Hanyuu wrote:
Hi
[Normal:]
00:39:280 - suggestion to change this part here. If all of it is only on 2 keys it does not seem as good. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/809858
00:44:734 - The notes get a bit less and repeative here. It seems too easy compared to the rest. Here is some idea to change it. Add notes here:
00:44:961 - 00:45:870 - 00:46:779 - 00:47:915 - 00:49:506 - 00:51:324 - 00:53:142 - 00:56:778 - 00:58:596 - 01:00:414 - 01:02:232 - 01:04:050 - and so on until the end of the kiai time.
01:25:184 - i suggest to change this pattern to remove the drum notes and only map according to the melody. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/809864 I think it would be fitting better this way and it is easier to play.
01:35:637 (95637|1) - remove this ? and make this 01:35:410 (95410|2) - 1 beat length
01:37:001 (97001|3,97228|4) - replace those with notes and move this 01:37:455 (97455|5) - to a more distant column?
[Hard:]
00:01:102 (1102|0,1216|1,1330|2) - Better move those notes to keys 1-3-5. It looks a bit cramped and generally your notes in your map arent that close together. I think it would just be more fitting and play better into your map
00:48:370 - Need to change the pattern here. Try changing it according to the instrument that starts here?
01:17:457 - I would also change to a more fitting pattern here. The song really suggests a change of notes here
01:37:228 (97228|2) - make this hold the same lenght as the next one and move this 01:37:455 (97455|3) - to 6th column? Im really unsure about how this part would be really good because i think the piano notes should be the hold notes yet this finisher sound comes out half a beat later.
[Insane:]
00:01:102 (1102|3,1216|4,1330|5) - Same as in hard it would be better if those notes are on 3-5-7
00:06:102 - This beat in your pattern has 1 note too much. It should have only 2. 00:06:102 - 00:09:738 - 00:13:374 - etc
00:12:010 (12010|0) - Delete
00:32:917 - Remove the finish hitsounds on the 4th column here. You are blocking out the soft hitnormal hitsound completely and it seems needed for this: 00:32:690 (32690|5,32803|4,32917|3,33144|5,33258|4,33372|3,33485|6,33599|5,33712|4,33826|3) -
00:36:553 - Same here
00:39:280 - Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/809889
00:40:189 - Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/809890
00:59:732 (59732|3,60187|3,60641|3) - move this to 7th column?
01:08:822 (68822|4,69049|4) - Move it to 4th column add finish hitsound on both
01:08:936 (68936|5) - Move it to 6th column
01:09:504 (69504|3) - Add finish
01:09:845 (69845|2,69958|3,70072|4) - add finish
01:22:911 (82911|5,82911|3,83025|2,83025|4,83139|3) - Those notes don't seem fitting has sound
[Rumi's Insane:]
00:17:919 - Jackerhammer doesn't seem fitting
00:39:053 - This part look unnecessary overdifficult.
01:30:183 - Claps? lol
all fixed, Rumia's part remains.