23:48 Garven: End of Hard feels a little spinner heavy
23:48 Garven: Also one of them near the kiai felt like it was missing a finish
23:49 Garven: In beren: 00:27:279 (4) - Hidden repeat arrow
23:50 Kiiwa: that still matters with new skin??
23:50 Kiiwa: i thought woulndt matter anymore..
23:50 Garven: It's hidden by a hitobject, not the skin
23:51 Kiiwa: oh i see
23:51 Kiiwa: ok ill take note of that \:D/
23:51 Kiiwa: fixed~
23:51 Garven: 00:59:679 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps are pretty big compared to the rest of the map to this point
23:51 Garven: Might want to save that kind of stuff for the kiai
23:52 Garven: 01:14:594 (1) - Endt his at 01:16:994 -
23:52 Garven: At least it will have some musical backing at that point
23:54 Kiiwa: fixed
23:55 Garven: Insane: 00:32:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing makes no sense.
23:55 Garven: It's just fitting the pattern instead of the music and feels wrong while playing.
23:55 Garven: 00:40:137 (1,2,3,1) - The music just picked up and you have som ebig spacing before, then this comes and it's super close and kills your momentum.
23:57 Garven: 01:00:194 (9) - delete
23:57 Garven: 01:03:965 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - please do'nt new combo spam
23:57 Kiiwa: oops deleted
23:57 Kiiwa: removed ~
23:58 Garven: 01:11:165 (4,5) - This plays really weird for me every time I get to it
23:58 Garven: I think stopping it at the stack like that is what's getting me
23:59 Kiiwa: really?
23:59 Kiiwa: i quite like this part...
23:59 Kiiwa: if its all moving at this speed its quite hard during 1/4 haha
00:00 Garven: Also that they are 4-hit sliders but not placed in a consecutive manner
00:00 Garven: Makes moving from slider to slider read odd
00:01 Garven: Maybe something like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/108481800:02 Kiiwa:
00:02 Kiiwa: let me try
00:02 Garven: 01:15:622 (4) - This stream feels like it's starting too early. Maybe you're trying to go with the guitar vibrato thing going on...
00:02 Garven: Maybe using a slider to represent those rhythms, then do your stream with the guitar bridge afterward
00:03 Kiiwa: yeah i agree
00:04 Garven: 01:20:765 (3,4) - Going from this spacing to 01:21:451 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing doesn't read very well.01:22:137 (4,5) - Especially when you change the 1/4 spacing back here while it's still your mini kiai part.
00:06 Kiiwa: changed~
00:07 Garven: Oh, dang. I just made a redesign to screenshot haha
00:07 Garven:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/108482700:07 Garven: just because. I deleted the 3 as well for thsi to work
00:08 Garven: With [Dis] 00:05:165 (4) - will need tick rate 2
00:09 Garven: 00:10:137 (1,2) - :;/
00:09 Garven: 00:14:251 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - :/
00:10 Kiiwa: ww
00:10 Kiiwa: well...
00:10 Kiiwa: its fine, its his style.. nothing terrible, inconsistant or unkrankable, so id prefer not to change too much ><
00:10 Garven: It's just bad.
00:10 Garven: Like
00:10 Kiiwa: trick rate 2 done thoughhhhhhhhhhh
00:10 Garven: Really really bad.
00:10 Kiiwa: D:
00:11 Garven: As in I won't rank this bad. Bad quality bad.
00:11 Kiiwa: D:
00:11 Kiiwa: really that bad..?
00:11 Garven: Yes.
00:11 Garven: These rhythms are garbage.
00:12 Garven: And it's trying waaaay too hard to be difficult.
00:12 Kiiwa: oh..
00:13 Garven: Either this map needs a complete overhaul or just get rid of it.
00:13 Garven: Sorry.
00:14 Kiiwa: hm
00:14 Kiiwa: let me think about what to do ;_;
00:14 Garven: Okay.
00:14 Garven: I can't accept a map that is designed so poorly for ranking.