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RLC
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2011
RLC

AnreFM wrote:

  • RLC'S
  1. 02:09:485 (7) - NC here instead of 02:09:914 (1) - i prefer 02:09:914 (1,2,3) - to be isolated
  2. 02:33:485 (2) - NC for kiai, seems forgotten lol it's intentional--i want the followpoints between 02:18:914 (1,2) - to add suspense

No_Gu wrote:

[Hard]
00:15:486 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - is it OK to set such a pattern in hard diff?..though it looks nice in insane it probably isn't too confusing, we'll see i guess
00:56:629 - you can add normal samplest every 1/1 from here sounds nice, added
neat diff.nice thanks

gideon5504 wrote:

RLC's hard:
~00:11:629 (4) - Put it down to the left closer to the end of slider 3 to make cursor movement flow. i had some reason for putting it where i put it, but i guess it looks kinda bad. moved
~Can't spot anything else 0.o
thanks, everyone! http://puu.sh/3sWmj.zip (zipped because puush has a habit of breaking .osu metadata)
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn
updated RLC's and Flask's :3
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replay

dat pitch.. ohh. dat poor girl's voice ._. <- it's vocaloid I fail
nice song, I like the variations in it~ :)

Insane
pretty fun map. it's relaxing to play and not too challenging for the most parts.
The rhythm and spacing were both good. I think you used the jumps well :)
I also liked the kicksliders.

I like how you tried to use the custom whistle hitsound, but the map still feels a bit lacking.
I think you should try to use the normal-hitnormal as well. Take this map for example: t/13952
You did it in the chorus already, but the sound is a bit too low imo.

goodluck :)
Come[Back]Home
1,785 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
Easy

00:24:914 (4) Make the slider till 00:25:343 Sounds better and it isnt that confusing for newbies.
01:30:914 (5) Make the Slider more kurvy? =3
02:15:485 (3) Move the Slider to x100 y124 looks nicer

Flask's Normal
02:24:485 (2) Move it to x168 y60

RLC's Hard
02:19:128 Add Hitcircle here?

Insane

I couldn't find anythin T_T
Sorry, my modding skills arent the best :(
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue special round~

General
The normal and hard one doesn't have "vocaloid" in the tags
I "print screen" the image in Youtube so it may be flou. So, here.
SPOILER

Easy
01:22:343 (2) - Curve it in the other way

[RLC's Hard]
00:32:629 (7) - Add NC here and remove NC to 00:33:057 (1)
00:36:057 (7) - ^
00:39:486 (7) - ^


Sorry if it isn't enough. Good Luck and Star!
pieguyn
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Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn

happy30 wrote:

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replay

dat pitch.. ohh. dat poor girl's voice ._. <- it's vocaloid I fail XD
nice song, I like the variations in it~ :)

Insane
pretty fun map. it's relaxing to play and not too challenging for the most parts.
The rhythm and spacing were both good. I think you used the jumps well :)
I also liked the kicksliders. thanks =w=//

I like how you tried to use the custom whistle hitsound, but the map still feels a bit lacking.
I think you should try to use the normal-hitnormal as well. Take this map for example: t/13952 I'll try it, thx~
You did it in the chorus already, but the sound is a bit too low imo. it's already at 100% >< can't make it any higher

goodluck :)
thanks :D

Nickname128 wrote:

Easy

00:24:914 (4) Make the slider till 00:25:343 Sounds better and it isnt that confusing for newbies. it shouldn't be that confusing, since they only hit on a 1/1..maybe I'll change it later tho cause it does sound kind of weird ._.
01:30:914 (5) Make the Slider more kurvy? =3 not necessary imo
02:15:485 (3) Move the Slider to x100 y124 looks nicer k

Insane

I couldn't find anythin T_T
Sorry, my modding skills arent the best :(
thanks :D

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue special round~

General
The normal and hard one doesn't have "vocaloid" in the tags dacrap, I thought I updated it 0.0 fixed
I "print screen" the image in Youtube so it may be flou. So, here. haha, I already took a BG from the video...almost the same :D thx though~
SPOILER

Easy
01:22:343 (2) - Curve it in the other way i can't decide about this ._. left it for now, but maybe I'll change it later..

Sorry if it isn't enough. Good Luck and Star!
thanks :D
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. How about adding soft-sliderslide.wav of silence?
[Easy]
  1. 00:42:057 (3) - it is better to end at 00:42:486
  2. 01:25:771 (2) - delete slider, and add a note at 01:25:771
[Flask's Normal]
  1. 00:54:914 (1,2,3,4,1) - if you intend regular pentagonal shape, the following is better
    SPOILER
    283,205,54914,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    183,250,55343,1,6,0:0:0:0:
    109,168,55772,1,6,0:0:0:0:
    164,73,56200,1,10,0:0:0:0:
    272,96,56629,6,0,P|316:84|378:95,2,110,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[RLC's Hard]

  • Good!
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:200 (3) - strange place, I think. 00:37:772 (1,2,3,4,5) - are not pentagonal layout?
  2. 02:59:842 (6,7,8,9) - How about the following layout?
    SPOILER
    288,132,179842,1,10,0:0:0:0:
    132,232,180056,1,14,0:0:0:0:
    380,232,180271,1,14,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,180485,1,14,0:0:0:0:
intro and outro of this song are very beautiful! Shoot star~☆
~Good luck~
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. How about adding soft-sliderslide.wav of silence? oh nice , added >w<
[Easy]
  1. 00:42:057 (3) - it is better to end at 00:42:486 IMO there should be a sound at 00:42:914 - kept as is, but I may change it later :?
  2. 01:25:771 (2) - delete slider, and add a note at 01:25:771 done :3
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:200 (3) - strange place, I think. 00:37:772 (1,2,3,4,5) - are not pentagonal layout? it's hexagon pattern with 00:37:343 (6) - keep as is~
  2. 02:59:842 (6,7,8,9) - How about the following layout? oo I like my formation, but this is nice too ~ changed
    SPOILER
    288,132,179842,1,10,0:0:0:0:
    132,232,180056,1,14,0:0:0:0:
    380,232,180271,1,14,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,180485,1,14,0:0:0:0:
intro and outro of this song are very beautiful! =w= Shoot star~☆
~Good luck~ thanks for mod+star >w<//
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Nicely mapped

Combo color 3 doesn't suit, maybe try white color or light blue
Feels like Offset is a bit early, try to find an accurate offset

[Easy]
>.o)b

[Flask's Normal]
>.o)b 赞！

[RLC's Hard]
>.o)b

[Insane]
*I love playing the KIAI time part, it's fun there XD
00:55:129 (2,3,4) - Spacing looks not nice, try this spacing 01:09:486 (3,4,5,6) -
01:04:557 (4,5,6) - Make some of these stacks to be spaced too
01:18:486 (4,5,6) - Make it little jump, looks fun
01:20:200 (4,5,6) - ^
01:21:914 (4,5,6) - ^
01:24:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cute, but I prefer spacer
02:53:628 (9) - Make this bend to the left, looks better

Good luck!
pieguyn
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Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Nicely mapped thx o3o

Combo color 3 doesn't suit, maybe try white color or light blue made it a bit lighter. hopefully it won't blend in with the bg too much :?
Feels like Offset is a bit early, try to find an accurate offset offset currently seems fine to me

[Insane]
*I love playing the KIAI time part, it's fun there XD thx :D
00:55:129 (2,3,4) - Spacing looks not nice, try this spacing 01:09:486 (3,4,5,6) - seems to play fine...just wondering if it may be too hard >< try it and see I guess~
01:04:557 (4,5,6) - Make some of these stacks to be spaced too not necessary IMO
01:18:486 (4,5,6) - Make it little jump, looks fun it's already a jump? i think spacing the 1/3s more would be too hard and not fitting..
01:20:200 (4,5,6) - ^
01:21:914 (4,5,6) - ^
01:24:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cute, but I prefer spacer IMO large spacing doesn't fit here
02:53:628 (9) - Make this bend to the left, looks better i prefer straight up to go with the pitch

Good luck! thanks for mod >w<
Leader
osu! Alumni
1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
Hi! From my Modding Queue

[Insane]
  1. 00:25:236 (6) - Try CTRL+G
  2. 01:21:057 (2) - What about second sliderpoint in x:272 y:324?
  3. 02:07:342 (3) - A CTRL+G would be cool :3
  4. 02:46:556 (6,7,8) - Reduce their spacing a bit
[RLC's Hard]
  1. 00:02:414 (2) - Move up a bit?
  2. 00:25:772 (1) - Shouldn't it be 1/4 longer?
[Flask's Normal]
  1. 01:15:486 (1) - Not a big fan of these sliders, you could avoid that
  2. 02:24:700 (3) - Move down in line with previous and next note, or stack them
  3. 02:38:414 (3) - Basically, same as ^
  4. 02:34:342 (2) - Copy from (1) and then flip vertically? (obviously fixing spacing)
    You should map the end like the other mappers did, it's just ~15 seconds.
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:629 (4) - Try to flip vertically and then rearrange spacing, looks better
  2. 02:32:628 (4) - Curving it should be better..
Good luck~
Kinomi
1,220 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
Hi~from my queue~
normal mod

General
0.0 wonderful map and hitsouns,nothing special to say....

Easy

fine

What the flask
00:33:914 (2,3,4) - 2去掉whistle,4头部加whistle
02:24:485 (2,3,4) - 这也这么加
02:38:199 (2,3,4) - 这也是
00:36:057 (1) - 头finish,后面一段推荐加thistle啊
00:58:343 (3) - 头部加whistle然后00:59:629 (4) - 去掉whistle，01:00:057 (1) - 头部加whistle
后面一段重复的也这么加？
01:17:200 (1) - 头finish
01:35:199 (1) - 为何尾部也加finish
01:50:842 (1) - 推荐找个铃铛回响的音效？比如http://puu.sh/3whe5.wav
F酱>3<

RLC's Hard
50% volume is a bit small imo

Insane
00:05:307 (2) - remove this note? It souns better and played more comfortable imo :P
00:12:164 (2) - ^
02:57:592 (2) - ^
02:50:735 (2) - ^
02:43:235 (6) - remove it and lengthen 02:42:914 (5) - to 02:43:235 I find that you use 2 kinds of partten in turn but not in turn here

good luck~
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn

Leader wrote:

Hi! From my Modding Queue

[Insane]
  1. 00:25:236 (6) - Try CTRL+G changed, just hoep it's not too confusing ><
  2. 01:21:057 (2) - What about second sliderpoint in x:272 y:324? keep it straight since all the other ones are straight ._.//
  3. 02:07:342 (3) - A CTRL+G would be cool :3 nice, changed
  4. 02:46:556 (6,7,8) - Reduce their spacing a bit noo >:3
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:629 (4) - Try to flip vertically and then rearrange spacing, looks betterthis is a curve formation, not a symmetry formation 0.0 no change~
  2. 02:32:628 (4) - Curving it should be better.. ok
Good luck~ thanks for mod :)

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue~
normal mod

General
0.0 wonderful map and hitsouns,nothing special to say.... thanks =w=

Insane
00:05:307 (2) - remove this note? It souns better and played more comfortable imo :P imo it plays fine as is ._.// but I may change it later
00:12:164 (2) - ^
02:57:592 (2) - ^
02:50:735 (2) - ^
02:43:235 (6) - remove it and lengthen 02:42:914 (5) - to 02:43:235 I find that you use 2 kinds of partten in turn but not in turn here nice, fix'd

good luck~ thanks for mod+star >w<//
RLC
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2011
RLC

Nickname128 wrote:

RLC's Hard
02:19:128 Add Hitcircle here? no reason to

sheela901 wrote:

[RLC's Hard]
00:32:629 (7) - Add NC here and remove NC to 00:33:057 (1) i want the next three notes to be in a combo by themselves, and i don't want a one note combo
00:36:057 (7) - ^
00:39:486 (7) - ^

Leader wrote:

[RLC's Hard]
  1. 00:02:414 (2) - Move up a bit? didn't move up, but rotated slightly so that the repeat is better placed
  2. 00:25:772 (1) - Shouldn't it be 1/4 longer? nah, that seems to break the existing rhythm

baldrace wrote:

RLC's Hard
50% volume is a bit small imo this is true; i will increase the volume
thanks! http://puu.sh/3wTnm.zip
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
General
- Title should be Ichiru no Nozomi yo, Ano Tsuki e Hibike. The current romanization isn't wrong but I think we use the other way, for example

- Reencode the mp3 so it's under 192kbps. Right now, it's 256

- Insane's combo colors seem to conflict with the others'. Combo 4 should be 128,128,255 instead of 64,64,255

- Recompress your image so it's under 1mb pls

Easy
01:18:914 (2,1,2) - you could try to angle these like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/857799 so it doesn't look like a copy & paste pattern
01:49:771 (2,3) - small spacing issue, distance snap this

Flask's Normal
00:14:629 (3) - Finish at end sounds consistent within the combo
00:41:200 (5) - NC, like 02:31:771 (1) -
01:10:343 (1) - hm feels a bit sketchy, i'd spread out the tails a bit to be safe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/857899
01:50:842 (1) - try Finish
02:45:485 (5) - NC
nice~

My RLC circuits are getting excited
01:08:200 (4) - Ctrl + G seems to fit what you're doing around here, better cursor flow imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858207
01:24:914 (1) - Finish, some emphasis would be kinda epic
01:30:485 (2,3) - Try this rhythm instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858218 i see you following the vocals mostly so I thought this will fit better
01:45:485 (1) - Finish, i hear cymbals in the bgm
02:19:771 (2) - NC, introduces the measure more naturally imo
02:33:485 (2) - ^
hng

Insane
00:24:914 (5) - if this is following anything, it's really subtle. Try extending this slider like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858228 (ignore note placement) or something. In a more quiet section like this, i think it'd be nice to focus on the vocals more
01:30:056 (1) - move a bit to the right for some blanketing if u like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858232

this is so lovely <3
Feel free to call me back after a couple more mods :oops:
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn
OMG it's LunarSakuya-sama :)

LunarSakuya wrote:

General
- Title should be Ichiru no Nozomi yo, Ano Tsuki e Hibike. The current romanization isn't wrong but I think we use the other way, for example ahh, whenever I see that romanization I just think it's wrong >< I'd like to keep it, but if we really don't have any maps use this romanization I'll change it...

- Reencode the mp3 so it's under 192kbps. Right now, it's 256 oops LOL, fixed

- Insane's combo colors seem to conflict with the others'. Combo 4 should be 128,128,255 instead of 64,64,255 oops, fix

- Recompress your image so it's under 1mb pls fixed

Easy
01:18:914 (2,1,2) - you could try to angle these like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/857799 so it doesn't look like a copy & paste pattern done
01:49:771 (2,3) - small spacing issue, distance snap this oops fixed

Insane
00:24:914 (5) - if this is following anything, it's really subtle. Try extending this slider like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858228 (ignore note placement) or something. In a more quiet section like this, i think it'd be nice to focus on the vocals more for me this vocal is kind of abrupt, so I chose to use just a 1/4 slider instead ._.
01:30:056 (1) - move a bit to the right for some blanketing if u like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/858232 nice

this is so lovely <3 thanks! =w=
Feel free to call me back after a couple more mods :oops: AWESOME
thanks for mod+star >w<
Iggy
172 posts
Joined August 2012
Iggy
Insane:
01:25:771 (4,4,1,1,1,1) - 01:50:000

The small fast repeater sliders are kinda hard to read because if they represent somethign from the song it's REALLY hard to hear.

02:50:628 (1,2) - I'm not sure if these follow the song, to me it feels they're extra.
02:56:414 (2,3) - ^
00:12:057 (1,2) - ^
00:55:664 (6) - ^
00:59:093 (3) - ^
01:02:950 (7) - This kinda fits but still same as the above

02:06:056 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really like this part, but if you want to make it a bit harder you could use jumps a bit like in thisthis from 0:12 starting from blue to orange combo. Definitely not necessary though, it's good as is.

Great map, really enjoyed playing it, my points might be a bit nitpicky, they aren't something that bother too much while playing, but when I lowered the soundeffect volume I couldn't hear if they were following something from the song or not.
And btw, great song you picked!
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
from my queue ~


  • Easy
    HP-1? too big for easy diff
    00:08:200 (3) - remove whistle?
    00:26:629 (2) - whistle head?
    01:01:772 (1) - remove NC for consistency you NC every 2 stanza
    01:08:629 (1) - ^
    01:36:056 (2) - change clap to finish?
    01:47:199 (3,4) - you are play branket in 01:44:628 (5,1) -, so i suggest you to make branket too in here http://puu.sh/3A8kD.jpg
    01:49:771 (2) - change clap to finish?
    02:24:485 (2,3) - imo, placement like http://puu.sh/3A8no.jpg more neat
    02:26:628 (1) - ctrl+H for better flow?
    02:57:485 (2) - soft whistle?


  • Normal
    00:28:772 (4) - nazi,184,96?
    00:33:914 (2) - 1 grid left to stacked 00:31:772 (5) - ? fix spacing after this if you follow ~
    01:10:343 - 01:24:486 - why suddenly NC every stanza? imo just NC every 2 stanza like before
    02:24:485 (2) - 1 grid right for stacked?


  • Hard
    OD+1?
    00:18:379 - add note?
    02:06:485 (1) - no need NC imo
    just quick look here, i think it's kinda hard (in jump) if compared with Normal

i'm sorry i can't mod hard and insane
actually i not really like with Kagamine Rin :(

Good Luck, nice map ~ ;)
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,787 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi; mod incoming!

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. The title should be "Ichiru no Nozomi yo, Ano Tsuki e Hibike", like what LunarSakuya said.
  2. The BG's quality seems to be kinda low. Tried to find better ones by reverse image search engines driven by curiosity, but I just can't seem to find any that is actually okay. I recommend finding another BG that fits with the song than staying to the current BG (even though it fits and seems to be... some kind of official picture or something; don't really know the term lol).
>Easy
  1. 00:24:914 (4) - Feels slightly awkward since this is just 3/4, not 1/1. I know you want to follow the vocal, but it doesn't seem to work well, so just use 1/1 anyway for the sake of simplicity (and to follow the instrument on that white tick, since that feels empty if unmapped)?
  2. 01:33:485 (3,4) - Slightly touching each other. I'd move (4) to (72,256) so it looks neater around here.
>Flask's Normal
  1. 02:06:056 - 02:16:128 - ALL inherited timing points on the red tick here are unused, so remove them please.
>RLC's Hard
  1. 00:15:486 (1,2,3,4) - The distance here suggests that (1) and (2) is far apart from each other in terms of time compared to (2) to (3), (3) to (4), or (2) to (4), which is really tricky, especially at this AR, and doesn't fit the song anyway. I suggest to make their spacing the same. (Applies to similar patterns.)
  2. 00:37:772 (3,4) - It's not necessary to make them symmetrical IMO. Just space them normally...
>Insane
  1. 00:28:664 (6,7,1) - Umm, what's with the different spacing here? If you want to separate (1) so it's visible that you're making a completely new pattern after the previous combo, I think it's unnecessary. (Applies to similar cases, yeah.)
  2. 01:21:057 (2,3) - Slightly touching each other too. Not a big deal, still.
  3. 02:46:556 (6,7,8) - I swear this is extremely deceiving. At least apply NC to (6)?
...That's it I think. Your map looks ready for ranking IMO; just need slight improvements and you're good to go :D

Good luck on the way 8-)
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn

Igenatius wrote:

Insane:
01:25:771 (4,4,1,1,1,1) - 01:50:000

The small fast repeater sliders are kinda hard to read because if they represent somethign from the song it's REALLY hard to hear. it's fine imo, must I always put the same 1/3? I feel this is more interesting

02:50:628 (1,2) - I'm not sure if these follow the song, to me it feels they're extra. consider
02:56:414 (2,3) - ^ no change
00:12:057 (1,2) - ^ consider
00:55:664 (6) - ^ no change
00:59:093 (3) - ^ ^
01:02:950 (7) - This kinda fits but still same as the above follows drum in music

02:06:056 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really like this part, but if you want to make it a bit harder you could use jumps a bit like in thisthis from 0:12 starting from blue to orange combo. Definitely not necessary though, it's good as is. it's a soft part so i put less jumps ._. maybe I'll increase it later

Great map, really enjoyed playing it, my points might be a bit nitpicky, they aren't something that bother too much while playing, but when I lowered the soundeffect volume I couldn't hear if they were following something from the song or not.
And btw, great song you picked! thanks >w<

Xinely wrote:

from my queue ~


  • Easy
    HP-1? too big for easy diff ok
    00:08:200 (3) - remove whistle? ok
    00:26:629 (2) - whistle head? nice
    01:01:772 (1) - remove NC for consistency you NC every 2 stanza NC here is for pattern & new rhythm, no change for now ~
    01:08:629 (1) - ^
    01:36:056 (2) - change clap to finish? IMO it sounds too busy >< no change
    01:47:199 (3,4) - you are play branket in 01:44:628 (5,1) -, so i suggest you to make branket too in here http://puu.sh/3A8kD.jpg done
    01:49:771 (2) - change clap to finish? same
    02:24:485 (2,3) - imo, placement like http://puu.sh/3A8no.jpg more neat nice, i just hope it's not too hard for easy =//=
    02:26:628 (1) - ctrl+H for better flow? well my original intent was to make it the same way as 02:28:342 (3) - , but this seems better, changed ~
    02:57:485 (2) - soft whistle? oh wtf, how did that get there 0.0 fixed LOL

i'm sorry i can't mod hard and insane
actually i not really like with Kagamine Rin :( ;_; kagamine rin cute ~

Good Luck, nice map ~ ;) thanks for mod =w=

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; mod incoming!

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. The title should be "Ichiru no Nozomi yo, Ano Tsuki e Hibike", like what LunarSakuya said. >_<//
  2. The BG's quality seems to be kinda low. Tried to find better ones by reverse image search engines driven by curiosity, but I just can't seem to find any that is actually okay. I recommend finding another BG that fits with the song than staying to the current BG (even though it fits and seems to be... some kind of official picture or something; don't really know the term lol). for me it's good enough o.o
>Easy
  1. 00:24:914 (4) - Feels slightly awkward since this is just 3/4, not 1/1. I know you want to follow the vocal, but it doesn't seem to work well, so just use 1/1 anyway for the sake of simplicity (and to follow the instrument on that white tick, since that feels empty if unmapped)? ok, changed
  2. 01:33:485 (3,4) - Slightly touching each other. I'd move (4) to (72,256) so it looks neater around here. done
>Insane
  1. 00:28:664 (6,7,1) - Umm, what's with the different spacing here? If you want to separate (1) so it's visible that you're making a completely new pattern after the previous combo, I think it's unnecessary. (Applies to similar cases, yeah.) changed back to 1/4 slider
  2. 01:21:057 (2,3) - Slightly touching each other too. Not a big deal, still. fixed
  3. 02:46:556 (6,7,8) - I swear this is extremely deceiving. At least apply NC to (6)? added NC
...That's it I think. Your map looks ready for ranking IMO; just need slight improvements and you're good to go :D

Good luck on the way 8-) thanks for mod =w=
Mirage
627 posts
Joined May 2011
Mirage
Maddy's Mod
(S) ~ Suggestion
(C) ~ Something you should change
(A) ~ Important \ Unrankable

General
C ~ The kiai on the normal is different from the other diffs, can you change it?

Easy
S ~ 01:00:057 (1) - Why only a single combo? You should continue it with 01:01:772 (1,2,3) - because it feels weird since the previous combo was long 4-5 notes
S ~ 01:08:629 (1) - Same thing here

Normal
S ~ 02:16:128 - I feel like you shouldn't skip this beat
C ~ 02:31:771 (1) - You have very similar patterns which are not new comboed (Just look at 02:45:485 (5) - ) . So remove it here

Hard
S ~ 00:29:200 (5) - Having the NC here would have more sense
S ~ 00:32:629 (7) - ^ , and everywhere else
S ~ 01:27:914 (1) - I don't get this NC, :s

Insane
C ~ The HP drain is way too high for a map like this, put 6
A ~ 00:42:486 (7) - Dat wrong repeat amount
S ~ 02:11:628 (3) - Please fix stack
S ~ 03:00:056 (7) - A NC would be nice

Very nice mapset; after applying my mod you should call a BAT
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn

Maddy wrote:

Maddy's Mod
(S) ~ Suggestion
(C) ~ Something you should change
(A) ~ Important \ Unrankable

General
C ~ The kiai on the normal is different from the other diffs, can you change it? we'll see if Flask wants to I guess owo

Easy
S ~ 01:00:057 (1) - Why only a single combo? You should continue it with 01:01:772 (1,2,3) - because it feels weird since the previous combo was long 4-5 notes imo it feels good if there's emphasis on 01:01:772 (1,2,3) - , no change for now ~
S ~ 01:08:629 (1) - Same thing here ^

Insane
C ~ The HP drain is way too high for a map like this, put 6 it's there for the score 0.0
A ~ 00:42:486 (7) - Dat wrong repeat amount oops, fixed XD
S ~ 02:11:628 (3) - Please fix stack ..fixed
S ~ 03:00:056 (7) - A NC would be nice wanna keep this pattern together instead of splitting it ~ no change

Very nice mapset; after applying my mod you should call a BAT thanks for mod >w<
dkun
osu! Alumni
4,486 posts
Joined August 2009
dkun
Following up with Maddy on the HPD on Insane on this.
I recommend 6-7, preferably 7. 8 is a bit unforgiving.

ps: call me back
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
@Sakuya: 那個滑條應該還行 你的那個也沒包到note =3=
*That slider is okay imo

Fix other things, gogogogogogo
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: a.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 139779
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Ichiru no Nozomi yo, Ano Tsuki he Hibike
TitleUnicode:一縷の望みよ、あの月へ響け
Artist:Rohi
ArtistUnicode:ろひ
Creator:pieguy1372
Version:Flask's Normal
Source:
Tags:okiyava Kagamine Rin Flask RLC vocaloid
BeatmapID:270837
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pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn
updated all diffs

dkun wrote:

Following up with Maddy on the HPD on Insane on this.
I recommend 6-7, preferably 7. 8 is a bit unforgiving. I could pass with HR if my mouse didn't keep freezing = = I really wanna keep it cause a 10 million score for this map seems a bit low.. if OD 8 HP 7 is preferable, I could do that instead 0.0

ps: call me back o-o thanks!

update for RLC cause he's afk

Xinely wrote:

OD+1? OD 5 for hard seems acceptable. may change it later tho
00:18:379 - add note? no, doesn't fit with pattern
02:06:485 (1) - no need NC imo keep as is, fits with pattern
just quick look here, i think it's kinda hard (in jump) if compared with Normal it's [Hard] diff I think it's fine

Hinsvar wrote:

00:15:486 (1,2,3,4) - The distance here suggests that (1) and (2) is far apart from each other in terms of time compared to (2) to (3), (3) to (4), or (2) to (4), which is really tricky, especially at this AR, and doesn't fit the song anyway. I suggest to make their spacing the same. (Applies to similar patterns.) keep it, it's a fun pattern IMO ~
00:37:772 (3,4) - It's not necessary to make them symmetrical IMO. Just space them normally... seems to play fine as is, no change

Maddy wrote:

S ~ 00:29:200 (5) - Having the NC here would have more sense it's clearly the mapper's intent. no change
S ~ 00:32:629 (7) - ^ , and everywhere else ^
S ~ 01:27:914 (1) - I don't get this NC, :s removed
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
BG is really poor quality...Try to make it more clearly,but seems failed:3
[Insane]
00:24:486 (3,4) - slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/870105
00:56:843 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:57:272 (3) - ^
01:44:628 (3) - stick
01:20:629 (1) - stick
02:06:485 (3) - Ctrl+G
02:20:199 (2) - stick
[RLC]
01:31:199 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/870142
seems good:3
[Flask]
Can I use Chinese:3
02:14:628 (5,6) - move to 212,32
>02:16:342 (1) - move to 276,204
seems good:3
[Easy]
02:30:056 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Move to 412,164

hope helped:3
If you have time plz mod this map↓
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/98035
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn

ts8zs wrote:

BG is really poor quality...Try to make it more clearly,but seems failed:3 meiikyuu already made a pretty awesome bg, I'm just too lazy to put it till the map is ready to get bubbled o.o thx though =w=
[Insane]
00:24:486 (3,4) - slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/870105 nah, doesn't seem to flow well with next pattern
00:56:843 (2) - Ctrl+G this flow IMO seems really weird.. no change for now ~
00:57:272 (3) - ^
01:44:628 (3) - stick fixed
01:20:629 (1) - stick fixed
02:06:485 (3) - Ctrl+G keep my pattern ~
02:20:199 (2) - stick not sure if possible to see during gameplay 0.0 fixed anyway ~
[RLC]
01:31:199 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/870142 seems RLC didn't use any kinds of sliders like this, but he used the current rhythm a lot 0.0 no change ~
seems good:3
[Easy]
02:30:056 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Move to 412,164 o.o seems fine as is, this way makes a lot of notes go close to the edge of the screen which looks weird imo > < no change ~

hope helped:3 thanks for mod =w=
If you have time plz mod this map↓
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/98035
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
This map isn't that bad! I support! :D
SPOILER
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
hello~ i saw you failed my map haha
actually no worries, that rule is to let people know my mapping style and (actually many mappers who cant pass my map could not map good map, but you map well so..)

k cut to the chase
General: audio lead in +500 or at least +300? judge to people may DT, 1772 lead in is not quite enough imo
+i dont see letterbox during break is needed..

[Insane]
general: i see no error when playing& when looking at editor, so basically this mod is all suggestion, fell free to ignore anyofthem
00:12:914 (6) - little curve prettier http://puu.sh/3GCyY.jpg
00:20:414 (6) - x:180, y:224 ? if you do this, curve the tail a little downward 00:19:772 (5) -
00:27:486 (1,3,5) - can make the finish increase in volume, like 60, 70, 80 or 55, 68, 80?
00:31:772 (5) - cancel whistle? little noisy for me
00:41:200 (1,3,5) - same
01:10:772 (2) - ctrl+g? make player aware of rhythm change
01:12:486 (2,3,4) - these too, can ctrl+g seperately
01:14:200 (2) - ^
02:09:271 (5) - make like http://puu.sh/3GCPm.jpg ?
02:45:485 (1,3,5) - volume up?
02:54:699 (2,3,4) - maybe unstack here? feel like could do difference after kiai (like this http://puu.sh/3GCVI.jpg )
02:56:414 (2,3,4) - same here
03:00:056 (7) - NC


[RLC hard]
i like your style :DD
00:13:772 (1) - really think that 1repeat is not enough, add 1 repeat?
00:35:200 (5) - head cancel soft finish, add at 00:36:057 (7) - ?
01:23:200 (3) - head finish?
01:42:056 (1) - finish? feel consistency do well here
02:24:914 (3,4,5,6) - change to two sliders here? (too much note imo here haha)
02:33:056 - add a note stack at 02:33:485 (1) - ? (really felt that needed a note here...)
02:38:628 (3,4,5,6) - same？
02:46:342 (3) - volume from 50-80?

i dont see real problem in easier diff, thats all~
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn

L_P wrote:

hello~ i saw you failed my map haha XDD
actually no worries, that rule is to let people know my mapping style and (actually many mappers who cant pass my map could not map good map, but you map well so..) owo thanks >w<

k cut to the chase
General: audio lead in +500 or at least +300? judge to people may DT, 1772 lead in is not quite enough imo +500
+i dont see letterbox during break is needed.. o right, there's video so I'd better uncheck this..

[Insane]
general: i see no error when playing& when looking at editor, so basically this mod is all suggestion, fell free to ignore anyofthem
00:12:914 (6) - little curve prettier http://puu.sh/3GCyY.jpg no change, I prefer to keep it straight to match my pattern...also imo curve it flows a bit worse, maybe it's just me 0.0
00:20:414 (6) - x:180, y:224 ? if you do this, curve the tail a little downward 00:19:772 (5) - sure
00:27:486 (1,3,5) - can make the finish increase in volume, like 60, 70, 80 or 55, 68, 80? pro, changed :D
00:31:772 (5) - cancel whistle? little noisy for me nah, I prefer it the way I ahve now :3
00:41:200 (1,3,5) - same done
01:10:772 (2) - ctrl+g? make player aware of rhythm change done
01:12:486 (2,3,4) - these too, can ctrl+g seperately nah, I prefer to keep my pattern on this one, all the other ones are going "out" so I prefer to make this one a bit different :3
01:14:200 (2) - ^ done
02:09:271 (5) - make like http://puu.sh/3GCPm.jpg ? nah, I prefer to keep the rhythm basic for slow part :3
02:45:485 (1,3,5) - volume up? yep ~
02:54:699 (2,3,4) - maybe unstack here? feel like could do difference after kiai (like this http://puu.sh/3GCVI.jpg ) good idea but I can't get it to flow right if I change it > < so I just left it as is. maybe I'm just noob haha
02:56:414 (2,3,4) - same here ^
03:00:056 (7) - NC I prefer to keep it as is to keep the pattern together ~


[RLC hard]
i like your style :DD
00:13:772 (1) - really think that 1repeat is not enough, add 1 repeat? it's [Hard] diff so it's OK to skip some beats imo
00:35:200 (5) - head cancel soft finish, add at 00:36:057 (7) - ? seems RLC wanted to put all the finishes in this spot, not sure why o.o I prefer to leave it since it seems intended @_@
01:23:200 (3) - head finish? yep
01:42:056 (1) - finish? feel consistency do well here hm, I'm not even sure myself how RLC put these finishes rofl. not so sure he would put finish here, but about consistency, it seems finish is missing at 01:31:771 (1) - so added there :P
02:24:914 (3,4,5,6) - change to two sliders here? (too much note imo here haha) I think it's acceptable to put more notes here cause it's the more strong part of the song & it's only 140 BPM, plus it seems to fit what RLC was doing here, so no change for now @_@
02:33:056 - add a note stack at 02:33:485 (1) - ? (really felt that needed a note here...) I think it was RLC's intent to put a pause here, so keep as is ~
02:38:628 (3,4,5,6) - same？
02:46:342 (3) - volume from 50-80? nice

i dont see real problem in easier diff, thats all~ thanks a lot for mod >w< lots of good ideas there, you should get 2 kds for such a pro mod haha

BeatofIke wrote:

This map isn't that bad! I support! :D thanks >w<
SPOILER
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn
oops it died
let's go ~
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
It seems the new BG didn't go through during the update?

General
- idk would you mind getting some confirmation about "he" vs. "e" in the title? I'm still kinda for the "e". Sorry if i sound anal about this lol

- I suggest uncheck letterbox for every diff since you have a video.


Flask's Normal
00:04:772 (4) - Whistle? unless you wanted to emphasize (2) more
00:06:486 (2) - Whistle
00:55:343 (1) - Delete this note OR add a note before it at 00:54:914 - If you hear closely, the cymbals in the bgm start here
02:18:914 (5,1) - maybe arranging these like this would be neater http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/946057
Why not end the map at 03:00:485 - like Easy? Doesn't seem like much more

Insane
00:55:772 (7) - consider NC, and then delete NC on next note
02:32:842 (6) - NC, like 02:46:556 (1) -

no kds
just small things. Call me back when everything's good to go :D
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn
why does it keep being graved @_@
anyway finally stopped being lazy and added BG, thx meiikyuu ~ www
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
pieguyn

LunarSakuya wrote:

It seems the new BG didn't go through during the update?

General
- idk would you mind getting some confirmation about "he" vs. "e" in the title? I'm still kinda for the "e". Sorry if i sound anal about this lol oh I just forgot LOL changed

- I suggest uncheck letterbox for every diff since you have a video. oops, I thought I did, but turns out I only did in insane 0.0 fix'd


Insane
00:55:772 (7) - consider NC, and then delete NC on next note nah NC here is for pattern
02:32:842 (6) - NC, like 02:46:556 (1) - kk

no kds
just small things. Call me back when everything's good to go :D thanks Sakuya-sama =w=
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask

LunarSakuya wrote:

Flask's Normal
00:04:772 (4) - Whistle? unless you wanted to emphasize (2) more
00:06:486 (2) - Whistle I decided to remove whistle from 00:03:057 (2) - to make it consistent with every objects like this (cuz I want to emphasize the sound behind something like 00:01:772 (1) -
00:55:343 (1) - Delete this note OR add a note before it at 00:54:914 - If you hear closely, the cymbals in the bgm start here k
02:18:914 (5,1) - maybe arranging these like this would be neater http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/946057 not really like this idea, I'll just keep current pattern >_</
Why not end the map at 03:00:485 - like Easy? Doesn't seem like much more ALRIGHT ;_______;
All fix from ts8zs' mod, thanks a bunch!
osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Ichiru no Nozomi yo, Ano Tsuki e Hibike
TitleUnicode:一縷の望みよ、あの月へ響け
Artist:Rohi
ArtistUnicode:ろひ
Creator:pieguy1372
Version:Flask's Normal
Source:
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CircleSize:3
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LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
Flask's Normal
02:49:770 (4) - end not snapped
02:51:484 (2) - ^
pieguyn
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pieguyn
fixed o3o
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
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LunarSakuya
Good luck :)
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
oo you used the bg ! good luck, can't wait
pieguyn
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pieguyn
o3o thanks LunarSakuya-sama >w<
and thx meiikyuu :)
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