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REDALiCE - Kizuato [OsuMania]

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Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, December 15, 2013 at 9:35:20 PM

Artist: REDALiCE
Title: Kizuato
Source: Touhou
Tags: alice emotion a☆ru alice margatroid the doll maker of bucuresti overdrive c83
BPM: 173
Filesize: 6152kb
Play Time: 02:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 7Key (1.09 stars, 337 notes)
  2. Hard - 7Key (3.53 stars, 1093 notes)
  3. Maximum - 7Key (4.43 stars, 1398 notes)
  4. Normal - 7Key (2.35 stars, 737 notes)
Download: REDALiCE - Kizuato
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st osu!mania mapset
Album : OverDrive
Vocal : a☆ru
Arrangement : REDALiCE
Please re-download again
BG Changed 15/12/2013
Thanks to indyinyou for custom hitsound
Last edited by Sorarei , edited 41 times in total.
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
YunoFanatic
mod

Normal

00:07:403 delete the clap on the note the clap was harder before
here too 00:08790
00:17:634 there was a beat and you didnt follow add note
00:17:981 ^
00:19:368 i know you followed the vocal but that isnt enough you need to follow the beat to! add note here on the 4th column so it connects the current pattern and the next pattern
00:42:952 - 00:43:992 try this placement http://puu.sh/4xaFO.jpg


wow this mapset is sooooo good there are only few suggestion for normal take a star
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

YunoFanatic wrote:

mod

Normal

00:07:403 delete the clap on the note the clap was harder before Fixed
here too 00:08790
00:17:634 there was a beat and you didnt follow add note Added note
00:17:981 ^
00:19:368 i know you followed the vocal but that isnt enough you need to follow the beat to! add note here on the 4th column so it connects the current pattern and the next pattern Added note
00:42:952 - 00:43:992 try this placement http://puu.sh/4xaFO.jpg I think i am already do this :s

wow this mapset is sooooo good there are only few suggestion for normal take a star
thanks for mod ^^
[Emiria]
1,010 posts
Joined November 2012
[Emiria]
mark wait me ~~~
M4M plz http://osu.ppy.sh/s/114898

sorry i'm so late

i'm poor at 7k mapping so only my personal opinion
NM
the speed change is so difficult.
00:09:657 - add one note ?
00:11:044 - ^
00:40:177 (40177|3) - move to 00:40:351 -
00:41:564 (41564|4) - move to 00:41:738 -
00:42:605 - add one note ?
00:44:339 (44339|4) -move to 00:44:513 -
00:51:275 (51275|0,51276|2,52662|6,52662|4) - i can't understand these 4 long note :o
01:01:854 (61854|0) - move to 5
01:07:403 - add a note?
01:44:338 (104338|4,104511|5,104511|6,104858|2,105032|0,105032|1) - it isn't very reasonable i think
01:48:501 - add a note like 01:47:807 -
01:49:195 - ^
01:50:928 (110928|5) - move to 3
01:52:662 (112662|2) - i think it is a stress maybe you should emphsize
01:54:049 (114049|4) - ^
01:55:436 (115436|1) - ^
01:55:436 (115436|1,117865|6,117865|4,119252|0,119253|2) -i can't understand these 4 long note :o
02:00:640 (120640|0) - maybe end at 02:01:160 -
02:13:125 - add a note
02:24:224 (144224|4,144224|2) - i can't understand these 2 long note may be they will end at02:25:611 - :o


HD
00:10:177 - add a note
00:11:044 - ^
00:11:738 - ^
00:12:085 - ^
00:13:125 - ^
00:14:513 - ^
00:15:900 - ^
00:17:287 - ^
00:18:695 - ^
00:19:368 - add 2note
00:21:449 - ^
00:25:784 - add a note at 3
00:46:073 - add a note
00:46:594 - ^
00:47:461 - ^
00:48:154 - ^
00:48:848 - ^
00:59:970 - ^
01:01:334 - ^
01:02:718 - ^
01:04:108 - ^
01:07:403 - ^
01:19:715 - ^
01:21:102 - ^
01:22:474 - ^
01:23:877 - ^
01:25:265 - ^
01:26:669 - ^
01:28:039 - ^
01:46:592 (106592|3,106766|3,106939|3,107113|3,107373|3,107633|3) - to many space bar note maybe it is difficult to play
02:02:201 - add a note
02:02:547 - ^
02:08:964 - ^
02:10:351 - ^
02:11:738 - ^
02:15:900 - ^
02:17:287 - ^
02:18:688 - ^
02:20:062 - ^
02:21:449 - ^



MX is beyond my ability sorry :o


good luck~
Last edited by [Emiria] , edited 1 time in total.
Remillion Cross
522 posts
Joined October 2012
Remillion Cross
Hello Reikosaka o/ as your requested me in pm, i will mod your map. This is just recommended and fixing, so you can accept or ignore this mod.

Normal
* 00:12:085(12085|3) - move circle to 00:12:085(12085|2) -
* 00:43:992(43992|4) - move circle to 00:43:992(43992|3) - it will be cool
* 01:08:443(68443|2) - move circle to 01:08:443(68443|1) - ( recommendation )
* 01:08:790(68790|3) - move circle to 01:08:790(68790|2) - ( recommendation )
* 01:08:964(68964|4) - move circle to 01:08:964(68964|3) - ( recommendation )
* 01:09:137(69137|2) - mpve circle to 01:09:137(69137|3) - ( recommendation )
* 01:09:310(69310|3) - move slider to 01:09:310(69310|2) - ( recommendation )
* 01:09:831(69831|5) - move slider to 01:09:831(69831|4) - ( recommendation )
* 01:11:738(71738|2) - move circle to 01:11:737(71737|4) -
* 01:28:039(88038|4) - move circle to 01:28:039(88038|6) -
* 01:28:385(88385|4) - move circle to 01:28:385(88385|6) -

Hard
* 00:28:039(28039|0) - delete that circle
* 01:18:675(78675|3) - add circle
* 01:34:628(94628|6) - delete that circle
* 01:42:084(102084|0,102084|2) - move the circles to 01:42:084(102084|1,102084|3) -
* 01:42:257(102257|3,102257|4) - move the circles to 01:42:257(102257|0,102257|2) -
* 01:43:471(103471|5,103471|6) - move the circles to 01:43:471(103471|2,103472|3) -
* 01:43:646(103646|3) - move the circle to 01:43:646(103646|4) -
* 01:44:511(104511|5) - move the circle to 01:44:511(104511|0) -

Maximum
* 00:37:055(37055|3,37055|4,37055|6) - move those circles to 00:37:055(37055|0,37255|1,37255|3) -
* 00:38:270(38270|0) - move the circle to 00:38:270(38270|1) -
* 00:38:443(38443|1,38443|2,38443|4) - move those circles to 00:38:443(38443|3,38443|5,38443|6) -
* 00:44:686(44686|4) - mpve circle to 00:44:686(44686|3) -
* 00:44:860(44860|1,44860|2) - move those circles to 00:44:860(44860|2,44860|4) -
* 01:26:651(86651|1) - move circle to 01:26:651(86651|0) -
* 01:29:078(89078|3) - move circle to 01:29:078(89078|0) -
* 01:29:252(89252|4) - move circle to 01:29:252(89252|3) -
* 01:32:721(92721|5) - move circle to 01:32:721(92721|6) -
* 02:36:189(156189|5) - move circle to 02:36:189(156189|6) -
* 02:36:362(156362|6) - move circle to 02:36:362(156362|5) -

your map is cool and so many circles here, but it's ok.
those are my mods, just fixing, i wish my mod make your map better xD

i like this song and mapset <3
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hello Reikosaka o/ as your requested me in pm, i will mod your map. This is just recommended and fixing, so you can accept or ignore this mod.

Normal
* 00:12:085(12085|3) - move circle to 00:12:085(12085|2) - fixed
* 00:43:992(43992|4) - move circle to 00:43:992(43992|3) - it will be cool
* 01:08:443(68443|2) - move circle to 01:08:443(68443|1) - ( recommendation ) fixed
* 01:08:790(68790|3) - move circle to 01:08:790(68790|2) - ( recommendation ) fixed
* 01:08:964(68964|4) - move circle to 01:08:964(68964|3) - ( recommendation ) fixed but i change to another place
* 01:09:137(69137|2) - mpve circle to 01:09:137(69137|3) - ( recommendation ) fixed
* 01:09:310(69310|3) - move slider to 01:09:310(69310|2) - ( recommendation ) fixed
* 01:09:831(69831|5) - move slider to 01:09:831(69831|4) - ( recommendation )
* 01:11:738(71738|2) - move circle to 01:11:737(71737|4) -
* 01:28:039(88038|4) - move circle to 01:28:039(88038|6) -
* 01:28:385(88385|4) - move circle to 01:28:385(88385|6) -

Hard
* 00:28:039(28039|0) - delete that circle
* 01:18:675(78675|3) - add circle
* 01:34:628(94628|6) - delete that circle
* 01:42:084(102084|0,102084|2) - move the circles to 01:42:084(102084|1,102084|3) -
* 01:42:257(102257|3,102257|4) - move the circles to 01:42:257(102257|0,102257|2) -
* 01:43:471(103471|5,103471|6) - move the circles to 01:43:471(103471|2,103472|3) -
* 01:43:646(103646|3) - move the circle to 01:43:646(103646|4) -
* 01:44:511(104511|5) - move the circle to 01:44:511(104511|0) -

Maximum
* 00:37:055(37055|3,37055|4,37055|6) - move those circles to 00:37:055(37055|0,37255|1,37255|3) -
* 00:38:270(38270|0) - move the circle to 00:38:270(38270|1) -
* 00:38:443(38443|1,38443|2,38443|4) - move those circles to 00:38:443(38443|3,38443|5,38443|6) -
* 00:44:686(44686|4) - mpve circle to 00:44:686(44686|3) -
* 00:44:860(44860|1,44860|2) - move those circles to 00:44:860(44860|2,44860|4) -
* 01:26:651(86651|1) - move circle to 01:26:651(86651|0) -
* 01:29:078(89078|3) - move circle to 01:29:078(89078|0) -
* 01:29:252(89252|4) - move circle to 01:29:252(89252|3) -
* 01:32:721(92721|5) - move circle to 01:32:721(92721|6) -
* 02:36:189(156189|5) - move circle to 02:36:189(156189|6) -
* 02:36:362(156362|6) - move circle to 02:36:362(156362|5) -

your map is cool and so many circles here, but it's ok.
those are my mods, just fixing, i wish my mod make your map better xD

i like this song and mapset <3
thank you for mod , i still think to do with hard and maximum
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI
From modding queue~ >.o/

[General]
00:28:386 - The green point here is kinda pointless, either you extend it to earlier or remove it

[Normal]
00:14:513 - Add circle on this line
00:15:900 - ^
01:24:570 (84570|0) - Change into hold
01:45:378 (105378|4,105378|2,105552|3,105725|4,105725|5,105899|3,106072|2,106072|1) - Maybe alittle too hard for normal diff? Just a suggest;
~Didn't saw much problem here, great

[Hard]
00:10:698 (10698|4) - Add circle
00:16:420 (16420|2) - ^
00:18:675 (18675|5) - ^
00:19:368 (19368|1) - ^
01:46:940 (106940|1) - ^
01:51:621 (111621|2) - Remove this
~Nice also, try to make 2circle on a line when the harder beat drop

[Insane]
~Didn't saw any problem here, its great
or maybe im too bad :p
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

_AI wrote:

From modding queue~ >.o/

[General]
00:28:386 - The green point here is kinda pointless, either you extend it to earlier or remove it if i remove i think will be sudden fast

[Normal]
00:14:513 - Add circle on this line
00:15:900 - ^
01:24:570 (84570|0) - Change into hold
01:45:378 (105378|4,105378|2,105552|3,105725|4,105725|5,105899|3,106072|2,106072|1) - Maybe alittle too hard for normal diff? Just a suggest;
~Didn't saw much problem here, great Reduce and fixed

[Hard]
00:10:698 (10698|4) - Add circle
00:16:420 (16420|2) - ^
00:18:675 (18675|5) - ^
00:19:368 (19368|1) - ^
01:46:940 (106940|1) - ^
01:51:621 (111621|2) - Remove this Removed
~Nice also, try to make 2circle on a line when the harder beat drop

[Insane]
~Didn't saw any problem here, its great
or maybe im too bad :p
thanks for appreciation and mod :D
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

victorica_db wrote:

mark wait me ~~~
M4M plz http://osu.ppy.sh/s/114898

sorry i'm so late

i'm poor at 7k mapping so only my personal opinion
NM
the speed change is so difficult.
00:09:657 - add one note ? added
00:11:044 - ^ didn't add , still thinking
00:40:177 (40177|3) - move to 00:40:351 -
00:41:564 (41564|4) - move to 00:41:738 -
00:42:605 - add one note ? added
00:44:339 (44339|4) -move to 00:44:513 - moved
00:51:275 (51275|0,51276|2,52662|6,52662|4) - i can't understand these 4 long note just normal hold note , followed by vocal
01:01:854 (61854|0) - move to 5 moved
01:07:403 - add a note? it make harder so i'm didn't add
01:44:338 (104338|4,104511|5,104511|6,104858|2,105032|0,105032|1) - it isn't very reasonable i think nope
01:48:501 - add a note like 01:47:807 - added
01:49:195 - ^ added
01:50:928 (110928|5) - move to 3 didn't move but change style
01:52:662 (112662|2) - i think it is a stress maybe you should emphsize fixed
01:54:049 (114049|4) - ^ fixed
01:55:436 (115436|1) - ^ fixed
01:55:436 (115436|1,117865|6,117865|4,119252|0,119253|2) -i can't understand these 4 long note same as before
02:00:640 (120640|0) - maybe end at 02:01:160 - still at place
02:13:125 - add a note added
02:24:224 (144224|4,144224|2) - i can't understand these 2 long note may be they will end at02:25:611 - :o


HD
00:10:177 - add a note
00:11:044 - ^
00:11:738 - ^
00:12:085 - ^
00:13:125 - ^
00:14:513 - ^
00:15:900 - ^
00:17:287 - ^
00:18:695 - ^
00:19:368 - add 2note
00:21:449 - ^
00:25:784 - add a note at 3 added
00:46:073 - add a note
00:46:594 - ^
00:47:461 - ^
00:48:154 - ^
00:48:848 - ^
00:59:970 - ^
01:01:334 - ^
01:02:718 - ^
01:04:108 - ^
01:07:403 - ^
01:19:715 - ^
01:21:102 - ^
01:22:474 - ^
01:23:877 - ^
01:25:265 - ^
01:26:669 - ^
01:28:039 - ^
01:46:592 (106592|3,106766|3,106939|3,107113|3,107373|3,107633|3) - to many space bar note maybe it is difficult to play important things , fixed
02:02:201 - add a note
02:02:547 - ^
02:08:964 - ^
02:10:351 - ^
02:11:738 - ^
02:15:900 - ^
02:17:287 - ^
02:18:688 - ^
02:20:062 - ^
02:21:449 - ^



MX is beyond my ability sorry :o


good luck~
i'm avoiding to add many note especially triples , thanks for mod anyway !
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
halo~ o/

saya lumayan noob kalo osuman, jadi maaf gabisa mod diff yg susah ;__;

[General]

  • buat jaga2 aja sih, mending bg-nya 1024x768 , aku ndak pernah liat yg ukuran 1028x643 .__. /atau gua yg kudet /desh

    dari AiMod, jangan lupa Resnap All Notes di Timing->Resnap All Notes (buat semua diff)

[Normal]

  • itu kayaknya ada garis ijo yg belum di-snap 02:38:093 - 02:49:191 -

    ada beberapa speed changes yg menurutku agak susah buat Normal, kayak 00:29:079 - 01:26:650 (86650|3) - 02:26:998 - , bedanya lumayan kontras sama speed sebelumnya. kalo buat hard/maximum sih okelah, tapi kalo buat normal, yaahh.. gua pas main kaget sumpah ini cuman opini kok ;w; bisa dipertimbangkan lagi, atau mungkin bisa nanya2 BAT osuman
    SPOILER
    02:13:125 - perubahan speed disini agak bikin membingungkan, soalnya ga ada perubahan signifikan di lagunya dan perubahannya cuman bentar. kalo di diff lain mungkin ga apa2, tapi kalo di normal, saran saya sih gausah pake speed change
    00:13:819 (13819|1,13819|3,14166|2,14339|0,14339|1,14860|3,15033|1,15206|4,15206|2,15553|3,15727|6,15727|5) - agak susah buat noob buat gua bisa jadi. speed-nya juga lambat, malah susah dibaca
    01:25:263 (85263|2) - clap?

    kayaknya Normal cuman segitu aja mod-nya, masih gak sreg sama speed changes-nya _(:'3_
    gua cuman bisa main normal disini _(:'3_ kalo mau liat replay normal http://puu.sh/4ADHA.osr /kabur
maaf kalo mod-nya nda guna ;w;
good luck~

edit : 600th posts ftw
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

halo~ o/

saya lumayan noob kalo osuman, jadi maaf gabisa mod diff yg susah ;__;

[General]

  • buat jaga2 aja sih, mending bg-nya 1024x768 , aku ndak pernah liat yg ukuran 1028x643 .__. /atau gua yg kudet /desh

    dari AiMod, jangan lupa Resnap All Notes di Timing->Resnap All Notes (buat semua diff)

[Normal]

  • itu kayaknya ada garis ijo yg belum di-snap 02:38:093 - 02:49:191 -

    ada beberapa speed changes yg menurutku agak susah buat Normal, kayak 00:29:079 - 01:26:650 (86650|3) - 02:26:998 - , bedanya lumayan kontras sama speed sebelumnya. kalo buat hard/maximum sih okelah, tapi kalo buat normal, yaahh.. gua pas main kaget sumpah ini cuman opini kok ;w; bisa dipertimbangkan lagi, atau mungkin bisa nanya2 BAT osuman
    SPOILER
    02:13:125 - perubahan speed disini agak bikin membingungkan, soalnya ga ada perubahan signifikan di lagunya dan perubahannya cuman bentar. kalo di diff lain mungkin ga apa2, tapi kalo di normal, saran saya sih gausah pake speed change
    00:13:819 (13819|1,13819|3,14166|2,14339|0,14339|1,14860|3,15033|1,15206|4,15206|2,15553|3,15727|6,15727|5) - agak susah buat noob buat gua bisa jadi. speed-nya juga lambat, malah susah dibaca
    01:25:263 (85263|2) - clap?

    kayaknya Normal cuman segitu aja mod-nya, masih gak sreg sama speed changes-nya _(:'3_
    gua cuman bisa main normal disini _(:'3_ kalo mau liat replay normal http://puu.sh/4ADHA.osr /kabur
maaf kalo mod-nya nda guna ;w;
good luck~

edit : 600th posts ftw
Speed change reduced , Background akan menyusul
Setelah liat Aimods ternyata semua diff pada unsnapped termasuk speed change
Btw thanks for mod !
Bruce
1,076 posts
Joined January 2013
Bruce
Um...just some suggestions :oops: column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Normal
Speed changes is too diffcult, you need cut some
00:20:755 - Add 1 or 2 note
00:21:449 (21449|5) - Move to 5
00:22:143 (22143|3) - Move to 6
00:37:750 (37750|3) - Move to 1 or 3
00:38:443 (38443|3) - Move to 5 or 7
00:54:050 - ~00:55:091 - upset can be better
01:00:640 (60640|5) - Move to left hand
01:07:403 - Add 1 or 2 note
01:40:177 - Add 1 or 2 note
01:43:124 (103124|3) - Move to 3
01:43:646 (103646|3) - Move to 5
01:46:594 - Add 1 note
01:47:113 (107113|6) - Move to left hand
01:47:806 (107806|0) - Move to right hand
01:51:968 (111968|4,111968|3) - remove 1 note
02:01:854 (121854|5) - Move to 2
02:11:737 (131737|6) - Move to 3
02:36:189 (156189|3,156362|3,156536|3) - upset

Hard
00:24:744 (24744|5) -become a note
00:41:218 (41218|5) - remove
00:41:391 (41391|6) - become a note
00:53:010 - Add 1 note
02:38:617 - ~02:46:073 - needn't 2note with 1LN? I suggest remove 1 note
02:47:981 - Add 1 note
02:48:328 - ↑

Maximum
02:47:981 - Add 1 note
02:48:328 - Add 1 note

Nice diff :oops:

like this song :)
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Simple_Star wrote:

Um...just some suggestions :oops: column: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Normal
Speed changes is too diffcult, you need cut some
00:20:755 - Add 1 or 2 note
00:21:449 (21449|5) - Move to 5
00:22:143 (22143|3) - Move to 6
00:37:750 (37750|3) - Move to 1 or 3
00:38:443 (38443|3) - Move to 5 or 7
00:54:050 - ~00:55:091 - upset can be better
01:00:640 (60640|5) - Move to left hand
01:07:403 - Add 1 or 2 note
01:40:177 - Add 1 or 2 note
01:43:124 (103124|3) - Move to 3
01:43:646 (103646|3) - Move to 5
01:46:594 - Add 1 note
01:47:113 (107113|6) - Move to left hand
01:47:806 (107806|0) - Move to right hand
01:51:968 (111968|4,111968|3) - remove 1 note
02:01:854 (121854|5) - Move to 2
02:11:737 (131737|6) - Move to 3
02:36:189 (156189|3,156362|3,156536|3) - upset

Hard
00:24:744 (24744|5) -become a note
00:41:218 (41218|5) - remove
00:41:391 (41391|6) - become a note
00:53:010 - Add 1 note
02:38:617 - ~02:46:073 - needn't 2note with 1LN? I suggest remove 1 note
02:47:981 - Add 1 note
02:48:328 - ↑

Maximum
02:47:981 - Add 1 note
02:48:328 - Add 1 note

Nice diff :oops:

like this song :)
thanks for mod and appreciation :D
richardfeder
1,056 posts
Joined March 2013
richardfeder
Sorry for being late ^^
SPOILER
Normal
Just some suggestion XD:
00:07:923 (7923|2,8097|1) - exchange their column according to pitch

00:09:137 (9137|3,9484|5) - ^ and move 00:09:657 (9657|2,9657|3) - to 0 and 2, this seems more handy

00:10:177 (10177|3,10177|4) - should be placed at the same column as (9657|2,9657|3) - since their sound the same. This makes your map more organized.

00:11:044 (11044|2) - double notes not single. This is accent and should enjoy the same treatment as what 00:10:177 (10177|3,10177|4) - and 00:09:657 (9657|2,9657|3) - . To make it easy to play, as what I suggest above, spread them (do not close to each other) and place them in the order of pitch

00:17:634 (17634|3,17981|4,17981|2) - those two surprise me XD. you are mapping human voice and suddenly when the voice just end you add drums :o this is a little confusing, players cannot tell what you are following and what your notes meaning since you shift you focus just because one instrument, or voice, end and you do not leave the space blank. If you still want to follow the voice of singer just make 00:17:114 (17114|4) - a long note and delete notes for drums. And by the way people usually do not map human voice a lot :D Maybe consider map drums instead of voice? since you start doing drums after 00:22:143 (22143|1,22143|5) - and those drums are much more making sense XDthis require a little remap all the notes from 00:12:432 (12432|3) - to 00:22:143 (22143|1,22143|5) - XD all up to you just suggestion

00:23:790 (23790|2) - add it has sound there should be blank

00:25:264 (25264|6) - ^ and move 00:25:611 (25611|6,25958|4,26305|2) - two column left

00:26:651 (26651|3) - ^

00:28:732 (28732|3) - ^

00:33:068 (33068|2) - move to 00:32:981 (32981|2) -

00:33:587 (33587|4) - delete... you all use single and then double comes out XD

00:34:281 (34281|3) - ^ not heavy drum, not necessary here

00:35:148 (35148|1) - move to 3 [0|1|2|3|4|5|6] by the way XD

00:35:495 (35495|5) - move to 3

00:36:535 (36535|6,36882|0) - ^ try to avoid hitting in the same column continuously

00:37:922 (37922|4,38269|2) - ^ i not so sure about this...maybe pressing space too much, in fact any notes like this you can put them to different column, just let them make sense and easy to press is enough w

00:38:617 (38617|3) - add

00:40:870 (40870|2) - move to 00:40:784 (40784|2) -

00:42:258 (42258|5) - move to 00:42:172 (42172|5) -

00:45:726 (45726|0) - LN like this... I do not quite understand ^^

00:49:715 (49715|2) - add

00:50:062 (50062|4) - ^

00:50:582 (50582|0) - ^

00:51:275 (51275|0,51276|2) - strange... just go on map your drums? what are these LN...it seems voice...?

00:55:264 (55264|5) - add

00:55:438 (55438|3) - move to 4

00:56:304 (56304|4) - move to 00:55:958 (55958|1) -

00:56:477 (56477|1,56477|3) - single is enough?

00:58:038 (58038|3) - remove. no sound

00:59:425 (59425|3) - ^ no sound

01:00:813 (60813|4) - ^

01:02:200 (62200|2) - move to 01:02:027 (62027|2) -

01:03:587 (63587|3) - same treatment, put it on the drum, not somewhere no sound

01:04:974 (64974|3) - ^

01:05:148 (65148|4,65149|5,65495|3) - complete the drums here, beats are missing. and i suggest that move those notes to left hand so that they will become easy to press

01:06:189 (66189|1) - add

01:06:362 (66362|3) - move to 2

01:28:731 (88731|2) - move to 6

01:29:078 (89078|3) - delete

01:29:425 (89425|4) - move to 0

01:30:466 - same as previous...make it complete

01:40:003 (100003|3) - move to 4

01:40:177 (100177|0,100177|2) - add

01:40:870 (100870|2,100870|4) - remove

01:51:276 (111276|5) - move to 01:51:102 (111102|3) - and 01:51:276 (111276|6) - move to 01:51:276 (111276|2) - and add at 01:51:276 (111276|0) -

01:51:449 (111449|1) - add

01:51:795 (111795|5,111968|4,111969|3) - same as previous

01:56:130 (116130|3,116130|2,116477|4,116477|5) - spread them and add at 01:56:305 -

01:56:651 - ^

01:57:865 (117865|6,117865|4) - same as previous...strange

02:02:893 (122893|0,123068|2,123068|1) - same as previous

02:05:668 (125668|2,125841|1,126015|1) - place them as stair(pitch) and 02:07:055 (127055|2,127229|1,127402|1) - ....all the same.never put them in the same column without reason XD

02:14:686 (134686|6) - place it to 02:14:513 (134513|6) -

02:19:368 (139368|0) - move to 6

02:33:935 (153935|2,153935|0,154455|4,154455|6) - inconsistency with voice-you map some voice with two LN while then give up and leave it blank, why not just put four LN that connected with each other instead of 02:33:935 (153935|2,153935|0,154455|6,154455|4,155149|3) -

02:37:576 (157576|6) - delete

02:41:738 (161738|0,161912|1) - hard to press, same hand. not suitable in normal diff

02:41:218 (161218|1) - ^

02:42:085 (162085|6) - add

02:42:258 (162258|5) - add

02:47:807 (167807|0,167807|6) - add

And at last I strongly recommend you to remove ALL speed change in normal diff. They are a little annoying and not fun at all for beginner ^^

please check those things(for instance misplace notes, notes that correspond to no sound, unreasonable double notes and so on) in other diffs so that I do not need to post many same materials in your other diff ;) And when you are done just pm me XD I will finish this up sorry I do not have much time T T
Good luck ;)
[Shi-Ra]
458 posts
Joined October 2012
[Shi-Ra]
Hi there.
Random mania-mod :3

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Hard
Inside :3
00:24:744 (24744|5) - it's hard to "read" this, would be better if you finish it with slider in 3rd column or end it with note at 00:25:264 (25264|6)
01:31:334 (91334|1) - ^same problem (or end with note at 01:31:854 (91854|0))
From 01:06:536 to 01:07:923 I suggest to remodel pattern like >this<
01:32:027 (92027|5) - move this slider to 4th column
01:32:721 (92721|5) - turn this note into slider starting at 01:32:374 and ending at 01:33:761
02:26:651 (146651|3) - turn into slider ending at 02:26:998
Finally remodel pre-chorus pattern from 02:24:224 to 02:25:611 like >this<
Hitsounds:
02:15:206 (135206|2) - add clap hs
02:16:594 (136594|2) - ^
02:17:981 (137981|2) - ^
02:19:368 (139368|2) - ^
02:20:755 (140755|3) - ^
02:22:143 (142143|3) - ^
02:23:530 (143530|2) - ^

Maximum
Inside :3
00:28:732 (28732|3) - turn into slider ending at 00:29:079
I suggest to move 00:42:432 (42432|5) to 3rd column (coz three notes in a row looks weird here)
From 00:54:050 to 00:55:438 pattern looks monotonously, suggest to remodel it like >this<
01:29:079 (89079|2) - move to 0 column
01:29:253 (89253|2) - move to 1st column
01:39:657 (99657|4) - ^
02:26:651 (146651|3) - turn into slider again, end at 02:26:998
Finally I suggest to remodel ending part and do it more difficult and comfortable to play: from 02:23:703 to 02:25:611 like >this<

Great song and...I love this BG so much <3
Good luck :3/
Last edited by [Shi-Ra] , edited 1 time in total.
indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
indyinyou
Hi

try add drum hitsound like this

http://puu.sh/4BwnX

ููู^(it have drum sound and diff for review hitsound)

if you don t know how to add hitsound plz pm me i ll help you ;)
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

indyinyou wrote:

Hi

try add drum hitsound like this

http://puu.sh/4BwnX

ููู^(it have drum sound and diff for review hitsound)

if you don t know how to add hitsound plz pm me i ll help you ;)
thanks for hitsound !
asd123iii
283 posts
Joined October 2012
asd123iii
mod request by charter

[General]
1.You must have a Easy diff,Star Difficulty between 0.8 ~ 1.5(In Testing mode).Your Normal is 2.28.
2.Use custom 1 hitsound and your hitsound will work.
3.Delete soft.wav
4.soft-normal is not so fit in the begin of this map.soft-clap is ok but soft-normal is noise :o
5.Scars is translated title,not Romanised Title.
6.Mania mode is very very different from standard mode,try not to use your standard mode concept ;)

[Normal]
01:09:310 (69310|2) - finish at next note (01:09:831 - ) or add a note at finish (01:09:657 - ) ,it looks like convert map without one of previous.
01:09:830 (69830|5) - ^
01:10:697 (70697|4) - ^
01:11:217 (71217|2) - ^
01:12:084 (72084|6) - ^
01:12:605 (72605|4) - ^
01:13:472 (73472|0) - ^
01:13:992 (73992|2) - ^
01:14:859 (74859|4) - ^
01:15:379 (75379|2) - ^

02:14:513 (134513|6) - finish at next long note 02:15:900 -
02:15:900 (135900|2) - ^
02:17:287 (137287|5) - ^
02:18:675 (138675|1) - ^
02:20:062 (140062|3) - ^
02:21:449 (141449|0) - ^
02:22:836 (142836|6) - ^
02:38:097 (158097|2) - ^
02:39:484 (159484|5) - ^
02:40:871 (160871|2) - ^
02:42:258 (162258|4) - ^
02:43:646 (163646|0) - ^
02:45:033 (165033|6) - ^

I think you can place harder sort in Hard and Maximum.
Just reference ranked map

Nice song for mania and great BG
Good luck :D
indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
indyinyou
about add hitsound

you can use your way that add hitsound too

but i m use another way to add it

L+click on a note it show list of file you have http://puu.sh/4CY3f.jpg click on sound you want then Apply

when you want to know about note have sound click and see right conner http://puu.sh/4meaR

or go to menu View > show Sample name / it show you the note have name clap fin etc sounds like this http://puu.sh/4medt

add cymbol hitsound >>> here for ithttp://puu.sh/4CY9e (i think it same finish hitsound on normal hitsound in edit mod)

ok modding time

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:12:952 : move to 00:13:125 add normal-clap
00:14:339 : move to 00:14:513 add normal-clap
00:15:727 : same ^
00:17:287 : normal-clap
00:18:675 : add one more note + normal-clap
00:19:368 : soft-clap
00:20:755 : ^
00:22:143 : cymbol sound
00:22:836 : normal-clap
00:25:958 : soft-whistle
00:26:998 : ^
00:27:345 : ^
00:28:039 : ^
00:33:068 : cymbol + soft-clap
00:33:588 : ^
00:34:975 : soft-clap
00:35:681 : soft-clap + normal-clap
00:36:362 : normal-clap
00:37:056 : soft-clap + normal-clap
00:37:750 : normal-clap
00:38:443 : soft-clap + normal-clap
00:38:989 : soft-clap
00:39:330 : soft-clap
00:39:831 : normal-clap
00:40:524 : ^
00:41:218 : ^
00:41:912 : ^
00:42:605 : ^
00:43:125 : soft-clap
00:43:472 : ^
00:43:819 : ^
00:43:992 : remove soft-clap add normal-clap
00:44:860 : soft-clap
00:45:380 : soft-whitle

i m so lazy for now sry i ll mod if i have time

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note l1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l

try use alt+L click to add hitsound xD

[normal]

SPOILER
00:15:900 : normal-clap
00:22:143 : soft-finish
00:33:068 : soft-finish and soft-clap
00:33:588 : ^
00:34:975 : normal-clap on 3
00:35:669 : normal-clap on 5
00:37:056 : normal-clap on 1
00:38:443 : normal-clap on 3
00:38:964 : soft-clap
00:39:310 : ^
00:39:484 : normal-clap
00:39:831 : ^
00:40:524 : ^ no 2
00:40:811 : soft-clap
00:41:218 : normal clap
00:41:912 : ^ no 2
00:42:172 : soft-clap
00:42:605 : normal-clap
00:43:125 : soft-clap
00:43:472 : ^
00:43:819 : ^
00:43:992 : use normal clap better
00:44:339 : add one more for soft-finish
00:45:380 : soft-whitle
00:46:767 : normal-clap
00:48:154 : ^
00:49:542 : ^
00:50:929 : ^
00:51:276 : soft-clap
00:51:623 : normal-clap on 3
00:52:316 : normal-clap on 5
00:52:663 : soft-clap
00:53:703 : normal clap on 5
00:54:224 : soft-clap
00:54:570 : ^
00:54:917 : ^
00:55:438 : ^ and add one more note for soft-finish
00:56:498 : add soft-whitle / i think remove one note better
00:56:825 : soft-finish /
01:06:536 : soft-finish volume 50 % on 4
01:06:883 : ^ on 5
01:07:229 : ^ on 6
01:07:576 : normal-clap on 5
01:32:547 : soft-whitle
01:33:588 : ^
01:33:935 : ^
01:34:628 : ^
01:35:669 : add one more note for soft-finish
01:36:016 : soft-clap
01:36:709 : ^
01:37:403 : ^
01:38:097 : use 2 hitsound in one note /soft-clap and soft-whitle
01:41:218 : use finish only one note when you add finish you need bassdrum same time too (bassdrum sound is > soft-hitclap)
01:46:940 : soft-clap
01:48:328 : ^
01:50:929 : on note 5 use finish sound better xD
01:52:316 : add soft-clap on 1 same 01:41:218 ;)
01:58:039 : soft-clap on4
01:59:426 : ^
02:00:640 : soft clap
02:00:813 : ^
02:00:987 : ^
02:01:160 : ^
02:01:334 : ^
02:01:507 : ^
02:02:034 : use soft-clap and soft- finish one sound on note
02:03:414 : ^
02:26:998 : add one more note for finish or use 2 hitsound same note soft-clap + soft-finish
02:36:709 : soft-clap + soft-finish
02:38:097 : add note + soft-finish

i ll mod hard diff soon if i have time ;)

not kd for this post
Last edited by indyinyou , edited 2 times in total.
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei
adding Easy difficult now
[Shi-Ra]
458 posts
Joined October 2012
[Shi-Ra]
Re-check request :3

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Normal
Inside :3
All patters are good, except some weird sliders:
This one 00:12:952 (12952|6) and others like this, I suggest to make them shorter by half. Remodel every slider which looks like >that< into > this <.
00:25:264 - add simple note to 6th column
00:26:651 - ^ to 3rd column
00:28:743 - ^ to 3rd again
00:34:974 (34974|2) - move to 3rd column, it will be easier to play for novices
00:35:668 (35668|4) - ^
00:37:922 (37922|4) - ^
00:38:270 (38270|2) - ^
00:51:623 (51623|2) - to 0 column
00:52:316 (52316|5) - to 6th
02:38:097 (158097|2) - end slider here 02:39:484 and end every subsequent slider in this part with this rule.
Hard
Inside :3
00:23:270 (23270|1) - delete this, there's time for little break
01:29:860 (89860|5) - ^
00:29:079 (29079|0) - end sliders when starting new sliders, guided with previous rule or end them with single notes
Remodel part from 01:35:669 to 01:37:923 like >this<, it's more comfortable to play this pattern.
Maximum
Inside :3
00:28:386 - add note to 5th column
00:37:056 (37056|4) - move to 2nd column
00:38:270 (38270|2) - move to 3rd column
00:49:368 (49368|3) - to 4th
01:34:975 - add note to 1st column
01:51:449 - add note to 2nd column

Easy diff is good, there's no issues :3
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