Natsu wrote:

HI~ Nymph

General:

• clear

Hard:

1. 00:20:639 (5,6,7,8,9) - this was bother me when I play this since is hard to read try 0.50 distance for making easy to read or stack they perfect orz k
2. 00:22:306 NC? since you add a NC here 00:24:389 just for consistency / k
3. 00:47:306 maybe convert this in 1/2 slider this part 00:47:514 sound really weird without somethink k
4. 00:52:722 add circle and start spinner on 00:52:826 since you did on previous one also I feel weird after the pause just start spinning
5. 01:16:056 (7,1) - swap NC
6. 01:47:722 same as 00:52:722
7. 02:25:847 finish in the tail?k
8. 02:57:722 add clapk
9. nice diff just that stream bother me when I play it >.<

Normal:

1. 00:07:722 whys is this the only diff who start with whistle? better remove it for consistency k
2. 00:10:222 - 00:08:556 ^
3. 00:07:722 (1,2) - maybe a little nazi but the distance is not the correct k
4. 00:20:222 (5,6) - avoid the stack since is 1/1 new players tend to click so fast also take in consideration they can think is a 1/2 like you did before k
5. 00:29:389 same about whistle you just use random they o.o imo is better remove they k
6. 00:43:556 can you redo this slider the curve look a little weird maybe im being nazi :/k
7. 02:26:056 spinner should start here so you can map the pprevious part gonna be better k

Nice song and nice map take a start C:

Hollow Wings wrote:

random mod

Rotte's Insane

00:18:556 (5,6) - 这遮挡也太严重了吧233，建议往左上再移一点。。。
00:33:972 (8) - 这个可以跟前面的串摆在一条曲线上。。。或者干脆再往右下移动一点
01:15:014 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个串可以离前后都远一点

没啥好说的233，作为insane会不会太简单了噗

Hard

啥都mod不出来233

raririn's Normal

00:14:181 (1,2) - 1和2的折返次数统一一下？
00:41:889 (6,1,2) - 不来一发blanket么
00:46:889 (2,3) - ^
01:26:056 (3,4) - 折返朝左上？尾别靠太近。。。
02:13:556 (3) - 折返朝右上
02:14:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段感觉音效有点响
02:46:056 (3,4) - 这折返和头靠的太近了。。。

直来直去的滑条好多，似乎不太喜欢blanket

blabla
good luck

Flower wrote:

23456789

[Insane]
怎么说呢……图看不出什么槽点但是莫名的不爽，所以下面没有啥重要的，只是鸡蛋里挑骨头罢了
00:22:722 (3,4) - 感觉这里用note+1/1的组合比较贴合歌曲
00:31:056 (1,2,3,4) - 改成圆滑的弧形比较适合
00:39:389 (1,2) - 距离太近有点像是1/4
00:43:972 (7) - ^
01:03:347 (4,5,6,7,1) - 增大距离，因为auto-stack让排列有些打乱
01:10:847 - 加个note？
01:11:993 (4,5) - 换个方向 现在auto-stack让他完全隐藏在滑条下面
01:20:917 - 这里莫名有个1/3，可以考虑把01:20:639 (4) - 延长 略奇怪
01:32:514 (8,1) - 跳得有点莫名……
01:50:639 (2) - 改成折返4次而不是1次？4次听着很别扭
02:01:056 - 02:12:722 - 感觉这里间距是overmap了。玩着还行

[Hard]
00:21:681 (2) - 建议不要跳 太近了难受
00:34:597 (5) - 可以NC
00:37:722 (6) - ^ 之后同理。10combo对hard来讲是不是有点长了。我不咋在乎nc
00:47:722 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 突然横平竖直貌似有点奇怪。嗯
01:07:514 (8) - 放到x:80 y:180？正好有个跳
01:43:972 (9,10,11) - 不如改成1/2
02:46:889 (7,8,9,10) - 也是莫名横平竖直

[Normal]
00:13:972 (4,1) - 莫名不爽 但可以不改 看你的
00:37:722 (3,4) - 分开一些
00:41:056 (4,5,6) - flow有点怪 但是我说不出怎么改
00:42:722 (1,2) - 没包好
01:26:056 (3,4) - 分开。我感觉你这个是隐藏的懒……
01:37:722 (1) - 这个3/4感觉有点莫名了
01:41:056 (1,2,3) - 这大弧度丑

没了 good luck~

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
fine

[raririn's Normal]
02:57:722 - 这里用note好点 hao

[Hard]
01:41:056 (1) - 这地方感觉可以跳更大点0.0 这diff纯送 算了

[Insane]
01:41:056 (1) - 同H 改了下slider位置 距离大了点
02:57:097 - 感觉没必要NC 删

“老衲法号梦遗”

popner wrote:

香草

[Rotte's Insane]
00:36:681 (5,6,7,8,9) - 手动stack把，不是正方形啊

SPOILER

00:45:014 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ 5连以上最好手动堆叠
01:16:056 (1,2) - 手动堆叠

[raririn's Normal]
01:41:056 (1,2,3) - 这几个也太难看了吧！