1. Marathon (4.97 stars, 1436 notes)

Zero__wind wrote:

yes yes nice job~

regenz wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/u/204190 ทำลิ้งไปหน้านี้ด้วย mp3 Edit + merge by regenz

1. You should add all songs titles to tags.
2. Remove "Shana" from tags - its already part of your title
3. Some titles in your Creator's Words spelled wrong:
   
   
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   Check this please:
   http://www.kotoko.asia/disco/
   http://www.ivesound.jp/music/
   
   Blaze -> BLAZE
   Yoake umarekuru shoujo -> Yoake Umarekuru Shoujo
   Sociemetry -> Sociometry
   Hishoku no sora -> Hishoku no Sora
   Light my fire -> Light My Fire
4. 07:03:049 - set preview point here for more epicness
5. Will you add kiai time?
6. You must add reversearrow to complete your skin
7. particle100.png, particle300.png, particle50.png, snow.png seems codeless, remove them
8. Timing feels off. You should catch someone who really good at it.

1. This part sounds better with normal sampleset
2. 00:20:419 (6) - NC follow new part of music
3. 00:35:041 (1) - Add finish for consistency?
4. 00:38:949 (4,5) - This is kinda hard to hit those notes, i suggest you make slider instead or add 2 reverses at 00:38:697 (3) -

1. This part sounds better with normal sampleset
2. 00:50:928 (1,2,3) - Please keep consistent spacing between those notes
3. 00:53:389 (1) - Add whistle follow vocals
4. 00:53:858 (2) - ^
5. 00:53:858 (2,3) - I wold recomment you change them to slider to follow vocals better
6. 00:55:967 (6,7) - Shorter (6) by 1 tick and begin (7) at this point to follow vocals better:
   
   
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7. 00:56:787 (8) - it sounds kinda weird, how about add note at 00:56:670?
8. 01:08:741 (12,13) - Please keep consistent spacing here, it very hard to catch (13)
9. 01:12:608 (11) - Finish at tail

1. 01:48:642 (4,5,6) - I prefer perfect stack instead of manual one, it doesnt looks good here
2. 01:54:385 (5,6) - Thats kinda boring. How about change those 2 notes to slider?
   
   
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3. 01:54:736 (7) - That finish is unneeded imo. If you want to have it to emphazire vocals reduse volume at it a bit
4. 01:55:674 (3) - ^
5. 01:56:611 (5) - And you can add here one to emphazire vocals

1. 02:17:753 (4) - NC to make this stack more readable
2. 02:22:525 (6) - NC
3. 02:35:252 (5) - Please dont use normal-sampleset here, it doesnt fit IMO

1. 02:56:914 (2,3) - Dont really like how they flows, mirrored sliders imp doesnt fit. Try something like this instead?
   
   
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1. 03:12:189 (1,2,3) - same as 01:54:385 - that would make your placement more variable here!
2. 03:25:709 (1,2,3) - That part is kinda hard to hit: make spacing consistent maybe?
3. 03:28:667 (5) - Ctrl+G?
4. 03:30:780 (5,6,1) - Pretty much same as above, that's really uncomfortable to play at this part. Keep consistent spacing.
5. 03:40:498 (1,2,3) - I dont see any reason to keep single notes here. Dont ignore cool drum rhythm, make stream here instead ;p

1. 03:45:991 - 03:47:259 - add spinner here
2. 03:50:216 (4,5) - Merge them to one slider to follow vocals better here
   
   
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3. 03:52:751 (1,2) - Remove (2), make (1) one tick longer - for better rhythm
4. 04:00:885 - Add note please, there is no reason to random break stream here
5. 04:05:744 (2,3) - Revert them to slider
6. 04:18:103 (6) - why normal-sampleset here?

1. 04:28:556 (4,5) - Raise DS to 0.80 for better playability
2. 04:29:569 (1,3) - Hitnormals sounds kinda random here... If you're following drums then why you ignored another one? At least reduse volume here please
3. 04:31:191 (1) - Remove finish from slider
4. 04:35:448 (8) - Missed finish at the beginning/list]
   
   <Sense>
   
   
   1. Normal-sampleset works better at this part
   2. 05:04:232 (6) - Ctrl+G?
   3. 05:10:303 (5) - NC follow pattern
   4. 05:11:017 (9,1) - this pattern looks kinda confusing, stack them perfectly please
   5. 05:21:374 (6) - NC follow pattern
   6. 05:27:089 (6) - same ^
   7. 05:31:017 (6) - Remove useless clap
   <Hishoku no Sora>
   
   all good but why you spamming with normal-finishes with normal-sampleset while using soft sample in a whole part? change to soft please or use normal-sampleset at this part
   
   <Joint>
   
   
   1. 06:20:740 (8) - it plays kinda weird, can you please keep DS consistent? Jump to next note feels more natural
   2. 06:22:240 (1) - Missed finish at the beginning
   3. 06:25:407 (2) - ^
   this part needs more whistles...
   
   <U/n>
   
   
   1. Normal sampleset feels better at this part
   2. 06:42:913 (5,6,1) - Spacing issue. Also i'd suggest you revert (5) and (6) to slider to follow rhythm better
   3. 06:54:326 (2,3) - Re-arrage them like this?
      
      
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   <Light My Fire>
   
   
   1. Normal sampleset works better at this part
   2. 07:12:403 (5,6,7) - Keep consistent spacing please
   3. 07:23:049 (5,6,1) - There are tiny stacking issure
   <Serment>
   
   
   1. 07:58:356 (1,2) - try this:
      
      
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Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi.

[General]

This is map different part offset a little slow or fast, You check this map all part offset.
You change source Shakugan_No_Shana -> Shakugan No Shana (remove _ <-)
This is map offset issue, You'll change this part offset.

Offset change list

00:06:806 change -> 6780 or 6790
01:28:721 change -> 88750
02:06:162 change -> 126150 and I'm sure 02:13:434 this point is different bpm offset here.
02:42:355 change -> 162370 or 162380
03:12:189 change -> 192200
04:24:705 change -> 264710
06:35:740 change -> 395710
07:03:049 change -> 423060 or 423070
07:33:720 change -> 453720

all fixed

[Shana]

01:42:080 (2) This is slider direction a little up is better flow imo. hmm, i think its ok

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04:11:107 (6) Umm, This is note stack by (4) note?, I think more clean pattern imo. like this is better flow imo.
04:57:982 (7) Why this note spacing is small?, it's a little confuse, well I suggestion different pattern ok

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06:54:653 (3) I'm understand this pattern intended but i don't like this pattern flow If you change Ctrl+G is better flowok
07:13:855 Why you don't add this point, You know this point hear drum sound also you don't add this point I think players really confuse.ok
07:15:145 (5,7) This is (5) slider end add clap and (7) slider add clap is good sound here. ok
07:21:113 (3,4,5,6) I don't understand this rhythm, because a little awkward, I suggestion you put the lyrcis rhythm is better rhythm. I think the current one is more fit.

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07:27:210 (6) Here, there is no reason to put New combo. Remove NC ok

GitahMuttan wrote:

I think it should be "Various Artists" on the title, right?

Anyway, epic map.

captin1 wrote:

owo

[Timing]

Checkin all timings, cause that's what I do :3

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Offset: 6,784ms	BPM: 119.00

Offset: 46,823ms	BPM: 128.00

Offset: 88,746ms	BPM: 128.00

Offset: 126,148ms	BPM: 132.00

Offset: 162,380ms	BPM: 136.00

Offset: 192,196ms	BPM: 142.00

Offset: 227,681ms	BPM: 142.00

Offset: 264,710ms	BPM: 148.00

Offset: 296,730ms	BPM: 168.00

Offset: 336,693ms	BPM: 169.00

Offset: 367,584ms	BPM: 180.00

Offset: 395,716ms	BPM: 184.00

Offset: 423,082ms	BPM: 186.00

Offset: 453,716ms	BPM: 212.00

^ all fixed

[Shana]

you saw me play it heh, it's quite nice, just gonna be picky with flow/rhythm

00:11:075 (2) - I think this feels better raised up above (1), instead of below it, since this feels more natural into the next notes ok

01:32:031 (5,6,7,8) - I think you should unstack these just a bit and have them lead to the next part, so the player can keep at least a little motion going through these doubles, like as if they were a 1/4 slider ok

01:50:429 (4,5) - I think these two are a bit too close together, since the player will move a bit quicker coming off of this slider. I would suggest moving 4 to the right and up some, so the distance between it and 3 is about the same but between 4 and 5 is larger I think the current one is fine

01:52:421 (5,6) - this seems a bit odd, since the vocal is 1/2 before the circle here, I would remove this repeat and have at least some sort of click on this vocal note 01:52:890 - here ok

01:56:171 (4) - along the same lines as ^, would change this to two circles so there are clicks on the strong notes nah, not for this. I think the current one is more flow.

03:04:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move this stream to the right a bit? more slider leniency/moving faster off of it yada yada stuff, it just feels better :3 ok

03:14:523 (2,3,4) - I think making this triple unstacked, but in a line with the slider would be cool, and a bit smoother ok

03:20:016 (2,3,4) - ^ ok

04:08:807 (3) - I think this should have a ctrl+ g on it, for nicer flow (moving the notes right after, of course :3). The triple 04:09:441 (6,7,1) - here may become an issue because of this, so unstacking it I think would help with that yes you're right but I still don't have other idea (flow note) for this now so i will keep it in mind.

04:36:264 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - For these, I think you should reverse 2 and 3, so the triangle goes counter clockwise instead of clockwise. Reason for this is how it moves into the next part, it feels odd going into 04:37:480 (4,5,1) - after as it is. Having the 3 far to the right sets up this stream much more easily the 3 (second triangle)'s distance will far form 1 too much imo so don't change.

05:13:517 (6) - (nazi) This slider would look better a bit higher up, so it keeps with the visual flow of the sliders around it owo ok

06:55:764 (3,4) - ctrl + g on these perhaps? the square jump pattern would feel cool here ok

07:07:263 (7) - this note feels a bit too out of place among all the cool flow things you do, maybe you can grab both 07:07:263 (7,8) - and move them towards the top left corner? change a bit different.

07:45:889 (3,4) - this is similar to ^, but perhaps to a lesser degree, due to the difference in bpm it feels a bit better, but feel free to change in a similar way if you agreed with the one before no for this

officially a big fan of your style, it looks quite nice and plays great, so props to you (which comes in the form of stars ) thanks so much captin ><
P A N next elite mapper :3

good luck!