thanks for modding http://puu.sh/2Mx2z.osu-kevincela- wrote:
Hey! Chewin linked me a few days ago this map, saying that kusano's diff might need some work before ranking. I got quite curious, so now I am modding it to say what I didn't really like in your diff. Feel free not to give the kudosu, as I'm just modding this diff!
[kusano's Railgun]And that's all from me! Good luck with your map, I hope I have helped you for now
- 00:04:282 (6,7,8,9,10) - This plays quite good actually, but I really don't like the jumps you have done there, considering that the progression starts at 00:04:699 - , and that this pattern doesen't really follow it. I would recommend instead another option, using a square pattern, plus a triangular pattern as a jump to go with 00:05:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - . It is really fun to play as it follows the oval flow there quite good, and it follows how the synth's progressing there! Here's what I have done, see if you like it!fixed.
SPOILER268,188,3657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,3761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,148,3970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,148,4074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,268,4282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,268,4386,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,296,4595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,4699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,84,4907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,160,5116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
20,284,5324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,284,5428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,368,5636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,368,5741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,376,5949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,376,6053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,300,6261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,300,6366,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,176,6574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,176,6782,6,0,P|268:156|212:148,1,105,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 00:25:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Huh... Why are you using these doublets in the red ticks instead of using the downbeats? It doesen't really go well with the music, on the countrary it sounds quite strange and it kinda breaks your rhythmical pattern here... If you want to use some doublets, then use them at 00:25:949 - and at 00:26:261 - : it will go a whole lot better, other than fitting pretty good in the song! Here's a pattern I have done following this suggestion, see if you like it!fixed.
SPOILER196,88,25116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,184,25324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,25428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,25532,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,88,25741,1,4,0:0:0:0:
284,268,25949,6,0,L|277:215,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,26261,2,0,L|153:236,1,52.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,320,26574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,144,26782,5,4,0:0:0:0:- 00:32:407 (4) - Well, even if this slider DOES follow the vocal held there, the instrumental transition with this slider seemed kinda off to me, I expected instead some notes being played there, as they could go on really nicely, considering that you could rearrange the whole pattern as well to make it flow really smoothly! Here, I have rearranged the pattern using a triangular jump: see if you like it!no change. I feel like current pattern are good enough.
SPOILER324,132,32407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,84,32616,5,2,0:0:0:0:
440,84,32720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,32928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,33032,1,10,0:0:0:0:
304,228,33241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,264,33449,6,0,P|98:230|56:167,1,157.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,118,33866,1,10,0:0:0:0:- 00:37:824 (4) - Not a really big deal here, though I would really modify this by tweaking it a bit, changing its rotation and putting it at x:276 y:44 : it's a really little thing, but anyways it smooths out the oval flow you have there, started from 00:37:199 (2) - ! Here's what I have done once again, see if you like it!fixed.
SPOILER372,220,37199,2,0,P|428:228|472:204,1,105,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,96,37616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,44,37824,2,0,P|223:54|188:92,2,105,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,96,38449,5,4,0:0:0:0:- 00:41:782 (1) - Actually, the whistle you have currently put on 00:42:199 (2) - should be used at the end of this slider, instead... I can clearly hear that the kicks are 3/4 here, so following them by using a 1/1 whistle pattern doesen't really make sense, imho... I would rather remove the whistle from 00:42:199 (2) - and add it at the end of this slider.ok.
- 00:48:865 (7,8) - Well, I really didn't like how the oval flow started there continued with 00:49:282 (8) - ... It seems quite forced and it doesn't really go that smooth there, considering the way you have structured the whole pattern. What about instead tweaking the pattern so that 00:49:282 (8) - goes on a circular track continuing perfectly 00:48:865 (7) - 's oval flow, maybe by making 00:50:116 (1) - go upwards as well? Here's what I have done, see if you like it! no change. I like current pattern than yours.
SPOILER412,72,48032,2,0,P|464:60|512:80,1,105,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,48449,2,0,P|272:224|188:232,1,157.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,260,48865,2,0,P|96:272|48:252,1,105,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,76,49282,2,0,P|104:112|96:204,1,157.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,152,49699,1,10,0:0:0:0:
188,68,49907,2,0,L|184:24,3,26.25
200,104,50116,6,0,P|263:123|328:58,1,157.5
332,16,50532,1,10,0:0:0:0:
440,116,50740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,196,50949,2,0,P|512:268|484:352,1,157.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 00:59:907 (7) - I could understand the reasoning behind putting this circle in the current position, but as now it feels really uncomfortable to play imho, and I think you should definitely "stabilize" your jump by simply putting this circle at x:172 y:268. If you still want to keep the spacing increasing there, then you could use this pattern instead: no change. I like current pattern than yours.
SPOILER8,236,59490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,59699,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,332,59907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,204,60115,6,0,B|320:196|320:196|356:248|424:232,1,188.999994232178,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:03:449 (3) - While I could understand your point on using a New Combo at 01:03:032 (1) - to warn about the big jump used there, what about putting a new combo as well here, as there is a new vocal phrase and as it totally follws your New Combo pattern? It would fit pretty good actually... Remember that the same applies for 01:16:782 (3) - ! fixed.
- 01:22:616 (5,6) - One last thing, though I am being really nitpicky here: what about reversing 01:23:032 (6) - , using CTRL+G? I really like how the opposed sliders work there, considering 01:23:032 (6) - 's angle it would continue 01:22:616 (5) - 's oval flow in a really nice way, as you have done in other patterns as well! Here, if you want to fix I have reorganized the next patterns as well: no change. I like current pattern than yours.
SPOILER360,228,83032,2,0,P|296:228|240:252,1,125.999996154785,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,83449,5,4,0:0:0:0:
360,228,83657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,228,83761,2,0,L|356:140,1,62.9999980773926,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,304,84074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
92,228,84282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,200,84386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,172,84491,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,108,84699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,280,84907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,184,85116,5,4,0:0:0:0: