( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)
Hi~This was your M4M but I didn't do it cuz I was on exam for over 1 month and now too...
Sorry for the long wait
[General]
I'll point out some quite unrankable things in order to make it better
[Easy]
Too many circles for easy
Slider speed could be normal due to the BPM
00:47:513 (1,2,3,4) - Use some oblique patterns instead of square
00:57:841 (3) - For this slider copy 00:56:858 (2) - rotate 90* clockwise and Ctrl+G with a reverse
01:01:776 (2) - Blanket
01:14:563 (1) - For this slider copy 01:13:087 (4) - and Ctrl+H which make it like symmetry
01:18:497 (1) - Make this slider same as 01:19:481 (2) - by copying and pasting it
01:23:415 (3) - Ctrl+G and move to X:152 Y:172
01:24:890 - Put something here, at least a spinner cuz this is KIAI
[Normal]
Need to aware of arrangements
Slider speed could be hard due to the BPM
00:01:038 (1,2) - Change to a slider
00:01:776 (1) - Make this put on middle which looks better by moving 00:01:038 (1) - to a bit more left
00:19:972 (2) - This is out of mapping area, move right or up
00:22:923 (3) - Remove this, copy 00:21:448 (1) - and rotate 180*
00:24:890 - Note here
00:30:300 - Note here
00:33:743 (6) - Don't stack, put at left side like a diamond shape
00:39:153 - Note here
00:46:038 - ^
00:46:284 (3,4) - The flow is wrong here, arrange it a little with you idea
00:52:431 - Note here, follow the cover more instead of vocal
00:55:382 (4,5) - Out of mapping area
01:04:727 (1,2) - Make their shape and angle same
01:04:727 (1,2,6) - Don't stack at tail, it's hard to read
01:15:792 (1) - Remove NC (new combo)
01:18:005 - Put something here
01:28:333 (5) - Out of area
01:30:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stacks are not balanced, 1 stack at front and 2 stack behind makes strange flow
01:33:743 - Note
[Aka's Hard]
This diff seems fine.
[Insane]
Seems fine too.
Hope I helped
适当减少一些三连打？
