Azure wrote:

buy one and get one freeeeeeee!??????
What a nice guy you are (ｏ´艸｀ｏ) Maybe...Luckly,you did't tape gay wrong(诶？

[General]
Who is the singer of this song? I want to know where did I get this song...

check by yourself (*´ω｀)っ
Source: Ikoku Meiro no Croisee
tags: Croisée in a Foreign Labyrinth ending episode8 Chambre d'enfant Change 6diffs is a really hard work...
finded... http://www.xiami.com/song/1770437753 貌似是标题错了……
Tomorrow's smile 是这首…… http://www.xiami.com/song/1770437742
[Normal]

1. 00:21:384 recommend this rhythm http://puu.sh/3qg2t.jpg good idea
2. 00:27:384 +note no
3. 00:34:184 (1,2,3) use rhythm as 00:37:384 (1,2,3) Doesn't same（话说你为什么用英文……）
4. 00:40:584 rhythm http://puu.sh/3qgaw.jpg Not follow vocal here
5. 00:52:050 (4) delete this slider No,follow the 吉他(噗
6. 00:53:917 repeat 就这样吧
7. 00:54:717 rhythm http://puu.sh/3qgdv.jpg no
8. 00:59:250 rhythm http://puu.sh/3qghJ.jpg 不知到改之后让不让用，先观望
9. 01:10:450 (3) no repeat 01:11:250 (4) move this slider start at 01:10:983 end at 01:11:783 no
10. 01:13:383 (3) repeat 01:14:183 (4) make this slider end at 01:14:717 no
11. after you updated, call me to mod your arrangement and hitsound (Az runsヽ(●´ε｀●)ノ

[Hard]

1. 00:18:184 (2,3,4,5) though those notes are following with piano, but it's hard to read... NP
2. 00:22:984 (5) change to one long slider start 00:22:984 end 00:23:784 N,but changed
3. 00:28:984 (5) end at 00:29:584 吉他
4. 00:29:584 add 5% green line 00:29:784 add 20% green line ^
5. 00:31:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) terrible distance ok
6. 00:33:784 (1,2,3) with vocal! http://puu.sh/3qgX1.jpg I don't think much problem
7. 00:38:984 (5) why use this?? 提琴
8. 00:43:784 (7) one slider, no repeat ok
9. 00:45:784 (1) delete ok
10. 01:06:716 (1,2,3,4,5) please use ctrl+shift+D no,but changed
11. 01:12:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) try this http://puu.sh/3qh6v.jpg what?
12. 01:24:849 after 01:24:849 all notes please use ctrl+shift+D little changed
13. after you updated, call me to mod your arrangement and hitsound

Good luck~★

• 这么静的歌，建议把slider静音
  把xDispel加进tags

• 00:19:250 (6) -
  00:46:184 (2) - 00:46:850 这里结束，并且Ctrl+G
  00:46:984 (3,4,5,6,7) - 重新摆了一下这个五边形
  
  

  176,232,46984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  252,120,47250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  124,165,47517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  254,203,47784,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  171,95,48050,1,0,0:0:0:0:

  00:51:784 (4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  

  374,118,51784,2,0,P|422:138|459:145,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  248,80,52584,5,8,0:0:0:0:
  328,188,52850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  326,53,53117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  248,163,53384,2,0,P|196:159|152:139,1,90

  00:53:917 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  

  180,276,53917,5,0,3:0:0:0:
  308,236,54183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  227,343,54450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  229,210,54717,1,0,3:0:0:0:

  01:05:383 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  

  284,324,65383,5,10,0:0:0:0:
  332,200,65649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  220,272,65917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  352,279,66183,2,0,P|316:255|268:259,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

  01:06:716 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  

  356,152,66716,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  224,132,66983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  343,71,67250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  282,190,67517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  261,57,67783,1,0,0:0:0:0:

  01:25:383 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里我看了一下你的大致思路，然后重新摆了一下，使得各种图案更规整，更美观
  

  380,144,85383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  292,244,85649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  421,214,85917,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  300,162,86183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  367,276,86450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  217,279,86717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  292,244,86982,5,2,0:0:0:0:
  231,113,87250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  149,231,87517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  300,162,87783,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  156,148,88050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  238,28,88316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  231,112,88583,5,2,0:0:0:0:
  377,126,88850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  290,244,89117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  300,162,89383,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  213,276,89650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  355,294,89917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  289,244,90184,1,2,0:0:0:0:

• HP Drain Rate 3
  01:30:183 (7) - (172,308)看起来不错

thou bad wrote:

hi～m4m
[General]

• 这么静的歌，建议把slider静音 听不出来就不加音效了
  把xDispel加进tags

暂时不知道mania质量……
[Hard]

• 00:19:250 (6) -意义不明
  00:46:184 (2) - 00:46:850 这里结束，并且Ctrl+G 没必要死follow
  00:46:984 (3,4,5,6,7) - 重新摆了一下这个五边形
  
  

  176,232,46984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  257,124,47250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  127,165,47517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  256,208,47784,1,2,0:0:0:0:

  00:51:784 (4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  

  374,118,51784,2,0,P|422:138|459:145,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  248,80,52584,5,8,0:0:0:0:
  328,188,52850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  326,53,53117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  248,163,53384,2,0,P|196:159|152:139,1,90

  00:53:917 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  

  180,276,53917,5,0,3:0:0:0:
  308,236,54183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  227,343,54450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  229,210,54717,1,0,3:0:0:0:

  01:05:383 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  

  284,324,65383,5,10,0:0:0:0:
  332,200,65649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  220,272,65917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  352,279,66183,2,0,P|316:255|268:259,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

  01:06:716 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  

  356,152,66716,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  224,132,66983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  343,71,67250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  282,190,67517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  261,57,67783,1,0,0:0:0:0:

  01:25:383 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里我看了一下你的大致思路，然后重新摆了一下，使得各种图案更规整，更美观
  

  380,144,85383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  292,244,85649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  421,214,85917,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  300,162,86183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  367,276,86450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  217,279,86717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  292,244,86982,5,2,0:0:0:0:
  231,113,87250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  149,231,87517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  300,162,87783,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  156,148,88050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  238,28,88316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  231,112,88583,5,2,0:0:0:0:
  377,126,88850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  290,244,89117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  300,162,89383,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  213,276,89650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  355,294,89917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  289,244,90184,1,2,0:0:0:0:

其实不规整不是挺好的ww……虽然会被喷就是了……
[Normal]

• HP Drain Rate 3 好
  01:30:183 (7) - (172,308)看起来不错

好
音效上可以多下点功夫，整体还是不错的
加油～
有时间的话希望能mod这张图

Megurine Luka wrote:

M4M =3=

[G]

我就大概截个图



统一一下timing和unicode title Timing不赖我QAQ！那个mania作者说没关系QAQ！

[Normal]

果然觉得circle size小了，大一号吧

00:30:984 (1,3) - 不知道是我耳机偏低音比较突出还是啥的，我sliderslide的声音听得非常清楚切很不合，加个slience文件吧，没有可以问我要ok
00:45:384 (5) - 结尾fin的音量降低一点，太突兀了直接去掉算了

[Hard]

00:33:784 (1) - 和00:34:584 (3) - 做一个对称的弧线slider ok
01:20:050 (4) - ctrl+g试试 这梗没看懂么QAQ！

好像没啥说的=-= 因为完全不会mod mania和taiko

so sad

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Hard]
00:10:184 (4) - 为什么2和3是一条直线..然后4突然就歪了 这是包住1的好么QAQ！你是第二个了QAQ
00:16:184 (6) - 看起来不太好..和后面搭配的话 已改
00:43:784 (7) - 包好? 好
01:21:650 (8) - 感觉clap在这不适合，你还是换成whistle 后面有Clap我就跟着放了……去掉了一个应该能好点

[Nm]
00:42:184 (3) - 我感觉非常怪异.. 我非常赞同……
01:10:450 (3) - 别折返,01:11:250 (4) - 在01:10:983放 哈？

[Other]
NM摆得有点密集.. 第三次remap好了……

Goodluck

另外有时间的话求看看我这图 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/82542 thx

1. tag xDispel 你懂
2. 紅線大丈夫?
3. AIBat寫mp3只有96kbps 大概需要換個
4. Ikoku Meiro no大概能從tag中移除 現在in-game或官網查詢都很先進的

1. 00:05:384 (1) - whistle你懂 N也有上
2. 00:17:384 (1,2) - 從節奏方面來說，這兩個的NC交換下比較好，因為後面(2,3,4,5)是1/3，前面是1/4，兩邊區隔開來會比較好讀圖
3. 00:23:384 - 這裡的鋼琴基本上跟00:21:784 - 是同個音，但這而卻沒上whistle，建議上一下
4. 00:27:784 (4) - 這兒應該NC才對，因為00:26:184 (1) - 你也有上
5. 00:31:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 好水
6. 00:35:784 (6) - 這個往上偏比較美觀 看上去也不會擠成一團
7. 00:43:784 (7) - 感覺可以NC
8. 01:00:317 (4) - 個人認為沒必要這麼大跳 果斷ctrl+g (flow啥的也比現在好)
9. 01:18:450 (9,1) - 間距啊
10. 01:21:650 (8) - clap個毛線 寧可whistle也不要clap
    細節大概要在注意一下 不過我也不喜歡nazi

1. 00:18:184 (4) - NC, 理由[Hard]講過了
2. 00:57:650 (3) - 聽著就不舒服 例圖是想保留(5)的作法
   
   前段whistle有點亂 看你要完全跟鋼琴還是完全襯托高音 另外下次SV可以開大一點 爆星了做簡單E也沒差 (畢竟這是TV)

Flask wrote:

lyrics4mod lol

[General]

1. tag xDispel 你懂 ……你是第三个=3=
2. 紅線大丈夫? 和rank不同有问题？
3. AIBat寫mp3只有96kbps 大概需要換個 真的耶……我是直接去rank偷呢还是=3
4. Ikoku Meiro no大概能從tag中移除 現在in-game或官網查詢都很先進的

好

[Hard]

1. 00:05:384 (1) - whistle你懂 N也有上 wasuledeta >_<
2. 00:17:384 (1,2) - 從節奏方面來說，這兩個的NC交換下比較好，因為後面(2,3,4,5)是1/3，前面是1/4，兩邊區隔開來會比較好讀圖 好
3. 00:23:384 - 這裡的鋼琴基本上跟00:21:784 - 是同個音，但這而卻沒上whistle，建議上一下前面改了
4. 00:27:784 (4) - 這兒應該NC才對，因為00:26:184 (1) - 你也有上 好
5. 00:31:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 好水 我觉得这梗还行噗
6. 00:35:784 (6) - 這個往上偏比較美觀 看上去也不會擠成一團 不是很明白但是还是改了
7. 00:43:784 (7) - 感覺可以NC好
8. 01:00:317 (4) - 個人認為沒必要這麼大跳 果斷ctrl+g (flow啥的也比現在好)后面都有三倍跳……
9. 01:18:450 (9,1) - 間距啊把前面的换成向外了
10. 01:21:650 (8) - clap個毛線 寧可whistle也不要clap又去掉一个clap……
    細節大概要在注意一下 不過我也不喜歡nazi 哈？

[Normal]

1. 00:18:184 (4) - NC, 理由[Hard]講過了 好
2. 00:57:650 (3) - 聽著就不舒服 例圖是想保留(5)的作法不明但是改了
   
   前段whistle有點亂 看你要完全跟鋼琴還是完全襯托高音 另外下次SV可以開大一點 爆星了做簡單E也沒差 (畢竟這是TV)

加油~

EmingK wrote:

Hi ._.

咚咚咚和啪啪啪不会摸，一身轻松

1. 红色=作死
2. 紫色=墙裂建议
3. 黑色=我觉得
   灰色=扯淡

[General]
ArtistUnicode: 東山奈央 哭哭 日本汉字里没有“东” 噗
Tags: xDespel -> xdispel ID都打错 智硬 噗……表示mania想删……
不知道是不是有意的，Combo为何要和背景色混一起 有意的

[Timing]
没问题，只是这差半个小节的timing看起来真是别扭
算一下的话75×1.5=112.5，后面只是三分拍而已，所以红线放在哪都没差（NM一根红线后面开1/3就可以了，但是你的Hard里放了1/9不得不变BPM= =）。为了长白线卡重音还是把红线放在长白线上看起来比较顺眼啊。 timing就是故意的

[闹猫]
00:18:158 (1) - 中间的锚点在卖萌？ 嗯卖萌……居然被你发现了喂！！！
00:54:691 (5,1) - 重叠大丈夫？ 错开一个小节大丈夫……应该
00:49:891 (2) - 尾巴finish Finish整首歌都不想加
01:02:957 (2) - 脑袋finish 同上
00:27:758 (3) - NC 好主意
00:43:758 (6) - NC 两个太短了吧……
01:15:491 (1) - 这段combo太长 值得一分 分不开
01:28:557 (5) - ^同理在此NC ^同理在此分不开

[蛤的]
00:22:958 (5,6,1) - 耶终于被我逮到一个blanket 那是啥能吃么
01:00:291 (4) - 不善良啊不善良啊Ctrl-g
00:38:158 (4) - 头whistle 乃还是不理解
00:50:158 (4) - 头finish 不合适啦
01:02:957 (4) - ^ 不合适啦
00:14:958 (5) - NC 好
00:27:758 (4,1) - 交换NC

不好

Good luck!

然后求个M4M 下面俩图挑吧/w\ 你猜我会mod几个:3

ts8zs wrote:

你猜我会mod几个:3

sammy711 wrote:

From 复读群
red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=advice
Timing

SPOILER

整首歌变的不是BPM，是音符从1/4变到1/3了
BPM没变，不可以更改timing的BPM
所以你把BPM×1.5 然后继续1/4下是没道理的
歌曲本身的重音都和改完之后的重音错位了 [color=#0080FF][color=#0080FF]00:48:824 (8) - 怎么解决这货 要不在45357这里放红线？[/color]
更改方法:

再手动snap所有未snap的note和滑条尾
不要使用timing里的自动snap工具，因为会把前面1/4拍的音符也弄乱[/color]

Normal
打开AIMOD 修复所有没按照DS的地方 Aimod简直是在闹
Hard
00:09:958 (3) - 移到(92,180)，让这三个在一条直线上如何 第三个
00:25:358 (3) - ctrl+H再挪回原来的地方？这样子打起来实在是不舒服
00:26:958 (3) - ctrl+J ^同上[/color] 好
00:50:158 (4) - 滑条变速最好要NC 前面是往返没关系的

LZCSC wrote:

为啥乃的歌有这么多人mod，T^T求诀窍

1. Drain : 6 is better. 8... it can not be
   
   
2. 00:14:558 (15,16) - k K ? fit the piano sound.
3. 00:16:558 (18) - K is better. piano pitch is a little high. and fit the vocal.
4. 00:19:158 (27) - del. i think this vocal sound 00:19:224 is better. but its funny rhythm.
   and 00:19:358 (27) - change the d.
5. 00:28:958 - k
   00:29:358 (53) - d
6. 00:41:558 (91) - ==> 00:41:358
7. 00:50:024 (121) - del
   00:50:158 (122) - K
8. 00:57:091 (151,152,153) - kdk
9. 01:02:557 - d
   01:02:824 (177) - del
   01:02:957 (177) - K

1. Drain:4 OD:4
2. this is really "Kantan"?? i feel the "Muzukashii"
   if this is "Kantan"...please re-mapping...
   the "Kantan" is you should use the only 1/1 or 1/2 notes.

TKSalt wrote:

hi ts8zs. m4m

[Ts8aiko]

1. Drain : 6 is better. 8... it can not be fixed
   
   
2. 00:14:558 (15,16) - k K ? fit the piano sound. dK K K
3. 00:16:558 (18) - K is better. piano pitch is a little high. and fit the vocal. I'm agree
4. 00:19:158 (27) - del. i think this vocal sound 00:19:224 is better. but its funny rhythm. You're right
   and 00:19:358 (27) - change the d. no,vocal says ka:3
5. 00:28:958 - k no
   00:29:358 (53) - d ^
6. 00:41:558 (91) - ==> 00:41:358 about 00:41:474 - maybe there are something wrong with timing:3
7. 00:50:024 (121) - del no
   00:50:158 (122) - K no:3
8. 00:57:091 (151,152,153) - kdk ddk
9. 01:02:557 - d
   01:02:824 (177) - del ^
   01:02:957 (177) - K ^

[Taiko Kantan]

1. Drain:4 OD:4
2. this is really "Kantan"?? i feel the "Muzukashii" ...This is my early map...It's my fault:3
   if this is "Kantan"...please re-mapping...
   the "Kantan" is you should use the only 1/1 or 1/2 notes.

good luck.

AndyRucas wrote:

MOD for Taiko Muzukashii:
00:24:958(32,36) 换成红色听一下w（建议
00:28:958(42,43) 换成o o看看
00:31:358(47) 建议换成蓝色会好一些
00:39:158(64) 换成红色尝试一下
00:40:558 - 00:41:758 更换为oo oo o可能会好一点
00:46:958(78) 更换为红色会好一点，建议尝试
00:49:891(87) 更换为红色
00:53:091(95) 同上
00:54:424(99,100) 更换为oo 试试看
00:58:691 增加一个蓝note尝试一下
01:01:091(117) 尝试更替为蓝色
01:02:691(123) 更换为红色
01:03:491(125) 同上
01:07:224(135,136) 更换为oo 试试看
01:08:024(138) 更换为红
01:17:357(163,164,165) 更换为o o o试试看
01:23:491(177,178) 更换为红色

MOD for Ts8aiko:
00:19:158 建议将27note移至这里 it is wrong:3
00:40:758(91) 和 00:41:558(93) 和 00:41:958(95) 去掉 Why
00:41:758 更为蓝 no
00:40:958 和 00:41:158 加上蓝note ^

基本就是以上了！~都是建议，请根据情况更改w
另祝顺利早日rank~

OnosakiHito wrote:

Requested Taiko Mod

[General]

Having SV 1.80 on a BPM 75 song and trying to fix it with inherited timlines might be problematic.
I used the map as example for this: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/143353
You could do it in this way if the BATs/Admins agree to it. but when bpm x2 Nightcore will be a problem:3(although I don't use it often)

[ Muzukashii]

General

00:00:558 - Move the inherited timline to 00:01:358. Since you stacked the timelines the map has become a bug which gives the map a blank ~5sec part. more late and omit first barline
00:46:158 - Timing Line should be placed at 00:46:958 since the bars are not right placed atm. ok:3


Notes

00:38:691 (1) - Hmmmm. Okay this is questionable. It fits to the vocal but well... maybe delete it and have a don at 00:38:558 ?del,and didn't add:3
00:46:958 - Due to the similiarity in scroll-speed it is really hard to see that there is a BPM change. Probably it is better to make the BPM change more noticable with different SVs? Only changed 1/4&1/3,This song:3

That's all. Notes are decent placed.

[ Oni]

General

00:00:558 - Move the inherited timline to 00:01:358. Since you stacked the timelines the map has become a bug which gives the map a blank ~5sec part.
00:46:158 - Timing Line should be placed at 00:46:958 since the bars are not right placed atm.
01:01:891 - Suggesting to keep the kiai here.


Notes

00:40:558~00:41:758 - I recommend a slider here. Currents notes constalation is so-so. I think slider not fit
01:01:891 - Suggesting to keep the kiai here. no:3


Well, that's all. The map is pretty short and you mapped mostly to vocals.
Pretty nice though. Red things have to be changed, everything else seems fine.

Good luck!

NewibornCLivee wrote:

mod as request.

[General]
for timing, i think keep bpm 75 in whole song will be good, the notes in the second half section are on 1/3 or 1/6, that feats the bar lines better so i think it should be the original bpm of the song.

change slider velocity to 1.4/1.6 please..

in design, switch off the letterbox during breaks as it is not allowed in taiko mode.

[Muzukashii]
00:19:158 (1) - move to 00:19:224 del this two:3
00:41:758 - add d here? since there are some music here and makes the flow better. maked next note K:3
00:44:958 (1,1) - d d? no:3
01:03:491 (1,1,1,1) - kd dk , just like 00:50:691 (1,1,1,1) , also kd dk fits melody better.ok

[Ts8aiko]
00:46:158 (1,1,1,1,1) - this stream should end at 00:46:958 , make it kkddddd? kkdkddk
01:04:291 (1) - d, same as 00:51:491 (1) Vocal says:"ka":3(This only my bad habit:3)

Banana wrote:

倒是开过异国迷路的十字路口的op然后坑了 先马克下

0gre wrote:

Mod Req ~　oh lol most of the things I wanted to say is already fixed with Ono
so I am just gonna suggest on notes ~

TAIKO SIGN

● = don
● = katsu
◎ = big done
◎ = big katsu

* = suggestion
* = strongly recommended
* = mini explanation
* = ~~

almost not used:3
[Taiko Muzukashii]

MOD information

1. 01:17:357 (1,1,1) - arent those notes opposite ? no,I think

[Ts8aiko]

MOD information

1. 00:53:091 - k ? ok:3
2. 01:03:491 - d ? no
3. 01:05:091 - d ? and 01:05:624 - k ? follow music's clap:3
4. 01:07:224 - k ? no
5. 01:14:957 - d ? no
6. 01:15:491 - k ? this really just up to u :3
7. 01:22:691 - note ?no

I like these maps ~ Thx:3

yu_yu12354 wrote:

收到你message:3

SPOILER

香蕉说他20号才有时间……（有点超现实……）
以下全都是suggestions
[Taiko Oni:]
首先,我覺得你的sampleset可以調到soft去，這首歌太安靜啦 [color=#0080FF]wmf曾经说过不要用soft:3
我聽到那些ddkk音覺得有點破壞(●´ω｀●)[/color]
00:03:758 加一個d (你主音沒可能沒notes!) 没可能是什么……前面没有后面自然没有:3
00:03:958 ^
00:04:158 ^
00:04:358 加一個k(建議用whistle) 有区别？
00:04:558 ^
00:15:358 請加一個k
00:16:158 ^
01:02:957^3 don會比較好(是重拍) 利用空白来表现了:3


這個音放在00:19:224 這比較好 因為你的音是慢了下來(建議用1/12來調較這細微的地方)你确定不会死很惨:?
這個音也是放在00:38:624比較好 (拍子問題)

[muzukashii:]
00:03:758 加一個d (你主音沒可能沒notes，儘管是Muzukashii，只是oni的簡單版)
00:04:558 請加一個k

這首歌很好聽~good luck:3

ts8zs wrote:

yu_yu12354 wrote:

收到你message:3

SPOILER

香蕉说他20号才有时间……（有点超现实……）
以下全都是suggestions
[Taiko Oni:]
首先,我覺得你的sampleset可以調到soft去，這首歌太安靜啦 [color=#0080FF]wmf曾经说过不要用soft:3
我聽到那些ddkk音覺得有點破壞(●´ω｀●)[/color]
00:03:758 加一個d (你主音沒可能沒notes!) 没可能是什么……前面没有后面自然没有:3
00:03:958 ^
00:04:158 ^
00:04:358 加一個k(建議用whistle) 有区别？
00:04:558 ^
00:15:358 請加一個k
00:16:158 ^
01:02:957^3 don會比較好(是重拍) 利用空白来表现了:3


這個音放在00:19:224 這比較好 因為你的音是慢了下來(建議用1/12來調較這細微的地方)你确定不会死很惨:?
這個音也是放在00:38:624比較好 (拍子問題)

[muzukashii:]
00:03:758 加一個d (你主音沒可能沒notes，儘管是Muzukashii，只是oni的簡單版)
00:04:558 請加一個k

這首歌很好聽~good luck:3

看样子除了timing似乎没大问题了……话说timing才是大问题吧！！！

看样子除了timing似乎没大问题了……话说timing才是大问题吧！！！
你自己心裡已經有答案了...自己实在搞不准
我說句實話
你現在這個是oni 不是futsuu那些簡單的 Oni就自然有它坑人的地方 所以我没管这货叫oni……一直都没有:3
不然都不會叫oni吧?
我以上的也只是意見，畢竟我也就是個廢柴 接不接納隨你喜歡不 还是挺有用的:3:3

aabc271 wrote:

應 pm 來太鼓 mod 的 :3 不小心pm多了……本来是M4M来着 想要mod的时候可以找我:3
中文 mod 真的不習慣 x_x 英文没关系……

藍~ 致命傷，請必須修改
紫~ 最好修改
粉紅~ 只是建議，請自行決定是否修改
灰~ 解釋 一开始都来这么一句……从来没见人用过:3

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[ Ta8aiko]

這首歌的確不易作太鼓圖，先為你的嘗試鼓勵一下 :3 没有啊……很自然就做出来了:3

• 因歌曲旋律關係，個人認為 OD6 略苛刻，建議 OD5 这个不打太鼓不太清楚……ok

• 00:38:158 ( 1,1,1,1 ) - 初見被這 1/3 騙了，建議簡化成[urlhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873825]這樣[/url] 少个等号:3 oni 骗一次没关系吧:3

• 00:40:158 ( 1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1 ) - 節奏略怪，建議這樣 你会发现改完之后更诡异:3 00:42:058 - 好想在这里加个note

細微建議 ~

以下純屬建議，請自行決定是否修改

對我而言，kiai 的紅藍運用與我認為的有頗大差別，所以我決定尊重你的用法，盡量不作太多建議了

00:09:758 ( 1,1,1 ) - ooo ( 考慮到人聲高低一致，用淨色較能配合音樂 )
00:22:558 ( 1,1,1 ) - ^ 考虑到后面还有钢琴和吉他，放弃吧

00:24:958 ( 1,1,1 ) - ooo ( 以人聲為導向的歌還是建議配合其高低起伏 )
00:26:558 ( 1,1,1 ) - ^ / ooo 我比较喜欢用note来把不明显的音调凸显出来……不管是standard还是taiko:3

00:27:758 ( 1 ) - 紅 ( 前面的 d 比這還要高音，所以認為 k 不怎配合 ) 体现重音...要是合适我都想用Finish :3

00:34:158 ( 1,1,1 ) - ooo ( 切合較沉的人聲 )
00:37:358 ( 1,1,1 ) - ^

00:35:358 ( 1,1,1,1,1 ) - ooooo ( 切合人聲 ) 配合提琴抖动

00:44:958 ( 1 ) - 紅 ( 後面的 d 與這同音調，故建議在這用 d )

00:59:491 ( 1 ) - 藍 ( 後面的 k 與這同音調 )

01:02:158 ( 1,1 ) - o o ? ( 配合由低至高的人聲 )
01:03:491 ( 1,1 ) - ^

诶……发音不是一样的么:3

歌曲不易作譜，但整體依然不錯 :3我会告诉你原来timing巨好以至于1/3可当1/4做？

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[ Taiko Muzukashii]

• 00:32:958 ( 1,1 ) - 刪掉 ? 感覺音樂很小聲，不適宜加 note no:3

• 00:37:758 ( 1 ) - 變更為這樣 ? 感覺較配合音樂 和前面照应

• 00:46:158 ( 1 ) - 感覺應該到 00:46:958 才加速 ( x1.5 ) ...? 做个标志吧……诶……muzu加速干什么……改timing的遗留物……不要在意……fixed

細微建議 ~

以下純屬建議，請自行決定是否修改

kiai 的建議較多重複，希望別介意

00:09:758 ( 1,1 ) - o o ( 考慮到人聲高低一致，用淨色較能配合音樂 )

00:49:358 ( 1 ) - 紅 ( 讓這兒變成 ddkk，更配合由低至高的人聲 )
00:52:558 ( 1 ) - ^
01:02:158 ( 1 ) - ^
01:05:358 ( 1,1,1,1 ) - oooo ? ( ^ 紅藍一致性 )

00:50:691 ( 1,1 ) - o o ( 人聲由低至高 )
00:51:491 ( 1,1 ) - o o ( 人聲由高至低 )
01:03:491 ( 1,1,1,1 ) - oo oo ( 同理由 )

00:54:958 ( 1 ) - 紅 ( 考慮到與前面的 d 同音調 )
01:07:758 ( 1 ) - ^

00:56:291 ( 1,1,1,1 ) - 考慮這樣 ( 更配合音調變化 )
00:59:491 ( 1,1,1,1,1,1 ) - 這樣 ( 同理由 )
01:09:091 ( 1,1,1,1,1 ) - 這樣
01:12:291 ( 1,1,1,1,1 ) - 這樣

01:17:358 ( 1,1,1 ) - o o o ( 人聲為高低高 )

譜面帶來的感覺很舒適，好評
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兩個太鼓譜面都不錯，應該能沒問題 rank :3

歌曲大好 <3

加油