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Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka - Tsuki no Inori

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Rizia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年2月17日 at 02:03:44

Artist: Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka
Title: Tsuki no Inori
Source: Hayate no Gotoku! Cuties
Tags: ハヤテのごとく! ending 福音 Fukuin kawaiwkyik Zero__wind
BPM: 117
Filesize: 8278kb
Play Time: 03:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.43 stars, 435 notes)
  2. Insane (3.34 stars, 590 notes)
  3. Zero's Normal (1.56 stars, 267 notes)
Download: Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka - Tsuki no Inori
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#11
ハヤテのごとく! Cuties Episode 7 ED Full
Ruka <333333333333333333333333333
For rank
Normal - by Zero__wind (100%)
Hard - by me (100%)
wkyik - by me (100%)
- Tu -
頭香香香香香
happy623
Foreverends
8-)
sammy711
From 复读群
red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=advice
Normal
Good!
Hard
00:18:971 - add a circle?
00:19:228 - 无用的绿线
00:03:331 - 这个音符冲淡了00:03:587 - 的人声
在这里 人声强于鼓声,不应该用circle继续加强效果。
所以说 把00:03:331 (2) - 删掉,在00:03:075 (1) -这里同样位置放上一个1/2滑条,我觉得会好得多

02:14:356 (6) - 这里的reverse箭头跑到屏幕外了 快移回来>.<

03:21:023 (4) - 这里没有像02:29:997 (5) - 音乐的停顿
所以最好将这个节奏连上:将这个4 reverse一次 可以把这个右移一点以便于靠近03:21:792 (1)
wkyik
00:19:228 - 无用的绿线
00:02:049 (6) - 真难看....建议弄得弧度小点...要不就不要reverse了

00:08:716 (8) - NC and 00:08:972 (1) - remove NC
第一是为了提示玩家音符从二分音符变成了四分音符 因为你本身就没通过间距来提示接下来的是个三连
第二是和之前的节奏一样 长白线起NC
(如果你真的不想改的话 也务必要把00:08:203 (6,7,8,9,1) - 拿DS摆)

00:25:382 (1) - 这个note冲淡了节奏 理由和hard里第一条一样 最好把这个删了 00:24:869 (5) - 这个reverse一次

00:53:074 (4) - 出界啦

02:04:613 (4) - 这里感觉突然间距就减小了 像是被左上角了压制了一样
要我说 把这个音符放到02:04:100 (2) - 的位置上 打起来会更爽一些 体会一下ww

02:41:536 (3,4) - 这两个中间一直有一个xi的音 可以说应该是连续的
而你用两个音符把这个连续的xi的音拆掉了
把4删了 在3原处放个滑条(可以考虑放1/2的或者3/4的) 会感觉好很多

02:52:818 (5) - 该跳的时候就要跳>.<! 移到(0,300)你看如何

awesome

好图 好歌 here's your star
Topic Starter
Rizia

sammy711 wrote:

From 复读群
red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=advice
Normal
Good!
Hard
00:18:971 - add a circle?
00:19:228 - 无用的绿线
00:03:331 - 这个音符冲淡了00:03:587 - 的人声
在这里 人声强于鼓声,不应该用circle继续加强效果。
所以说 把00:03:331 (2) - 删掉,在00:03:075 (1) -这里同样位置放上一个1/2滑条,我觉得会好得多

02:14:356 (6) - 这里的reverse箭头跑到屏幕外了 快移回来>.<

03:21:023 (4) - 这里没有像02:29:997 (5) - 音乐的停顿
所以最好将这个节奏连上:将这个4 reverse一次 可以把这个右移一点以便于靠近03:21:792 (1)
wkyik
00:19:228 - 无用的绿线
00:02:049 (6) - 真难看....建议弄得弧度小点...要不就不要reverse了

00:08:716 (8) - NC and 00:08:972 (1) - remove NC
第一是为了提示玩家音符从二分音符变成了四分音符 因为你本身就没通过间距来提示接下来的是个三连
第二是和之前的节奏一样 长白线起NC
(如果你真的不想改的话 也务必要把00:08:203 (6,7,8,9,1) - 拿DS摆)

00:25:382 (1) - 这个note冲淡了节奏 理由和hard里第一条一样 最好把这个删了 00:24:869 (5) - 这个reverse一次

00:53:074 (4) - 出界啦

02:04:613 (4) - 这里感觉突然间距就减小了 像是被左上角了压制了一样
要我说 把这个音符放到02:04:100 (2) - 的位置上 打起来会更爽一些 体会一下ww 這個我想保持原樣

02:41:536 (3,4) - 这两个中间一直有一个xi的音 可以说应该是连续的
而你用两个音符把这个连续的xi的音拆掉了
把4删了 在3原处放个滑条(可以考虑放1/2的或者3/4的) 会感觉好很多

02:52:818 (5) - 该跳的时候就要跳>.<! 移到(0,300)你看如何

awesome

好图 好歌 here's your star
Thank you for your modding :D
happy623
yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 家佑 :D
request via in-game

[General]
  1. BG.png 換做 jpg, 減低file size
  2. wkyik的source漏了
  3. Tags 加一下參與這圖的人吧
  4. 打開letterbox?
[Zero's Normal]
  1. 00:29:228 (3) - 左1格做nice blanket?
  2. 00:59:997 (6,1) - normal碰到血條不知道允不允許;w;
  3. 01:22:561 (4) - finish?
  4. 01:57:177 (1) - 左1格跟前面連住
  5. 03:39:997 (3) - 感覺這個的音量可以加大w 大概70%?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 一開始用reverse slider較好?
  2. 00:11:793 (1) - 包成這樣好看一點? http://puu.sh/3vDsu.jpg
  3. 00:14:998 (1) - remove whistle
  4. 00:39:484 (4) - 試著放在(3,1)的正中間
  5. 01:37:177 (6) - 感覺這個之後放一個spinner到01:40:253 完結好一點 8-)
  6. 03:11:535 (6) - NC
  7. 03:29:484 (7,8,9,10,1) - 放右一點? 因為test的時候overlap了 http://puu.sh/3vDIG.jpg
[wkyik]
  1. 囧都是finish沒下好(找死我了
  2. 00:08:716 (8) - NC, 不然很難讀ww
  3. 00:13:074 (6) - NC?
  4. 00:35:638 (1) - 開首finish
  5. 00:43:843 (1) - ^
  6. 00:58:202 (7) - NC
  7. 01:00:254 (1) - 開頭finish
  8. 01:06:407 (5) - 聽著覺得reverse不太對音, 換個慢的sv拉到01:07:433 如何?
  9. 01:12:049 (8) - finish?
  10. 01:22:561 (6) - NC
  11. 01:33:074 (1) - 開頭finish
  12. 01:37:177 (4) - 同hard
  13. 01:53:587 (1) - finish
  14. 02:09:997 (1) - 開頭finish
  15. 02:16:151 (5) - NC + finish
  16. 02:26:407 (1) - 開頭finish
  17. 02:32:305 (1) - ^
  18. 02:34:613 (3) - ^
  19. 03:05:382 (3) - ^
  20. 03:19:484 (1) - ^
  21. 03:20:510 (3) - ^
  22. 03:29:997 (1) - ^
  23. 03:34:100 (5) - ^
  24. 03:40:125 (1) - 可以換成normal的finish
好圖(Y)(Y)(Y) star✧
rank加油 8-) 8-) 8-)
Topic Starter
Rizia

happy623 wrote:

yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 家佑 :D
request via in-game

[General]
  1. BG.png 換做 jpg, 減低file size
  2. wkyik的source漏了
  3. Tags 加一下參與這圖的人吧
  4. 打開letterbox?
[Zero's Normal]
  1. 00:29:228 (3) - 左1格做nice blanket?
  2. 00:59:997 (6,1) - normal碰到血條不知道允不允許;w;
  3. 01:22:561 (4) - finish?
  4. 01:57:177 (1) - 左1格跟前面連住
  5. 03:39:997 (3) - 感覺這個的音量可以加大w 大概70%?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 一開始用reverse slider較好?
  2. 00:11:793 (1) - 包成這樣好看一點? http://puu.sh/3vDsu.jpg
  3. 00:14:998 (1) - remove whistle
  4. 00:39:484 (4) - 試著放在(3,1)的正中間
  5. 01:37:177 (6) - 感覺這個之後放一個spinner到01:40:253 完結好一點 8-) 給人家多些休息時間嘛Xdd
  6. 03:11:535 (6) - NC
  7. 03:29:484 (7,8,9,10,1) - 放右一點? 因為test的時候overlap了 http://puu.sh/3vDIG.jpg
[wkyik]
  1. 囧都是finish沒下好(找死我了
  2. 00:08:716 (8) - NC, 不然很難讀ww
  3. 00:13:074 (6) - NC?
  4. 00:35:638 (1) - 開首finish
  5. 00:43:843 (1) - ^
  6. 00:58:202 (7) - NC
  7. 01:00:254 (1) - 開頭finish
  8. 01:06:407 (5) - 聽著覺得reverse不太對音, 換個慢的sv拉到01:07:433 如何?
  9. 01:12:049 (8) - finish?
  10. 01:22:561 (6) - NC
  11. 01:33:074 (1) - 開頭finish
  12. 01:37:177 (4) - 同hard 同hard
  13. 01:53:587 (1) - finish
  14. 02:09:997 (1) - 開頭finish
  15. 02:16:151 (5) - NC + finish
  16. 02:26:407 (1) - 開頭finish
  17. 02:32:305 (1) - ^
  18. 02:34:613 (3) - ^
  19. 03:05:382 (3) - ^
  20. 03:19:484 (1) - ^
  21. 03:20:510 (3) - ^
  22. 03:29:997 (1) - ^
  23. 03:34:100 (5) - ^
  24. 03:40:125 (1) - 可以換成normal的finish
好圖(Y)(Y)(Y) star✧
rank加油 8-) 8-) 8-)
Zero__wind
@623 : All fixed, thx
code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Tsuki no inori.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 67946
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki no inori
TitleUnicode:月の祈り
Artist:Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka
ArtistUnicode:水蓮寺ルカ starring 山崎はるか
Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:Zero's Normal
Source:Hayate no Gotoku! Cuties
Tags:Zero__wind NewibornCLivee Nardoxyribonucleic
BeatmapID:270013
BeatmapSetID:99611

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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148,20,60253,6,0,L|253:56,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,32,61023,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,4,61535,2,0,P|414:36|408:64,1,55,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,62048,2,0,P|392:196|444:252,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,348,63330,2,0,P|352:332|312:328,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,220,64869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,220,65125,6,0,P|236:252|184:252,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,216,65894,2,0,P|116:164|116:112,1,110,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66664,12,4,68459,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68971,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69228,2,0,P|296:232|308:288,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,328,69997,2,0,L|208:348,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,328,70766,2,0,L|64:364,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,176,72048,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,176,72305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,176,72561,6,0,P|56:112|76:72,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,28,73330,2,0,P|172:28|212:48,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,88,74100,2,0,L|304:72,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,180,74869,2,0,L|240:196,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,204,75382,2,0,P|152:260|160:308,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,76151,2,0,L|244:380,2,55,8|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,316,77689,6,0,L|464:352,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,272,78459,2,0,P|368:216|392:168,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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477,105,79484,2,0,P|499:58|491:2,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,44,80510,6,0,P|328:44|288:16,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,81279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,16,81535,2,0,P|184:44|124:44,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,82561,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82818,12,4,84869,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85382,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85638,2,0,P|196:192|152:216,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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404,156,110253,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,256,110766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,264,116151,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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64,124,117177,6,0,B|60:56|8:36,1,110,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,36,118202,1,0,3:0:0:0:
120,36,118459,2,0,P|156:108|236:128,1,165,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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444,232,121279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,232,121535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,232,121792,6,0,P|424:296|392:328,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,328,122561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,264,123074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,264,123330,2,0,P|196:308|152:320,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,320,124100,2,0,L|52:352,2,55,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,108,125638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,108,125894,6,0,P|104:100|144:64,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,20,126664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,60,127177,2,0,L|372:104,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,140,127946,2,0,P|416:204|396:248,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,272,128715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,316,129741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,316,129997,6,0,P|176:352|228:360,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,20,132818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,20,133074,6,0,P|192:16|148:32,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,220,134869,2,0,P|380:232|436:224,1,110
472,184,135638,2,0,P|484:128|476:72,1,110,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136407,12,4,138202,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138715,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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244,68,140510,2,0,P|268:52|293:47,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,141792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,220,142048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,142305,6,0,P|120:228|76:208,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,143074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,64,143587,2,0,L|64:32,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,16,144100,2,0,P|152:64|148:112,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,144869,2,0,L|236:180,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,145638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,145894,2,0,L|324:308,2,55,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,108,147433,6,0,P|440:160|440:212,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,256,148202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,360,148715,2,0,L|320:380,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,380,149228,2,0,L|208:372,2,55,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,300,150253,2,0,P|216:248|212:192,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,148,151023,2,0,L|132:172,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,152048,2,0,L|292:108,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,152561,12,4,154612,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,155382,2,0,P|200:224|152:224,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,204,156151,2,0,L|48:240,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,128,156920,2,0,L|66:98,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,20,158202,2,0,L|192:48,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,158715,6,0,P|296:72|332:40,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,32,159484,2,0,P|424:64|484:76,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,126,160253,2,0,L|464:160,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,264,161023,2,0,L|450:298,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,161535,2,0,P|344:316|312:280,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,162305,2,0,L|400:256,2,55,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,212,163843,6,0,P|172:248|200:304,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,328,164612,2,0,P|80:348|12:304,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,252,165638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,200,165894,2,0,P|40:160|72:136,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166920,12,0,169997,0:0:0:0:
256,192,181279,12,0,183074,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183330,12,4,185382,0:0:0:0:
176,124,186664,6,12,P|136:96|116:60,2,82.5
354,156,188715,6,12,P|399:136|440:136,2,82.5
237,295,190766,6,12,P|232:343|211:379,2,82.5
256,188,192048,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,192561,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,192818,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,193074,2,0,P|200:192|157:221,1,110,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,308,194100,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,204,194612,2,0,P|36:132|44:92,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,48,195382,2,0,P|144:36|184:44,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,84,196151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,172,196664,2,0,L|200:208,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,197433,6,0,P|280:276|304:228,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,198202,2,0,L|408:240,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,76,199228,2,0,L|325:54,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199741,12,4,201792,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202305,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202561,2,0,P|284:244|276:296,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,332,203330,2,0,L|184:320,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,272,204100,2,0,L|76:325,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,205382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,112,205638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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195,59,206664,2,0,P|235:39|299:40,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Mio_chan
[General]
offset -32
disable countdown 和 letterbox during breaks?

[wkyik]
最前面的音量較小一點...?因為音樂比較靜

00:39:196 (5) - 加個小JUMP?
00:48:427 (2) - spacing有點怪,因為看起來像1/2
01:37:273 - 加spinner? 01:40:478 - 完
01:51:504 (7) - NC
02:04:325 (3,4) - 這兩個我覺得大spacing會較好,跟 (2,3)一樣
02:32:273 (1) - delete NC?
02:34:581 (3) - NC?
02:50:479 (4) - slider用曲的?
02:52:786 (5) - 2.0x?
03:21:761 (3) - NC?
03:36:889 (1) - 尾部不好看...圓滑點會更好

[Hard]
一開始音量跟insane一樣
OD + 1?

00:45:382 (4) - 突然2x DS有點怪...1.5x?
01:48:971 (5) - 直slider? 因為 (2) 是直的
02:07:433 (4) - ^ 因為(1,2,3)都是直的
02:10:766 (3) - 弧度可以大多一點點
02:14:356 (6) - 指向相反方向? 因為overlap了
02:42:818 (1,2,3) - 改成這樣? 因為 (3) overlap了02:58:971 (1) - remove NC?

[Normal]
AR - 1?
01:45:894 (1,2) - 距離spinner太近了...在 01:46:407 才開始?
02:12:818 (4,1) - NC放在02:12:818 (4) - ?
02:20:510 (4) - 指向第2個方向?
02:32:048 (7) - 放在約 x:32 y:292?
02:32:561 (1) - 在 02:34:100 完?
Topic Starter
Rizia

Mio_chan wrote:

[General]
offset -32
disable countdown 和 letterbox during breaks?

[wkyik]
最前面的音量較小一點...?因為音樂比較靜

00:39:196 (5) - 加個小JUMP? 不了
00:48:427 (2) - spacing有點怪,因為看起來像1/2 Fixed
01:37:273 - 加spinner? 01:40:478 - 完 理由與上個mod一樣
01:51:504 (7) - NC 歌詞未完
02:04:325 (3,4) - 這兩個我覺得大spacing會較好,跟 (2,3)一樣 這個我想保持原樣
02:32:273 (1) - delete NC? 小Bug,,因為唔知點解變左NC係02:31:536 (8) -
02:34:581 (3) - NC?
02:50:479 (4) - slider用曲的? 剛剛把變成直02:49:997 (3) -
02:52:786 (5) - 2.0x?
03:21:761 (3) - NC?
03:36:889 (1) - 尾部不好看...圓滑點會更好

[Hard]
一開始音量跟insane一樣
OD + 1?

00:45:382 (4) - 突然2x DS有點怪...1.5x?
01:48:971 (5) - 直slider? 因為 (2) 是直的 與01:49:484 (1) - 對稱
02:07:433 (4) - ^ 因為(1,2,3)都是直的 我想做一個1,4曲與2,3直的
02:10:766 (3) - 弧度可以大多一點點
02:14:356 (6) - 指向相反方向? 因為overlap了
02:42:818 (1,2,3) - 改成這樣? 因為 (3) overlap了02:58:971 (1) - remove NC?
Thx
ts8zs
一根红线767不就行了……要是不喜欢红线前有note可以用负数啊?算了不清楚你去问别人……
背景怎么了……?不是蛮好的么
[wkyik(话说这啥啊,能解释下么:3)]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:11:150
Object's end is not snapped! 00:14:355
00:01:280 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873002
00:09:484 (4) - blanket:3
00:11:792 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873010 5叠在下一个NC的4上面
00:13:843 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873013
00:25:638 (6) - NC
00:25:638 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873027
>00:27:433 (1,2) - exchange
01:08:459 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873032
01:09:997 (6) - Blanket
01:15:382 (6) - NC
01:20:510 (1) - remove 3rd point,move down new 3rd one(啊嘞……吧第三个点去掉然后新的第三个点往下拖)
01:22:561 (6) - NC
01:32:305 (9) - NC
01:34:869 (6) - ……这种滑条4个点就够了,多了没拉好反而不好看
01:51:279 (6) - NC
算了不NC了……以下只给出梗和flow的建议
03:09:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 突然就鬼畜了什么情况
03:38:972 (7) - 终于见到一个拉好的了= =
[Hard]
00:02:049 (4) - Remove slider whistle
02:05:382 (4) - 改成3返?
[0's Normal]
Seems good(单个note有点难抓啊= =)
[Oni]
00:11:279 (39,40,41) - kkd
00:43:330 (150,151,152,153,154) - kkDkk
01:09:997 (12,13,14,15,16) - kkDDk
01:14:356 (35) - k
01:31:279 (121) - k
01:33:587 (134,135,136,137) - k ddd change to kk dd
01:37:048 - k
02:25:125 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - dkddkkdkd
02:26:920 (55,56,57,58) - kk kd
02:43:330 (145,146,147,148) - kdk d
03:33:330 (365) - k
03:40:253 - 加个滑条?(什么馊主意)
[Muzu]
这奇葩的clap……音效换成默认N,不要用自定义
00:02:562 (9) - k
00:07:177 (22,23,24) - kdd
00:48:715 - d
00:51:792 (113) - k
01:37:689 (263,264) - kd or kk
好像被催眠了>A<
02:36:920 (171,172,173) - dkd
03:03:074 (270) - k
03:05:638 (275,276) - remove
03:07:689 (281,282) - del
03:09:869 (288) - cut
03:24:356 (333) - k
03:35:894 (371) - k
Topic Starter
Rizia

ts8zs wrote:

一根红线767不就行了……要是不喜欢红线前有note可以用负数啊?算了不清楚你去问别人……
背景怎么了……?不是蛮好的么
[wkyik(话说这啥啊,能解释下么:3)]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:11:150 不明白啊...下面同上
Object's end is not snapped! 00:14:355
00:01:280 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873002
00:09:484 (4) - blanket:3
00:11:792 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873010 5叠在下一个NC的4上面
00:13:843 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873013
00:25:638 (6) - NC
00:25:638 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873027
>00:27:433 (1,2) - exchange
01:08:459 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873032
01:09:997 (6) - Blanket
01:15:382 (6) - NC
01:20:510 (1) - remove 3rd point,move down new 3rd one(啊嘞……吧第三个点去掉然后新的第三个点往下拖)
01:22:561 (6) - NC
01:32:305 (9) - NC
01:34:869 (6) - ……这种滑条4个点就够了,多了没拉好反而不好看
01:51:279 (6) - NC
算了不NC了……以下只给出梗和flow的建议
03:09:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 突然就鬼畜了什么情况
03:38:972 (7) - 终于见到一个拉好的了= =
[Hard]
00:02:049 (4) - Remove slider whistle
02:05:382 (4) - 改成3返?
除了有注明的那個其他改了
thank your modding
ts8zs
就是AImod啦……滑条往前拉一下往后拉一下就行……unrankable来着:3
Topic Starter
Rizia

ts8zs wrote:

就是AImod啦……滑条往前拉一下往后拉一下就行……unrankable来着:3
Done!
Nardoxyribonucleic

ts8zs wrote:

[Muzu]
这奇葩的clap……音效换成默认N,不要用自定义 fixed
00:02:562 (9) - k
00:07:177 (22,23,24) - kdd
00:48:715 - d fixed
00:51:792 (113) - k
01:37:689 (263,264) - kd or kk 264比263高音呢@@"維持原狀
好像被催眠了>A<
02:36:920 (171,172,173) - dkd fixed
03:03:074 (270) - k
03:05:638 (275,276) - remove fixed
03:07:689 (281,282) - del fixed
03:09:869 (288) - cut fixed
03:24:356 (333) - k fixed
03:35:894 (371) - k fixed
感謝mod~
更新: 點我 :3
Topic Starter
Rizia

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

[Muzu]
这奇葩的clap……音效换成默认N,不要用自定义 fixed
00:02:562 (9) - k
00:07:177 (22,23,24) - kdd
00:48:715 - d fixed
00:51:792 (113) - k
01:37:689 (263,264) - kd or kk 264比263高音呢@@"維持原狀
好像被催眠了>A<
02:36:920 (171,172,173) - dkd fixed
03:03:074 (270) - k
03:05:638 (275,276) - remove fixed
03:07:689 (281,282) - del fixed
03:09:869 (288) - cut fixed
03:24:356 (333) - k fixed
03:35:894 (371) - k fixed
感謝mod~
更新: 點我 :3
updated
-xNaCLx-

ts8zs wrote:

[Oni]
00:11:279 (39,40,41) - kkd nope,did not fit the pitch
00:43:330 (150,151,152,153,154) - kkDkk nope
01:09:997 (12,13,14,15,16) - kkDDk did not see the point of adding the second D
01:14:356 (35) - k nope
01:31:279 (121) - k nope
01:33:587 (134,135,136,137) - k ddd change to kk dd nope
01:37:048 - k no.fits the diff. flow better
02:25:125 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - dkddkkdkd why
02:26:920 (55,56,57,58) - kk kd nope
02:43:330 (145,146,147,148) - kdk d nope
03:33:330 (365) - k nope, did not fit
03:40:253 - 加个滑条?(什么馊主意)nope...i would rather keep it empty
thanks for mod. since most of them are sthing related to my modding style but not major problem, i refuse to change.
taiko_maniac1811
Taiko mod as requested from Malaysian Taiko Queue :3

MOD
  • [Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii]

    00:13:075 (40) - delete?
    00:36:407 (52,53) - dd?
    00:36:664 (54) - move this to 00:36:792 plays better imo
    00:38:202 (59) - k?
    00:38:587 (61) - delete?
    00:40:638 (69) - d?
    00:40:766 (70) - move this to 00:40:894
    00:50:894 (109) - d?
    00:52:305 (115) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    00:54:997 (124) - d?
    00:59:100 (139) - ^
    01:08:971 (171) - k?
    01:10:382 (178,179) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    01:17:561 (200) - d?
    01:43:330 (1) - end this spinner at 01:44:612
    01:58:587 (44) - d?
    02:08:843 (82) - ^
    02:18:715 (111) - k?
    02:27:305 (142) - d?
    02:27:433 (143) - move this to 02:27:561
    02:58:074 (249) - delete?

    [NC's Taiko Oni]

    00:09:367 (31) - delete?
    00:11::023 (37,38) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    00:14:485 (51) - delete?
    00:22:305 (65) - k? have piano sound here
    00:36:664 (114) - move this to 00:36:792 plays better imo
    00:38:330 (122) - delete?
    00:40:766 (136) - move this to 00:40:894
    00:42:433 (144) - delete?
    00:44:869 (157) - move this to 00:44:997
    00:46:535 (165) - delete?
    00:48:971 (179) - move this to 00:49:100
    01:06:023 (266,267,268) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    01:42:689 (8) - delete?
    01:47:433 (23) - move this to 01:47:561
    01:51:535 (42) - move this to 01:51:664
    01:56:279 (65) - delete?
    02:14:484 (159) - ^
    02:15:766 (166,167,168) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    02:40:510 (128) - k? follows the vocal
    02:55:510 (189) - move this to 02:55:766
    02:55:894 (191) - move this to 02:56:023
    03:25:125 (314) - k?
    03:33:202 (364) - delete?

That's all from me :3
Good luck~
Hanabi
Hi from my queue

[Hard]
00:42:818 (8) - it would be nice 01:04:612 (3) - change into circles
01:28:459 (3) - 03:20:894 (3) - it's very hard to hit circle on the blue line..remove it

[Insane]
perfect!
Topic Starter
Rizia

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi from my queue

[Hard]
00:42:818 (8) - it would be nice Not fix because i think after fix it will more harder 01:04:612 (3) - change into circles fixed
01:28:459 (3) - fixed03:20:894 (3) - it's very hard to hit circle on the blue line..remove it fixed

[Insane]
perfect!
thanks for your modding
Rotte
Hi~ From my queue

[General]


    1. Fine.

    ---------------------------------------------------------

    [Zero's Normal]


    • Useless Green line
      1. Fine.


      Rhythm

    • 00:47:433 (5,1) - 1是不是有点高?
    • 01:02:048 (4) - 往左挪点吧,flow貌似不在一条线
    • 01:15:382 (5) - 往下
    • 01:20:510 (1,2,3) - 会不会难读了?
    • 02:38:202 (5,1) - 交换NC试试
    • 02:43:843 (1,2) - 好 丑 啊 !!!

Sound Effect

00:11:280 (5) - 红线上放whistle貌似好些
00:14:869 (3) - 一个finish足够了,clap就画蛇添足了
02:26:151 - 试试换成clap貌似带感而且合曲


---------------------------------------------------------

[Hard]

  • Useless Green line
    1. 02:16:664 -


    Rhythm

  • 00:04:357 (4,2,3) - 遮住没事儿么
  • 00:11:793 (1) - blanket没弄好呢
  • 00:22:818 (7) - 试试blanket5
  • 00:24:869 - 虽说这里咱知道你想空着,但是还是要说这里最好别空
  • 00:31:535 (1,2) - 怎么评价呢?如果是故意的,就算了,如果是blanket的话,建议包好看些
  • 00:40:510 (3) - 后半部分弯的好难看啊
  • 00:52:305 (4) - 和前面遮的好难看
  • 01:04:612 (3,4) - 遮挡啊遮挡
  • 01:03:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 1做的有点丑 ,咱美化了下
    IMG
      
    CODE
    120,40,63330,6,0,P|72:84|68:140,2,120
    200,56,64356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    184,136,64612,2,0,L|140:116,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    232,200,65125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    232,200,65382,2,0,P|256:172|260:128,1,80
    280,52,65894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    356,72,66151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,148,66407,5,4,0:0:0:0:
  • 01:06:407 (1) - 去掉NC
  • 01:20:253 - 即便觉得跟vocal这里空着也不是很好
  • 01:28:459 (3,2) - 遮挡啊遮挡
  • 01:33:074 (1) - NC去掉吧
  • 02:10:766 (3) - 同上面,弯的好丑
  • 03:08:715 (3) - NC
  • 03:10:766 (5) - NC吧
  • 03:36:407 (5,6) - 遮住了
  • 02:48:459 (4,6) - 遮住了
  • 03:12:818 - 不能无视啊

Sound Effect

00:34:612 (1,2) - 绿线,音效,渐进即可00:35:638 - Finish02:34:100 (8,9) - 个人觉得每个四个地方都应该添加一个音效


--------------------------------------------------------

[wkyik]


  • Useless Green line
    1. 00:18:972 -
      00:35:638 -


    Rhythm

  • 00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 这里刚开始给咱的感觉就是太开,整个移动stream太快,后面的1.0体现不出来,然后导致结构松散
  • 00:00:767 (3,4,5) - 这儿按照节奏的话应该是有所起伏的,但是这儿的移动却是一个直线,没有能够体现出节奏的变化
  • 00:05:382 (2,3) - 很明显3是个重音,建议用个小jump
  • 00:08:203 (6,7,1,2,3) - 这个梗很奇怪,读起来太过麻烦,不适合这儿,因为节奏不同而ds未表现出来。
  • 00:12:561 (5) - 再逆时针旋转些
  • 00:17:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这串听起来有点怪 00:14:997 (1) - 试试这儿加个finish 00:18:459 - 和 00:18:715 (5,6) - 加上clap试试,clap如果不好听就换个音效,至少感觉这儿应该加音效
  • 00:19:228 (1) - Finish声音加大些
  • 00:21:407 (5) - 这个加note太奇怪了,打起来也不舒服
  • 00:25:766 (2) - 和上面一样
  • 00:28:843 (5) - 不建议
  • 00:30:895 (3) - 不建议
  • 00:51:023 (4,5,6,7) - 音效确实很不错啊,但是这儿用个jump显然会更好
  • 01:04:356 (5,6,7) - 这里反而觉得jump不好了
  • 01:06:279 (4) - 有点多余,或者直接扔到5进行stack
  • 01:16:664 (1) - 3/4slider试试
  • 01:21:279 (3,4) - 这个应该用个jump吧...
  • 01:24:356 (5,6,7,8,1) - 像这种stream就是用的相对比较好了
  • 01:32:818 (4,1) - 这种梗一般都是jump结束了会用用吧? 也许前面应该是个jump?
  • 01:37:048 (3,4) - 尝试重合起来?
  • 01:48:972 (6) - 换个方向试试?
  • 01:48:972 (6,1) - 如果跟歌词的话,这儿请交换NC,01:51:279 (6) - 同时这里也NC。如果跟节奏 01:51:536 (7) - 请NC这个地方
  • 02:02:946 (5) - 放到 02:03:202 - 试试
  • 02:09:741 (4,5,1) - space是不是太散了些?
  • 02:11:279 (5,6) - 这个组合起来有些不好看啊...
  • 02:13:587 (3) - 和前面的8遮起来没关系么
  • 02:15:895 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这个梗有点,怎么说呢,估计会被挑
  • 02:21:023 (3) - 挪到208|280试试
  • 02:39:100 (2) - 去掉试试?
  • 02:42:818 (1) - 试试3/4
  • 02:44:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如此如此,code下放
    code
    72,144,164613,6,0,P|156:120|176:36,1,180
    180,64,165254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    192,88,165382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    284,208,165638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    436,200,165895,2,0,P|452:144|420:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  • 02:50:510 (4) - 换个方向
  • 03:00:766 (7,8,1) - jump如何?
  • 03:03:330 (1) - 可以再弯的圆一点吗?
  • 03:11:535 (4) - NC?
  • 03:12:818 - 怎么会空着?很明显这里还应该有个beat啊
  • 03:38:972 (7) - slider丑



Sound Effect

02:38:715 (1) - 开头的finish呢01:33:074 - Finish?


----------------------------------------------------------------

If you dont have "quote" button , this is code ↓

Quote code
Hi~ From my queue

[General]


[list][notice][*]Fine.[/notice][/list]


---------------------------------------------------------

[Zero's Normal]


[list][notice][color=#FF4000][b]Useless Green line[/b][/color]


[*]Fine.[/notice]


[notice][color=#FF80FF][b]Rhythm[/b][/color]


[*]00:47:433 (5,1) - 1是不是有点高?
[*]01:02:048 (4) - 往左挪点吧,flow貌似不在一条线
[*]01:15:382 (5) - 往下
[*]01:20:510 (1,2,3) - 会不会难读了?
[*]02:38:202 (5,1) - 交换NC试试
[*]02:43:843 (1,2) - 好 丑 啊 !!![/notice]


[notice][b][color=#0080FF]Sound Effect[/color][/b]


[*]00:11:280 (5) - 红线上放whistle貌似好些
00:14:869 (3) - 一个finish足够了,clap就画蛇添足了
02:26:151 - 试试换成clap貌似带感而且合曲[/list][/notice]


---------------------------------------------------------

[Hard]

[list][notice][color=#FF4000][b]Useless Green line[/b][/color]


[*]02:16:664 -[/notice]


[notice][color=#FF80FF][b]Rhythm[/b][/color]


[*]00:04:357 (4,2,3) - 遮住没事儿么
[*]00:11:793 (1) - blanket没弄好呢
[*]00:22:818 (7) - 试试blanket5
[*]00:24:869 - 虽说这里咱知道你想空着,但是还是要说这里最好别空
[*]00:31:535 (1,2) - 怎么评价呢?如果是故意的,就算了,如果是blanket的话,建议包好看些
[*]00:40:510 (3) - 后半部分弯的好难看啊
[*]00:52:305 (4) - 和前面遮的好难看
[*]01:04:612 (3,4) - 遮挡啊遮挡
[*]01:03:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 1做的有点丑 ,咱美化了下
[box=IMG][img]http://puu.sh/3IOmo.jpg[/img]  [img]http://puu.sh/3IOmG.jpg[/img][/box]
[box=CODE][code]120,40,63330,6,0,P|72:84|68:140,2,120
200,56,64356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,136,64612,2,0,L|140:116,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,200,65125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,200,65382,2,0,P|256:172|260:128,1,80
280,52,65894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,66151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,148,66407,5,4,0:0:0:0:[/code][/box]
[*]01:06:407 (1) - 去掉NC
[*]01:20:253 - 即便觉得跟vocal这里空着也不是很好
[*]01:28:459 (3,2) - 遮挡啊遮挡
[*]01:33:074 (1) - NC去掉吧
[*]02:10:766 (3) - 同上面,弯的好丑
[*]03:08:715 (3) - NC
[*]03:10:766 (5) - NC吧
[*]03:36:407 (5,6) - 遮住了
[*]02:48:459 (4,6) - 遮住了
[*]03:12:818 - 不能无视啊[/notice]


[notice][b][color=#0080FF]Sound Effect[/color][/b]


[*]00:34:612 (1,2) - 绿线,音效,渐进即可
[*]00:35:638 - Finish
[*]02:34:100 (8,9) - 个人觉得每个四个地方都应该添加一个音效[/list][/notice]


--------------------------------------------------------

[wkyik]


[list][notice][color=#FF4000][b]Useless Green line[/b][/color]


[*]00:18:972 -
00:35:638 -[/notice]


[notice][color=#FF80FF][b]Rhythm[/b][/color]


[*]00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 这里刚开始给咱的感觉就是太开,整个移动stream太快,后面的1.0体现不出来,然后导致结构松散
[*]00:00:767 (3,4,5) - 这儿按照节奏的话应该是有所起伏的,但是这儿的移动却是一个直线,没有能够体现出节奏的变化
[*]00:05:382 (2,3) - 很明显3是个重音,建议用个小jump
[*]00:08:203 (6,7,1,2,3) - 这个梗很奇怪,读起来太过麻烦,不适合这儿,因为节奏不同而ds未表现出来。
[*]00:12:561 (5) - 再逆时针旋转些
[*]00:17:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这串听起来有点怪 00:14:997 (1) - 试试这儿加个finish 00:18:459 - 和 00:18:715 (5,6) - 加上clap试试,clap如果不好听就换个音效,至少感觉这儿应该加音效
[*]00:19:228 (1) - Finish声音加大些
[*]00:21:407 (5) - 这个加note太奇怪了,打起来也不舒服
[*]00:25:766 (2) - 和上面一样
[*]00:28:843 (5) - 不建议
[*]00:30:895 (3) - 不建议
[*]00:51:023 (4,5,6,7) - 音效确实很不错啊,但是这儿用个jump显然会更好
[*]01:04:356 (5,6,7) - 这里反而觉得jump不好了
[*]01:06:279 (4) - 有点多余,或者直接扔到5进行stack
[*]01:16:664 (1) - 3/4slider试试
[*]01:21:279 (3,4) - 这个应该用个jump吧...
[*]01:24:356 (5,6,7,8,1) - 像这种stream就是用的相对比较好了
[*]01:32:818 (4,1) - 这种梗一般都是jump结束了会用用吧? 也许前面应该是个jump?
[*]01:37:048 (3,4) - 尝试重合起来?
[*]01:48:972 (6) - 换个方向试试?
[*]01:48:972 (6,1) - 如果跟歌词的话,这儿请交换NC,01:51:279 (6) - 同时这里也NC。如果跟节奏 01:51:536 (7) - 请NC这个地方
[*]02:02:946 (5) - 放到 02:03:202 - 试试
[*]02:09:741 (4,5,1) - space是不是太散了些?
[*]02:11:279 (5,6) - 这个组合起来有些不好看啊...
[*]02:13:587 (3) - 和前面的8遮起来没关系么
[*]02:15:895 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这个梗有点,怎么说呢,估计会被挑
[*]02:21:023 (3) - 挪到208|280试试
[*]02:39:100 (2) - 去掉试试?
[*]02:42:818 (1) - 试试3/4
[*]02:44:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如此如此,code下放 [box=][img]http://puu.sh/3ICXg.jpg[/img][/box]
[box=code][code]72,144,164613,6,0,P|156:120|176:36,1,180
180,64,165254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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436,200,165895,2,0,P|452:144|420:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:[/code][/box]
[*]02:50:510 (4) - 换个方向
[*]03:00:766 (7,8,1) - jump如何?
[*]03:03:330 (1) - 可以再弯的圆一点吗?
[*]03:11:535 (4) - NC?
[*]03:12:818 - 怎么会空着?很明显这里还应该有个beat啊
[*]03:38:972 (7) - slider丑[/notice]




[notice][b][color=#0080FF]Sound Effect[/color][/b]


[*]02:38:715 (1) - 开头的finish呢
[*]01:33:074 - Finish?[/list][/notice]
Zero__wind
为什么小猫大人的mod不能回复 太腻害了
slider只有个往左的没改 音效就去掉了个clap
谢谢小猫大人
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Tsuki no inori.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 67946
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki no inori
TitleUnicode:月の祈り
Artist:Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka
ArtistUnicode:水蓮寺ルカ starring 山崎はるか
Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:Zero's Normal
Source:Hayate no Gotoku! Cuties
Tags:Zero__wind NewibornCLivee Nardoxyribonucleic
BeatmapID:270013
BeatmapSetID:99611

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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232,20,133074,6,0,P|192:16|148:32,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,220,134869,2,0,P|380:232|436:224,1,110
472,184,135638,2,0,P|484:128|476:72,1,110,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136407,12,4,138202,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138715,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138971,2,0,P|312:192|364:168,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,124,139741,2,0,L|348:80,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,68,140510,2,0,P|268:52|293:47,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,141792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,220,142048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,142305,6,0,P|120:228|76:208,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,143074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,64,143587,2,0,L|64:32,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,16,144100,2,0,P|152:64|148:112,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,144869,2,0,L|236:180,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,145638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,145894,2,0,L|324:308,2,55,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,108,147433,6,0,P|440:160|440:212,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,256,148202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,360,148715,2,0,L|320:380,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,380,149228,2,0,L|208:372,2,55,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,300,150253,2,0,P|216:248|212:192,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,148,151023,2,0,L|132:172,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,152048,2,0,L|292:108,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,152561,12,4,154612,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155125,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155382,2,0,P|200:224|152:224,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,204,156151,2,0,L|48:240,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,128,156920,2,0,L|66:98,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,20,158202,2,0,L|192:48,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,158715,6,0,P|296:72|332:40,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,32,159484,2,0,P|424:64|484:76,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,126,160253,2,0,L|464:160,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,264,161023,2,0,L|450:298,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,161535,2,0,P|344:316|312:280,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,162305,2,0,L|400:256,2,55,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,212,163843,6,0,P|161:243|172:300,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,352,164612,2,0,P|74:359|13:306,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,252,165638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,200,165894,2,0,P|40:160|72:136,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166920,12,0,169997,0:0:0:0:
256,192,181279,12,0,183074,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183330,12,4,185382,0:0:0:0:
176,124,186664,6,12,P|136:96|116:60,2,82.5
354,156,188715,6,12,P|399:136|440:136,2,82.5
237,295,190766,6,12,P|232:343|211:379,2,82.5
256,188,192048,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,192561,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,192818,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,193074,2,0,P|200:192|157:221,1,110,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,308,194100,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,204,194612,2,0,P|36:132|44:92,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,48,195382,2,0,P|144:36|184:44,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,84,196151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,172,196664,2,0,L|200:208,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,197433,6,0,P|280:276|304:228,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,198202,2,0,L|408:240,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,76,199228,2,0,L|325:54,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199741,12,4,201792,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202305,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202561,2,0,P|284:244|276:296,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,332,203330,2,0,L|184:320,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,272,204100,2,0,L|76:325,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,205382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,112,205638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,205894,6,0,P|112:112|160:87,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,59,206664,2,0,P|235:39|299:40,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,84,207433,2,0,L|364:148,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,228,208202,2,0,L|279:178,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,136,208715,2,0,P|184:132|140:156,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,209484,2,0,L|208:240,2,55,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,244,210510,5,8,0:0:0:0:
128,328,211023,2,0,P|104:344|77:353,2,55,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,296,211792,2,0,P|248:276|316:320,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,344,212818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,312,213074,2,0,P|420:264|404:228,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,214100,12,0,217177,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217689,6,0,L|300:228,2,55,2|4|4,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,218971,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,48,219997,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,220253,12,4,224356,1:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Rizia
[Hard]

  • Useless Green line
    1. 02:16:664 -


    Rhythm

  • 00:04:357 (4,2,3) - 遮住没事儿么 時間相隔得遠,,我覺得沒問題
  • 00:11:793 (1) - blanket没弄好呢
  • 00:22:818 (7) - 试试blanket5
  • 00:24:869 - 虽说这里咱知道你想空着,但是还是要说这里最好别空 這裡依然我想空著,,
  • 00:31:535 (1,2) - 怎么评价呢?如果是故意的,就算了,如果是blanket的话,建议包好看些
  • 00:40:510 (3) - 后半部分弯的好难看啊
  • 00:52:305 (4) - 和前面遮的好难看
  • 01:04:612 (3,4) - 遮挡啊遮挡
  • 01:03:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 1做的有点丑 ,咱美化了下
    IMG
      
    CODE
    120,40,63330,6,0,P|72:84|68:140,2,120
    200,56,64356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    184,136,64612,2,0,L|140:116,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    232,200,65125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    232,200,65382,2,0,P|256:172|260:128,1,80
    280,52,65894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    356,72,66151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,148,66407,5,4,0:0:0:0:
  • 01:06:407 (1) - 去掉NC
  • 01:20:253 - 即便觉得跟vocal这里空着也不是很好
  • 01:28:459 (3,2) - 遮挡啊遮挡
  • 01:33:074 (1) - NC去掉吧
  • 02:10:766 (3) - 同上面,弯的好丑
  • 03:08:715 (3) - NC
  • 03:10:766 (5) - NC吧
  • 03:36:407 (5,6) - 遮住了
  • 02:48:459 (4,6) - 遮住了
  • 03:12:818 - 不能无视啊

Sound Effect

00:34:612 (1,2) - 绿线,音效,渐进即可00:35:638 - Finish02:34:100 (8,9) - 个人觉得每个四个地方都应该添加一个音效


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[wkyik]


  • Useless Green line
    1. 00:18:972 -
      00:35:638 - 這要轉用s:c1


    Rhythm

  • 00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 这里刚开始给咱的感觉就是太开,整个移动stream太快,后面的1.0体现不出来,然后导致结构松散
  • 00:00:767 (3,4,5) - 这儿按照节奏的话应该是有所起伏的,但是这儿的移动却是一个直线,没有能够体现出节奏的变化
  • 00:05:382 (2,3) - 很明显3是个重音,建议用个小jump
  • 00:08:203 (6,7,1,2,3) - 这个梗很奇怪,读起来太过麻烦,不适合这儿,因为节奏不同而ds未表现出来。
  • 00:12:561 (5) - 再逆时针旋转些
  • 00:17:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这串听起来有点怪 00:14:997 (1) - 试试这儿加个finish 00:18:459 - 和 00:18:715 (5,6) - 加上clap试试,clap如果不好听就换个音效,至少感觉这儿应该加音效
  • 00:19:228 (1) - Finish声音加大些
  • 00:21:407 (5) - 这个加note太奇怪了,打起来也不舒服
  • 00:25:766 (2) - 和上面一样
  • 00:28:843 (5) - 不建议
  • 00:30:895 (3) - 不建议 這個想依舊
  • 00:51:023 (4,5,6,7) - 音效确实很不错啊,但是这儿用个jump显然会更好
  • 01:04:356 (5,6,7) - 这里反而觉得jump不好了
  • 01:06:279 (4) - 有点多余,或者直接扔到5进行stack
  • 01:16:664 (1) - 3/4slider试试
  • 01:21:279 (3,4) - 这个应该用个jump吧...
  • 01:24:356 (5,6,7,8,1) - 像这种stream就是用的相对比较好了
  • 01:32:818 (4,1) - 这种梗一般都是jump结束了会用用吧? 也许前面应该是个jump?
  • 01:37:048 (3,4) - 尝试重合起来?
  • 01:48:972 (6) - 换个方向试试?
  • 01:48:972 (6,1) - 如果跟歌词的话,这儿请交换NC,01:51:279 (6) - 同时这里也NC。如果跟节奏 01:51:536 (7) - 请NC这个地方
  • 02:02:946 (5) - 放到 02:03:202 - 试试
  • 02:09:741 (4,5,1) - space是不是太散了些?
  • 02:11:279 (5,6) - 这个组合起来有些不好看啊...
  • 02:13:587 (3) - 和前面的8遮起来没关系么 對於打圖來說沒太大問題
  • 02:15:895 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这个梗有点,怎么说呢,估计会被挑
  • 02:21:023 (3) - 挪到208|280试试
  • 02:39:100 (2) - 去掉试试?
  • 02:42:818 (1) - 试试3/4 不了,,好難做
  • 02:44:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如此如此,code下放
    code
    72,144,164613,6,0,P|156:120|176:36,1,180
    180,64,165254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    192,88,165382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    284,208,165638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    436,200,165895,2,0,P|452:144|420:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  • 02:50:510 (4) - 换个方向 我覺得不換比較好看
  • 03:00:766 (7,8,1) - jump如何?
  • 03:03:330 (1) - 可以再弯的圆一点吗?
  • 03:11:535 (4) - NC?
  • 03:12:818 - 怎么会空着?很明显这里还应该有个beat啊
  • 03:38:972 (7) - slider丑



Sound Effect

02:38:715 (1) - 开头的finish呢 這裡聽不出有聲01:33:074 - Finish?
謝小貓 :DDDD
Nardoxyribonucleic

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod as requested from Malaysian Taiko Queue :3

MOD
  • [Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii]

    00:13:075 (40) - delete? fixed
    00:36:407 (52,53) - dd? fixed
    00:36:664 (54) - move this to 00:36:792 plays better imo fixed
    00:38:202 (59) - k? fixed
    00:38:587 (61) - delete? fixed
    00:40:638 (69) - d?
    00:40:766 (70) - move this to 00:40:894 fixed
    00:50:894 (109) - d? fixed
    00:52:305 (115) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    00:54:997 (124) - d? fixed
    00:59:100 (139) - ^ fixed
    01:08:971 (171) - k? fixed
    01:10:382 (178,179) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    01:17:561 (200) - d? fixed
    01:43:330 (1) - end this spinner at 01:44:612 fixed
    01:58:587 (44) - d? fixed
    02:08:843 (82) - ^ fixed
    02:18:715 (111) - k? fixed
    02:27:305 (142) - d? fixed
    02:27:433 (143) - move this to 02:27:561 fixed
    02:58:074 (249) - delete? fixed

That's all from me :3
Good luck~
Fixed most of them~
Thanks 1811 for the mod~ :)
Updated Version: Here
-xNaCLx-

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod as requested from Malaysian Taiko Queue :3

MOD
  • [NC's Taiko Oni]

    00:09:367 (31) - delete?
    00:11::023 (37,38) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    00:14:485 (51) - delete?
    00:22:305 (65) - k? have piano sound here
    00:36:664 (114) - move this to 00:36:792 plays better imo
    00:38:330 (122) - delete?
    00:40:766 (136) - move this to 00:40:894
    00:42:433 (144) - delete?
    00:44:869 (157) - move this to 00:44:997
    00:46:535 (165) - delete?
    00:48:971 (179) - move this to 00:49:100
    01:06:023 (266,267,268) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    01:42:689 (8) - delete?
    01:47:433 (23) - move this to 01:47:561
    01:51:535 (42) - move this to 01:51:664
    01:56:279 (65) - delete?
    02:14:484 (159) - ^
    02:15:766 (166,167,168) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    02:40:510 (128) - k? follows the vocal
    02:55:510 (189) - move this to 02:55:766
    02:55:894 (191) - move this to 02:56:023
    03:25:125 (314) - k?
    03:33:202 (364) - delete?

That's all from me :3
Good luck~
fixed ddd d -> dd dd pattern stuffs on first part of the song,

thanks for mod =D

->updated version.
abdomsisn
wkyik
00:29:997 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - 这个给人感觉有点突兀,很奇怪,其它的这种跳就没突兀的感觉
01:14:997 (5) - 节奏?

很不错的图。挑不出毛病来XD

HARD
挑不出毛病orz

好吧这个图我觉得接近完美了【可能是因为我太渣
kds随便给不给了
Fycho
hi~

Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[General]
  • Timing;第一根红线downbeat错误,必须offset=767,然后第二根红线去掉PS:红线前面允许最多两个note
  • 把所有难度把etterbox,countdown统一

[ wkyik]

  • 建议用空白音效把滑条滑动音代替掉http://puu.sh/3ToiX.wav
    另外可以试试这个claphttp://%20puu.sh/3Toi4.wav
    Inconsistent new combo建议统一
    00:14:997 (1) –转盘上的finish不合适
    00:19:356 –这里音效75感觉略吵,特别是滑条滑动时候那个声音听着特不舒服,建议减小,前面的过门声音倒可以大点
    00:19:356 –从这里开始的一段,clap我建议在第四根白线上加,第二跟白线别clap(PS:音效是节奏的体现,音效密度跟着节奏密度才有好效果)
    00:25:895 (2,3) –反flow
    00:29:997 (7,8,1) –等距
    00:31:920 (2) –remove note有点overmap
    00:32:946 (7) -^
    00:33:587 (1,2) –节奏密度别这么大,本身音乐很平稳的这块
    00:39:228 (5) –尾端clap与音乐一致?
    00:43:330 (5,6,7,8) –少点overmap,音乐里没1/4音
    01:06:407 (5) –折返上箭头的clap去掉
    01:05:125 (1,5) –中心对称?
    01:15:510 –add note做连打,有1/4音
    01:15:766 -^
    01:17:561 -^
    01:18:074 (5) –remove note
    01:18:459 (1) –尾finish
    01:20:510 (1) –首finish,其他的还可以加更多的finish
    01:53:074 (6) –竖直保持flow?
    01:48:972 (1) –尾clap
    01:53:074 (6) -^
    02:16:664 (2) –去掉换个转盘?
    02:23:074 (2,4) –可以再overlap的好看点;w;
    02:25:125 (6,7,8,9,10) –我觉得反flow
    02:28:202 (6) –前面的3,4,5都是斜着的偏有一定角度,这个别那么左右对称,也可以斜起来
    02:31:536 (8) –insane出现这个合适吗,换成连打或者3个note单点或者1/2滑条单折返
    02:41:279 (2,3) –这个也有点反flow
    02:44:613 (1,2,3) –别这么坑吧,1PC好难读0.0
    03:06:664 (1,2) –分别用三个circle代替,insane这样用折返滑条还没hard那样的难,还跟normal一模一样
    03:09:741 - 03:10:638 这段建议放连打别空
    03:26:151 (2,3,4) –这flow反的0.0

  • [hard]
    [list:1337]
    New combo音效和insane类似不说了
    AR+1试试?,有些三连note多的地方似乎眼花缭乱例如01:11:023 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5)
    02:17:946 –remove多余的绿线
    00:24:869 –add note,然后把把3靠近。。这个千万不能空,要空也别空这里
    00:38:459 (2) –长滑条节奏略违和
    00:48:715 (2,3) –感觉有点远,因为这里00:47:433 (8,1) –顺flow距离远易读。。
    00:54:869 (4) –形状上,上面弯的部分可以长点,做成半酒杯样
    01:06:407 (1) –后面转盘?
    01:37:048 (5) –建议去掉,去掉后这个重音01:37:177 (6) –的打击感会增强打着也舒服
    01:58:459 (2) –上端向左弯点,01:59:228 (3) –这个位置也向左调整或者到其他位置
    02:16:151 (3) –后接转盘?
    02:30:510 –add note
    02:54:356 -^
    02:54:869 -^
    03:03:459 (1) –转盘加finish
    03:11:535 (2,3,4) –别这样间距,这几个是不一样的不要等距,保持spacing一致才行
    03:21:023 (3) –我建议你从03:21:279 –开始,03:21:792 (1) –删了,03:22:048 –放circle
    03:36:407 (5,6) –改成blanket好看点
    03:40:125 (1) –这个转盘上的音效,insane难度是normal的finish音,这里是soft的,建议统一

[ Zero's Normal]

  • 全跟人声真是恶俗;w;以下mod很多都与这有关,很多废话54就是
    00:21:792 (4) –为什么往右弯,看着也不好看flow也不好
    00:34:612 –add note
    00:37:177 –加note上音效,提供的那个clap可以试试
    00:45:382 –不怕麻烦的话弄个tick音同上后略
    01:06:664 (1) –怎么不用闷闷的normal finish了?soft太脆,后同
    01:12:048 (5,6,1) –没EZ的nm这样不太难??
    01:14:869 (4) –残念,几乎都跟人声,打的真残念,移到大白线,再01:15:125 –这里加note
    01:15:382 (5) –注意spacing
    01:37:177 (1) –转盘晚开始点,大白线加note加音效,后同
    01:53:074 (5)-,真是好flow
    02:00:766 –加note。。。全跟人声大量空拍残念无BI
    02:07:177 (3) –换成短滑条,后面的滑条红线02:07:689 –开始,结束点不变
    02:08:715 (5) –去掉
    02:08:971 –加note
    02:09:484 -^
    02:19:741 (3,4) –这摆放位置真奇葩啊;w;两者平行试试
    02:42:305 (6) –话说,能不能别这么绕啊,把滑条的斜率设置为大概-10的样子。后面隔那么远还担心flow吗?
    03:06:664 (1,1) –怎么不跟人声了啊;w;和Insane一样恶评
    03:29:484 (6) –顺着5的轨迹放啊,然后03:30:510 (1) –放到内侧来。03:31:792 (3) 这根也变下位置
    03:39:997 (3) –太吵


没有小猫大人的长真是残念


good luck~
Zero__wind

Fycho wrote:

hi~

Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[General]
  • Timing;第一根红线downbeat错误,必须offset=767,然后第二根红线去掉PS:红线前面允许最多两个note
  • 把所有难度把etterbox,countdown统一

[ Zero's Normal]

  • 全跟人声真是恶俗;w;以下mod很多都与这有关,很多废话54就是
    00:21:792 (4) –为什么往右弯,看着也不好看flow也不好
    00:34:612 –add note
    00:37:177 –加note上音效,提供的那个clap可以试试
    00:45:382 –不怕麻烦的话弄个tick音同上后略
    01:06:664 (1) –怎么不用闷闷的normal finish了?soft太脆,后同
    01:12:048 (5,6,1) –没EZ的nm这样不太难??
    01:14:869 (4) –残念,几乎都跟人声,打的真残念,移到大白线,再01:15:125 –这里加note
    01:15:382 (5) –注意spacing
    01:37:177 (1) –转盘晚开始点,大白线加note加音效,后同
    01:53:074 (5)-,真是好flow
    02:00:766 –加note。。。全跟人声大量空拍残念无BI
    02:07:177 (3) –换成短滑条,后面的滑条红线02:07:689 –开始,结束点不变
    02:08:715 (5) –去掉
    02:08:971 –加note
    02:09:484 -^
    02:19:741 (3,4) –这摆放位置真奇葩啊;w;两者平行试试
    02:42:305 (6) –话说,能不能别这么绕啊,把滑条的斜率设置为大概-10的样子。后面隔那么远还担心flow吗?
    03:06:664 (1,1) –怎么不跟人声了啊;w;和Insane一样恶评
    03:29:484 (6) –顺着5的轨迹放啊,然后03:30:510 (1) –放到内侧来。03:31:792 (3) 这根也变下位置
    03:39:997 (3) –太吵
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没有小猫大人的长真是残念


good luck~
Thx for your mod~ will fix later
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