im here finally :3
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
i dont think video is supposed to be put on taiko diffs, so take it off?
also i think your video offset is slightly too early, try -5250
[Easy]
lol should have used 1.1x DS, so you dont have to enlarge spacings like 01:02:374 (4,1)
00:29:076 - i'd recommend a note here to cover the guitar + cymbal in the background
00:50:751 (1) - it would be cool if you can slowly increase the volume of the tick sounds here to mimic the crescendo in the music
01:41:013 (1,2,3,4) - i think you intended to make a square here, but its a tad bit too flat
02:03:631 (3) - i think finish on the start fits your hitsounding patterns better
02:21:222 (1,2,3) - its best if you can unify the spacing in this combo for aesthetics
02:26:249 (3) - finish?
03:01:432 (1) - since you used consecutive finishes in this section, its best to lower the volume a bit so things dont get too loud
03:31:589 (7) - i think the NC should be here based on your previous NC patterns
03:36:615 (1) - same as 00:50:751 (1)
04:42:898 (1) - a drum clap on the start would work charms
[Normal]
00:26:249 (2) - might want to move this a bit left to get a better triangle
00:34:416 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked
01:10:856 (1) - the spacing leading into this is a bit far, try to move around 01:10:228 (4) to get a better spacing
02:00:490 (4,1) - stack oot
02:07:086 (2,3) - spacing is a bit short here, move 02:08:029 (3) up a bit and adjust later notes accordingly
02:24:992 (3) - end node up by 1 grid will make this perfectly paralleled with 02:26:563 (5)
02:58:291 (3) - this just feels a bit messy since it is partially stacked with 02:56:092 (2); i would recommend perfectly overlapping them and adjust 02:56:406 (1,2) more to the left to get a good vertical symmetry here
03:01:432 (1) - same volume suggestions as Easy
03:49:181 (4) - maybe add a NC here to hint the rhythm change
04:30:018 (1,2,3) - no whistle pattern on this pattern? sounds a bit plain compared to the rest of them
04:42:898 (2) - drum clap on the start
[Hard]
00:29:076 (7,8) - use the circle first then the slider (maybe a stack), this way the slider start and slide sound will correspond nicely with the guitar at 00:29:390
00:38:186 (1) - whistle on end, a nice guitar sound is heard here
01:23:107 (4) - the movement to 01:24:678 (1,2) would be smoother if this slider tail is pointing downwards
02:06:144 (1) - missing a finish here?
02:18:081 (1,2,3,4,1) - would be better if this can be shifted a bit to the right so the oval flow is not disturbed
02:38:186 (5) - add clap?
02:50:751 (4) - ^
03:01:432 (1) - i was gonna say lower volume again but seeing more note density its not as important as the lower diffs, up to you
03:30:490 (4) - this bend to the left really bothers me xD, try to make the curve smoother here
03:34:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - omg i thought u were gonna make a heart here, but then i saw 03:36:301 (8) and i was like nuuuu...could try moving it to x:256 y:160, if not then down 1 grid to stack it with 03:38:500 (1)
03:55:149 (3) - this overheld slider actually sounds a bit bad with its end landing on nothing significant in the music, matches the vocals better if you shorten it to 03:55:463
04:39:914 (3) - sounds like a repeat slider with some 1/8 snap (04:40:149) would fit the vocals well here
04:42:898 (1) - drum clap~
Thats all, cool sliders as usual, star and good luck~
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
i dont think video is supposed to be put on taiko diffs, so take it off?
also i think your video offset is slightly too early, try -5250
[Easy]
lol should have used 1.1x DS, so you dont have to enlarge spacings like 01:02:374 (4,1)
00:29:076 - i'd recommend a note here to cover the guitar + cymbal in the background
00:50:751 (1) - it would be cool if you can slowly increase the volume of the tick sounds here to mimic the crescendo in the music
01:41:013 (1,2,3,4) - i think you intended to make a square here, but its a tad bit too flat
02:03:631 (3) - i think finish on the start fits your hitsounding patterns better
02:21:222 (1,2,3) - its best if you can unify the spacing in this combo for aesthetics
02:26:249 (3) - finish?
03:01:432 (1) - since you used consecutive finishes in this section, its best to lower the volume a bit so things dont get too loud
03:31:589 (7) - i think the NC should be here based on your previous NC patterns
03:36:615 (1) - same as 00:50:751 (1)
04:42:898 (1) - a drum clap on the start would work charms
[Normal]
00:26:249 (2) - might want to move this a bit left to get a better triangle
00:34:416 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked
01:10:856 (1) - the spacing leading into this is a bit far, try to move around 01:10:228 (4) to get a better spacing
02:00:490 (4,1) - stack oot
02:07:086 (2,3) - spacing is a bit short here, move 02:08:029 (3) up a bit and adjust later notes accordingly
02:24:992 (3) - end node up by 1 grid will make this perfectly paralleled with 02:26:563 (5)
02:58:291 (3) - this just feels a bit messy since it is partially stacked with 02:56:092 (2); i would recommend perfectly overlapping them and adjust 02:56:406 (1,2) more to the left to get a good vertical symmetry here
03:01:432 (1) - same volume suggestions as Easy
03:49:181 (4) - maybe add a NC here to hint the rhythm change
04:30:018 (1,2,3) - no whistle pattern on this pattern? sounds a bit plain compared to the rest of them
04:42:898 (2) - drum clap on the start
[Hard]
00:29:076 (7,8) - use the circle first then the slider (maybe a stack), this way the slider start and slide sound will correspond nicely with the guitar at 00:29:390
00:38:186 (1) - whistle on end, a nice guitar sound is heard here
01:23:107 (4) - the movement to 01:24:678 (1,2) would be smoother if this slider tail is pointing downwards
02:06:144 (1) - missing a finish here?
02:18:081 (1,2,3,4,1) - would be better if this can be shifted a bit to the right so the oval flow is not disturbed
02:38:186 (5) - add clap?
02:50:751 (4) - ^
03:01:432 (1) - i was gonna say lower volume again but seeing more note density its not as important as the lower diffs, up to you
03:30:490 (4) - this bend to the left really bothers me xD, try to make the curve smoother here
03:34:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - omg i thought u were gonna make a heart here, but then i saw 03:36:301 (8) and i was like nuuuu...could try moving it to x:256 y:160, if not then down 1 grid to stack it with 03:38:500 (1)
03:55:149 (3) - this overheld slider actually sounds a bit bad with its end landing on nothing significant in the music, matches the vocals better if you shorten it to 03:55:463
04:39:914 (3) - sounds like a repeat slider with some 1/8 snap (04:40:149) would fit the vocals well here
04:42:898 (1) - drum clap~
Thats all, cool sliders as usual, star and good luck~