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HanzeR

Horo wrote:

ファースト~
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Farex_old
Give me kudosu.
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Farex wrote:

Give me kudosu.
SPOILER
23:58 Farex: i really like it
23:58 Farex: it flows well
23:58 HanzeR: that one part
23:58 HanzeR: everyone misses there
23:58 HanzeR: except charley
23:58 HanzeR: lol
23:58 Farex: lol
23:59 Farex: i dont really know if there's anything to be modded
23:59 Farex: it's all pretty intuitive and playable
23:59 HanzeR: do you think this is too big 01:23:724 (6,1) -
00:00 HanzeR: or 01:25:096 (1,2,3) -
00:00 Farex: the 1 2 3 one is pretty big
00:00 Farex: oh the 6 1 is bigger
00:00 Farex: that one seemed fine to me though
00:01 HanzeR: yeah
00:01 HanzeR: 61 goes into a slider
00:01 HanzeR: so its lenient
00:01 Farex: yeah
00:01 HanzeR: everyone always seems to miss there though i dunno
00:02 Farex: it'spretty hard compared to the rest of the map
00:02 Farex: id leave it as is but get ready to change it if enough people think it's too hard
00:03 Farex: only thing that bugs me is a miku BG with no miku in the song
00:03 Farex: :V
00:03 HanzeR: hahah
00:03 HanzeR: duddee i couldnt find a bg for this map at all
00:03 HanzeR: and miku is cute enough i guess
00:03 Farex: lol
00:03 Farex: yeah
00:03 Farex: idk what you would do for a kors k song aside from generic anime stuff
00:05 Farex: oops
00:05 Farex: i rush stuff like a nab
00:05 HanzeR: aha
00:07 Farex: there we go
00:07 HanzeR: prooo
00:07 Farex: yeah id leave it as is unless you get a lot of complaints about it
00:07 Farex: no u
00:07 HanzeR: slider break T-T
00:07 HanzeR: ok
00:09 Farex: oh one quick thing actually
00:09 Farex: i didnt notice the first playthrough but this section
00:09 Farex: 00:16:295 (4,1,2) -
00:09 Farex: isn't too intuitive
00:09 Farex: this one too 00:26:181 (5,1,2) -
00:10 HanzeR: oh
00:10 HanzeR: yeah
00:10 Farex: you could maybe put 1 at the slider ends of 4 and 5 to make it more intuitive
00:10 Farex: the jump would be kinda mean though
00:12 HanzeR: i tried making it like a spaced streamy kinda thing i guess
00:12 Farex: just now?
00:13 HanzeR: yeah
00:13 HanzeR: hm
00:13 HanzeR: that doesnt really work either
00:13 Farex: gib osz to test then pls
00:13 Farex: aw
00:13 HanzeR: because of the time difference
00:13 Farex: yeah
00:15 HanzeR: ok
00:15 HanzeR: i just changed it so its spaced 1x
00:15 HanzeR: for both
00:16 Farex: yeah that looks nice
00:16 Farex: and the jump is ez enough
00:16 HanzeR: yeah
00:17 Farex: oh one other thing
00:18 Farex: why tick rate 2 instead of 3 on a song with lods of 1/3rds and 1/6ths?
00:19 HanzeR: i got no idea
00:19 HanzeR: 2 was showing as 3
00:19 HanzeR: whne i was editing it
00:19 HanzeR: for some reason
00:19 Farex: lol
00:19 HanzeR: when i turned it to 3 it looks like 1000 ticks on everything
00:19 Farex: wut
00:21 HanzeR: man im going to hate editing down all this kiai
00:21 Farex: yeah
00:22 Farex: i dont see that kiai getting ranked
00:22 Farex: ;;
00:22 HanzeR: lol
00:22 Farex: it's not obtrusive or anything
00:22 Farex: but it's a little too different
00:22 Farex: lol
00:23 HanzeR: did he change it so kiai doesnt go through dim anymore
00:23 Farex: he might have, i didnt notice it while playing
00:23 HanzeR: ah
00:23 Farex: ill try with 75% dim and see
00:25 Farex: yeah it's noticeable with less dim
00:25 Farex: it isnt annoying or anything though, it's SB-like
00:26 HanzeR: lol
00:26 HanzeR: ill just sb in white flashes instead /o/
00:27 Farex: lol
00:28 HanzeR: when i did it kiai isnt nearly as noticable in mania
00:28 HanzeR: i didnt even playn on having a standard lol
00:30 Farex: lol
00:30 Farex: why make standard diff then
00:30 Farex: mania ranking is so much easier ;;
00:31 HanzeR: iuno
00:40 HanzeR: ok ok
00:40 HanzeR: post when i upload this
00:40 HanzeR: for star points
00:40 HanzeR: yaya

;w;
Hanyuu
Starred!
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Hanyuu wrote:

Starred!
osuyo
Hi~
From m4m

[Genera]
Please change the background to 1024×768
Osu standard -Please delete unwanted green line. Such 00:20:752

[Another]
00:24:867 (5) - NC
00:25:552 (3) - Remove nc
00:26:124 (7) - NC
00:26:581 (2) - Remove nc
00:27:267 (3) - It is hard to understand very
00:30:352 (5) - NC
00:31:038 (1) - Remove nc
00:31:610 (1) - NC
01:19:724 (5) - NC
01:20:410 (1) -Remove nc
01:20:981 (1) - NC
01:31:381 (1) - NC
01:31:952 (7) - NC
01:38:924 (1) - Add Kiai Time
01:44:410 (1) - ^
01:50:010    Remove green line

[Hyper]
00:26:124 (4) - NC
00:37:210 (6) - NC
01:24:524 (3) - add hit sound. crap?
01:24:524 (3) - ^
01:31:952 (1) - NC
01:47:724 add note

[Beginner]
00:26:581 add note?
01:32:410 ^

good song good map star~
うにうに :)
Topic Starter
HanzeR

osuyo wrote:

Hi~
From m4m

[Genera]
Please change the background to 1024×768 bg is using widescreen format, according to here http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
Osu standard -Please delete unwanted green line. Such 00:20:752 fixed all

[Another]
00:24:867 (5) - NC
00:25:552 (3) - Remove nc
00:26:124 (7) - NC
00:26:581 (2) - Remove nc
00:27:267 (3) - It is hard to understand very
00:30:352 (5) - NC
00:31:038 (1) - Remove nc
00:31:610 (1) - NC
01:19:724 (5) - NC
01:20:410 (1) -Remove nc
01:20:981 (1) - NC
01:31:381 (1) - NC
01:31:952 (7) - NC
01:38:924 (1) - Add Kiai Time
01:44:410 (1) - ^
01:50:010    Remove green line

fixed all except kiais, i really like the fountain where they are :D
[Hyper]
00:26:124 (4) - NC
00:37:210 (6) - NC
01:24:524 (3) - add hit sound. crap? <- LOL for the future, its spelled Lap. crap is a very different thing xD
01:24:524 (3) - ^
01:31:952 (1) - NC
01:47:724 add note
fixed all

[Beginner]
00:26:581 add note?
01:32:410 ^

good song good map star~
うにうに :)
Thanks so much for the mod !!!! and star wow x_x I appreciate it so much!
Lieselotte
:o
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Lieselotte wrote:

:o
:?
Tari
Hi where is my mod point :O
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Tari wrote:

Hi where is my mod point :O
SPOILER
20:32 Tari: lol
20:33 Tari: you asked me to play your map
20:33 Tari: and then suddenly logged off
20:33 HanzeR: OHHHH
20:33 HanzeR: aaaaa
20:34 HanzeR: i accidentally kicked my power cord and then got angry and didnt log back in
20:34 HanzeR: zzz
20:34 Tari: o.o
20:34 HanzeR: IM SORRY /.\
20:34 Tari: what map is it
20:34 Tari: orz
20:35 HanzeR: sec
20:35 HanzeR: i need to
20:35 HanzeR: upload it
20:35 HanzeR: http://puu.sh/36h9O.osz
20:35 HanzeR: yay ~
20:36 Tari: uhmm
20:36 Tari: sure
20:37 HanzeR: ignore the kias
20:37 HanzeR: lol
20:38 Tari: uhmm
20:38 Tari: maps fine
20:38 Tari: but need to wath your spacing ><
20:38 Tari: watch*
20:39 Tari: because
20:39 Tari: 00:25:210 (6) - you didn't put any jumps here
20:39 Tari: I mean
20:39 Tari: you didn't put jumps here 00:25:552 (1) -
20:40 Tari: put you out of nowhere put a jump here 00:31:038 (1) -
20:40 Tari: and imo it would help if you make spacing consistent there
20:40 Tari: to make it more readable
20:40 HanzeR: hmm
20:41 Tari: yeah it would kinda ruin your pattern ><
20:41 Tari: so sorry
20:41 HanzeR: well i think like
20:41 HanzeR: this slider 00:30:695 (6) - is curvy enough so that it doesnt really get followed
20:41 HanzeR: when your playing
20:41 HanzeR: 00:25:210 (6) - this one you pretty much have to follow
20:41 HanzeR: or you break
20:42 HanzeR: idk
20:42 HanzeR: i kind of like patterns like that
20:42 HanzeR: abusing sliderballs and such
20:42 Tari: its okay
20:42 Tari: but
20:42 Tari: you were doing so well on flow
20:42 Tari: until that came up
20:42 HanzeR: no yeah
20:42 HanzeR: that makes sense
20:44 Tari: and
20:44 Tari: you should really curve these sliders
20:44 Tari: 00:51:610 (3,4) -
20:44 Tari: they seem really odd
20:45 Tari: I guess it will flow better
20:45 Tari: because I see your pattern in slider usage.
20:45 Tari: sometimes you make all your sliders curve
20:45 Tari: like here
20:45 Tari: 00:45:438 (1,2,3,4) -
20:46 Tari: and you need to add a new combo here
20:46 Tari: 01:01:895 (5) -
20:47 HanzeR: i curved 00:51:610 (3) - and made 4 the same
20:47 HanzeR: like that http://puu.sh/36hwZ.jpg
20:47 HanzeR: i think the straight one fits on 4
20:47 Tari: ok
20:47 Tari: :3
20:47 Tari: and make sure you add the nc where I told you
20:48 Tari: and here too
20:48 Tari: 01:20:410 (3) -
20:48 Tari: and remove it here 01:20:981 (1) -
20:48 Tari: if you do the above
20:48 HanzeR: ok
20:48 Tari: or your combo's will be phuqed
20:48 HanzeR: hehe
20:49 Tari: and here
20:49 Tari: 01:31:381 (3) -
20:49 Tari: same thing as above
20:49 HanzeR: yup
20:50 Tari: and this jump is way too much
20:50 Tari: 01:32:410 (2) -
20:50 HanzeR: yeah it probably is lol
20:50 HanzeR: ok
20:52 Tari: I'm really worried about your spacing
20:52 Tari: cause
20:52 HanzeR: ;w;
20:52 Tari: sometimes you switch it
20:52 Tari: for pattern use
20:52 Tari: but thats ok
20:52 Tari: like this
20:52 Tari: 01:39:952 (4) -
20:52 Tari: and this
20:53 Tari: 01:40:981 (4) -
20:53 Tari: 01:39:952 (4) - this slider spacing should be increased
20:54 Tari: that would be the best fix
20:54 HanzeR: mm
20:54 HanzeR: hm
20:55 Tari: sorry for ruining your style .___.
20:55 HanzeR: is this too much http://puu.sh/36hPl.jpg
20:55 HanzeR: haha
20:56 Tari: uh
20:56 Tari: yeah that kinda is
20:56 Tari: as said
20:56 HanzeR: well that makes it
20:56 HanzeR: 2,94x
20:56 HanzeR: the other combo you compared it to was 2.6x
20:57 Tari: well
20:57 Tari: I guess its fine
20:57 Tari: better than previous.
20:57 HanzeR: haha
20:57 HanzeR: ok cool
20:57 Tari: remarkable ain't it
20:57 Tari: just going through the map
20:57 Tari: I find all these erros
20:57 Tari: Lol
20:58 HanzeR: \o/
20:58 HanzeR: tari pro ><
20:58 Tari: hopefully they flow better now
20:58 Tari: o.o
20:58 Tari: or better than previous
20:58 HanzeR: im not nearly meticulous enough to be good at modding
20:58 HanzeR: lol
20:59 Tari: and
20:59 Tari: you can add more creativity
20:59 Tari: by changing these sliders
20:59 Tari: 00:20:752 (1,2,3,4) -
20:59 Tari: by making the middle slider point red
21:00 Tari: cause I suppose they need to stand out from these two sliders
21:00 Tari: 01:22:467 (1,2) -
21:00 HanzeR: ohh neat
21:00 HanzeR: ok

moe tari ><
Yoeri
Hi there.

First off, all the osu!mania difficulties need to be renamed to have the key configuration in them.

[Beginner]
01:05:667 - Unsnapped circle, you should probably snap it or stack it under the previous sliderend.
01:29:324 - Unsnapped as well, but not that big of a problem.

[Hard]
01:38:924 (98924|6) - Either this one is too long or the other ones are too short.

[Hyper]
00:21:781 (4) - That's a rather annoying place to put a sliderstart.
00:26:124 - This 'jump' is rather sudden.
01:05:667 (4) - ^^
01:31:952 - ^^

[Insane]
Can't say I found anything wrong. This map fries my brain when I look at it too hard.

[Another]
This map is rather hard to read with AR 8.
00:33:724 (2) - I can't hear anything that would line this up with the music.
00:39:210 (2) - ^
01:03:552 (2,4) - ^
01:23:724 (6,1) - That is a HUGE jump.
01:39:552 (2) - ^^
01:45:038 (2) - ^
01:45:724 (2) - ^
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Yoeri wrote:

Hi there.

First off, all the osu!mania difficulties need to be renamed to have the key configuration in them.
Hmm I'm not sure about this -- i dont think its necessary since http://osu.ppy.sh/s/83094 was ranked without key names in the title

[Beginner]
01:05:667 - Unsnapped circle, you should probably snap it or stack it under the previous sliderend. oops, fixed
01:29:324 - Unsnapped as well, but not that big of a problem. fixed

[Hard]
01:38:924 (98924|6) - Either this one is too long or the other ones are too short. its following the deep bass note here, that goes for the full bar :D

[Hyper]
00:21:781 (4) - That's a rather annoying place to put a sliderstart. fixed
00:26:124 - This 'jump' is rather sudden. fixed
01:05:667 (4) - ^^ fixed
01:31:952 - ^^ fixed

[Insane]
Can't say I found anything wrong. This map fries my brain when I look at it too hard.
ahaha

[Another]
This map is rather hard to read with AR 8. Hmmm Ill get some more opinions about the AR. I think ar8 can make it fun for dt \:D/
00:33:724 (2) - I can't hear anything that would line this up with the music.
00:39:210 (2) - ^
01:03:552 (2,4) - ^ remapped this part
01:23:724 (6,1) - That is a HUGE jump. It is ... however I think its perfectly ssable due to slider leniency
01:39:552 (2) - ^^
01:45:038 (2) - ^
01:45:724 (2) - ^
Fixed all others
Thanks so much for the mod Yoeri!!! helped me make alot of changes ~
Yoeri

HanzeR wrote:

Yoeri wrote:

First off, all the osu!mania difficulties need to be renamed to have the key configuration in them.
Hmm I'm not sure about this -- i dont think its necessary since http://osu.ppy.sh/s/83094 was ranked without key names in the title
t/128012
Well I suppose it's not mandatory.
UnitedWeSin
Wow
Topic Starter
HanzeR

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Wow
i am not worthy o_o
UnitedWeSin
xDDDDDD
<3
GIDZ
Beginner:
~Too many sliders exceed 1 reverse arrow,try to use less to avoid confusion for beginners.\
~01:05:667 - Dun do that for beginners.

Hyper:
~You could organise and tidy the notes,they're a bit messy.
~Dun really see any problems.

Another:
~00:33:781 (3) - Put it closer to circle 2.
~00:34:724 - Hard to read the triplets there,I suggest removing it.
~00:39:267 (3) - Put it closer to circle 2.
~00:40:210 -Same with these triplets.
~01:45:095 (3) - Put closer to circle 2.
~Again,this map is a bit messy,try to arrange and tidy them.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
woc2006
General
=====
1.Offset: 181 (the first beatline)
2.Is there any reason you add " smooooch sig sig" in tag?

Normal
=====
HP:7 OD:6

00:33:095 (33095|6) - move to 1 or 2, the pattern will be much easier, the same to 00:38:581 (38581|6) -


Hard
=====
01:03:381 (63381|4,63610|4,63838|4,64067|4,64295|4,64524|4) - move to column 4
01:04:752 (64752|2,64981|2,65210|2) - move to column 5
01:05:438 (65438|4) - move to column 4
01:49:895 (109895|3) - move to 5 and add a note at 6


Insane
=====
HP:7

01:49:895 (109895|3) - I'd prefer add 3 notes at 5,6,7 and remove this one.
Topic Starter
HanzeR

woc2006 wrote:

General
=====
1.Offset: 181 (the first beatline)
2.Is there any reason you add " smooooch sig sig" in tag?

Normal
=====
HP:7 OD:6

00:33:095 (33095|6) - move to 1 or 2, the pattern will be much easier, the same to 00:38:581 (38581|6) -


Hard
=====
01:03:381 (63381|4,63610|4,63838|4,64067|4,64295|4,64524|4) - move to column 4
01:04:752 (64752|2,64981|2,65210|2) - move to column 5
01:05:438 (65438|4) - move to column 4
01:49:895 (109895|3) - move to 5 and add a note at 6


Insane
=====
HP:7

01:49:895 (109895|3) - I'd prefer add 3 notes at 5,6,7 and remove this one.
Fixed all. Thanks so much woc! you're the best :)


Smoooch/sig sig are in tags because they're part of the same series of songs
Topic Starter
HanzeR

gideon5504 wrote:

Beginner:
~Too many sliders exceed 1 reverse arrow,try to use less to avoid confusion for beginners.\
~01:05:667 - Dun do that for beginners.

Hyper:
~You could organise and tidy the notes,they're a bit messy.
~Dun really see any problems.

Another:
~00:33:781 (3) - Put it closer to circle 2.
~00:34:724 - Hard to read the triplets there,I suggest removing it.
~00:39:267 (3) - Put it closer to circle 2.
~00:40:210 -Same with these triplets.
~01:45:095 (3) - Put closer to circle 2.
~Again,this map is a bit messy,try to arrange and tidy them.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
Thanks so much for mod! going to go through and make things neater :o
chonicle
mania diffs o.o
[Normal]
\:D/

[Hard]
00:31:952 (31952|1) - seems you are following the syncs but there is no sync sounds here(high pitch one that you followed, 2-2-31)
01:41:438 (101438|6) - This note should be at 01:41:552

didn't have time to look at insane ;w;

anyway, nice mapset :D
Topic Starter
HanzeR

chonicle wrote:

mania diffs o.o
[Normal]
\:D/

[Hard]
00:31:952 (31952|1) - seems you are following the syncs but there is no sync sounds here(high pitch one that you followed, 2-2-31)
01:41:438 (101438|6) - This note should be at 01:41:552

didn't have time to look at insane ;w;

anyway, nice mapset :D
Fixed all, thanks so much chonicle !!
woc2006
mania checked.
Topic Starter
HanzeR

woc2006 wrote:

mania checked.
thank you so much >w<

I hope its ok, but I went back and removed a couple of speed changes to avoid controversy.
PROGUY
Hi there! As requested, I will mod your map. :D
Sorry for the late reply though, I was busy with RL stuff.

[General]
- Wouldn't it be easier if you just add the suffix "Mania" for your mania charts? I mean, look at this: http://puu.sh/3xQj5.png
While it is more obvious to tell the difference in the song select menu, it would again sound confusing whenever socializing that involves between both your standard and mania maps. It's not mandatory of course, but I recommend this to avoid further confusion.
- Your tags contain "beatmania iidx lincle 19" while I don't recall this song in IIDX 19... You may need to remove these tags.

[Normal]
00:11:495 (11495|3,12181|3,12866|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:12:752 (12752|6) Move to 5th column.
00:16:295 (16295|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:19:609 Try something more fun like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/855416
00:24:181 (24181|0) Move to 3rd or 4th column.
00:29:667 (29667|0) ^
00:35:724 (35724|5,35838|6,36181|6) Move left by 3 columns.
00:41:666 (41666|6) Move to 2nd column.
01:19:038 (79038|0) Move to 4th column.
01:40:295 (100295|6,100638|5,100981|4,101324|3) Move left by one column.
01:45:781 (105781|6,106124|5,106467|4,106810|3) ^

[Beginner]
01:27:952 (2) Add New Combo.

[Hard]
01:03:266 This is a really awkward drumroll that involves one hand (if you're a right-hander). You should do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/855450
01:44:752 This staircase is really boring compared to what you've done before this part. I suggest you add drumbeat notes for each beat.

[Hyper]
01:48:067 (6,7) The distance between these two notes are x0.67 and not anywhere close to x1.00. Please fix this to anywhere between x0.95 to x1.02.

[Insane]
HP Drain + 1 or 2
01:18:010 (78010|6) Move to 4th column.
- Hmm... Interesting speed changes. :)

[Another]
01:23:724 (6) The jump between this note and the next is really huge. I recommend removing this note or at least having this moved closer to the next note. (Distance spacing < x1.8 or something like that)
01:25:095 (6) ^

Hope this helps! Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
HanzeR

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there! As requested, I will mod your map. :D
Sorry for the late reply though, I was busy with RL stuff.

[General]
- Wouldn't it be easier if you just add the suffix "Mania" for your mania charts? I mean, look at this: http://puu.sh/3xQj5.png
While it is more obvious to tell the difference in the song select menu, it would again sound confusing whenever socializing that involves between both your standard and mania maps. It's not mandatory of course, but I recommend this to avoid further confusion. hmm.. Ill see if i can think of something more interesting hahaha
- Your tags contain "beatmania iidx lincle 19" while I don't recall this song in IIDX 19... You may need to remove these tags. I found it out from here :e http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beatmania_IIDX_19:_Lincle

[Normal]
00:11:495 (11495|3,12181|3,12866|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:12:752 (12752|6) Move to 5th column.
00:16:295 (16295|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:19:609 Try something more fun like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/855416
00:24:181 (24181|0) Move to 3rd or 4th column.
00:29:667 (29667|0) ^
00:35:724 (35724|5,35838|6,36181|6) Move left by 3 columns.
00:41:666 (41666|6) Move to 2nd column.
01:19:038 (79038|0) Move to 4th column.
01:40:295 (100295|6,100638|5,100981|4,101324|3) Move left by one column.
01:45:781 (105781|6,106124|5,106467|4,106810|3) ^
fixed all ^

[Beginner]
01:27:952 (2) Add New Combo. fixed

[Hard]
01:03:266 This is a really awkward drumroll that involves one hand (if you're a right-hander). You should do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/855450 fixed
01:44:752 This staircase is really boring compared to what you've done before this part. I suggest you add drumbeat notes for each beat.
remapped this part
[Hyper]
01:48:067 (6,7) The distance between these two notes are x0.67 and not anywhere close to x1.00. Please fix this to anywhere between x0.95 to x1.02.
hehe oops, good catch

[Insane]
HP Drain + 1 or 2 oooo i really dont want to do this, otherwise I cant pass it xD
01:18:010 (78010|6) Move to 4th column. done
- Hmm... Interesting speed changes. :)

[Another]
01:23:724 (6) The jump between this note and the next is really huge. I recommend removing this note or at least having this moved closer to the next note. (Distance spacing < x1.8 or something like that)
01:25:095 (6) ^remapped this part

Hope this helps! Good luck! :)
Thanks so much for the mod!!! really helpful :D
Charles445
-- All Diffs

Remove 'smooooch', 'sig sig' and 'wuv u' from tags. They are only part of the Candy Rave series, so having 'Candy Rave' in the tags is good enough.
Add 'candy handz up' to the tags. This is the set genre of the song.




--- Standard

I think you'd be better off not using the white combo color. It's quite hard to see on the backgronud.

[Beginner]
00:12:524 (1,2) - These sliders should end on white ticks.
00:22:124 (1) - This slider comes very soon after the spinner. Beginner players are often too busy spinning to hit an object so close. I suggest shortening the spinner.
01:01:895 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - This part overlaps itself a lot and is very confusing. I recommend redesigning this portion of the map.
01:41:667 (1,2) - Fix the spacing, it's too close.

[Hyper]
00:41:895 - Add circle.
00:43:381 (3) - This slider should end at 00:43:723.
01:20:981 (1) - This slider should end at 01:21:323.
01:38:924 (1) - Slow this slider down to 0.85x? It'd fix the spacing (and it'd be cool)

[Another]
Tickrate 1. Tickrate 2 sounds really weird and adds many ticks right at the end of sliders since it's a swing map.
00:43:381 (3) - This slider should end at 00:43:723. To do this quickly and easily, scale the slider by 0.84 with selection center (Ctrl+Shift+S)



--- Mania

[Normal]
OD 7? Traditionally mania maps have a high OD unless they are filled with lots of sliders.

[Hard]
01:04:638 (64638|6,64638|0) - Remove one of these two? It was very awkward to hit two notes in the middle of this 1/3 stream.
01:05:438 (65438|3) - Move this to 01:05:552. It fits more with the music there. After that, add an object in the middle to 01:05:323, like this http://puu.sh/3zW3r.png

[Insane]
00:55:038 (55038|0,55381|0) - Turn these into a hold? The speed change wasn't immediately clear, so throwing in a slider will help tell the player that something different is going on here. The hold would also fit the zooming speed :D
01:06:009 - The sudden slowdown here is very jarring. I find myself hitting 01:06:352 (66352|2) - very early as I expect it to be 1/3. I suggest making the slowdown gradual, something like this maybe http://puu.sh/3zVHR.png
01:22:466 - These slowdowns were really unexpected X_X, I'd recommend something like 0.75x for those slow sections.
01:48:352 - Same with this part for the slowdowns.
01:49:895 (109895|5) - Remove this object? I think two notes is sufficient impact at the end and feels better than three.


Where did this god tier map come from and why haven't I seen it sooner
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Charles445 wrote:

-- All Diffs

Remove 'smooooch', 'sig sig' and 'wuv u' from tags. They are only part of the Candy Rave series, so having 'Candy Rave' in the tags is good enough.
Add 'candy handz up' to the tags. This is the set genre of the song. fixed




--- Standard

I think you'd be better off not using the white combo color. It's quite hard to see on the backgronud.
sure
[Beginner]
00:12:524 (1,2) - These sliders should end on white ticks. oops
00:22:124 (1) - This slider comes very soon after the spinner. Beginner players are often too busy spinning to hit an object so close. I suggest shortening the spinner.ok
01:01:895 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - This part overlaps itself a lot and is very confusing. I recommend redesigning this portion of the map. remapped this part
01:41:667 (1,2) - Fix the spacing, it's too close. oops x_x

[Hyper]
00:41:895 - Add circle.
00:43:381 (3) - This slider should end at 00:43:723.
01:20:981 (1) - This slider should end at 01:21:323.
01:38:924 (1) - Slow this slider down to 0.85x? It'd fix the spacing (and it'd be cool)
fixed all^
[Another]
Tickrate 1. Tickrate 2 sounds really weird and adds many ticks right at the end of sliders since it's a swing map. ok
00:43:381 (3) - This slider should end at 00:43:723. To do this quickly and easily, scale the slider by 0.84 with selection center (Ctrl+Shift+S) well thats a neat trick. fixed!


--- Mania

[Normal]
OD 7? Traditionally mania maps have a high OD unless they are filled with lots of sliders.
Sure
[Hard]
01:04:638 (64638|6,64638|0) - Remove one of these two? It was very awkward to hit two notes in the middle of this 1/3 stream. oops fixed
01:05:438 (65438|3) - Move this to 01:05:552. It fits more with the music there. After that, add an object in the middle to 01:05:323, like this http://puu.sh/3zW3r.png nice

[Insane]
00:55:038 (55038|0,55381|0) - Turn these into a hold? The speed change wasn't immediately clear, so throwing in a slider will help tell the player that something different is going on here. The hold would also fit the zooming speed :D oooh i like this, added
01:06:009 - The sudden slowdown here is very jarring. I find myself hitting 01:06:352 (66352|2) - very early as I expect it to be 1/3. I suggest making the slowdown gradual, something like this maybe http://puu.sh/3zVHR.png ok
01:22:466 - These slowdowns were really unexpected X_X, I'd recommend something like 0.75x for those slow sections.
01:48:352 - Same with this part for the slowdowns. <^ looks good
01:49:895 (109895|5) - Remove this object? I think two notes is sufficient impact at the end and feels better than three. ok


Where did this god tier map come from and why haven't I seen it sooner
Thank you so much haha, Im so glad you were able to enjoy it >//<
ExPew
Simple mania mod before getting ranked don't kd if no good ;w;


[Normal]

00:33:095 (33095|0) - remove hold change to normal notes? or this hold must keep continous then next measure line 00:34:466 , 00:35:838
00:38:581 (38581|0) - same reason as above 00:39:952 , 00:41:323
01:38:923 to 01:47:152 - this holds, i suggest you make like this http://puu.sh/3AskL.png

[Hard]

so good~!
01:48:752 (108752|4,108752|6,108866|2,108866|0) - how about this xD?? http://puu.sh/3AswX.png

[Insane ]

00:13:438 - add a note on 5?
00:16:181 - add a note on 3?
00:25:781 (25781|5,25895|3) - move right side, this sure can suit with 00:25:552 (25552|0,25666|3) and 00:26:124 (26124|6,26124|4) and 00:25:552 (25552|5,25666|3)
00:31:152 (31152|3,31267|5) - move left side
01:20:638 (80638|5,80752|3) - move right side, this part i think same with 00:25:781 (25781|5,25895|3)
1 set pattern
01:23:495 (83495|5,83495|1,83609|2,83609|4,83723|3,83723|1,83838|2) - uncomfort pattern, how about this? http://puu.sh/3At0p.png
01:23:838 (83838|6,83838|0,84181|2,84181|6,84181|0,84523|0,84524|6) - mirror it (ctrl+H)
01:25:095 (85095|3) - move 2 01:25:209 (85209|2) - move 4
01:31:610 (91610|5,91724|3) - same like 01:20:638
01:48:752 (108752|6,108752|5,108752|4,108866|2,108866|0,108866|1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/3Atd2.png
Topic Starter
HanzeR
i dunno what happened to this post

i basically fixed everything but didnt make any changes to normal

[quote="ExPew"e60]Simple mania mod before getting ranked don't kd if no good ;w;


[Normal]

00:095 (33095|0) - remove hold change to normal notes? or this hold must keep continous then next measure line 00:34:466 , 00:35:838
00:38:581 (38581|0) - same reason as above 00:39:952 , 00:41:323 [color=#FF0000e60]<^i think it might be too hard for an easy map ><[/colore60]
01:38:923 to 01:47:152 - this holds, i suggest you make like this http://puu.sh/3AskL.png [color=#FF0000e60]well,, when i listen to the music closely I hear the synth sounds ending where I have them now so it might confuse new players to have them end later[/colore60]

[Hard]

so good~!
01:48:752 (108752|4,108752|6,108866|2,108866|0) - how about this xD?? http://puu.sh/3AswX.png
[color=#FF0000e60]ooo i love this ok [/colore60]
[Insane ]

00:13:438 - add a note on 5?
00:16:181 - add a note on 3? [color=#FF0000e60]<^ i have it so each kick is 1 note and each synth is 1 note and each snare is 2 notes so since theres no synth here i didnt add notes ;w;[/colore60]
00:25:781 (25781|5,25895|3) - move right side, this sure can suit with 00:25:552 (25552|0,25666|3) and 00:26:124 (26124|6,26124|4) and 00:25:552 (25552|5,25666|3)
00:31:152 (31152|3,31267|5) - move left side
01:20:638 (80638|5,80752|3) - move right side, this part i think same with 00:25:781 (25781|5,25895|3)
[box=1 set patterne60]01:23:495 (83495|5,83495|1,83609|2,83609|4,83723|3,83723|1,83838|2) - uncomfort pattern, how about this? http://puu.sh/3At0p.png
01:23:838 (83838|6,83838|0,84181|2,84181|6,84181|0,84523|0,84524|6) - mirror it (ctrl+H)
01:25:095 (85095|3) - move 2 01:25:209 (85209|2) - move 4[/boxe60]
[color=#FF0000e60]i really like this, added[/colore60]
01:31:610 (91610|5,91724|3) - same like 01:20:638
01:48:752 (108752|6,108752|5,108752|4,108866|2,108866|0,108866|1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/3Atd2.png[color=#FF0000e60]yes[/colore60][/quotee60]
Charles445
I'm having trouble getting around to this again. In the interest of rank speed, it might be a good idea to ask another team member to look it over
I'm finding myself just doing timing this week
Stefan
Oh man, Hatsune Miku as Background in a kors k Song? cmon please

That's like putting Dangos in a Rap Video.. oh well, forget this example.
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Charles445 wrote:

I'm having trouble getting around to this again. In the interest of rank speed, it might be a good idea to ask another team member to look it over
I'm finding myself just doing timing this week
Ok, I'm sure you must be busy xD, Ill see what I can do about finding someone else, thanks for letting me know!

Stefan wrote:

Oh man, Hatsune Miku as Background in a kors k Song? cmon please

That's like putting Dangos in a Rap Video.. oh well, forget this example.
iunno the song is cute and miku is cute >w<
Sync
[Another]
00:08:410 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that it ends at 00:10:809. 1/3 of a beat is a very fast transition from spinner-->slider -- especially at the very start of the map.
01:11:266 (1) - ^

[Hyper]
00:08:410 (1) - Same as Another. Although the gap is a bit wider, I suggest ending the spinner at 00:10:809 instead.
01:11:495 (1) - ^

looks good
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Sync wrote:

[Another]
00:08:410 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that it ends at 00:10:809. 1/3 of a beat is a very fast transition from spinner-->slider -- especially at the very start of the map.
01:11:266 (1) - ^

[Hyper]
00:08:410 (1) - Same as Another. Although the gap is a bit wider, I suggest ending the spinner at 00:10:809 instead.
01:11:495 (1) - ^

looks good
Thanks sync!!! fixed everything !~
YunoFanatic
;3 mania mapset >w< can i join humbly waiting for replies...
Topic Starter
HanzeR

YunoFanatic wrote:

;3 mania mapset >w< can i join humbly waiting for replies...
\:D/
Hanyuu
Go!!~
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Hanyuu wrote:

Go!!~
omg thankyou x_x
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