts

Joined September 2012

ritsu-tanaika 2013-10-27T05:32:25+00:00

M4M

GENERAL

When you map songs, its best to keep your slider tick rate at 1/4 or 1/8. 1/1 is not good because there are many notes that are in between the big white ticks, making it difficult for modders to check

EASY

00:02:842 (4) - Add a note here for more consistent flow when playing

00:14:907 (2) - Overlap here is not good, hard for players to follow, especially on Easy

00:26:973 (1,2) - There are many finish hitsounds that are unnecessary, and it makes gameplay too loud, even if you are trying to emphasize a point

00:30:559 (1) - same issue as 00:14:907 (2)

01:17:027 (1) - The clap does not really match the vocal and music, suggest removing it

HARD

00:05:940 (4,5,1) - Odd spacing here, hard to determine. I suggest unstacking the notes and moving 00:06:592 (1) - to a further location, away from 4 and 5

00:22:407 (1,1) - Again, there is difficulty determining the location and timing of the notes, which is confusing to follow. please unstack or move to different location

00:40:668 (4) - Finish is only necessary at the beginning of the slider, remove the other parts with finish hitsound

Cant mod Insane sorry, im not good enough for that.

you mainly need to work on the location of notes, to avoid stacking and confusion. try to keep the flow nice, and make it easy for players to interpret the path. also avoid unnecessary hitsounds, they may seem like you're emphasizing a point, but other players will not agree that its good. some may say too distracting

anyways, good luck and I hope I helped

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-10-27T13:34:22+00:00

ritsu-tanaika wrote:
M4M

GENERAL

When you map songs, its best to keep your slider tick rate at 1/4 or 1/8. 1/1 is not good because there are many notes that are in between the big white ticks, making it difficult for modders to check

EASY

00:02:842 (4) - Add a note here for more consistent flow when playing

00:14:907 (2) - Overlap here is not good, hard for players to follow, especially on Easy

00:26:973 (1,2) - There are many finish hitsounds that are unnecessary, and it makes gameplay too loud, even if you are trying to emphasize a point

00:30:559 (1) - same issue as 00:14:907 (2)

01:17:027 (1) - The clap does not really match the vocal and music, suggest removing it

HARD

00:05:940 (4,5,1) - Odd spacing here, hard to determine. I suggest unstacking the notes and moving 00:06:592 (1) - to a further location, away from 4 and 5 [color=#000080]Fixed! i moved 00:06:266 (1) note.[/color]

00:22:407 (1,1) - Again, there is difficulty determining the location and timing of the notes, which is confusing to follow. please unstack or move to different location no, pass!

00:40:668 (4) - Finish is only necessary at the beginning of the slider, remove the other parts with finish hitsound oh! it's my fault! fixed!

Cant mod Insane sorry, im not good enough for that.

you mainly need to work on the location of notes, to avoid stacking and confusion. try to keep the flow nice, and make it easy for players to interpret the path. also avoid unnecessary hitsounds, they may seem like you're emphasizing a point, but other players will not agree that its good. some may say too distracting

anyways, good luck and I hope I helped

nothing to fix in Easy Diff MOD

thanks for mod!

Asgard

639 posts

Joined June 2011

Asgard 2013-10-27T15:30:16+00:00

저는 코펠리온 엔딩 만들었는데
님은 오프닝이네여 ㅋ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/121527

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-10-27T16:25:57+00:00

Asgard wrote:
저는 코펠리온 엔딩 만들었는데
님은 오프닝이네여 ㅋ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/121527

올ㅋ 서로 힙냅시다!

Main Black

110 posts

Joined October 2011

Main Black 2013-10-27T20:59:59+00:00

안녕하세요. 초보 매퍼입니다 '~'

아직 랭크맵도 없고 ... 모딩은 TaMul님이 첫 대상이네요 하하..

GENERAL

괜찮아 보이네요

Hard

00:13:929 (1,2) - 빈 공간에 노트를 추가 시켜주면 좋을것 같습니다
예제)

00:17:353 (1) - 시작 타이밍이 어색합니다
반복 슬라이드를 없애고 사진처럼 바꾸는게 자연스럽다고 생각합니다

00:25:831 (3) - 박자가 안맞다고 생각됩니다. 00:25:668 (3) 로 옮기는게 좋을것 같아요

01:00:233 (3,4) - 사이에 노트를 추가 해주는게 자연스러운듯 합니다

01:02:842 (3,1) - 사이에 노트를 추가 해주는게 자연스러운듯 합니다

Insane

01:16:538 (2) - 슬라이드를 삭제하시고 01:17:353 (1) - 까지 복잡한 점프패턴으로 바꾸면 재밌을것 같아요!
제가 제시한 예시패턴은 배치가 더러워보일수있으니 다른 점프패턴으로 하는게 좋으실수도..?
예제)

01:24:527 (3,4) - 노트 간격이 어색합니다. 거리 맞춰주는게 좋을듯 합니다

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초보라서 그런지 모딩 양이 적습니다 ㅠ 그래도 도움이 조금이라도 됬으면 좋겠네요

코펠리온 1화만 보고 아직 안보고있는데 오프닝 노래가 괜찮군요 'ㅁ'b

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-10-28T02:33:34+00:00

Main Black wrote:
안녕하세요. 초보 매퍼입니다 '~'

아직 랭크맵도 없고 ... 모딩은 TaMul님이 첫 대상이네요 하하..

GENERAL

괜찮아 보이네요

Hard

00:13:929 (1,2) - 빈 공간에 노트를 추가 시켜주면 좋을것 같습니다 pass!
예제)

00:17:353 (1) - 시작 타이밍이 어색합니다 fixed!
반복 슬라이드를 없애고 사진처럼 바꾸는게 자연스럽다고 생각합니다

00:25:831 (3) - 박자가 안맞다고 생각됩니다. 00:25:668 (3) 로 옮기는게 좋을것 같아요 pass!

01:00:233 (3,4) - 사이에 노트를 추가 해주는게 자연스러운듯 합니다 pass!

01:02:842 (3,1) - 사이에 노트를 추가 해주는게 자연스러운듯 합니다 pass!

Insane

01:16:538 (2) - 슬라이드를 삭제하시고 01:17:353 (1) - 까지 복잡한 점프패턴으로 바꾸면 재밌을것 같아요! pass!
제가 제시한 예시패턴은 배치가 더러워보일수있으니 다른 점프패턴으로 하는게 좋으실수도..?
예제)

01:24:527 (3,4) - 노트 간격이 어색합니다. 거리 맞춰주는게 좋을듯 합니다 fixed!

------------------------------------------

초보라서 그런지 모딩 양이 적습니다 ㅠ 그래도 도움이 조금이라도 됬으면 좋겠네요

코펠리온 1화만 보고 아직 안보고있는데 오프닝 노래가 괜찮군요 'ㅁ'b

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-10-28T04:48:59+00:00

Habi's Normal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: angel.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66918
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23712,74907,78168
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:ANGEL (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ANGEL (TV Size)
Artist:angela
ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:TaMul
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:COPPELION
Tags:TKSalt
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,0,"COPPELION - OP.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-10-28T07:15:23+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:

Habi's Normal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: angel.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66918
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23712,74907,78168
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:ANGEL (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ANGEL (TV Size)
Artist:angela
ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:TaMul
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:COPPELION
Tags:TKSalt
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
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//Break Periods
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updated! and go pending!

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-10-28T11:50:39+00:00

Hello~ M4M

mod

[Easy]
없는듯?;;

[Habi's Normal]
00:08:386 (4) - NC
00:09:690 (1) - 뉴콤 해제
00:46:212 (3) - ^^
01:01:864 (4) - ^

[Hard]
01:00:723 (4) - 박자 추가?
01:03:331 (4) - ^
01:18:005 (2) - x:196,y:312/x:256,y:272/x:320,y:312 <<깔끔한 배치
01:23:712 (3) - 6'돌리고 x:52,y:188 <<01:24:201 (4) - 랑 알맞는 배치(디스턴스 유지)

[Insane]
00:06:592 (1) - 뉴콤 해제 <노래에 의한
00:06:918 (2) - NC^
00:22:407 (1) - 뉴콤 해제^
00:22:733 (2) - NC^

슬라속도2.04 어질어질

너무 없나?ㅎㅎ;; 모딩 시작한지 별로 안되서..ㅎ

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-10-28T15:34:30+00:00

[ Yuki ] wrote:
Hello~ M4M
mod
[Easy]
없는듯?;;

[Hard]
01:00:723 (4) - 박자 추가? 패스!
01:03:331 (4) - ^ 패스!
01:18:005 (2) - x:196,y:312/x:256,y:272/x:320,y:312 <<깔끔한 배치 원래한것이 맘에들어서 패스!
01:23:712 (3) - 6'돌리고 x:52,y:188 <<01:24:201 (4) - 랑 알맞는 배치(디스턴스 유지) fixed!

[Insane]
00:06:592 (1) - 뉴콤 해제 <노래에 의한
00:06:918 (2) - NC^
00:22:407 (1) - 뉴콤 해제^
00:22:733 (2) - NC^
all fixed!
슬라속도2.04 어질어질

너무 없나?ㅎㅎ;; 모딩 시작한지 별로 안되서..ㅎ

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-10-29T08:08:05+00:00

M4M from your queue

Easy

00:03:168 (1,2) - 앞부분이랑 같은 멜로디니까 같은 리듬으로 바꿔주세요

SPOILER

00:06:755 (3) - 보컬에 맞춰서 볼륨 다운
00:15:886 (3) - 동선

SPOILER

00:43:603 (3) - 직선 슬라가 모양도 이뻐보여요
00:45:396 (1,2) - 디스턴스 1.5는 무리
00:54:038 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:27:625 (3) - 써클로 바꾸고 스핀은 그냥 두셔도 되고 1/2 당겨서 늘려도 될듯

Habi's normal

00:01:864 - 휘슬
00:02:190 - 휘슬 제거
00:03:168 - 휘슬
00:05:777 (1) - 모양

00:07:407 (2) - 3번 머리를 향하도록
00:12:462 - 여기 전혀 소리가 안들리네요 그냥 써클로 바꾸시는거 추천
00:27:951 (1,2) - 좀 더 감싸주세요
00:49:473 (2,3) - 디스턴스
00:52:081 (1,2) - ^
01:07:407 - 노트 추가
01:15:396 (2) - 뱃들이 잘 지적하는거

Hard

00:05:125 (3,4) - 스택
00:06:918 (3,4) - ^
00:19:636 (1,1) - 끝에 ^
00:21:755 (5,1) - ^
00:27:625 (1,2) - NC 바꿔주세요
00:36:592 (3,4) - 박자 정말 추천

00:45:396 (3,4) - 스택;
00:48:168 (2,3) - ^
00:51:429 (1) - 대칭을 원하시면 y축 동일하게 고쳐주세요
00:59:255 (1,2,3) - 되도록이면 안겹치게..
01:06:429 (1) - 모양추천

01:10:342 (2,3) - 스택..
01:20:614 (4,5) -

http://puu.sh/52GdM.jpg

01:24:201 (4,5) - 디스턴스

Insane

00:09:608 (6) - 써클하나로 바꾸는거 추천드려요
00:10:668 (1,1) - 스택
00:14:581 (4) - 반대로 휘는게 동선이 더 깔끔하네요

00:16:701 (3,4) - 스택
00:19:636 (1) - 잘 감싸주세요
00:42:788 (7,8,1) - 디스턴스 줄여서 직선으로 붙여주시는게 더 좋아보여요

00:57:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 딱딱딱딱 끊어지는 힛사가 안어울립니다
01:16:864 (3) - 185||186 으로 옮기시는게 어떨까요 01:16:864 (3,4,5) - 가사는 4,5만 들리는데 3부터 치면 플레이어들이 이상한 느낌을 받아요
01:27:788 (1) - 398||269

스택 문제가 좀 많은거 같아요. 어차피 나중에 다 잡힐거고 어제 코도라가 이거때매 발목 잡힌거에서 볼 수 있듯이 처음부터 조심하는게 조을듯.

좋은맵이네요. 굳럭^^

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-10-29T12:30:27+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
M4M from your queue

Easy
00:03:168 (1,2) - 앞부분이랑 같은 멜로디니까 같은 리듬으로 바꿔주세요
SPOILER
00:06:755 (3) - 보컬에 맞춰서 볼륨 다운 pass!
00:15:886 (3) - 동선
SPOILER
[b]pass![/b]
00:43:603 (3) - 직선 슬라가 모양도 이뻐보여요 pass!
00:45:396 (1,2) - 디스턴스 1.5는 무리 pass!
00:54:038 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:27:625 (3) - 써클로 바꾸고 스핀은 그냥 두셔도 되고 1/2 당겨서 늘려도 될듯 pass!

Hard

00:05:125 (3,4) - 스택
00:06:918 (3,4) - ^
00:19:636 (1,1) - 끝에 ^
00:21:755 (5,1) - ^
00:27:625 (1,2) - NC 바꿔주세요
00:36:592 (3,4) - 박자 정말 추천
00:45:396 (3,4) - 스택;
00:48:168 (2,3) - ^
00:51:429 (1) - 대칭을 원하시면 y축 동일하게 고쳐주세요
00:59:255 (1,2,3) - 되도록이면 안겹치게..
01:06:429 (1) - 모양추천
01:10:342 (2,3) - 스택..
01:20:614 (4,5) -
http://puu.sh/52GdM.jpg
01:24:201 (4,5) - 디스턴스

Insane
00:09:608 (6) - 써클하나로 바꾸는거 추천드려요
00:10:668 (1,1) - 스택
00:14:581 (4) - 반대로 휘는게 동선이 더 깔끔하네요
00:16:701 (3,4) - 스택
00:19:636 (1) - 잘 감싸주세요
00:42:788 (7,8,1) - 디스턴스 줄여서 직선으로 붙여주시는게 더 좋아보여요
00:57:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 딱딱딱딱 끊어지는 힛사가 안어울립니다
01:16:864 (3) - 185||186 으로 옮기시는게 어떨까요 01:16:864 (3,4,5) - 가사는 4,5만 들리는데 3부터 치면 플레이어들이 이상한 느낌을 받아요
01:27:788 (1) - 398||269

스택 문제가 좀 많은거 같아요. 어차피 나중에 다 잡힐거고 어제 코도라가 이거때매 발목 잡힌거에서 볼 수 있듯이 처음부터 조심하는게 조을듯.

좋은맵이네요. 굳럭^^

pass이외 수정햇습니다 감사합니다 ㅎ

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-10-30T01:43:24+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
M4M from your queue

Habi's normal

00:01:864 - 휘슬 / 딱히 필요는 없어보입니다
00:02:190 - 휘슬 제거 / no fix
00:03:168 - 휘슬 / no fix
00:05:777 (1) - 모양/ 느낌이 이상합니다
00:07:407 (2) - 3번 머리를 향하도록 / 수정
00:12:462 - 여기 전혀 소리가 안들리네요 그냥 써클로 바꾸시는거 추천 / 읭?? 들리는데요??
00:27:951 (1,2) - 좀 더 감싸주세요 / 수정
00:49:473 (2,3) - 디스턴스 / 디스턴스 자잘하게 차이나는건 별로 문제는 안됩니다
00:52:081 (1,2) - ^ / 위와 동일
01:07:407 - 노트 추가 / 스핀 뒤에 여유가 없잖아요 그러면 안고칠게요
01:15:396 (2) - 뱃들이 잘 지적하는거 / ???

스택 문제가 좀 많은거 같아요. 어차피 나중에 다 잡힐거고 어제 코도라가 이거때매 발목 잡힌거에서 볼 수 있듯이 처음부터 조심하는게 조을듯.

좋은맵이네요. 굳럭^^

[ Yuki ] wrote:
Hello~ M4M
mod
[Habi's Normal]
00:08:386 (4) - NC
00:09:690 (1) - 뉴콤 해제
00:46:212 (3) - ^^
01:01:864 (4) - ^

전부 고쳤서요~
슬라속도2.04 어질어질

너무 없나?ㅎㅎ;; 모딩 시작한지 별로 안되서..ㅎ

Thanks mod Sana and Yuki~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:ANGEL (TV Size)
Artist:angela
ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:TaMul
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:COPPELION
Tags:TKSalt Habiholic
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
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Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-10-30T02:02:51+00:00

모딩 받는 자세가 안되어있네요. 씁쓸합니다 D:

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-10-30T03:59:05+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
모딩 받는 자세가 안되어있네요. 씁쓸합니다 D:

개인적인 의견을 맵 스레드에다가 쓰시면 감정싸움으로 번집니다, 뭔가 불만이 있으시거나 할얘기가 있으시면 그사람에게 직접 얘기하시거나 아니면 자기 입으로만 얘기해주세요.

HabiHolic : 모딩 코멘트를 다실 때 타당한 이유를 설명하시거나, 설명할만한 이유가 없으면 되도록이면 수정하시거나 맵을 좀 더 개선시키려고 노력하시는 게 더좋습니다. 모딩하는 사람입장에서도 생각을 해주면 더 좋을 것이고 그리고 일단 코멘트를 다신다는 것은 그만큼 자신이 마음에 들지 않거나 수정하지 않아도 될 문제이기 때문에 코멘트를 다셨겠죠. 하지만 모딩한 사람들중에서 코멘트를 확인하고 그게 왜 문제가 안되고 꼭 수정이 되지않아도 문제가 없는지 등 이런내용을 쭉 훑어보시는 모더들이 많습니다. 그러므로 귀찮으시더라도 되도록이면 모딩한사람이 납득할만한 설명을 써주시는게 좋습니다.

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-10-30T06:15:35+00:00

헉... 알겠습니다

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-10-30T14:35:54+00:00

ㄷㄷㄷ...;;

그리고 updated!

Negri_sk

298 posts

Joined January 2013

Negri_sk 2013-10-30T16:01:57+00:00

[Easy]
00:05:777 (2) - Add clap
00:08:386 (3) - ^
00:38:386 (3) - ^
00:50:125 (3) - ^
01:03:820 (2) - Add finish
01:27:625 (3) - http://puu.sh/53Qdp.jpg make the slider longer and spinner shorter

[Habi's Normal]
01:03:494 (5) - Add Finish
00:08:386 (1) - Add clap
01:10:668 (5) - ^
01:27:951 (1) - Add finish
01:15:396 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:05:940 (4) - Add clap
00:15:559 (3) - Add finish
00:51:429 (1) - ^
00:54:690 (2) - Add clap
01:27:788 (1) - Add finish

[Insane]
+1 Drain?
01:27:951 (1) - Add finish

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-10-31T21:23:56+00:00

Hi~ TaMul

제가 너무 모딩이 늦은듯하네요 ㅠ...

[ General ]

제가 찾을만한건 없는거같네요 ..!

[ Easy ]

00:06:755 (1) - 이 슬라이더를 00:06:918 (1) - 이쪽으로 이동.

SPOILER

더 박자가 좋아진듯 합니다만...

00:38:386 (3) - 제안 :

SPOILER

더 좋은 모양.

00:52:733 (1) - 노래상으로 봤을떄는 뉴콤보 필요없어보이네요 ...

01:11:973 (2) - 제안!! :

SPOILER

이렇게 하라는건 아니고 박자만 추가해보시는건 어떤가요.

그리고 박자 추가하셧으면 Clap도 추가!

01:13:929 (4) - 제안 : 01:09:364 (5) - 이거랑 대칭되게 해주셧으면 더 좋았을탠데 'ㅂ' ..

01:22:407 (4) - 간단하게 뉴콤보 해제

01:22:733 (1) - 뉴콤보 추가!

[ Habi's Normal ]

? 무난해서 잡을꺠 없네요!!!

[ Hard ]

좀 전체적으로 어렵긴한데 ... 잡을껀 딱히 없는거같아요!!

[ Insane ]

00:04:473 (1) - 앞의 흐름상으로 봤을떄 뉴콤보 해주시는게 좋을것 같습니다.

00:19:636 (4) - 뉴콤 필요없어보이는 ...

00:18:820 (7) - 이건 뉴콤 필요있을라나 .. 'ㅂ' ..

00:47:679 (3) - 뜬끔없이 휘파람소리라니!!

휘슬 제거

... 잡는게 이상해서 죄송합니다 ... ㅠ...

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/120343 제 맵!!!

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-11-01T06:54:31+00:00

Negri_sk wrote:
[Easy]
00:05:777 (2) - Add clap
00:08:386 (3) - ^
00:38:386 (3) - ^
00:50:125 (3) - ^
01:03:820 (2) - Add finish
01:27:625 (3) - http://puu.sh/53Qdp.jpg make the slider longer and spinner shorter

[Habi's Normal]
01:03:494 (5) - Add Finish
00:08:386 (1) - Add clap
01:10:668 (5) - ^
01:27:951 (1) - Add finish
01:15:396 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:05:940 (4) - Add clap ok
00:15:559 (3) - Add finish
00:51:429 (1) - ^
00:54:690 (2) - Add clap
01:27:788 (1) - Add finish

[Insane]
+1 Drain?
01:27:951 (1) - Add finish

without ok,i pass another mod

thanks

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2013-11-01T07:05:56+00:00

[ Zzz ] wrote:
Hi~ TaMul

제가 너무 모딩이 늦은듯하네요 ㅠ... 아뇨 ㅎ 해준것만해도 감사합니다 허허

[ General ]

제가 찾을만한건 없는거같네요 ..!

[ Easy ]

00:06:755 (1) - 이 슬라이더를 00:06:918 (1) - 이쪽으로 이동. 고려해봐야겠네요..이지난이도라서 이박자가 되련지 몰라서 일단 패스

SPOILER
더 박자가 좋아진듯 합니다만...

00:38:386 (3) - 제안 : 수정!
SPOILER
더 좋은 모양.

00:52:733 (1) - 노래상으로 봤을떄는 뉴콤보 필요없어보이네요 ...수정!

01:11:973 (2) - 제안!! : 음 애매하네요 일단 패스
SPOILER
이렇게 하라는건 아니고 박자만 추가해보시는건 어떤가요.

그리고 박자 추가하셧으면 Clap도 추가!

01:13:929 (4) - 제안 : 01:09:364 (5) - 이거랑 대칭되게 해주셧으면 더 좋았을탠데 'ㅂ' ..대칭되게 5번 노트에다가 두고 좌우대칭한건데 일단 다시 재배치!

01:22:407 (4) - 간단하게 뉴콤보 해제 [b]ㅇㅋ

01:22:733 (1) - 뉴콤보 추가!ㅇㅋㅇㅋ

[ Insane ]

00:04:473 (1) - 앞의 흐름상으로 봤을떄 뉴콤보 해주시는게 좋을것 같습니다. 수정!

00:19:636 (4) - 뉴콤 필요없어보이는 ...ㅅㅈ!

00:18:820 (7) - 이건 뉴콤 필요있을라나 .. 'ㅂ' ..ㅅㅈ!

00:47:679 (3) - 뜬끔없이 휘파람소리라니!!ㅅㅈ!

휘슬 제거

... 잡는게 이상해서 죄송합니다 ... ㅠ...

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/120343 제 맵!!!

Fuu-chan

30 posts

Joined December 2012

Fuu-chan 2013-11-01T13:17:49+00:00

This is going to ranked soon.. I guarantee it

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-11-02T06:23:30+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:ANGEL (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:TaMul
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384,320,56320,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,288,56646,2,0,P|228:272|172:284,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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16,168,57625,2,0,L|8:108,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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40,324,61538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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432,204,70668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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444,64,78494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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GugUCorn

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GugUCorn 2013-11-02T06:33:35+00:00

▲updated!

Shariele

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Shariele 2013-11-04T17:11:12+00:00

I liked it! It catched the rythm really good I think!

I really hope it gets ranked soon!

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-11-06T14:01:19+00:00

Easy:

00:06:755 (1) - 1/2 줄여주세요. 그게 피니시와 어울릴듯요
00:14:907 (2) - 이지에서 이전 슬라이더 위를 읽기 어렵게 지나가면 어려울거 같습니다.
00:45:396 (1,2) - 이지 내 간격 변동 비추합니다. 리패턴 추천
01:08:712 (4,5) - (4)에 리버스 넣고 (5) 01:09:690 로 옮기는게 나을듯요

Habi's Normal:

00:40:994 (1) - 끝에 피니시. 클랩 만으로는 많이 부족한 느낌이 듭니다
00:43:603 (1) - crtl+G 2번 눌러서 00:44:907 (2)와 같은 모양을!
00:46:212 (1) - 시작에 피니시
00:48:820 (1) - 끝에 피니시
00:50:777 (4) - ^
01:01:864 (4) - 호흡이 길어지고 있으니 뉴콤 넣어주세요
01:11:646 (2) - 시작이 아니라 끝에 클랩 들어가야 할듯요
01:15:396 (2) - 끝에 피니시
01:19:473 (5) - (4)와 같은 모양으로 만들어주세요. 너무 곡률이 센듯요

Hard:

00:11:483 (2,3) - 점프 좀 이상한거 같은데 이런식은 어떨까요? (2) 슬라이더 2번째 점 (160,100) 마지막 점 (208,164)하고 돌리기 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1083389
00:13:929 (1) - 뉴콤 필요 없을듯요
00:36:918 (1) - 00:36:103 (2)를 더 잘 감싸주세요
01:00:886 (5) - 완벽한 대칭을 바랍니다.

갠적으로 하드에서 만큼은 연타 없는게 나을거 같아요..

Insane:

00:04:146 (2) - (336,244)가 더 부드러울듯요
00:21:755 (3,4) - 음악의 변동 폭이 작아서 여기의 점프는 부담스럽게 느껴집니다. 노트 두개를 다시 배치하는게 나을듯요
00:26:973 (1,2) - (2) 부터 뉴콤을 넣어 주세요. 안그러면 00:27:299 (2)가 좀 헷갈리게 느껴지는거 같습니다.
00:33:413 (2) - 가사랑도 맞게 하기 위해 삭제해주세요. 또 바로 직전에 연타 있어서 없는게 왠지 나을거 같기도.
00:38:059 (1) - 굳이 뉴콤 필요 없을듯요
00:42:951 (1) - ^
00:54:364 (1) - 앞 콤보가 너무 짧은듯 합니다. 뉴콤 삭제~
01:16:049 (1) - 첫 부분이 01:15:559 (2)에 약간 가려져 있는데, 꼬여있어서 플레이에 일단 지장은 없었지만 이상하다는 약간의 느낌.
01:20:614 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제

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GugUCorn

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GugUCorn 2013-11-06T16:47:16+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Easy:

00:06:755 (1) - 1/2 줄여주세요. 그게 피니시와 어울릴듯요
00:14:907 (2) - 이지에서 이전 슬라이더 위를 읽기 어렵게 지나가면 어려울거 같습니다.
00:45:396 (1,2) - 이지 내 간격 변동 비추합니다. 리패턴 추천
01:08:712 (4,5) - (4)에 리버스 넣고 (5) 01:09:690 로 옮기는게 나을듯요

Hard:

00:11:483 (2,3) - 점프 좀 이상한거 같은데 이런식은 어떨까요? (2) 슬라이더 2번째 점 (160,100) 마지막 점 (208,164)하고 돌리기 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1083389
00:13:929 (1) - 뉴콤 필요 없을듯요
00:36:918 (1) - 00:36:103 (2)를 더 잘 감싸주세요
01:00:886 (5) - 완벽한 대칭을 바랍니다.

갠적으로 하드에서 만큼은 연타 없는게 나을거 같아요..

Insane:

00:04:146 (2) - (336,244)가 더 부드러울듯요
00:21:755 (3,4) - 음악의 변동 폭이 작아서 여기의 점프는 부담스럽게 느껴집니다. 노트 두개를 다시 배치하는게 나을듯요
00:26:973 (1,2) - (2) 부터 뉴콤을 넣어 주세요. 안그러면 00:27:299 (2)가 좀 헷갈리게 느껴지는거 같습니다.
00:33:413 (2) - 가사랑도 맞게 하기 위해 삭제해주세요. 또 바로 직전에 연타 있어서 없는게 왠지 나을거 같기도.
00:38:059 (1) - 굳이 뉴콤 필요 없을듯요
00:42:951 (1) - ^
00:54:364 (1) - 앞 콤보가 너무 짧은듯 합니다. 뉴콤 삭제~
01:16:049 (1) - 첫 부분이 01:15:559 (2)에 약간 가려져 있는데, 꼬여있어서 플레이에 일단 지장은 없었지만 이상하다는 약간의 느낌.
01:20:614 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제

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