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it took a bit more time as i expected and to avoid the uselessness of my mod as someone can mod too and post before me - i am leaving only modded easy. tomorrow gonna check and mod all all all the remaining diffs, sry /;~;\ a half for now, k
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[sekai's easy]
[juda's muzukashii]
[sekai's easy]
- 00:06:562 (3) - after more curved (1) this slider looks kinda weird. better to keep the movement of (3) slider just in horizontal way. i'd put this slider some grids down and set the end of the slider on the same y axis
- 00:07:716 (1) - if i were you i'd not have started a new phrase (' haato no promise ') with a mirrored slider like this. also on 00:08:408 you have sound ' nooooooo ' and im surprised why you have finished a slider here instead of start it. so the whole suggestion for this part : 00:07:716 (1) - replace as note, 00:08:408 - add a slider
- 00:12:101 (2) - same as above. i'd emphasize the long sound ' i ' from the new word ' ieru ' here. it's better to do something else here >~<SPOILER
or replace (1,2) as a slider - 00:31:325 (1,2,3,4) - really really really confusing rhythm x~x here is a pretty continuous phrase and you have (1,2,3) as a 1/1 pattern but the place between (3) and (4) feels empty. also the (1,2,3) pattern is kinda awkward.. i'd say that its better to add a note here 00:33:554, but as for the easies difficulty i want to sugget to simplify the rhythm in this waySPOILER
or if you dun want to change anything here i can suggest abit betterpattern oзо - 00:37:325 (1,2,3) - hmh what about to change the position of (3) slider? this pattern plays better with flipped (3)~
- 00:44:181 (3) - the movement from (1)'s end to (2) and (3) goes horizontally and softly upward, nice. but i have a butthurt in these kind of patterns, cause as you can see the soft movement from (1) and (2) suddenly turns into a sharp movement on the (3) slider here http://puu.sh/4CKzU.jpg. i'd really reccomend you to rotate the (3) ~ -25° to keep the soft movement here
- 00:56:523 (2,3) - while testplaying i noticed smth strange in this part, thought here is a spacing issue but its the rhythm itself.. x~x damn odd
- 01:15:378 (4) - unnecessary note, really o.o mmm actually there is a hard bit on 01:14:178 and i'd move (3) exactly on this position. but as you have ignored a bit on 01:13:996 and these are on red 1/2 section.. i'd suggest to add a reverse slider to emphasise these bits without confusing 1/2 notes like there
- 00:00:331 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this part is kinda empty without hitsounds, what about to add whistles somewhere to emphasise the high tone of voice and piano like:SPOILER00:01:024 (2) - at the beginning of slider and ending;
00:02:639 (4) - at the beginning
00:03:331 (5) - ending
00:04:716 (2) - at the reverse
00:06:331 (4) - ;
00:07:024 (6) - ;
00:08:408 (3) - ending
00:10:024 (5) - beginning
00:10:716 (6) - at the reverse
00:13:947 (3) - all parts, to fully emphasise the piano sound
00:15:793 (4) - at the beginning
00:16:947 (5) -
? - 00:17:408 (1) - maybe finish at the end of spinner? озо sound is pretty hard here
- 00:47:609 (6) - you didn't ignore hard bits like 00:45:552 (3) and 00:46:924 (5). as for the Normal difficulty i guess it would be good to replace (6) at the 1/2 red section before and follow the natural rhythm, bit on 00:47:438. but it will break your 00:45:552 (3,4,5,6) square pattern, so.. :c
- 01:02:693 (2,3,4) - nice pattern, but it doesn't flow good with the rhythm, imho:
01:03:208 - here you have a new, another intonation and a new word from lyrics ' kono kimochi '. if i were you i'd remove the reverse from 01:02:693 (2) - and added a note on 01:03:379.
01:04:750 (4) flows good but as placement, i'd rather play something not similar to (2,3) sliders, to emphasise the intonation and phrase change/delete the reverse and added a note: - 01:11:607 (3,4,5,6) - i like this pattern but really, consider that here 01:12:978 is a slowdown and a new different intonation, phrase. i'd rather start with a new slider/note, not finish a slider here
[juda's muzukashii]
- 00:11:178 (2) - d at the end flows kinda awkward here x~x i'd rather recomment you to remove this note and make the pattern as it was at the same sounds here 00:08:408 (1,2,3,4). maybe you tried to emphasise the piano sound on (1,2,3) but i found this note a bit out of place
- 00:14:639 - add k here? the piano sound starts exactly from this place
- 00:14:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - kdkdk feels better here
- 00:16:254 (6,7) - vice versa, dk. k to follow the piano sound sound as you were doing before
- 00:23:098 (5,6,7,8) - kkdk fits greatly here, imho
- 00:24:469 (11) - k is better o3o
- 00:34:754 - i'd recommend you to add a note here to fully follow the lyrics here / delete a 00:34:925 (3), as an accent goes exactly on the ' toma ' from ' kimi wa tomadoi ' ~
- 00:36:811 (11) - - why did you end the pattern on the place like this? o.o if i were you i'd start a pattern here with ddkd and shorten the previous pattern to follow the lyrics
- 00:39:896 - what about a note here to follow the lyrics and to emphasise the word ' hoo ' here?
- 00:46:924 (8) - here is a bit where you were using d all the time. d here feels greatly
- 00:54:294 (13) - ^