Nice song~from mod request~
Just some suggestion, hope it can help you XD
[EZ]
00:09:005 - Add a note at 6th
00:34:880 (34880|1) - Move to 1st
00:35:255 (35255|5) - Move to 7th
02:13:130 - Add a note
02:16:036 (136036|0,136130|0) - Both move to 6th
02:19:036 (139036|4) - Move to 5th
02:19:130 (139130|0) - Move to 7th
02:19:786 (139786|1) - Move to 3rd
02:20:630 (140630|2) - Move to 6th
02:22:786 - Add a note at 5th
02:23:161 - Add a note at 3rd
02:26:067 - Add a note at 6th
02:26:442 - Add a note at 2nd
[Pew's NM]
00:24:567 - Add a note
00:30:661 (30661|4) - Move to 00:30:567
00:35:161 (35161|2) - Move to 00:35:067
01:15:005 - From here, for each measure, you can try to keep one column unchanged, and move other 4 notes according to the PR or other patterns that you like. Otherwise it's a bit monotonous...
01:59:536 (119536|1) - Move to 01:59:442
02:05:161 (125161|3) - Move to 02:05:067
02:11:536 (131536|2) - Move to 02:11:442
02:14:536 (134536|4) - Move to 02:14:442
[HD]
01:13:692 (73692|3,73786|2,73848|3,73911|2,73973|3,74036|2,74161|3,74255|1) - since the rhythm here is complicated, I strongly recommend to postpone the green line(SV change) after this part, such as 01:14:442 or 01:15:005.
And also, move 01:13:692 (73692|3,73848|3,73973|3,74161|3) these notes to 5th would be much better I think.
01:36:286 - Add a note at 1st
[Collab]
00:54:848 (54848|5,54848|1,54942|1,54942|5) - Inappropriate pattern, shouldn't put the normal notes and the LNs in the same columns here
01:33:848 - Add a note
01:58:505 (118505|5,118505|1) - Too tricky!