Requested bubble check by
spboxer3(a bit late sorry).
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DangYang's Muzukashii]
GeneralDangYang_shushu wrote:
aabc271 wrote:
• I notice the SV of this muzu diff is 1.5, which is higher than oni (1.4). Unless you have special reasons for using 1.5, I'd personally suggest you changing it into 1.4 so as not to be faster than oni.
因为我的风格就是SV1.5，我想这和谱子本身的好坏是没有关系的。
- Such SV shouldn't be used in a Muzukashii, especially with a BPM of 185. In Oni this can be somehow acceptable, but in a Muzukashii this is not recommendet. After all, people should play on the normal SV to get used to it. If they really want a higher SV, they are able to use ばいそく(baisoku) / hardrock, which makes the usage of SV 1.50 rather needless.
Calling this as your own style is vague, since the SV dosen't representate mappers style at all(if we don't look at speed ups). Style of a mapper is rather marked by the patterns he is using, so right now I can't find a real reason which would justify the use of SV 1.50. To me it dosen't even fit well enough, especially when considering that Oni has SV 1.40.
Is there any other reason why you wanted to keep this? If not, this should be SV 1.40.
- Recomending to use a constant audio volumen, about ~80%.
- 00:01:235 - Green-line not in use.
- If you changed the audio volumen, you can remove this green-line as well 00:17:126
Notes00:31:559 (65) - Consider deleting this note or change the pattern constalation a bit. This pattern is a bit long and contains 1/4.
00:56:694 (32,33,34,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suggesting to follow here the song. We have 3/4 beats but it has been mapped on 1/2. This can confuse players.
- second kiai is a copy-paste, but that's fine -00:35:289 (82,83,84) - Maybe k d k? Not a must.
00:36:262 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - having kdkdkdk could be a good solution. It fits to the song and its ending would alternate with the upcoming 00:37:559 (1) - don.
01:39:019 (61) - Same as above.
00:40:153 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think ddd k D would fit better and sound better.
00:50:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:42:749 (78,79,80) - Maybe k d k? Not a must.
01:43:721 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - Same as above.
01:47:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think ddd k D would fit better and sound better.
01:57:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:04:154 (32,33,34,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above.
Muzukashii is so far okay. Pattern are a bit complicated, but that's not much of a problem. Next time you could make them more simple, like mapping them lineal.
But okay, good job anyway.
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Andy's Oni]
00:37:559~00:42:748 - Well, having less notes here would be actually nicer + no kiai. So you could emphasize the upcoming part at 00:42:748 way better and give the player a feeling as the second kiai got harder.
00:44:451 (88) - trying moving this note to 00:44:289. how does that sound?
00:45:505 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - how about kdk dk kk?
01:52:965 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - ^
00:58:316~01:18:748 -
Recommending to have some gaps and finisher here. Patterns are good, but too less break time for player.Well that's all. Oni is overal fine. I even like it. But you should take care of not having an overuse of notes, else this can have a bad effect on the map, like overlapping the song it-self.
I think both diffs are on its own way nice. Just change the SV in the Muzukashii, please. Reasons are given.
So yeah, good luck with rank.
