• Suggestion
• High suggestion/must fix
[General]
• Nothing.
[RAIN]
• In some parts the yellow combo color is strange to see, I'd suggest to change it in another color would that fits those parts
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Reiji:
• 00:03:673 (1,2,3,4,1) - Fix this star a little bit
• 00:49:018 (6) - Add a note here and then stack it on 00:48:673 (4) - this one, the pattern becomes more awesome and fun to play (and that note fits the music)!
• 02:40:225 (8) - Add a new combo on this note to emphasize 02:40:225 (8,9,10,11) - this square pattern as you did 02:45:742 (1) - here (if that becomes a big problem with combos than don't add it)
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Aleks:
• 00:16:087 (3) - Reverse this slider, it's more cool to play after 00:15:397 (2) - this slider
• 00:56:604 (2) - Reverse this slider and then reverse 00:57:121 (3) - this one too, the pattern will flow better
• 01:40:915 (5) - Move this slider at x:484 y:80 to keep 01:39:880 (1,2) - this spacing from head to head
• 01:41:432 (1) - Stack this note under 01:40:570 (4) - 's end better or make a manual stack to make it more visibile
• 03:34:708 (1) - Aaaaa this yellow, why? I'd change it with another color until 03:44:363 (1) - here
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IceBeam:
• 00:32:294 (3) - This slider is almost touching the HP bar, I'd move it a bit under
• 01:08:501 (5) - Try to remake this slider, it's curved a little bad in the two extremes
• 01:56:087 (8) - Remove the finish from the head and then add a new one on 01:55:915 (7) - this note to keep the finishes consistency in the KIAI. Try adding another finish on 02:01:604 (6) - its end
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narakucrimson:
• 00:34:018 (1) - Add a finish with a low volume on this note
• 02:07:811 (1) - Move this slider at x:108 y:276 to improve 02:06:432 (5,1) - this blanket
• 03:56:777 (1) - As I said to Aleks I'd change this color until the end
• 04:00:225 (7,1) - Add two finishes on their heads
• 04:03:673 (1) - Add a finish on its head
[Escalation]
• 00:02:294 (5) - Move this slider 1 square to left in the tiny grid to improve 00:01:949 (4,5) - this blanket
• 00:10:570 (6) - Rotate this slider by 39° clockwise and then move it at x:300 y:200
• 00:16:087 (4) - Move this slider 1 square un in the tiny grid to improve 00:16:087 (4,5) - this blanket
• 00:34:018 (6,7) - Fix this stack, the note is not stacked under 00:34:018 (6) - this slider's end
• 00:45:052 (1) - until 01:06:432 (5) - use normal-finishes only as you did 01:51:259 (1) - is this kiai
• 01:18:156 (1) - Move this slider a bit left, I'd not overlap 01:17:121 (4,1) - these two elements
• 01:51:949 (3,1) - I'd not overlap these two elements, try moving 01:52:639 (1) - this slider a bit up keeping 01:52:466 (4,1) - this blanket
• 02:06:432 (5) - Add a new combo on this element and then remove the finish from its head to keep the consistency (just look 01:55:397 (1) - here and 02:00:915 (1) - here, you didn't use finishes)
• 02:23:328 (1,2) - Improve the stack at their end
• 03:15:397 (6) - Add a new combo on this slider
• 03:26:087 (3) - Move this slider at x:120 y:212 to make a triangle with 03:25:397 (1,2,3) - these three elements
• 03:47:294 (8) - Add a note here and then move it at x:256 y:284
• 03:52:466 (7) - Add a note here and then move it at x:256 y:196
• 03:57:983 (8) - Copy this note and then paste it 03:58:328 (10) - here
• 04:02:466 (5) - Add a note here
• I suggested to add these notes to make it harder but I'd add notes in the remaining red ticks too (03:50:052 (9) - ...)
[Hard]
• 00:22:983 (1,1) - Improve this blanket a little bit and then try to make a triangle with 00:22:983 (1,1,2) - these three elements (sliderhead and 2 notes)
• 00:25:397 (3,6) - Improve this stack a little bit
• 00:39:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Try to make two squares with these 8 beats instead of two triangles
• 00:53:846 (2) - Move this slider at x:108 y:256 to improve 00:53:328 (1,2) - this blanket
• 00:55:397 (6) - The second repeat is really hard to predict
• 02:11:259 (4) - Remove the finish from its head, it breaks the finishes consistency in the KIAI
• 02:32:639 (6) - Move this beat at x:80 y:316 to make a triangle with 02:31:949 (4,5,6) - these three elements
• 03:48:501 (1) - Add a finish on its head
• 03:54:018 (4) - 03:59:535 (1) - 04:05:052 (4) - Same as above for these three sliders
• 04:03:328 (4) - Remove this whistle
[Normal]
• 00:34:018 (5) - Stack this slider on 00:31:949 (3) - this note
• 00:47:811 (1,2) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 00:53:328 (1,2) - Same as above
• 01:51:604 (1) - If you play the map 01:50:225 (1,2,3) - the third stacked element goes touch it. I'd try to flip 01:50:225 (1,2,3) - these elements vertically and then make a blanket with 01:50:915 (3,1) - these two elements
• 01:54:018 (1,2) - 01:59:535 (1,2) - 02:05:052 (3,4) - Same as 00:47:811 (1,2) -
• 01:56:777 (1) - Add a finish on this note
• 02:32:639 (1,2) - Fix this blanket a little bit
• 02:54:708 (1,3) - Make a blanket with these two elements
• 03:21:777 (1) - Useless greenline here
• 03:21:863 (1) - ^
• 03:31:604 (2) - Move this slider a bit down, I'd not overlap 03:29:880 (5,2) - these two elements
[Easy]
• Use HP2 and OD2 to balance the spread
• Nothing to say except that there are some useless greenlines:
• 01:28:501 (1) - Useless greenline here
• 01:29:535 (2) - ^
• 02:54:708 (3) - ^
• 03:21:777 (1) - ^
• 03:21:863 (1) - ^
. I hope it will get ranked soon, good luck!