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REDALiCE - Kizuato [OsuMania]

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Sorarei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, December 15, 2013 at 9:35:20 PM

Artist: REDALiCE
Title: Kizuato
Source: Touhou
Tags: alice emotion a☆ru alice margatroid the doll maker of bucuresti overdrive c83
BPM: 173
Filesize: 6152kb
Play Time: 02:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 7Key (1.09 stars, 337 notes)
  2. Hard - 7Key (3.53 stars, 1093 notes)
  3. Maximum - 7Key (4.43 stars, 1398 notes)
  4. Normal - 7Key (2.35 stars, 737 notes)
Download: REDALiCE - Kizuato
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st osu!mania mapset
Album : OverDrive
Vocal : a☆ru
Arrangement : REDALiCE
Please re-download again
BG Changed 15/12/2013
Thanks to indyinyou for custom hitsound
YunoFanatic
mod

Normal

00:07:403 delete the clap on the note the clap was harder before
here too 00:08790
00:17:634 there was a beat and you didnt follow add note
00:17:981 ^
00:19:368 i know you followed the vocal but that isnt enough you need to follow the beat to! add note here on the 4th column so it connects the current pattern and the next pattern
00:42:952 - 00:43:992 try this placement http://puu.sh/4xaFO.jpg


wow this mapset is sooooo good there are only few suggestion for normal take a star
Topic Starter
Sorarei

YunoFanatic wrote:

mod

Normal

00:07:403 delete the clap on the note the clap was harder before Fixed
here too 00:08790
00:17:634 there was a beat and you didnt follow add note Added note
00:17:981 ^
00:19:368 i know you followed the vocal but that isnt enough you need to follow the beat to! add note here on the 4th column so it connects the current pattern and the next pattern Added note
00:42:952 - 00:43:992 try this placement http://puu.sh/4xaFO.jpg I think i am already do this :s

wow this mapset is sooooo good there are only few suggestion for normal take a star
thanks for mod ^^
[Emiria]
mark wait me ~~~
M4M plz http://osu.ppy.sh/s/114898


sorry i'm so late

i'm poor at 7k mapping so only my personal opinion
NM
the speed change is so difficult.
00:09:657 - add one note ?
00:11:044 - ^
00:40:177 (40177|3) - move to 00:40:351 -
00:41:564 (41564|4) - move to 00:41:738 -
00:42:605 - add one note ?
00:44:339 (44339|4) -move to 00:44:513 -
00:51:275 (51275|0,51276|2,52662|6,52662|4) - i can't understand these 4 long note :o
01:01:854 (61854|0) - move to 5
01:07:403 - add a note?
01:44:338 (104338|4,104511|5,104511|6,104858|2,105032|0,105032|1) - it isn't very reasonable i think
01:48:501 - add a note like 01:47:807 -
01:49:195 - ^
01:50:928 (110928|5) - move to 3
01:52:662 (112662|2) - i think it is a stress maybe you should emphsize
01:54:049 (114049|4) - ^
01:55:436 (115436|1) - ^
01:55:436 (115436|1,117865|6,117865|4,119252|0,119253|2) -i can't understand these 4 long note :o
02:00:640 (120640|0) - maybe end at 02:01:160 -
02:13:125 - add a note
02:24:224 (144224|4,144224|2) - i can't understand these 2 long note may be they will end at02:25:611 - :o


HD
00:10:177 - add a note
00:11:044 - ^
00:11:738 - ^
00:12:085 - ^
00:13:125 - ^
00:14:513 - ^
00:15:900 - ^
00:17:287 - ^
00:18:695 - ^
00:19:368 - add 2note
00:21:449 - ^
00:25:784 - add a note at 3
00:46:073 - add a note
00:46:594 - ^
00:47:461 - ^
00:48:154 - ^
00:48:848 - ^
00:59:970 - ^
01:01:334 - ^
01:02:718 - ^
01:04:108 - ^
01:07:403 - ^
01:19:715 - ^
01:21:102 - ^
01:22:474 - ^
01:23:877 - ^
01:25:265 - ^
01:26:669 - ^
01:28:039 - ^
01:46:592 (106592|3,106766|3,106939|3,107113|3,107373|3,107633|3) - to many space bar note maybe it is difficult to play
02:02:201 - add a note
02:02:547 - ^
02:08:964 - ^
02:10:351 - ^
02:11:738 - ^
02:15:900 - ^
02:17:287 - ^
02:18:688 - ^
02:20:062 - ^
02:21:449 - ^



MX is beyond my ability sorry :o


good luck~
Remillion Cross
Hello Reikosaka o/ as your requested me in pm, i will mod your map. This is just recommended and fixing, so you can accept or ignore this mod.

Normal
* 00:12:085(12085|3) - move circle to 00:12:085(12085|2) -
* 00:43:992(43992|4) - move circle to 00:43:992(43992|3) - it will be cool
* 01:08:443(68443|2) - move circle to 01:08:443(68443|1) - ( recommendation )
* 01:08:790(68790|3) - move circle to 01:08:790(68790|2) - ( recommendation )
* 01:08:964(68964|4) - move circle to 01:08:964(68964|3) - ( recommendation )
* 01:09:137(69137|2) - mpve circle to 01:09:137(69137|3) - ( recommendation )
* 01:09:310(69310|3) - move slider to 01:09:310(69310|2) - ( recommendation )
* 01:09:831(69831|5) - move slider to 01:09:831(69831|4) - ( recommendation )
* 01:11:738(71738|2) - move circle to 01:11:737(71737|4) -
* 01:28:039(88038|4) - move circle to 01:28:039(88038|6) -
* 01:28:385(88385|4) - move circle to 01:28:385(88385|6) -

Hard
* 00:28:039(28039|0) - delete that circle
* 01:18:675(78675|3) - add circle
* 01:34:628(94628|6) - delete that circle
* 01:42:084(102084|0,102084|2) - move the circles to 01:42:084(102084|1,102084|3) -
* 01:42:257(102257|3,102257|4) - move the circles to 01:42:257(102257|0,102257|2) -
* 01:43:471(103471|5,103471|6) - move the circles to 01:43:471(103471|2,103472|3) -
* 01:43:646(103646|3) - move the circle to 01:43:646(103646|4) -
* 01:44:511(104511|5) - move the circle to 01:44:511(104511|0) -

Maximum
* 00:37:055(37055|3,37055|4,37055|6) - move those circles to 00:37:055(37055|0,37255|1,37255|3) -
* 00:38:270(38270|0) - move the circle to 00:38:270(38270|1) -
* 00:38:443(38443|1,38443|2,38443|4) - move those circles to 00:38:443(38443|3,38443|5,38443|6) -
* 00:44:686(44686|4) - mpve circle to 00:44:686(44686|3) -
* 00:44:860(44860|1,44860|2) - move those circles to 00:44:860(44860|2,44860|4) -
* 01:26:651(86651|1) - move circle to 01:26:651(86651|0) -
* 01:29:078(89078|3) - move circle to 01:29:078(89078|0) -
* 01:29:252(89252|4) - move circle to 01:29:252(89252|3) -
* 01:32:721(92721|5) - move circle to 01:32:721(92721|6) -
* 02:36:189(156189|5) - move circle to 02:36:189(156189|6) -
* 02:36:362(156362|6) - move circle to 02:36:362(156362|5) -

your map is cool and so many circles here, but it's ok.
those are my mods, just fixing, i wish my mod make your map better xD

i like this song and mapset <3
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hello Reikosaka o/ as your requested me in pm, i will mod your map. This is just recommended and fixing, so you can accept or ignore this mod.

Normal
* 00:12:085(12085|3) - move circle to 00:12:085(12085|2) - fixed
* 00:43:992(43992|4) - move circle to 00:43:992(43992|3) - it will be cool
* 01:08:443(68443|2) - move circle to 01:08:443(68443|1) - ( recommendation ) fixed
* 01:08:790(68790|3) - move circle to 01:08:790(68790|2) - ( recommendation ) fixed
* 01:08:964(68964|4) - move circle to 01:08:964(68964|3) - ( recommendation ) fixed but i change to another place
* 01:09:137(69137|2) - mpve circle to 01:09:137(69137|3) - ( recommendation ) fixed
* 01:09:310(69310|3) - move slider to 01:09:310(69310|2) - ( recommendation ) fixed
* 01:09:831(69831|5) - move slider to 01:09:831(69831|4) - ( recommendation )
* 01:11:738(71738|2) - move circle to 01:11:737(71737|4) -
* 01:28:039(88038|4) - move circle to 01:28:039(88038|6) -
* 01:28:385(88385|4) - move circle to 01:28:385(88385|6) -

Hard
* 00:28:039(28039|0) - delete that circle
* 01:18:675(78675|3) - add circle
* 01:34:628(94628|6) - delete that circle
* 01:42:084(102084|0,102084|2) - move the circles to 01:42:084(102084|1,102084|3) -
* 01:42:257(102257|3,102257|4) - move the circles to 01:42:257(102257|0,102257|2) -
* 01:43:471(103471|5,103471|6) - move the circles to 01:43:471(103471|2,103472|3) -
* 01:43:646(103646|3) - move the circle to 01:43:646(103646|4) -
* 01:44:511(104511|5) - move the circle to 01:44:511(104511|0) -

Maximum
* 00:37:055(37055|3,37055|4,37055|6) - move those circles to 00:37:055(37055|0,37255|1,37255|3) -
* 00:38:270(38270|0) - move the circle to 00:38:270(38270|1) -
* 00:38:443(38443|1,38443|2,38443|4) - move those circles to 00:38:443(38443|3,38443|5,38443|6) -
* 00:44:686(44686|4) - mpve circle to 00:44:686(44686|3) -
* 00:44:860(44860|1,44860|2) - move those circles to 00:44:860(44860|2,44860|4) -
* 01:26:651(86651|1) - move circle to 01:26:651(86651|0) -
* 01:29:078(89078|3) - move circle to 01:29:078(89078|0) -
* 01:29:252(89252|4) - move circle to 01:29:252(89252|3) -
* 01:32:721(92721|5) - move circle to 01:32:721(92721|6) -
* 02:36:189(156189|5) - move circle to 02:36:189(156189|6) -
* 02:36:362(156362|6) - move circle to 02:36:362(156362|5) -

your map is cool and so many circles here, but it's ok.
those are my mods, just fixing, i wish my mod make your map better xD

i like this song and mapset <3
thank you for mod , i still think to do with hard and maximum
_AI
From modding queue~ >.o/

[General]
00:28:386 - The green point here is kinda pointless, either you extend it to earlier or remove it

[Normal]
00:14:513 - Add circle on this line
00:15:900 - ^
01:24:570 (84570|0) - Change into hold
01:45:378 (105378|4,105378|2,105552|3,105725|4,105725|5,105899|3,106072|2,106072|1) - Maybe alittle too hard for normal diff? Just a suggest;
~Didn't saw much problem here, great

[Hard]
00:10:698 (10698|4) - Add circle
00:16:420 (16420|2) - ^
00:18:675 (18675|5) - ^
00:19:368 (19368|1) - ^
01:46:940 (106940|1) - ^
01:51:621 (111621|2) - Remove this
~Nice also, try to make 2circle on a line when the harder beat drop

[Insane]
~Didn't saw any problem here, its great
or maybe im too bad :p
Topic Starter
Sorarei

_AI wrote:

From modding queue~ >.o/

[General]
00:28:386 - The green point here is kinda pointless, either you extend it to earlier or remove it if i remove i think will be sudden fast

[Normal]
00:14:513 - Add circle on this line
00:15:900 - ^
01:24:570 (84570|0) - Change into hold
01:45:378 (105378|4,105378|2,105552|3,105725|4,105725|5,105899|3,106072|2,106072|1) - Maybe alittle too hard for normal diff? Just a suggest;
~Didn't saw much problem here, great Reduce and fixed

[Hard]
00:10:698 (10698|4) - Add circle
00:16:420 (16420|2) - ^
00:18:675 (18675|5) - ^
00:19:368 (19368|1) - ^
01:46:940 (106940|1) - ^
01:51:621 (111621|2) - Remove this Removed
~Nice also, try to make 2circle on a line when the harder beat drop

[Insane]
~Didn't saw any problem here, its great
or maybe im too bad :p
thanks for appreciation and mod :D
Topic Starter
Sorarei

victorica_db wrote:

mark wait me ~~~
M4M plz http://osu.ppy.sh/s/114898


sorry i'm so late

i'm poor at 7k mapping so only my personal opinion
NM
the speed change is so difficult.
00:09:657 - add one note ? added
00:11:044 - ^ didn't add , still thinking
00:40:177 (40177|3) - move to 00:40:351 -
00:41:564 (41564|4) - move to 00:41:738 -
00:42:605 - add one note ? added
00:44:339 (44339|4) -move to 00:44:513 - moved
00:51:275 (51275|0,51276|2,52662|6,52662|4) - i can't understand these 4 long note just normal hold note , followed by vocal
01:01:854 (61854|0) - move to 5 moved
01:07:403 - add a note? it make harder so i'm didn't add
01:44:338 (104338|4,104511|5,104511|6,104858|2,105032|0,105032|1) - it isn't very reasonable i think nope
01:48:501 - add a note like 01:47:807 - added
01:49:195 - ^ added
01:50:928 (110928|5) - move to 3 didn't move but change style
01:52:662 (112662|2) - i think it is a stress maybe you should emphsize fixed
01:54:049 (114049|4) - ^ fixed
01:55:436 (115436|1) - ^ fixed
01:55:436 (115436|1,117865|6,117865|4,119252|0,119253|2) -i can't understand these 4 long note same as before
02:00:640 (120640|0) - maybe end at 02:01:160 - still at place
02:13:125 - add a note added
02:24:224 (144224|4,144224|2) - i can't understand these 2 long note may be they will end at02:25:611 - :o


HD
00:10:177 - add a note
00:11:044 - ^
00:11:738 - ^
00:12:085 - ^
00:13:125 - ^
00:14:513 - ^
00:15:900 - ^
00:17:287 - ^
00:18:695 - ^
00:19:368 - add 2note
00:21:449 - ^
00:25:784 - add a note at 3 added
00:46:073 - add a note
00:46:594 - ^
00:47:461 - ^
00:48:154 - ^
00:48:848 - ^
00:59:970 - ^
01:01:334 - ^
01:02:718 - ^
01:04:108 - ^
01:07:403 - ^
01:19:715 - ^
01:21:102 - ^
01:22:474 - ^
01:23:877 - ^
01:25:265 - ^
01:26:669 - ^
01:28:039 - ^
01:46:592 (106592|3,106766|3,106939|3,107113|3,107373|3,107633|3) - to many space bar note maybe it is difficult to play important things , fixed
02:02:201 - add a note
02:02:547 - ^
02:08:964 - ^
02:10:351 - ^
02:11:738 - ^
02:15:900 - ^
02:17:287 - ^
02:18:688 - ^
02:20:062 - ^
02:21:449 - ^



MX is beyond my ability sorry :o


good luck~
i'm avoiding to add many note especially triples , thanks for mod anyway !
jyu
halo~ o/

saya lumayan noob kalo osuman, jadi maaf gabisa mod diff yg susah ;__;

[General]

  • buat jaga2 aja sih, mending bg-nya 1024x768 , aku ndak pernah liat yg ukuran 1028x643 .__. /atau gua yg kudet /desh

    dari AiMod, jangan lupa Resnap All Notes di Timing->Resnap All Notes (buat semua diff)

[Normal]

  • itu kayaknya ada garis ijo yg belum di-snap 02:38:093 - 02:49:191 -

    ada beberapa speed changes yg menurutku agak susah buat Normal, kayak 00:29:079 - 01:26:650 (86650|3) - 02:26:998 - , bedanya lumayan kontras sama speed sebelumnya. kalo buat hard/maximum sih okelah, tapi kalo buat normal, yaahh.. gua pas main kaget sumpah ini cuman opini kok ;w; bisa dipertimbangkan lagi, atau mungkin bisa nanya2 BAT osuman
    02:13:125 - perubahan speed disini agak bikin membingungkan, soalnya ga ada perubahan signifikan di lagunya dan perubahannya cuman bentar. kalo di diff lain mungkin ga apa2, tapi kalo di normal, saran saya sih gausah pake speed change
    00:13:819 (13819|1,13819|3,14166|2,14339|0,14339|1,14860|3,15033|1,15206|4,15206|2,15553|3,15727|6,15727|5) - agak susah buat noob buat gua bisa jadi. speed-nya juga lambat, malah susah dibaca
    01:25:263 (85263|2) - clap?

    kayaknya Normal cuman segitu aja mod-nya, masih gak sreg sama speed changes-nya _(:'3_
    gua cuman bisa main normal disini _(:'3_ kalo mau liat replay normal http://puu.sh/4ADHA.osr /kabur
maaf kalo mod-nya nda guna ;w;
good luck~

edit : 600th posts ftw
Topic Starter
Sorarei

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

halo~ o/

saya lumayan noob kalo osuman, jadi maaf gabisa mod diff yg susah ;__;

[General]

  • buat jaga2 aja sih, mending bg-nya 1024x768 , aku ndak pernah liat yg ukuran 1028x643 .__. /atau gua yg kudet /desh

    dari AiMod, jangan lupa Resnap All Notes di Timing->Resnap All Notes (buat semua diff)

[Normal]

  • itu kayaknya ada garis ijo yg belum di-snap 02:38:093 - 02:49:191 -

    ada beberapa speed changes yg menurutku agak susah buat Normal, kayak 00:29:079 - 01:26:650 (86650|3) - 02:26:998 - , bedanya lumayan kontras sama speed sebelumnya. kalo buat hard/maximum sih okelah, tapi kalo buat normal, yaahh.. gua pas main kaget sumpah ini cuman opini kok ;w; bisa dipertimbangkan lagi, atau mungkin bisa nanya2 BAT osuman
    02:13:125 - perubahan speed disini agak bikin membingungkan, soalnya ga ada perubahan signifikan di lagunya dan perubahannya cuman bentar. kalo di diff lain mungkin ga apa2, tapi kalo di normal, saran saya sih gausah pake speed change
    00:13:819 (13819|1,13819|3,14166|2,14339|0,14339|1,14860|3,15033|1,15206|4,15206|2,15553|3,15727|6,15727|5) - agak susah buat noob buat gua bisa jadi. speed-nya juga lambat, malah susah dibaca
    01:25:263 (85263|2) - clap?

    kayaknya Normal cuman segitu aja mod-nya, masih gak sreg sama speed changes-nya _(:'3_
    gua cuman bisa main normal disini _(:'3_ kalo mau liat replay normal http://puu.sh/4ADHA.osr /kabur
maaf kalo mod-nya nda guna ;w;
good luck~

edit : 600th posts ftw
Speed change reduced , Background akan menyusul
Setelah liat Aimods ternyata semua diff pada unsnapped termasuk speed change
Btw thanks for mod !
Bruce
Um...just some suggestions :oops: column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Normal
Speed changes is too diffcult, you need cut some
00:20:755 - Add 1 or 2 note
00:21:449 (21449|5) - Move to 5
00:22:143 (22143|3) - Move to 6
00:37:750 (37750|3) - Move to 1 or 3
00:38:443 (38443|3) - Move to 5 or 7
00:54:050 - ~00:55:091 - upset can be better
01:00:640 (60640|5) - Move to left hand
01:07:403 - Add 1 or 2 note
01:40:177 - Add 1 or 2 note
01:43:124 (103124|3) - Move to 3
01:43:646 (103646|3) - Move to 5
01:46:594 - Add 1 note
01:47:113 (107113|6) - Move to left hand
01:47:806 (107806|0) - Move to right hand
01:51:968 (111968|4,111968|3) - remove 1 note
02:01:854 (121854|5) - Move to 2
02:11:737 (131737|6) - Move to 3
02:36:189 (156189|3,156362|3,156536|3) - upset

Hard
00:24:744 (24744|5) -become a note
00:41:218 (41218|5) - remove
00:41:391 (41391|6) - become a note
00:53:010 - Add 1 note
02:38:617 - ~02:46:073 - needn't 2note with 1LN? I suggest remove 1 note
02:47:981 - Add 1 note
02:48:328 - ↑

Maximum
02:47:981 - Add 1 note
02:48:328 - Add 1 note

Nice diff :oops:

like this song :)
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Simple_Star wrote:

Um...just some suggestions :oops: column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Normal
Speed changes is too diffcult, you need cut some
00:20:755 - Add 1 or 2 note
00:21:449 (21449|5) - Move to 5
00:22:143 (22143|3) - Move to 6
00:37:750 (37750|3) - Move to 1 or 3
00:38:443 (38443|3) - Move to 5 or 7
00:54:050 - ~00:55:091 - upset can be better
01:00:640 (60640|5) - Move to left hand
01:07:403 - Add 1 or 2 note
01:40:177 - Add 1 or 2 note
01:43:124 (103124|3) - Move to 3
01:43:646 (103646|3) - Move to 5
01:46:594 - Add 1 note
01:47:113 (107113|6) - Move to left hand
01:47:806 (107806|0) - Move to right hand
01:51:968 (111968|4,111968|3) - remove 1 note
02:01:854 (121854|5) - Move to 2
02:11:737 (131737|6) - Move to 3
02:36:189 (156189|3,156362|3,156536|3) - upset

Hard
00:24:744 (24744|5) -become a note
00:41:218 (41218|5) - remove
00:41:391 (41391|6) - become a note
00:53:010 - Add 1 note
02:38:617 - ~02:46:073 - needn't 2note with 1LN? I suggest remove 1 note
02:47:981 - Add 1 note
02:48:328 - ↑

Maximum
02:47:981 - Add 1 note
02:48:328 - Add 1 note

Nice diff :oops:

like this song :)
thanks for mod and appreciation :D
richardfeder
Sorry for being late ^^
SPOILER
Normal
Just some suggestion XD:
00:07:923 (7923|2,8097|1) - exchange their column according to pitch

00:09:137 (9137|3,9484|5) - ^ and move 00:09:657 (9657|2,9657|3) - to 0 and 2, this seems more handy

00:10:177 (10177|3,10177|4) - should be placed at the same column as (9657|2,9657|3) - since their sound the same. This makes your map more organized.

00:11:044 (11044|2) - double notes not single. This is accent and should enjoy the same treatment as what 00:10:177 (10177|3,10177|4) - and 00:09:657 (9657|2,9657|3) - . To make it easy to play, as what I suggest above, spread them (do not close to each other) and place them in the order of pitch

00:17:634 (17634|3,17981|4,17981|2) - those two surprise me XD. you are mapping human voice and suddenly when the voice just end you add drums :o this is a little confusing, players cannot tell what you are following and what your notes meaning since you shift you focus just because one instrument, or voice, end and you do not leave the space blank. If you still want to follow the voice of singer just make 00:17:114 (17114|4) - a long note and delete notes for drums. And by the way people usually do not map human voice a lot :D Maybe consider map drums instead of voice? since you start doing drums after 00:22:143 (22143|1,22143|5) - and those drums are much more making sense XDthis require a little remap all the notes from 00:12:432 (12432|3) - to 00:22:143 (22143|1,22143|5) - XD all up to you just suggestion

00:23:790 (23790|2) - add it has sound there should be blank

00:25:264 (25264|6) - ^ and move 00:25:611 (25611|6,25958|4,26305|2) - two column left

00:26:651 (26651|3) - ^

00:28:732 (28732|3) - ^

00:33:068 (33068|2) - move to 00:32:981 (32981|2) -

00:33:587 (33587|4) - delete... you all use single and then double comes out XD

00:34:281 (34281|3) - ^ not heavy drum, not necessary here

00:35:148 (35148|1) - move to 3 [0|1|2|3|4|5|6] by the way XD

00:35:495 (35495|5) - move to 3

00:36:535 (36535|6,36882|0) - ^ try to avoid hitting in the same column continuously

00:37:922 (37922|4,38269|2) - ^ i not so sure about this...maybe pressing space too much, in fact any notes like this you can put them to different column, just let them make sense and easy to press is enough w

00:38:617 (38617|3) - add

00:40:870 (40870|2) - move to 00:40:784 (40784|2) -

00:42:258 (42258|5) - move to 00:42:172 (42172|5) -

00:45:726 (45726|0) - LN like this... I do not quite understand ^^

00:49:715 (49715|2) - add

00:50:062 (50062|4) - ^

00:50:582 (50582|0) - ^

00:51:275 (51275|0,51276|2) - strange... just go on map your drums? what are these LN...it seems voice...?

00:55:264 (55264|5) - add

00:55:438 (55438|3) - move to 4

00:56:304 (56304|4) - move to 00:55:958 (55958|1) -

00:56:477 (56477|1,56477|3) - single is enough?

00:58:038 (58038|3) - remove. no sound

00:59:425 (59425|3) - ^ no sound

01:00:813 (60813|4) - ^

01:02:200 (62200|2) - move to 01:02:027 (62027|2) -

01:03:587 (63587|3) - same treatment, put it on the drum, not somewhere no sound

01:04:974 (64974|3) - ^

01:05:148 (65148|4,65149|5,65495|3) - complete the drums here, beats are missing. and i suggest that move those notes to left hand so that they will become easy to press

01:06:189 (66189|1) - add

01:06:362 (66362|3) - move to 2

01:28:731 (88731|2) - move to 6

01:29:078 (89078|3) - delete

01:29:425 (89425|4) - move to 0

01:30:466 - same as previous...make it complete

01:40:003 (100003|3) - move to 4

01:40:177 (100177|0,100177|2) - add

01:40:870 (100870|2,100870|4) - remove

01:51:276 (111276|5) - move to 01:51:102 (111102|3) - and 01:51:276 (111276|6) - move to 01:51:276 (111276|2) - and add at 01:51:276 (111276|0) -

01:51:449 (111449|1) - add

01:51:795 (111795|5,111968|4,111969|3) - same as previous

01:56:130 (116130|3,116130|2,116477|4,116477|5) - spread them and add at 01:56:305 -

01:56:651 - ^

01:57:865 (117865|6,117865|4) - same as previous...strange

02:02:893 (122893|0,123068|2,123068|1) - same as previous

02:05:668 (125668|2,125841|1,126015|1) - place them as stair(pitch) and 02:07:055 (127055|2,127229|1,127402|1) - ....all the same.never put them in the same column without reason XD

02:14:686 (134686|6) - place it to 02:14:513 (134513|6) -

02:19:368 (139368|0) - move to 6

02:33:935 (153935|2,153935|0,154455|4,154455|6) - inconsistency with voice-you map some voice with two LN while then give up and leave it blank, why not just put four LN that connected with each other instead of 02:33:935 (153935|2,153935|0,154455|6,154455|4,155149|3) -

02:37:576 (157576|6) - delete

02:41:738 (161738|0,161912|1) - hard to press, same hand. not suitable in normal diff

02:41:218 (161218|1) - ^

02:42:085 (162085|6) - add

02:42:258 (162258|5) - add

02:47:807 (167807|0,167807|6) - add

And at last I strongly recommend you to remove ALL speed change in normal diff. They are a little annoying and not fun at all for beginner ^^

please check those things(for instance misplace notes, notes that correspond to no sound, unreasonable double notes and so on) in other diffs so that I do not need to post many same materials in your other diff ;) And when you are done just pm me XD I will finish this up sorry I do not have much time T T
Good luck ;)
[Shi-Ra]
Hi there.
Random mania-mod :3

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Hard
Inside :3
00:24:744 (24744|5) - it's hard to "read" this, would be better if you finish it with slider in 3rd column or end it with note at 00:25:264 (25264|6)
01:31:334 (91334|1) - ^same problem (or end with note at 01:31:854 (91854|0))
From 01:06:536 to 01:07:923 I suggest to remodel pattern like >this<
01:32:027 (92027|5) - move this slider to 4th column
01:32:721 (92721|5) - turn this note into slider starting at 01:32:374 and ending at 01:33:761
02:26:651 (146651|3) - turn into slider ending at 02:26:998
Finally remodel pre-chorus pattern from 02:24:224 to 02:25:611 like >this<
Hitsounds:
02:15:206 (135206|2) - add clap hs
02:16:594 (136594|2) - ^
02:17:981 (137981|2) - ^
02:19:368 (139368|2) - ^
02:20:755 (140755|3) - ^
02:22:143 (142143|3) - ^
02:23:530 (143530|2) - ^

Maximum
Inside :3
00:28:732 (28732|3) - turn into slider ending at 00:29:079
I suggest to move 00:42:432 (42432|5) to 3rd column (coz three notes in a row looks weird here)
From 00:54:050 to 00:55:438 pattern looks monotonously, suggest to remodel it like >this<
01:29:079 (89079|2) - move to 0 column
01:29:253 (89253|2) - move to 1st column
01:39:657 (99657|4) - ^
02:26:651 (146651|3) - turn into slider again, end at 02:26:998
Finally I suggest to remodel ending part and do it more difficult and comfortable to play: from 02:23:703 to 02:25:611 like >this<

Great song and...I love this BG so much <3
Good luck :3/
indyinyou
Hi

try add drum hitsound like this

http://puu.sh/4BwnX

ููู^(it have drum sound and diff for review hitsound)

if you don t know how to add hitsound plz pm me i ll help you ;)
Topic Starter
Sorarei

indyinyou wrote:

Hi

try add drum hitsound like this

http://puu.sh/4BwnX

ููู^(it have drum sound and diff for review hitsound)

if you don t know how to add hitsound plz pm me i ll help you ;)
thanks for hitsound !
asd123iii
mod request by charter

[General]
1.You must have a Easy diff,Star Difficulty between 0.8 ~ 1.5(In Testing mode).Your Normal is 2.28.
2.Use custom 1 hitsound and your hitsound will work.
3.Delete soft.wav
4.soft-normal is not so fit in the begin of this map.soft-clap is ok but soft-normal is noise :o
5.Scars is translated title,not Romanised Title.
6.Mania mode is very very different from standard mode,try not to use your standard mode concept ;)

[Normal]
01:09:310 (69310|2) - finish at next note (01:09:831 - ) or add a note at finish (01:09:657 - ) ,it looks like convert map without one of previous.
01:09:830 (69830|5) - ^
01:10:697 (70697|4) - ^
01:11:217 (71217|2) - ^
01:12:084 (72084|6) - ^
01:12:605 (72605|4) - ^
01:13:472 (73472|0) - ^
01:13:992 (73992|2) - ^
01:14:859 (74859|4) - ^
01:15:379 (75379|2) - ^

02:14:513 (134513|6) - finish at next long note 02:15:900 -
02:15:900 (135900|2) - ^
02:17:287 (137287|5) - ^
02:18:675 (138675|1) - ^
02:20:062 (140062|3) - ^
02:21:449 (141449|0) - ^
02:22:836 (142836|6) - ^
02:38:097 (158097|2) - ^
02:39:484 (159484|5) - ^
02:40:871 (160871|2) - ^
02:42:258 (162258|4) - ^
02:43:646 (163646|0) - ^
02:45:033 (165033|6) - ^

I think you can place harder sort in Hard and Maximum.
Just reference ranked map

Nice song for mania and great BG
Good luck :D
indyinyou
about add hitsound

you can use your way that add hitsound too

but i m use another way to add it

L+click on a note it show list of file you have http://puu.sh/4CY3f.jpg click on sound you want then Apply

when you want to know about note have sound click and see right conner http://puu.sh/4meaR

or go to menu View > show Sample name / it show you the note have name clap fin etc sounds like this http://puu.sh/4medt

add cymbol hitsound >>> here for ithttp://puu.sh/4CY9e (i think it same finish hitsound on normal hitsound in edit mod)

ok modding time

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:12:952 : move to 00:13:125 add normal-clap
00:14:339 : move to 00:14:513 add normal-clap
00:15:727 : same ^
00:17:287 : normal-clap
00:18:675 : add one more note + normal-clap
00:19:368 : soft-clap
00:20:755 : ^
00:22:143 : cymbol sound
00:22:836 : normal-clap
00:25:958 : soft-whistle
00:26:998 : ^
00:27:345 : ^
00:28:039 : ^
00:33:068 : cymbol + soft-clap
00:33:588 : ^
00:34:975 : soft-clap
00:35:681 : soft-clap + normal-clap
00:36:362 : normal-clap
00:37:056 : soft-clap + normal-clap
00:37:750 : normal-clap
00:38:443 : soft-clap + normal-clap
00:38:989 : soft-clap
00:39:330 : soft-clap
00:39:831 : normal-clap
00:40:524 : ^
00:41:218 : ^
00:41:912 : ^
00:42:605 : ^
00:43:125 : soft-clap
00:43:472 : ^
00:43:819 : ^
00:43:992 : remove soft-clap add normal-clap
00:44:860 : soft-clap
00:45:380 : soft-whitle

i m so lazy for now sry i ll mod if i have time

------------------------------------------
note l1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l

try use alt+L click to add hitsound xD

[normal]

SPOILER
00:15:900 : normal-clap
00:22:143 : soft-finish
00:33:068 : soft-finish and soft-clap
00:33:588 : ^
00:34:975 : normal-clap on 3
00:35:669 : normal-clap on 5
00:37:056 : normal-clap on 1
00:38:443 : normal-clap on 3
00:38:964 : soft-clap
00:39:310 : ^
00:39:484 : normal-clap
00:39:831 : ^
00:40:524 : ^ no 2
00:40:811 : soft-clap
00:41:218 : normal clap
00:41:912 : ^ no 2
00:42:172 : soft-clap
00:42:605 : normal-clap
00:43:125 : soft-clap
00:43:472 : ^
00:43:819 : ^
00:43:992 : use normal clap better
00:44:339 : add one more for soft-finish
00:45:380 : soft-whitle
00:46:767 : normal-clap
00:48:154 : ^
00:49:542 : ^
00:50:929 : ^
00:51:276 : soft-clap
00:51:623 : normal-clap on 3
00:52:316 : normal-clap on 5
00:52:663 : soft-clap
00:53:703 : normal clap on 5
00:54:224 : soft-clap
00:54:570 : ^
00:54:917 : ^
00:55:438 : ^ and add one more note for soft-finish
00:56:498 : add soft-whitle / i think remove one note better
00:56:825 : soft-finish /
01:06:536 : soft-finish volume 50 % on 4
01:06:883 : ^ on 5
01:07:229 : ^ on 6
01:07:576 : normal-clap on 5
01:32:547 : soft-whitle
01:33:588 : ^
01:33:935 : ^
01:34:628 : ^
01:35:669 : add one more note for soft-finish
01:36:016 : soft-clap
01:36:709 : ^
01:37:403 : ^
01:38:097 : use 2 hitsound in one note /soft-clap and soft-whitle
01:41:218 : use finish only one note when you add finish you need bassdrum same time too (bassdrum sound is > soft-hitclap)
01:46:940 : soft-clap
01:48:328 : ^
01:50:929 : on note 5 use finish sound better xD
01:52:316 : add soft-clap on 1 same 01:41:218 ;)
01:58:039 : soft-clap on4
01:59:426 : ^
02:00:640 : soft clap
02:00:813 : ^
02:00:987 : ^
02:01:160 : ^
02:01:334 : ^
02:01:507 : ^
02:02:034 : use soft-clap and soft- finish one sound on note
02:03:414 : ^
02:26:998 : add one more note for finish or use 2 hitsound same note soft-clap + soft-finish
02:36:709 : soft-clap + soft-finish
02:38:097 : add note + soft-finish

i ll mod hard diff soon if i have time ;)

not kd for this post
Topic Starter
Sorarei
adding Easy difficult now
[Shi-Ra]
Re-check request :3

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Normal
Inside :3
All patters are good, except some weird sliders:
This one 00:12:952 (12952|6) and others like this, I suggest to make them shorter by half. Remodel every slider which looks like >that< into > this <.
00:25:264 - add simple note to 6th column
00:26:651 - ^ to 3rd column
00:28:743 - ^ to 3rd again
00:34:974 (34974|2) - move to 3rd column, it will be easier to play for novices
00:35:668 (35668|4) - ^
00:37:922 (37922|4) - ^
00:38:270 (38270|2) - ^
00:51:623 (51623|2) - to 0 column
00:52:316 (52316|5) - to 6th
02:38:097 (158097|2) - end slider here 02:39:484 and end every subsequent slider in this part with this rule.
Hard
Inside :3
00:23:270 (23270|1) - delete this, there's time for little break
01:29:860 (89860|5) - ^
00:29:079 (29079|0) - end sliders when starting new sliders, guided with previous rule or end them with single notes
Remodel part from 01:35:669 to 01:37:923 like >this<, it's more comfortable to play this pattern.
Maximum
Inside :3
00:28:386 - add note to 5th column
00:37:056 (37056|4) - move to 2nd column
00:38:270 (38270|2) - move to 3rd column
00:49:368 (49368|3) - to 4th
01:34:975 - add note to 1st column
01:51:449 - add note to 2nd column

Easy diff is good, there's no issues :3
IchibiNoKitsune
Mod Request for Easy

In general, you have the same hp drain for all the difficulties, you should lower the hp drain for easy.

Sounds
00:12:466 Clap
00:13:125 Finish
00:13:857 Clap
00:14:513 Finish
00:15:250 Clap
00:15:900 Finish
00:16:648 Clap
00:17:296 Finish
00:17:634 Clap
00:17:994 Clap
and all other notes in this rhythm / type

Okay? Understand? I speak Spanish, sorry
captin1
Timing check requested~

Offset 1342 (+8) I think is best, BPM is fine

Good luck!
indyinyou
[Easy]

SPOILER
00:22:151 : soft-finish
00:25:966 : soft-whitle
00:27:006 : ^
00:27:353 : ^
00:29:087 : soft-finish
00:55:446 : soft-clap on 4
00:56:833 : ^ on 5
00:58:220 : ^
00:59:607 : soft-clap
01:00:995 : ^
01:02:382 : ^
01:03:769 : ^
01:05:157 : ^
01:06:544 : soft-finish on 1
01:06:891 : ^ 2 / softclap on 6
01:07:237 : soft-finish 3 / softclap on 5
01:09:318 : soft-clap
01:10:706 : ^
01:12:093 : ^
01:13:480 : ^
01:14:868 : ^
01:19:029 : on 6
01:20:417 : on 2
01:21:804 : ^
01:23:191 : on 6
01:24:232 : soft-clap
01:24:578 : ^ on 7
01:25:966 : on 1
01:28:740 : soft-clap on 4 / soft-finish 3
01:32:555 : soft-whitle
01:35:677 : soft-finish on 2
02:36:717 : soft-clap 2 / soft-finish 5
02:47:815 : soft clap and soft-finish

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:15:900 : normal-clap
00:22:143 : soft-finish
00:33:068 : soft-finish and soft-clap
00:33:588 : ^
00:34:975 : normal-clap on 3
00:35:669 : normal-clap on 5
00:37:056 : normal-clap on 1
00:38:443 : normal-clap on 3
00:38:964 : soft-clap
00:39:310 : ^
00:39:484 : normal-clap
00:39:831 : ^
00:40:524 : ^ no 2
00:40:811 : soft-clap
00:41:218 : normal clap
00:41:912 : ^ no 2
00:42:172 : soft-clap
00:42:605 : normal-clap
00:43:125 : soft-clap
00:43:472 : ^
00:43:819 : ^
00:43:992 : use normal clap better
00:44:339 : add one more for soft-finish
00:45:380 : soft-whitle
00:46:767 : normal-clap
00:48:154 : ^
00:49:542 : ^
00:50:929 : ^
00:51:276 : soft-clap
00:51:623 : normal-clap on 3
00:52:316 : normal-clap on 5
00:52:663 : soft-clap
00:53:703 : normal clap on 5
00:54:224 : soft-clap
00:54:570 : ^
00:54:917 : ^
00:55:438 : ^ and add one more note for soft-finish
00:56:498 : add soft-whitle / i think remove one note better
00:56:825 : soft-finish /
01:06:536 : soft-finish volume 50 % on 4
01:06:883 : ^ on 5
01:07:229 : ^ on 6
01:07:576 : normal-clap on 5
01:32:547 : soft-whitle
01:33:588 : ^
01:33:935 : ^
01:34:628 : ^
01:35:669 : add one more note for soft-finish
01:36:016 : soft-clap
01:36:709 : ^
01:37:403 : ^
01:38:097 : use 2 hitsound in one note /soft-clap and soft-whitle
01:41:218 : use finish only one note when you add finish you need bassdrum same time too (bassdrum sound is > soft-hitclap)
01:46:940 : soft-clap
01:48:328 : ^
01:50:929 : on note 5 use finish sound better xD
01:52:316 : add soft-clap on 1 same 01:41:218 ;)
01:58:039 : soft-clap on4
01:59:426 : ^
02:00:640 : soft clap
02:00:813 : ^
02:00:987 : ^
02:01:160 : ^
02:01:334 : ^
02:01:507 : ^
02:02:034 : use soft-clap and soft- finish one sound on note
02:03:414 : ^
02:26:998 : add one more note for finish or use 2 hitsound same note soft-clap + soft-finish
02:36:709 : soft-clap + soft-finish
02:38:097 : add note + soft-finish

use same sound in hard diff and maximum diff if you need re-check pm me agin
Topic Starter
Sorarei
will fix soon !
fixed
xxbidiao
For maximum,
It seems that these SV changes are really strange...
Oh that the full map is strange
Maybe I won't even try to make these patterns...

Not to say this is not enough good, but you missed many interesting things in the song and make the map a little gimnicky I think...
I would say need huge work but yeah this map is playable, so no more mod on this diff...

Hard:
You should always use vocal notes very carefully...
00:33:943 (33943|2,34029|1) - I suggest you use a slider instead; anyway 1/4 *2 doesn't seem suit the music.
01:40:532 (100532|3,100619|4) - ^
00:40:185 (40185|4) - It seems that starting from here you start simplifying drum hits. (Or to say, you miss a few notes) Actually later parts seems confusing to me...
00:43:133 (43133|5,43133|1,43307|4,43307|0,43480|6,43480|2,43654|1,43654|5,43827|4,43827|0,44000|1,44000|3) - Maybe this pattern is too hard in this difficulty?

Normal:
01:19:029 (79029|1,79029|0,79550|1,79723|2) - This would need too high level of finger independence for players on this level. Consider moving circles to another hand's side.(Like 01:19:029 (79029|0,79029|6) - ) (Many cases follows)
02:41:226 (161226|1,161399|3,161746|4,161920|1) - ^
01:35:330 (95330|5) - Seems a note is missing here.

Easy
00:06:891 (6891|0) - It seems that this slider use both start and end representing a sound. This is dangerous mapping style, extremely in easy. I would suggest avoid using of this pattern...
Easy is Overally OK.
PROGUY
Hi there! As requested, I'll mod your map. Sorry it had to be late though :(

[Easy]
00:17:642 (17642|2) Move to 5th column.
00:18:683 (18683|3) Move to 6th column.
00:20:070 (20070|3) Move to 2nd column.
00:42:960 (42960|0) Not required to change, but I don't recommend using 2nd and 3rd fingers alone for this part and onwards.
01:00:648 (60648|4) Move to 4th column.
01:17:642 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1029691
01:24:232 (84232|4) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
01:41:226 Like the one mentioned above about the 2nd and 3rd finger thing, but this part onwards really needs some work. For an Easy, I highly recommend moving some of the normal notes to the other hand than having one hand to do all the work (Trust me, it would be tiring and tedious for beginners.).
01:52:671 (112671|1) Move to 4th column.
01:54:058 (114058|5) Move to 3rd column.
02:02:035 (122035|3) Move to 6th column.
02:02:382 (122382|2) Move to 7th column.
02:27:353 (147353|5) Move to 5th column.
02:28:740 (148740|1) Move to 3rd column.

[Normal]
I might have to repeat again with the "one hand having to do all the work" part here, because you did that quite a lot and there's no balance between the two hands. Please look at this chart again.
00:23:885 Add note in 7th column.
00:33:076 (33076|2) Move to 00:32:989.
00:36:370 (36370|4) Remove clap hitsound.
00:37:758 (37758|4) ^
00:38:451 (38451|4) ^
00:40:532 (40532|3) ^
00:41:920 (41920|2) ^
02:00:648 (120648|0) Remove this note, as it doesn't fit in the song at all.
02:14:521 (134521|6) Move this long note's end to 02:15:735.
02:24:232 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1029732

[Hard]
- I haven't played the map; but judging from your SV changes from the Timing menu, I don't recommend sharp changes like 1.0x > 0.5x, 0.75x > 0.25, and the other ways around as this would probably scare players on their first attempt. While this is acceptable on harder difficulties, I don't recommend doing this on this specific song :/
00:34:289 (34289|2) Move to 6th column.
00:34:983 (34983|1) Move to 5th column.
00:46:081 (46081|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.

That's all for now, I hope this helps! When I get the chance, I might continue modding for Maximum sometime later.
Good luck! :)
indyinyou
[Hard]

00:12:440 : soft-finish on 4
00:28:740 : soft-whitle
00:34:636 : soft-finish on 3
00:44:347 : soft-clap on 6
00:55:446 : soft-clap on 4
00:59:607 : ^
01:00:995 : ^
01:06:544 : soft-finish on 6
01:06:891 : ^ on 4
01:07:237 : ^ on 2
01:32:902 : - 01:33:596 : map this part / it up to you about this ;)
01:39:492 : soft-clap on 2
01:39:665 : ^
01:50:937 : soft-clap on 5 / soft-finish on 7
01:52:324 : soft-finish on 7
02:02:035 : ^ on 5
02:03:422 : soft-clap on 4

[Maximum]
00:12:440 : soft-finish + soft-clap
00:32:902 : soft-finish on 7
00:33:076 : soft-clap on 3
00:44:347 : soft-finish on 2
00:45:388 : soft-whistle on 6
01:06:544 : soft-fin + soft-clap
01:06:891 : ^
01:07:237 : ^
01:39:665 : soft-finish on 6
01:52:324 : soft-clap on 2

that all :D about easy and normal hitsound it ok for me
Rumia-
nice maps deserves star *
i'll mod this tomorrow , sorry for late reply , being inactive for quite a while now lolz
re- active /o/
Roxas
[General]
Change BG size (you need it 1024x768 or 1366x768)
Maybe edit the kiais? There are chorus here too 00:34:636 - 01:41:226 - 02:27:006 -
You use less than 80% of the mp3, you should cut it...

[Easy]
00:22:151 (22151|4) - Move right
00:57:180 - Add circle
00:58:220 (58220|4) - Delete this, move this 00:58:220 (58220|2) - left, and here 00:58:567 - add note in 3
01:03:422 (63422|3,63422|5) - Move left
01:13:480 (73480|5) - ^
01:17:642 (77642|4) - Move in 1st column

[Normal]
00:12:093 (12093|2) - Move right
00:12:960 (12960|6) - Well, those short LNs are a bit hard for normal imo (because there are notes too), what about to remove them all? (00:12:960 (12960|6,14347|1,15735|6) - )

For the rest patterns are okay... Maybe a bit hard for a normal.

[Hard]
00:45:388 (45388|3) - Move right
00:45:735 - Add note in 3
01:18:336 (78336|1) - Move left
Rumia-
:oops: as request, here is my mod ~

[Hard]
00:13:133 - add
00:14:521 - add
00:15:908 - add
00:16:428 - add at 1st collumn
00:16:602 - ^
00:17:295 - add
00:18:683 - add
00:19:376 - add
00:20:070 - add
00:20:763 - add
00:21:457 - add
00:22:151 - add at 4th and 1st collumn
00:22:844 - add at 1st collumn
00:23:191 - add at 5th collumn"
00:31:862 to 00:33:076 , suggest like this? http://puu.sh/4U9ah.jpg
00:33:422 - add
00:34:636 - add

[Maximum]
00:06:891 and 00:07:411 - 2 note is enuff?
00:07:584 - add
00:08:972 - add
00:10:012 - add
00:10:359 - add
add(2) - should be dense here with the finish sound
remove 1? - bass sound 2 note is nice , while snare is 3 notes|
00:14:434 - have sound , add?
00:15:388 (15388|4) - move 00:15:474
00:15:735 (15735|2) - move 00:15:821
00:16:081 (16081|2) - move 00:16:168
00:17:555 - add
00:17:382 - add
00:17:555 - add
00:17:815 (17815|1) - remove?
00:19:983 - add
00:22:844 - add 1 more
00:23:191 - add 1 more pattern like this? http://puu.sh/4U2W0.jpg
00:23:711 (23711|4,24058|3,24058|1) - dunno this refer to wat music?
00:28:220 (28220|2,28220|1,28220|4) - move to 00:28:394
00:28:220 - add
00:28:740 - add
00:31:862 to 00:32:729 is the same sound as 00:31:515 , why dount you make doubles?
00:33:249 - there is beat here
00:34:289 (34289|5,34289|4) - ??
00:42:960 shud be like this? http://puu.sh/4U37I.jpg
00:44:000 - snare sound should be 3 notes
00:50:070 - add 1 more
00:50:157 - add 2
00:56:486 - got beat here , add
add 1 note here 00:58:220 and 00:59:607
01:01:862 shud be a hold here also?
01:04:810 - add
01:05:850 - add
01:07:411 - add
01:09:318 (69318|3) - this hold , shud also be here 01:09:839 and 01:10:185
01:14:521 (74521|2,74521|0,74521|6,74521|4) - why 4 notes? doesnt have finish here , remove 1
01:15:908 - add 1 more
01:16:428 (76428|1,76602|2) - these 2 notes should be in same collumn
01:16:948 (76948|1,77122|2) - ^
01:19:029 - add 1 mmore
01:19:203 (79203|2) - remove
01:21:024 - add
01:23:018 (83018|4,83018|2,83018|0,83018|6,83191|5,83191|3,83191|1) - should be same amount and same collumn
01:26:573 - add
01:27:526 (87526|5,87873|5) - move up to the blue line
01:28:220 (88220|3) - ^
01:31:775 and 01:31:862 - add
01:34:983 - add
01:35:157 - ^
01:35:330 - ^
01:35:503 - ^
01:38:278 (98278|4,98451|2,98625|4,98798|2,98972|4,99145|2) - make double notes
01:40:012 (100012|4,100185|2) - ^
01:40:532 to 01:40:879 should be 1/4 stream
01:49:723 (109723|4,109896|5,110070|1,110417|5,110590|1) - double note pls
01:51:110 and 01:51:457 - add
02:02:209 - add
02:02:555 - add
02:02:729 - add
02:03:086 to 02:03:422 1/4 stream
02:04:810 (124810|5,125330|6,126197|0,128972|0,129492|0,130879|0,130879|2) - remoooooove , this part is soft , why should be more than 3 notes ?
02:11:052 - clap here only 1 note? add more
this is a Maximum diff, main beat shouldn't be ignored


============================================================================================
NOTE
- finish note till song end pls.
- background music is the main beat you should follow , not voice
- this map looks like normal autoconvert notes , ^ is make the map a "mania map"
- good luck
Topic Starter
Sorarei
Okay i think this is ready for rank
Loctav

Reikosaka wrote:

Okay i think this is ready for rank
Can't agree for now :C

[General]

Also please answer to all mods in detail. Else people don't know what you think about their suggestions. It's important to give feedback to the feedback!

[Easy]

In general, its well designed. Just some suggestions to improve the playability and readability.

00:23:538 (23538|6) - move to 7? (^)
01:02:729 (62729|1) - 1? (no need to "jack" on the easy, also easier to play)
01:04:116 (64116|5) - 7? (^)
01:04:810 (64810|0,64810|6,65157|3,65503|5,65503|1) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Ys28/6da99d04af.jpg
01:14:868 (74868|2) - 2?
01:29:434 (89434|5) - 6?
01:46:775 (106775|5,106775|6,107815|4) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Ys5W/4fdb6ba7b8.jpg
01:48:162 (108162|1,108162|0,109203|2) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Ys7g/7186868708.jpg
01:50:937 (110937|0,110937|1,111977|2) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Ys9s/8331583689.jpg
01:52:324 (112324|2) - if you applied the last ones, put this on line 4
01:53:365 (113365|1) - 3?
01:55:446 (115446|0,115446|2) - move 1 left? (1,3)
01:56:833 (116833|3,116833|5) - move 1 right? (5,7)

[Normal]

I see no reason to change the SV at all. Please remove all SV changes, since they are quite confusing and offthrowing. SV changes do not work like that (they might do in Taiko).


00:12:093 (12093|2,12093|5) - put these on 4 and 6, else it plays a bit awkward for beginners
00:12:440 (12440|2,12440|1,12787|3) - if you fixed the one above, you can move this stuff one left: http://puu.sh/4YsmP/5af0c5dee6.jpg
00:40:792 (40792|2) - uuuh, what is that? Snap this on white tick ahead. I know where you are coming from, but snapping it here to the bluetick feels bad, since you are snapping it to the introduction and not to the emphazied drumbeat. And without the surrounding notes, it doesn't work.
00:42:266 (42266|4) - ^
01:19:723 (79723|5) - put on 6? don't put stuff so close to holds D:
01:21:110 (81110|1) - 2? they shouldnt be so close to the hold, since it makes you break easily
01:22:498 (82498|0) - 1?
01:23:885 (83885|6) - 7?
01:58:480 (118480|1) - same as in 00:40:792 (40792|2)
01:59:868 (119868|5) - ^
02:20:070 (140070|3) - end on downbeat? ( 02:21:457 )
02:21:457 (141457|0) - ^ ( 02:22:844 )
02:21:457 (141457|0) - ^ ( 02:24:232 )
02:33:162 (153162|5) - same as in 00:40:792 (40792|2)
02:34:550 (154550|1) - ^
02:46:428 (166428|1) - put on 4 please D:

[Hard]

Same goes here for all SV changes. I see no point in adding them at all. They don't serve any purpose. The song feels "less dense" enough when the note density decreases. No need to slow down the scrolling speed.

00:15:214 (15214|4,15214|1,15388|3,15561|2,15735|3,15908|4,16081|3,16255|5) - Basically, switching from one hold side to another while playing stairs is really bothersome and really unneeded here. It makes you jump more than you actually should. You should circumvent this awkward behavior. try this: http://puu.sh/4YsSL/f70c5eebbc.jpg
00:16:602 (16602|2,16602|5,16775|3,16948|2,17122|4,17295|3) - try this: http://puu.sh/4YsTN/43ea8172b4.jpg
00:38:278 (38278|3,38451|5,38451|4,38625|3,38798|2) - I would prefer this: http://puu.sh/4YsYY/9b217afc4a.png
00:42:613 (42613|1) - 2?
01:21:804 (81804|4,81804|6,81977|3,82151|2,82324|3,82498|4) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Yt5s/743f76776e.jpg
01:24:578 (84578|5) - 6?
01:24:752 (84752|4) - 5?
01:24:925 (84925|3) - 4?
01:25:099 (85099|2) - 5?
01:25:966 (85966|6) - 7?
01:26:313 (86313|2) - 6?
01:27:526 (87526|3) - 4?
01:29:954 (89954|5,90041|4,90128|3) - 6,5,4 please D:
01:39:145 (99145|5,99145|3,99318|5,99318|3,99492|3,99492|1,99665|1,99665|3) - try this: http://puu.sh/4YteU/4dea55ce44.jpg
01:39:839 (99839|3) - remove? I don't know what this one is supposed to follow, tbh.
01:43:654 (103654|3,103654|4) - 4,5 please.
01:43:827 (103827|0) - 3?
01:45:561 (105561|0,105561|1) - 1,2
01:45:908 (105908|5,105908|4) - 5,6
01:46:081 (106081|4) - remove, trust me. It plays quite better without that one.
02:17:122 (137122|6) - 3?

[Maximum]

Same here with the SV changes...

01:17:122 (77122|4,77122|0) - 1,5?
01:17:295 (77295|1) - 2?
01:40:489 (100489|3) - this is totally unneccessary imo. Remove that one.
01:40:879 - you could add some 1/4 alternate pattern or stair here instead.


Have a star for now. I highly recommend you to get some more advanced opinions on the Maximum and Hard. From what I see in the thread, many mods weren't really indepth and just minor suggestions. You should poke PROGUY again for a mod on Maximum, I'd like to see his opinions on that.
I'll consider rechecking it, if you give me detailed feedback of what you fixed and what you did not fix and if you bring some other profenient modders to take a look on the higher diffs (Hard, Maximum). Please provide valid reasons when denying something.
Yet it's a well designed mapset with some flaws that I want to see sorted out first.
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Loctav wrote:

Reikosaka wrote:

Okay i think this is ready for rank
Can't agree for now :C

[General]

Also please answer to all mods in detail. Else people don't know what you think about their suggestions. It's important to give feedback to the feedback!

[Easy]

In general, its well designed. Just some suggestions to improve the playability and readability.

00:23:538 (23538|6) - move to 7? (^) moved
01:02:729 (62729|1) - 1? (no need to "jack" on the easy, also easier to play) removed
01:04:116 (64116|5) - 7? (^) removed
01:04:810 (64810|0,64810|6,65157|3,65503|5,65503|1) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Ys28/6da99d04af.jpg fixed but little closer make it easily
01:14:868 (74868|2) - 2? not fixed
01:29:434 (89434|5) - 6? fixed
01:46:775 (106775|5,106775|6,107815|4) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Ys5W/4fdb6ba7b8.jpg not fixed
01:48:162 (108162|1,108162|0,109203|2) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Ys7g/7186868708.jpg not fixed
01:50:937 (110937|0,110937|1,111977|2) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Ys9s/8331583689.jpg fixed
01:52:324 (112324|2) - if you applied the last ones, put this on line 4 fixed
01:53:365 (113365|1) - 3? move to 2
01:55:446 (115446|0,115446|2) - move 1 left? (1,3) not fixed
01:56:833 (116833|3,116833|5) - move 1 right? (5,7) not fixed

[Normal]

I see no reason to change the SV at all. Please remove all SV changes, since they are quite confusing and offthrowing. SV changes do not work like that (they might do in Taiko).


00:12:093 (12093|2,12093|5) - put these on 4 and 6, else it plays a bit awkward for beginnersfixed
00:12:440 (12440|2,12440|1,12787|3) - if you fixed the one above, you can move this stuff one left: http://puu.sh/4YsmP/5af0c5dee6.jpg fixed
00:40:792 (40792|2) - uuuh, what is that? Snap this on white tick ahead. I know where you are coming from, but snapping it here to the bluetick feels bad, since you are snapping it to the introduction and not to the emphazied drumbeat. And without the surrounding notes, it doesn't work. a modder suggestion to follow blue line , moved to 1/1 beat
00:42:266 (42266|4) - ^
01:19:723 (79723|5) - put on 6? don't put stuff so close to holds D: move to other way
01:21:110 (81110|1) - 2? they shouldnt be so close to the hold, since it makes you break easily ^
01:22:498 (82498|0) - 1? ^
01:23:885 (83885|6) - 7? ^
01:58:480 (118480|1) - same as in 00:40:792 (40792|2)
01:59:868 (119868|5) - ^
02:20:070 (140070|3) - end on downbeat? ( 02:21:457 )
02:21:457 (141457|0) - ^ ( 02:22:844 )
02:21:457 (141457|0) - ^ ( 02:24:232 )
02:33:162 (153162|5) - same as in 00:40:792 (40792|2) fixed to another way
02:34:550 (154550|1) - ^
02:46:428 (166428|1) - put on 4 please D: move to another way

[Hard]

Same goes here for all SV changes. I see no point in adding them at all. They don't serve any purpose. The song feels "less dense" enough when the note density decreases. No need to slow down the scrolling speed.

00:15:214 (15214|4,15214|1,15388|3,15561|2,15735|3,15908|4,16081|3,16255|5) - Basically, switching from one hold side to another while playing stairs is really bothersome and really unneeded here. It makes you jump more than you actually should. You should circumvent this awkward behavior. try this: http://puu.sh/4YsSL/f70c5eebbc.jpg fixed
00:16:602 (16602|2,16602|5,16775|3,16948|2,17122|4,17295|3) - try this: http://puu.sh/4YsTN/43ea8172b4.jpg fixed but other way
00:38:278 (38278|3,38451|5,38451|4,38625|3,38798|2) - I would prefer this: http://puu.sh/4YsYY/9b217afc4a.png fixed
00:42:613 (42613|1) - 2? fixed
01:21:804 (81804|4,81804|6,81977|3,82151|2,82324|3,82498|4) - try this: http://puu.sh/4Yt5s/743f76776e.jpg fixed but other way , you want to make it easily right ?
01:24:578 (84578|5) - 6? not fixed
01:24:752 (84752|4) - 5? ^
01:24:925 (84925|3) - 4? ^
01:25:099 (85099|2) - 5? ^
01:25:966 (85966|6) - 7? ^
01:26:313 (86313|2) - 6? ^
01:27:526 (87526|3) - 4? ^
01:29:954 (89954|5,90041|4,90128|3) - 6,5,4 please D: still same, not fixed
01:39:145 (99145|5,99145|3,99318|5,99318|3,99492|3,99492|1,99665|1,99665|3) - try this: http://puu.sh/4YteU/4dea55ce44.jpg usually i'm do different position at finish note, so i'm keep this
01:39:839 (99839|3) - remove? I don't know what this one is supposed to follow, tbh. removed
01:43:654 (103654|3,103654|4) - 4,5 please. fixed
01:43:827 (103827|0) - 3? fixed
01:45:561 (105561|0,105561|1) - 1,2 fixed
01:45:908 (105908|5,105908|4) - 5,6 fixed (6,7)
01:46:081 (106081|4) - remove, trust me. It plays quite better without that one. remove
02:17:122 (137122|6) - 3?

[Maximum]

Same here with the SV changes...

01:17:122 (77122|4,77122|0) - 1,5? keeping that main priority 01:16:428 (76428|2,76602|2,76602|1,76948|1,77122|2,77122|1) -
01:17:295 (77295|1) - 2? not fixed
01:40:489 (100489|3) - this is totally unneccessary imo. Remove that one. remove
01:40:879 - you could add some 1/4 alternate pattern or stair here instead. not yet


Have a star for now. I highly recommend you to get some more advanced opinions on the Maximum and Hard. From what I see in the thread, many mods weren't really indepth and just minor suggestions. You should poke PROGUY again for a mod on Maximum, I'd like to see his opinions on that.
I'll consider rechecking it, if you give me detailed feedback of what you fixed and what you did not fix and if you bring some other profenient modders to take a look on the higher diffs (Hard, Maximum). Please provide valid reasons when denying something.
Yet it's a well designed mapset with some flaws that I want to see sorted out first.
Thanks for mod and suggestion ! , i'm still newbie about modding
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