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Anamanaguchi - STILL SPLODIN' THO (Interlude) [Taiko|Osu|Osu

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Liiraye
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Topic Starter
Liiraye
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 1 november 2013 at 23:06:22

Artist: Anamanaguchi
Title: STILL SPLODIN' THO (Interlude)
Tags: Kyshiro Dolphin HanzeR Kin Chiptune Indie rock Endless Fantasy
BPM: 200,84
Filesize: 3363kb
Play Time: 00:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Donphin Muzukashii (4,78 stars, 252 notes)
  2. Donphin Oni (4,89 stars, 418 notes)
  3. Easy (2,61 stars, 72 notes)
  4. Extra (4,89 stars, 274 notes)
  5. HanzeR's Insane - 7Key (5 stars, 862 notes)
  6. HanzeR's Normal - 7Key (2,15 stars, 234 notes)
  7. Hard (5 stars, 187 notes)
  8. Kin's Rain (5 stars, 278 notes)
  9. Kin's Salad (4,97 stars, 153 notes)
  10. Kyshiro's Insane (5 stars, 236 notes)
  11. Normal (4,31 stars, 83 notes)
Download: Anamanaguchi - STILL SPLODIN' THO (Interlude)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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STILL SPLODIN'!
Thanks to Azer for timing!
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A big thank you to everyone involved, Kyshiro, HanzeR, Dolphin and Kin! Not to mention all the mods I've recieved. <3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lADI61nVcJc - vote for Anamanaguchi @Toutube music awards!

Useless progess
Easy: 100% Done 2013-07-11
Normal: 100% Done 2013-07-11
Hard: 100% Done 2013-07-11
Kyshiro's Insane: 100% Done 2013-07-11
Extra: 100% Done 2013-07-11
Donphin Muzukashii: 100% Done 2013-07-14
Donphin Oni: 100% Done 2013-07-12
HanzeR's Easy Mania: 100% Done 2013-07-23
HanzeR's Insane Mania: 100% Done 2013-07-23
Kin's Salad: 100% Done 2013-08-23
Kin's Rain: 100% Done 2013-08-09
Hitsounds: 100% Done 2013-07-12

I can't believe I actually ranked a map
Last edited by Liiraye , edited 74 times in total.
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
General
Why is the offset different in the Oni?
You need two taikos.

Easy
There were some things I was not sure of. The hitsounds sound inconsistent in spots, and some patterns choices I would have never have done. I had a hard time making suggestions for this difficulty that matched how you mapped so I stayed largely neutral about parts of your map. Get more mods for it.

00:07:826 (6,1) - Not sure about this transition. It looks crude to me. Having 1 below 6 would make for a much nicer pattern.
00:15:892 (4,1) - I don't like that you switch rhythms in a stack.
00:18:880 (3) - Ends on the wrong tick. It creates an improper transition into the next rhythm. I'm not sure the ideal way to fix it though. I think having a slider here 00:20:971 - feels more natural. I would have had it end here 00:22:166 - .
00:41:883 (3) - Random soft whistle on the repeat.

Normal

Hanzer tag is different than the other difficulties.
Unsnapped object ends (check AiMod)
00:00:657 (1,2) - This is quite an awkward way to start a Normal. Highly recommend reducing increasing to 1/1 length without repeats.
00:03:046 (4,1) - It would be better if you could get this closer to 1.00 spacing.
00:15:892 (1) - Not sure about this note. It's kind of distracting, because it's not the start of a rhythm, but it starts after a gap. Removing it would be best for the rhythm.
00:17:984 (1,2,3) - Spacing is confusing for a Normal, and just hard to read in general.
00:18:880 (3,4,5) - ^ Not much better.
00:20:225 (5,1) - Too close.
00:30:531 (2) - Shortly after a fast mini-repeater is not the time to have a slow long slider. I came up with this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/865469 It flows better.
00:49:053 (4) - New combo.
00:49:651 (5) - I think this sounds better being 1/1 long and ending with a Normal clap. Fill the gap after with a note.

Hard

00:20:971 (1,2) - Missing claps on the end.
00:23:063 (6,7,8,1,2) - I don't know what to think about this transition. 00:22:764 (4,5,6) - could be curved more downward to create a better shape. 7,8 would probably look better as a slider, but i'm not sure if the flow is better. Instead of a blanketing, perhaps just have an upward facing arch coming from the slider. Example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/865496 Not sure how the yellow combo fits into everything.
00:39:793 (3,4,5,6) - Grid snap off and space more consistently to 1.00
00:41:585 (4,5,1) - ^
00:43:676 (4,5) - Use a slider instead?
00:49:054 (5) - Hard to sight read. Highly suggest removing 2 repeats and filling 00:49:352 - with a note stacked on the next slider.
00:51:444 (1) - ^ something similar.
00:53:535 (3) - ^? Maybe. I'm not sure about this one. Might be fine.


Going to mod the last two difficulties another day.
Dolphin
1,167 posts
Joined January 2012
Dolphin
Finished Muzukashii just now.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/509 ... %20THO.rar

Imo the maps aren't that enjoyable but at least some people might enjoy them
Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Liiraye

TheVileOne wrote:

General
Why is the offset different in the Oni?
You need two taikos.

Easy
There were some things I was not sure of. The hitsounds sound inconsistent in spots, and some patterns choices I would have never have done. I had a hard time making suggestions for this difficulty that matched how you mapped so I stayed largely neutral about parts of your map. Get more mods for it.

00:07:826 (6,1) - Not sure about this transition. It looks crude to me. Having 1 below 6 would make for a much nicer pattern. Noted, I did similar changes to what you suggested
00:15:892 (4,1) - I don't like that you switch rhythms in a stack. Worked my way around it~
00:18:880 (3) - Ends on the wrong tick. It creates an improper transition into the next rhythm. I'm not sure the ideal way to fix it though. I think having a slider here 00:20:971 - feels more natural. I would have had it end here 00:22:166 - . Didn't quite do as you said but I changed that area a bit to your timings
00:41:883 (3) - Random soft whistle on the repeat. Thanks, lol.

Normal

Hanzer tag is different than the other difficulties. Fix'd
Unsnapped object ends (check AiMod)
00:00:657 (1,2) - This is quite an awkward way to start a Normal. Highly recommend reducing increasing to 1/1 length without repeats. Fix'd
00:03:046 (4,1) - It would be better if you could get this closer to 1.00 spacing. Fix'd
00:15:892 (1) - Not sure about this note. It's kind of distracting, because it's not the start of a rhythm, but it starts after a gap. Removing it would be best for the rhythm. I agree
00:17:984 (1,2,3) - Spacing is confusing for a Normal, and just hard to read in general. Somehow the repeat slider was longer than it should be so it got a bit weird. Fixed anyway!
00:18:880 (3,4,5) - ^ Not much better. nope
00:20:225 (5,1) - Too close. fix'd
00:30:531 (2) - Shortly after a fast mini-repeater is not the time to have a slow long slider. I came up with this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/865469 It flows better. Sure, but red tick sliders? Isn't that against some rule? :P I've changed it for now though.
00:49:053 (4) - New combo. fix'd
00:49:651 (5) - I think this sounds better being 1/1 long and ending with a Normal clap. Fill the gap after with a note. fix'd

Hard

00:20:971 (1,2) - Missing claps on the end. fix'd
00:23:063 (6,7,8,1,2) - I don't know what to think about this transition. 00:22:764 (4,5,6) - could be curved more downward to create a better shape. 7,8 would probably look better as a slider, but i'm not sure if the flow is better. Instead of a blanketing, perhaps just have an upward facing arch coming from the slider. Example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/865496 Not sure how the yellow combo fits into everything. Somewhat fix'd
00:39:793 (3,4,5,6) - Grid snap off and space more consistently to 1.00 fix'd
00:41:585 (4,5,1) - ^ fix'd
00:43:676 (4,5) - Use a slider instead? fix'd
00:49:054 (5) - Hard to sight read. Highly suggest removing 2 repeats and filling 00:49:352 - with a note stacked on the next slider. fix'd
00:51:444 (1) - ^ something similar.fix'd
00:53:535 (3) - ^? Maybe. I'm not sure about this one. Might be fine. kept it for now


Going to mod the last two difficulties another day.
Alright, thanks for modding. I'll give you a KD now anyway and take your word for it! :)
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
I'm just doing a simple mod on the Extra diff.

[Extra]

00:05:287 (4) - add normal whistle
00:07:677 (2) - ^
00:12:606 (2) - ^
00:15:295 (4) - please put this note on top of slider 00:15:444 (5)
00:15:444 (5) - delete end slider whistle
00:23:361 (6) - add end slider normal whistle
00:23:809 (1) - delete whistle
00:24:556 (4) - delete whistle
00:25:004 (5) - add normal whistle
00:25:153 (6) - 1 lvl 4 grid to the left and delete whistle
00:25:452 (7) - 1 lvl 4 grid up
00:29:933 (1) - resnap slider end
00:33:220 (1) - end slider add soft whistle
00:33:668 (2,3,4) - add soft whistle
00:36:655 (6) - 3 lvl 4 grid down (for hidden players)
00:56:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - instead of this very long stream part, maybe you can add some repeating sliders? For example:



or something else you might prefer (bad example, but you get the idea).

01:00:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think this ending is ok, but the rhythm is weird to click at the end of a map like this ^^.
01:02:198 (5,6) - maybe add 2 notes here

awesome song!
All of the above are suggestions except for: "00:29:933 (1) - resnap slider end"
Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Liiraye

Ultimate wrote:

I'm just doing a simple mod on the Extra diff.

[Extra]

00:05:287 (4) - add normal whistle
00:07:677 (2) - ^
00:12:606 (2) - ^
00:15:295 (4) - please put this note on top of slider 00:15:444 (5)
00:15:444 (5) - delete end slider whistle
00:23:361 (6) - add end slider normal whistle
00:23:809 (1) - delete whistle
00:24:556 (4) - delete whistle
00:25:004 (5) - add normal whistle
00:25:153 (6) - 1 lvl 4 grid to the left and delete whistle
00:25:452 (7) - 1 lvl 4 grid up
00:29:933 (1) - resnap slider end
00:33:220 (1) - end slider add soft whistle
00:33:668 (2,3,4) - add soft whistle
00:36:655 (6) - 3 lvl 4 grid down (for hidden players)
00:56:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - instead of this very long stream part, maybe you can add some repeating sliders? For example:



or something else you might prefer (bad example, but you get the idea).

01:00:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think this ending is ok, but the rhythm is weird to click at the end of a map like this ^^.
01:02:198 (5,6) - maybe add 2 notes here

awesome song!
All of the above are suggestions except for: "00:29:933 (1) - resnap slider end"
Applied most of the changes and did some of my own, thanks a lot! It really helped.
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
The rest of the mod. No need to kudosu.

Donphin's Oni

Missing tags

Insane
Nice switchback sliders.

00:30:680 (4,5) - for some reason I prefer this to be a slider instead.
00:35:311 (3,4,5) - Unusual looking transition. It would look nicer if 00:35:311 (3) - was a blanket with 2.I'm not sure how 5 would fit into the pattern though.
00:44:871 (4,5,6) - Bad flow IMO.
00:50:248 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I think the structure is a little shaky here. I felt that 00:50:846 (3) - was a bit too close to the object it wraps around. The angle for this 00:51:443 (1,2,3,4) - isn't the same as the angles created at 00:50:846 (3,4) -. I lessened the curve coming out of that pattern and it seemed to play more naturally. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/869006 (you may also want to adjust the spacing to account for stack leaning). Whether or not you should move 00:50:846 (3) - further away from the blanketed object is up to you. I'm not sure how far it would need to be or how to deal with the complications it will make.

Extra
There are many design choices that i wouldn't have used in this map. Take this mod as being my opinion and don't feel pressured to change something i point out if you disagree with it.

00:03:643 (4,5) - Unusual angles. I don't agree with the end of 5 being so near to 4. You could create a more normal pattern without much trouble. Only my opinion and my advice for this part.
00:06:930 (6,7) - Completely unnecessary change of pattern from the design mentioned above. The slider end is even closer in this case. You should fix this.
00:07:527 (1,2,3) - Random in combo spacing change. This is unnecessary.
00:13:502 (5) - Bad looking curve and doesn't fit with any nearby pattern. I'm not exactly sure what the most proper way to fix this is. Creating a blanket with the previous slider is an option.
00:15:295 (4,5) - I feel this should be higher and more to the left. How about x 320 y 52?
00:19:925 (5) - What was your creative inspiration for this slider? I'm not sure I agree with including a random linear slider after a long pattern of using curved sliders.
00:23:062 Improve this shape by making the slider points more even.
00:23:361 (6,1,2) - clean up this shape. The symmetry isn't good. Pick a design where 00:23:809 (1) - is roughly inbetween the slider arcs.
00:25:153 (6,7) - Poorly designed. here's an example pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/869042
00:26:348 (3,4,5) - Try cascading pattern here for better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/869045 What do you think? Use only if you like it, because it's only my opinion. I'm not sure if it's truly better than what you have now in all factors.
00:34:415 (1,2) - Stack better.
00:35:012 (3,4,5) - Why is your map filled with random patterns? I just threw together this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/869053 It might not be entirely polished. It's only an example of what you might choice to do instead. I tried to end 5 so that it formed a square with the next combo.
00:45:468 (5,6,7) - Has that random feel to it, because the sliders don't look the same.
00:47:858 (1,2,3,4) - Random.., but the flow fits. I'm not exactly sure what needs to be done to fix this. Ask for second opinions.
Not sure what I think about the end of the song.



Conclusion

Needs more mods. There are issues that I cannot fix that others may be able to.
Demmon
961 posts
Joined June 2012
Demmon
Hi, from #modreqs (Taiko mod only D: )
Sorry for bad english :<

(very) little mod

I love this Muzukashii, but I have some suggestion :>

[Donphin Muzukashii]

00:29:635 - d ?
00:29:710 - ^ listen the music, a ddd sounds good (?)
00:56:224 (234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - a "d d d d d [...]" is very repetitive, I think a spinner is better here
01:01:751 - You can add a d here for follow the music
01:02:348 (257) - You can move it here 01:02:498 - (Same reason)
01:03:394 - d ? (Same reason)
01:03:991 - D ? (Same reason)
If you add d at 01:03:394 - 50% volume ? (Same reason)
If you add D at 01:03:991 - 25% volume ? (Same reason)

I can't mod the Donphin Oni atm :<
Dolphin
1,167 posts
Joined January 2012
Dolphin
Time to answer this.

Demmon wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs (Taiko mod only D: )
Sorry for bad english :<

(very) little mod

I love this Muzukashii, but I have some suggestion :>

[Donphin Muzukashii]

00:29:635 - d ? This is a good way to fade into following drums, so yes.
00:29:710 - ^ listen the music, a ddd sounds good (?) okay
00:56:224 (234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - a "d d d d d [...]" is very repetitive, I think a spinner is better here Replacing this with a spinner would make this tideous and out of rhythm. Spinners (dendens) are to be used the there is no rhythm that one can tell.
01:01:751 - You can add a d here for follow the music Nicely spotted. I didn't hear that when I mapped this.
01:02:348 (257) - You can move it here 01:02:498 - (Same reason) okay
01:03:394 - d ? (Same reason) no, stopping at the same time as Oni.
01:03:991 - D ? (Same reason) ^
If you add d at 01:03:394 - 50% volume ? (Same reason) not mapping here
If you add D at 01:03:991 - 25% volume ? (Same reason) not mapping here

I can't mod the Donphin Oni atm :<
Thanks for me mod. Minor changes but any mod is good really!

http://puu.sh/3FK09.osu (Copy & Paste this text into the Muzu, Liiraye)
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Here's your mod4mod :3


Easy:
  1. 00:03:643 (1) - how about adding a finish to this note? it sounds good imo..
  2. 00:34:415 (2) - ^ but at slider's end
  3. 00:38:298 (6) - this slider might be a bit too hard for easy diff maybe do something else, as remove the repeats and add notes instead?
  4. 00:47:858 (4,5,6) - don't use that many stucks in easy diff it's too hard to read :<

Normal:
  1. 00:36:805 (1,2) - umm i know this is normal..but i highly suggest you to unstuck those notes it's a bit too hard and confusing, because it's so sudden..
  2. 00:47:560 (2) - this slider would look nicer if you made it like this..
    SPOILER
  3. 00:50:547 (4) - ^
    SPOILER
  4. 00:56:223 (1,1,1,1) - i don't this kind of slider's should be there in normal..i think you should think of something else reather doing this imo..


Hard:
  1. 00:11:411 (2) - this slider's looks a bit bad how about moving the 2nd slider point to x:112 y:312, and the last slider point to x:32 y:240
  2. 00:12:606 (4) - if i were you i would just copy+pastes 00:12:009 (3) - and ctrl+h so it'll look much better
  3. 00:17:984 (4) - nc here for music change


Extra:
good diff o.o


Kyshiro's Insane:
nothing found >< great insane orz


That's all i can find :3 good luck with your map!
Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Liiraye
Thanks, I found some things to change from your mod!
DexFrild
304 posts
Joined December 2010
DexFrild
Hi from #modreq
Sorry for my broken english m(._.)m

[Hard]

01:01:003 - 01:02:497 - Very hard to read this. And play of cource.
Try it:


[Normal]

00:14:100 (4) - NC
00:16:191 (4) - ^
00:17:983 (1) - Remove NC and add to 00:18:880 (3)
00:23:660 (1) - Delete circle. 00:23:062 add slider 1/1 with reverse.
Like this:
00:23:958 (5) - NC
00:34:415 (1) - Move this slider to 00:34:116 and make 1/1.
Like this:
(Remove Clap to slider start, and remove NC)

00:34:713 - NC and this slider end to 00:35:012 (Clap on slider end)
00:36:805 (1,2) - Delete it. 00:36:506 add slider 1/2 with revers.
Like this:
(Clap to slider end)
00:37:103 (5) - NC
00:38:000 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:493 - NC
00:40:390 - Remove NC
00:41:585 - NC
00:42:780 - Remove NC
00:44:273 - NC
00:45:170 - Circle
00:53:833 NC if you want.
00:56:223 (1,1,1,1) - It so hard for Normal. Delete it, and add spinner.

Also.. Good work :3 Good Luck~~
Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Liiraye
Very helpful, I think I applied your entire mod! :)
-GN
Champion Above Champions
734 posts
Joined June 2011
-GN
Doing a mod because you're a cool guy(and to a lesser extent m4m). :D
Mostly suggestions, though.

[General]
Apply tags Kyshiro and HanzeR to tags on both Taiko diffs. Their red timing section lines in those are also inconsistent with the rest of the mapset, being at 00:00:657 when they should be at 00:00:059.
The start of the last kiai in Extra seems to have been pushed back 1/4. Put it on 00:29:934 or something!
Also, it seems as if every green section are off by 1ms except for Kyshiro's Insane. Did you change the offset some time ago?

[Extra]
00:11:859 (3) - place this at x196-y220 to get some symmetry in this pattern?
00:18:282 (4) - stack this with 00:17:386 (2) ? maybe you'll have to move it a bit like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878404
00:20:971 (1,2) - these two look a bit random, try making it symmetric by replacing one slider with a copy of the other, or something

i felt the pattern on 00:38:298 was a bit lacking in hitsounds, and it sounded very differently than the other small drum-sounded triples you've got at various places. i think this sounds good.
00:38:298 (1,2,1,2,4,1,2) - Drum sampleset
00:38:298 (1,1,4,5,1) - Clap, normal additions

00:44:871 (3,7) - stack these?

[Kyshiro's Insane]
not much to say here
00:21:270 (3,4) - i don't like this stack all that much, what about doing this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878455
00:30:232 (2) - Unsnapped slider.

second half of the map played fantastically. good job

[Hard]
00:10:665 (4) - rotate this so it doesn't stack with slider (2) on the next combo

there are a bunch of overlaps in the map that look a bit ugly and all seem easily fixable, such as 00:15:892 (7) - 00:18:880 (1) - 00:32:025 (8) etc. why don't you fix them? it tends to look nicer

nothing more to point out here.

[Normal]
00:26:349 (2,3) - blanket these?
00:28:440 (4) - try to align the ticks with the 90 degree bend or do another shape entirely, this isn't a very good solution
00:38:896 (4) - add another repeat to this?
00:44:273 (1,2) - blanket?
00:59:808 (2,3) - blanket these in some way?

[Easy]
AR -1? 3 seems a bit fast

00:14:100 (2,3) - i think the beat placement of this part is a bit wonky - i tried to fix it, but had to rearrange the patterns after a bit. did this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878480 - changes done below
00:15:892 (4,5,1) - is blanketed as usual
00:18:880 (2) - horizontally flipped and put at x84-y364
00:20:971 (3,4) - horizontally flipped. blanketed them to reduce distance snap and to make it look nicer http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878482
rest is as usual! move it around a bit if you want

this is a bit nazi, but 00:39:493 (1,2) - are slightly unparallel - place them close to each other and see if you can fix it.
00:59:808 (4,1) - blanket these?

alright, done! 8-)
Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Liiraye
Thanks a lot! majority changed :)
raulmax319
43 posts
Joined November 2012
raulmax319
Hi m4m

Easy

Ar+1
OD+1

00:16:191 (5) - 1/1 slider

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Normal

Slider tick up to 2

00:06:333 (3,4,5,6) - inconsistent rythm in these sliders, how about it
SPOILER
00:08:125 - Add new circle
00:09:021 (8) - Move it to 00:08:872 -
00:09:320 (10) - remove it
00:09:170 - Add reverse slider with 00:09:469 - end
00:35:012 - change this clap for a finish

___________________________________

Extra

00:20:971 (1) - 1/1 slider with a circle 00:21:419 -
00:21:568 (1) - ^ with a circle 00:22:017 -
00:24:556 (4) - Make it 1/2 slider with a circle
00:40:390 (4) - Ctrl+G

___________________________________

Hard

00:30:232 - Change the clap for a finish

i think it's ok.
___________________________________

Kyshiro's Insane

lol it's good i can't see anything more
I may have missed something though, sorry.

Good Luck~
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints in General.
[Easy]
* Nice ^^
:?: 00:38:298 (6) - Sliders with more than 1 repeat can be confusing to newbies due to fact they don't expect more than 1.

[Normal | Extra]
* No complaints here

[Hard]
00:44:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern could be improved imo, in this way → just do these steps in this order:
  2. a) 00:44:573 (2,3) - Ctrl+G?
  3. b) 00:45:170 (4,6) - ^
  4. c) 00:45:768 (6,8) - ^
  5. d) 00:46:365 (8) - Move to x:328 y:224
00:47:859 (1,2,3,4) - This is a BAD overlap =.= Should make these like this → http://puu.sh/3I79z.jpg

[Kyshiro's Insane]
* No complaints here too^^

And that's it ^^

Good luck ranking ^^

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Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Liiraye
Thanks for both mods!
Mismagius
9,237 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
hi :)

[General]
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:643 (1,2) - Why not have whistles on these notes? You used them on 00:01:851 (2,3) and 00:06:033 (4,5).
  2. 00:06:033 (4) - You might want to add new combo for consistency. Besides, it would feel much better to play.
  3. 00:10:813 (3) - Would be cooler if perfectly aligned with (2). Spacing isn't that much of an issue here, honestly, so there's no need to fix the next note's spacing in this case.
  4. 00:13:502 (2) - y u no note ;_; please add a note here with clap+whistle and if you're wondering about the placement, it can stay on x:140 y:168
  5. 00:18:282 (2) - Same as before. Adding a note with clap and making it stay on 212;380 would be much better and make the map feel less empty. Beginners like to pretend they're playing the full song rather than a simplification of it.
  6. You can keep doing this on 00:20:672 (3) and the rest of them.
  7. 00:32:921 (4) - Adding a whistle to the start and end (no repeat) would sound pretty cool :3
  8. 00:35:908 (4,5) - I don't really like the flow in this part. You could make it like this to make it flow better.
  9. 00:46:365 (3) - This rhythm really doesn't seem to fit much... I tried to find another way, see if you like it. (obviously, move the slider to stack with (6))
  10. 00:49:053 (7,1) - Where are the whistles at the end of these sliders?
  11. 00:58:613 (2) - New combo should be here, not on 00:57:418 (1).
[Normal]

  • I think this is a pretty big gap from Easy. I wouldn't really recommend making another diff to fill this gap, but it should be something to take care on your next beatmaps.

    By the way, AR+1 would be nice since the kiai feels a bit crumpled with such low AR.
  1. 00:02:449 (3,4) - Try this? It flows a bit better imo.
  2. 00:06:333 (3) - I think newcombo would fit more here than on 00:04:839 (1).
  3. 00:23:062 (4) - Make it curved like this so it flows better?
  4. 00:30:531 (2) - Whistle on start? Now it feels like you forgot it. :P
  5. 00:30:979 (3) - Also, adding a whistle here would work well.
  6. 00:35:311 (2) - Whistle again. You should try adding more whistles at the kiai, it would work nicely. I'm gonna stop bothering you with them, though.
  7. 00:38:896 (4) - Right now, it looks like it's going to repeat once more so it goes to (1), but no! Well, you can fix this situation by making it look like this.
[Muzukashii]

  • Loved this diff <3
[Oni]

  • Cool but too hard to me ;_;
[Hard]

  1. 00:02:449 (4) - Would flow much better if curved the other way around, in my opinion.
  2. 00:07:826 (3) - please make it curved like this so it looks nice~
  3. 00:14:399 (2) - This one should have the new combo, not 00:14:100 (1)! D:
  4. 00:32:324 (1,2,3) - I can't really agree with this... It's just so unexpected. But well, it fits with the song, so yeah. Just pointing out that it feels/plays quite weird.
  5. 00:43:079 (1) - not perfectly stacked :(
  6. 00:53:087 (1,2) - flows better like this
Gotta go now, will edit this post later o3o/
HanzeR
921 posts
Joined May 2012
HanzeR
insane
osu file format v12

[General]
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329,192,21569,128,0,22166:0:0:0:0:
402,192,22166,128,0,22465:0:0:0:0:
475,192,22465,128,0,22764:0:0:0:0:
36,192,23660,128,0,23810:0:0:0:0:
182,192,23810,128,0,23959:0:0:0:0:
329,192,23959,128,0,24108:0:0:0:0:
182,192,24258,128,0,24407:0:0:0:0:
329,192,24407,128,0,24556:0:0:0:0:
475,192,24706,128,0,24855:0:0:0:0:
256,192,25005,128,0,25154:0:0:0:0:
36,192,25751,128,0,26349:0:0:0:0:
329,192,26349,128,0,26946:0:0:0:0:
402,192,26946,128,0,27245:0:0:0:0:
475,192,27245,128,0,28440:0:0:0:0:
36,192,27544,128,0,28440:0:0:0:0:
109,192,28440,128,0,28590:0:0:0:0:
402,192,28590,128,0,28739:0:0:0:0:
256,192,28739,128,0,28888:0:0:0:0:
182,192,29038,128,0,29187:0:0:0:0:
329,192,29187,128,0,29336:0:0:0:0:
475,192,29486,128,0,29859:0:0:0:0:
256,192,29934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,30083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,30233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,30233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,30382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,30531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,30681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,30830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,30830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,30980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,31129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,31278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,31428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,31428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,31577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,31726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,31876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,32025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,32025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,32175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,32324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,32473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,32623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,32623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,32772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,32921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,33071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,33220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,33220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,33370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,33519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,33668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,33818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,33818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,33967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,34116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,34266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,34415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,34415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,34565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,34565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,34863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,35013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,35013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,35311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,35610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,35610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,35760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,35909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,36058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,36208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,36208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,36357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,36506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,36656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,36805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,36805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,36955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,37253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,37403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,37403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,37552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,37851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,38000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,38000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,38150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,38299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,38448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,38598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,38747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,38896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,39046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,39195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,39195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,39345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,39345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,39494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,39494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,39643,128,0,39793:0:0:0:0:
329,192,39793,128,0,39942:0:0:0:0:
36,192,39942,128,0,40091:0:0:0:0:
256,192,40091,128,0,40241:0:0:0:0:
109,192,40241,128,0,40390:0:0:0:0:
402,192,40390,128,0,40540:0:0:0:0:
256,192,40540,128,0,40689:0:0:0:0:
256,192,40838,128,0,40988:0:0:0:0:
256,192,41137,128,0,41286:0:0:0:0:
329,192,41436,128,0,41585:0:0:0:0:
182,192,41585,128,0,41735:0:0:0:0:
36,192,41735,128,0,41884:0:0:0:0:
36,192,42033,128,0,42183:0:0:0:0:
36,192,42332,128,0,42481:0:0:0:0:
182,192,42631,128,0,42780:0:0:0:0:
329,192,42780,128,0,42930:0:0:0:0:
256,192,42930,128,0,43079:0:0:0:0:
256,192,43228,128,0,43378:0:0:0:0:
256,192,43527,128,0,43676:0:0:0:0:
329,192,43826,128,0,43975:0:0:0:0:
182,192,43975,128,0,44274:0:0:0:0:
475,192,44274,128,0,44423:0:0:0:0:
182,192,44423,128,0,44573:0:0:0:0:
329,192,44573,128,0,44722:0:0:0:0:
36,192,44722,128,0,44871:0:0:0:0:
256,192,44871,128,0,45021:0:0:0:0:
109,192,45021,128,0,45170:0:0:0:0:
402,192,45170,128,0,45320:0:0:0:0:
256,192,45320,128,0,45469:0:0:0:0:
256,192,45618,128,0,45768:0:0:0:0:
256,192,45917,128,0,46066:0:0:0:0:
109,192,46216,128,0,46365:0:0:0:0:
402,192,46365,128,0,46515:0:0:0:0:
36,192,46515,128,0,46664:0:0:0:0:
36,192,46813,128,0,46963:0:0:0:0:
36,192,47112,128,0,47261:0:0:0:0:
109,192,47411,128,0,47560:0:0:0:0:
402,192,47560,128,0,47710:0:0:0:0:
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256,192,48008,128,0,48158:0:0:0:0:
256,192,48307,128,0,48456:0:0:0:0:
329,192,48606,128,0,48755:0:0:0:0:
182,192,48755,128,0,49054:0:0:0:0:
36,192,49054,128,0,53236:0:0:0:0:
256,192,51444,128,0,53236:0:0:0:0:
475,192,53236,128,0,53834:0:0:0:0:
109,192,53834,128,0,58016:0:0:0:0:
256,192,56224,128,0,58016:0:0:0:0:
402,192,58016,128,0,58614:0:0:0:0:
256,192,58614,128,0,60406:0:0:0:0:

yeaaaaaaaaaa
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
Hi~

[General]
  1. Is this .mp3 a bit quite or is it just me? o.o
  2. You should end your second Kiai time at 00:49:053 -
  3. You hitsound volume should start decreasing at 00:58:613 - until 01:03:991 - at 05%.
  4. Your preview point starts in an abrupt way. Try a different place like 00:29:485 - ?

[Extra]
  1. I think you should lower your HP Drain Rate by -1. Currently it's so easy to die in the end and the only reason is cause of a lack of notes to hit...
  2. 00:26:946 (5) - Better to shorten by 1 repeat instead.
  3. 00:28:738 (2,3,5) - Shoulnd't these be same hitsounds as 00:00:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too?
  4. 00:38:597 (1,1) - Better to remove new combo probably.
  5. 00:42:481 (1) - Remove new combo.
  6. 00:58:016 - Maybe just continue as Normal samepleset and just decrease volume instead. Your current hitsounding doesn't match the music.

[Kyshiro's Insane]
  1. AR-1
  2. 00:27:245 (4) - Better to change to a note instead.

[Hard]
  1. 00:30:979 - 00:31:278 - 00:31:577 - 00:31:875 - These should all be soft hit whistles, right?
  2. 00:49:054 (5) - New combo.
  3. 00:59:211 (2) - New combo.

Good luck~
Kotayo
56 posts
Joined July 2012
Kotayo
hello there ^^
giving modding a try, will probably be horrible but i'll atleast try

Easy

00:02:448 - i want a clap at the end of this
00:07:228 - i think a clap would fit better
00:08:423 (1,2) - clap at the end to fit with the above changes (if you applied them)
00:18:282 - clap?
00:57:418 - ^


Normal

i can't find anything wrong and it feels nice to play ^^


Extra

00:36:207 - could either this be moved down a bit or 00:36:655 - be moved up to put (6) above (3)? or do you want them that way?
00:38:896 (4,5) - this feels better to me with a triplet but this is just what i feel
00:48:904 (1,2) - small detail but i think moving (1) to x:168 y128 and (2) to x:188 y:104 looks and flows better (in my opinion). here's a puush of it http://puu.sh/3KFgO


Hard

00:44:572 - add a clap as you have one on all the other ones that follow?
00:44:871 - and remove this clap then i guess
00:51:892 - this sounds weird to me and i don't even know why >.<


Kyshiro's Insane

playing this felt like playing a ranked map = can't find anything





i'm not even gonna give a try at the taiko or mania maps as i don't play those modes
overall very nice mapset and sorry for my horrible modding ;w;
Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Liiraye

Kotayo wrote:

hello there ^^
giving modding a try, will probably be horrible but i'll atleast try

Easy

00:02:448 - i want a clap at the end of this
00:07:228 - i think a clap would fit better
00:08:423 (1,2) - clap at the end to fit with the above changes (if you applied them)
00:18:282 - clap?
00:57:418 - ^


Normal

i can't find anything wrong and it feels nice to play ^^


Extra

00:36:207 - could either this be moved down a bit or 00:36:655 - be moved up to put (6) above (3)? or do you want them that way?
00:38:896 (4,5) - this feels better to me with a triplet but this is just what i feel
00:48:904 (1,2) - small detail but i think moving (1) to x:168 y128 and (2) to x:188 y:104 looks and flows better (in my opinion). here's a puush of it http://puu.sh/3KFgO


Hard

00:44:572 - add a clap as you have one on all the other ones that follow?
00:44:871 - and remove this clap then i guess
00:51:892 - this sounds weird to me and i don't even know why >.<


Kyshiro's Insane

playing this felt like playing a ranked map = can't find anything





i'm not even gonna give a try at the taiko or mania maps as i don't play those modes
overall very nice mapset and sorry for my horrible modding ;w;

Thanks for both mods, they helped!
p3n
Global Moderator
947 posts
Joined June 2009
p3n
hey there :)


General
Diff names for your o!m should be changed. Don't CAPS them and don't include the "for Liiroy".
Taiko diffs should be "Donphin's Muzukashii/Oni".


Easy
Beginners tend to follow the most dominant parts of the song that they hear. In this case it would be the melody and you should try to follow it more intuitively with your beatplacement. Also try to keep consistent spacings throughout the map so new players can learn the time-distance correlation (aka "reading" beatmaps)
00:10:813 (3,1) - spacing
00:11:411 (1) - try to break this one up into seperate notes to match the melody (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/886706)
00:15:892 (5,6) - avoid stacking in beginner diffs
00:18:880 (3,4,5,6) - spacing
00:26:946 (4,5) - avoid stacking
00:34:415 (2,1) - spacing
00:40:688 (2,3) - spacing
00:43:676 (4,5) - avoid stacking
00:48:456 (6,7) - spacing (overlaps should be minimal or non-existent with fixed 1,00x spacing here)
00:53:236 (4,1) - spacing

The spacing issues HAVE to be fixed for this map.



Normal
00:39:493 (1,2) - try to shape (1) in a way to avoid the overlap with (2) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/886726

otherwise solid map, good job



Hard
00:17:984 (1) - why the soft whistle on the ending here? There is nothing here to support this. Try to stick to the baseline for this combo and just use N/N or A/A
00:22:764 (1,2) - weird hitsounding imo. The almost silenced downbeat is something you should avoid at all costs. Try the drum sampleset finish on these two notes. It fits the baseline and pronounces the downbeat.
00:38:598 (3) - repeat arrow is partially hidden under the hitburst, also overlapping the reverse arrow is not recommended
00:38:896 (4,5,1,2) - this part is really cluttered. It is still readable but very ugly. Try to spread this out more and avoid the overlaps
00:59:510 (2) - 01:01:004 (1) - these triple repeats are really awkward here. Might work if you split them into 2 seperate sliders without repeating



Extra
Some really weird spacing changes that are inconsistent. You should try to make the patterns perfectly readable from the first time someone plays this map (and the "Extra"-diff name is no reason to ignore this):
00:04:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - chaotic pattern. Try to use someting more structured here (star patterns, triangle patterns....anything)
00:15:892 (1) - starting the melody follow with the END of the slider is breaking the flow here. Try to use a slider start or circle on 00:16:191 -



Kyshiro's Insane
Some chaotic spacings make this map very bumpy and rough to play :o
00:02:300 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - from 1,55x to 1,0x everything in the spacing-mix. You can change your distances for patterns that make sense but randomly changing them looks like a mistake. Focus on consistency. Interesting patterns can be achieved without completely ignoring the spacing and flow
00:01:851 (3,4) - 00:14:847 (2,3) - you avoid late overlaps by implementing previous notes into the notefollow. This is a technique that works for specific patterns but not here. You do overlap and stack on previous notes a lot throughout the map so why not keep it consistent and stack the ones here as well?
00:45:319 (6,1) - nothing big but avoid partial overlaps like this one here since it makes your map look too cramped
00:57:418 (1,2,3) - be careful with high spacing kickslider chains like this one. It still works in this case with your OD settings (you don't have to change this and I think it is still playable). It works because with OD7 you can skip the last part after the last repeat and still get full points. Consider using lower spacings for high BPM 1/4 jumps in the future to avoid this.



Donphin's Muzukashii
I'm no expert in Taiko modding but the SV combined with the high BPM seems to be much too high for a "Muzukashii".
00:34:565 (122,123,124) - no alternating in muzukashii diffs. Keep the triplets kkk or ddd
00:39:345 (149,150,151) - ^
00:44:125 (173,174,175) - ^



Can't mod Oni and o!m without checking them with the help of my reliable Taiko and Mania resources so this will have to do ;)

I am not currently active as part of the BAT and this mod is nowhere near "complete" or "in-depth" but I hope it still helps!
Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Liiraye
Thanks a lot, I'll fix what needs to be fixed tomorrow or if I get bored, later tonight!
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
YunoFanatic
TheVileOne already mod it so i have no intention to point out useless mods btw ill shoot for a trade :3
17VA
1,007 posts
Joined September 2012
17VA
EASY MANIA FOR LIIROY

00:28:739 (28739|3) -
00:29:187 (29187|4) -

Expand 1/2 snap

Other things are great.

MANIA FOR LIIROY

Ok... perfect
Fun map.
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hey, M4M!

00:49:053 - You should end kiai here, because that's the end of the more noisy and exciting music.
Keep your ending on the diffs the same. It's different on some difficulties.
Comobing isn't so good overall, try making it consistant.

Easy

Personally I think this map is a little too hard for the spread, but that's up to you. (Same for Normal)

00:16:191 (4) - To follow your own combo pattern, you should put a new combo here
- 00:17:386 (1) - Remove this one then
00:20:971 (5) - NC
- 00:23:660 (1) - Remove
00:25:751 (3) - NC

00:20:672 (4,6) - Overlapping these isn't a good idea on an Easy, it confuses new players and causes a miss

00:06:033 (1,2,3) - To follow your hitsound pattern you should make the same pattern here: 00:08:423 (1,2) -
- Try to follow this through the whole map if needed

Normal

00:14:100 (1,2,3) - Incorrect spacing
00:32:025 (1,2,3) - I find this pattern a little too hard for a Normal, try to find something what's not as hard.
- Try this:
Example
Hard

This has some kind of Insane patterns in it. I'm not happy to see that u.u ( For example 00:05:885 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - )

00:56:224 (1,1,1,1) - Combo spam

Overall nice difficultie.

Insane

Check your comboing too, please.

00:01:851 (3,4,5) - Right at the start, this spacing. Make it consistant please.
00:14:847 (2,3) - Don't really like this kind of random jumps. Is it necessary to make this?
- If you'd make it like this, you have consistant spacing and you keep your jump AND it fits and flows better
Example
00:20:672 (1,2) - I barely noticed that the 2nd slider is under the blue one, move it a little up so you can actually see it.
00:33:817 (1,2,3) - Spacing isn't correct again
00:44:572 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:46:962 (1,2,3) - ^
00:57:717 (2,3,4) - ^
00:59:211 (2,3) - Compaired to this one, 01:00:406 (4,1) - this isn't the same then

Extra

00:04:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Make this spacing consistant
00:21:568 (1) - Combo pattern is different than before, improve this
00:33:668 (2,3,4) - I'm not keen with such antijumps, and so sudden ones are out of place because the map goes fast and then this sudden change.
- Try stacking 00:33:967 (3) - onto this slider 00:34:415 (1) - , fits better and flows better. And this 00:34:265 (4) - onto 00:33:668 (2) -
00:38:298 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Combo spam, keep it consistant
00:41:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is just too random placement, there is no pattern behind these jumps and you get easy confused.
00:51:443 (1,1) - Combo spam again
00:53:535 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:223 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Give this more space, otherwise its not very nice to play
01:03:393 (3) - Weird ending, try just putting a circle there

Hope you can fix these. Good luck (:
Dolphin
1,167 posts
Joined January 2012
Dolphin

p3n wrote:

Donphin's Muzukashii
I'm no expert in Taiko modding but the SV combined with the high BPM seems to be much too high for a "Muzukashii".
00:34:565 (122,123,124) - no alternating in muzukashii diffs. Keep the triplets kkk or ddd
00:39:345 (149,150,151) - ^
00:44:125 (173,174,175) - ^
Sorry, but I'm saying no to all these :L
These are oox patterns and they are completely fine in Muzukashii imo.
Yes the BPM is high but mixed triplets needs to be introduced to the player at some point.
oox patterns in Muzukashii are common and ooo patterns at this BPM are just as difficult as oox patterns in my humble opinion.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
I <3 you for mapping something from this album.
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