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Tamiyasu Tomoe, Aoba Ringo - Crayon Tulip

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Topic Starter
h3k1ru

Gabe wrote:

Hello there h3k1ru ! hi :>

Hard
Consider adding at least one spinner to make some variety on the higher scores. That's not cool having a leaderscore with all the same score. At least, a spinner will add some more bonus. i really have no idea where to put spinner at this map, i dont want to force it just because of "score"
  1. 00:33:520 - I am not sure if the clap belongs here.. All I know is, it sounds terribly wrong because the previous slider's beginning has a clap too and having two claps in a row, it's obviously wrong. Something to point out too, you are mostly adding claps to upbeats only, not downbeats. The circle (3) is located on a downbeat, which is not consistent with your previous hitsounds consistency! Another thing, 00:34:061 (5) - this circle, which has no hitsounds, is also an upbeat. It sounds very empty without any hitsounds. I sincerely think you have misplaced the clap from those circles. So first, delete the clap on the circle (3) and add it to the circle (5). haha ur right, probably just missclick or something, fixed
That cute map totally deserve a kawaii bubble. i hope so!
thanks for mod Gabe
cRyo[iceeicee]
alacat
Topic Starter
h3k1ru
thanks! updated
Andrea
~General~
  1. I guess cRyo's difficulty doesn't need much lead-in like the other difficulties, since it begins later.
~alacat's Normal~
  1. 00:02:169 (1) - Remove the new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  2. 00:02:169 (1,2,3) - This pattern's stacks might be confusing due to the low AR to read for players, I think.
  3. 00:04:331 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
  4. 01:13:520 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2) since the music actually changes there.
  5. 01:36:763 (1) - Unnecessary new combo, remove it.
~Hard~
  1. 00:47:574 (1) - This slider shape looks kinda weird compared to the rest.
  2. 00:51:898 (3) - What about starting the new combo here instead for this section? It would make more sense imo.
  3. 00:54:061 (7) - Same as above, make sure to fix the rest afterwards.
  4. 01:36:763 (1) - I'd prefer a single circle here instead of a slider, the end of it doesn't make much sense to me.
Lolis all the way. <3
alacat
fix new combo :3

My stacks part is no problem imo. Because this is normal diff.

Thanks andrea :D

http://puu.sh/3sgUY.zip
Topic Starter
h3k1ru
alright, updated
Aurele
o3o
Andrea

Gabe wrote:

o3o
Rank it now o3o
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

Andrea wrote:

Gabe wrote:

o3o
Rank it now o3o
a bit later, need to check if bpm doubled first
dkun
This video is extremely questionable NSFW.

Please delete it. :|
Topic Starter
h3k1ru
selfpopped due to video remove, no other changes have been made
dkun
Please change the artist to "民安 ともえ, 青葉 りんご" and the title to "くれよんちゅーりっぷ".
I would replace the & to a , for consistency after in the unicode.

Let me know when you've gone through this.
Topic Starter
h3k1ru
changed the title
Aurele
Scorpiour
Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Remove audio lead-in from Easy, and reduce audio lead-in in other two diffs to 1000ms
[Hard]
  1. 00:50:277 (2) - move to 218:216? the current position is looked odd a bit
  2. 00:59:196 (3,4,5) - also an slightly odd jump, consider this? and i suggest a NC to 00:59:466 (4) -
  3. 01:20:817 (3) - 52:236?
[Normal]
  1. AR+1 to ballance the diff spread
[Easy]
  1. AR+1, OD+1, HP+1 to ballance the diff spread
the main issue of the Hard diff is the spacing is too random... try to make it more neat and Call me back
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ hi, thanks for checking the map

[General]
  1. Remove audio lead-in from Easy, and reduce audio lead-in in other two diffs to 1000ms
---fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:50:277 (2) - move to 218:216? the current position is looked odd a bit moved to 216:216
  2. 00:59:196 (3,4,5) - also an slightly odd jump, consider this? and i suggest a NC to 00:59:466 (4) - no changes here, (5) is start of jump thats why increased spacing, it should not be the same as (3,4), and nc will just broke the pattern
  3. 01:20:817 (3) - 52:236? moved to 56:236
[Normal]
  1. AR+1 to ballance the diff spread
i will stay with AR4 here, AR5 looks too fast for me with such slow song, even hardest diff in mapset have only AR7

[Easy]
  1. AR+1, OD+1, HP+1 to ballance the diff spread
same as above, this settings is fine for this song

the main issue of the Hard diff is the spacing is too random...¯\(°_o)/¯
updated
Scorpiour
Rebubbled~~
dkun
onii-channnnnnn
Andrea

dkun wrote:

onii-channnnnnn
Grats Heki-sama!
HelloSCV
he..he..hentai! xD
cRyo[iceeicee]
ԅ(≖‿≖ԅ)
ryuu
uururur ur ;w;
gratz, h3k1, icee-nyan and alacat :3/
alacat

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

ԅ(≖‿≖ԅ)
v(^_^v)♪
S o r d a
gratz!!
Daichi Shinku
at first, I lol'd
why the heck a childish song's video be removed because of nsfw?

then... i look it up on youtube...

I lol'd even more

damn pedophiles
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