Just for the record, nothing beneath here is anything like urgent. Just random suggestions. Though, much of it just seems to be our differing opinions on how one should follow the music.
00:19:962 (5) - I would map the middle of this slider out. I just mean something like: 00:24:668 - add note. it's not like this makes the map impossible hard or anything01:03:099 - this note should be mapped imo.01:04:472 (6) - Something like this just flows betterimo (also add a clap at the end of the combo 6 slider) 01:06:433 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - similar to the comment below insane. technically nothing is wrong with this, but I'm just saying it's things like this that just feel a little weird. Clearly it's an example of where you just change to follow the drums instead of the vocals. If you think it fits, I won't force you to do anything, but that's just my opinion.01:28:982 - add note?01:46:433 (1,2,3,4,1) - well it's readable, but the spacing is just awkward to look at 02:01:334 (4) - change into this:? (easier to read as well) 02:26:825 - i'd add a note here to follow the vocals
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Anesthesia
- 00:16:040 (3,4,5) - I would rather you follow the vocals more
- 00:19:962 (5) - Turn into two hitcircles instead to follow the vocals better? (Also 00:20:158 - should be a new combo if you apply this change)
- 00:21:335 (4) - This notes almost feels unnecessary to me. Consider removing it? It's not a huge deal though.
- 00:26:040 (9) - I find that it flows better if you turn this note into a slider that ends at 00:26:236 -
- 00:35:648 and 00:37:217 - seems a little empty. Map vocals perhaps? I just don't feel like there is a reason to not map it. (imo you should at least map 00:37:217 - . Hard to explain, but just it feels more emphasized and more necessary for the transition int othe next part)
- 00:51:138 (4) - well, this just feels kinda weird. I would rather just do something like this to follow the vocals more SPOILERor
- 00:54:570 - add note http://puu.sh/4f7rl.jpg
- 01:14:178 (5) - This note seems unnecessary. It makes it feel like you are spamming 1/4 ticks when there really isn't a point to be doing so. I would delete this note (and perhaps rearrange the pattern)
- 01:24:668 (2,6) - not a huge fan of symmetry just because you can, since it's awkward when an emphasized note in the music is in the middle of a slider (e.g. in the middle of 01:25:844 (6) - ) But I guess it's okay.
- 02:00:158 (4) - again this just feels so weird to me. Though up to you to change it.
- 02:07:413 (3,4) - Swithc the two notes around? SPOILER[spoilerbox]
- 02:26:629 (2) - imo a slider would better here (to follow the vocals on the red tick. Otherwise I feel like I'm missing a note here or something) 02:26:629 (2) -
- 02:51:335 (1) - new combo isn't necessary imo.
- 03:17:413 (1) - ^
- 03:56:531 - add noteMainly the issue is that you most likely have a different opinion on what to follow :/
There are many many many more parts where you have slider ends on emphasized beats in the vocals. Instead of following the vocals with the placement of sliders, you seem to be more interested in following the drum beat. imo this often time will make playing the map a little weird because you aren't following the main melody. In terms of readability I don't see much of a problem. I didn't comment a lot on this aspect of the map though, but I'm just saying that it's there.
Hard
- 00:19:178 (3,4) - I don't see a huge point in having this jump. A jump would make sense between 00:19:962 - and 00:20:158 - imo (but you don't even have notes there) [spoilerbox]
Normal
- 00:50:746 (2,3,4) - you can try following the vocals more?
- 01:59:374 (1,2,3) - do something similar as above?
- 03:14:276 (1,2,3) - you could potentially do something liek this to follow the music more. Right now it's a little awkward to hear.
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