ThanksNephroid wrote:
Still new to modding. ~
The combo colors look dull, and the green doesn't really match the background. Try this:SPOILERCombo1 : 128,128,128
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 0,64,128
Combo4 : 248,7,109
Combo5 : 128,0,64
Combo6 : 192,192,192
No i prefer my colors
01:19:315 (4,5) - The start of the sliders don't have hitsounds, which feels weird when playing. I know but i like it
01:20:798 (1) - The syncopation is a little awkward. Maybe add a circle at 01:20:633. Yes
01:22:611 (3,4) - The rhythm here is actually triplets, but you have sixteenth notes. Should be like this. No
01:27:556 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - The new combo seems to start too early. (Maybe have it start at the stream.) Yes
01:26:402 (1) - Consider increasing the speed of the slider here. Also 01:31:677 (1) - 01:42:227 (1) - 01:44:864 (1) - 01:47:501 (1) - 02:13:875 (1) - etc. (Essentially whenever you hear that stronger beat.) Nope
01:28:216 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try removing the circle at 01:28:793. Nope but i've fixed the shape of stream
01:38:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The stream should start at 01:39:095. (Replace the slider in the beginning with 2 eigth notes.) No
01:44:864 (1) - The shape looks weird. I like it ^^
01:48:820 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Should start the new combo at 01:48:820 (7). Yes
02:20:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think these circles look better like this. I like disorder in jumps
02:53:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Consider making this section slower. Or maybe the previous section faster. No
03:00:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The big jumps don't really match this slow section, based on the jumps in the previous, more energetic section. I prefer big jump with slow slider in this section
03:03:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Move 03:03:902 (10,11,12) to improve the shape. Like this. Ok
03:04:149 (1) - Seems like a good place to put kiai. uhm ok
03:05:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This arrangement seems better. Ok
03:17:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make the sliders progressively faster (maybe 1.2x, 1.3x, 1.4x) so that there's some transition to the 1.5x in the kiai. Ok i like this think
03:19:974 (1,2,3,4) - The sliders in this kiai section have weirdly placed hitsounds. When you're listening to it, the hitsounds just seem to come later than they should. Uhm?
03:28:216 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This shape seems better. Too big
03:48:655 (3,4,5) - These seem misplaced. A slider that goes with the voice seems to match the rest of the section better.
04:07:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The two sliders should be replaced with circles that jump. 3 and 5 should be removed. Here's a reference.
04:12:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Jumpy circles that go with the melody might be better here. Otherwise, the triple circles you have all start one sixteenth note too early. This rhythm goes with the drum in the background. No
04:27:391 - Seems like something's missing. Fixed
04:35:798 - Consider putting four circles here that lead into the next slider. Ok
04:48:326 (1) - Increasing the slider speed during kiai would probably make the map more interesting. Done
04:58:546 (9,10,1) - A good place for a small stream to lead into that slider. nope
05:12:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try gradually increasing the jump distance and slider speed in order to match the progression in the music. No
05:17:337 (1,2,3,4) - Some syncopation here would be nice. Try this. No, low speed now is bad :<
05:31:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm here is weird; definitely not just straight sixteenths though. This rhythm sounds a bit better. (Yeah, it's a bit weird...) The rest of the streams in this section is also weird... I went through it at 25% speed and these parts don't really match that well: 05:37:776 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 05:38:930 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 05:40:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 05:42:062 (5,6,7,8) - 05:42:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 05:43:710 (5,6) - 05:44:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 05:45:029 (3,4,5,6,7) - 05:46:348 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 05:47:172 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 05:47:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 05:48:490 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 05:49:727 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8). Okay, that was a lot more than I expected... maybe I'm just too picky. (I don't know how to put those time things in a list with commas between them, so I'm using dashes instead.)
05:51:622 - Should stop kiai. Ok
06:01:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The stream shouldn't start until 06:01:306, and it should be faster than sixteenths. I know but is unrankable with your speed, i prefer to use 1/4
06:16:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Shape can be improved. How?
06:41:732 - Fantasie Impromptu is such a good place for a stream. (It starts with 2 measures of triplets, then the rest is sixteenths.) Though it would be pretty exhausting... I do not know how to create streams
06:54:919 - Good place to start a gigantic stream too. And this one would be straight sixteenths. Nope
07:22:282 - For some reason, I was expecting a stream here. 1/6 nope.
07:28:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Shouldn't really start until 3. I prefer in this way
07:33:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try turning 7 into a slider. I don't like it
07:35:139 (1,2,3) - I don't understand these. Should be at 07:35:304, 07:35:633, and 07:35:963? Piano part
08:00:853 (1,1,1) - I don't think anyone likes consecutive spinners. 1 spinner is boring and i prefer follow voice
08:16:677 - It feels like there's a measure missing. I know, i did it on purpose
08:23:930 (1,2) - Sliders with weird hitsounds again. ^
08:32:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The stream should start and end a beat earlier.
09:14:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These circles sound weird. (Need hitsounds.) ?? they have hitsounds
09:22:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The stream starts half a beat early. Also, rearrange 09:23:105 (7,8) to improve shape. Ok
09:33:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Half a beat early.
09:48:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Seems half a beat early again. Or maybe 09:48:820 (5) is placed in an awkward position.
09:50:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The stream seems a bit unnecessary. (There's always that Fantasie Impromptu part that's great for streams...)
Well, that took a long time. I think some of the formatting broke too...
Sephibro wrote:
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01:43:710 (1,2) - fai in modo che abbiano la stessa forma o una piu' simile Ok
01:55:908 (5) - *te le segnalero' tutte perche' le odio, ti daro' consigli su come cambiarle solo per quelle che secondo me vanno tolte per forza Ok
02:03:820 (2) - * No
02:10:084 (5,6,7) - * ^
03:00:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - secondo me e' meglio se lasci il 5 in modo che la stella rimanga intatta, il 6 lo puoi lasciare dov'e'. cosi' sembra una stella mancamentata Ok
03:34:315 (1) - io sposterei lo slider in avanti in modo che starti sul bianco e sul rosso metterei un cerchio http://puu.sh/42Ns8.jpg OK ma in modo un po diverso
03:39:260 (4) - ^ No
da 04:12:721 (1) fino a 04:15:194 (5) - sostituirei prima e ultima oppure seconda e quarta con uno slider corto con reverseNo
04:24:342 (5) - eviterei di farlo partire sul blu Fixato
04:24:919 (1) - * qua puoi cambiare in http://puu.sh/42NHt.jpg No
04:36:128 (1) - parte un po' improvviso, lo accompagnerei da un trillo http://puu.sh/42NOc No
06:03:161 (4) - questi stream a 1/3 sono assolutamente troppo spaziati (lo spacing di questi e' almeno 1.10x, contro il 1.00x degli altri, comunque secondo me anche 0.90 non guasterebbe) Non tutti ho solo corretto un errore di spacing
06:15:606 (5) - questo lo toglierei No
06:16:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - questi mi piacciono molto, ma li metterei proprio overlappati in orizzontale e simmetrici rispetto all'asse y Sarebbero troppo distanti e no nsarebbe bello da vedere :\
06:32:007 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/42Owg.jpg o qualcosa del genere Grazie va bene ^^
06:35:798 (7,8,9) - avvicina entrambi gli slider al cerchio, pure qua porterei il distance snap da entrambi a 1.00x Ok
06:37:446 (5,6,7,8) - trovo quella croce un po' storta fuorviante, meglio un arco cosi': http://puu.sh/42OMi.jpg Mi piace più la croce veloce con minijump ma la sistemo meglio
06:41:732 - dio ti punira' per aver messo la pausa sulla fantasia improvviso Non so se riempirla e come
06:54:754 (2) - il salto e' abbastanza grande, anche qualcosa di questo tipo non verrebbe male http://puu.sh/42P1Q.jpg Ho solo otlto la tripletta
08:43:051 (6,7,8) - * le tre sviolinate durato esattamente un mezzo ciascuna, a differenza degli altri casi, stavolta usare questo pattern e' una forzatura. Preferisco cosìporterei questi 3 slider ad un mezzo e li vedrei bene disposti a triangolo e che vanno verso l'esterno, qualcosa di questo tipo http://puu.sh/42PkX.jpg
09:03:326 (3,4) - mi inganna ogni volta e premo (4) in anticipo, probabilmente e' un problema mio, ma NC (4) per sicurezza Ok
09:41:567 (8,9,10) - si legge male per via del 9 nascosto e dello spacing strano.. forse http://puu.sh/42PVs.jpg x:256 y:180 Spostato
Grazie mille ^^