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Satellite

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-10-14T00:52:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年1月11日 at 10:45:42

Artist: senya
Title: Bondage Anemonation
Source: Touhou
Tags: chen dagger-gazel litoluna naryuga wring yuuhei iceon kamasetora otodama The Fantastic Legend of Tohno Perfect Cherry Blossom Kouroumu 9 sokubaku
BPM: 150
Filesize: 6778kb
Play Time: 03:41
Difficulties Available:

litoluna's Easy (2.05 stars, 197 notes)
Lunatic (5 stars, 621 notes)
Naryuga's Normal (3.8 stars, 294 notes)
wring's Hard (4.78 stars, 478 notes)

Download: senya - Bondage Anemonation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Title: 束縛アネモネーション
Arrangement: iceon
Lyrics: かませ虎
Vocals: senya
Circle: 幽閉サテライト (Yuuhei Satellite)
Album: Bondage Anemonation / 束縛アネモネーション
Original Source: 遠野幻想物語 / The Fantastic Legend of Tohno
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mapset

Easy by litoluna

Normal by Naryuga

Hard by wring

Satellite by me
------------------------------------------------------------------------
Guest thanks you
litoluna
Naryuga
wring
Thanks Modding Help!!

SPOILER

Delis
Losertic
Hanabi-
Guy
CakiP
kajiyatta
Pandiar
Natsu
putigame
Suzully
Lecana
-Gamu-
ayaka2000
-APXH
10nya
jonathanlfj
Scorpiour

Last edited by Satellite 2014-05-19T07:28:34+00:00, edited 106 times in total.

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-10-19T06:52:18+00:00

1st! Ganbattee :3

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-10-19T12:26:44+00:00

10nya wrote:
1st! Ganbattee :3

OMG
thanks star~ >w<
~~10nya rename so good~~

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2013-10-27T09:29:40+00:00

random mod

[General]

disable countdown and letterbox during breaks '^'

[Satellite]

00:19:592 (1) - 頭にfinishあってもいいんじゃないかなー？
00:33:192 (4) - CTRL+Gのほうが若干良くなる気が！
00:40:792 - サークル追加、かなり叩きやすくなるかと思います。
00:51:592 (1,2,3,4) - なんかSatelliteさんっぽくない....
01:10:792 (1) - もうちょっとまっすぐにしたほうが良くないかな？
SPOILER
01:44:792 - add a circle !_!
01:49:192 (1) - うしろにwhistleわすれてる・・？
01:55:992 (3) - 終点1glid 左にずらして直線にしたほうが、綺麗になるような！
02:03:192 (4) - スライダーの代わりにサークル2個のほうが、~~DoubleTime的に~~面白くなるかと！
02:16:392 (7) - ちゃっとスタックされてますし提案なんですけど、x332 y196ぐらいまで飛ばしてみるのはどうでしょうー。難しくはなりませんし、面白くなるような。
02:47:992 (5,3) - 曲げたほうが見た目よくならないかなー？
SPOILER
02:53:192 (1,2,3) - わざとかも知れないけど、こんな感じだと思います。ｗ。
SPOILER
03:01:192 (1,2,3,4) - こういう配置どうでしょう、現在の配置に少し違和感を感じたので。(4は1の下)
SPOILER
一応こーども
```
220,44,181192,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,172,181392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,100,181592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,44,181792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```
03:10:792 (1) - tickのvolumeが少し大きいかなー？と感じたので、03:10:892 - ここに50~60%くらいの緑線置いてもいいような！
03:15:592 (1,2) - 1番、2番と同じように音を取ったほうが、叩きやすいんじゃないでしょうか？少し違和感ありました。
03:37:592 (4) - 直前のスライダーの角度的に、直線スライダーは合ってないように思いました。95度くらい回転させてみては。
lastのkiai,1番、2番と比べて全体的に連打が少ないような..＞＿＜

[litoluna's Normal]

00:13:192 (1) - あんまり見た目良くないかな？と思ったのでこういうようにしてみては！
SPOILER
01:50:792 (1) - スライダーの終点を10glidくらい..下げたら私の好きな形になるんですけどどうでしょう～
02:15:592 (3) - こういう音取りどうですか！最後と同じ感じで。
SPOILER
03:00:792 (5) - 私の好みですけどwhistleどうですかー
03:04:792 (2) - これも！
03:07:992 (6) - ^
かくことない・・・

~~star~~

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-10-27T10:38:49+00:00

Delis wrote:
random mod

[General]
disable countdown and letterbox during breaks '^'
[Satellite]
00:19:592 (1) - 頭にfinishあってもいいんじゃないかなー？ Nooo
00:33:192 (4) - CTRL+Gのほうが若干良くなる気が！
00:40:792 - サークル追加、かなり叩きやすくなるかと思います。
00:51:592 (1,2,3,4) - なんかSatelliteさんっぽくない....
01:10:792 (1) - もうちょっとまっすぐにしたほうが良くないかな？
SPOILER
01:44:792 - add a circle !_!
01:49:192 (1) - うしろにwhistleわすれてる・・？ Nooo
01:55:992 (3) - 終点1glid 左にずらして直線にしたほうが、綺麗になるような！
02:03:192 (4) - スライダーの代わりにサークル2個のほうが、~~DoubleTime的に~~面白くなるかと！
02:16:392 (7) - ちゃっとスタックされてますし提案なんですけど、x332 y196ぐらいまで飛ばしてみるのはどうでしょうー。難しくはなりませんし、面白くなるような。
02:47:992 (5,3) - 曲げたほうが見た目よくならないかなー？
SPOILER
02:53:192 (1,2,3) - わざとかも知れないけど、こんな感じだと思います。ｗ。
SPOILER
03:01:192 (1,2,3,4) - こういう配置どうでしょう、現在の配置に少し違和感を感じたので。(4は1の下) Nooo
SPOILER
一応こーども
220,44,181192,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,172,181392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,100,181592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,44,181792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
03:10:792 (1) - tickのvolumeが少し大きいかなー？と感じたので、03:10:892 - ここに50~60%くらいの緑線置いてもいいような！
03:15:592 (1,2) - 1番、2番と同じように音を取ったほうが、叩きやすいんじゃないでしょうか？少し違和感ありました。 Nooo
03:37:592 (4) - 直前のスライダーの角度的に、直線スライダーは合ってないように思いました。95度くらい回転させてみては。

lastのkiai,1番、2番と比べて全体的に連打が少ないような..＞＿＜
~~star~~

記載のないところはAll fixed.
Generalと緑線などはあとでdiffがそろってからまとめてやります！
thanks modding!

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-10-29T04:15:19+00:00

@Delis

Delis wrote:
random mod

[litoluna's Normal]
00:13:192 (1) - あんまり見た目良くないかな？と思ったのでこういうようにしてみては！
SPOILER
01:50:792 (1) - スライダーの終点を10glidくらい..下げたら私の好きな形になるんですけどどうでしょう～
02:15:592 (3) - こういう音取りどうですか！最後と同じ感じで。
SPOILER
03:00:792 (5) - 私の好みですけどwhistleどうですかー
03:04:792 (2) - これも！
03:07:992 (6) - ^
かくことない・・・
~~star~~

allfixed
thanks modding Delis chan~ \^^/

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: sokubaku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 46800
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6800,13200,75600,77200,139600,149200,176400,221200
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bondage Anemonation
TitleUnicode:束縛アネモネーション
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Satellite
Version:litoluna's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:dagger-gazel
BeatmapID:317729
BeatmapSetID:122416

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,6992,11872
2,139792,147872
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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272,76,67992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,32,68392,2,0,P|362:75|350:118,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,69192,6,0,P|244:244|272:328,2,180,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,71192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,160,71592,2,0,P|444:204|432:248,2,90,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72492,12,2,75592,0:0:0:0:
104,68,77192,6,0,P|72:152|104:232,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,280,78392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,232,78792,2,0,P|300:220|344:232,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,280,79592,2,0,L|468:260,2,45,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,326,80392,6,0,P|299:338|256:328,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,280,81192,2,0,P|157:240|156:191,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,112,81992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,52,82392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,112,82792,2,0,L|372:112,2,45,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,83592,6,0,L|190:237,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,280,84392,2,0,P|192:320|272:280,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,212,85592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,132,85992,2,0,L|412:132,2,45,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,86792,6,0,P|236:120|192:132,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,87592,2,0,P|192:220|236:208,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,212,88392,6,0,P|433:214|370:125,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,89992,6,0,P|210:76|122:74,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,212,91992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,288,92392,2,0,P|320:300|276:288,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,212,93192,6,0,P|188:201|145:213,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,292,93992,2,0,P|147:302|190:290,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,212,94792,2,0,L|297:146,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,60,95592,2,0,L|208:123,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,196,96392,6,0,P|145:283|204:351,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,124,98392,2,0,L|304:124,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,99192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,36,99592,2,0,P|468:80|456:124,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,204,100392,2,0,P|376:216|332:204,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,124,101192,6,0,P|183:115|241:208,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,204,102792,6,0,P|372:257|375:324,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,160,104392,2,0,P|211:106|208:39,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,212,105992,6,0,P|252:252|176:208,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,160,107192,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,104,107592,2,0,P|252:72|184:104,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,292,109192,6,0,P|219:349|256:236,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,110792,6,0,P|128:120|40:140,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,112792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,312,113192,2,0,P|348:304|390:280,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,232,113992,6,0,L|464:140,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,324,115192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,280,115592,6,0,P|312:231|224:220,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,244,116592,2,0,L|184:292,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,216,117192,6,0,P|68:176|23:97,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,220,119192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,164,119592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,164,119792,2,0,L|348:176,2,45,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,136,120392,2,0,P|255:92|267:47,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,92,121192,6,0,P|384:104|432:92,2,90,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,50,122392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,92,122792,2,0,P|172:140|184:180,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,244,123592,6,0,P|332:264|420:244,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,200,125592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,128,125992,2,0,P|104:80|112:36,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,126792,6,0,P|236:88|280:80,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,40,127592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,80,127992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,124,128392,6,0,P|286:174|235:248,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,292,129392,2,0,L|284:320,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,276,129992,6,0,P|105:281|29:329,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,292,131992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,336,132392,2,0,P|372:292|360:248,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,200,133192,6,0,P|208:151|118:139,2,180,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,252,135192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,332,135592,2,0,P|360:344|316:332,2,90,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136492,12,0,139592,0:0:0:0:
316,168,149192,6,0,P|400:144|488:168,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,151192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,304,151592,2,0,P|152:316|112:304,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,236,152392,6,0,P|56:148|120:88,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,153592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,116,153992,2,0,P|368:208|256:236,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,192,155592,6,0,P|117:152|55:146,2,135,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,157192,2,0,P|318:275|380:281,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,148,158792,2,0,P|240:104|252:60,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,159592,2,0,P|344:148|332:192,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,160392,6,0,P|255:345|343:280,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,189,161992,6,0,P|391:153|459:141,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,163592,2,0,P|197:272|129:284,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,190,165192,6,0,P|377:118|333:42,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,116,166392,1,4,0:0:0:0:
229,190,166792,2,0,P|192:260|228:324,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,168392,6,0,P|411:128|402:65,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,220,169992,2,0,P|264:283|273:346,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,132,171592,6,0,P|240:96|160:132,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,204,172792,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,276,173192,2,0,P|228:312|308:312,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,174792,6,0,P|256:72|136:128,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,176392,6,0,P|157:252|241:253,2,180,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,112,178392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,64,178792,2,0,P|176:56|224:64,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,140,179592,2,0,P|312:146|356:138,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,180792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,224,181192,6,0,P|188:268|260:224,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,182192,2,0,L|345:118,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,88,182792,6,0,P|454:119|485:201,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,96,184792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,156,185192,2,0,P|208:200|220:244,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,292,185992,2,0,P|308:248|296:204,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,186792,2,0,P|176:144|132:156,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,206,187992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,248,188392,2,0,P|388:204|376:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,88,189192,6,0,P|196:66|109:165,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,252,190792,2,0,B|170:277|231:240|231:240|292:203|359:229,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,192392,6,0,P|460:184|440:96,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,194392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,280,194792,2,0,P|232:268|188:280,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,324,195592,2,0,P|104:280|116:236,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,196392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,84,196792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,56,197192,6,0,P|279:107|282:193,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,198192,2,0,L|275:284,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,204,198792,6,0,P|133:207|82:278,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,200792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,292,201192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,292,201392,2,0,L|380:336,2,45,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,252,201992,6,0,P|412:208|400:164,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,108,202792,2,0,P|320:64|332:20,2,90,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,166,203992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,244,204392,2,0,P|400:256|356:244,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,176,205192,6,0,P|225:127|136:115,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,245,207192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,324,207592,2,0,P|360:336|316:324,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,264,208392,2,0,P|209:253|166:265,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,325,209592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,264,209992,6,0,P|428:192|384:116,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,88,210992,2,0,L|348:40,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,116,211592,6,0,P|221:96|166:32,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,80,213592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,36,213992,2,0,P|484:80|472:128,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,176,214792,6,0,P|312:156|228:176,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,215992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,308,216392,2,0,P|156:320|200:308,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,244,217192,2,0,P|272:200|260:156,2,90,4|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,218092,12,0,221192,0:0:0:0:

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-03T06:50:36+00:00

Move Pending Beatmaps

ready for mod

:3

Losertic

461 posts

Joined May 2012

Losertic 2013-11-03T08:33:23+00:00

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

Pass.

litoluna's Normal

00:06:792 (1) - ....NC??
00:35:592 (1) - remove NC like 00:22:792 (4,5) - 00:29:192 (4,5) -
00:52:592 (2) - move (256,121)?? 0.94x → 0.98x and 00:53:192 (1) - move (292,148)?
01:33:192 (1) - remove NC, 01:34:792 (1) - NC. like 00:29:192 (4,5,1,2) -
03:02:192 (2) - remove this slider..?? hmm
03:02:792 (1) - move (376,88)

wring's Hard

00:18:792 (3) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077221

[*]00:20:392 (2) - change slider shape? (same '1' slider) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077223
[*]00:29:792 - add note?
[*]00:51:192 (5) - move slider axis? ex) (84,319) umm.
[*]03:01:992 (4) - ctrl+h?
[*]03:15:192 (6) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077233

Insane

no problem....maybe? nice mapset. really.

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-03T11:59:29+00:00

@Losertic

Losertic wrote:
Hello!

From M4M.

Modding
General
Pass.
litoluna's Normal
00:06:792 (1) - ....NC??
00:35:592 (1) - remove NC like 00:22:792 (4,5) - 00:29:192 (4,5) -
00:52:592 (2) - move (256,121)?? 0.94x → 0.98x and 00:53:192 (1) - move (292,148)?
01:33:192 (1) - remove NC, 01:34:792 (1) - NC. like 00:29:192 (4,5,1,2) -
03:02:192 (2) - remove this slider..?? hmm
03:02:792 (1) - move (376,88)

all fixed
thanks modding~!

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-11-05T07:28:09+00:00

Hi Satellite, litoluna, wring o/

[Normal]
00:05:192 (4) - try this shape

00:52:792 (2) - quite hard to newbeies. try this rythm

01:05:392 (2) - ^
00:55:592 (3,4) - quite hard to notice unstack. try to change 2 sliders
01:59:592 (3,4) - ^
01:28:392 (1) - use mute slidertick
02:43:592 (2) - 265||249 for flow
02:54:792 (1) - use mute slidertick
02:15:592 (3) - this fits exatly with music

03:37:192 (4) - same with above

[Hard]
00:16:392 (1,2,3,4) - make it same shape with 00:14:792 (4,5,6,7)
00:39:392 (2,3) - unstacked
00:40:992 (5,6) - ^
02:42:592 (2,3,2,3) - ^
01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) - too far jump imo

suggestion

02:46:792 (4) - you can use red point to make it more pretty

[Satellite]
00:00:392 (1,2,3) - distance
00:59:892 - remove note?

try this :>

01:50:792 (1) - 400||68
03:32:192 (3) - hiw about place at 256||352
03:35:592 (3,4) - ctrl + g on each for better flow / ctrl + h on 03:36:392 (1,2,3,4)

i love this map :> good luck~

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-05T12:57:50+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
Hi Satellite, litoluna, wring o/

[Satellite]
00:00:392 (1,2,3) - distance
OK
00:59:892 - remove note?
try this :>
OK remake
01:50:792 (1) - 400||68
OK
03:32:192 (3) - hiw about place at 256||352
Kept
03:35:592 (3,4) - ctrl + g on each for better flow / ctrl + h on 03:36:392 (1,2,3,4)
OK

i love this map :> good luck~

thanks for modding

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-11-05T13:55:07+00:00

Hi!

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Clear.

[Satellite]

00:05:192 (1) - 1grid右に移動しましょう　終端の位置が綺麗になります。　変えたらこっちも00:05:792 (2,3) - お忘れなく
00:36:192 (3,6) - clap合いそうだけどどうだろう
00:45:192 (1) - 音楽に合っててセンスを感じました。ただ個人的には終端の音をSampleset Drumにしてほしい・・・
01:16:392 - ここadd noteしてカッコイイ音取りしたい
01:23:192 (9,10) - backの音的にここも1/4スライダー入りそうだけど俺は入れたほうが好きです。
01:49:192 (1) - ちょっとbackの音が１番と違うけどdrumでもよさそう。　あと１番はないけど２番は01:50:592 - ここにも音があるし完全コピーってのもちょっとなあって思いました。
02:28:392 (1,2) - リピート１個減らす？ 1/8はなるべく繋がってないほうが良かったような
03:15:592 (1,2) - ボーカルに合わせる感じでスライダーを1/2にして単発２個置いたほうがあってます。ほかのパートもそんな感じでした。

[wring's Hard]

01:27:392 (3) - (1)の始端にスタックしてあるため流れが悪くなっていると思います。x160 y80あたりに移動して円を描くような流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？
01:44:192 - こっちはadd noteしない感じですか？02:43:392 - こっちとbackの音は同じだと思うので入れてみてはどうでしょう

finishの提案
00:51:592 (1,5,1) -
00:57:992 (3,5) -
01:05:992 (1) - ^
01:09:192 (1,2,3,5) -
01:17:192 (1) -
01:36:392 (1) -
01:39:592 (1,2,3,5) - 5はheadとend両方
01:55:592 (1,5,1) -
02:01:992 (4,6) -
02:09:992 (1) -
02:13:192 (1,2,3,5) -
02:35:592 (1) -
03:17:192 (1,5,1) -
03:23:592 (1,3) -
03:31:592 (1) -
03:34:792 (1,2,1,3) -

~~boxが機能しない~~
[litoluna's Normal]

00:05:192 (4) - もっと包み込むようにしよう
SPOILER
00:38:792 (1,2) - 終端のfinishはちょっと煩い気がするのでclapでいいと思いました。
00:43:592 (3) - (1)のふくらみに合わせてblanketを作りましょう。
SPOILER
00:45:192 (1) - 終端にdrum sampleset入れてみてはどうでしょう？
00:51:592 (1) - tickにclap & 終端はfinishが合うと思います
01:04:392 (1) - ^
01:19:592 (4) - リピート部分のwhistleは合わないので削除?
01:42:792 (1,2) - 00:38:792 (1,2) - と同じ
01:55:592 (1) - 00:51:592 (1) - と同じ
02:08:392 (1) - ^
02:41:992 (1,2) - 00:38:792 (1,2) - と同じ
03:17:192 (1) - 00:51:592 (1) - と同じ
03:29:992 (1) - ^
03:37:192 (4) - 1サビ2サビは始端にfinishありませんでしたが統一してみてはどうでしょう

頑張ってください

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-05T15:45:44+00:00

@Sana

[ Sana ] wrote:
Hi Satellite, litoluna, wring o/

[Normal]
00:05:192 (4) - try this shape ok!
00:52:792 (2) - quite hard to newbeies. try this rythm I think no problem. but I will heal you are pointed out to other modder
01:05:392 (2) - ^ ^
00:55:592 (3,4) - quite hard to notice unstack. try to change 2 sliders change Rhythm and unstack~!
01:59:592 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:28:392 (1) - use mute slidertick no. Back Sound Waves
02:43:592 (2) - 265||249 for flow ok
02:54:792 (1) - use mute slidertick ok.volume10%
02:15:592 (3) - this fits exatly with music ok!
03:37:192 (4) - same with above ok!

i love this map :> good luck~

thanks modding Sana ~!

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-05T15:51:53+00:00

@Guy

Guy wrote:
[litoluna's Normal]

00:05:192 (4) - もっと包み込むようにしよう
collapsed text

00:38:792 (1,2) - 終端のfinishはちょっと煩い気がするのでclapでいいと思いました。
00:43:592 (3) - (1)のふくらみに合わせてblanketを作りましょう。
collapsed text

00:45:192 (1) - 終端にdrum sampleset入れてみてはどうでしょう？
00:51:592 (1) - tickにclap & 終端はfinishが合うと思います
01:04:392 (1) - ^
01:19:592 (4) - リピート部分のwhistleは合わないので削除?
01:42:792 (1,2) - 00:38:792 (1,2) - と同じ
01:55:592 (1) - 00:51:592 (1) - と同じ
02:08:392 (1) - ^
02:41:992 (1,2) - 00:38:792 (1,2) - と同じ
03:17:192 (1) - 00:51:592 (1) - と同じ
03:29:992 (1) - ^
03:37:192 (4) - 1サビ2サビは始端にfinishありませんでしたが統一してみてはどうでしょう

Quote機能が出てこなく、使えなかったのでおかしな部分ありますが気にしな....
~~Blanketが上手くできていれば~~Allfixed!!
moddingありがとうございました~!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: sokubaku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 46800
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bondage Anemonation
TitleUnicode:束縛アネモネーション
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Satellite
Version:litoluna's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:chen dagger-gazel litoluna wring yuuhei iceon kamasetora otodama The Fantastic Legend of Tohno Perfect Cherry Blossom Kouroumu 9
BeatmapID:317729
BeatmapSetID:122416

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.9
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328,108,107592,2,0,P|252:72|184:100,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,292,109192,6,0,P|219:349|256:236,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,110792,6,0,P|128:120|40:140,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,112792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,312,113192,2,0,P|348:304|390:280,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,232,113992,6,0,L|464:140,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,324,115192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,280,115592,6,0,P|312:231|224:220,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,244,116592,2,0,L|184:292,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,216,117192,6,0,P|96:148|112:60,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,252,119192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,324,119592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,292,119792,2,0,P|340:248|328:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,120392,6,0,P|283:132|295:87,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,132,121192,2,0,P|412:144|460:132,2,90,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,88,122392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,44,122792,2,0,P|204:92|216:132,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,204,123592,6,0,P|356:180|444:204,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,125592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,204,125992,2,0,P|112:156|120:112,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,126792,6,0,P|236:72|280:64,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,36,127592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,84,127992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,124,128392,6,0,P|286:174|235:248,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,292,129392,2,0,L|284:320,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,276,129992,6,0,P|105:281|29:329,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,292,131992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,336,132392,2,0,P|372:292|360:248,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,200,133192,6,0,P|208:151|118:139,2,180,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,252,135192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,332,135592,2,0,P|360:344|320:336,2,67.5,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136392,12,2,139592,0:0:0:0:
316,168,149192,6,0,P|400:144|488:168,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,151192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,304,151592,2,0,P|152:316|112:304,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,236,152392,6,0,P|56:148|120:88,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,153592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,116,153992,2,0,P|368:208|256:236,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,192,155592,6,0,P|117:152|55:146,2,135,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,157192,2,0,P|318:275|380:281,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,148,158792,2,0,P|240:104|252:60,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,159592,2,0,P|344:148|332:192,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,160392,6,0,P|255:345|343:280,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,189,161992,6,0,P|391:153|459:141,2,135,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,248,163592,2,0,P|205:284|137:296,2,135,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,190,165192,6,0,P|377:118|333:42,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,116,166392,1,4,0:0:0:0:
229,190,166792,2,0,P|192:260|228:324,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,168392,6,0,P|411:128|402:65,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,220,169992,2,0,P|264:283|273:346,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,132,171592,6,0,P|240:96|160:132,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,204,172792,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,276,173192,2,0,P|228:312|308:312,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,174792,6,0,P|256:72|136:128,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,176392,6,0,P|157:252|241:253,2,180,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,112,178392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,64,178792,2,0,P|176:56|224:64,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,140,179592,2,0,P|312:146|356:138,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,180792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,224,181192,6,0,P|188:268|260:224,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,88,182792,6,0,P|458:119|489:201,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,96,184792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,156,185192,2,0,P|208:200|220:244,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,292,185992,2,0,P|308:248|296:204,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,186792,2,0,P|176:144|132:156,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,206,187992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,248,188392,2,0,P|388:204|376:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,88,189192,6,0,P|196:66|109:165,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,252,190792,2,0,B|170:277|231:240|231:240|292:203|359:229,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,192392,6,0,P|460:184|440:96,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,194392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,280,194792,2,0,P|232:268|188:280,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,324,195592,2,0,P|104:280|116:236,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,196392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,84,196792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,56,197192,6,0,P|279:107|282:193,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,198192,2,0,L|275:284,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,204,198792,6,0,P|133:207|82:278,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,260,200792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,336,201192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,308,201392,2,0,P|380:260|368:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,188,201992,6,0,P|328:144|340:100,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,60,202792,2,0,P|432:104|420:148,2,90,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,20,203992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,60,204392,2,0,P|214:63|177:90,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,205192,6,0,P|110:247|30:289,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,207192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,60,207592,2,0,P|304:48|348:60,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,136,208392,2,0,P|427:104|438:61,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,209592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,136,209992,6,0,P|172:208|216:284,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,312,210992,2,0,L|252:360,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,284,211592,6,0,P|380:271|453:312,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,312,213592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,356,213992,2,0,P|116:312|128:264,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,192,214792,6,0,P|244:140|332:152,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,196,215992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,272,216392,2,0,P|408:284|364:272,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,217192,2,0,P|277:260|278:291,2,67.5,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217992,12,2,221192,0:0:0:0:

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-05T16:04:44+00:00

Guy wrote:
Satellite

◾00:05:192 (1) - 1grid右に移動しましょう　終端の位置が綺麗になります。　変えたらこっちも00:05:792 (2,3) - お忘れなく
OK
◾00:36:192 (3,6) - clap合いそうだけどどうだろう
OK 後ろにも追加
◾00:45:192 (1) - 音楽に合っててセンスを感じました。ただ個人的には終端の音をSampleset Drumにしてほしい・・・
OK
◾01:16:392 - ここadd noteしてカッコイイ音取りしたい
休憩のつもりなのであけておきます！
◾01:23:192 (9,10) - backの音的にここも1/4スライダー入りそうだけど俺は入れたほうが好きです。
忙しすぎると思ったのでそのままで！
◾01:49:192 (1) - ちょっとbackの音が１番と違うけどdrumでもよさそう。　あと１番はないけど２番は01:50:592 - ここにも音があるし完全コピーってのもちょっとなあって思いました。
OK
◾02:28:392 (1,2) - リピート１個減らす？ 1/8はなるべく繋がってないほうが良かったような
BATさんに言われたら変えます！リピート減らしたらさびしいような・・・
◾03:15:592 (1,2) - ボーカルに合わせる感じでスライダーを1/2にして単発２個置いたほうがあってます。ほかのパートもそんな感じでした。
OK

もっどとすたーありがとうございました！

and Normal update~

CakiP

384 posts

Joined February 2012

CakiP 2013-11-06T23:26:43+00:00

さてらいとさんのりくえすと？

[litoluna's Normal]
00:37:192 (1) - Ctrl ＋Gの形のほうが流れにあっている気がします! もし直す場合はスペーシングも調整したほうがいいです。
00:52:592 (2) - Normalだとちょっと難しいかも？です。
00:55:592 (3) - 音取りの提案です。個人的にこうしたらしっくりきました。 http://puu.sh/5aO6t.jpg
01:05:392 (2) - ^
01:08:992 - 一つノートを置いてみるといいかもです。

指摘されているところと同じパターンを使っているところは一緒に見直してみてください!
配置が綺麗で、良いと思います!

[wring's Hard]
nothing~

すっごく良いです＞＜

[Insane]
02:33:992 (1) - ここのスライダーも連打に変えてみるとかどうです？

ん～～、指摘するところが見つかりません・・・。良いdiffです。

どのdiffも綺麗ですごくいいと思いました

すごく量が少なくなってしまい、内容も役立つかわかりません・・・、ごめんなさい～～～。
ランクド期待してます。がんばってください！

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-11-07T09:21:51+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
Hi Satellite, litoluna, wring o/

[Hard]
00:16:392 (1,2,3,4) - make it same shape with 00:14:792 (4,5,6,7) no, I like this form
00:39:392 (2,3) - unstacked
00:40:992 (5,6) - ^
02:42:592 (2,3,2,3) - ^ umm, I think it's stacked..
01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) - too far jump imo k, I will think another pattern.
suggestion
02:46:792 (4) - you can use red point to make it more pretty sorry no.

Guy wrote:
[wring's Hard]
01:27:392 (3) - (1)の始端にスタックしてあるため流れが悪くなっていると思います。x160 y80あたりに移動して円を描くような流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？変えておきます
01:44:192 - こっちはadd noteしない感じですか？02:43:392 - こっちとbackの音は同じだと思うので入れてみてはどうでしょうすみません、わざとです

finishの提案
00:51:592 (1,5,1) -
00:57:992 (3,5) -
01:05:992 (1) - ^
01:09:192 (1,2,3,5) -
01:17:192 (1) -
01:36:392 (1) -
01:39:592 (1,2,3,5) - 5はheadとend両方
01:55:592 (1,5,1) -
02:01:992 (4,6) -
02:09:992 (1) -
02:13:192 (1,2,3,5) -
02:35:592 (1) -
03:17:192 (1,5,1) -
03:23:592 (1,3) -
03:31:592 (1) -
03:34:792 (1,2,1,3) -
参考にさせていただきます！

~~boxが機能しない~~ huehuehue

thanks mod

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-08T06:19:56+00:00

@CakiP

CakiP wrote:
さてらいとさんのりくえすと？

[litoluna's Normal]
00:37:192 (1) - Ctrl ＋Gの形のほうが流れにあっている気がします! もし直す場合はスペーシングも調整したほうがいいです。下から上がってくるほうが流れ的にいいかなとおもうのでno
00:52:592 (2) - Normalだとちょっと難しいかも？です。簡単にしました~!
00:55:592 (3) - 音取りの提案です。個人的にこうしたらしっくりきました。 http://puu.sh/5aO6t.jpg スライダー2つ使って簡単にしてみました。
01:05:392 (2) - ^　^
01:08:992 - 一つノートを置いてみるといいかもです。 no

指摘されているところと同じパターンを使っているところは一緒に見直してみてください!
配置が綺麗で、良いと思います!

どのdiffも綺麗ですごくいいと思いました
すごく量が少なくなってしまい、内容も役立つかわかりません・・・、ごめんなさい～～～。
ランクド期待してます。がんばってください！

Easy向けにRhythmを簡単にしたので音取り等の提案が通せず申し訳ないです。
Moddingありがとうございました。

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-11-09T02:26:30+00:00

M4M
[General]
fine
[Easy]
Placement
00:38:792(1) nazi, 360:284あたりにもってくると、前のスライダーと等間隔になっていいかも
01:47:592(3)もう少し上手く囲めると思います　e.g.)

SPOILER

03:01:192(1) ここだけNCかけるのもちょっと妙なのでNC削除
Hit Sonud
00:01:992(2) 音無いので終点のwhistle削除
00:13:192(1)始点のwhistle→finish
02:56:392~03：08：792　全部の白線にwhistleつけようとしても音取り上一定に刻めないので、1,3拍目の白線にのみwhistleを付けてみては？
[Hard]
Placement
01:04:792(2,3) 囲むように配置してみては e.g.)

SPOILER

01:08:792(5,6) CTRL+Gすると回りこむ流れのまま打てるのでいいと思います
01:20:392(1,2,3,4) 似たような提案

SPOILER

01:27:392(3) 無理にスタックさせるよりも弧を描くように配置したほうが打ちやすいです

SPOILER

01:58:792(1) nazi,前のスライダーと囲むようにしてみるといいかも
Rhythm
00:13:192　不要な緑線
Hit Sonud
もっとfinish付けてもいいような気が、意図的なら構いません

[Satellite]
Placement
00:49:192(5,6,7,8) 同じとこにスタックさせてばかりなのもやや窮屈かなと思うので、少し飛ばしてこんな感じなど

SPOILER

01:20:992(3) 116:264あたりに持ってきた方が次のスライダーを打ちやすいかも
01:25:592(2,3) ここも下に落とさず回す感じに配置すると打ちやすそう

SPOILER

01:37:592(5)　前のノートからボーカルが伸びている部分なので、ここはジャンプさせずDSの方が合っていると思います
03:31:792(2,3,4) スペーシングを等間隔にしてみては
Rhythm
00:36:392(4) このスライダーは00:36:592で終わらせた方がいいです、ボーカルがここで終わってるので
Hit Sonud
00:39:392(2,1) whistleはあんま合わないような感じなのでDrumのclapとかに置き換えた方が聞こえいいです、後の同じ部分も同様に
02:41:592(5)　whistleが連続するのがやや気になるので、終点のwhistle削除してみては

Good Luck!

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-09T17:49:31+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M

Placement
00:49:192(5,6,7,8) 同じとこにスタックさせてばかりなのもやや窮屈かなと思うので、少し飛ばしてこんな感じなど
SPOILER
あえてスタックさせてます :3
01:20:992(3) 116:264あたりに持ってきた方が次のスライダーを打ちやすいかも
これは指摘ミスでしょうか？少し的外れな場所になるような・・
01:25:592(2,3) ここも下に落とさず回す感じに配置すると打ちやすそう
SPOILER
Fix
01:37:592(5)　前のノートからボーカルが伸びている部分なので、ここはジャンプさせずDSの方が合っていると思います
バックを拾ってます
03:31:792(2,3,4) スペーシングを等間隔にしてみては
Rhythm
３が強調されてるように聞こえたのでこのままで
00:36:392(4) このスライダーは00:36:592で終わらせた方がいいです、ボーカルがここで終わってるので
こちらもバックの音を主体として拾ってます
Hit Sonud
00:39:392(2,1) whistleはあんま合わないような感じなのでDrumのclapとかに置き換えた方が聞こえいいです、後の同じ部分も同様に
Fix
02:41:592(5)　whistleが連続するのがやや気になるので、終点のwhistle削除してみては
Fix

Good Luck!

modとstarありがとうございました!!
助かりました>w<

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