Remixed by DJ Command - Mermaid girl -Akiba Koubou MIX- [Osu · forum

DJPop

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DJPop 2013-06-09T17:17:08+00:00

Serious issues here...

• Inconsistent speed changes in LV.16 and LV.24, LV.16 is a lot harder than LV.24
• LV.5 and LV.10 have break time, otherwise don't

~LV.10~
01:52:586 (112586|6) - wrong rhythm, should be at 01:52:686

Speed-change gimmicks also kill the fun, because the gap around those parts aren't consistent. See image below (LV.16 at 00:54:786 - )
It's annoying when you can't guess the rhythm by just using sight reading and you also need to remember exactly where and how the speed changes in each part.

Lieselotte

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Lieselotte 2013-06-09T18:42:50+00:00

DJPop wrote:
Serious issues here...

• Inconsistent speed changes in LV.16 and LV.24, LV.16 is a lot harder than LV.24
• LV.5 and LV.10 have break time, otherwise don't

~LV.10~
01:52:586 (112586|6) - wrong rhythm, should be at 01:52:686

Speed-change gimmicks also kill the fun, because the gap around those parts aren't consistent. See image below (LV.16 at 00:54:786 - )
It's annoying when you can't guess the rhythm by just using sight reading and you also need to remember exactly where and how the speed changes in each part.

fixed

but I need someone help me unrank my map

DJPop

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DJPop 2013-06-10T02:41:50+00:00

Unrank due to serious issue as I mentioned in p/2354573

And mapper decides to unrank this map to fix them.

Will do a full mod when I have time.

SPOILER

Hanyuu

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Joined February 2009

Hanyuu 2013-06-12T07:57:53+00:00

While you are at it can you fix the timing slowdown changes at 01:10:786 - for the slowdown parts?
01:13:536 - This speedchange does not go with any note aswell
I found it really annoying that the speeddown is actually happening before the end of the hold note and i thought it was a bug at my first play.
01:36:386 - Same here. The speedup to normal tempo is happening before the end of the hold note. Such speed changes should allways happen at the major beat of the song.

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-14T10:56:18+00:00

Hanyuu wrote:
While you are at it can you fix the timing slowdown changes at 01:10:786 - for the slowdown parts?
01:13:536 - This speedchange does not go with any note aswell
I found it really annoying that the speeddown is actually happening before the end of the hold note and i thought it was a bug at my first play.
01:36:386 - Same here. The speedup to normal tempo is happening before the end of the hold note. Such speed changes should allways happen at the major beat of the song.

No change

thx

DJPop

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DJPop 2013-06-23T14:53:46+00:00

• Mania maps shouldn't have break times. It's also told in AiMod.
• Set preview time at 00:55:986.
• Set audio lead-in 2000
• Use sound mods in LV.24 as a guide when fixing other diffs.
• Part of MP3's name is missing, change from "Mermaid girl- MIX-" to "Mermaid girl - Festa Mix -"
• Tags: change from "19" to "19th", remove "ORIGINAL SOUNDTRACK"
• Use timing below:

Timings

386,400,4,2,0,30,1,0
9986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10086,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10286,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10386,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10719,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
11586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11686,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
11886,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11986,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
12319,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
12386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
29186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
54786,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
54919,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
55319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55586,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
70786,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
72386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
73986,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
74786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
93186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
95986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
96119,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
96386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
121586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
121719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
121986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0

~LV.5~
○ Don't use any speed changes in this diff.
○ HP 5
00:43:586 (43586|5) - remove
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) - ^

~LV.10~
○ Don't use too much speed changes in this diff (Slow part at 01:10:786 is allowed).
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:086
00:39:186 - add a note
00:48:986 (48986|2) - move to 00:49:086
00:49:186 (49186|0) - remove
00:55:586 - use only 1 long note
00:56:986 (56986|5) - remove
01:14:986 (74986|6) - ^
01:15:086 (75086|4,75286|4,75486|4) - remove
01:15:986 (75986|4) - move to 01:15:886
01:17:586 (77586|2) - move to 01:17:486
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 3
01:36:986 (96986|5) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|2) - move to 01:51:086
01:57:586 (117586|2) - move to 01:57:486

~LV.16~
○ HP 7
00:10:886 (10886|1) - move to 00:10:986
00:12:486 (12486|3) - remove
00:49:186 (49186|4) - ^
00:58:386 (58386|4) - ^
01:04:786 (64786|0) - ^
01:14:852 (74852|4,74919|5) - 1/8 snaps, not 1/6
01:32:386 (92386|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:486 (92486|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:586 (92586|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:686 (92686|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 2
01:33:186 (93186|6,93586|6) - move to lane 6
01:38:386 (98386|4) - remove
01:44:786 (104786|0) - ^

~LV.24~
○ HP 8
Sounds:
00:03:586 - crash
00:09:986 - ^
00:11:586 - ^
00:13:186 - ^
00:13:986 - ^
00:14:786 - ^
00:16:386 - ^
00:22:786 - ^
00:25:986 - ^
00:26:786 - ^
00:27:586 - ^
00:30:786 - ^
00:37:186 - ^
00:38:786 - ^
00:39:186 - ^
00:39:586 - ^
00:40:386 - ^
00:41:986 - ^
00:42:386 - ^
00:43:586 - ^
00:49:986 - ^
00:51:586 - ^
00:51:986 - ^
00:52:386 - ^
00:53:186 - ^
00:53:986 - ^
00:56:386 - ^
01:02:786 - ^
01:06:786 - ^
01:09:186 - ^
01:12:386 - ^
01:15:586 - ^
01:18:786 - ^
01:19:586 - ^
01:20:386 - ^
01:21:186 - ^
01:32:386 - ^
01:33:186 - ^
01:33:586 - ^
01:42:786 - ^
01:48:386 - ^
01:49:186 - ^
01:55:586 - ^
01:59:586 - ^
02:00:386 - ^
02:01:186 - ^
Notes:
00:03:186 (3186|1,3236|2,3286|5,3336|4,3386|1,3436|2,3486|5,3536|4) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:10:886 (10886|0) - move to 00:10:986
00:15:586 (15586|3) - remove
00:19:986 (19986|2) -
00:20:786 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
00:22:986 (22986|5) - move to lane 7, add note at lane 5
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:286, lane 4 or 2
00:28:186 (28186|2) - move to 00:28:086
00:28:286 - add note at lane 3
00:29:186 - good place for speed changes
00:30:386 (30386|6,30436|5,30486|4,30536|3,30586|2,30636|3,30686|4,30736|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:46:436 (46436|5,46486|4,46536|3) - remove, not fit to anything
00:56:036 (56036|5,56086|4,56136|3,56186|2,56236|3,56286|4,56336|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:14:911 (74911|5,74911|1) - remove, not fit to anything
01:15:986 (75986|5) - remove
01:17:586 (77586|0) - move to 01:17:686
01:20:986 (80986|3) - move to 01:20:686
01:20:986 - add note at lane 5
01:21:086 - add note at lane 4
01:32:586 (92586|5) - remove
01:34:436 (94436|1,94486|2,94536|3,94586|4,94636|3,94686|2,94736|1) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:35:086 (95086|6) - end at 01:35:286
01:35:686 - add note at lane 4, shouldn't ignore the sound there
01:35:786 (95786|5,95786|1) - end at 01:35:986
01:43:386 (103386|0) - end at 01:43:586
01:44:786 (104786|3) - move to 01:44:886, lane 3 or 1
01:49:586 (109586|3) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|4) - ^
01:52:186 - add note at lane 6
01:52:786 (112786|1) - remove
01:53:586 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
01:55:986 (115986|6) - remove
01:57:586 (117586|3) - ^
02:00:986 (120986|2) - move to 02:00:886
02:01:086 - add note at lane 3

Too much syncing issues, why is this mapset got ranked in the first place ...

EDIT: Didn't blame the mapper though

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-23T14:55:26+00:00

lol this dude got told by DJPop omg

Lieselotte

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Topic Starter

Lieselotte 2013-06-23T16:19:02+00:00

DJPop wrote:
• Mania maps shouldn't have break times. It's also told in AiMod.
• Set preview time at 00:55:986.
• Set audio lead-in 2000
• Use sound mods in LV.24 as a guide when fixing other diffs.
• Part of MP3's name is missing, change from "Mermaid girl- MIX-" to "Mermaid girl - Festa Mix -"
• Tags: change from "19" to "19th", remove "ORIGINAL SOUNDTRACK"
• Use timing below:

Timings
386,400,4,2,0,30,1,0
9986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10086,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10286,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10386,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10719,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
11586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11686,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
11886,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11986,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
12319,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
12386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
29186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
54786,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
54919,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
55319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55586,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
70786,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
72386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
73986,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
74786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
93186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
95986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
96119,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
96386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
121586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
121719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
121986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0

~LV.5~
○ Don't use any speed changes in this diff.
○ HP 5
00:43:586 (43586|5) - remove
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) - ^

~LV.10~
○ Don't use too much speed changes in this diff (Slow part at 01:10:786 is allowed).
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:086
00:39:186 - add a note
00:48:986 (48986|2) - move to 00:49:086
00:49:186 (49186|0) - remove
00:55:586 - use only 1 long note
00:56:986 (56986|5) - remove
01:14:986 (74986|6) - ^
01:15:086 (75086|4,75286|4,75486|4) - remove
01:15:986 (75986|4) - move to 01:15:886
01:17:586 (77586|2) - move to 01:17:486
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 3
01:36:986 (96986|5) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|2) - move to 01:51:086
01:57:586 (117586|2) - move to 01:57:486

~LV.16~
○ HP 7
00:10:886 (10886|1) - move to 00:10:986
00:12:486 (12486|3) - remove
00:49:186 (49186|4) - ^
00:58:386 (58386|4) - ^
01:04:786 (64786|0) - ^
01:14:852 (74852|4,74919|5) - 1/8 snaps, not 1/6
01:32:386 (92386|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:486 (92486|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:586 (92586|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:686 (92686|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 2
01:33:186 (93186|6,93586|6) - move to lane 6
01:38:386 (98386|4) - remove
01:44:786 (104786|0) - ^

~LV.24~
○ HP 8
Sounds:
00:03:586 - crash
00:09:986 - ^
00:11:586 - ^
00:13:186 - ^
00:13:986 - ^
00:14:786 - ^
00:16:386 - ^
00:22:786 - ^
00:25:986 - ^
00:26:786 - ^
00:27:586 - ^
00:30:786 - ^
00:37:186 - ^
00:38:786 - ^
00:39:186 - ^
00:39:586 - ^
00:40:386 - ^
00:41:986 - ^
00:42:386 - ^
00:43:586 - ^
00:49:986 - ^
00:51:586 - ^
00:51:986 - ^
00:52:386 - ^
00:53:186 - ^
00:53:986 - ^
00:56:386 - ^
01:02:786 - ^
01:06:786 - ^
01:09:186 - ^
01:12:386 - ^
01:15:586 - ^
01:18:786 - ^
01:19:586 - ^
01:20:386 - ^
01:21:186 - ^
01:32:386 - ^
01:33:186 - ^
01:33:586 - ^
01:42:786 - ^
01:48:386 - ^
01:49:186 - ^
01:55:586 - ^
01:59:586 - ^
02:00:386 - ^
02:01:186 - ^
Notes:
00:03:186 (3186|1,3236|2,3286|5,3336|4,3386|1,3436|2,3486|5,3536|4) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:10:886 (10886|0) - move to 00:10:986
00:15:586 (15586|3) - remove
00:19:986 (19986|2) -
00:20:786 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
00:22:986 (22986|5) - move to lane 7, add note at lane 5
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:286, lane 4 or 2
00:28:186 (28186|2) - move to 00:28:086
00:28:286 - add note at lane 3
00:29:186 - good place for speed changes
00:30:386 (30386|6,30436|5,30486|4,30536|3,30586|2,30636|3,30686|4,30736|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:46:436 (46436|5,46486|4,46536|3) - remove, not fit to anything
00:56:036 (56036|5,56086|4,56136|3,56186|2,56236|3,56286|4,56336|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:14:911 (74911|5,74911|1) - remove, not fit to anything
01:15:986 (75986|5) - remove
01:17:586 (77586|0) - move to 01:17:686
01:20:986 (80986|3) - move to 01:20:686
01:20:986 - add note at lane 5
01:21:086 - add note at lane 4
01:32:586 (92586|5) - remove
01:34:436 (94436|1,94486|2,94536|3,94586|4,94636|3,94686|2,94736|1) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:35:086 (95086|6) - end at 01:35:286
01:35:686 - add note at lane 4, shouldn't ignore the sound there
01:35:786 (95786|5,95786|1) - end at 01:35:986
01:43:386 (103386|0) - end at 01:43:586
01:44:786 (104786|3) - move to 01:44:886, lane 3 or 1
01:49:586 (109586|3) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|4) - ^
01:52:186 - add note at lane 6
01:52:786 (112786|1) - remove
01:53:586 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
01:55:986 (115986|6) - remove
01:57:586 (117586|3) - ^
02:00:986 (120986|2) - move to 02:00:886
02:01:086 - add note at lane 3

Too much syncing issues, why is this mapset got ranked in the first place ...

EDIT: Didn't blame the mapper though

Fixed,thx

DJPop

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DJPop 2013-06-24T03:46:57+00:00

Nothing changed...?

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2013-06-24T03:55:16+00:00

oh wait please
General
Title should be "Mermaid girl -Akiba Koubou MIX-" (Unicode "Mermaid girl -秋葉工房MIX-")
Artist should be "Remixed by DJ Command" (This is how it appears in IIDX)
Source should be "beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle"

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-24T04:38:19+00:00

DJPop wrote:
Nothing changed...?

I already fixed some notes,and some hitsounds

I think my patterns already good,unneed any pattern suggestion

sorry~~

Last edited by Lieselotte 2013-06-24T04:41:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-24T04:38:50+00:00

Frans Niko wrote:
oh wait please
General
Title should be "Mermaid girl -Akiba Koubou MIX-" (Unicode "Mermaid girl -秋葉工房MIX-")
Artist should be "Remixed by DJ Command" (This is how it appears in IIDX)
Source should be "beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle"

OK,fixed thx~~

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2013-06-24T07:01:13+00:00

anyway i'm seriously about the source you must fix the source too

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2013-06-25T00:49:35+00:00

remove 19th on tags

Sync

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Sync 2013-07-12T17:53:27+00:00

good map

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-07-13T12:15:54+00:00

Sync wrote:
good map

Thanks

Loctav

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Loctav 2013-08-06T04:17:11+00:00

Having this in my queue. Will mod this as soon as possible.
Let's get it back to the level it deserves~

Loctav

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Loctav 2013-08-06T21:42:35+00:00

Double post, yo!

[General]

Wrong artist: Artist should be DJ Command not Remixed by DJ Command, lol
Put cream puff into the the tags, since they are the artists of the song.

[LV 10]

Let's fix the barlines from 00:10:036 to 00:12:186

01:10:786 - 0,75x is enough
01:12:186 - remove green line
01:13:586 - remove green line
01:13:986 - x0.75 here
01:14:386 - remove green line
01:15:586 - move green line to 01:14:986
01:14:786 (74786|4,74986|5,75086|3,75186|1,75286|3,75386|5,75486|3) - this could increase the readability of the speedup: http://puu.sh/3Vsdj.jpg but pretty much optional

01:21:986 - do you really want to leave this section empty? this is so unneeded ;_;

[LV 16]

Same barlines as in Lvl 10 please!

patternwise everything seems fine to me
just the break-time is a bit sad and should be mapped ;_;

[LV 24]

Same barlines as in level 10 please! (except 00:54:786 to 00:55:136 and 01:33:186 to 01:36:386)

01:36:136 - move greenline (1,33x one) to 01:36:186

same issue with the break, patterns are fine.

This should be all. Poke me, if you need help applying and/or if you have done everything~

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-08-07T01:21:02+00:00

Loctav wrote:
Double post, yo!

[General]

Wrong artist: Artist should be DJ Command not Remixed by DJ Command, lol
Put cream puff into the the tags, since they are the artists of the song.

[LV 10]

Let's fix the barlines from 00:10:036 to 00:12:186

01:10:786 - 0,75x is enough√
01:12:186 - remove green line√
01:13:586 - remove green line√
01:13:986 - x0.75 here√
01:14:386 - remove green line√
01:15:586 - move green line to 01:14:986 √
01:14:786 (74786|4,74986|5,75086|3,75186|1,75286|3,75386|5,75486|3) - this could increase the readability of the speedup: http://puu.sh/3Vsdj.jpg but pretty much optional × so hard with beginner >.>

01:21:986 - do you really want to leave this section empty? this is so unneeded ;_; but,this is LV.10,not LV.24

[LV 16]

Same barlines as in Lvl 10 please!

patternwise everything seems fine to me
just the break-time is a bit sad and should be mapped ;_; I don't know how to remove break time

[LV 24]

Same barlines as in level 10 please! (except 00:54:786 to 00:55:136 and 01:33:186 to 01:36:386) this is LV.24,Another diff,I think this is enough

01:36:136 - move greenline (1,33x one) to 01:36:186 √

same issue with the break, patterns are fine.

This should be all. Poke me, if you need help applying and/or if you have done everything~

Thanks,Loctav

Last edited by Lieselotte 2013-08-07T02:16:54+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Loctav

Popcorn Fairy

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Joined February 2009

Loctav 2013-08-07T01:25:16+00:00

Your speedups are broken. I don't try to enlighten them, but to fix them. The map has been unranked because of these broken speedups, so I hereby recommend you to fix them accordingly to my mod or else I can't help anymore
Also you didnt fix anything, lol

Without providing me reasons why you denied to change anything at all, I must abandon this map and cant offer any support.

Excellent beatmap.

MMzz

Elite Mapper

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Joined June 2009

MMzz 2013-08-07T04:17:40+00:00

The artist is Remixed by DJ Command actually.
http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/Mermai ... oubou_MIX-
http://www.konamistyle.jp/item/71663 Track 18, Disc 1.

Sadly I can't find any gameplay videos. Not even on Niconico.

"Remix by xxx" is a popular title in some IIDX songs, for remixes of remixes, or something.

Lieselotte

404 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Lieselotte 2013-08-07T04:29:49+00:00

MMzz wrote:
The artist is Remixed by DJ Command actually.
http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/Mermai ... oubou_MIX-
http://www.konamistyle.jp/item/71663 Track 18, Disc 1.

Sadly I can't find any gameplay videos. Not even on Niconico.

"Remix by xxx" is a popular title in some IIDX songs, for remixes of remixes, or something.

fixed

Thanks~~

MMzz

Elite Mapper

3,979 posts

Joined June 2009

MMzz 2013-08-07T04:34:55+00:00

Rebubbled.